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PJ48 HIGH SCHOOL (New writer) UPDATED CHAP 6
« on: August 09, 2013, 02:23:09 PM »
This is my first time writing a fic so there are a lot of grammar mistake so please forgive me. :mon cry:
I want to try writing one so here it is so enjoy everyone! :mon cute:

PJ48 HIGH SCHOOL
Chap 1
“Takamina hurry up you’re going to be late for school you know!” shout mom from downstairs. “Just a sec mom I’m coming!” I shout back from upstairs and hurry down before mom gets mad ( I don’t want that to happen if I want to live). “Honestly! What were you doing last night? You know today is your first day at school right? Why didn’t you go to bed early? You want to make an expression or something!?” complain mom. “I’m sorry! I was excited that I couldn’t seem to fall asleep!” (Au: Are you an elementary kid who excited before a trip? =.=). “Okay eat your breakfast. Geez! You are like a child” (Au: Exactly! ^^). “What!? I couldn’t help it! It’s my new school so I have to be nervous and I’m a transfer student too so I worried that if I could make friends. Lame dad for transferring work to here in Tokyo” says me. “All right I give up just finish eating before you’re going to be late.” remind mom. “Crap I have to hurry! *Chomp! Chomp! Gulp! Gulp!* I’m done bye mom see you this afternoon.” “Have a safe trip dear!” shout mom as I get out of the house.
Hello my name is Takahashi Minami a transfer student at PJ48 High School. And I’m a 101% sure that my gender is female. I’m a bit boyish so people sometimes mistake me as a boy which make me really pissed(Au: Well you’re Takaboy so it can’t be helped :lol:) . My dad moved his work place to Tokyo 2 months ago so I have to transfer school. Well to be honest I kind of sad but there’s nothing I could do about it. I hope my new school is nice like my previous school.
--IN FRONT OF THE SCHOOL GATE—
Arrive at school I’m surprised that this school is bigger than I have imagined. I know it’s one of the best schools in Tokyo but I didn’t think it would be this big! “Kyaaaa! It’s the Kami Seven!” I snap out of my little world as I hear students yelling. Man! Why are they so energetic in the morning? Did they drink energy drink before going to school or something?  Well despite that I’m quite curious about this “Kami Seven” thing. Who are they that can make the students going crazy first thing in the morning? I decided to check it out. Having a hard time get through the line but I can finally came up front. I look at the Kami Seven and wow they are beautiful like…”Kami” Yes they are! So now I know the reason why they so famous. Their looks are really can make any boys and even girls fall for them. Actually I have set my eyes on one girl who have a shoulder - length hair and seems like the their leader. She have an angelic smile on face which makes me standing at one place like a stone looking at her lips. Ahh! Her lips look so soft. I want to taste it right now. Wait a moment!!! Why I’m thinking like an old man know what’s wrong with me. I have to get out of here before I start to have more weird thought. I turn around and on my way to the principal room. Huhm the “Kami Seven” eh? I think this is going to be a fun year. That’s what I thought but little did I know that someone has been smiling at me as I walk away. What will await me in my high school life?


So how is it should I continue this fic or not? Please comment! :on woohoo:
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Re: PJ48 HIGH SCHOOL (New writer)
« Reply #1 on: August 09, 2013, 02:46:09 PM »
No, don't continue...JUST KIDDING!!! Yes yes yes!!
-Plz do continue!!~ It's sounds interesting!!~ *thumbs up*
-Welcome to the AKB48 fanfic!!~ Geheh~
-Naruhodo ne...Takamina is a transfer student!!~
-Oh, the Kami 7's leader is Acchan??~ Waa~
-I wonder if the Kami 7 is the new one??~
-If Sasshi is there, it'll be more fun i think??~ Heheh

>Anyway, plz update soon...Can't wait for the next one!!~

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Re: PJ48 HIGH SCHOOL (New writer)
« Reply #2 on: August 09, 2013, 05:11:05 PM »
Yahh atsumina school love!!
Takaboy love acchan at the first sight  :inlove:
Want more comedy naaa~~ :cathappy:
Please continue  :D
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Re: PJ48 HIGH SCHOOL (New writer)
« Reply #3 on: August 09, 2013, 07:11:11 PM »
Interesting... So Minami's the new student while atsuko is the kami 7

Think I read a similar story with Minami as the kami 7 and Atsuko is the new student.

Well can't wait to see how the story going to develop.

Thank you for the new Atsumina story

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Re: PJ48 HIGH SCHOOL (New writer)
« Reply #4 on: August 09, 2013, 07:39:26 PM »
super intresting  :w00t: :w00t:

pls continue  :bow:

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Re: PJ48 HIGH SCHOOL (New writer)
« Reply #5 on: August 10, 2013, 02:36:55 PM »
Very interesting!!

Please continue!!! ^_^ :kneelbow:

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Re: PJ48 HIGH SCHOOL (New writer) UPDATED CHAP 2
« Reply #6 on: August 10, 2013, 05:45:38 PM »
Kochiki: Don't scare me like that :shock:. Yes Sasshi will be there but not a part of Kami seven. I'll talk about that later. Here is chapter 2 hope you enjoy it :hee:
nunku: Thank you for your comment. Here is chapter 2. Hope you like it :nya:
blakwhite: Hope it caught your interest. Chapter 2 is here so enjoy :on gay:
Takaminafan49: Thank you very much for liking this fic. I've already updated so enjoy  :bingo:
Here is chapter 2. Really I don't know what am I writing anymore :sweat:. I'll try to make more sense in the next chapter. :on study: Please enjoy it! :on cny1:

Chap 2
--Principal office—
The principal office is quite easy to find so I don’t  have to take a lot of time to get here. As I stand in front of the door I start knocking
*Knock! Knock! Knock!*
“Come in!” shout someone in the office respond to my knocking.
I’m slowly opening the door as I’m bowing a little before coming in. The office is quite big, it’s classically decorated with red carpet on the way to the principal table. Glancing around the room I see a lot of shelves with many books and documents on it. On the wall there are merits and honor flags. This school must be very active so I think the students here must be really smart and do a lot of activities. Ugh! Now I’m starting to feel more afraid than before. Thinking back I have been nervous since this morning and now I can even die from it TT.TT(Au: Don’t worry you won’t die that easy until I have finished this fic. Beside if you die right now a certain someone will kill me so no thanks. I’m still too young too die :sweatdrop:. Now back to the story) From here I can see the school campus clearly so it must be a reason why this office is built on the top floor which has the best view. A ideal room for a principal if you ask me. As he start speaking I snap out of my thought then turn at him.
“So you are Takahashi Minami the transfer student. My name is Akimoto Yasuhi, the principal of this school. Welcome to PJ48 High School! You will be studying here from now on so do your best. I know it is hard for you to get used to the new environment but don’t hesitate to ask your homeroom teacher for advice or you can come here if you need help the room is always open for a student in trouble!” says him kindly welcome me.
“Yes! I’ll keep that in my. Thank you Principal!”
“It’s my pleasure and Akimoto-sensei is fine. Any ways that’s all you can go to your class now. The teacher is waiting for you outside. Enjoy your time here Takahashi-kun”
“I’ll be one my way then. See you later Pr… I mean Akimoto-sensei!” says me as I walk out of the office. He is a really friendly principal. No wonder father entrust me to this school. Well let’s go can’t let the teacher wait too long.
Walk out and I immediately see a female teacher leaning on the wall. Okay… How can I describe her… she is super beautiful! First the “Kami Seven” now her!? I think I’ll faint from all these beauties. Hold on! Calm down Takamina! You are starting to act like an old man again! Now I know why they call me Takaboy. Oh my life!
(Au: How lucky are you, different from me who now still single and there are no one really handsome or beautiful. Haizz! =.=’. Oh right back to the story. Sorry for taking your time)
As I have said the teacher is beautiful. She has short hair with the body of a model. She wears a white shirt with a black women jasket vest outside and a black skirt. She looks so mature in it. Looking at her makes me feel so small.
 (Au: Of course you’re only 148.5cm. 
Takamina: Hey don’t tell them about that!
Au: Ack where are you come from and what are you doing here? You’re not suppose to be here!
Takamina: Well I have to because you’re talking bad things about me!
Au: Hey everyone knows that you know not only me! Now get back there before I cut your amount of katsudon!
Takamina: 0A0! Anything but that! :gyaaah: I…I’ll go back now *run at top speed*
Au: Haiz! Finally I can get rid of her. Now back to the story :on drink:)
As I’m done arguing with the author I start greeting the teacher.
“Good morning sensei!”
“Good morning! You must be the transfer student. My name is Shinoda Mariko, homeroom teacher of class 2A which is the class you will be in. Nice too meet you!” she says and smile at me
“N…Nice to meet you too! My name is Takahashi Minami!” stutter me
“So Takahashi-san is it. Let’s go to class shall we?”
“Yes mam!”
--In front of class 2A—
“When I call your name please come in and introduce yourself okay?” says Shinoda-sensei
“Okay sensei” answer me
I’m standing outside the classroom right now. This is my new class eh? I hope I can fit it. Why you ask? I forgot to tell you that this is a school for students who are rich like came from a rich family or sons and daughters of big company. How can dad convince the principal to let me study here? Well it’s already happened so no way back now as I have to move forward now. I can do it! I’ll make dad proud and bright the name of the Takahashi family!
“Takahashi-san please come in!”
I hear sensei calling my name then I slowly slide the door to get into the class
“This is the transfer student that you’ve heard about. She’s from Kyoto. Be nice to her okay. You can introduce yourself”
“Yes! Hi everyone my name is Takahashi Minami. I’m skilled at basketball and I’m quite bad at English. My dream is to become a professional basketball player. Nice to meet you all!” introduce me
Wow that actually went better than I thought. I glance around the class to see the students whisper about me.
“Hey she’s quite handsome but she’s so short~!” Ouch! You don’t have to say that TT.TT
“Yeah but she’s really my type I wonder if she has a girlfriend. If not then I’ll go for it!”
“Hey that’s no far I have eyes on her too!”
“Hey you girls have eyes on her doesn’t mean we not” says a boy in the class
“What!? But didn’t you guys say that you will only have eyes on the “Kami Seven?”
“Hey we’re boys you know beside she is quite cute too!”
“Humh! You and your reason!”
Okay this class is weird! I’m starting to feel a chill run down my spine. Continue to glance around I see some people not really interested at all. Look more closely and OMG! It’s 3 of the “Kami Seven” and one of them is the girl from this morning. I don’t know if this is a fortune or misfortune but I don’t sense anything good about it. Kami! Why do you do this to me? (Kami: Because I like it. Don’t get so excited there will be a lot of fun ahead!) (Au: Poor you Taka)
“Okay settle down class. Takahashi-san you will be sitting at the back at the row next to the window behind Maeda-san”
I look at the seat the teacher point at and almost stumble as I will sit behind one of the “Kami Seven” who is the girl this morning. Can this get any worse? Okay calm down! Just politely introduce yourself there’s nothing to get nervous! When I settle down at my sit then I start the conversation.
“Hello there! My name is Takahashi Minami. Please take care of me!”
“Whatever.” Answer her coldly
1 sec, 2sec, 3sec, … I’m surprised again! She’s different from this morning. How can she be so cold!
“Uhm… Okay… So what’s your name?”
“Maeda Atsuko” still answer me coldly
What did I done for her to get mad? Wait this is my first day here how can I make her mad when I don’t even know her name!! Whatever I’ll be quiet for as I don’t want to make her uncomfortable.
“Today is your first day so you have no lesson. After this you can go back or wondering around the school or go to your club. Oh! Takahashi-san you can go around to visit the clubs and then sign up for the one you like.” Says sensei
“Yes mam” Huhm join a club eh? Then I’ll be joining the basketball club like I used to. I can’t wait to see how good are the people in this school’s team.
*Ding dong ~ Ding dong~*
“That’s it for today you are dismissed. Remember tomorrow is your first day so prepare everything okay?”
“Yes mam”
“Good see you tomorrow!”
The teacher walks out of the class then the students start to form group and go out as well. Maeda-san already went ahead with the other two in the “Kami Seven”. Why are they in a hurry? Oh well not business. As I stand up ready to go to find the basketball club then there are 3 person approach me. What’s going on?
“Hey there new one I heard that you like basketball right want to join our club?” say the squirrel girl
“Hey you want to scare her off or sth!? Sorry about our friend behavior my name is Kashiwagi Yuki, this squirrel girl is Oshima Yuko and this genki person is Miyazawa Sae. We all in the basketball club.” Says the tall girl whose name is Yuki
“Hi nice to meet you I’m Sae!” says the genki person
“Ah… Nice to meet you my name is Takahashi Minami you can call me Takamina.”
“Oh then you can call me Yukirrin then as for the other two you can call them Yuko and Sae” smile the tall girl as see talk to me
“Okay I’ll do just that. So you all in the basketball club”
“Yes but our basketball club for girls is not really famous as the boys so don’t expect too much. The coach likes to coach the boys more than us so…”
“Oh I see don’t worry about it you guys like basketball right? So that’s no problem at all. I know we will famous someday if we try hard!” I said passionately
They are taken back by what I said but smile after that
“That’s the spirit! I like you!” say Yuko as see cling on me
“That’s right you really are something! It’s the first time I heard someone say it like that” say Sae smile widely at me
“You must really love basketball then what are we waiting for let’s go to the club. Everyone must be waiting” say Yuki
“Okay!” shout the three of us
Okay it’s the first day and I already make three friends so far. That’s a good start. I can’t wait to join the basket ball club now

Au: That’s the end of chap 2. Chap 3 will be updated shortly after this
Taka: Yes continue. I want to know what next
Au: What the heck are you doing here again?
Taka: How rude the chapter has ended so I can appear now right?
Au: Well… Okay suit yourself
Taka: Yay! Love you Au! But why did you make Atsuko so cold at me? *Puppy eyes*
Au: *takes a few steps back as I can’t stand puppy eyes* Well that’s the kind of Atsuko I want to make in this fic
Taka: Yada!!! I don’t want that! :tantrum:
Au: I’m the one writing you know beside you will reunite with her sooner or later :sweat:
Taka: Really okay then! :nya:
Au: :stoned:How come Atsuko like you when you really are childlish?
Atsuko: *suddenly pops up* Did you say sth? :shifty:
Au: Ack Acchan what are you…? :shock:
Atsuko: Listen carefully if you don’t write this seriously then I don’t know if I can keep you alive :angry1:
Au: YES MAM! :on freeze:
Atsuko: Good! Minami let’s go I’ll treat you Katsudon today!
Taka: Okay bye bye Au :byebye:
Au: Bye bye :sweat:… Whew she’s so scary now no wonder Minami is afraid of her. Anyway thanks for reading my story. Chapter 3 will be update shortly. If I have any mistake please tell me. Thank you again!  :kneelbow:

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Re: PJ48 HIGH SCHOOL (New writer) UPDATED CHAP 2
« Reply #7 on: August 10, 2013, 06:31:13 PM »
A total mess!! There's a lot of mistake here!!
-Just kidding, it's simply perfect!! I like it!!~ *grin*
-And sorry to scare you like that...Gomen, gomen~
-*turn back + whisper sth* "Though i like to see dat reaction.." *sadist smile*
-*turn around* Oh that was nothing~ I was just talking to myself~
-Oh!! Acchan is so cold here!! Basketball?? Kakkoiiii~
-So famous!! o.o'' Takamina attract those girls!! Lol~
-Ah...Yuko, Yuki and Sae is the Kami7 and was in the basketball club!!~
-This is gonna be good!!~ Naruhodo...Interesting...

>Plz update soon anyway, can't wait to see more of it!!~

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Re: PJ48 HIGH SCHOOL (New writer) UPDATED CHAP 2
« Reply #8 on: August 10, 2013, 06:55:39 PM »
acchan so cold lol

*imagining takamina play basketball* ahh ~ kakkoi  :wub:

thanks for update, i will wait for next update but pls update soon  ;)

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Re: PJ48 HIGH SCHOOL (New writer) UPDATED CHAP 2
« Reply #9 on: August 10, 2013, 11:54:59 PM »
Integrating development here...

Takamina was such a optimistic and bright friendly person

She really liked basketball here...

Why Atsuko was so cold towards Minami?

What's going to happen to Minami next?

Can't wait

Thank you for the update

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Re: PJ48 HIGH SCHOOL (New writer) UPDATED CHAP 2
« Reply #10 on: August 11, 2013, 09:43:29 AM »
I wonder who's the Kami 7 ??

Acchan is so cold to Takamina...  :banghead:

Update soon pleaseee....  :bow:

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Re: PJ48 HIGH SCHOOL (New writer) UPDATED CHAP 2
« Reply #11 on: August 11, 2013, 01:13:38 PM »
Good job!author san I like your comment :lol:
Please continue!! O0
why atsu so cold toward minami
Yuko yuki not kami7?
I wait for you update
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Re: PJ48 HIGH SCHOOL (New writer) UPDATED CHAP 3
« Reply #12 on: August 11, 2013, 04:17:36 PM »
Kochiki: You love to tease me do you? :mon POd: Anyway glad that you like it and Yuko, Yuki and Sae are not in the Kami Seven. Well here is chap 3. Enjoy!
blakwhite: Thank you for reading my fic! I'm happy that you like the Takamina in this fic! Here is chap 3 as I promised sorry if it's a bit late :depressed:. I'll try to up chap 4 sooner. Please enjoy!
cisda83: Thank you for your comment! Please enjoy chap 3. I'll up chap 4 sooner.
olive29: Ha ha the Kami Seven will be reveal in chap 4 :glasses: so please enjoy chap 3 for now :hee:. Thank you for your comment!
nunku: I'm glad that you like my comment :shy1:. I was afraid that you guys wouldn't like :badluck:. Here's chap 3 please enjoy it

Here's chap 3 everyone. I update it kind of later than expected because I have homework to do :fainted:. I promise I'll update chap 4 as soon as I can

Chap 3
--School campus—
We introduce ourselves on the way to gym to meet up with the other members. I ask them about their parents. They exchange glances with each other quite confuse. Okay… Did I ask something weird? Even though they are uncomfortable, they tell me about that anyway: Yuko’s parents are famous musicians, they like to go around the world to perform so she can’t see them very often. Yukirrin’s parents are university teachers, they teach at University School of Medicine. Wow they must be really good to teach there. As for Sae’s parents, they own a large company about electronic devices. As expected as a student from this school their background is awesome, it’s different from mine.
“But even our parents are famous we don’t really care though.” says Yuko make me snap out of my thought
“Why is that? It’s everyone’s dream to have famous parents and to be in a rich family. You should be proud of that right?” I ask feeling curious why Yuko said that
“Well even if we proud of them or not it’s not like they will home with us.” this time it’s Yukirrin turn to say
“Eh? What do you mean?” ask me again in confusion
“Our parents are famous so that’s why they are busy with their work all the time. We really don’t see them very often even if we do they will go straight to their room to continue working or sleeping. It’s kind of lonely.” says Sae sadly
The other slowly nod as well. Uh oh I guess I shouldn’t have asked that. Now I feel kind of guilty =.=’
“Sorry I shouldn’t have asked about your family. If I have brought back bad memories for you guys I sincerely apology.”  I stop half way and apology to them. That makes them stop to look at me. They exchange glances again and then laughter can be heard. Huh? Is there something funny about what I said.
“Aw! You are so cute!” says Yuko as she pounce on me makes me almost lose my balance
“What the…? Yuko?” says me confuse. What’s wrong with her?
“You look really cute when you apology! It’s like a puppy feeling guilty for what it did to it master!” says Yukirrin whilr laughing
“That’s right you like a puppy! I want to hug you!” says Sae and pounce on me too
“Wait me too let’s do group hug!” Not you too Yukirrin!
Watching this feel like a family reunion after a long time. Wait a puppy? Does it to do anything with my height? Put that aside I CAN’T BREATH And SO HEAVY!!
“G…u…y…s ca…n’t… bre…ath…”
After hearing they quickly let go of me. I thought I was going to die geez!
“Sorry sorry but you don’t have to worry about that, it’s fine really. We don’t talk about this with other people beside our members. We talked to you because we feel that we could trust you and you will be one of the members too so it’s normal.” explain Yuko
“But I feel really guilty about it. If there’s something I can do to make up for it please tell me.” say me
“You really are a stubborn one aren’t you? Okay then if you like then by us lunch tomorrow. How’s that sound?” sigh Yukirrin
“Okay no problem! Leave it to me!” say me excitedly
“Anyway cut the chit chat and hurry to the gym. The others will be mad if we late!” shout Yuko
“Right! Let’s go Takamina!” shout Yukirrin as she suddenly realize that
“Okay!”
--At the gym—
Arrive in front of the gym, I take a quick look around it from outside. It’s really different from my previous school’s gym. It looks brand new and big too. It’s totally amazing! I can’t wait to see how is it inside!
I excitedly enter the gym and the sight in front of me is… the boys playing practice match! Wow they are really good! Their moves are quick and no wasted moves at all. The shooting is perfect, the timing is good and their teamwork is amazing. So this is the boys basketball team. Yosh! I will not lose to them definitely won’t! I will surpass them and bring up the girls team. Just you wait!
“So what do you think of them Takamina? You look really excited there.”  asks Yukirrin to me.
“Well they are good. I’m amazed at their skill!”
“That’s to be expected from the national team after all.” says Yuko
Eh!? National team? Really? Why dad never told me about that before? I tilt my head as I don’t know what’s going on.
“Yeah they have won several matches before and earn a lot of prize. I kind of jealous of them to be honest.” says Sae not really happy about it. The other doesn’t make any different. Uh oh the atmosphere is pretty tense now. I have to change subject.
“Uhm so where’s the place for the girl team?”
“Oh right let’s go. It’s this way.” Says Yukirrin
As we are walking to door at the back I hear whisper from the boys
“Hey who is that? Is that a new member?”
“I haven’t seen her before maybe she’s new here.”
“Hey I know she’s the new transfer student at class 2A!”
“Oh the one the girls are talking about. Well she’s so short but quite cute. Can she really play?”
“I don’t know but I think she won’t make any different. At this rate the girl team will be dismissed sooner or later.”
“Yeah they should be. They really are useless anyway.”
“Quiet! They can hear you!”
What’s all this commotion about? How can they talk about the team like that? Beside “SHORT”? That’s really rude! I’m just not tall that’s all! (Au: Yeah you and your reason =.=’! That’s not really cool Takamini!
Taka: Hey! It’s Takamina not TakaMINI! And you are not reallt tall either! :tantrum:
Au: Whatever it’s the same. And for your information I’m at least taller than you. :on asmo:
Taka: Ugh! :stoned:
Au: Anymore question? If not then let’s go back.)
Stupid author always making fun of me. Anyway useless eh? I will make them take back their word!
TBC

Au: That's it for chapter 3. Hope everyone like
Taka: This chap is quite short neh. Atsuko didn't appear in it
Au: That's all you care about!? :stoned:
Taka: Of course! This story is mainly about us right? And I can't stand Atsuko being so cold to me :on speedy:
Yuko: Hey don't forget about us! We're there too you know!
Yuki: That's right! You're lucky because you got to see your Acchan.
Sae: Yeah!
Au: Wait where are you all come from? :shock:. More important DON'T JUST COME IN MY ROOM LIKE THAT :on thumbb:! MY ROOM HAVE A LIMIT YOU KNOW :angry1:!
Yuko: You don't have to yell. Okay we'll leave but you better have our lovers appear next chap! :shifty:. Or else we'll have Black talk to you
Au: :gyaaah: Why is my life so hard! Okay as you wish :depressed:
Yuko, Yuki, Sae: Yay!! Love you lot au! :on slopkiss:
Yuko: Let's go have breakfast I'm hungry!
Taka: Good idea let's go
All: Bye Au good luck :byebye:
Au: Yeah just go. Finally I can get rid of them. Why they have so much energy in them? I will go to the hospital soon from all these headache. :on cloudeye:
Okay that's the end of this chap. Sorry if this too short! I'll try to post the next one early :on study:. Thank you for reading

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Re: PJ48 HIGH SCHOOL (New writer) UPDATED CHAP 3
« Reply #13 on: August 11, 2013, 04:33:48 PM »
Oh really? I'm mistaken but putting that aside...
-Damn you author cos you got a kiss from Yuko, Sae and Yuki!!
-Don't get too cocky juz because you're an author...lol
-That's not teasing, my honest feelings~ Don't mind me...
-Hm...That's right Minami...Atsuko didn't appear in here...
-I want her to appear and who in the hell says my Minami is useless?!
-Oh, you better teach them, Minami...*look at author-san* You better make my Minami cool...

>Pft...Anyway, plz update soon...Kindly accept my attitude!!~ Hehehe~

Edit: Uwawa!! This is my 100th post?! Well, at least your story is worthy~ Muahaha!!~ Sorry...

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Re: PJ48 HIGH SCHOOL (New writer) UPDATED CHAP 3
« Reply #14 on: August 11, 2013, 05:00:54 PM »
yay update  :inlove:

eeeh? basketball girl team will be disbanded  :shocked

takamina will kill all the boy basket ball team  :angry:

btw, i like the conversation between character with author  :D

i waiting for next update

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Re: PJ48 HIGH SCHOOL (New writer) UPDATED CHAP 3
« Reply #15 on: August 11, 2013, 10:32:09 PM »
Erm... The boys are so crocky there...

I hope Minami can show them... But how good is she?

Can't wait to see the next chapter

And also who are the members of kami7

Thank you for the update

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Re: PJ48 HIGH SCHOOL (New writer) UPDATED CHAP 4 part 1
« Reply #16 on: August 12, 2013, 03:45:06 PM »
Kochiki:Thanks for always commenting on my story. Here is chap 4 part 1. Part 2 will be updated later as I'm busy with my school and all. :on study: Please enjoy this one. I promise the next one will be more interesting! :on GJ:
blakwhite: I'm glad that you like my conversation. Here is the new chap. Please enjoy it! :kneelbow:
cisda83:You will know who are the Kami Seven in part 2 so just enjoy part 1 for today. :hee:
Here's the new chap. I hope you like it. I'll try to improve my writing in the next one as my writing is really poor :on blackhole:. Everyone please enjoy! :on drink:

Chap 4
Part 1
--The outside field—
There’s a basketball court just behind the gym. So this is the place where the girls practice. It’s kind of small to be honest. It’s unfair that the boys get to use the gym when the girls have to be outside like this! It’s going to be quite inconvenient when it’s raining and practice may have to be canceled as well. What kind of treatment is this!? They favor the boys too much. Urg! Anyway let’s drop that for now I’ll make them pay later. As I walk to the court I saw four girls are playing two on two. They must be the remaining members. They must have notice us so they stop playing then look at us.
“Hey you’re late! Where were you?” shout the gorilla like girl( not to be rude but that’s the truth)
“Geez you’re so noisy gorilla! We just a few minutes late.” Yuko shout back at her
“What did you say squirrel?” now she’s really angry and that’s really scary
“Now now don’t start the fight in front of new member like that.” Says Yuki interrupt their fight
“Oh right sorry Takamina.” Apologies Yuko when realize that it’s not just them here
“This is Takamina the transfer student in our class and she wants to join the basketball club.” explains Yuki
I bow a little before introduce myself once more “Hello! My name is Takahashi Minami! You can call me Takamina. I want join the basketball club. My dream is to be a professional player. Please take care of me!”
“Oh big dream you have there. I like your passion.” says the gorilla girl
“We have a new member right here too. Why don’t you introduce yourself?” a girl with duck lips says
“Right! Hello my name is Matsui Jurina and I’m a first year student! My aim is to be the best of the best players. Nice to meet you!” says the girl with a cat like smile excitedly. The best of the best players heh… It’s like I have a rival. It’s going to be interesting.
“Okay then let’s me introduce too. My name is Akimoto Sayaka but call me Sayaka, a second year student. I’m the captain of this team.” says the gorilla girl
“My name is Itano Tomomi also a second year. You can call me Tomochin. My hobby is basketball and fashion. Nice to meet you.” says the duck lips girl
“And lastly is me, Sashihara Rino people call me Sashi, a second year too! I love playing basketball and doing wota! Oh Yeah!” Wota? She’s a strange one isn’t she? Well if she doesn’t give me any problem then it’s fine.
“Sayaka is the captain and Yuki is the vice-captain. If you have any problem you can ask them.” says Yuko as she smiling
“And finally…WELCOME TO THE GIRLS BASKETBALL CLUB YOU TWO!” shout all expect for Jurina and me
After that we quickly go to the changing room to change to practice outfit then start warming up.
“Okay I know you two are new but I want to test your strength. Is that okay?” ask Sayaka as we done warming up
I glance over to Jurina to see that she also agree so I quickly answer “It’s fine”
“Good then we’ll be divided into two teams. The first one will consist of me, Sae, Yuko and Sashi, the second one will be Yuki, Takamina, Jurina, and Tomochin. Any question? No? Okay let’s start!”
Finally I can play in a match! That’s what I’m waiting for. Let’s see how good they are. But as I am feeling excited, something unexpected come: a boy run from inside the gym shout as us
“Hey! The “Kami Seven” want to see you guys! Get here quickly!”
What? What do they want from us? I take a look at the others then I see them all looking sad, confused and depressed. I and Jurina exchange glances and Jurina decided to ask “What’s wrong everyone? Is everything okay?”
“Not really Jurina. We’re in trouble now.” says Yuko looking down on the ground
“What’s exactly happened here? Can you tell me?” ask me because I want to know the answer
“Go with us and you will know it. Let’s go.” says Sae and all of us walk to the gym
What will await for us there and why the “Kami Seven” are here?
TBC in part 2

Part 2 will let you know all the Kami Seven. Please look forward to it and Takamina will everyone how good she is. :ding:
 

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Re: PJ48 HIGH SCHOOL (New writer) UPDATED CHAP 4 part 1
« Reply #17 on: August 12, 2013, 04:12:21 PM »
Omg...cliffhanger!!!!
Pls update soon..as in soon XD
Thank you for the update :on gay:

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Re: PJ48 HIGH SCHOOL (New writer) UPDATED CHAP 4 part 1
« Reply #18 on: August 12, 2013, 04:29:26 PM »
ahh cliffhanger  :panic:
thanks for update, but..
pls update as soon as possible >_<

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Re: PJ48 HIGH SCHOOL (New writer) UPDATED CHAP 4 part 1
« Reply #19 on: August 12, 2013, 08:07:29 PM »
What kind of troubles they were having?

Who are the kami 7?

I know Atsuko was one... I guess the rest are:

Haruna, Mariko, Miichan, Mayu, Rena, Tomo~mi?

How many do I get right?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

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