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 :welcome :welcome :welcome I do not have the ability in the English language. then I use google translate. I hope you can still enjoy this story  :cry: :cry: :peace:

-I Love You But It’s Not So Easy- Chap 1

[Atsuko POV]

Why do I keep forgetting my appointment with Minami? Does my brain can’t remember about Minami even once? Is Minami not important in my life? I know that Minami always bothered me with her annoying way. But, can’t I even remember a promise? The only thing I can do now is to run as fast as I can and hoping that Minami is still waiting for me.

[END Atsuko POV]

[Minami POV]

No matter how much rain fell down from the sky. No matter how strong the storm blowing. No matter how long I have to wait, I’ll still be here until you come. Even though I have to wait for 100 years. I never know how I can get your attention romantically. I’m too nervous and ignorant, so I can only invite you to go somewhere.

[END Minami POV]

Minami is a beautiful, kind, cool, and quiet girl. She really likes sports and she lives with her parents. Minami likes Atsuko since 2 years ago, when they became their own school’s representatives at some Mathemathics competition. Atsuko is a beautiful, kind, spoiled, and cheerful girl. Atsuko hates Minami because she always bothering Atsuko. Everytime Minami invite Atsuko to go out, they always fought over some small matter. This resulted in Minami always left Atsuko alone and doesn’t care if Atsuko know her way home or not. But so far, Atsuko never get lost on her way home even though Minami left her alone in some strange places.

Atsuko has a girlfriend at school named Yuko. Yuko is a player. At school, she’s not just flirting with Atsuko, but also with other girls. Atsuko who really loves Yuko, doesn’t care about that at all. For all she knows , Yuko is hers and no one else’s.

Minami doesn’t have a girlfriend in her school, because Minami already give her heart to Atsuko. Minami knew that Atsuko already has a girlfriend, because she met the couple once while browsing for some clothes in a shop. Atsuko saw Minami, but
she just kept silent and pretended that she didn’t know her. But Minami who is indifferent, didn’t care and acted like she didn’t see anything.

“I’m sorry I’m late !!” Atsuko shouted while panting.
Minami only looked at Atsuko coldly.

“Sorry. I didn’t bring much water.” said Minami while she drink her water in front of Atsuko.
Atsuko who looks upset with Minami then take Minami’s water bottle forcibly. Atsuko feels like dying because she ran really fast to get there.

“If Yuko know what you did to me this time, maybe she will beat you..” said Atsuko while her breathing return to normal.

“Don’t talk too much. We better get going..” replied Minami coldly.

While they are walking, Atsuko keep asking where they are going, but Minami only keep silent and doesn’t respond at all.
Atsuko who is getting more upset with Minami’s action start talking.

“It’s been an hour since we start walking. But you don’t tell me where we are going. You’re wasting too much of my time. I better go home !!!” Atsuko shouted and make Minami face her.

They stopped on their tracks. Minami just looking at Atsuko coldly and didn’t say anything.

[Atsuko POV]

Idiot !!! Why do I still want to accompany her? I swear that I will never accompany her again no matter where she invites me.
I don’t want to.

[END Atsuko POV]

[Minami POV]

“Good Minami. Just keep act like this to Atsuko and she’ll end up hating you and never want to know you anymore. Then, you will lose the person that you love..” Minami said to herself.

[END Minami POV]

“Atsuko!!” said Minami and looking at Atsuko’s direction.

Atsuko who initially feels upset, now feels that Minami care about her and won’t let her go home alone. Atsuko answered Minami’s call with a smile.

“What?” replied Atsuko while smiling.

“Ummm...be careful.” Minami then turn around and walk away from Atsuko.
Atsuko who tought that Minami would walk her home, was left dumbfounded that Minami is actually leaving her. Atsuko feels more upset and really hates Minami.

Minami who walks away from Atsuko is wondering what made her mouth shut? She doesn’t want Atsuko to go home alone.

----

Minami’s phone rang right at 7 pm. Minami arrived in her house since 2 hours ago and now she is getting ready to study.

“Good evening.” Said Minami.

“Good evening. Is this Takahashi Minami?” asks a woman.

“Yes, it is.”

“I’m Atsuko’s mother. Can I ask you something?”

Minami was surprised. What happen to Atsuko that made her mother called her at this time? And how did Atsuko’s mom know Minami’s phone number?

“Sure. What is it?”

“Are you together with my daughter today? Because she hasn’t return to home yet..” Atsuko’s mom ask worriedly.
Minami is getting shocked even more. Because she feels like she’s the one who made Atsuko get lost in some places.

“We were together this afternoon. But soon we parted because we have different direction.” replied Minami who starting to get worried.

“If it doesn’t bother you, could you help me find out where Atsuko ?”

“Of course!” replied Minami firmly.

“Thank you so much. Sorry to bother you. Good night.”

“Good evening.”

Minami who feels guilty because she left Atsuko alone, went straight out of her room to look for Atsuko. First, Minami went back to the place where they parted and asked the people around there. But, Minami didn’t find anything. She then proceeds to look for Atsuko at her school, at the park, and at the shops where they’ve met before. Minami who feels desperate because she can’t find Atsuko, finally went to Atsuko’s house.

When Minami is walking to Atsuko’s house, she saw a car in front of Atsuko’s house. She saw Atsuko with Yuko in that car. Minami clearly saw that Yuko is trying to get close to Atsuko’s face. Minami who feels jealous then walk up towards the car, but then stopped immediately.

[Minami POV]

Wait. I don’t have the right to beat Yuko. She is Atsuko’s girlfriend. And I’m just nobody to Atsuko. I should be grateful because Atsuko is fine and went home with her girlfriend. Atsuko didn’t get lost. I better call Atsuko’s mother now and tell her that Atsuko will be home soon.

[END Minami POV]

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It’s been 2 months Minami and Atsuko didn’t meet or contact each other. Minami no longer want to invite Atsuko out. Minami feels guilty because she made Atsuko’s mother worried about Atsuko’s whereabouts.
Minami’s phone suddenly rang. Atsuko’s the one who called her.

“Good da...” Minami didn’t have time to finish her words because Atsuko interrupted her.

“Meet me in the usual place now..” replied Atsuko weakly.

“N..now???!!!”

The call suddenly cut off. Minami is getting more confused about what happened. She immediately get ready to go to where Atsuko is.

When Minami arrived, she saw Atsuko is sitting down on one of the bench in the park while holding her phone.

“What is it, Atsuko?” Minami who had just arrived immediately sit beside Atsuko.

“.......” Atsuko didn’t answer.

“Hey, what happen?” asked Minami worriedly.

“.......” Atsuko didn’t answer.

“Are you suddenly mute?” asked Minami harshly.

“.......” Atsuko didn’t answer.

“You’re just wasting my time..” Minami get up, then suddenly Atsuko speak.

“I broke up with Yuko...” Atsuko answered weakly
Hearing that, Minami look at Atsuko and her heart start to beat fast because she’s very happy.

“Really?” Minami asked excitedly. Atsuko looking at her confused, Minami who is aware of it, then immediately ask Atsuko again while changing back her tone to her usual cold tone.

“Really?”

Atsuko sighed and tell her what happened. Minami sitting back next to Atsuko and listen to her story.

“If you already know that Yuko is a player, you should’ve prepared that she might cheated on you..” said Minami coldly.
[FLASHBACK]

“Atsuko, there’s something I need to tell you...” Yuko said nervously

“What?”

“Do you remember how long we have been dating?”

“Today is exactly one year!” replied Atsuko excitedly.

“No, it’s not. I mean, today we are not going to celebrate anything. Because...”

Atsuko still looking at Yuko with a smile while her brain is thinking about what Yuko is trying to say.

“Because I want to break up with you.. “ said Yuko while looking at the floor.
Atsuko’s smile looked strained and she doesn’t look fine. Yes, this day is supposedly become a historical day for Atsuko, because she is going to celebrate her first anniversary with Yuko.  But everything changed when Yuko asked her to break up and tell her everything.

“Once again, I’m sorry Atsuko. You can punish me for what happen..” Yuko pleaded while crying.

“God is the one who will avenge you, Yuko. I forgot ! Today I have an appointment with Minami. I’m going home first.  See you !”

Atsuko give Yuko one last smile before turned it to sobbing all the way home.
[END FLASHBACK]

-TBC-

Huwaeeehhh~!! hopefully there is hope for the next story. I will also learn to improve my English..  :peace:
« Last Edit: October 26, 2013, 02:54:27 PM by maeda2708 »

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Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy
« Reply #1 on: September 06, 2013, 09:59:39 AM »
Sounds cool~ I don't know bout the story since I'm not much of an AtsuMina shipper. How about ya ask some of the people here if they could translate it? Or at least fix it. It's kinda hard to read ^^''
What's your main language anyway? I can help if it's Malay XD

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Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy
« Reply #2 on: September 06, 2013, 10:07:17 AM »
Sorry. My english is very bad. Maybe you can translate it with google translate too xD
I'm Indonesian :|

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Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy
« Reply #3 on: September 06, 2013, 10:54:02 AM »
I can understand Indon a bit XD I mean, come on, we kinda use the same language, just a tad bit different! XD
I don't think using Google Translate will help you in any way...

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Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy
« Reply #4 on: September 06, 2013, 11:03:58 AM »
Your english is quite..err,bad.

Sorry..

I'm Indonesian so I understand what you're trying to say. If you want to, I can help you to fix it..

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Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy
« Reply #5 on: September 06, 2013, 11:39:26 AM »
I'm so sorry.. I'll fix this story  :cry:  :peace:
Thanks a lot.. T^T

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Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy
« Reply #6 on: September 06, 2013, 11:45:01 AM »
I can help you if you want :)
I'm always happy to help someone out :)
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Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy
« Reply #7 on: September 06, 2013, 11:51:09 AM »
i want to help too!! XD
but im not that good in english *teehee~~
ok i just wait until someone help u with ur fic!!

another atsumina fic i hope?  :D
i cant wait! :on gay:
« Last Edit: September 06, 2013, 05:05:06 PM by Chichay12 »

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Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy
« Reply #8 on: September 06, 2013, 11:58:45 AM »

PS: See, someone already want to help you out for example the Sexiest  AlmiraTheGreat-chan~ And chichay~ :on slopkiss: *teasing mode rising up* :on gay:

Teaser Rukaecchi XD nyahaha
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Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy
« Reply #9 on: September 06, 2013, 12:10:53 PM »
Minna, arigato..  :heart:
Sorry for bother your self..  :banghead:
I has sent a personal message to a few people. and I will soon to change this post .. m(_ _)m

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Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy
« Reply #10 on: September 06, 2013, 12:24:25 PM »
I can sort of understand the story line but the detail was very bad...

I could not quite follow the story at all.

May be you can post it in Indonesian

Then may be someone can translate it for you.

Yeah... I agreed with Ruka-San

You probably translated directly from Indonesian

Never translate a language directly word per word should be sentence per sentence

The result would be better than this.

And I'm confuse, are Yuko and Minami both girls?

Because the translate always describing Minami as a he not a she?

Anyway... Great 1st attempt.. Apart from the language barrier, you wrote a nice story

Can't wait to see the next chapter

Thank you

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« Last Edit: September 06, 2013, 12:43:41 PM by cisda83 »

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Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy
« Reply #11 on: September 06, 2013, 12:29:20 PM »
See~? Everyone's english is okay so they'll help you out~
I'm a new guy here so I don't know much XD

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Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy
« Reply #12 on: September 06, 2013, 12:32:05 PM »
See~? Everyone's english is okay so they'll help you out~
I'm a new guy here so I don't know much XD

Ashuraaa~ remember the AtsuYuu fic I promised to you? I might post it here in Jphip this month XD
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« Reply #13 on: September 06, 2013, 12:57:37 PM »
See~? Everyone's english is okay so they'll help you out~
I'm a new guy here so I don't know much XD

Ashuraaa~ remember the AtsuYuu fic I promised to you? I might post it here in Jphip this month XD

Almiraaaaaaaaaaaaa~!!!!

So we're gon get more AtsuYuu?! YaY!!!!!! I summon thee, ol' dancing cow!!!  :cow:

I'm busy with my own fics so I didn't have time for AtsuYuu thanks to my other fics. Thought this fic was turning to AtsuYuu but I guess that ain't happening XD I hope Almira will make it quickly QwQ

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Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy
« Reply #14 on: September 06, 2013, 01:00:01 PM »
I've found the Indonesian people. and she said "it can finish for 3 days.." m(_ _)m
Now, I feel so happy. Thank you so much guys.
But, I still need your help.. ^D^v :peace: :P

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Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy
« Reply #15 on: September 06, 2013, 01:05:55 PM »
Hmmm? Help in what~? I can help if it's something concerning sweet sweet angel Acchan :lol:

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Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy
« Reply #16 on: September 06, 2013, 06:05:12 PM »
Hey!!~ I think i know where's this story going!!~ I think~~
-Though i'm on a confused state right now...But can't help it...
-Coz' we too need to improve our english skills~ And geez~
-I want to help too since i know a lil' bit Indonesia~ *thumbs up*
-I mean...I'm the same as Ashura-san!!~ I'll be glad to help too~
-Don't give up on it easily~ There's plenty of Indonesian in here...
-And they can totally speak english very well~ So i'm confident that you can~
-Such a nice story, improve your english a lil' bit and it's a~ll okay~~~

>Thank you for the nice chapter!!~ Can't wait for the next one!!~
« Last Edit: September 07, 2013, 07:59:39 AM by Kochiki »

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Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy
« Reply #17 on: September 10, 2013, 11:01:16 AM »
Kyaaaa~~~!!! I has fixed this ff :3 Thank you so much Olive :3 :thumbsup

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Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy
« Reply #18 on: September 10, 2013, 11:25:05 AM »
Very nicely done there...

I like the translation and the storylines

Thank you for fixing it...olive

Can't wait to see the next chapter, maeda2708

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Re: [Fanfiction Atsumina/Atsuyuu] I Love You But It's Not So Easy
« Reply #19 on: September 10, 2013, 01:15:25 PM »
waah
maeda2708-san are you really indonesian?  :shocked
if yes, maybe i can help you a little lol  :lol:

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