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here I am again with my second fic~
after watching Mirai Nikki (Future Diary) I was inspired to make a fan fic with it
again, yoroshiku onegaishimasu. :kneelbow:
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Prologue

I was in the classroom. I’m present.
Yet, all of the people around me act like as if I didn’t exist.
I have a hard time making friends.
I’m coward.
I’m a crybaby.
I lack self-confidence.
I always observe how to world with a conspiracy tortures people.
I record all of the happenings in my daily life in a Cellphone Dairy.

A diary where I write my feelings.

One day, I begin to imagine things all of a sudden
I made my own imaginary friend too.

Deus Ex Aki-P


TBC
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Re: (Mirai Nikki) AKB Nikki/AKB Diary [WMatsui + Atsumina]
« Reply #1 on: July 28, 2013, 08:40:21 AM »
E-Eh?! Mirai Nikki?! A-And then my AtsuMina was there too!!
-This gonna be an awesome twist~~
-Though i'm scared who'll die!!~ Kyaa!! WMatsui n' my AtsuMina!!
-Lol...Gonna wait for the next one~
-Don't know if i'll just lurking~ *nod*...Maybe not?~

>Anyway, plz update soon~ And i lol'd where Deux is Aki-p!!~

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Day One Part A

I was never a loner. I just had a hard time making friends.
I want to have friends, but I didn’t know how.
I’m really tired being alone. I want to hang out with other people too.

Maybe I should just rest tomorrow.

“right Deus?”

If you are wondering who is Deus, he is my friend. My imaginary friend to be exact.

“yea, you should take a rest Juri”

“Is it me or did I really heard a voice?”

“you really heard a voice Juri”

“wha-eh!?” I was shocked

Then I began to see a monster in front of me

“Juri. I’m Deus Ex Aki-P”

“D-D-Deus!? You’re real!?”

“ofcourse, for I am the God of Time”

“God  of Time?” I asked with a little air of idiocy
“I’m able to manipulate time and space” Deus explained it to me

“I’m a little shocked” I said

“Juri, do you want to play a game?”

“a game? That would be good!” I said excitedly

“very well. For now you should take a rest” Deus vanished before my eyes

“Deus?”

Maybe I just imagined things. There’s no way Deus would really exist.
I should take a rest for now.

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The Next Day
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“Juri.”

Someone called my name. He called my name with a deep voice.
When I opened my eyes, I saw the same monster from last night.
I’m not imagining things last night.
Deus was real!
I opened up my cellphone diary to make an entry for today but I was shocked on what I saw.

“AKB Diary?”

“I see you’ve received it” Deus said

“what the hell is this?”

“A diary that would predict the future”

“what!? Haha you’re joking right?” I said with a smile

“no.” Deus said with a straight face

“then let’s just test it!”

The AKB Diary began to work

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Surprise Quiz on English Today
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“Surprise Quiz?”
Then after that the answer of that so-called surprise quiz began to flash in screen of my cellphone
I can’t wait for English Period.

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Akihabara Gakuen
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English Period.

“Today class we will have a quiz!” the teacher said

The hell. The prediction came true.  But luckily, I’ve seen the answers.This would be a piece of cake

“jaa let’s start”

My hands won’t stop writing. I already know the answer.
I was able to finish the test within 2 minutes much to my English teacher’s dismay
Finding it impossible, he checked my test paper already.

“M-Matsui-kun” he was shocked

“yes?”

“you got a perfect score”

I heard all of my classmate whisper. They made a fuss about me getting a perfect score.
They think I’ve been reborn into a new Matsui Juri.
I have to thank the dairy for this.
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“so how was the diary Juri?” Deus asked

“the prediction came true” I was shocked

“so with this, you can finally believe that the AKB Diary can predict futures”

“ahh”

After school,another prediction from my dairy flashed before my eyes.

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Goodbye
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What’s that suppose to mean?

TBC
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Mirai Nikki... Yeah...

Can't wait to see how you are going to write it up...

Because it's going to be a difficult one to write up..

Easier watching or looking at the comic then describing it...

Thank you for the update...

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Mirai Nikki... Yeah...

Can't wait to see how you are going to write it up...

Because it's going to be a difficult one to write up..

Easier watching or looking at the comic then describing it...

Thank you for the update...

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Thank you for the wonderful comment.

yea, it's going to be hard writing this fic~

I'm not gonna entirely base this Fan Fic on Mirai Nikki XD
there will be an original scenario later in chapters of this fic
and there will an original ending, I'm not gonna follow the ending of Mirai Nikki.

65% of this fic will be an original scenario.

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Day 1 Part B


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Goodbye
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Goodbye? What’s that supposed to mean?
I think the AKB Diary is malfunctioning.

“Deus, is it possible for AKB Diary to malfunction”

“no”

No? then what the heck this message mean?
Ahh~ I’m too tired to think!
I’ll just go home now!

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“this AKB Diary is pretty cool than I imagine! With this I can be the top of my class!”

“good to see you on a lively spirit Juri”

“hahaha~ this is the first I’ve felt like this for a very long time”


Then a man with a katana suddenly appeared in front of me.
He was wearing a raincoat and he is surely looking at me.
He suddenly walk towards me.
Oh God! I’m doomed!
I closed my eyes.
I was starting to panic.
This is the end of me!!
Or so I thought…

I opened my eyes to realize that I was still alive.
I look down  to see the man collapsed
It seems he has been stabbed.
But who stabbed him?

I raised my head to see a beautiful girl holding a knife with a bloodstain in her face and in her clothes.
Shocked and scared. I started to run.
Then, another prediction flashed in my cellphone

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First Time
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What the hell is this useless prediction!?
Then I saw the girl chasing after me.
Is she gonna kill me!?

“are? That girl..she seemed familiar”

Looking back again. I realized that she was Matsui Rena, the school idol.
But why does the school idol want to kill me!?
I then ran to an abandoned building.
Entered an elevator and eventually clicking the 12th button .
But before the elevator could go up, Matsui Rena entered and suddenly kissed me.

“chu”

“hmppff”

The prediction came true. I got my first time. First time that I was kissed!

Matsui Rena then changed the floor number to 15th.
After that, Deus appeared.

“It seems the 2nd diary owner has showed herself”

“ehh?” I was confused

“I’m Matsui  Rena, owner of the Juri Diary” she introduced herself

“Juri diary?” I was shocked

“a diary showing every move you take” Deus  said

“the hell!?” I was shocked

“hehehe” Matsui-san smiled

“I guess it’s time to explain everything” Deus added

“be sure to listen Juri~” Matsui-san clang into my arms

“Juri,remember when I asked you if you want to play a game?”

“yes” I replied

“the game I was referring to is the AKB Game”

“AKB Game?” I was puzzled

“a game where you find and kill other diary owners before the world ends on Day 48 for the purpose of inheriting my power ” Deus explained

“the power to manipulate time and space” Matsui-san said

“also only the last one standing can prevent the Apocalypse and become the new God of Time and Space” Deus said

“the man who attempted to attack you was Miyazawa Sae, the serial killer on the loose and the 3rd diary owner. He possess the diary called -Murder Diary-“ Deus added

I was shocked on their explanation.
I can’t believe on what they said.

“you are the first diary owner,Juri, you possess the –Random Diary- “ Deus said

“I have no intension on winning this game but I want to survive!” I shouted

“then let’s form an alliance, it’s hard to fight all by yourself” Matsui-san said

“I have no choice” I said

“one warning though, if you happen to lose your diary or got it destroyed, you will vanished” Deus gave me a warning

I gulped

“Don’t worry I’ll protect you Juri~” Matsui-san hugged me.

In order to survive this so-called AKB Game.
I must team up with clingy Matsui Rena-san.
I still want to live! I’m not gonna give up without a fight!

TBC
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What did I just read? LoL the number of crossovers these days XD

So my guess was right about Rena being all clingy clingy and scary as hell.

Worst part about it is, There's gonna be a guy called Takahashi or something. Hope ya'll make 'em interesting~ And not pair em up with Atsuko~ (death wish) XD

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What did I just read? LoL the number of crossovers these days XD

So my guess was right about Rena being all clingy clingy and scary as hell.

Worst part about it is, There's gonna be a guy called Takahashi or something. Hope ya'll make 'em interesting~ And not pair em up with Atsuko~ (death wish) XD

gwahaha sad to say imma pair Takahashi and Atsuko XD

but don't worry when I finished my two fan fics..I'm gonna right an AtsuYu fan fic XD
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I love mirai nikki,so rena is juno

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Ah... the first is Jurina and the second is Rena...

The third was Sae

Great update so far.... interesting...

Can't wait to see the next

Thank you

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Chapter 2 Part A


I’ve recently acquired a diary that can predict the future.
The so called-AKB diary.
I’ve also participated in game called AKB Games.
A survival game.
I’ve used the diary to my advantages. Predicting the answer of the tests. Escaping to gym class. Finding out if there is a sale in the market place. And recently, to escape from my stalker slash suitor, Matsui Rena.
Speaking of Matsui-san, she mailed me for the 48th time.
HOW THE HELL DID SHE GOT MY MAIL ADDRESS!?

“She’s such a pain in the ass!”

“As expected from the diary owner who owns the Juri Diary” Deus said

“gotta agree” I said in awe


Then another prediction flashed.

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Miyazawa Sae will kill you when you pass the old construction site at exactly 9am
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GOD! It’s already 8:25! I must go now!
With that said I left the house early.
I don’t want to die just yet
Hah~ participating in a life-or-death game like this could be very painful.
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I somehow safely made it to the school.
After which, I decided to discuss this matter with Matsui-san

“Gomen Juri~ but I need to go to the track field now~ I’ll make it up later~” Matsui-san said

She then left.

Then…an unfamiliar lady came to our classroom and asked me about the whereabout sof Miyazawa Sae.
Why the heck did she knew about Miyazawa Sae?
Either way, maybe she’s an ally or a police officer who happened to saw the incident last night.
I was about to respond when a prediction flashed again revealing that my fate has changed.

“As I expected ! you are the first diary owner!” she exclaimed

OH GOD I’M DOOMED! RENA SAVE ME!!!!!!!!!


Meanwhile.
“hmm?”

“the hell ! Juri’s fate has changed!!!!!”

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“hahaha you’re the 1st diary owner!” the unknown lady shouted

She pointed a gun to me.
She was about to pull the trigger when Matsui-san suddenly arrived and attempted to hit her with a bat.
But alas! The lady evaded her attack and jumped right out of the window

“Juri!” Matsui-san called me

“Matsui-san! Thank God you’ve arrived”

The unfamiliar lady shouted

“I’ve plant bombs in the whole school and made all of the people hostages!”

She then pressed something and a bomb exploded

SH*T!  it’s a detonator!!!!

“Matsui-san! Let’s run!” I said to her

“uhnn” she nodded in response

The two of us are constantly on the run evading the bombs with the help of my random diary, but then I was caught partly in one blast.
I discovered that my diary is only predicting about the events around me not involving myself.
I was a little disappointed.
But then I remembered that Matsui-san’s dairy has the ability to take track of every actions I make.

“Juri, we will survive. Our diaries when combined can form some invincible stronghold.”

I was shocked by her statement.
That’s what exactly I was thinking.
She really does possess an awesome diary.
Without knowing it, the two of us got closer and eventually kissed.

TBC
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I just read your update

And you update another chapter already...

Great double surprise for me then...

Eh... Wmatsui kissed.... Interesting development

Can't wait to see the next chapter

Thank you for the quick update

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Chapter 2 Part B


The two of us decided to find the teachers and the students for they will help us.
They are our last hope.
I then spotted a classmate of mine.

Another prediction has flashed

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Danger lies within your classmate
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The future has spoken.
It’s time to flee.
But, there are a lot of students surrounding us.
I can’t even walk a single step.
Then two of the boys in my class got a hold of feet while the others are supporting my body.

“Put me down!” I shouted

“Forgive us Matsui-kun, we still want to live” one of my classmate said

“hey! Put Yuki down!” Matsui-san said

“how about no?”

I can see the look in Matsui-san’s face
The face of grief
She was about to go rage
I’m gonna prepare for the worst case scenario.
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The boys in my class brought me to the unfamiliar lady
She’s insane

“Well hello there! Matsui Juri!” she shouted

“who the hell are you and why did you know my name!?” I asked

“oh pardon me, looks like I haven’t introduce myself. My name is Maeda Atsuko, the 9th diary owner and I’m here to kill you!!!” she shouted

I was shocked
As I thought she really was a diary owner just like me
I couldn’t help but feel a grief in my heart.

Then Matsui-san arrived

“Juri!!!!” she shouted

“what the hell!?” the 9th said in disbelief

“I couldn’t trust anyone in this situation so I killed every last one of your minions and other students here” she said while laughing

DAMN!!!!
She’s insane!!!

“Let’s continue our fight shall we” Matsui-san said in an elegant manner

“take the lead” the 9th smirked

Then, someone shoots the 9th hair and revealed a cellphone case.
Could it be that this person is also a diary owner?

“right in the nick of time.”

“tch! Akimoto Sayaka why the hell are you here!?”

“to stop you of course”

“it’s much better if you kill the 1st!” the 9th exclaimed

“no can do sweety babe!” he exclaimed

“the heck!!!”

“you two, run away from here. I’ll handle this” the man said

The  two of fled behind the rocks. Matsui-san was about to use her diary when she realized that it has been disabled by the 9th . At this point, that man was our only hope.
Then a prediction came.

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The 4th ran out of bullets
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4th? What the hell!?

“shoot! Wrong timing! I ran out of bullets!” I heard the man said

“hahaha! I will put an end to this!!!” the 9th shouted

Damn. She’s going to activate the last bomb!
I then grabbed my dart and aimed for her dairy.
But her reflexes were too good and dodge it.
Yet, my darts were faster than her so even though she saved her diary, I pierced her left eye.

‘You’ve lost Maeda, mind to state your diary's name and ability?” the man said

“don’t be so cheeky, you had Criminal Investigation Diary for a diary!”

“do you want me to kill you for good!?”

“damn you it’s the escape diary you nipwit!”


The 9th then activates a smokescreen hidden under her dress and escapes on her motorbike.

“seriously.” The man said

“anoo…” I said

“hmm? Oh that’s right I haven’t properly introduced myself. I’m Akimoto Sayaka, the 4th diary owner. I own a Criminal Investigation Diary” he said

“is that so?” I was puzzled

A prediction flashed.

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You teamed up with the 4th.
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“Double Matsui. Will you team up to with me to eliminate the other diary users and stop this stupid game?” he asked

“what do you think Matsui-san?” I asked her

“.uhnn” she just nodded in response


Maybe her diary predicted that I will ask her about this matter and prepared for an answer already?
Now, with the three of us helping each other, I know that I can definitely survive this game of life and death.

TBC
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I want diary like this too.   :cry:
KAMI OSHI: MATSUI RENA

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Another one again...

You are on fire..

Great going...

Ah Atsuko is the ninth, Sayaka the forth...

Can't wait to see the next

Thank you

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Mirai Nikki, I was obsessed with it when reading it, marathoning, finished in one day(the manga)
this looks interesting... Rena-san as Gasai and Juri(na) as the guy... And then Acchan as crazy bomb lady and Sayaka as detective dude... Sae-kun as murderer... Who would the half blind girl be?
Looks good so far~

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Yar gonna create some AtsuYuu fics?! Yaaa~ Yar the best, man!
Plus, yer dem fast! O.O''
As per usual.
WooT! Acchan getting insane and Rena getting... well... Yuno-ish. XD
Sayaka saves the day~ You're awesome, Sayaka! QwQ

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hahahahaha woow rena is really insane

^_^ me gusta!

thanks and Update soon!

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Lol, Rena as the yandere girlfriend, why didn't that not surprised me? XD

This is gonna be epic. XD


Everyday Juriken

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Chapter 3 Part A


Tired and exhausted about what happened yesterday.
I decided to play games all day and not give a damn thing to everyone today.
But… I couldn’t concentrate
Akimoto-san warned us.
He warned us about the danger Maeda-san holds.
I began to shiver.

A prediction flashed.

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A date with Rena today
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What the hell is this?
I guess this diary can sometimes malfunction.
That darn Deus. Deceiving me like that.

Then..
My phone suddenly rang.

*beep*

“hai, Matsui Juri desu”

“Matsui-kun? It’s me Akimoto”

“uhmm? Is there something I could do?”

“meet me up in the local park”

He then hangs up

“Seriously.” I said

Well, I guess I should follow his instruction since he’s a police officer and not to mention Akimoto-san owns the -Criminal Investigation Diary- to predict crimes he will investigate.
Quite cool.

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I arrived at the local park

“Akimoto-san~” I called him

“Matsui-kun, I’ve been waiting for you” he said
“Juri~~”

I heard a familiar voice.
Urk! It’s Matsui-san~! GOD!

“uhmm? Why is Matsui-san here?”

“hehehe~” Matsui-san just smiled at me.

“let’s get to the point. I want to lure out Maeda” Akimoto-san said

“and? What do you want to us to do?”

“go on a date.”

What the heck did he said?

“uhmm what?”

“I want you to go on a date with Matsui-san”

what the hell!?

“why!?”

“I want to lure our Maeda” Akimoto-san said

“come on Juri~”

Matsui-san dragged me.

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Matsui-san and I eventually went to an amusement park.
Great, now I have to go on a date with my psycho stalker .
But..
I think this is a right time for me to observe whether she can act like a normal girl.

Matsui-san then led me to the Horror House
She screamed with all of her might and clung to me.
What the hell?
She can kill people without being terrified and yet she was scared by some fake ghost!?

The world is in mess indeed.

After lurking around, we decided to take a little break and eat something.


“here Juri,say ahh~” she said while smiling

“ehh? I refuse” I replied

“come on~ don’t be a killjoy!” she begged me

“hah~ looks like I don’t have a choice. Ahn~” I opened my mouth

“hehe~ is it delicious~?” she asked

“yea~”

“tee hee”

Looks like Matsui-san can act like a normal girl after all.
It would be great if she can act like this all the time.

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After that, Matsui-san eventually dragged me again.
This time we went to a Pool Park.
Ahh~ I’m so embarrassed being seen topless~

“Juri~ come out!” she shouted

“no~” I replied

“why?” she was worried

“I’m a little bit shy being seen like this”

“I’m the one who is supposed to say that!!!”

She dragged me out.
The two of us swam together.
Since Matsui-san is wearing a skimpy swim suit.
Her swimming top was undone and floated away.
I attempted to get it but she stopped me because she will be left alone,exposed.

Well,yea she’s right.
So I called up the nearby staff to fetch Matsui-san’s top.
The guy retrieved but Matsui-san was suddenly knocked out by a nearby swimmer causing her to fall in my arms.
The both of us blushed.

Then a prediction flashed.

TBC
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