Author Topic: [10 Shots] Wanted! [Completed] - WMatsui, Atsumina, KojiYuu, SaeYaka [#2 Omake] (Read 132775 times)

Konoe · « **Reply #160 on:** November 11, 2013, 01:00:54 PM »

How can I not say that you are mean if you showed a cut version of a sexy scene?!

THE VERY DELICIOUS PART OF THE NEXT CHAPTER!

Release that ASAP! Do not make us wait a day!

I almost forgot. Only Wmatsui? No Mayuki?

gek geki · « **Reply #161 on:** November 11, 2013, 01:07:44 PM »

no!! just FINISH IT! I WONT LET YOU SLEEP THAT EASILY HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!

Koneki · « **Reply #162 on:** November 11, 2013, 01:13:44 PM »

YEAAAAAAAH!!
FINISH IT!!!! NOW! (?
*desperate*

White Hawk · « **Reply #163 on:** November 11, 2013, 04:12:30 PM »

Ehh? What? NO!! Don't give teaser like that!! You're evil! LOL Joking

Please, update soon~!

edogawa4869 · « **Reply #164 on:** November 11, 2013, 05:48:03 PM »

God!!!

you're evil...

how could u tease us like that????

please update...............

Zita · « **Reply #165 on:** November 11, 2013, 07:24:43 PM »

You should post it right now.

Koneki · « **Reply #166 on:** November 12, 2013, 12:08:27 PM »

AND THE CONTI?

PLEASE

I need it

Konoe · « **Reply #167 on:** November 12, 2013, 12:19:05 PM »

You dug your own grave with your tease.

People are getting impatient. Where are you~?

Koneki · « **Reply #168 on:** November 12, 2013, 12:38:59 PM »

Yeah.... Where are you~?

Where are you~?

gek geki · « **Reply #169 on:** November 12, 2013, 01:09:43 PM »

isn't it already the time you fly in this place? and put that damn good scene here or there~

should be around 8 now at your place

anakpanti · « **Reply #170 on:** November 12, 2013, 01:36:23 PM »

Hontou ni gomenasai.

I fell asleep last night with 'that scene' in my laptop screen and end up with only added 2 sentences in this chapter.

Now.. I just arrived at home... I really had a hard day in my office today. Too many deadline, I even can't read any fanfic today.

I promise to finish it and my 2 shots today and when you wake up tomorrow.... it's already posted.

Konoe · « **Reply #171 on:** November 12, 2013, 01:53:21 PM »

Now I'm feeling guilty.

Take your time. Have a good rest first. I can still wait.

gek geki · « **Reply #172 on:** November 12, 2013, 02:06:53 PM »

aww putri-san take your time then~

have a good rest and eat properly but then when you had a time update this ok

Terragen · « **Reply #173 on:** November 12, 2013, 02:21:24 PM »

un take your time~

chiqinna · « **Reply #174 on:** November 13, 2013, 02:57:15 PM »

wew~ wew~ WEW~ what happen to Atsumina 'date' lunch?

So...Acchan saw Takamina with her police uniform... curious what happen... what will Acchan feel?

and Yuki started to care for Mayu~

dat YukiRena moments!

and great update Putri-san!

Koneki · « **Reply #175 on:** November 15, 2013, 06:36:36 AM »

GOD THIS IS TOO DAMN GOOD!!!!!

And OMG.. THAT WMATSUI SCENE .. I enjoyed every word!!!!!

I can see a collaboration between the 2 teams in the near future
To prove jurina is innocent
To find who killed mariko
because wmatsui, atsumina, and mayuki
and jassd
I CAN'T WAIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thank you!

and sorry again for you know what!

anakpanti · « **Reply #176 on:** November 15, 2013, 07:24:55 AM »

I wanna reply all of your comments.
I appreciate it so much.

@Zita :

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I just discovered awful/good thing I became addicted on yours stories.

What did you find?

@mikaellitsa :

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eeeeeh????? wait a second...
what happen with this man?? who they are?
and what about the lunch atsuko get angry or something did she know now that minami is cop?? i guess...

Taller man is Sayaka ; shorter man is Yuko ; 3rd man is Sae.
About Atsumina... please wait for a little longer. Chap 8

@gek geki :

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Somehow think about wmatsui make me smile and happy,make me forgot how depressed when i think about my dear mayuki

Well... in chap 7, wmatsui relationship still works well. Let's see what will happen to them later.

@ayudewi6 : In chap 7, I wrote about Haruna's reason but not too detail. I will make the detail later, in flashback chapter.
I'm sorry, Atsumina will appear in chap 8.

@kurogumi : Kuro-san. Wow.. you analyze my fanfic really well.
Atsumina --> Their shocking lunch will be explained in chap 8. :p
YukiRena --> Yuki is a really hot player!!

Don't you think so? Even the icy Rena could turned on already.

MaYuki --> Well.... thanks to you, you asked me to read Seigus-san angsty fanfic. I got so many ideas from his/her fanfic.

SaeYuki --> Opss, Yuki still denying it in chap 7.
WMatsui --> My fav pairing. Please wait 'Mr. and Mrs. Matsui' sweet/dangerous moment.

@edogawa4869 : Yes, chap 7 is reveal the truth, but only in Maeda Team side. Takamina will get a huge shock in chap 8.

@Terragen :

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so suddenly and what the different between mayu ,sae and rena that could make yuki fall??

I will write about it later... we still have 3 chapters left.

Can I use your reasons why Yuki fell for Mayu? I wanna put it on my fanfic too.

@cisda83 : Sae is really angry.. but she isn't that barbaric. in chap 7.. she gave a warn to Yuki.

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@koneki : I relieved that you enjoyed chap 7. I mean... after I got a heart attack from you.

kidding. I'm okay, no need to say sorry again.

You're right! A collaboration. But it isn't easy to put the police and the thieves in the same 'cage'... they'll keep trying to crush each other.

I wonder about Takamina Team first impression when they saw their girlfriend 'play' with the gun, bomb, and etc.

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Hi readers!! About the tiny treaser for chap 7, I'm sorry. I promise that I won't do that again. I almost get stabbed by my reades.

Enjoy.

White Hawk · « **Reply #177 on:** November 15, 2013, 08:07:56 AM »

Thanks for the update~!

Ehh? Makoto!! -Who is Makoto? xD- How dare you to betray Maeda's team!!

Mariko is dead

Now Maeda's and Taka's team are searching for the killer, right?
Maybe they'll meet and then work together

And WMatsui moments!!! I really like it

Can't wait for your next update

chiqinna · « **Reply #178 on:** November 15, 2013, 08:10:55 AM »

really really enjoy reading this!!

LOL Rena thought Jurina was a singer all this time.. poor her... and Acchan too...
and wmatsui moments there~

and wonder if...Jurina's bracelet was there in mariko's house...probably...Rena? or Geki?
or Jurina visited Mariko before Mariko was dead?
wow~ this is getting interesting!

will they killed each other next chap?

oh...takamina still doesn't know that Acchan is that thief.. and so Mayu...
I think it will be messed...Maeda team vs. Takahashi team...
great update as always!!!

FairyNyan · « **Reply #179 on:** November 15, 2013, 09:04:40 AM »

OMG. The Wmatsui Scene is so

. now wait for Atsumina scene (?)

takamina team vs maeda team . it will fun..

please update asap