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Re: PJ48 HIGH SCHOOL (New writer) UPDATED CHAP 5
« Reply #40 on: October 22, 2013, 07:06:22 AM »
Ano.... everyone... I wanted to update this yesterday but.... I CAN'T TT.TT
I stored the story inside my computer but yesterday I couldn't find it anywhere???!!!
So now I have to rewrite it and that will take a long time....
I'm sorry everyone TT.TT I'll do my best to update  :sweatdrop:

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Re: PJ48 HIGH SCHOOL (New writer) UPDATED CHAP 6
« Reply #41 on: January 28, 2014, 04:41:29 PM »
Sorry for the late update everyone... I have been busy lately. I'll try to update more regularly TTvTT. I wrote this chapter in a hurry so it might not be very good... I'll edit this tomorrow. Pleaseenjoy  :)
Chapter 6
--In class 2A--
“Okay class it's time to get back to your seat.” Mariko says to her students
The class hurrily get back to their seat. As  all the students are back to their seat, Mariko glances around the classrom and someone is missing
“Do you know where are Maeda and Takahashi??” ask Mariko to her students and what she gets is a no answer.
“That's odd for Maeda-sama to be late.” whipsper a student
“Yeah she always come to school very early.” agree another one
“Huhm........... I wonder what's wrong.”
While everyone is whipspering about two missing students of the class, they suddenly hear some noise in the hallway. It seems like someone is running. They all turn the attention to the door include Mariko. Then the door is  violently opened, reveal a small figure carrying someone behind the back.
“Takahashi, Maeda!?” says Mariko still shock about the entrance
“Ah Sensei sorry for being late but Maeda-san twisted her ankle so can I have the permission to carry her to the infirmary.” says Takamina who shows no sign of tiredness from the running
“Ah.....O....k....a....y.... B-” says Mariko still loss of words but then was cut off by Takamina
“Thank you very much!!” says Takamina then start running to the infirmary, leave everyone in the class dumbfounded.
--Infirmary--
“Excuse me! Is there anybody here?” shout Takamina while entering the room but no response. She looks around to find the infirmary teacher but she can't see anyone.
“It seems like the teacher aren't here.” says Takamina
“You know you can go back to class. I will stay here and wait for the teacher.” says Atsuko
“Eh? But I can't leave you alone in here eventhough we're at school but I can't leave a pretty girl like you here.” hearing the “pretty” word make Acchan look away to hide her blush
“Beside I know how to patch a wound so I'll do it. Is that okay with you” says Takamina
“Suit yourself....”
Takamina puts Atsuko on the bed then goes to the cupboard to find medicine and bandge. Due to her short height, she has a hard time reaching the medicine because it's nearly on the top. She tries jumping up and down to reach it, this makes Atsuko giggleon on how funny it is. After a while she reaches the medicine then go to Atsuko's bed to patch up her ankle. To Atsuko's surprised Takamina is really good at this, she patch up her wound nicely and really gentle.
“How can you be so good at this?” ask Atsuko
“Ah.... When I was young I used to get hurt a lot and my parents weren't at home much so I learned how to do it myself.”
“Eh? Why did you get hurt?”
“Well I played basketball with my friends in the neigbour. I tripped a lot because of my small size so I get pushed pretty easily He He... But because of that my body is really strong now so no problem at all!” says Takamina proudly, trying to show her muscle. This action makes Atsuko can't hold her laughter anymore
“Ha ha ha ha you're weird! Ha ha”
Takamina pout at this but kind of happy to see her smile.
She looks cute when she smile like that think Takamina with her face blushing a little. Notice this, she tries to hide it by continue patching the wound
“Okay it's done!”
“Thank you Takahashi-san. I own you this time.”
“Nah it's alright, it's what I must do.” says Takamina with a smile which make Atsuko's heart skip a beat.
What's this feeling inside me......? think Atsuko while griping her shirt
*Ding dong ding dong*
“I should go back to class. I've already skip a period.” says Atsuko while trying to stand up
“whoa there Maeda-san! You should stay in the infirmary! You're still hurt! Skipping a few period won't be hurt.” reasure Takamina to Atsuko as she's holding her arm trying to put her back to bed
“I'm the class rep and also a student council president. I can't skip class... It will be a bad influence.”
"Jeez alright I'll help you go back to class. You have to promise to not overdo it okay?" Says Takamina, she gives up on trying to persuade her
"I don't need your help. I can go back on my ow- kyaaa!" Atsuko tries to walk on her own but it's no used and she end up kissing the ground
"I've warned you, right? You really are stubborn." Takamina kneel down facing her back to Atsuko as to tell her to get on. Atsuko feels frustrated but she can't do anything with her current condition so she have to obey. After Atsuko already on her back, she stands on her feet then goes back to the classroom. They remain silent all the way back to the classrom.
-Lunch time-
"Hey spill out! When did you guys start going out?" Hearing that from Yuko everyone turn their attention to Takamina who is looking up from her bentou with her mouth full and surprised face.
Takamina gulps down her food  "Huh!? What are you talking about?"
"Don't play dumb with us! I know you guys have sth. If you don't then why are you guys go to school together?"
"I met her when I was on my way to school. I saw her twisted her ankle so I decided to carry her to school that's all." Takamina skip the harassing part as she thinks Atsuko doesn't like talking about it.
"Eh!? That's it!? Oh man I thought I would be able to hear a good story..." says Yuko as she rests her head on the table.
"Well putting that aside we're going to have practice match with another school." Says Sayaka to the girls
"Eh! A practice match!? When!?" Shout Takamina as she stands up catching the attention of the students in the cafeteria.
"It's on Sunday next week. I know you're excited about it but can you sit down. You're quite an attention you know." Chuckle Sayaka
Hearing that Takamina look around to see everyone in the cafeteria is staring at her. She bows and apologies then sit back to continue the conversation.
"So which school are we facing Sayaka-san?" Asks Takamina
"It's Sakura Gakuen."

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Re: PJ48 HIGH SCHOOL (New writer) UPDATED CHAP 6
« Reply #42 on: January 29, 2014, 04:12:02 AM »
I just found ur fanfic today and omg it the best

I love ur conversation with the other

Please updatesoon

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Re: PJ48 HIGH SCHOOL (New writer) UPDATED CHAP 6
« Reply #43 on: January 29, 2014, 12:34:20 PM »
Ah... Atsuko and Minami are attracted to each other...

What kind of battle are they going to come across?

Can't wait to see it

Thank you for the update

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