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In the world where Angels and Demons are in good terms with each, everyday life has seemed peaceful for the humans. The Angels and the Demons help one another; they help each sieve humans according on what they have done in the earth. The humans can also freely choose their destination on the afterlife if they happen to be promoted as an A-Class Human. The world is in perfect harmony and in equilibrium indeed. 

But what if, the afterlife kingdoms, Celestia and Inferno declared war against each other because of a certain sin committed by an S-Class human? A legendary war is about to start that will make the world fall unto chaos.

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Re: In this Chaotic World with You [Chapter 0]
« Reply #1 on: August 25, 2013, 06:13:14 AM »
another supernatural story...

Great... the story seems to be interesting...

can't wait to see the next chapter

Thank you

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Re: In this Chaotic World with You [Chapter 0]
« Reply #2 on: August 25, 2013, 06:22:45 AM »
Seems interesting!

who commited the sin? what was that sin? >w< and what is s-class?

will wait for the first chapter  :ding:

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Re: In this Chaotic World with You [Prologue] Updated
« Reply #3 on: August 25, 2013, 06:56:59 AM »
Prologue


Celestia...
Kingdom of the angels that purifies the soul of the good Samaritans
Inferno...
Kingdom of the devils that punishes the soul of the sinner
Earth...
Home of the humans that will be judge both by the Seraphim and Overlord when their time has come

In this world where the three both exist and are good terms with each other, life is so peaceful and in harmony.

The three Gods of the three kingdoms both signed a contract to never touch the “Crystal of Life” This forbidden crystal allows you to become the ruler of all rulers. On a sealed gate between the opening of Celestia and Inferno, the crystal lies.

No one has gained access to this sealed gate before…
But on a certain day in April...
The skies turned gray...
Both Celestia and Inferno shacked
Fires rain down in earth
This means that the “Crystal of Life” has been stolen and a new ruler shall be born.
Signalizing both afterlife kingdoms and the earth


Meanwhile in Celestia

“The Crystal of Life has been stolen!!!” Archangel Yuu said

“This is not good...” one of the Celestia Angels said

“We must inform Seraphim Kai about this” Archangel Haruppi added

 

Meanwhile in Inferno

“The Crystal of Life… a puny human has obtained it!” Demon Haruna said

“We must inform the Overlord Rino immediately” Demon Murashige replied

“He’ll get cranky about this…” Demon Mario added



Meanwhile in Earth


“the Crystal of life!!! An S-Class human has obtained it!!!!”

“Go to Mt. Akiba and inform the Goddess Atsuko about this!” General Miyawaki said

“Oh Gosh, the Seraphim and the Overlord with get mad because of this”

“Call all the A-Class and S-Class Humans!”

With that, the three kingdoms knew about the chaos that was going to happen
Seraphim Kai released a memorandum to close the gate of Celestia for a while
Overlord Rino instructed to guard the Inferno Opening
The Goddess Atsuko both sent a message to the Seraphim and the Overlord


Meeting of the Angels in Celestia

“So.. How did the crystal was stolen!?” Seraphim Kai asked

“We still don’t know…” One of the angels

“Maybe... One of the S-Class Human has finished the spell to open the forbidden gate…” Archangel Yuu explained

“Maybe the Overlord has something to do with this! That bastard!!! I’ll give him war!!!!” Seraphim Kai said in frustration



Meeting of the Demons in Inferno

“The crystal was stolen!! It’s obviously that the chibi Seraphim was the one who stole it!!!!”

“Overlord-sama… please calm down” Murashige said

“No! I will give that bastard a war!!!!”



Meeting of the Humans in Mt. Akiba

“General Jun, I’m counting on you about this matter” Goddess Atsuko said

“Hai… Atsuko-sama”

“Inform General Watanabe Mayu about this too”

“Of course…”

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Re: In this Chaotic World with You [Prologue] Updated
« Reply #4 on: August 25, 2013, 07:02:42 AM »
Nice starting. Pls update first chapter

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Re: In this Chaotic World with You [Prologue] Updated
« Reply #5 on: August 25, 2013, 07:07:39 AM »
oh yeyy new fic  XD kojiyuun :inlove:
but please dont forget to update your other fics  :heart: :lol: :bow: :thumbsup



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Re: In this Chaotic World with You [Prologue] Updated
« Reply #6 on: August 25, 2013, 09:08:39 AM »
Oh my, i'm too blind to not to notice this fic...Sorry~
-Anyway, the story seems so interesting...
-Moreover it's a supernatural genre!!~ My second fav~
-Well let see...Is this KaiAcchan?? Or no pairings...
-Coz sometimes, supernatural stories can go well without it..
-But hope there is!!~ And what?? War?? I like the sound of it...

>Plz update soon!!~ I can't wait for the next one!!~ Nice update!!~

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Re: In This Chaotic World With You (AtsuMina + Others) [Prologue] Updated
« Reply #7 on: August 25, 2013, 09:22:34 AM »
wooo! interesting info, noticing most of the characters are males o.o

i wonder how the story will be.

XD and nothing revealed about the culprit XD great!!  :thumbsup




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Re: In This Chaotic World With You (AtsuMina + Others) [Prologue] Updated
« Reply #8 on: August 25, 2013, 09:28:48 AM »
yea new fic XD
intresting :3

pls update soon :lol:

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Re: In This Chaotic World With You (AtsuMina + Others) [Chapter 1] Updated
« Reply #9 on: August 25, 2013, 09:42:14 AM »
thank you for the support guys~ :D


Chapter 1 [Wrath of the Rulers]

With the Crystal of Life getting stolen, the Seraph and the Overload declared war against each other’s kingdom, although they haven’t told it flat straight to each other. The earth’s goddess Maeda Atsuko seemed calm about this situation thought. She told General Jun to tell General Mayu about this situation so that they can do some operation. With that said, the young general went to the Watanabe Villa only to find Miyuki waiting for him.

“General Matsui” Miyuki saluted

“Corporal Watanabe” Jun bowed

“I see you are here to meet up with Oniisama”

“I got a word from the Goddess about the situation”

“Is that so…”

“General Matsui…” A familiar voice called

“General Watanabe… I’m here to handle a word from the Goddess”

“Let us talk about this matter inside”

The two Generals including Miyuki went inside to talk about things. Jun has explained to the twins about the stolen “Crystal of Life”. The moment they heard about that, the twin’s eyes widened and their jaws dropped. They knew that a new holy war is about to start again.

“This is bad…” Mayu murmured

“What shall we do about this matter General Jun?” Miyuki asked

“For now… let us gather some information regarding that…” Jun answered

“I will summon Shiro of the Inferno to talk this matter about him…” Miyuki added

“I try to go to the afterlife barrier one of these days…” Mayu said

“General Watanabe, you do know that it’s dangerous no?”

“I’m aware of that but still…”

“I don’t think the Goddess wants you to do it…”

“I guess I should wait for the Goddess memorandum about going in the afterlife barrier”

“So… when shall I summon Shiro of the Inferno?”

“Once I get the permission of the Goddess”

“I will be waiting for further announcement”


Meanwhile in the Celestia


Seraph Kai immediately cast a spell on the main gate of Celestia before he hands the memorandum of war between the Celestia and the Inferno. Worried that it might affect the humans in the earth, Yuu cast a spell on himself to transport in the earth without the Seraph knowing.

“Unbegrenzte Licht…” Kai casted a spell

The moment the spell was cast, drops of light formed a barrier in the main gate of Celestia.

“The Seraph is pretty creepy right now…” Yuu murmured

“I wonder what will happen to us now…” Paru asked

“I don’t know…”

“….what shall we do?” Haruppi was worried

“Shall we call upon the Goddess of the Earth?” Yuu suggested

“Bad idea….” Miichan said

“Ungesehen mich” Yuu casted a spell

“That spell!” Kumi gasped

“I’m much stronger now guys!” Yuu smirked

“If you happen to go to earth… please take me with you…” Kumi said

“Hehe~ how about we go now?” Yuu asked

“Idiots! What if the Seraph sees you sneaking out!?” Miichan was worried

“Do not worry~ that’s the forte of the spell I casted just now!”

“Ungesehen mich… a spell that allows you to sneak in without being seen or heard” Haruppi said

“If I remember correctly… that spell is one of the Allowed Dark Spells for us Celestian to use” Paru said

“Exactly!”

“hey~ Yuu! Let’s go now!!!”
“So impatient! Let’s go!” Yuu then opened the Celestia-Earth Portal

“Be careful you nitwits...” Haruppi murmured


Meanwhile in the Inferno


With that crystal of life being stolen, Overlord Rino decided to have a war with the Celestia and the earth. Since he doesn’t like being commanded and losing to someone, he immediately cast a spell all over the Inferno and himself to avoid the attack spells from the Celestians. While the war is just about to start, he casted one of his most powerful defense spell that is widely known to be the most frightening of them all.

“Immensus defensione opus”

With the spell being cast, the flames in Inferno has widened and got fiercer. Overlord Rino can feel the flames surrounding him and protecting both him and the Inferno. On the other hand, the Haruna was feeling restless because of the Overload casting a powerful spell before the war could start. With the Overload being stubborn, she knew that he is gonna cast more powerful defense spells in the upcoming minutes. With that, she consulted Mario about this.

“Isn’t the Overlord aggressive today?”

“Nah! He’s the same as always!” Mario replied

“Don’t you think we should do something?”

“Like what?”

“Get a help from the humans…”

“Sneaky move…” Mario smirked

“I’m always sneaky…” Haruna smirked too

“Then... Let’s cast a spell on ourselves too…” Mario suggested

“Moveat cimex insinuendi!” Haruna casted a spell

“Potens nothus incantatores!” Mario casted a spell too

With the two of them casting a spell to each other, they opened up the gates of Inferno so that they can go to the human world. Haruna and Mario don’t want violence so they are gonna seek help from the humans and hope to end this madness and wrath before it could start.
Even if the two are demons, they want peace all for all of the creatures in the universe.
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Re: In This Chaotic World With You (AtsuMina + Others) [Chapter 2] Updated
« Reply #10 on: August 25, 2013, 12:49:43 PM »
Chapter 2 [Memorandum of the War]


With both afterlife Kingdoms creating a barrier the main gates, two of their supreme members went to the earth to find and ask help to the humans. Yuu and Kumi went as represented by the Celestia while Haruna and Mario went for Inferno. Each one of them has casted Defense Spells on them in order not to be busted by the Seraph and the Overlord. Each one of them also doesn’t want war so they are trying to stop the madness before it could get worst.

Meanwhile on Mt. Akiba, Atsuko is organizing and facing the problems calmly. Even though the thief of the “Crystal of Life” is said to be an S-Class Human, she is still calm. The Goddess then begins to think about the problem.

“If the Crystal of Life was stolen… then why it is that nobody has ruled the three kingdoms yet…” she murmured to herself

The Goddess went to her private library and searched about the details of the “Crystal of Life”
A book captured her attention. A book that was written by the perished Goddess Itano Tomomi.

“This book… it was written by Itano Tomomi… the Goddess who tried to steal the Crystal of Life twenty years ago...”

The legendary Goddess, Itano Tomomi. The first Goddess in history that made all of the humans in earth kills each other just for her sake. Legend it says that she ascend into Goddess hood in just a matter of 2 months after being promoted into an S-Class Human.

“Let see what this book is about…”

She then proceeds to read the book and turn it into a certain page.

-It was my first year as an A-Class Human when I first met him. He’s already the top of the S-Class Humans whilst being just 15 years old. I was told that his name is Kasai Tomohisa, but he was known in the Akiba Human Promotion Academy as Chiyuu. He was a loner, particularly a cold person. He doesn’t have friends but he is so popular in the Academy. I want to talk to him and befriend him. With that said, I gathered all of my courage and approached. Happy to say that it was successful and he opened up things to me. Chiyuu said that he wants to be a Seraph and eventually ascend in being a God of Celestia. He was model student so I think he can do it.-


“Rather than a book… this is a diary...” she murmured

“Telikos Seraph Kasai Tomohisa… the current right hand of the God of Celestia, Theos Akimoto Yasushi”

After that, the Goddess turns it into a deeper page

-I paved my way as the Goddess of the earth; Chiyuu also paved his way in being a Seraph of the Celestia. Although I said to myself that I will not think about that jerk that rejected my feelings. It’s been 3 years since then but why the heck I’m still bitter towards him? Is it because I’m jealous of General Masuda Yuka? Or I just want to surpass him and be the ruler of all rulers. Anyhow, if that is the case, I must go to Overlord Ohya Masana of the Inferno in order to learn some forbidden spells so that I can acquire the “Crystal of Life”-


“Ahh... So that’s what Itano-sama has done in order for her to open up the Forbidden Gate”

Flipping it to the next page, Atsuko noticed a torn page with a spell encrypted to it causing the Goddess to stop her actions and toss the book.

“This spell!” Atsuko said in frustration

“It’s the Petáxte to Vivlío spell!”

Petáxte to Vivlío spell, the spell that was develop by Telikos Seraph Kasai Tomohisa when he was still an S-Class Human in order for his rivals not to touch his homework and belongings. The spell is now included on the “10 Forbidden Spells for the Three Kingdoms” because of its dangerous effects on trying to undo the spell. It was said that only the Telikos Seraph can cast this spell for he didn’t submit the procedure on how to cast the spell to his superiors.

“The ex-goddess has been hiding something even after her death. Most probably about the information on the Crystal of Life”

With that, the Goddess researched even more on her private library.


Meanwhile in the Celestia


With Seraphim casting all of the Defense Spells needed, he immediately took out the Papier für den Krieg he needed to write the Memorandum of the War.

-I, wird Seraphim Kai Krieg gegen die Inferno erklären aus dem Grund, daß im Fall des verlorenen Kristall des Lebens beteiligt

Wenn Sie zugeben, nur deine Sünden, ich werde in die Sicherung aus dieser Scheiße zu betrachten und sagen, sorry an euch alle.-


“This might do…” the Seraphim smirked

The Seraphim then casted a spell in order to deliver the memorandum

“öffnen Pforten der Hölle”

A portal opened up directing in to the mailbox of the Inferno. He then let the Memorandum fell in the portal to be delivered. Kai then proceed to train his magic skill for the upcoming war between Celestia and the Inferno.


Meanwhile in Inferno


Overlord Rino is pissed off about the lost Crystal and decided to make the Memorandum of War for the Celestian. He took a paper and started to write using the flames.

“ahaha! Let the games begin!”

- Ego, commotis Sashihara Rino, pulcherrimus omnium est bellum contra Caelestibus furari ad hoc quod cristallum vitae tandem fregit nostri priores indutias milia annos.

Si confiteamur peccata vestra. PHAEDRA terribilis, et inde regredi bello-


“Haha! Open up portals of Celestia!!!”

The agrresive Overloard then sent out the Memorandum. A few minutes later after he did that, a document was delivered in his table.

“What the hell is this?” Sashihara was confused

The Overlord proceeds to read the documents that were sent by the Seraphim. He was shocked when opened the document for it was full with light beams.

- I, seraphim Kai will declare war against the Inferno for the reason of being involved in the case of the lost crystal of life.

If you just admit your sins, I will consider in backing out of this shit and say sorry to all of you.-


“Haha! He wants war! I’ll give him war!”

The overlord proceeds to get in shape with both his mind and body


Meanwhile in Celestia



Seraph has received the memorandum from the Overlord and reads it. Much to his concern, the document is filled with flames but not very hot when touched. The Seraphim chuckled a little

- I, Overlord Sashihara Rino, the most handsome of them all, is declaring a war against the Celestia for being stealing the crystal of life that eventually broke the truce our predecessors made thousands of years ago.

If you confess your sins, the awesome overlord will back out from this war-


“hahaha!!! Handsome!? Him!? Lies!!” Kai proceeds to laugh his heart out

“I’ll give that bastard a war...” he murmured

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Re: In This Chaotic World With You (AtsuMina + Others) [Chapter 3] Updated
« Reply #11 on: August 25, 2013, 04:23:07 PM »
Chapter 3 [Strongest S-Class Human]


The Seraph and the Overload received each other Memorandum of War but they haven’t declared their war against each other’s kingdom to the Earth, Celestia and Inferno. Meanwhile in the earth, particularly in the Human Promotion Academy in Akiba, the Class A humans are having their training. They need to get in-shape as requested by the Goddess Atsuko. Although this is the situation right now, they still haven’t a clue about the missing crystal of life, except for Miyuki. Only the S-Class Humans in the Academy has the slightest hint about the situation right now.

“Ah~ I’m tired!” Rena complained

“Isn’t the instructor a little rough on us today?” Churi said

“Yeah!” Reina agreed

“Come on girls! Let’s do this!” Meru was pumped up

“Heh~ but I’m so tired~” Sakiko complained

“No time for complaining girls!” Miyuki said

“Just three rounds to go!” Meru smiled

“Yea!” Yuki agreed

“yosh~ let’s do some training!” Yuria added

“unn~” Churi nodded in response

With that said, the A-Class girls began their training. They are currently training on how to use some basic thunder spells that was develop by Theos Akimoto Fernandez when he was still an A-Class Human. Although it’s for beginners, the girls are having a hard time.

“vasikí̱ epíthesi̱ vrontí̱” Rena casted the spell but did not work

“vasikí̱ epíthesi̱ vrontí̱” Sakiko also did the same but nothing happened

“vasikí̱ epíthesi̱ vrontí̱” Reina was the same as the two, no good

“vasikí̱ epíthesi̱ vrontí̱” Churi tried but still no good

Seeing the top A-Class human Churi failed in casting the spell, the girls began to give up and just rest in the bench. Suddenly, they heard the other A-Class girls gossiping something. It seems they are talking about General Furukawa Airi who was about to pave his way in the training grounds. Few moments later, the strongest General really did come.

“General Furukawa” Miyuki saluted which prompted the other to do the same

“Good Morning to all of you...” Airi said in a cool tone

The General then proceeds to have some warm-up in the training grounds. He began to perform and cast some advance spells.

“Vrontí̱ óplo” thunder started to appear

“The advance thunder attack that Seraph Kai developed!” Churi gasped on what she has witnessed

“Kataigída ti̱s nýchtas” a killer wind has came

“Theos Fernandez killing blow!” Yuria was shock

“chtýpi̱ma dolofónos” a large explosion occurred

“the legendary spell!!!” all of the girls gasped

“he’s so dreamy~” Rena blushed

“so he wasn’t called to tháv̱mas for nothing” Churi said

“he is the pride of the earth” Meru said

“I wonder why he isn’t the leader of the S-Class troupe.” Reina was puzzled

“I was wondering the same too…” Rena added

“Rumors said that he was busy in practicing his skills” Yuki said

“no wonder his skills are beyond human type” Sakiko chuckled

The General then stopped his training and rested for a while. A lot of girls have been lurking around him,
Either taking his picture or trying to sneak a conversation with him. Eventually, Airi smiled to the fan girls which made them blush and squeal. Rena and Churi was one of those fan girls.

“hah~ I wish I could execute a simple spell like General Furukawa~” Rena said

“yea~” Churi agreed

It seems Airi has heard this and decided to approach them. Airi has a degree as an instructor so he has the authority to teach A-Class Humans.

“It seems you’re a bit troubled young lady” Airin went near to Rena and smiled

“Yea... I have a hard time executing a spell” Rena blushed

“Then... If you don’t mind… let me show you how it is done”

With that said, Airi went at the back of Rena, took a hold of her hand and guided her. He told Rena to just relax and execute the spell. After a few minutes of trial and error, she finally executed the spell right. Airi then taught the others how it is done the moment Rena executed it right. A lot of fan girls were jealous of them at that time. Eventually after a few moments, all of the girls in Rena’s circle executed the spell right. Airi then left the training ground to report to Goddess Atsuko about the problem they are currently facing.

“General Furukawa” Atsuko greeted her

“It seems you are still researching Atsuko-sama”

“I need to do it”

“Is that so…”

“By the way, how was it?”

“They are now training in preparation”

“Good… they need to do it” Acchan smiled

“I’m happy for them…”

“General Furukawa, isn’t it about time you accept my proposal and be an Afentikoú of the S-Class Humans?”

“I’m afraid I have to refuse this time again Atsuko-sama, I’m still pre-occupied in making both my mind and body in a good condition”

“And that is the reason why you are the strongest S-Class Human right now…”

“Of course not, I believe you have forgotten about General Ota” Airi smiled

“You are still powerful than her, General Furukawa. I believe you have now the power of being a Seraph if you wanted” Atsuko smiled back

“But for now, I have no intention on being neither a Seraph nor an Overlord”

“When the right time comes, I want you to surpass Seraph Kai” Atsuko said with a straight face

“haha~ there you go again Atsuko-sama~ being bitter with him again~”

“it’s his fault anyway..” Atsuko pouted

“jaa~ I’ll try to surpass him~” Airi smirked

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Re: In This Chaotic World With You (AtsuMina + Others) [Chapter 3] Updated
« Reply #12 on: August 25, 2013, 04:30:09 PM »
Oh, so they're in progress huh?? The A-Classes~
-Anyway, Churi is strong!!~ I like it!!~ Lol...?
-Yeay, Lol...Whatever it is, heeh~~
-What's with Acchan being bitter with Kai??
-Hrm...Suspicious...I wanna know more about it~
-Urm...The culprit, i want to know who is it so badly~ Well...

>Plz update soon!!~ I can't wait for the next one!!~ Nice chapter by the way~

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Re: In This Chaotic World With You (AtsuMina + Others) [Chapter 3] Updated
« Reply #13 on: August 25, 2013, 04:35:05 PM »
*Fan girling*
Aaaa.... Airin-senpai is sooo dreamy...
Well fudge cakes, I wish I was rena! *delusional :lol: *
You're a quick one my friend...

And you made me Squeal... You are awesome XD

A Tsundere acchan appears, fan girls and the heart throb of the place...

Bravo... :3

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Re: In This Chaotic World With You (AtsuMina + Others) [Chapter 3] Updated
« Reply #14 on: August 25, 2013, 05:07:19 PM »
aaa update :3
thanks for update

lol airi so strong lol

hee ~ ? tsun tsun acchan  :inlove:
i want to know acchan and kai relationship  :huhuh

and i want to know who is the culprit

pls update soon  :D

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Re: In This Chaotic World With You (AtsuMina + Others) [Chapter 3] Updated
« Reply #15 on: August 25, 2013, 05:29:58 PM »
The first noticed of this fic is the languages that you use.... Greek, Latin and German....

And all of that are in Google Translate right???  :lol: :lol: :lol:

Waiting for your next update....  :) :) :)
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Re: In This Chaotic World With You (AtsuMina + Others) [Chapter 4] Updated
« Reply #16 on: August 26, 2013, 01:47:06 AM »
Chapter 4 [Representatives in the Earth: Celestian Chapter]


The Archangels Yuu and Kumi went to the earth for the reason of protecting the other humans not involve in the war. Demons Haruna and Mario went to the earth to find some help in order to maintain the peace in the three kingdoms and to avoid the war of the two afterlife kingdoms. Overall, they have different reasons on why they are in earth but they have one goal, to protect mankind and to bring peace. The pairs have arrived in the earth a few minutes after they went inside the portal, although that is the case; they’ve arrived in different location. The Archangels duo arrived at the golden gate of Mt. Akiba, while the Demons arrived in at the main gate of Churi’s mansion.

“Yuu, this is the home of the goddess right?” Kumi said

“Yea… it seems the portal has delivered us here by fate…”

“Not by chance?”

“Like I said, we need the help of the Goddess that badly…”

“Then let us go now”

With that said, the Archangels proceed to enter the Mt. Akiba. As they about to open their gate, they sense a magical spell coming from it. They then saw a scripture embed on the front of the main gate.

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Γεννήθηκε από τη Γη, αλλά με κανένα από τη δύναμή της.
διαμορφώθηκε από φλόγα, αλλά με κανένα από την εξουσία της
Διαμορφώνεται από τον άνεμο, και με όλα σαφήνειας της
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“This scripture…” Yuu murmured

“Born of Earth, but with none of its strength. Molded by flame, but with none of its power. Shaped by wind, and with all of its clarity” Kumi said

“this is a riddle…”

“I wonder what is the answer…” Kumi was curious

“Earth… flame… wind…”

“you have an idea or something?”

“potí̱ri!” Yuu shouted

“ehh?” Kumi was confused

The moment Yuu shouted the word, the main gate opened up itself and they began to see the palace of the Goddess that is made of gold.

“the answer to the riddle was Glass...” Yuu said

“is that so…”

“well anyway, let us go now.”

With that, stepped in and head towards the palace. When they have arrived in the palace, the Goddess was waiting for them.

“Archangel Yuu and Kumi” Atsuko smiled

“it’s been a while Acchan~ your boobs have gotten bigger” Yuu said

“Y-Yuu! Don’t be so casual with the Goddess!”

“it’s okay with me~ we’ve known each other since childhood” Atsuko chuckled

“I’m really sorry for this bastard” Kumi bowed down

“anyway, let me guess… Kai has gotten aggressive again right?”

“as expected from his childhood sweetheart… you really do know what he is up too” Yuu smirked

“wha!? You mean the Goddess is the one the Seraph is referring!? That Acchan!?” Kumi was shocked

“hahaha yea~”

“well it’s not like I still care about him or something…” Atsuko blushed

“tsun tsun~”

“b-baka! Yuu no baka!” Atsuko was getting all flustered

“hahaha~ no need to be shy Acchan~” Yuu teased Atsuko

“Well at any rate… let’s go back to our discussion…” Atsuko said

“Oh yea I forgot”

They then discussed on what happened recently in Celestia. Although she didn’t admit it, Atsuko was really worried for her childhood crush. Yuu saw through Atsuko and chuckled a little, Kumi saw it as well but decided to keep quiet.

“That Kai…” Atsuko face palmed herself


“I’m worried if the war is really going to start…”

“Once a holy war commence that is started by the Rulers… the Theos of the three kingdoms has nothing to do with it even if they are the Gods in their kingdom” Yuu explained

“Legend has said that the only way to stop a holy war is to sacrifice the lives of the pure Celestian and pure Demon… life of a Pure-Blood in other words” Acchan added

“Pure-Blood?” Kumi was curious

“It means they are a Celestian or a Demon that does not descended from the Human race…”  Acchan said

“You could say that their mother and their father is a Celestian…” Yuu smiled

“But the problem is… who the hell is the pure-blood in Celestia and Inferno?”

“Miichan is the pure-blood in Celestia while Mario is the pure-blood of Inferno” Yuu replied

“Should the war commence, they need to sacfrice their lives when they have completed the spell…”

“Are they aware of this?” Kumi asked

“I’m pretty sure that Mario is aware of this long time ago... But as for Miichan… I really don’t know” Acchan stated

“Is there any way to find out if the Seraph has sent the memorandum of the War to the Overlord?” Yuu asked

“Yes, there is a way”

Acchan then stood up from her seat and executed a spell.

“epitrépste mou na xéro̱!”

The moment the Goddess executed the spell; light beams formed like a mirror and foretold on what is happening on the Celestia. The moment they saw what is going on, their jaws dropped and their eyes widened. They saw Kai laughing his heart out when he received the Memorandum of the war given by the Overlord.

“Prepare for the worst case scenario” Acchan claimed

“….” Yuu was nervous that he didn’t utter a single word

“Once the Seraph is all pumped up, he will not stop…” Kumi said while trembling

“He is still the Kai I know…” Acchan smiled
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Re: In This Chaotic World With You (AtsuMina + Others) [Chapter 5] Updated
« Reply #17 on: August 26, 2013, 10:14:06 AM »
Chapter 5 [Representative in the Earth: Demon Chapter]


Meanwhile with Haruna and Mario…
As the two of them arrived in front of the mansion of Corporal Takayanagi Akane, they begin to think all sorts of things. They don’t know who is the one lived there and what they shall expect when they go inside the mansion. They then saw a gold plate besides the main gate. At first they were hesitant to read it for a spell might be encrypted with it when read. But eventually, Mario then began to read the plate beside the main gate.

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Такаянаги семья
Потомок из лучших ветеринаров и пилотов в земле
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“Takayanagi Family, Descendant of the finest veterinarians and pilot in earth”

“so let us go now!” Haruna insisted

“Wait...”

“what?” Haruna was confused

“There is a spell encrypted on the handle of the main gate…”

“What shall we do then...?”

“eximito incantatores!”

The moment Mario executed a spell, the handle of the main gate was covered with flames. When Mario touched it, the flames were gone and the spell encrypted vanished.

“As expected from the Pure Blood” Haruna smiled

“That spell is the honor and pride of the Shinoda Family” Mario smiled too

“No wonder the overload cannot touch you”

“Haha, enough chit chat and let us roll”


With that, the two of them entered the Takayanagi Villa without even knowing why the hell are they in that place. Even though that’s the case, the head of the Takayanagi Family, Takayanagi Mikhail, welcomed them. Mario then recognized Mikhail.

“You...” Mario said

“It’s been a while Mario-sama…”

“You know him?” Haruna was confused

“He used to summon my Dad every 12 midnight just to learn dark arts… but of course not the forbidden one…”

“That’s right, and thanks to that, I’m now a full pledge mage of the Goddess and my daughter now is an A-Class Human”

“Mage of the Goddess?” Haruna was puzzled

“The bodyguards of the Goddess that was handpicked by the current Theos of the Earth” Mario explained

“Anyway, you are here because you wanted help right Mario-sama?”

“I’m pleased to know that you knew my intention already” Mario smirked

“I saw your actions while you were in the main gate…”

“Hahaha, as I thought, that gate is encrypted with a spell…” Mario said

“For safety purpose only…”

“Heh~” Haruna stood there in awe

“Anyway, first thing first”

“Okay, so it seems the Overlord will declare war against Celestia right? Because the crystal of life was stolen” Mario said

“But I was thinking if the crystal was stolen then why does the new ruler or all rulers didn’t appear yet?” Haruna asked

“I was thinking the same too” Mikhail said

“Don’t you think this is kinda weird?”

“Hmm, I have a reference book here written by the Telikos Seraph Kasai”

“Let me see it”

With that said, Mikhail searched the book in his private library. After a few moments, he finally found it and they flip it on a random page.

-It’s hard being a Telikos than I thought. I have to protect the Crystal of Life and the Theos twenty-four seven. I never got the chance to see Tomomi again after I get promoted as a Telikos Seraph. I miss her already. She is the one that stood by me and make me happy when times get rough. I was promoted earlier than her so I’m super happy right now that she is the Earth Goddess. She deserves that promotion more than anyone else. If I could find some time, I will say my sorry to her and make up with her. In that way, we might be friends again. I really love her. Hope I can be a man and fight for her also.-


“So he was friends with the Earth’s traitor…” Haruna murmured

“Couldn’t imagine it…” Mikhail added

“Let us flip it to another…”

-the Theos of Earth said that Tomomi stole the “Crystal of Life” with me on her mind. I don’t whether I should be happy or not. If I hadn’t mental tortured her with my actions, she would not be crazy like this. Thinking about it, maybe I should manipulate the judges to lower the sentence of her. From being perished to banishment. I still want to see her live.-

“So this is the reason why the trial was delayed….” Mikhail murmured

“Next…” Haruna said

-Tomomi was gone already. They’ve perished her. As much as possible I want to execute my rare killing blow and be with her. But, I have a feeling that a holy war will commence 20 years from now. I hope I’m wrong. If the holy war commence again, the world will fall unto chaos and peace will never be with them until someone sacrifices their lives. Lives of pure bloods from Celestia and Inferno, I still don’t know if the soul of the chosen one will be still included. But that’s not all, they at least have to complete the spell of the universe in order to sacfrice and bring peace to the earth.

For many years, greed has taken over from the new sets of S-Class Human in the earth. Maybe I should punish them before a war could commence because of the greed. But first, I need to execute a certain spell in Tomomi’s diary to avoid someone in knowing the information about the Crystal of Life-


“this!” Haruna said

“confession huh?” Mario added

“that Telikos…” Mikhail face palmed himself

Mario then stood from his seat and executed a spell in order to find out if the Overlord has sent a memorandum of war with Celestia. With the actions being foretold, his jaw drop and his eyes widened. He saw the Overlord preparing for a war. Haruna and Mikhail decided to see on what is Mario up too and is shocked on what they have saw as well.

“This means war…” Haruna trembled

“once the war commenced… I need to get Miichan sacrifice her life with me and complete the spell...” Mario said

“no! I don’t want that to happen!”

“but this is the faith of the Pure-Bloods, Haruna” Mario said with a straight face

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Re: In This Chaotic World With You (AtsuMina + Others) [Chapter 5] Updated
« Reply #18 on: August 26, 2013, 12:49:25 PM »
List of Magical Spells

Defense Spells

Unbegrenzte Licht

A spell that allows the user to create a barrier with drops of light. Developed by Theos Akimoto Yasushi of Celestia in the midst of his training as an A-Class Human.


Immensus defensione opus

A spell that will make the flames on Inferno fiercer and wider. Those flames will eventually serve as a barrier in both the Inferno and in the User.


Enhancer Spells

Potens nothus incantatores

A spell that will increase the attack of the user 2x fold



Sneaking Spells

Ungesehen mich

A spell that allows the user to sneak easily without being seen nor heard. Developed by Theos Shiraishi Mai of Inferno.

Moveat cimex insinuendi

A spell that will surround the user with flames that will make the user unnoticeable by others and increase their defense


Portal Opener Spells


öffnen Pforten der Hölle

Exclusively used by Seraphim Kai


Thunder Spells


vasikí̱ epíthesi̱ vrontí̱

a newbie spell that allows the user to cast light thunderbolts


Vrontí̱ óplo

an advance thunder spell developed by Seraph Kai


TO BE UPDATED SOON~



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Re: In This Chaotic World With You (AtsuMina + Others) [Chapter 5] Updated
« Reply #19 on: August 26, 2013, 02:30:32 PM »
having hard time to remember those spells lol.  :rofl:



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