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Believe....again.. chapter 2(Atsumina)
« on: August 11, 2013, 01:13:44 PM »
Hola,minna-san!!
i'm a new author here..so my fic may turn out boring...but I'll try my best to make you all entertain..
I've wrote a lot of fic before,but they all turned out with no ending..... :depressed:
so,i'll try my best to put an end for this fic... :on study: then,minna-san yoroshiku onegaishimasu... :kneelbow:

this is the prologue....enjoy... :hee:


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Prologue



*Someone's POV*
         It is a bizarre night tonight.Everything look vague and gloom..as vagued and as gloomed as me..I sit alone on the plain bed,hugging my two skinny legs.
Resting my head on my knees I let out a small sigh as I throw my gaze outside my ward window,staring to the dim moon.I'm wonder why the moon wasn't shine brightly tonight?
Keeping my eyes on the poor moon,the pictures of her smiling faces flash into my mind like a film....Now I can feel my heart throbbing and...it was really hurt..Clutching my right hand on my left chest,tears slid down on my face....Should I tell her the truth?



TBC...



so,that's it the prologue.... :err:

oh my....I think it's bad,right? :depressed:

and i'm really sorry if it's plain and boring.... :gyaaah:

sorry if my grammars were bad....

should I continue? :on freeze:
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Re: Here i came,Here i go....prologue..
« Reply #1 on: August 11, 2013, 01:20:38 PM »
It's not boring at all..

I wonder who's the main character??

Please continue.. :bow:

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Re: Here i came,Here i go....prologue..
« Reply #2 on: August 11, 2013, 01:24:25 PM »
Yeah, who's the main character in here??
-Nah nevermind...it's kinda interesting...
-Hope to see the next one though!!~

>Plz update soon, i can't wait for the next one!!~

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Re: Here i came,Here i go....prologue..
« Reply #3 on: August 11, 2013, 09:55:37 PM »
Interesting start there...

Who are the main characters?

What kind of pairings?

Can't wait to see it...

Thank you...

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Re: Here i came,Here i go....prologue..
« Reply #4 on: August 12, 2013, 03:15:00 AM »
intresting :3, not boring at all
pls continue no-chan :3

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Re: Here i came,Here i go....chapter 1..update
« Reply #5 on: August 12, 2013, 03:38:49 AM »
olive29:huhuhu...glad that you like it...for the pairing..i'm still not sure yet...heehehe...please wait... :nervous
Kochiki:the pairings are not sure yet....sorry... :( and,i'm glad that you like it...thanks...
cisda83:oh glad you like it....like I said in above,the pairings are not sure yet...but please wait...what kind of pairing?Hurm...I don't about that too...sorry... :nervous
                      and this fic is not so much into romance,though....hehehe...so just wait for my update.... :)
 

so,here is the first chapter....
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b]Chapter 1[/b]



            Two years ago,I came back again to my hometown in Osaka.It has been 10 years already since my father and I moved to Kyoto.There,my father runs a hot spring inn.Our inn was one of the high standard inn in Kyoto.You can say it’s mostly a three star inn.Side of that,my father also worked as an architect and to be honest I am really proud of that.Even though we are rich,mostly have everything,but I never felt a tinge of happiness through all this year long.I’m lonely.No friends.No relatives and no other siblings to play with.I don’t even have a mother to give me some love.

            In other hand,even though I still have a father,he always busy with all his works.It isn’t strange though since he got two work in the same time.So,I end up being alone all by myself at the inn everyday.Luckily,there were father’s worker there to kill my boring time.Because of that too,every school holiday I end up being at home alone and sometimes play alone.Always all alone.Like I said earlier,i don't have any friends.It's not like there's no one want to be my friend but it was because i'm the one who refused to be their friend.It's not that I don't want but my situations don't allowed me to do that.I have my own reasons though...

            About being no sibling and mother…..actually it was just a lie.I do still have them…but they had left my father and I.It was all my fault.If I was born as a boy,everything would be fine now.Maybe we'll be a happy family.But,that will never happen.It will only remains as a dream.A dream that i'll never reach and i'll always gonna be all alone,forever.For my entire life.Why I said like that?If you gonna ask me,why.The answer is easy...because I know when i'll die...




TBC...

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so,that's it...my first chapter....i don't think it can be called as a chapter,though since it was really short...it was mostly like a prologue to me...huhuuhu :nervous

i hope you like it.... :hee:

oh my...i don't know writing a fic is this hard...but i'll try my best... :on study:

sorry if it was boring....and short.... :badluck:
and please be free to comment.....

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Re: Here i came,Here i go....prologue..
« Reply #6 on: August 12, 2013, 04:34:57 AM »
whoa update :3
not boring at all no-chan :3
i hope the pairing is atsumina hehe :P
pls continue :3

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Re: Here i came,Here i go....prologue..
« Reply #7 on: August 12, 2013, 04:42:13 AM »
Still dunno who is the main character

But not boring at all... so mysterious...

Great going there...

Can't wait to see more

Thank you for the quick update

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Re: Here i came,Here i go....prologue..
« Reply #8 on: August 12, 2013, 10:44:21 AM »
So, she's a girl who wants to be a boy :glasses:

I think it's suits with Atsumina (Kai x Acchan) or SaeYuki pairing :D this just a suggestion :D :D    :hee:
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Re: Here i came,Here i go....prologue..
« Reply #9 on: August 12, 2013, 10:57:44 AM »
Hm?? What if she was born as a boy??
-Company?? Tradition?? Generation??
-Lol, what nonsense am i saying...
-But, eh? Did she have a disease or something??
-She know when will she die unless she kill herself..lol (jk)
-I got the feeling that this fic will be a sad one...
-Still, the main character will not be revealed yet eh?

>I'll wait for it then, Plz update soon!!~ I can't wait for the next one!!~

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Re: Here i came,Here i go....update..
« Reply #10 on: August 12, 2013, 02:37:52 PM »
 :on polter:
Poor thing.
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Re: Here i came,Here i go....chapter 2...
« Reply #11 on: August 15, 2013, 06:40:38 PM »
blakwhite:oh,thx again... :) hurm...atsumina,huh... :glasses:
cisda83:hahaha....sorry about that...glad you like it...:D
marichin00:girl wanna be a boy?hurm...nah...about the pairing...i'm still not sure...butyou may hit the bull's eye there...hehehe :P
Kochiki:good questions there...but I won't tell you for now...i'll explain all of it in my fic,one by one... :) thx for reading...hehehehe..
Zita:ehh?  :?

Hi everyone...sorry for the late update.....i'm out of idea how to write this fic actually.... :nervous

so,this is the next chapter...enjoy!!

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Chapter 2



*no one's POV (Author)*


"Atsuko-chan!Wake up!!"Mrs Maeda shouted from the kitchen.Her shouted could clearly be heard from Atsuko's room which was placed in second floor of the house.Mrs Maeda voice was too loud that even made Atsuko snapped out from her dreamland.

"Ummph...Give me 5 minutes more~"Atsuko winced under her breath as she pulled up her soft blanket and cover her whole body with it,trying to get back to her dreamland,again.

Realizing there was no respond from Atsuko,Mrs Maeda rushed to Atsuko's room.Without even bother to knock the door first,she dashed into her beloved daughter's room and started to shake her body furiously.Frustrated with her daughter,she began to shout out loud.

"Atsuko!Come on!Wake up,already!"shouted Mrs Maeda while kept shaking Atsuko's body again and again.Annoyed with her loud mother who kept shouting all along,Atsuko get up and sit properly on her bed while keeping her eyes shut tightly.Watching Atsuko still lazy to wake up and get ready for school,Mrs Maeda continuously shaking the drowsy Atsuko from her dreamland.

"Mou~Oka-san..isn't today still a holiday?Come on..give me 5 minutes more~i'm so sleepy now..."wince Atsuko as she tried to lie down again....

"Eh?Are you kidding me?Today is your first day in high school!Come on!Wake up or you'll be late."Hearing the word 'high school' coming out from her mother's mouth made her immediately jumped off the bed and rushed into the bathroom.Watching the clumsy reactions from Atsuko made Mrs Maeda giggled for a while ad then she walked away to prepared the breakfast for Atsuko.

15 minutes later,Atsuko ran down the stairs with her school bag in her right hand and a Nikon d7000 in her other hand.Upon her feet reach the cold floor,she ran to her mother and kiss her on the cheek.As she was about to walk away,her mother stop her.

"Atsuko-chan,don't you want to take you breakfast first?"

"No, I don't think so.Since I already late."Atsuko answered her mother's question while putting on her school shoes.Suddenly,she heard a small giggled coming from behind her.Creep out with the sudden noise,she turned around.There stand her mother who was turned from giggle to laugh.Atsuko tilted her head to the right side and kept staring at her mother with curiousity piling up in her mind.

Realizing how quriousity had engulfed in her daughter's mind,she calmed herself down for a bit and started to explain everything.

"Hahaha...Atsuko-chan you're really a clumsy person,huh?Haha..."Letting out a soft sighed,Mrs Maeda continue the conversation again."Try take a look at you watch."without any hesitation,Atsuko glance to her black and red watch ar her right wrst.

To her surprise,the watch showed the time was just 6.50 a.m..Knowing the real fact made Atsuko completely lot her words.She was completely speechless with what just happen.She cannot believe her mother just trick her a while ago.Looking at Atsuko's expressions made Mrs Maeda burst into laughter more.Realizing Atsuko was glaring at her with her cold eyes,she immediately stop laughing and made an apologetic smile.Suddenly she felt a strange aura filling up the living room.Throwing her gaze to Atsuko,Mrs Maeda seat drop as she could see the strange aura coming out from Atsuko's body.Not knowing what to do,Mrs Maeda quickly apologize to Atsuko and try to calm her down. (Even Atsuko's mother scared of her.Kowai!!)

Suddenly,Atsuko start to giggle.Now,it was Mrs Maeda turns to get confused.Looking at her mother's expression,Atsuko can't help but burst into laughter.

"Hahaha...nah,it's okay,oka-san.I should thank you instead for waking me up this early."Atsuko said while giving her best smile to her mther.Watching Atsuko calm expression,Mrs Maeda sigh in relief.With everything settle down,Atsuko off to school after taking her breakfast and her bentou that her mother had prepared for her.

After 15 minutes walkng,she finally arrived at the train station.While waiting for the train, Atsuko scanned through all of the pctures in her camera.After finish scanning  through all the pctures,she decided to take some pctures.While searchng for some nice shot,suddenly she spot a short school girl wth a high pony-tail standing at the center of the crowd.Adjusting the angle of the camera,she take a few shot of the girl.

*Acchan's PoV*

The train sure take some time today.Then,maybe i can kill sme time by taking a few shot of pctures.Suddenly,there was a girl caught my attention.it was that girl.The one that have made my heart skipped a beat for the first time,two years ago.ever snce that day,i've been wndering what were this feelings are.Starting from that day on,i kept taking her pictures secretly whenever i ran onto her.Keeping my eyes on her,i notice she also wore the same school unform as mine.i wonder is she really my senpai,snce i remembered i saw she wore the same school uniform from the last two years.Somehow the urge to apprach and get to know her better is increasing day by day.i wnder why? 
             


TBC

that's all for this week...
i hpe u all luv it...
i think it's kinda boring....
and,i think i'll update frday or saturday next week...very busy...huhuhu
« Last Edit: August 15, 2013, 08:03:56 PM by no-chan »

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Re: Here i came,Here i go....chapter 2..
« Reply #12 on: August 15, 2013, 10:48:18 PM »
Yeah... Atsumina is it?

If it is... I'm going to lie it lot lot more...

Ah... Atsuko already had feeling for the short girl for 2years

but still don't recognise what kind of feeling she had for the sort girl...

Interesting... Can't wait to see how Atsuko going to approach her crush?

Thank you for the update

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« Reply #13 on: August 16, 2013, 05:52:12 AM »
Ah...Sounds like AtsuMina to me...
-Well, a short girl with ponytail...sounds familiar to me~
-Lol, everything sounds familiar to me eh? Me is nonsense...
-Anyway, if IT is what i've predicted...The short girl...
-The short girl...is the girl who wanted to be a boy??
-The answer will be revealed soon i think?? Yeah maybe...
-Many answer haven't been revealed yet so i'll just wait...

>Plz update soon!!~ I can't wait for the next chapter!!~ Nice chapter btw!!~

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Re: Here i came,Here i go....chapter 2..
« Reply #14 on: August 16, 2013, 06:02:05 AM »
Atsumina~ please~ looks good this~

waiting for more :3

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Re: Here i came,Here i go....chapter 2..
« Reply #15 on: January 11, 2014, 08:23:33 AM »
First of all I would like to say sorry for not continue "here I came,here I go" fic and post a new one here....
This fic may will be update next December or maybe next year..since I've got an important examinations this year...so...I hope all of you could understand my situations here...
and, I hope you'll like it....

Enjoy.... ^.^



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Believe.....again...



Chapter 1..





    The hot summer holiday had just started.It was what every students in Japan were waiting for since they do not have to attend school,getting through all the tiring lessons.
But somehow it does not what this one girl,Maeda Atsuko thinked.To her these summer was the worst of all.
It was three days ago the day that took all the holiday’s mood from her.

(Flashback)

Finally,three days to go till the summer holiday.Atsuko really can’t wait anymore since she was really exhausted due to the last hard examinations.
A few minutes later,the first lesson for the day started.For the first time Atsuko felt time past really fast today.
As her teacher went off from the class,she jolted up from her seat,stretching out her stiffed body from the long period of lessons.Packing up all her stuff into her school bag,she
 leisurely walked out from the class after bidding a goodbye to her other classmates who were doing the cleaning for d-day.As she was about to
step out of the school gate,her phone rang.The caller number turned out to be her mothers’.She quickly pushed down the green button,answering the phone.

“Yes,oka-san.It’s me,Atsu.”

“Atsu-chan,are you doing something?”

“Urm,no.Why?”

“Owh,that’s great.Actually there’s something I want to discuss with you.”Atsuko’s mother stopped for a while before continuing the conversation again, “It’s important.
So,I hope you come home earlier if you have anything you want to do first.”

Puzzled with what her mother said to her,she answered her mother blankly, “Urm..okay.I’ll try.”After that a long ‘beep’ sound could be heard through her cell phone.
‘Discuss? Important?What did she meant by that?’,thought Atsuko while slipping her cell phone into a pocket at the right side of her bag.
From her mother’s toned she could figured out that “something” her mother mentioned before was somewhat serious.And it was really disturbing her since her mother rarely talked in that way before.
Since that matter was really disturbing her,Atsuko decided to stop by a café.After finished taking her evening tea and snacks,she rushed home.

“Tadaima!”, Greeted Atsuko before entered her house.Since there was no answer from her mom,she walked aimlessly to the kitchen but found nothing.
“Eh?There’s no one here.Maybe…upstairs?” After drinking a glass of water from the refrigerator,she jogged up the stairs to her mother’s room on the second floor which was in the same level as her room was.When she opened the door of her mother’s room,her mother also wasn’t there. “Hurm,looks like she doesn’t come home yet.
I guess I would take a bath first,then.”After finish drying her hair,she heard her mother’s car engine was killed in front of her house.Since her mother sounds really serious before so she quickly went down to meet her mother.

From the second floor she could clearly heard the front door opened and then closed.Figuring that her mother already entered the house,she quickened
her paced even more. “Ah! Oka-san,okaeri.You’re late,” Atsuko greeted her mother cheerfully while slowly approaching her mother.

“Ah!Tadaima,Atsu-chan,”Atsuko’s mother smile weakly while Atsuko grabbed the grocery bags from her mother one by one. “Sorry I’m late had to buy some grocery.”Continued her
mother again while taking a seat on the comfy fluffy sofa in the living room.

“Yeah,I can see that.”Atsuko walked to where her mother was and took a seat on another sofa acrossed the large sliding door.
“So,what’s so important that you want to discuss with?” Atsuko continued.Her mother remained silent,doesn’t uttered any word.Despite of that she just kept looking at the blank screen of her smart phone.Watching this kind of situations made Atsuko nervous somehow she finally noticed how fast her heart was beating at that time.
The nervousity that she felt kinda gave her an uneasy feeling like there was something bad will happened or maybe what her mother wanted to discuss about was the one made her felt all weird now.

After a few minutes of silenced,Atsuko was startled by her mother sudden heavy sighed.She averted her gazed to her mother waiting for the woman to uttered a word
that might ruined her day.

“We’re going to move to Tokyo next week.”

(End of flashback)


TBC

so that's it...I knew it's not so good....and short...but i'll try to update it....
but,it'll be next December...sorry.. :kneelbow:
then,see you next December....hehehe  :byebye:


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Re: Believe....again.. (Atsumina)
« Reply #16 on: January 12, 2014, 12:19:20 AM »
Erm... Atsuko is going to move to Tokyo...

What kind of adventure Atsuko going to experience?

When Atsuko and Minami is going to get together and how?

Can't wait to see

Thank you for the update

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Re: Believe....again.. (Atsumina)
« Reply #17 on: January 12, 2014, 04:08:18 AM »
Another Atsumina   :luvluv1::nya:

When Minamin and Atsuko will meet? :on drink:

Can't wait for the next update..

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« Reply #18 on: March 31, 2014, 05:34:35 PM »
you mean your next update will be on december 2014? :( so 8 months to go.. i think this story is worth waiting for :)



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Re: Believe....again.. (Atsumina)
« Reply #19 on: April 01, 2014, 12:25:36 AM »
So long  :(

For Atsumina, i'll be wait  :)

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