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Goddess in the Painting [Chapter 2: The Seducer] -MaYuki-
« on: August 19, 2013, 12:31:57 PM »
Tittle: Goddess in the Painting

Chapter 1: Meeting the Goddess   

~The Alarm Clock is ringing wildly indicating the owner to be woken up by now


“Damn this alarm clock!” He said while picking the bunny alarm clock and shutting down the

thing and he walked straight into his small bathroom to take a shower and clean himself and

ready for his school.



My name is Watanabe Mayu. 18 years old. I’m not that tall but some girls say that I’m quite

cute but nerd at the same time and very cold guy. But I don’t care. It’s just  that I’m not

interested in girls right NOW but I’m not gay that my playboy best friend usually joke to me

because since birth I don’t have a girl in my life.

--

As I walking in the streets, I saw a very unique design of Sketching Notebook that attract

my attention in the old store that seems a little bit funny? Because it’s looks like a store

for selling a crafts and witch stuffs and  not fort selling a sketching notebook but I

immediately erased the thought and walked to creepy store.


As I expected, it’s full of weird stuff and there is an old woman in the counter but not

like in the movies, she looks fine and pretty despite of her age between 40’s and 50’s. I

smiled slightly and she also smiled.


“What are you looking for cute boy?” I flinched at her word cute but I ignore her and

pointed the sketching notebook in the window


“Oh? That book? It’s really nice but it’s not for sale” She said to me.


My face immediately turn into a sad one and I thank her and walking to the door feeling

disappointed. But before I twist the knob, I hear her words that shocked me


“I think that book is meant for you to buy..”


“W-What do you mean, Mam?” I stutter a bit


“It’s just a guess, don’t freak out..” She smiled and giggle a bit


“So, you mean, I can bought it?” I hesitantly asked her and she only nodded that make me

smiled widely but soon replaced by jaw-dropped because of the price


“5,000 yen” She said and walking towards the book


“5,000 yen?” I thought for a moment although my dad give me a plenty of money, it’s just not

enough because I bought an anime figurines last week that I really like that cost so much

and now this thing again. It’s so expensive but I had a feeling to bought this damn

expensive notebook.


--

“Yehey! Lunch time!” A handsome boy immediately run into my desk poking it to gain attention

from me


“What?” I asked Matsui Jurina. My best friend who is very popular in this  Art School. I

don’t know why he enrolled in this school because I can’t see her talent in drawing but I

guess it has to be the girl named Matsui Rena who is my classmate that he have a crush.


“You didn’t hear what I said, ~Mayuyu?” Jurina playfully tease me and I smacked him in the

head.


“Itai! It hurts!” He whined while rubbing his soaring head


“Idiot! You eat by yourself. I’m not that hungry” I said to him but my stomach betray me

that it produced embarrassing sound that Jurina laugh out loud


“Hmp.” I only ignore him and focus again to the notebook


“What’s that?” He asked me


“A notebook” I said coldly


“Yeah, I know that, silly but it’s kind a strange to me that gives me creep” He said to me.

I don’t answer him but it’s good to know that he feel the same way towards the notebook.



--
After the school activities, finally it’s time to leave. Jurina and I partly ways and he

also treat me for lunch after I told him that I bought the expensive sketching notebook.


Anyway, I am very excited to sketch in this unique notebook. I don’t know why I am excited

but I ignore it again and start to run into my apartment


--

7:00 PM


After I washed myself, clean the house that I didn’t do often and eating supper. I sat down

into my drawing table and starts sketching using my expensive pencil and starts to draw but

my mind was blocked that time.

 
“What should I draw?” he said while poking his forehead using his pencil

A few minutes passed,

“Ah! I know what to do!” He said and starts to draw


Mayu finished his master piece at exactly 3 am in the morning. Which is bad right? That time

significant something bad.


--


7:00 AM


I lazily opened my eyes and to my surprised there is also a pair of eyes staring at me

blankly and I freak out immediately and sat up to my bed. That g-girl… it can’t be..


“W-who are you?!” I shout to her


“I’m Kashiwagi Yuki” She said flatly and I just realized that she’s naked and I could see

her every curved and private parts that my pants begin to *****. My nose also begin to bleed

abnormally before I could speak to her, I met a very thick art book into my face and I

blocked out.


End of Chapter 1: Meeting the Goddess



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« Last Edit: August 25, 2013, 01:30:05 PM by Wmatsui22 »
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Re: Goddess in the Painting [Chapter 1: Meeting the Goddess]
« Reply #1 on: August 19, 2013, 12:38:59 PM »
Interesting story..

Can't wait for what happen next..

Update soon !

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Re: Goddess in the Painting [Chapter 1: Meeting the Goddess]
« Reply #2 on: August 19, 2013, 02:22:28 PM »
ehhh?! i want more! :cow: :bow:
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Re: Goddess in the Painting [Chapter 1: Meeting the Goddess]
« Reply #3 on: August 19, 2013, 03:08:53 PM »
You finally wrote another awesome Mayuki fic :onioncheer:
There's also WMatsui here :on woohoo:
5000¥ for a sketch book :on freeza:
Kinda expensive but it's worth it :kekeke:
Yuki appeared by somehow :shock: Maybe thanks to that sketch book :wahaha:
Anyway, interesting fic :on GJ:
Update soon, please :kneelbow:
« Last Edit: August 25, 2013, 03:29:30 PM by leEwẬy »
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Re: Goddess in the Painting [Chapter 1: Meeting the Goddess]
« Reply #4 on: August 19, 2013, 06:05:05 PM »
Ah.. Mayu and Jurina are boys here...

Eh... Yuki just come out of no where...

Interesting... What's going to happen next?

Can't wait

Thank you

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Re: Goddess in the Painting [Chapter 1: Meeting the Goddess]
« Reply #5 on: August 20, 2013, 02:49:24 PM »
Yuki is that painting, isn't she.
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Goddess in the Painting [Chapter 2: The Seducer] -MaYuki-
« Reply #6 on: August 25, 2013, 01:29:22 PM »
Title: Goddess in the Painting

A/N: Thanks for reading, commenting and review. I really appreciate it.  :deco:

Olive29: Wow! Thank you for the comment Olive-san! You’re the first one to comment in my work! I am happy for that.

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Cisda83: Thanks for the review Cisda-san!

Zita: thanks for the comment. Find out your answer to the chapter 2 that I update!


Chapter  2: The Seducer

Jurina POV

After Mayu and I got separate ways, I am thinking of my ~Rena-chan. How can I divert her attention towards me. I sighed to

myself. I envy my best friend for having a talent, if I am only gifted, I think ~Rena-chan will notice me too like she did to

that Airin guy whom she always talked. I sighed again. I have everything guy can I ask for but I can’t win Rena’s heart.

Suddenly, a cold wind blow to my whole body making me shiver. “Well. Well. Is that your only problem? That so easy to solved”

An unknown voice said but I think it’s a girl voice. “W-Who are you?!” I shouted nervously. “Oh, I didn’t expect from a

little cute puppy to be afraid of me..” The voice said in a  teasing way which making me irritated. “I am not afraid of you!”

I angrily shouted which I only hear a cute giggle. “If you say so, then look up” The voice and I do what she said.

*Burk *Burk

“Itai! Wh-What the hell?!” I said while touching my handsome face and the voice giggle. “You’re so funny!” The voice said.

“It’s not funny” I said to her while pouting cutely. “You’re so cute! Anyway, did you look the thing that hit you?”. She said

and I look at the ground to see a “eh? A notebook?” I asked.  “It’s not an ordinary notebook that you used to know”.

“Really?” I said and little bit doubted.

“You want a proof?” The voice said and I only nod

--

Yuki POV

“Tsk. Why does man always a pervert like him?” I asked myself while looking to the cute boy that I hit a thick book a while

ago. After he black out. I find clothes in his neat closet which I am surprised. I know that everyman always a mess in their

closet or cabinet but this guy is different. His apartment is also clean and neat and his collection is so organized. Anyway,

I find a not-so-over-sized blue t-shirt of him which I giggle because he’s so small and petite guy. But I think his “*****”

is so big. Suddenly a familiar voice startled me. “Hey, you pervert girl!” He said to me with annoyed face. “Watch your words

little one” I said in a teasing manner earning me a cute glare from him. “I am not little! And who give you a permission for

taking my clothes?” He said to me. “I don’t need your permission or anyone’s permission and besides you’re sleeping soundly

so I didn’t bother to asked you or do you preferred me being naked than have a clothes to wear?” I seductively said which he

blushed madly making me laughed loudly.

Mayu POV

After I black out, I opened my eyes to see the beautiful creature staring at me blankly but I think her mind is somewhere

else and I also saw she is blushing. Anyway, the only difference in the scenes is that she is now dress but I think she

didn’t wear any underwear behind that sky blue t-shirt of mine.

“Hey, I want to asked you something”. I said her making her laughed stop and looked at me seriously. “What is it?” She said.

“Where did you came from? If it’s in the painting? that is impossible to happened!” I said and I only earn a beautiful smile.
“I think the answer to your question is that it is possible to happen like right now, I am standing at your front talking to

you” She said to me seriously which my eyes only widen and my jaw dropped

--
“A proof?” I asked. “Yes a proof. Get a pen and draw anything that you think” She said. “But I don’t know how to draw!” I

said to her. “Don’t worry, I just need your thoughts and I will do the rest so go!” She angrily said to me and I draw

immediately. “I’m done!” I said but the voice didn’t answer me. “tsk. I’m so stupid for trusting that weird voice. I’m just

hallucinating things, maybe. I’m tired and angry”.

“No, you’re not hallucinating things. It’s real and I’m here to grant your wished, Jurina…” the voice said and I can see her

slim figure, her short black length hair and seductive lips towards me and she kissed me in the lips and I black out but

before that I can hear what’s her name is


“I’m Shimazaki Haruka”

End of Chapter 2: The seducer

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Offline cisda83

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Re: Goddess in the Painting [Chapter 2: The Seducer] -MaYuki-
« Reply #7 on: August 25, 2013, 01:41:37 PM »
What Haruka as a seducer...?

Interesting idea there....

Poor Jurina... he did not have a chance to be with Rena or he just thought that?

I hope it's the latest...

Eh... Mayuki seems to not like each other here...

Great update as always... Like it...

Thank you for the update

Can't wait to read the next chapter

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Re: Goddess in the Painting [Chapter 2: The Seducer] -MaYuki-
« Reply #8 on: August 25, 2013, 01:52:13 PM »
paruru kissed jurina?! :shocked
thanx for the update :cow: :bow:
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Re: Goddess in the Painting [Chapter 2: The Seducer] -MaYuki-
« Reply #9 on: August 25, 2013, 02:16:20 PM »
Paruru and Jurina??

That's rare..

Can't wait for the next chapter...

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Re: Goddess in the Painting [Chapter 2: The Seducer] -MaYuki-
« Reply #10 on: August 25, 2013, 03:37:21 PM »
Thanks for liking my comment :mon sweat:
Yuki and Mayu just like cat and dod, always fighting :wahaha:
Paruru as a seducer :mon scare: New pair has born, JuriParu :mon firecrack:
Wonder what'll happen to that new pair :kekeke:
Yuki had a perverted mind about Mayu :mon evillaff:
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Re: Goddess in the Painting [Chapter 2: The Seducer] -MaYuki-
« Reply #11 on: August 25, 2013, 03:45:57 PM »
Paru????
Wow I didn't expected that. :grin:
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