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Rival In Love (MaYuki,Wmatsui)Chapter 3-4 >>>April 28,2014<<<
« on: August 17, 2013, 05:07:12 PM »
Prolugue.

That feeling...that for all your life you're the first.But suddenly it was over.
That feeling that no matter how hard you tried...you always end being the second.
That feeling that you are friendzoned.
And that feeling that your crush is in love with someone else.
And that 'someone' else is the main reason why you can't win.
That feeling that even the dark tactics will never work because no one will believe you...because for them she's an angel? but the truth she is a devil to you?
That is our story...between me and that Nezumi.

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Re: Rival In Love (MaYuki,Wmatsui)
« Reply #1 on: August 17, 2013, 07:41:32 PM »
oh god.... CONTI CONTII CONTIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!

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Re: Rival In Love (MaYuki,Wmatsui)
« Reply #2 on: August 17, 2013, 07:45:02 PM »
 :pleeease: please next.
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« Reply #3 on: August 18, 2013, 02:43:30 AM »
yaaay, i want the first chapter >u<

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« Reply #4 on: August 18, 2013, 08:34:10 AM »
This looks interesting!!  :w00t:

Please continue    :twothumbs

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Re: Rival In Love (MaYuki,Wmatsui)
« Reply #5 on: August 18, 2013, 12:01:55 PM »
FIRST CHAPTER PLEEEAAAASSSSEEE~!

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Re: Rival In Love (MaYuki,Wmatsui)
« Reply #6 on: August 18, 2013, 12:10:03 PM »
MayukiMayukiMayuki  :panic:
wMatsuiwMatsuiwMatsui  :panic:
my hat is off. saluting.

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Re: Rival In Love (MaYuki,Wmatsui)
« Reply #7 on: August 18, 2013, 01:21:41 PM »
Please Update soon..... :frustrated:

Can't wait any longer....  :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic:

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Re: Rival In Love (MaYuki,Wmatsui)
« Reply #8 on: August 18, 2013, 03:33:51 PM »
Hmmm. . . Interesting! I'm looking forward to it.

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Re: Rival In Love (MaYuki,Wmatsui) chappie one~~
« Reply #9 on: August 18, 2013, 05:11:21 PM »
arigatou!!! i see mayuki and wmatsui shippers there!!! lemme hug all of you!!! -hugs-
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(Kashiwagi Yuki)

"Kashiwagi-san...you're late again..."
Mattaku...what a great way to start a story...-insert sarcasm- .Tch. Ma'am Terror is just overreacting...the limit for tardiness is three times!!! and this is just my second time!!!

Anyways, My name is Kashiwagi Yuki. From a middle-class family,but filled with love.4th year student here in Shiroame Gakuen. Take note Shiroame is a VERY VERY ELITE AND PRESTIGIOUS ACADEMY. So how did I ended up being in here? I’m a scholar. And take note the tests here are for smart only. And if you scored 99 out of 100 of course you’ll be accepted here!!! And that is my very case.
“What are you just going to stare!?” Ma’am Terror shouted.
HEY!!! I’m not deaf!!
“Ma’am it’s because…”
“Excuse me, Mrs. Sato?” mou!!! Why I’m always interrupted!? What a bother!!!
Oh wait. The word ‘bother’ is not enough… it’s that rat!!!!
“Kyaaa!!!! Watanabe-sama!!!”
Tch!!! Stupid arrogant RAT!!! Baka!!!
Well…she’s not stupid…literally…
“Do you need something?...Watanabe-sama?” what the heck!!! Ehem ehem…to remind you ma’am terror you ARE ALREADY MARRIED STOP LOOKING AT THE RAT WITH yes-I’ll-marry-you-watanabe-sama.
Nezumi ignored ma’am T and she looked at me.
“Why is she standing?” nezumi asked ma’am T.
“It’s because she is late…”
I saw a smile form on Nezumi’s face. What is she scheming this time!?
“Hmmm…but as her teacher…you should also know that she’s special…” Nezumi smirked but no one noticed it because everyone was too busy drooling at her. And the way she said the word special made me seem like a person with a problem on her brain!!!
“…she have an entirely different social status…but still she remained as the school’s top two FOR CONSECUTIVE YEARS…”
THE HECK!? DOES THIS RAT WISH FOR A FIGHT!?
But that’s the truth…this rat is the number one!!! Who scored 100 over 100 in every test!!!!
But does she need to SLAP IT IN MY FACE!? THAT I ALWAYS LOSE TO HER!? THIS LITTLE RAT!!!
“…instead of being mad at her…we should be proud of her…” she said smiling but I know that smile…its her  I’m-smiling-but-its-fake-and-you’re-the-only-one-who-knows-it-reaction-queen.
“…so I propose that the late policy will not be applied to Bakari- I mean Yuki-san.”
Arghhhh!!!! She almost called me Bakarin in front of many people!!!! Bakarat!!!!
“…for those who agree please raise your hand.”
Honestly…I think that it’s unfair…but since someone like Nezumi suggested it…they all raised their hands.
“Then it’s decided. The late poolicy will not be applied to special student Kashiwagi.” She announced.
“D-do you still need something Watanabe-sama?” Ma’am T  embarassed.
“Actually…I need someone.” She looked at me.
“Eh…What does our watanabe sama needs on her!?” they whispered…loudly.
YOU BAKA NEZUMI!!! PREPARE YOURSELF!!!!
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We are now walking in the hallway…luckily there is no one around that’s why it’s peaceful. Also I don’t want to melt with their how-dare-she-walk-close-to-our-watanabe-sama glares.
“Why did you do that!? And where are you taking me to!?”
She stopped walking and glared at me, “Can’t you just thank me? Bakarin. And for the second question, I’m going to the student council meeting. I don’t care where you go just don’t go babk to your classroom or else you’ll be eaten by your classmates.” She deadpanned.
“And whose fault is that!? You just brought me here for nothing!? And your asking me to say thank you!? Who asked you to help me anyway!?”
“I know that you have no sense of gratitude.” Her aura darkened, “But why are you so mad? In fact I should be the one fussing. Because of you I’m late for my meeting.”
“And why do you care about me anyway!?” I said annoyed.
She turned her back away. “I’m the student council president. Students here are my responsibility. Honestly…why did you became a student here anyway!?” this time she’s really mad.
“Baka!!! The only reason why I studied here is because-“ I stopped.
The only reason why I studied here is because…I want to beat you…because of you.
“Yuki-chan!!!” somebody called me. That voice…
I blushed a bit… She’s worried about me!!! She’s worried about me!!! She’s worried about me!!! My mind chanted like an idiot.
The owner of the voice hugged me, “Are you okay Yuki-chan?”
I saw Nezumi glance a bit her dark aura suddenly lit up though its just fake. “Ohayo…Matsui Rena-san.”
Rena looked at Nzumi. She blushed, “G-Good Morning…Mayu-san.” Oh fudge…I almost forgot.
Rena…my crush…likes the Rat.
Aside from being the second all the time… I despise nezumi because of this.
Suddenly…someone hugged the rat from her back.
Who the heck is this person!?
“Oh. Jurina…”  nezumi said.
I noticed Rena scowl.
“I’ve been looking for you…”
“Gomen…I just did…some UNIMPORTANT THINGS.”
Jurina grinned like a cat. “O~~kay~~ shall we go now…”
Wait…Matsui Jurina!? The rumored girlfriend of the rat!?
After that they already left.
Rena’s scowl remained the same, “Why is that Pimp with Mayu-san!?”
And the weirdest part is…
Why do my heart asks the same question?
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Re: Rival In Love (MaYuki,Wmatsui)
« Reply #10 on: August 18, 2013, 10:49:41 PM »
Mayu, can you be more nice to Yuki?? :sweatdrop:
This is interesting  :thumbsup

Thanks for the update...  :P
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Re: Rival In Love (MaYuki,Wmatsui)
« Reply #11 on: August 19, 2013, 12:07:13 AM »
omg yeeey, i really like this for togheter >u< and the cold personality of Mayu towards Yuki, :3

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Re: Rival In Love (MaYuki,Wmatsui)
« Reply #12 on: August 19, 2013, 02:27:27 PM »
Great fic

I want to see wmatsui moments 
 
and mayuki too

please update

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Re: Rival In Love (MaYuki,Wmatsui)
« Reply #13 on: August 19, 2013, 02:56:03 PM »
It's somehow remind me the manga 'Special A' :mon sweat:
Mayuki is main here :on woohoo:
Jurina and Rena are appeared :mon squee:
Some JuriMayu and RenaYuki :kekeke:
I think there'll be a lots of funny scenes of Mayuki and WMatsui, also some dramas :wahaha:
Anyway, I'm looking forward to your next update :ding:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
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Re: Rival In Love (MaYuki,Wmatsui)
« Reply #14 on: August 19, 2013, 06:28:29 PM »
Love the story  :wigglypanda:  :wigglypanda:

Cute MaYuki here   :deco:
Yuki's heart is asking the same question?  :? Wonder why   :dunno:

Love Mayuki and Wmatsui but I wanna see RenaMayu just a bit  :hehehe:

can't wait for more  :hip angel: :mon pray2:
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You have to try it...

Before saying it's really impossible!

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« Reply #15 on: August 20, 2013, 01:46:47 PM »
This is going to be a nice story.
I look forward to it.
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Re: Rival In Love (MaYuki,Wmatsui)
« Reply #16 on: August 20, 2013, 03:10:30 PM »
Thank for the update! Everybody likes mayu... Lol!

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Re: Rival In Love (MaYuki,Wmatsui)
« Reply #17 on: August 20, 2013, 06:58:04 PM »
sorry for the delay...
@Eyescrasher :  Hehehe...they like the 'fake' Mayu~~~
@Zita : uwwaaa...-hugs-
@Akblaire48 : -grins- i wonder why~~~ why does yuki care anyway? hehehe~~ look forward to renamayu scenes!!!
@ leEwẬy : I'm an S.A fan hihihihi~~~
@Angeldarke: -hugs- thanks~~
@rochilu: let's wait for the heart-warming scenes too~~
@tamana : trust me...Mayu is already nice to yuki..nobody realizes it yet...even mayu herself~~ look forward to the next chappie!!

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(Kashiwagi Yuki)
“Oi...Rena stop spacing out.” I told her. she still can’t get over about the greeting from Nezumi. I mean her smile is enough to tear her face apart!!!
“Kill joy...” she pouted.
Rena is my childhood friend. Her family was the richest until Nezumi came. Anyways, her family is so good and kind. Rena-chan is cute, rich and smart. She’s the school’s top 4. A lot of people have crushes on her...including me. Since I was young I have a huge crush on Rena-chan. I blush secretly whenever our classmates tease us on being couples since elementary. But it all changed when Nezumi came.
>Flashback<
I’m used to be number one. Be it academics and sports, I top them all. But it all changed when I met Nezumi.
“UWAAAAA” a young girl was crying.
“Ne...why are you crying?” I asked her.
“B-Because...my cat escaped...” the young girl said.
“On what direction did it go?” a voice suddenly said.
mou...someone asked the question first....
“There.” she pointed. And since I’m very confident about my running skills, I chased the cat. Since I was young nobody had beaten me in running...but...
“Nyaa...”
Someone reached the cat before me.
“H-how C-come...”
I looked at the person who caught the cat. She is the one who asked the direction!? That means...she is faster than me!? And why doesn’t she look tired at all!?
“W-Wait are you going to return the cat?” I asked.
“No.”
“But the girl...She’s crying!!!”
“ I don’t care. If you want just make a story or so whatever but the cat is mine.” her face was blank. you can’t see any emotion. After saying that, she left.
  When I came back the girl was still crying.
“Sorry...but I didn’t see the cat.” I lied.
“B-But that is my only friend...”
“From now on...I’ll be your friend. My name is Kashiwagi Yuki. How about you?”
“Rena...Matsui Rena.”
After that  Rena became my bestfriend. We always do things together, that is the reason why we are called couples back then...which I liked secretly.
One day,
“Class...we have transfer student. Come in.” Sir said. then a girl came in.
T-The girl that  have beaten me!!!
“Hello minna...My name is Watanabe Mayu...Yuroshiku.” she smiled.
she acts different. completely different from the first time I saw her. But there is something wrong with her smile...is fake. Am I the only one who noticed that?
Since that time...my name is always under Watanabe Mayu.
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“Oh..you’re the one spacing out now.” Rena said.
“I’m just having a flashback.”
“What? anyways...i’m going to treat you melon pan later...”
my face lightened up and Rena chuckled.
“Really?”
“You really like melon pan too?” she smiled.
Actually...I prefer vanilla...but since Rena likes Melon pan... I like it too...
“It’s a DEAL. You’ll be strucked by lightning if you took it away.” I joked.
”Of course... because of you, I saw Mayu my love...”
Fudge.
“Why did you smacked my head!?” she pouted.
Tch. Even though the pout is cute I won’t fall for it...today.
“Are you jealous Yuki?”
Obviously!!! Baka Rena!!!
“Don’t be...you’re still my Best Friend.”
Ouch. Rena...I don’t want to be just friend!!!
I’m not responding so she tickled me, “Hahahahaha!!!Kyaaa!!!Rena-chan Dame!!!”
“Stop ignoring me!!!”
“Fine...hahaha!!!stop!!! now hahahaha!!!”
“Peace~”
“You’re so unfair!!! everytime you can’t win you always tickle me!!!”
...And deep inside my heart... I like it.
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It’s lunch time!!! time flies!!! Rena will treat me... I’m so happy... first of all I can’t afford the food in here. Second...It’s like a DATE!!! Mou... I look like an idiot now...
“You look like an Idiot there Yuki...”
You don’t have to tell me Rena... I already know it hunny~~ only if you know that it is because if you~~~
“Shut up.” I said.
Rena didn’t answer because she was staring at someone. I followed her gaze. It’s Nezumi again!?
Nezumi is walking towards us. Rena almost drooled.
W-Wait...WALKING TOWARDS US!?
Now she’s in our front...she’s with Jurina again!? Aren’t they tired of seeing each other’s faces!?
“Good afternoon...Rena-san...Yuki-san...” then she gave me the I’m-annoyed-but-you’re-the-only-one-who-knows-it-bakarin smile.
“Aftie...” Jurina grinned like a cat then she glanced at Rena. “Oh...Rena-CHAN.” she smirked.
Rena scowled at her!?
Nezumi’s aura turned darker.
“Yuki...”
DokiDokiDoki...mou too much suspense, “WHAT!?!?!?!?!?!?”
She wrapped her arms around my shoulders.
Why did it became so hot suddenly? global warming?
I gulped.
while in that position, she whispered, “Not because I allowed you be late... I allow you to be flirting with another...” then she smiled faked again. She went back to her original position.
“Your collar at the back is messy.”
Fake!!! and what do you mean flirt!!! in my dreams!!!
then Jurina smiled again. I wonder why?
Jurina wrapped her arms around Nezumi, “See ‘ya Mayu...see ‘ya soon Rena-chan...Very soon.”
after that they left.
NOW WHO’S FLIRTING WITH WHOM!? WHY DON’T YOU JUST KISS EACH OTHER!? TCH. ANNOYING!!!   
 
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Re: Rival In Love (MaYuki,Wmatsui)
« Reply #18 on: August 20, 2013, 11:57:24 PM »
wow I think jurimayu are together just for make renayuki jealousy  :ding:
 
rsrsrs wmatsui and mayuki a can see that coming  :glasses:

please contunue  :onioncheer:

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Re: Rival In Love (MaYuki,Wmatsui)
« Reply #19 on: August 21, 2013, 03:35:27 AM »
i alredy said that i really love this side of Mayu didn't i? is just SO COOL OMG ASDJHADSA  :inlove:

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