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Offline FoxKing

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Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 2!!
« Reply #20 on: September 03, 2013, 01:58:18 AM »
Nice update, wonder if takamina has bow under hoodie...

Hope for some kojiyuu moments... :mon santa4:

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Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 2!!
« Reply #21 on: September 03, 2013, 04:06:21 AM »
ohh... I understand the situation now...

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Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 2!!
« Reply #22 on: September 03, 2013, 05:55:05 AM »
Ah... Minami's father might be guilty

And Minami just doesn't want to be mixed into this yakuza stuff...

Poor Atsuko to lose her mother like that...

But then losing life come in the territory with yakuza's life.

Ah... Minami is like a house mother..

Taking care do many kids at the same time...

What's going to happen to Atsumina and the rest if the crews?

Can't wait up see the next chapter

Thank you for the update

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Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 2!!
« Reply #23 on: September 03, 2013, 12:51:07 PM »
thanks for update
takamina kakkoi  :wub:

poor acchan  :(
acchan pls befriend with takamina  :cry:

and just like rukaecchi said, i cannot wait for their lovely momment  :cathappy:


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Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 2!!
« Reply #24 on: September 04, 2013, 09:12:55 AM »
Awesome! Just awesome!! Haha.  :lol:

Atsuko needs to become friends with minami, NOW!!!!  :P

Takamina needs a center huh? That should be no issue!

I sense a Wmatsui coming?? Hehe.

Saeyaka as well, eh?

Looking forward to the next update!!  :D

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Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 2!!
« Reply #25 on: September 04, 2013, 10:13:04 AM »
Ow, interesting fic, I like it.

Waiting for your next update.  :thumbsup
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Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 2!!
« Reply #26 on: September 04, 2013, 12:52:36 PM »
 :wriggly: FAUST O  :wriggly:
chapter 3 where are you??XD
omg i cant wait to read ur next update specially ur other fic :cool2:

i always forget to comment  :whistle:
pls forgive me(lazy much)  :sweat:
 update soon :on gay:

ps.kuka u too im still waiting to ur update~
update soon *wink* XD

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Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 2!!
« Reply #27 on: September 04, 2013, 08:57:11 PM »
Atsuko and Minami such a perfect pair. :lol:
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Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 3 now
« Reply #28 on: September 04, 2013, 11:24:41 PM »
@FoXking: Did you watch "Arrow" recently?^^ Haha it would be good Minami as a vigilanty^^ WAIT!! Could be a great fic!! :shocked :shocked
@Ruka-san: You don't like Saeyaka? Oh, I'm sad... Seems like everybody only like Saeyuki. Please don't stop because of this, it's a little pairing in the fic :bow: :nervous
@Chichay12: It's coming :lol: For the other one, it's coming too, but I am a little busy those days... :nervous

For everyone, thank you very much for your comments, for this update please be patient because I have to begin the story or it will only be like 4 chapters. But please don't stop reading because there are few pairing and not just Atsumina. It's just to do a story a little more... longer. :nervous :bow: :bow:





Chapter 3 : Fireworks


It's been a week since Atsuko had been to the combini that night. Her face was ill and she had slept at Tomochin's for few weeks to run away from her dad. Yesterday, everybody had gone to the movies and then karaoke, it was a really nice evening. Aachan loved karaoke, she knew so much songs and her were always asking her to sing because she had a beautiful voice.
This morning she was early to go to school, the weather was nice and she was in a good mood.
She took the direction of the school, walking next to the river, it was pleasant at this hour.
She was thinking about the movie they had been seeing when she heard low voices down by the river.
« Well, isn't it the daughter of the yakuza killer ? Huh ? What are you doing here ? Killing somebody ? Huh ? HAHAHA »
Atsuko hidded behind a tree and lokked at the scene. There were two bigs men around Takahashi, with knives.
« Piss off, I'm late » said Minami.
« Shut up bitch ! »
The first one tried to cut her off but she avoided the knife and kicked him in the guts.
« BITCH ! Go ! Kill her !! »
The second one hesitated and finally tried to punch her in the face before falling on the ground, miserably.
Minami didn't look at them and keep walking like nothing happened.
This girl knows how to fight... But she seems to be far away from all this...


Monday, 7am, schoolgym


Sayaka had done warming up already, and she was now training for basketball. She was used to come here every morning, the coach gave her the keys so she could practice more during her free time.
« Sorry, is there someone ? »
She stopped playing and looked for the person who just talked.
It was the tall boyish girl, Miyazawa Sae.
« Oh, sorry, I heard the ball and I was curious... »
« Y-Yes, I'm training... »
« Oh, okay, hello ! I'm Miyazawa Sae »
« Hello, I'm... »
« Akimoto Sayaka, I know^^ » she smiled.
« Really ? How ? »
« You're popular, I guess^^ I heard you were pretty good at basketball »
« Not so much, but I'm training hard. And by the way, you're not supposed to be here... »
« Oh, right... But I could just sit here and encourage you^^ Or beat the crap out of you 'coz I'm not so bad^^ »
Sayaka was sceptic, but she was challenging her, and she liked that.
« Come and lose »
« Honto ? Great ! You're dead ! » she smiled brightly.

They were smiling at each other again, and Sae realized how beautiful Sayaka was for the first time.
« Go ! »

They played for 30 minutes, running and laughing. She was good at it, and her enthusiasm was so nice to see.
When they finally stopped, it was time to go in class.
« Thank you for this^^ » smiled Sae.
« You're welcome, you made me run, it's good ! »
« … It's nice meeting you, Sayaka ! » she said before leaving with a little laugh.


7.40am, corridors


« How are you today, hime ? » asked Rino, walking with Rie to go to class.
« I didn't sleep well, my parents argued all night... »
« Really ? What for ? »
« My mom is unhappy and my dad doesn't care »  sighed Rie.
« Hm... Well, they better end this quickly because those little wrinkles here » she said caressing Rie's eyes « are hidding your beautiful eyes » she smiled sweetly.
Rie shivered ans stopped walking.
« I'm sure it's gonna be okay soon, come on ! » said Rino before coming in the classroom.
Rino had kissed her once, a year ago. It was at Rie's house, they were having a pyjama party and they were playing truth or dare.
It was very sweet, and Rie never forget it. But it was a game, nothing more.

Rino knew that Rie was really close to her family, it mattered a lot to her to have a good harmony in the house, it was painful to see her sad like this...


Kojima was talking to Tomochin on her way in to the classroom when she felt like falling.
« OMG, are you okay ? Does it hurt ? Wow, you are really beautiful...
Kojima opened her eyes, a little dizzy. In front of her was a short girl with a big smile, who was actually staring at... her boobs !
« What... happened ? » she asked.
« Ano, I was running late, and I didn't see you, so... I'm sorry, are you happy ? »
« Yeah... »
Tomochin helped her to lift her up.
« Take care, Kojima-san ! It was nice meeting you ! » she smiled brightly before entering the room.
« … What a noisy one » sighed Tomochin.


7.45am, classroom



« Hello everybody, today we'll talk about your future, what do you want to do and why, to be sure you have a goal. So, I'm gonna ask all of you, and later we'll see which school fits you the most. »
The entire class mumbled, those kind of sharing wasn't really welcome.
« So, Kojima-san ? »
« Hm... I wanna be a model »
« Good, Shizuka-san ? »
« I would like to be a rapper »
« I see... Itano-san ? »
« An actress »
« Shinoda-san ? »
« I want to create clothes »
« Alright, Maeda-san ? »
« ...Be a singer. »
Takamina stopped looking at the sky. She said she wanted to be a singer ? Interesting... She was the kind of girls who could be the center. How was her singing like ? Maybe she could ask her, if we forget that Atsuko wanted to crash her everytime she saw her.
« Takahashi-san ? »
Yuko pinched the midget who was in lalaland.
« Hm, what ? »
« What do you want to do ? »
« … probably open a combini store... »
No way she'd talk about her dream in class, it was too personal.
« Ah, souka... well, everyone has various choices, it's good... »
Minami wasn't listening anymore. Shinoda-san wanted to create clothes, and Maeda-san a singer. It was exactly what she was looking for... but how to convince them ?


12am, schoolyard


« Miichan, I need you » frowned Minami.. « Shinoda-san would be able to help you with the outfits, create them before the deadline »
« Shinoda-san ?! But... »
« I know. But  ask her please, we need her. Do something nice, a joke, a cake, I don't know... »
« A cake ?! » asked Miichan, shocked, while Yuko was bursting into laughs.
« I'm not giving up just because we're not popular in class. And I heard she was funny. I have to find Maeda-san... » she said leaving her friends.

The girl hanged out in the school with her black hoodie on to find Maeda-san.
She saw her, sat with all her friends to eat their lunch. When she stopped in front of them, they all seemed really surprised.
« Hello, I'm really sorry to interrupt yourlunch. Maeda-san, can I talk to you please ? »
Atsuko looked at her without saying a word, and finally got up to follow her.
« Have a nice meal » said Minami politely.
They went in a quiet place, next to the trees.
« What do you want ? »
« I need you. To sing. »
« What ?! »
« We are doing a dance contest in two months and I need a center for the song, I would like you to be this center. »
« You're asking me to help you for a contest ?! »
« Yes, this is important »
« Oh sorry » smirked the tall one « we never talk, your dad killed my mother and you're asking for my help ?!... Find someone else. »
Minami looked at the girl leaving, it was risky anyway. She had to find a way...


« Cap' is great but asking me this... I don't know her, she seems so distant... » sighed Miichan.
« Maybe you'll like her, I've played with Miyazawa-san this morning. She's nice ! » smiled Sayaka.
« What ? Really ? Wow you're so brave ! Those girls are freaking me out, like they want to kill us all » frowned Miichan.
« Baka^^ »
« Wait ! Yes ! You're gonna help me ! » she smirked.
« Eh ? Why me ? »
« Because ! You talk t Miyazawa-san about Shinoda-san »
« Let me think... No^^ »
« Why ?! »
« Because Takamina asked you, not me. And it will be good for your social interaction^^ »
Miichan pouted, she was usually good at talking but this girl was a little scary.

Minami came back to sit with her friends.
« How did it go ? » asked Kasai, worried.
« Bad, she refused »
« ... »
« Guys, I might be a little absent in the incoming days, I have to do something... You can still come at the flat, and we practice as always »
« What are you gonna do ? » frowned Sayaka.
« I need her, so I have to fix this... Later ! »
« Why do I feel worried... ? » sighed Rino.


3.15pm, corridors


« So, you're feeling okay with the crew ? » asked Rie while they were walking.
« Yes, I really enjoy it, you are very funny^^ » smiled Nito.
« If Yuko is too noisy you feed her and you can rest for few minutes^^ » laughed Rino.
They were hanging out together until the next class. The two friends really appreciated Moeno-san. Rie was dressed with her scholl uniform but her skirt was shorter today, and her shirt a little opened. She was really hot, thought Rino.
At this moment, two girls crossed their path and stared at them.
« Slut... » said one of them looking at Rie.
Rino frozed and suddenly took the girl by the neck and smashed her against the wall.
« WHAT THE FUCK DID YOU JUST SAY ??! » she screamed.
The girl was so scared that she couldn't speak.
« Rino... Let her go » sighed Rie.
« What did you say ?! Don't you DARE speak to her like that again ! You think she's a slut ? She's more beautiful and smart that you could ever dream to be ! So go fuck yourself because no one will ever want to ! »
She let her go, the girl ran, terrified. Rino came back to her friends with a smile.
« Maybe she was blind after all... Who could say that to you, hime ? And sorry for that Nito-chan, but kids are rude nowadays, right ? »
Rie didn't said anything, she was shocked by the scene, but to be honest she was so charmed that she was blushing really hard again. Nito-chan nodded, Rino was really impressive. Rie came next to Rino and shyly took her hand.


4pm, at the @Caffee

« Tonight Aachan comes to my house ! » smiled Mariko.
« No, it was supposed to be me today » protested Haruna.
« You're too dirty, Nyaro^^ »
« Not true » pouted Kojima.
« You're too cute, come too, we'll sleep together, well, not really... » she smirked.
« Mari-chan ! You're not funny ! »
« Really ? I thought I was^^ »
« So Aachan, are you gonna tell us what Minami asked you ? » said Sae before drinking her ice tea.
« … Nothing important. »
« Come on... »
« She wanted my help... »
« Really ? Wow she's got guts ! I don't know why everyone is hating her... She looks nice » shrugged Mariko.
« Oh yeah ? She's always behind, is really bad at school, love to fight for nothing... Her and her dad are the same... »
It was a sensible subject, and no one wanted to fight with Aachan in moments like this.


7pm, Rie's house


« You're not even looking at me anymore ! Like I'm invisible ! »
« I'm tired when I come back home ! I work all day, can you understand that ?! »

Rie sighed, it was like that since she came back from school. She really loved her parents and listen to their argument was really hurting her... She felt like crying, alone like that.

Bip... Bip... Bip...

From : Rino
To : Rie
Content :
How is it at home ?
Still fighting ?

From: Rie
To: Rino
Content :
Yes...


Rino was worrying, it was making her really happy, hopefully she has a really great friend.

From : Rino
To : Rie
Content :
Sometimes parents
need to. Give them
some time.

From : Rie
To : Rino
Content :
Maybe... I have the
impression that
everything is ugly.
My parents were in
love but they're fighting
now...


 
She waited 10 minutes for an aswer but nothing... Weird, it was important for her to talk about it and Rino seemed not to care anymore... Disappointing...
She sighed and stretched on her bed, tears rolling on her cheeks.

Bip... Bip... Bip...

From : Rino
To : Rie
Content :
Not everything is ugly,
hime. Meet me outside:)


Rie raised her eyebrows, outside... ? She ran to her window and look at the street. Rino was here, in front of her house, waving her hand and smiling.

Rie hurried up, checked her make up, her hair and took her phone before running in the stairs. Her parents were too busy to notice that their daughter were leaving at this hour.

« How are you ? » asked Rino, kissing her on the cheek.
« G-Good... » she blushed, looking at her feet.
« Did you cry ? Well, it's okay, tears suit you well^^ So, come on, follow me ! »
« What ? Where are we going ?! It's late ! »
« I have to show you something. I want to see you smile again »
Rie had no idea where she was talking her but she didn't care, she was with her and she felt good, Rie was so smily all the time.
They took the bus, Rino was inventing a joke to make Rie laugh.
After 15 minutes, they finally arrived in a little park that Rie had never seen before.
« Where are we ? »
« It's a place I love, it's beautiful and calm when you need to think. But tonight it's special, come ! »

She tool her near the center, they walked next to a little lake, birds and fishes were living there. It was a little late but there were so many people that it seemed unusual.
« Why is it so crowed ? »
« Wait a little more^^ Come on ! » Rino smiled, taking her hand to go to a small shop.
« Hello, we would like a strawberry ice cream, please ! »
The woman created a unique ice cream in front of the two girls.
« People say that she create the ice cream depending who you are or what she sees in you. So it's never the same ! »
Rie was really impressed, and looked at the ice cream curiously. It was an « heart ice cream » with only one spoon on the top.
« I think one spoon will be enough for you too right ?^^ »
Rie blushed really hard and Rino seemed satisfied.
« Hai ! One spoon is a great ! Thank you very much ! »

Rino gave the ice cream to Rie and took her to sit on the grass, above the lake. Rie ate some of the cold desert wich was delicious, and smiled when Rino ate it too.
« Oishi !! Nee Rie-chan, did you thought I was scary after I yelled at this girl today ? »
« N-No, but I wasn't expecting such a reaction from you »
« Well, I don't like to hear such things. Why did she think that she's better than you... ? Plus, you were really hot... » she said with a husky voice before wiping off ice cream on Rie's shin. She was really lose to her mouth, and really tempted to kiss them.

Bam... Bam... Bam...

Rie blenched and looked at the sky, there were fireworks above the lake !
« Wow... » she smiled.
« Do you like it ? »
« Yes ! This is beautiful ! »
They watched it, eating the ice cream. Rie was hypnotized by the little lights, she loved fireworks. She forgot about her parents and loneliness
Rino was entirely satisfied, Rie was smiling again, and she could see the lights reflecting into the pretty girl's eyes. She was perfect...

They stood like this for an hour, the park was really crowded but the atmosphere was pleasant.
Suddenly the sky went really dark and the rain began to fall, a really heavy rain. Everybody ran away, surprised because it was really sudden.
The girls screamed and quickly got up.
« Come on ! We're gonna be drenched ! We shall go to my house, it's like 5 minutes from here ! »
« Okay !»
They ran as fast as they could, already wet, laughing hard.
When they arrived at the house, Rino quickly opened the door and they came inside.
« Wow, that was violent ! » laughed Rino
« Yeah... But we're gonna awake your parents... »
« They're away for a week, come on, you have to take an hot shower. I don't want you to be sick » she said driving her to the bathroom.
« Rino... thank you for this evening. It was wonderful » she smiled.
« You're welcome^^ I'm gonna make some tea ! »

Rie felt better under the hot water, she had really laugh tonight, Rino wa so funny ! She was always in a good mood like everything was always so easy with her... Obviously it was someone you wanted by your side, to be always okay.

She turned off the water, dried her body and looked around to find something she could wear. Nothing except white a large tee-shirt. Better than being naked...
She put in on and came out of the bathroom. Rino had already make the tea and was looking for cakes to go with when rie came in.
The funny girl dropped her jaw, Rie was... So sexy...
« Ano... It was the only clothe in the bathroom... Sorry... »
« N-No... It's okay. It's my brother's but... you wear it better... »
She couldn't stop staring at her.
« This is mine ? » asked Rie taking the mug.
« Ah, y-yes. Careful, it's hot... »
Rie drank a little and smiled shyly.
« Rino-chan, thank you for today... »
« You said it already » said Rino softly, coming near her.
« Anoo... »
Rie was now against the kitchen wall, really close to the girl.
« How can you be so beautiful... And those lips » she touched them with the tip of her finger « must be great to kiss... »
« Rino... » shivered Rie.

Rino slowly leaned down to her mouth and kissed them. It was so sweet and so hot at the same time... She had dreamed about this many times.
« I knew it... So hot... »
Rie had her eyes still closed, and she raised her lips, asking for more. Her body was shaking with impatience. Rino took her lips again, more empressed than before, she kissed her roughly, pressing her body against hers. Rie moaned while kissing, feeling Rino's tongue slipping in.
« Aaah... Rino... »
« Rie... I want you for so long... » she said, her hands already touching Rie's flat belly, who was shaking under her contract.

Dring... Dring... Dring...

The two girls stopped, it was Rie's phone.
« Sorry » smiled the girl, as she picked up.
« Moshi Moshi ? »
« Rie, where are you ? You should be sleeping ! »
« I'm at Rino's , and I couldn't sleep with you two fighting all the time... See you tomorrow »


She hanged up and sighed, she had almost forgot about this, but it was like coming back in the real word.
« Come on, you should sleep now » smiled Rino taking Rie to her bed.

They lay down, Rino came closer against Rie's back and embraced her tightly.
« Goodnight, hime. I'm here to protect you »


2am, Minami's house, on the roof

She had to do it, after all it wasn't a bad idea. They all needed to know.
Maybe it will work. Atsuko was suffering, and it had to end.
In few hours, she will begin to look for it...


I'm so confused about this RinoRie scene, please tell me if you think it's was silly, I'm so lost right now about it. I am scared that it's ridiculous.... :bleed eyes: :bleed eyes:

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Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 3 now
« Reply #29 on: September 04, 2013, 11:53:38 PM »
Acchan.. Befriend takamina.. Please!!! It's killing me that you hate minami... :(

The RinoRie scene is awesome. It's not even close to ridiculous!!!  :thumbsup

I have a bad feeling about what Minami is about to do. She's on a roof and she says it has to end? -gulp- :O

Hope she's ok!! Looking forward to the next update! :D


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Re: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 3 now
« Reply #30 on: September 05, 2013, 12:15:35 AM »
dafuk is thinking Minami? o.o and the scene RinoRie was good C: and cute <3 so dont worry about it C:

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Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 3 now
« Reply #31 on: September 05, 2013, 02:57:07 AM »
What would Minami do to help Atsuko put everything behind?

Would she make her father confess while Atsuko hissing somewhere?

Would she investigate the case?

The situation between rei and sashi was fine... Quite nice..

Rei is getting more and more in love with sashi...

And sashi is getting more and more protective

But when would they confess?

What would miichan do about the task minami asked her to do?

Can't wait to see

Thank you for the update

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Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 3 now
« Reply #32 on: September 05, 2013, 05:17:13 AM »
OMG! Come on Atsuko! be gentle with minami!

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Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 3 now
« Reply #33 on: September 05, 2013, 09:12:23 AM »
 :mon chilly: minami what are you doing...

kojiyuu  :mon inluv:

ya a few was on when I was laying down :mon sweat:

make the fic  :mon whine:

Update soon  :mon santa4:
« Last Edit: September 05, 2013, 09:18:41 AM by FoxKing »

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Re: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 3 now
« Reply #34 on: September 05, 2013, 04:47:33 PM »
Takamina would fight whit Atsuko to make the things easy...

Rie and Rino are such a cute couple

i want to know what Miichan woul do to be close to Mariko-sama ^^

Thanks

and update SOON!!!

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Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 3 now
« Reply #35 on: September 06, 2013, 03:53:07 AM »
I have to apologize first. Despite trying hard, in the end I had trouble searching the silliness in those RinoRie scenes :lol:, thanks to the smooth switching between their sweet and sexy moments.

The only thing that made me frown a bit was this..
They were hanging out together until the next class. The two friends really appreciated Moeno-san. Rie was dressed with her scholl uniform but her skirt was shorter today, and her shirt a little opened. She was really hot, thought Rino.
Yes, I love to imagine Rie-chan in this 'corrupted' uniform. :twisted: But the way this was connected to the previous sentence is like a sudden jump, isn't it?

Anyway, I totally wouldn't mind many many more RinoRie moments. I'm specifically waiting for them, together with SaeYaka. :D
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Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 3 now
« Reply #36 on: September 07, 2013, 02:42:24 PM »
Atsuko dun hate takamina u must love her :catglare: :deco:

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Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 4
« Reply #37 on: September 10, 2013, 11:06:27 PM »
Hey, thank you very much for all your comments :bow: :bow:
I update here the chapter 4, it's not finished yet, but I want to update this part since it's done! Please keep reading :D :D



Chapter 4 :


5pm, Kuristore

Rena was hesitating... the white dress was really cute and light, perfect match with her current shoes, but the blue jacket was really pretty, and she needed a jacket...
So hard to make a choice, this store was her favorite place, she could buy all of her clothes here.
« The white dress. I'm sure you're gorgeous in it. »
Rena turned around to see who was speaking to her. What she saw was a smily face.
« Hey, I'm Matsui Jurina. Sorry to interrupt but I really think you should choose the dress. »
Rena looked at her closely, the girl was wearing a black shorty, a white tank and a leather jacket (she has the kataomoi finally haircut). She had already seen this girl since they were in the same class, but she had never talk to her.
« W-Why do you think so ? »
« Hm... » the short hair girl looked at Rena's legs.
« You have amazing legs, so show them ! »
« Well... I guess I should listen to you. »
« Good ! » smiled the girl.
She waited for the girl to buy the dress.
« Now, would you accept to have a drink with me ? Shopping make me thirsty^^ »
« … Okay » she blushed.

Rena was surprised by this girl coming talk to her like that, so spontaneously. But it was refreshing, she knew that Jurina had a bad reputation like everybody in the Takahashi team, but here, she looked charming... Kakkoi. She had this boyish side that made her really popular at school.
Jurina took her to a little tea shop, where she behaved like a gentleman to make her sit and to take their order.
« So, Rena-chan, tell me about you. »
Rena-chan ? She was supposed to be shocked by such familiarity but the way she said it was so cute...
« About me ? What do you want to know ? »
« Everything^^ Starting by... Do you have a boyfriend ? »
« Eeh ? » she blushed hard. « N-No... Why ? »
« Great ! What's your favourite food ? »
« Melon-pan and spicy food » she smiled.
Jurina smiled softly and drank some orange juice.
« Rena-chan is such a cute girl, weird no boys are trying to go out with you »
« … Sometimes they do »
« Really ? What's wrong then ? »
« Hm... They're too stupid... They're behaving like kids, you've got to treat your girlfriend right... » she pouted.
« Yes, like her to drink something in a nice place » laughed Jurina showing the place they were in. « Anyway, I'm happy you bought this dress ! What if you'd wear it tomorrow?^^ »
« What ? No... »
« Come on ! I want to see you in it ! Say yes ! » she pouted like a kid, doing her puppy face to Rena.
This girl seemed so childish but so mature at the same time.
« I will think about it »
« Yay^^ »

They talked about an hour about the school and mostly Rena's life and family.
« Wow, time went fast ! I have to go, my homeworks aren't done yet, and Takamina will be angry if so... »
« What ? »
« See you later, Rena-chan ! » she blew her a kiss, leaving.
Rena was now alone at the table, still surprised of what just happened. Matsui Jurina... she was something. A girl with a strange and strong aura, like everybody who was in the Takahashi team. Something cool, strong and impressive.
But she couldn't talk to Atsuko about that.


6.30pm, Minami's father house


She was all alone in the house. Like everyday for 20 years, it was the hour where her father Kito was doing a footing in the nearest park.
She didn't like to come back here because she was missint it so hard... It was hard to live on her own whereas she was still at school, and to be honest, she was missing her father too.
But this case had been so hard to support.
Kito was a police officer since 1961 and this story had completly changed him. When Minami was young he was always smiling and laughing, making random jokes that Minami loved so much.
And her mother died in a car accident when she was 8. His dad took really good care of her, trying not to appear sad in front of her only child. But then, the Maeda Kaoru case... After she had been killed, he didn't defend himself, he wasn't talking anymore, not laughing with her daughter.
Everytime Minami had asked him what really happened that night, he stood silent and runaway.
Yakuza were violent, and the short girl had learn to fight on her own because she was the daughter of the murderer. After 4 months, she couldn't stand it anymore and she left.
She wasn't believeing that her dad was the killer, and she needed to know what happened, show the proof to Atsuko and leave all this behind once for all.

She went in her dad's office and looked for the file. Like she expected, it was hidden under a big amount of boring stuff.

« MAEDA KAORU FILE 0505915 »



It was heavy, her dad must had been collecting a lot of evidences and facts about it. She put it on her bag to look at it later, and prepared to leave when her eyes met a little picture wich must have fall. It was Kito posing with Kaoru, in front of a temple. They were bboth smiling... could it be possible... ? Takamina had never thought that they could have been lovers.
She couldn't stay any longer, her dad had almost finished his footing.
After a last look at the house, she left, putting her hoodie on.

Her dad came back 5 minutes later, and he could swear I had smell her daughter perfume. Once in a while, he could smell this odor in the house. Weird...


10pm, Minami's flat


« Tadaima »
« Ah, Takamina!I saved you some soup, it's in the fridge » said Sayaka.
« Thank you. How are you all ? It's good to see you »
« GOOD ! » yelled Yuko, jumping on her.

Rino was sitting next to Rie, who was watching TV.
« Hey^^ »
« Hey » smiled Rie
« How are you today ? I didn't see you much... »
« Yeah... sorry » she said, still watching the screen.
« ... »
Rino wanted to talk about their night, but Rie was weird.
« Rie ? »
« Hm ? »
« I'm gonna do something and you have to say yes or no, okay ? »
« What ? Hm... Okay, okay »

Rino took Rie's shin so the girl was facing her now, and kissed her deeply.
« ... »
« So ? »
« … Y-Yes »
« Aaah... So, you're my girl, right ? »
« O-Okay » blushed Rie.
« GIRLS !!! SKINSHIP !! EVERYONE, THEY'RE KISSING !!! »
« Shut up » said Rino, running after Rino all over the flat.
Minami was eating, sat on a chair. She looked at the scene, very calm. She already knew Rie loved Rino so it wasn't surprising her at all.
« If you look for me, I will be on the roof » she said.


She sat on her old leather chair, the weather was nice up there. She loved this place, near to the sky, she could watch to the stars and think quietly about everything.
She had the file with her, and she wanted to read it, try to understand what really happened.


« MAEDA KAORU, 37 YEARS OLD.
FOUND IN THE KITSHU STREET, A BULLET IN THE CHEST.
SHE DIED RIGHT AWAY, AT 3.45AM, 08/07/17.
FEW WITNESS HEARD THE SHOTGUN, BUT NO ONE SAW THE SHOOTER.
THE LAST PERSON SEEN WITH MAEDA-SAN WAS POLICE OFFICER TAKAHASHI KITO, WHO DIDN'T EXPLAIN WHY HE WAS WITH HER. »


Shit... She was really hoping to find an answer about her father and the reason why.

« MAEDA-SAN WAS KNOWN FROM THE POLICE TO BE A YAKUZA FROM THE SHIOTORI GANG. VERY ACTIVE IN TOWN. NO DOUBT IT'T A RECKONING, PROBABLY THE KODA GANG. THIS IS NOT OUR JURIDICTION. »


Was it all..., The official file was so empty that it was a shame. Obviously the police wasn't interested in finding the killer at all.
Her father had done some researches and there were a lots of pictures in the file : some tattoos, buildings and persons quickly taken. And a map, of the town, with a red cross in it. Her father had written something next to it :
« MIURU SATO,HE KNOWS WHO BUT DOESN'T WANT TO TALK. WHITE BUILDING, 3RD FLOOR. »

A clue to follow, she had to go for it, or else she would be stuck like her father.

« Sayaka » said Minami when she came from the roof « I need to go out for a while. You can all stay here for the night if you want. »
She took the map in her pocket and put her hoodie on, once again.
« Yuko don't mess around too much, and Rino ? »
« Yes ? »
« Take good care of Rie-chan »
« Takamina, don't go anything risky » frowned Sayaka.
« Yes, of course » she smiled

She left the flat with a serious face, she didn't know what she was going to find or do over there.
But she didn't care.



0.00am, white building


 It was a messy neighborhood, dirty and very dark. Minami wasn't afraid but she couldn't wait to come back home. She came in quickly and claimed the stairs until the 3rd floor.
She heard a distant noise of voices talking. She followed it and stopped in front of a black door, he was probably here.
She took a deep breath and opened it.
The room was all dark, lightened only by the TV showing a news program.
« MIURU SATO !! » screamed Minami with a loud voice.
A tall gyu suddenly showed up from nowhere and kicked her in the stomack.
« Urgh ! »
The captain fell on the ground, it was hurting her so badly !
« WHO ARE YOU ? »
The guy seemed really pissed off, and he was very strong. She understood better why her dad dropped the case.
« HUH ? WHAT DO YOU WANT ? »
The girl got back on her fat and stepped back.
« Who killed Maeda Kaoru ? »
« What ? Wait, you're a girl ?! What the fuck... Get out !! »
He tried to punch her again but she avoided it and quickly rispoted, in his face. She heard a noise, she probably just broke his nose.
« Aaaah ! Bitch !! »
« Who killed Maeda-san ? »
He ran toward her and kicked her on her jaw and on the mouth. Her lip instantly bleed. She hit him with her elbow, right on the stomack so he couldn't fight back. She took benefits og his and punched him three times, tomack again, right leg and jaw. The man fell, bleeding badly.
« … Who are you... ? »
« Tell me who killed Maeda-san. »
« I don't know... »
« TELL ME !! » she screamed, kicking his body.
« Aah... FUCK ! I don't know ! Just go at the 1st warehouse on the Keru dock, east from here. »
« ... »

Minami left the flat without a word. She could feel her own blood flowing on her shin and neck. Tonight was too late to go check this place, and she really wanted to sleep now.


1am, Minami's flat

When she came in, everyone was sleeping all over, except from Miichan, who was hardly staying awake.
« You should take some rest » smiled Minami.
« Eh ? Takamina ? What happened ? » she said looking at her face.
« I'm okay. I will take a shower, and sleep. I see you tomorrow, okay ? »
« … Okay... » she sighed the girl.

The shower relaxed her, she washed the blood and warmed her muscles under the hot water.
Tomorrow night she will go find this warehouse.



Tuesday, 8am, Science class

The tall girl was already sat at her desk when she saw her coming. Even if she had her hoodie on, Atsuko could see all the bruises and the bruises and the dried blood on her lips. What happened..., The midget reached her table, limping.
atMinami was a really good fighter, Atsuko knew that. So what kind of fight was that ? The punches must have been heavy and powerful. What was she doing... ? Was she in a gang or something ? She eyed contact with the small girl for few seconds, Takamina had this serious look on her face, but Atsuko could actually felt something really kind in her.


« I was right » whispered someone to Rena's ear.
« W-What ? »
Jurina appeared, always smiling.
« This is perfect » she said showing the dress. « And you put it^^ »
« Hm... » she smirked. « Do you want to eat with me today ? I cooked you something ! »
« Really ?! Ano... I usually eat with my friends... »
« Souka... Okay ! »
« No wait, Jurina ! »
The short hair girl looked at her.
« I'll eat with you. »
« Good ! By the way, it's so good to hear you say my name... » she smirked.
Rena smiled shyly, she had say it naturally. She sat at her table, still smiling.
« Rena, is she bothering you ? » asked Mayu, frowing.
« What ? No... »
« If she does, tell Atsuko, okay ? »
« No, Mayu, she doesn't. She is really nice, actually »

« You need to do it today »
« I know »
« Or else Takamina will be mad, and it's not the right time for this »
« I know »
« So you have to go »
« I know, Yuko ! Give me a break, okay ? Why don't you crash against Kojima-san once again... » pouted Miichan.
« Good idea^^ But this time my face would fall right into her boobs... Uwaa ! » drolled the squirell.


The lesson was boring, everybody was daydreaming drawing or texting. When they were finally allowed to take a 5 minutes break, Minami went to the restroom to refresh herself. She was still stunned because of the fight, it was a difficult morning. Plus, she was lacking some sleep.
She was looking at her reflect in the mirror when Atsuko came in, and close the door. They were alone.
« What happened ? » asked the tall girl, frowning.
« What ? » the midget wasn't expecting a discussion.
« Did you fight ? Against who ? »
« … Why do you care ? »
« Because he must be tough to make you look like that, and you. And you didn't want to fight me, so why with him ? »
« … I need some answers. Then, you will be able to help me »
« You fight for a stupid dance contest ?! »
« It's not stupid, Atsuko.  I want to do it, it's my goal, it's what I'm doing all this. So tonight I will find this man, and then I will win this contest »
« … Pff... By the way, I don't know why but my friends are interest by yours. Tell her to be careful, or I will fight them... »
« Hm, you should stop fighting all the time and wear more shirt like this, your cleavage is really nice to see... » smirked Minami before leaving the tall girl alone.

They got back to the sciences lesson, but Atsuko wasn't listening. This girl was making her crazy, so irritating but so... interesting at the same time. And what was that about her shirt... ? She was pissed off and flattered, and it was pissing her off even more... !!



12.00am, in the park next to school


« You eat here with you friends, right ? »
« Yes, it's quieter than school »
Jurina and Rena were walking in the park.
« Ah, here it's perfect » said Jurina, leaving a layer of her bag and placed it on the grass. « Please, have a sit^^ »
Rena smiled and sat on the layer, Jurina had prepared all this for her, it was so cute ! Jurina sat in front of her and took the food off her bag.
« Jaaa !! » she said, opening the bento. « Gekkikara food just for Rena-chan!^^ I've made it, hehe »
« Wow, sugoi ! »
« Come on, eat it ! »
« O-Okayn itadakimasu ! »
Rena took a bit of food, and opened wide eyes.
« Oishi !! »
« Really ?! »
« Really ! Sugoi, this is really good ! But, what are you eating ? »
« My mom made me some spaghetti with meat^^ I'm relieved that you like it. I was so stressed ! My mom said that girls like when a person cook well^^ »
They ate in silent for few minutes.
« Jurina ? »
« Hm ? »
« Why me ? »
« Eeh ? »
« … You're really popular with girls, everyone loves you. So... Why did you invite me ? »
« … Because you're differente »
« Differente ? How ? »
« You're smart, beautiful and mysterious. Plus, you didn't even notice me before. »
« How do you know ? »
« Did you ? Except from the fact that we are from the Takahashi team so we're dumb, violent and bad at school... »
« … No »
« Don't worry, it's better like that. Sometimes, I just wish everybody could see how great is Takamina... »
« What do you mean ? »
« You know... In school, it has to be the smart and classy ones, the invisible ones and the messy and dumb ones. »
« Why don't you work ? I mean, you could do something better. I could help you if you want »
Rena was so cute that Jurina felt in trust. She took her markbook in her bag and gave it to the girl.
« I'm the same as you, Rena-chan »


12.00am, corridors


Atsuko had to put her last history test in the teacher's locker before the end of the lunch.
She quickly reached it and opened it, ready to leave her test when she saw something weird. It was the last history test of Takahashi Minami, with an A+ on it.
She frowned, Takahashi was bad at school, she remembered last history class when the teacher gave her the test, saying that it was bad. A+ ?!
« Maeda-san ? Do you need something ? »
The history teacher was behind her.
« I-I wanted to give you my test. B-But, is it really an A+ ? »
« Anoo... yes, but you're not supposed to see that »
He seemed really embarrassed, it was really weird.
« I-I need to go » said Atsuko leaving all of the sudden.
« But, Maeda-san, you took the test ! »
She was already in the stairs, too late.

She opened the roof door and saw them. They were all eating together.
« Takahashi ! I need to talk to you »
Everybody looked at her, then smiled.
« Hello Maeda-san ! » they all said.
She was so surprised that she blushed.
« Aachan ? Ah, you're here » said Sae, coming on the roof.
She saw everybody and smiled, looking at Sayaka. Minami got up and came near Atsuko.
« What ? »
« What is that ? » she asked showing the test.
« … Must be a mistake... » shrugged Minami.
« Cap', why don't you tell her ? It's okay you know » said Rino.
« Tell me what ? »
« It's not important »
« Tell me ! »
Minami sighed and took her to the stairs and closed the door.
« What's up with you.... It's an A+.
« … What's your average ? »
« Pff... 96.7% » sighed the midget.
« 96.7% »
She suddnely tried to hit Minami in the face but the girl blocked it.
« Not today, please. I need all my strenght for tonight »

Atsuko sighed and came back on the roof.
« Sae, let's go ! » she said, angry.
The genkin one was eating next to Sayaka, the two of them were smiling.
« Go, I'll be catching you » she said.
« Right... »


1pm, the park next to school



« Thank you for the food » said Rena
She had ate the all box, it was really delicious.
« You're welcome. And, Rena-chan, can you keep the mark thing quiet, please ? »
« Yeah, but I still don't understand »
« What matters is that we have good results to be able to do what we want in the future, doesn't matter if people ignore that we're good. »
« But it's unfait... And teachers agreed for this. I don't want people think that you're silly if you're not. »
« Are you defending me?^^ » she smiled brightly.
« … Maybe »
Jurina smiled, put everything back in her bag. They went back to the school, walking next to each other.
« I'm very happy to know you, Rena-chan » said Jurina, taking Rena's hand.


1pm, on the roof



« Minesgishi-san ? » asked Sae, smiling.
« Y-Yes ? »
« Sayaka told me you wanted to talk to Mariko. »
« Ah, yes »
« Do you want her email ? Maybe it would be easier for you »
« Great idea ! Thank you so much Miyazawa-san ! »
« Just call me Sae^^ »
« I'm mailing her right now ! »


From : Miichan
To : Shinoda-san
Content :
Hello, this is
Minesgishi-san. Sorry
to reach you like that,
but... I would need your
help
:nervous

Miichan was febrile, waiting for an answer. Sar and Sayaka were looking at her, laughing and whispering.
« Don't laugh... Twin tower ! » pouted Miichan
« Twin tower ? That's so cool^^ » smiled Sae.

Bip... Bip... Bip...


From : Shinoda-san
To : Miichan
Content :
Well, good afternoon
Minesgishi-san !
How can I help you ?
;)

From : Miichan
To : Shinoda-san
Content :
I heard that you
wear good in creating
clothes. I have to
make some.
:panic:

From : Shinoda-san
To : Miichan
Content :
Souka...
If you treat me
cakes at the
Nekku bar,
I'm your man !
:twisted: :D

From : Miichan
To : Shinoda-san
Content :
DEAL !! After school !



Miichan smiled, mission accomplished. And this girl didn't seem so scary after all. She had a good feeling about this.


5pm, schoolyard

« Come on, Rena-san, go out with me ! »
« No, thank you... »
« Come on, don't be shy ! »
Rena was surrounded by two guys, against the wall.
« No ! »
« Why girls always say no ? Don't be a bitch and say yes for once ! » saidthe first guy, being agressive.
« BACK OFF !! » instructed Jurina, protecting Rena with her body.
« Oh great... the Matsui now... »
« Leave her alone »
She was very calm, but Rena could feel that she was tensed.
« It's none of your buisness, get the fuck out of here. »
Jurina took the guy by the neck and lightened.
« I said, leave her alone. And don't call her Rena-chan, she's not your friend. Respect her bastard ! Now leave or I swear I will not be this gentle... »
She released him and watched the boys leave without a word.
« Are you okay ? » asked Jurina with a sweet smile.
« Yes, thank you »
« I'm sorry for what you saw. But I wanted to make sure they won't bother you again. »
« … Thank you, Jurina » she blushed.
Her heart was beating really fast, it was like a phantasm, to have someone strong to protect you like this. Jurina was her ikemen.
« I'm gonna walk you home » smiled Jurina.


5.20pm, Nekku bar

Miichan was looking at Mariko who was eating her cake with a bright smile.
« Is it good ? »
« Delicious ! »
She was actually cute.
« So, tell me about the clothes ! »
« Hm... We have to do a dance contest, and Takamina had draw some cool outfits for the song. I usually do our costumes but here it's serious, and a little bit complicated...
« A dance contest ? Nice ! »
« Yeah, we really need to win » sighed Miichan.
« Souka. So, are you gonna show me ? »
« Hm, actually the sketch are at Minami's place. Can you come tonight ? »
« I need to go home first, but I can come later if you want. »
« Okay, come around 9pm hen, I'll email you  the address »

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Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 4
« Reply #38 on: September 11, 2013, 12:00:50 AM »
Brb for the proper comment *teehee*

i smell something fishy here...wait..im wrong the one i smell is our dinner  :oops:
anyways  :on cigar:
minami be careful...acchan just join the dance group already!!
wahhhhh chapter 5 i want u now :on comhere:
thank u for the update fausto  :whistle:
cant wait for more :on gay:
« Last Edit: September 11, 2013, 01:58:34 PM by Chichay12 »

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Re: Re: "That's not what you think it is" Atsumina NEW fic! Chapter 4
« Reply #39 on: September 11, 2013, 01:35:48 AM »
Owhh, Acchan don't treat Minami so cool. Hope Minami can settle the misunderstood between her father and Acchan's mum death.

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