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Re: How to Write A Love Story
« Reply #20 on: August 12, 2013, 04:04:51 PM »
Good story you got there! :thumbsup
Please update soon! :bow:

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Re: How to Write A Love Story
« Reply #21 on: August 12, 2013, 05:18:42 PM »
Takamina is sure in trouble just to get a challenge in both arenas XD
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Re: How to Write A Love Story
« Reply #22 on: August 12, 2013, 07:04:48 PM »
yeah update....
hahahah....
it's atsuko car, right???
it's going to be interesting....  :mon misch:

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Re: How to Write A Love Story
« Reply #23 on: September 12, 2013, 06:45:05 PM »
hahaha that is sooo funny!!!! :D

I've never seen Minami like this before and Atsuko is sooo cute and bold <3

I hope you would update soon :)
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Re: How to Write A Love Story
« Reply #24 on: September 13, 2013, 02:28:25 AM »
pls update this soon silentreader - san  :D

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Re: How to Write A Love Story
« Reply #25 on: September 14, 2013, 06:19:24 AM »
it was Atsuko's Car hahahahaha

well that could be funny ^_^

anyway continue plis

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Re: How to Write A Love Story
« Reply #26 on: September 14, 2013, 06:27:07 AM »
yoo author~san
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Re: How to Write A Love Story (Updated >_>)
« Reply #27 on: February 01, 2014, 03:47:31 PM »
yea. i didn't manage to update for such a long time. School has been too cruel to me.But since i'm a smart ass i need to be good ^0^ anyways...i'll be having a lot of stories here!!! and promise to update at least once every week!!!!
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Chapter 2 : Effort for love or guilt.
Takahashi Minami’s POV
When I was young, I used to live with my grandparents in the province that only-heaven-knows where. My grandparents will always tell me horror stories to keep the little me inside the house…well I’m still little now… what the heck am I saying!? Back to the topic, they always do this so I’ll be safe from harm, and this storytelling lead me to being the genius horror writer  of all times. And so, there was this story,that I would not bother to tell you because it is copyrighted and I don’t want to arrested for plagiarism, anyways the moral of the story is not to be carried away by anger or else you will definitely regret it in the end.
So what’s the point of telling you  this?
1.   To serve as a warning.
2.   To remind myself how stupid I am to forget this.
Flashback….
After avenging Haruna wgich didn't turn out to be successful, I brought her to her condo then I went back to my humble abode. I tiredly sighed and laid at my bed.
Everytime I close my eyes, I can remember every detail of her shocked face. My mind starts to wonder why is she there?
Does she have a date?
It’s not shocking…
…since she’s beautiful and all…
…but why does it bother me so much? Why do I care?
Wait…
I opened my eyes, “If I broke her car’s window, how will she get home!?”
…well, if she have a date…maybe her date will just bring her home right?
I sighed in relief. But when I closed my eyes, wild thoughts started running again.
“But what if her date is a jerk and took advantage of her!?” I yelled in frustration.
“Takahashi Minami!!! Calm the heck down!!!”
I closed my eyes again, “Sleep Takahashi…sleep.”
1:00 am.
2:00 am.
3:00 am.
THAT’S IT MINAMI.
But how can I check on her?
Oh…
There’s Yuko.
I dialed her number and she picked it up after a few seconds, “What’s the problem Takamidget?”
“ahmm…Do you know Maeda’s address?”
“Why?”
“JUST TELL ME!!!”
“Fine. Calm down will ya!”
I grabbed a pen and a paper as she dictated the address.
“Got it.”
“Thanks Yuko, anyways, why are you still awake?”
“I’m going to Nyannyan’s house…”
Oh..crap. I smell Squirrel’s rage later…
“W-Why?”
“I don’t know…I just can’t sleep…I’m worried about her…”
Guess…that’s love.
Wait!!! Does that mean…NO!!! I’m just guilty that’s why I’ll check on her. N-Not because of l-love…
I ended the call before Yuko can ask more about Atsuko. I might faint before I can leave my house for some unknown reasons.

I wore my jacket hailed a went to the said address.
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Midori Condominiums is the most effin expensive condo in Japan and that is where I am tonight.
Tch. Fine she’s filthy rich. Well obvious with her car.
I was greeted warmly by the receptionist.
“What can I do for you ma’am?”
“Ahm…I’m Takahashi Minami…” I showed my i.d, “ May I ask if Maeda Atsuko is already in there?”
She checked the logbook and said yes.
I sighed in relief and said thanks.  I went out and waited for a taxi. After an hour there was no taxi. The security guard went close.
“Excuse me ma’am, are you waiting for a ride?”
“Yea.”
“Sorry but no vehicle are allowed here this time. You could check in here or you could walk until you reach the main gate, however that will be far from here.”
Since I have no money to check in, I have no choice but to walk to the gate.
I sighed deeply, boy that was far.
I glanced at the tall condo adorned with lights. A smile managed to paint my lips.
At least she’s safe…that’s all that matters.
 
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Re: How to Write A Love Story (updated...finally...)
« Reply #28 on: February 01, 2014, 04:05:17 PM »
I wonder is Haruna know that Yuko love her

And Acchsn kiss Takamina O-O!!!

Please updatesoon

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Re: How to Write A Love Story (updated...finally...)
« Reply #29 on: February 01, 2014, 11:55:31 PM »
Gosh, this is interesting!!!! I can't stop giggling!
Atsuko kissed Takamina.. Takamina broke Atsuko's car window....
Takamina doesn't know love but she is already in love!
Gosh I wanna read more... I wish you could update more frequently.
Update soon!!!

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Re: How to Write A Love Story (updated...finally...)
« Reply #30 on: February 02, 2014, 12:03:10 AM »
Ah... Minami was so worry about Atsuko that she went to look for her

What's going to happen next?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

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Re: How to Write A Love Story (updated...finally...)
« Reply #31 on: February 02, 2014, 04:24:13 AM »
(-_-) I’m going to make another update. Blame my stupid hurting stomach that doesn’t let me sleep.
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Chapter 3 : Where are my legs?
A tall girl entered the room of the midget. She walked slowly, afraid that one wrong move will wake the midget up. She sneakily went to the midget’s bed, but to her dismay she found nothing but a messy bed but the owner was not there. She sighed with disappointment, her plan failed. The tall brunette still can’t forget what the midget did to her. The midget is a traitor. Nevertheless she can’t carry out her plan now, for her target is nowhere to be found.
The brunette was about to leave, however, a cold hand was wrapped around her leg. The brunette gulped. Scared, she won’t look down. She stayed in that position until the mysterious creature spoke…
“Where are my legs?”
The brunette screamed for her life and started to kick the creature’s head.










“Ittai!!Stop it Haruna!!!”
“Takamina!?”

Takamina’s pov
Haruna is currently helping me with my bleeding nose.
“What the heck Haruna…”
“It wasn’t my fault!!! What are you doing on the floor grabbing someone’s leg with a cold hand and asking for you legs!? What the heck was that are you planning for some horror novel!?” she yelled.
“ I fell from my bed. My hand is cold because I’m very tired. So tired from walking that I can’t feel my legs anymore that’s why I asked you where the heck are they. And no. I’m not planning to go back on horror now.”
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My legs hurt. My head hurts. Now my ear does too. Thanks to Haruna I also got a nosebleed.
What a great way to start a day.  Sarcasm noted.
“Anyways…what are you doing here?” she asked.
“Uhm..this is my unit.”
What an airhead.
“Oh…”
“What are YOU, HARUNA, DOING IN MY UNIT?” I asked a little annoyed.
“You have to deal with me. Takahashi.” She said.
“ About what?”
“Why did you tell Yuko about my heartbreak!? “  she yelled.
Gosh. My poor ears.
“I didn’t Haruna. Yuko just have this super powers to guess things right. Guess that’s because of love.” I said not minding if I spilled about Yuko’s feelings.
“Of course she loves me…she’s my best friend afterall…”
Poor Yuko…FRIENDZONED.
See? That’s why I did not bother to tell her. Because the world knows how Yuko loves her…except her.
Again, poor Yuko.
After a few moments there were some knocks on the door. A small suit wearing, squirrel looking girl entered.
“Hey Takamidget!!! Why did you call last nigh—OH MOTHER OF FATHERS!!!”
Crap.
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Haruna is now helping the perverted squirrel with her bleeding nose.
Okay it seems that I forgot to mention that Haruna is wearing a tight blouse with super short short skirt?
Fine. Now you know.
Also the fact that while she was tending my nose she had to lean down?
And her back facing the door?
So yea. While she was helping me with my nose, her skirt lifts up a little but it was already enough to kill a perverted squirrel with blood loss.
Haruna giggled, “You two look like twins…you know, two midgets, and two bleeding noses.”
And that’s all because of you. Tch.
But if ever, IF ever, yuko and I are twins you can probably distinguish us by our expressions because I have this annoyed look in my face while yuko over there is smiling from ear to ear.
Why?
Coz…haruna has to lean down also. And because of that, the perverted squirrel has a complete access to view haruna’s…ahm…gifted mountains.
“Ne…yuko, what are you doing here?” I asked her while having a hard time with this stupid cotton balls on my nose.
“I’m here to pick up your manuscripts.”
Fudge. I totally forgot about that.
Yuko put up a very serious and business looking expression which she rarely shows to haruna, cuse usually she’s just like a stupid idiot around haruna, which caused the latter to be shocked…
And wait… to blush?
Okay?
“Takahashi? Are you even listening to me?” she sighed. She massaged her temples.
I glanced at haruna and she was looking away, but her ears up to her neck were already red.
Seriously…is this the maji yuko effect?
Maji yuko effect, is the serious effect of yuko to other people when she turns maji mode.
Usually I see this face when she’s alone at work. And since she’s my editor I have seen this mode a lot of times before that’s why it doesn’t have any effect on me.
Anyways…yuko’s maji effect…somehow…have this seducing effect to other people. Seriously, you can see a lot of turned on faces during our meeting because of this stupid maji yuko effect.
Okay back to my issue.
“Sorry…”
“You have never disappointed me like this.”
I just bowed my head.
“Just go back to horror. That’s final.”
“I was watching your interview Minami…and I’ve read your books…in fact you can call me a fan… But you won’t be successful if you don’t know love…”
Atsuko’s words entered my mind.
“No… I have never wanted anything like this yuko…that’s why no matter what… I won’t give up.”
“Fine. Now, get all of your things in the department. Every belonging you have there…”
I gulped.
“Yuko…”
“…from now on you won’t be staying at the company…because you’ll be under  the company’s greatest romance writer.”  She smiled.
“Seriously…stop hanging around Mari-troll too much…”
Smiling, I sighed in relief.
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We’re now inside Yuko’s car. She was driving while haruna and I are on the backseat.
“Ne..yuko..what kind of person is Ace?” I asked.
“She’s a good person…talented…but she’s very busy too. In fact she handles some of her family’s companies while she was writing. That’s why, on the second thought, I think it will be better if someone will live with her.” She said, “…she’s  beautiful  and hot too.” She added which caused haruna to glare at her.
Uh..oh…
“Ahm…doesn’t she mind that I’ll be staying with her?”
“Hmm…actually, for some reasons, she looked happy when I mentioned you. She’s a fan…I guess. Never thought she was interested in horror before.”
“Are you coming with me?”
“No. just look for Ace, the guard will just bring you to her room.” She bowed, “Gomen takamina…there was just an emergency in the office…”
“O-okay…” I sighed, “ Just don’t forget to pick me up okay…there are no taxi here.”
Yea. I’m here again at Midori condominiums.  Luckily, I have a ride this time.
They left and I went to the security guard to ask about Ace. He just smiled and lead me to a certain unit.
1328, huh?
“I shall  take my leave ma’am.”
“Arigato…”
I nervously opened the door with the key that the guard gave me earlier.
It was well  furnished, simple yet modernized. There are piles of books on the floor from the same author.
Ace.
I decided to pick one just to burn some time, since Ace is not yet here.
“A-Akira…” Nao moaned her beloved’s name.
“Don’t worry…I’ll be gentle…”
“I-I want you Akira-chan…”
Akira smiled as she slowly unbuttons Nao’s blouse. It fell on the floor as Akira kissed Nao from her lips down to---

WHAT THE HECK!?
I felt legs soften and I sat on the floor.
I-it wasn’t just  romance…
I-it wasn’t just ecchi…
Its…
“Girl’s love.”

A full blown blush exploded throughout my face.
“I see…you’ve read it.”
t-that voice…
I slowly looked up to see a smirking Maeda  Atsuko.
At this time…there are no other things I want to do but to run and escape from here. I don’t mind if I need to run up to the main gate of this condo…
But honestly…
Where are my legs?
“And so we meet again…Takahashi Minami.”



 
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Re: How to Write A Love Story(chappie three ud: feb 2 14!!!)
« Reply #32 on: February 02, 2014, 04:35:27 AM »
Minami is progressing well in her writing...

Ah... Atsuko and Minami meet each other again

What's going to happen next?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

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Re: How to Write A Love Story(chappie three ud: feb 2 14!!!)
« Reply #33 on: February 02, 2014, 05:11:06 AM »
great stories you have there author-san ^_^

I laughed hard at the "Where are my legs..." scene. hahahaha

update soon ^_^

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Re: How to Write A Love Story(chappie three ud: feb 2 14!!!)
« Reply #34 on: February 02, 2014, 05:41:53 AM »
Takakamina and Acchan are roomates now

And Takamina just read Yuri novels xD

Please update soon

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Re: How to Write A Love Story(chappie three ud: feb 2 14!!!)
« Reply #35 on: February 02, 2014, 05:51:24 AM »
HOLY FUCK that was amazing!!!  :drool:

I am completely awestruck. You totally brought joy to my night  XD I'll be able to sleep well now lol

I hope you update soon, can't wait to see what happens next. So Atsuko write both girl's love and straight love?
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Re: How to Write A Love Story(chappie three ud: feb 2 14!!!)
« Reply #36 on: February 02, 2014, 06:41:25 AM »
yeah update  :ding:

chapter 3 is the chapter i love the most  :luvluv1:

minami will be live together with acchan  :wriggly: :luvluv2: :imdead:

and i hope nyan nyan will fall for yuko soon, ganbate yuko  :onioncheer:

pls update soon XD


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Re: How to Write A Love Story(chappie three ud: feb 2 14!!!)
« Reply #37 on: February 02, 2014, 03:03:06 PM »
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!  :onioncheer:

that was amazing update...

can't wait to see how minami handle her new sexy and hot companion..

hehehe...  :mon misch:

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Re: How to Write A Love Story(chappie three ud: feb 2 14!!!)
« Reply #38 on: February 04, 2014, 07:17:15 PM »
Ur story really interesting.  Make me wanna read more . :cow:

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Re: How to Write A Love Story(chappie three ud: feb 2 14!!!)
« Reply #39 on: February 07, 2014, 04:21:55 PM »
Yei the yuri is great
Hahahahahaha
Thanks
Continue ASAP

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