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Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy
« Reply #20 on: September 10, 2013, 03:22:13 PM »
waah
maeda2708-san are you really indonesian?  :shocked
if yes, maybe i can help you a little lol  :lol:

Yaaa~~~!! Really need help from indonesian people *_*)v

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Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy
« Reply #21 on: September 10, 2013, 03:51:32 PM »
well :3
im from indonesia lol

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Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy
« Reply #22 on: September 10, 2013, 04:09:17 PM »
^ yeah im an indonesian  :P
btw what about you rukaecchi?  :?


yeah i dont want acchan using takamina to get yuko back  :(
and i want it will be atsumina  :D

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Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy
« Reply #23 on: September 10, 2013, 04:28:51 PM »
I'm on the 'Yuko realizing she made a mistake and will do everything in her power to get Acchan back and Acchan being the clueless girl she is, doesn't know what to do with the midgets' team~ XD

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Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy
« Reply #24 on: September 11, 2013, 01:13:23 AM »
I kind of thought the story is going to go to the path that AshuraX said in the previous comment.

Yeah... Team midgets... Chasing after Atsuko

Can be fun to see...

Well whatever it is... I'll enjoy reading it

Can't wait to see the next chapter

Thank you

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Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy
« Reply #25 on: September 11, 2013, 10:51:25 AM »
Well now, is it olive29-san who helped you??~ A big help indeed~
-Now i can understand the storyline more better than before~ So...Minami wa...
-Minami doesn't really hate Atsuko but she love her, right??~ Hrm...
-Oh my, just like the story before it get fixed, Yuko broke up with her...
-Maan...I'm confused right now cos which one i'll choose to be Atsuko's pair??~
-You know??~ I just love both of them, basically, i love all Atsuko's pair...
-More than Minami's~ Lol...Well anyway, thank you for fixing it!!~ Really...

-Plz update the next chapter soon!!~ I can't wait for the next one!!~ Hehehe~

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« Reply #26 on: September 14, 2013, 02:34:54 PM »
-I Love You But It's Not So Easy- Chapter 2

atsuko’s tears fell down to her cheek. Minami seeing atsuko crying for the first time erase her tears with her  thumb
“Don’t cry..” said minami calm down

atsuko crying even more and lean her head on minami’s shoulder.
Minami’s heart beating so fast right now. Minami want to hug atsuko right now,
 but minami dont want atsuko think that she is taking advantage right now.

“Calm down. I’m here with you..” said minami calm down

“Minami..” Atsuko raised her head from her shoulder

“Yes?”

“promise me you will always stay with me..” atsuko wished

minami shocked. She was confused what to do. Her heart beating more faster with her looking at atsuko’s sad face

“but i have one condition”

“what?” atsuko ask confusedly

“promise me, you will always smile. And never  cry like this..”

“I promise minami..” atsuko answer with smile on her face

“I promise too atsuko.. Close your eyes”

Atsuko closed her eyes and minami lean closer to atsuko’s face. Minami’s brain going to explode but she tried to control her breathing to calm down. Minami’s lips going closer to atsuko, but she stopped, she think it was too fast for them. She scare atsuko will get mad with her action.

And then, minami trying her best to change her mind and kiss atsuko’s closed eyes.
Minami feel there is tears in there and minami can feel  atsuko’s eyes on her lips
Minami go straight and leaving atsuko in disbelief about her action

“Open your eyes.. I wish, you will keep your promise..” Minami  go straight and leaving atsuko in disbelief about her action


[MINAMI POV]

“what am i doing? Am i really kiss her? Oh god, is this just a dream? If this is was a dream please dont wake me up. But if its not a dream, please always be like this..” minami said on her mind

[END MINAMI POV]

without they knowing, yuko saw them from a far. From atsuko start crying on minami’s shoulder, and minami succes to make her calm. Yuko regret her action to end her relationship with atsuko. Yuko start to think  how to get atsuko back and never let go of atsuko from anybody

[Yuko POV]

Idiot! why i must  i suspecting atsuko and break up with her ? in fact i really love her and vice versa. In this one year  relationship i make a great mistake in my life. I must get atsuko back this night.

[END YUKO POV]

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*tok tok tok*

yuko knock atsuko’s door house. Atsuko open the door and after she see yuko in front of her house, she imidietly closed the door. But she failed.but she failed before she closed the door Yuko held  the door with her foot.

“closed this door if you want me to live with one foot..”

“Go!!! I dont want to see you anymore!!!!” shouted atsuko

“i dont want to go until you let me explain everything..” wished yuko

“is your explanation this afternoon not enough? My heart already break..” shouted atsuko while crying

“okay, i will not force you. If you changed your mind, i’ll be in front of your house..”

yuko pull back her foot and sitting silently in front of atsuko’s house. The weather was very cold. Yuko forgot to bring her jacket. She feels like she got pierced by needle on her ribs, but that dont make yuko reduce her intention to waiting for atsuko until she change her mind.

Three hours passed and yuko sleep in front of atsuko’s house. Atsuko take a peek from her window and atsuko’s heart melt. She open the door and cover yuko’s body with blanket and hug yuko from back.
Yuko feels warm and start to wake up.

"thank you atsuko..”

“im just dont want to kill someone because the bad weather. Lets go inside.” Atsuko said and let go of her.
They going to living room and atsuko give yuko  a cup of hot tea.

“drink it..”

“Atsuko..”

“Yes?”

“still too cold in here..”

“I know that was just your naughty mind to get my hug..” answer atsuko  and go away from yuko.
But yuko pulled atsuko wrist and says with trembling lips.

“for god’s sake,it was so cold..”
Atsuko hearing change of yuko’s voice checking yuko’s body temperature and she know that yuko got high fever

“sorry i  have ignored you. I should let you in..” said atsuko while take care of her

“dont worry. This is my fault. If i only....” before yuko finished her words, atsuko cut her

“dont talk too much. Take a rest..” atsuko gave her best smile for yuko. Yuko seeing atsuko’s angelic smile, instantly crying. Atsuko going panic because yuko action.

“Whats wrong?” ask panicked atsuko
Im just regret because im already end our relationship

“i dont know what to do anymore. Im just regret because im already end our relationship..” said yuko while crying.

“I dont know what am i thinking this morning. If i just.... I cant live without you. I feel like a year is not a short time to be together with you. Too much things we go through..”

Atsuko dont dare to see yuko’s face. Atsuko feels it was make her very confused. Atsuko think why yuko that easily change her mind about a relationship?

“yuko, why you so easy playing with my heart? This morning you make my life ruined, but now you tried to fix that. Do i look dont seriously through relationship with you?” answer atsuko and seeing her face.

“Atsuko. I dont know what to do anymore to make you trust me that i regret with my action, im not the best, but i always do my best to not make you cry, if only this day i failed..”

“and, what do you want?” asked atsuko with brief while hold the tears
i want you to go back for me, just for me

“i want you to go back for me, just for me.. Please...” Wished  yuko while leaned her face to atsuko and now  their distance just and inch

“give me time. Its not that easy to accept you again. You already suspect me yuko. I dont know how much already you suspect me. dont know how much you already lied to me without me knowing. That’s all because i trust you. But look at you ? do you already trust me that my love is the best for you?”
atsuko said and slowly push yuko’s body away from her

“take a rest. Dont make your body recovering for a long time. tomorrow i will ask someone to take you home.” atsuko said and slowly push yuko’s body away from her
If i got accident because of this fever, trust me i will not haunting you

“No need. I drive my car. And i will go this night. Sorry to bother you. If i got accident because of this fever, trust me i will not haunting you.” Answer yuko and give atsuko smile

[YUKO POV]

What happen? Its not what im thinking. I think she will accept me back because i know she really love me. Is she not love me anymore? Or im just really hurting her? Even my face already near her face, she dont want to kiss me. Atsuko already changed. I have mistake to judge her, she is not like other woman that i got easily. Im really stupid

[END YUKO POV]

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Kyaaaaa!!!! Arigato for translate it, blakwhite  :kneelbow: :ding:

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Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy Chap 2
« Reply #27 on: September 14, 2013, 02:44:38 PM »
doita maeda2708 - san :3
sorry if my english and grammar really bad  :oops:

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Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy Chap 2
« Reply #28 on: September 14, 2013, 03:53:27 PM »
acchan!!! dont accept yuko!!
i want my atsumina now!! XD
update soon :on gay:

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Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy Chap 2
« Reply #29 on: September 14, 2013, 04:09:17 PM »
Think about Minami, Atsuko.  :cry:

Thanks for the update. Please continue.  :bow: :twothumbs

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Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy Chap 2
« Reply #30 on: September 14, 2013, 04:13:00 PM »
Is it just me or was Yuko kinda evil? Don't know if she really loves Atsuko or not...
Oh well, who cares.
Still going for the 'AtsuYuu' route!
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Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy Chap 2
« Reply #31 on: September 14, 2013, 04:27:32 PM »
Burh...So Yuko suspect something eh??~ Hrm....
-So...Guess that Yuko will keep chasing after Atsuko...
-Urh...I don't know what to say but i got one i think...
-Minami yossha!!~ You kissed her right??! Oh zyeah!!~
-Man...Do that thing more to her!!~ But...Feel sorry for Yuko..
-How will this go on after this??~ Really can't wait for the next one!!~

>Plz update soon!!~ And thank you to you too, blakwhite-san...For the awesomeness!!~

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Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy Chap 2
« Reply #32 on: September 14, 2013, 05:52:11 PM »
Where's Nyannyan or Tomochin when you need them??

I want Nyannyan or Tomochin there and take Takamina away from Atsuko, then probably it will make Atsuko realized that she love Takamina  :grin:

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Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy Chap 2
« Reply #33 on: September 15, 2013, 09:49:47 PM »
Honestly, I don't care how you start the story, but as long as Atsumina end up being together, I'm okay with that.

I've never really liked any other ship with Atsuko or Minami, I think they are perfect for each other so I like to keep it that way :)

Don't worry about your english too much. It may be a little confusing, but I can understand the story just fine. So please continue to update this story and the other one :D

p.s. This is really gonna be an Atsumina ending, right? Not Atsuyuu?
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Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy Chap 2
« Reply #34 on: September 15, 2013, 11:03:29 PM »
Ah... It's going to be a fight between Minami and Yuko for Atsuko affection...

What kind of things would they do to obtain Atsuko...?

Can't wait to see it...

But I do hope there would be other characters that going to disturb this fight

Like Haruna or Tomochin

Thank you for the update

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Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy Chap 2
« Reply #35 on: September 22, 2013, 11:02:09 AM »
Kyaaaa~~!! I'm back! :3 Thanks for your attention guys~ m(_ _)m
Sorry for late update cause I was visited JKT48 Theater ._. And bought CD KFC for event handshake ._.

I LOVE YOU BUT IT'S NOT SO EASY [CHAP 3] [ATSUMINA/ATSUYUU/KOJIYUU]

(Yuko POV)

Why is it too late for me to realize that I love Atsuko? Why I feel broken hearted now when she get close to other people? Why I need her just when she’s not mine anymore? Why I really love Atsuko? I really miss her. ARGH !! I will never get her back if I don’t ask someone’s help.

I have to call someone who knows everything about Atsuko. Hmmmm, but wait?! I never allowed her to get close to someone else except me and Bakamina.
ARRRRRGGGGGHHH!!!

*Yuko ruffled her hair* *Suddenly she remember someone* AH! I know someone !! NyanNyan!! *Yuko grins*

(End of Yuko’s POV)

(Flashback)

-Yuko’s house –

“Yuu-chan..I don’t know what’s wrong with our relationship for this past few months. But I felt like you don’t have time anymore to be with me..”

“What do you mean NyanNyan? I’m always be by your side...”

“I know you will always be by my side. But, what I mean is, your mind and your heart is not for me anymore. You always talking about Atsuko..” Haruna said sadly.

“That’s just your jeaolusy. I don’t like that. But, I always talk about another women, didn’t I ? Why are you feeling strange? “

“But..” Haruna looked down.

“What, NyanNyan?” asked Yuko while she lifted her face.

“Last night you said her name while you’re asleep. This is the first time you said another woman’s name besides my name..” Haruna started to cry.

Yuko didn’t realized it. She is shocked. Her eyes widen. Yuko felt very bad because she betrayed Haruna’s heart. She didn’t know what to do. But, Yuko can’t fool her heart anymore. She loves Atsuko too. Now, she loves Atsuko more than Haruna.

Yuko is in the same school with Atsuko. But, Haruna is in the same school with Minami. So, when she was at school, she always flirt with Atsuko, and Yuko never told her that she already has a girlfriend.

“Yuu-chan, I never ask you to tell me something. And I will never ask you to choose between me or Atsuko either. I will go away from you. And...” Haruna breathed deeply.

“And I want to break up. I don’t want to disturb your relationship with another woman. I want to be free and I don’t want to protect my feeling anymore. Thank you for this year. You can come to me if you ever need my help. I will always help you..” Then Haruna walked away and left. Yuko still couldn’t say anything.

(End of Flashback)

-In a Park 12:10 afternoon –

(Atsumina moment)

“Hello, Minami..” said Atsuko with her sweet smile that make Minami feel calm.

“Yes Atsuko..you’re 10 minutes late from the appointment..” replied Minami coldly while she hold her happy feeling inside her heart.

“Don’t be so excessive. It’s just 10 minutes. Yuko waited for me for many hours, but she never said anything..” said Atsuko. She then sit besides Minami while frowning. Minami felt heart broken when she heard Atsuko talked about Yuko. But, she doesn’t show it. She has to make Atsuko happy being with her and not make her go away like she always do.

“Even if you come here tomorrow or one year later, I will always be here. I don’t care if I’m starving or thirsty. When it is raining or storming. Life or dead. I will always wait for you..” said Minami coldly but truly from her heart.

“What did you say?” asked Atsuko while looking at Minami. Atsuko looks at Minami with cynical gaze. But Minami doesn’t look at her. She just look straight ahead.

“Nothing. Let’s go for a walk. We can find some ice cream to eat. Today’s weather is so hot..” replied Minami as she stand up from the bench.

Atsuko and Minami walk to find an ice cream shop. They buy 2 ice cream. Atsuko is eating her ice cream with cute expression plastered on her face. Until she got some ice cream on her cheek. Minami who saw her cute behaviour, laughs a little.

“Can’t you eat your ice cream correctly?” Minami then wiped the ice cream on Atsuko’s cheek with her thumb.

“Minami..”

“Yes?”

“Why are you so romantic? Hmmm...no!! Sorry, I mean, why are you so romantic sometime? But you always being sulky..”

“I’m just used to being cold to everyone. But, I will always work hard to be the best only for you.” Minami give her best smile. It was rare to see her smile. Usually she will give a cold face.

“Are you trying to flirt with me” Atsuko give cynical gaze to her.

“I’m just trying to be the best. I don’t care if you consider it as flirting or whatever. I just want to be the best.”

“Do you realized it was so sweet?” asked Atsuko with a red face.

“No. I’m not sweet talking. Because the sweet one is your smile.. Atsuko, I’m hungry. Let’s go for lunch..” said Minami while walkina in front of Atsuko.

“Are you trying to make me fall in love with you, Minami?” said Atsuko in her mind.

“Hey, Atsuko!! Don’t just sit there. I’m starving already !!” shouted Minami.

“Yes!” replied Atsuko while running towards Minami.

-Haruna’s House – 2 pm

*knock knock* *knock knock*

Yuko is knocking Haruna’s door house several times. Not long after that, someone finally open the door for her. Her face seems familiar, and Yuko knows the girl who opened the door for her is Haruna. Yes, someone who ever been her.
Haruna was shocked when she saw Yuko. Her eyes widen. It’s just like a dream. Yuko, the person she loves come to her house.  It’s already a year they didn’t meet each other.

“Hi..” Yuko smiled nervously

“Hi..”

“Long time no see, NyanNyan..” said Yuko while smiling and showing her squirell face. Haruna feels so happy because Yuko still call her NyanNyan.

“Yes. It’s been a year we didn’t meet. Please, come in, Yuko..”

“Sorry for intruding..”

Yuko look around her house and she found that her house is quiet. She remember when Haruna told her that her parents always back home late at night. That’s why Haruna always stay over at Yuko’s house so she won’t feel lonely.

“Please, sit.” Haruna go to the kitchen to take a drink.

(Yuko’s POV)

There’s not much changes here. It’s still the same. Just the frames on the wall is increasing. I still remember the first time I kissed NyanNyan. That was when I confessed my feeling. In this house. In this couch. It was raining outside and I had to stay here. Because NyanNyan’s house was so quite, we did something more than kissing and..ah, wait!! Why did I remember my memories with NyanNyan? I’m here to ask for her help !! Arghh!!

(End of Yuko’s POV)

“Please, drink it..”

“Thank you..”

(Haruna’s POV)

I still can’t believe that Yuko is here !! Right in front of me now. It feels like a dream. I try to pinch my arm. But, still not change. It’s real !! Yes !! Yuko is in front of me now. But, why she’s here? Does she needs help?

(End of Haruna’s POV)

“So, why did you come here?” asked Haruna with a smile and then sit besides Yuko.

“Hmmm...ano.. I’m confused where do I start..” Yuko rubbed her back neck.

“Just say it. Don’t be nervous..”

“Okay. Do you remember when you said that you will help me anytime?” asked Yuko while looking at her eyes.

“Yes. Of course. How can I forget. So, what do you want?”

“I need your help to..” Yuko breathed deeply.

“To..to..to bring me back together with Atsuko...”

Haruna who still has feeling for Yuko feels like her heart broken into pieces. She believes it’s just a nighmare. Yuko is not in front of her. Yuko doesn’t truly visit her and asks for her help. Haruna just keep silent.

“NyanNyan..are you alright?? Please, answer me?? Do you want to help me?” asked Yuko with pitiful face. But Haruna still ignores her and doesn’t respond.

“NyanNyan..please, answer me..”

“Ummm...Yuko..” NyanNyan finally said.

“Yes?”

“I.. I.. Yes, of course I will help you. I can’t reject your wish for my help. Hahaha..” Haruna hides her feelings in front of Yuko. Because she knows that Yuko’s happiness is her happiness.

“Thank you so much, NyanNyan. I think you don’t want to help me. Just for your info, I really love Atsuko. I love Atsuko more than I love myself. Thank you so much NyanNyan..” Yuko then hugged Haruna. But Haruna doesn’t hug her back, because, if she did it, it will broke her heart more.

-------------TBC------------

sorry if i make some charachter so evil or look like that. but pls stay calm and pls enjoy this story. because i will make happy ending. with their respective couple. and with romantic way  :wriggly: :wriggly: :ding:
« Last Edit: September 23, 2013, 06:52:30 PM by maeda2708 »

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Re: [Atsumina/Atsuyuu/Kojiyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy Chap 3 ~09-22-13~
« Reply #36 on: September 22, 2013, 11:11:44 AM »
What the... my kojiyuu feelings ;A; poor Haruna, Yuko you are so bad here ;A; just move on and understand your feelings, I know you love Haruna not Acchan ;A;

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Re: [Atsumina/Atsuyuu/Kojiyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy Chap 3 ~09-22-13~
« Reply #37 on: September 22, 2013, 11:28:09 AM »
Yuko you heartbreaker...
If for some reason Acchan doesn't like Yuko back even though Yuko's chasing her so much, then I don't know what to say....

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Re: [Atsumina/Atsuyuu/Kojiyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy Chap 3 ~09-22-13~
« Reply #38 on: September 22, 2013, 12:23:30 PM »
Nyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah~~~~ this fic is soooo puuuuuuurfect!!!!! i  love it :D
Please update soon  :mon angel:

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Re: [Atsumina/Atsuyuu/Kojiyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy Chap 3 ~09-22-13~
« Reply #39 on: September 23, 2013, 02:43:49 AM »
I think this is the first time I read a fanfic of Kojiharu being the one chasing Yuko.
but Yuko is a jerk in here and very insensitive about Kojiharu's feelings  :lol:
thanks for the fanfic. Please update soon!!

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