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Hey guys! I know there have being quite a lot of fanfics involving supernaturals! But I wanted to try writing fanfics about supernaturals! So I hope you guys wouldn't find it boring! And the pairing I will write the one that you guys wanted the most! So here's the prologue!  :)

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~Love @ Risk~ (Couple Undecided)- Prologue (7 August 2013)

Being an ordinary person and having an ordinary life! That's what I think until I was being mistakenly enrolled into a new school.
Little did I know that this school was special...
Because this school is a school only for ... YOUKAI!!!!
Can I be able to survive in this school or?

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I'm sorry that it is very short!!!  :banghead: :banghead: :banghead:
« Last Edit: October 27, 2013, 12:02:47 PM by Ayumu »
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Re: ~Love @ Risk~ (Couple Undecided)- Prologue (7 August 2013)
« Reply #1 on: August 06, 2013, 06:29:07 PM »
That sounds interesting. I chose Yuki, Mayu, Rena cos they'd fit with creepy ghost roles loll :wub:

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Re: ~Love @ Risk~ (Couple Undecided)- Prologue (7 August 2013)
« Reply #2 on: August 06, 2013, 07:16:21 PM »
this is a manga??

soud like one i actually read.....

update soon....

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Re: ~Love @ Risk~ (Couple Undecided)- Prologue (7 August 2013)
« Reply #3 on: August 06, 2013, 07:20:24 PM »
Thank you~~~~~~ Youkai!!!! Yosha!!!
Somehow, I've never managed to make a single actually supernatural fantasy with the type of setting I want to make~!
So this looks really good!
I chose JuriRenAirin cuz... well
Jurina could be like a wolf-dog youkai
Rena-san could be a yuki-onna
Airin - she could be the main character... or a zashiki warashi

I support RenAirin, but I like WMatsui too~~
Any pairing is fine~

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Re: ~Love @ Risk~ (Couple Undecided)- Prologue (7 August 2013)
« Reply #4 on: August 07, 2013, 03:54:31 AM »
went after Yuki, Mayu and Rena  :ptam-ok:
gonna be fun! ill be rooting for this  :ptam-glow:
my hat is off. saluting.

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Re: ~Love @ Risk~ (Couple Undecided)- Prologue (7 August 2013)
« Reply #5 on: August 07, 2013, 06:19:51 AM »
No dibs yet? I'd like for some RenAirin and AtsuYuu please~

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Re: ~Love @ Risk~ (Couple Undecided)- Prologue (7 August 2013)
« Reply #6 on: August 07, 2013, 08:02:30 AM »
It sounds like a manga story 'Heart-Pounding Excitement at Mononoke Girls' Academy'

Well hope it's about Atsuko, Minami and Yuko...

I like Atsumina...lots...

Can't wait to see the start of the story

Thank you

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Re: ~Love @ Risk~ (Couple Undecided)- Prologue (7 August 2013)
« Reply #7 on: August 07, 2013, 10:00:13 AM »
Oh~~~ Another supernatural fic :on woohoo:
The prologue seems interesting :on drink: Youkai~~~~ :on gay:
I chose SaeMayuki but somehow I'm also want RenaMayuki :err:
How about you doing all the couples :kekeke:
It's going to be interested :wahaha:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
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Re: ~Love @ Risk~ (Couple Undecided)- Prologue (7 August 2013)
« Reply #8 on: August 07, 2013, 11:28:21 AM »
Well I voted for Rena, Jurina and Airin.
I prefer Wmatsui couple. :)
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Re: ~Love @ Risk~ (Couple Undecided)- Prologue (7 August 2013)
« Reply #9 on: August 07, 2013, 02:55:13 PM »
well i hope its Takamina, Atsuko, Yuko... really want atsuyuu or........... takayuu  :thumbsup....hehehe
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Re: ~Love @ Risk~ (Couple Undecided)- Prologue (7 August 2013)
« Reply #10 on: August 07, 2013, 03:00:55 PM »
Interesting, I go for Yuki, Mayu, Rena


I want MayuRena MaYuki~ XD

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~Love @ Risk~ (Takamina, Atsuko, Yuko)- Chapter 1 (6 September 2013)
« Reply #11 on: September 06, 2013, 04:48:47 PM »
@jell_o_jello: Glad that it sound interesting! Sorry that it's not the pairing that you chose!  :cry:
@Archer1992: Mmmmm... Maybe? Well, anyway thanks for your comment!  :)
@Shinoki: I hope this will be near to your type of setting that you wanted! Sorry that it's not the pairing you wanted!  :cry:
@imteedee: Sorry that it's not the pairing that you wanted! But I hope you will still continue to read!  :)
@AshuraX: Thank you for your comment!  :)
@cisda83: Mmmmm... I don't think that it will be quite same as the manga you have read! I don't know! XD
@leEwẬy: I hope you find that story interesting too! Mmmmm... all pairing huh? :b
@Zita: Sorry that it's not the pairing you wanted!  :cry:
@ jenzybenzy: Your wish have being granted! Hope you find the story interesting!  :)
@smarty0821: Sorry that it's not the pairing you wanted!  :cry:

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                                                                                                                             Chapter 1- Fateful Meeting
  "Congratulation on your graduation!"
That's what I heard everywhere when I walks around the school.
People were all holding their certificate, taking photos and giving their last farewell.
"Hey Takamina! Can you come over here for a moment?"
I walk towards my friends.
"What can I do for you?"
Giving them a weak and being forced smile.
"Can you help us to take a group photo?"
Misaki said and stretched out her hand which is holding on to a camera.
"Sure, leave it to me."
I answered and take the camera from her.
"3, 2, 1! Click."
Misaki run towards me and take a look at the photo.
"Thank you Takamina!"
Misaki showed me her smile.
"Misaki! Do you want to go celebrate together?"
One of the friends asked.
"I want! Let's go!"
She turned around and was about to run towards her friends but then suddenly she turned to face me.
"Takamina, do you want to go with us too?"
I was about to answer her but she speak again.
"I'm sorry! I know that you are no in the mood to celebrate! I hope to see you soon!"
 She then break the eyes contract and reunite with her friends.
 
  That's right, I'm the only one in the level that I didn't pass my exams.
Blame myself for being bakamina.
Oh! I forgot to introduce myself!
I'm Takahashi Minami!
People often just called me Takamina!
I'm a very ordinary person and leading a very ordinary life.
Being ordinary means I don't stand out too that's why I have never being in a relationship.
That's all for now!
I drag my foot and make my way back home.
Finally reaching the familiar building, I fish out my key from my pocket.
I was mentally prepared to have a gloomy atmosphere to welcome me.
"I'm home..." I said in a monotone.
"Welcome back dear!"
My mom greeted me with her high pit voice when she's happy.
"Mom? Are you okay?"
I shoot her with my confused look.
"Of course I'm fine dear!"
"But I failed my exams..."
I look at the floor when I said.
"I know dear!"
"But why are you still so happy?"
"You will know later!"
She hopped back into the kitchen and continue her cooking while singing.
I ignored my mom strange action and make my way to my room.
I placed my bag beside the study table and take the document that was on my table.
'Seiku High' That was my dream school.
I crashed the document and threw it into the rubbish bin.
"Dinner is ready!"
My mom shouted informing me to go downstairs.
I sit down and placed my head on the table expressing myself that I was not in a good mood.
When my mom patted on my shoulder, I looked up.
Two happy face what greeted me.
"Why are you two still so happy even when I failed my exam?"
"Well, that's because you don't have to worry that you have to repeat another year!"
My dad showed my a document.
"Eh?! I'm going to transfer school?!"
I took the document to have a closer look at it.
'Tokubetsu High'
"What school is this? I didn't heard it before!"
"Well, I'm not sure too maybe you could check on it later!"
My dad said while busy munching on his food.
"Then how do you got this document?"
I continued to ask ignoring whether he is eating or not.
"Well, your dad was walking home just now and there was a man who was wearing a white long clothes walking in front of him and then suddenly he dropped this!"
"Can this really be trusted?"
Th ignored my question and continue smiling while eating their food.
"Anyway, you will be transferring to the school next week!"
My dad said.
"Eh? But school just ended!"
"This school is special I guess!"
My dad continued to say.
After my dinner I went back to my room to study on the document.
"Ah! That was a map given!"
I looked at the map and my eyes became wide opened.
"This school is so far from here! And how do I get there?!"
I continued to look at there document.
'You can take bus 100 to reach the school.'
'Students are required to stay at the dorms.'
'Students can only go home on summer break.'
"Mmmmm... It doesn't look so bad..."

~Next Week~
"Have you packed finish your luggage?"
My mom asked me while eating the breakfast.
"Yes I have mom!"
After I finished my breakfast, my parents send me to the bus stop to take bus 100.
"Be careful dear! Call us if you can!"
My mom said and gave me a hug.
"Take care of yourself too!"
My dad said and process to hug me too.
"Don't worry! I will okay? And I will try my best to score well this time too!"
I got on board the bus.
The bus started it's engine hinting me that it's reach to go.
I wave my hand to my parents and watch them getting further and further away from me.
About 15 minutes later, suddenly the driver spoke.
"Are you going to Tokubetsu High?"
The driver said without looking up.
"Yup!"
"Then you have to be careful then!"
When the driver looked up, his eyes was glowing.
Then suddenly we entered a tunnel and everything was so bright that I can't see anything.
When the brightness faded away, I recover my visual and looked outside.
Everything was different.
The environment was so beautiful.
I left the bus and looked around.
"Good luck young lady."
The driver said and drove the bus away.
"Ah! What do you mean..."
I remembered that I wanted to ask him about that sentence that he made just now but he was already gone.
I took out the map that I have and make my way to the school.
"Strange, why is there no one around? And why did I walk into a forest?"
I pulled my luggage with me and increase my walking speed.
Suddenly I heard a sound, something that sound like someone is walking or is it running?"
Feeling scared, I began to run.
Suddenly something hit me from the side.
I fell flat on the ground.
"Ouch..."
I wanted to stand up but I felt something heavy on top of me.
I opened my eyes and found a girl with long hair on top of me.
Because she was so close to me, I could smell her shampoo.
"She smell nice..."
I closed my eyes and enjoy this moment.
"I'm so sorry!"
The voice break me away from my own world.
"I was having anemia!"
When she looked up I was stunned by her beauty.
Her eyes was blue colour.
"Is she a foreigner?"    
"Are you okay?"
She was still waiting for my reply.
"Ah! I'm sorry! Are you okay?!"
"I'm okay! Anyway I'm Maeda Atsuko! Just call me Acchan will do!"
"I'm Takahashi Minami! You can call me Takamina!"
"It's a pleasant to meet you! Are you a student of Tokubetsu High too?"
"Yup! I just got into this school!"
"Eh! Me too! I'm so glad that I meet you! I was so scared that I couldn't make any friend!"
"She's must be kidding... She's so beautiful how would she not be able to make any friends!"

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Is it boring? I hope not...  :banghead:
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Re: ~Love @ Risk~ (Takamina, Atsuko, Yuko)- Chapter 1 (6 September 2013)
« Reply #12 on: September 06, 2013, 04:57:49 PM »
AtsuMina ka~?

Dude, I love yar sig! OwO

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Re: ~Love @ Risk~ (Takamina, Atsuko, Yuko)- Chapter 1 (6 September 2013)
« Reply #13 on: September 06, 2013, 07:43:51 PM »
yahooo atsumina pairing haha
thanks for update author~san

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Re: ~Love @ Risk~ (Takamina, Atsuko, Yuko)- Chapter 1 (6 September 2013)
« Reply #14 on: September 06, 2013, 08:32:40 PM »
I don't know if this is right...

But, this story... You get the concept from Rosario Vampire right???

Waiting for your next update...  :) :) :)
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Re: ~Love @ Risk~ (Takamina, Atsuko, Yuko)- Chapter 1 (6 September 2013)
« Reply #15 on: September 06, 2013, 10:48:24 PM »
Yeah... Interesting first accounter between Atsuko and Minami

Erm..I might agreed with cross-San

'Rosario + vampire'... Is it?

Well whatever it is... I'm looking forward to the next chapter

Thank you for the update

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Re: ~Love @ Risk~ (Takamina, Atsuko, Yuko)- Chapter 1 (6 September 2013)
« Reply #16 on: September 07, 2013, 01:47:32 AM »
So it's AtsuMina?

Can't wait for your next update. :)

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Re: ~Love @ Risk~ (Takamina, Atsuko, Yuko)- Chapter 1 (6 September 2013)
« Reply #17 on: September 07, 2013, 02:22:36 PM »
Atsumina!!!!! :heart: :heart: :yep: :yep: ummmm will there be takayuu?????cause I like that pairing too

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~Love @ Risk~ (Takamina, Atsuko, Yuko)- Chapter 2 (18 October 2013)
« Reply #18 on: October 18, 2013, 05:04:15 PM »
@AshuraX: Eh? Thanks for your comment! :3
@ezha: Thank you for your comment! :3
@Minamiyuki, @cisda83: I take the starting idea from it since I'm having trouble on how to start but I'm going to change the story so It wouldn't be similar!
@Feat: Maybe!  :P
@diamond kirara: Mmmmm... maybe there's both? :3

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  *Ring~~~*
The sound of the school bell interrupted us.
"Oh! That's the school bell! We're gone to be late! Takamina, you should get to the school soon too! See you in school!"
Acchan turned around and ran towards the school after she finished her sentence.
"Ah! See yo..."
I can't finished my sentence in time.
I quickly tidy my clothes and ran towards the school.
"For a girl, she ran fast!"

  I stopped in front of a board and search for my name.
'Takahashi Minami'
'Class 1A'
'Room 248'
"I guess I will leave my luggage at my room first!"
I followed the signs to get to my room.
While I was walking along the corridor, strange printings were hang on the wall.
"Mmmmm... Why will they hang this kind of printing?"
"That's because they are our ancestor!"
A voice behind said.
"Wa!"
"Hahaha! Sorry for scaring you! I'm Yuko! Oshima Yuko!"
She said while showing her dimples.
"I'm Takamina! Takahashi Minami!"
"So your Takahashi Minami?!"
"Y-Yeah? I-Is there a problem?"
"Yay! I found my roommate!"
"How do you know I'm your roommate?!"
"I checked on the board just now! And you know, we are in the same class too! Come on! Let's go place your luggage down!"
She pull me by my hand.
"Wow, her strength is incredible..."
She let go of my hand and leave a red hand mark.
"Eh, Oshima-san, what do you mean by those printing is our ancestor?"
"Just Yuko will do! Mmmmm? Are you alright? You should have seen those printing at your house too!"
She then shot me a strange look.
"Now you mention it, you smell weird..."
She then get close to me and start sniffing me.
"Ah... I..."
"Takamina!"
Someone from behind shouted.
"A-Acchan! H-Help me!"
"Hey! What are you doing to Takamina?!"
Yuko immediately change her attention to her.
"I'm just talking to her!"
"If you are why Takamina said help her?!"
Acchan grab her collar.
Yuko push her away and pinch her nose.
"Your smelly!"
"Eh?! Acchan smell nice!"
"And Takamina, you just smell like her!"
"Oh... That's because in the morning she was on top of me!"
"That's explain why you smell like her!"
"Takamina! I going first! See you in class!"
Yuko growl at Acchan and then ran off still pinching her nose.
"Why is Yuko acting like this?"

  "Are you alright Takamina?!"
She touch me everywhere.
I start to blush.
"I-I'm alright..."
I tried to step back but instead I fall.
"Ouch..."
Acchan was on top of me again.
But her eyes colour was lighter blue now and she was not looking into my eyes but somewhere else.
"Acchan?"
I called her but she's still staring somewhere else.
"Acchan???"
I shake her.
"Eh?"
Her eyes colour change back to blue.
"I-I'm sorry!"
She stood up and ran away again.
"Why does she kept running away? And she's acting weird just now!"

~Takamina & Yuko's room~
"Takamina! I will be bathing first!"
"Ah! Sure!"
I look at our handbook while wait for Yuko to finish.
'Don't not ever step out of your room after lights out!'
"Takamina! I'm done!"
"Okay!"
I took my clothes and bathing things.
"Strange, why the water level is rising?"
I bend now to see why the water can't flow out.
"Is there something stuck at the hole?"
I take something long and put it into the hole.
"Mmmmm? That's something there!"
I take out the thing.
"W-What's this?!"
I stare at a white fur ball.
"Is there an animal in our room before we came back?!"
I throw the fur ball into the rubbish bin and prepared to get out.
But I can't find my towel.
"I forgotten about my towel..."
"Yuko! Can you take my towel for me?"
"Sure!"
I slightly open the toilet door.
Yuko place her hand into the toilet, passing me my towel.
"Thank yo..."
I stopped half way and stared at her hand.

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Re: ~Love @ Risk~ (Takamina, Atsuko, Yuko)- Chapter 2 (18 October 2013)
« Reply #19 on: October 18, 2013, 05:16:56 PM »
Yeahhhh... AtsuMinaYuu...

Interesting..

Next chapter, please.. :bow:

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