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Re: [MaYuki] It Started With A Bet Chapter 7 Part 1 05/20/14
« Reply #120 on: May 20, 2014, 08:38:05 AM »
Why cant i stop thinking there is a reason other than marks that make Yuki out of top 10 ?
In any cases, i need to read the following chapter, can't wait to see how Yuki will have to survive knowing she can't have Mayu as girlfriend for 3 years :)

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Re: [MaYuki] It Started With A Bet Chapter 7 Part 1 05/20/14
« Reply #121 on: May 20, 2014, 09:12:31 AM »
Ahhh  an Update!
I miss this!

And mayu win the bet
what will happen next xd

yuki won't get any girlfriend for three years ?
 
want another update here XD
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Re: [MaYuki] It Started With A Bet Chapter 7 Part 1 05/20/14
« Reply #122 on: May 20, 2014, 09:29:21 AM »
Hi.  :)

It's been a long time since I write a comment in this fic.  :P

As expected from a great author, the plot is getting interesting now.  XD

Well... honestly, I thought Yuki would enter the top 10 because maybe she is kinda hide her cleverness. :lol:
But I'm wrong... Yuki didn't win the bet easily.

And umm... I laugh really hard when I read about Yuki's mind....
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Oh and I need to remember to watch out from her glasses.
:rofl:

I really hope in the next part, Mayu will falling in love with Yuki... konoe-san.
Oh come on! After all the sweet things that they've been through together.......  Yuki gave a phone and created a mail account for Mayu, Yuki saved Mayu's life from her crazy boss, Yuki's homemade chocolate accident, Yuki told Mayu about her family problem, etc, and finally.... THE KISS!
Please~  XD

Like seriously, I can't wait to read about Mayu's transformation.

Looking forward for your next update and......
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Blame my laziness. :on crazygran: I will be busy in the next few weeks so who knows when will I finish Part 2.
Don't be lazy again and don't be gone too long, okay? :shifty:

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Re: [MaYuki] It Started With A Bet Chapter 7 Part 1 05/20/14
« Reply #123 on: May 20, 2014, 01:05:02 PM »
Lol Yuki you lost the bet

I wonder what Yuki will do now

And the bet of her friend is going to end soon

Update soon

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Re: [MaYuki] It Started With A Bet Chapter 7 Part 1 05/20/14
« Reply #124 on: May 20, 2014, 02:25:02 PM »
WHAAAAAAAAAAAT???
YUKI!!! WHY!!! YOU SHOULDN'T END UP LIKE THAT!! HOW COME YOU LOSE THE BET!!!!
WELL NOT THE MAIN BET BUT STILL!!
YOU LOOSE THE CHANCE TO BE TOGETHER WITH MAYU

BUT HONESTLY I THINK IS THE BEST COULD BE HAPPEN,ACTUALLY I DONT WANT YUKI TO WIN THOSE BET,
IF YUKI WANT TO BE WITH MAYU,SHE SHOULD GET HER WITH A FAIR WAY NOT BECAUSE YOU LOSE OR WIN THE BET,
THAT'S NOT THE WAY YOU LOVE SOMEONE, HOW YOU GET SOMEONE LOVES..
(JUST IMAGINING YOU DATED SOMEONE CAUSE YOU LOSE SOME BET WITH HER THAT'S WILL BE WEIRD AND RIDDICULOUS)

KONO CHAN!!!!! WHEN MAYUYU HENSHIN!! OH HOW I WANT IT HAPPEN IN THE NEXT CHAPTER
AT LEAST 2 CHATER MORE NE????


THANK KONOE CHAN~~ AWW MAYUKI THIS DAY~~~

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Re: [MaYuki] It Started With A Bet Chapter 7 Part 1 05/20/14
« Reply #125 on: May 20, 2014, 03:20:49 PM »
awtsuuuuuuuuuuu


try again next time yuki  :(

but it is sad to think about the bet :(

i hope yuki realize her true feelings :wub:

update :twothumbs :twothumbs
mayuyu and rena is <3


mayuki and mayurena is my fav <3

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Re: [MaYuki] It Started With A Bet Chapter 7 Part 1 05/20/14
« Reply #126 on: May 20, 2014, 03:28:59 PM »
Yuki lost the bet... Somehow i feel sad and happy lol  :cathappy:
Will yuki really last for 3 yrs   :?
Omg yuki stole mayu's first kiss   :hip smile:
More i wanna know what will happen to yuki and mayu  :bow:
No matter how impossible you think it is...

You have to try it...

Before saying it's really impossible!

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Re: [MaYuki] It Started With A Bet Chapter 7 Part 1 05/20/14
« Reply #127 on: May 20, 2014, 04:12:40 PM »
Eh? She failed? But she looked confident while making the bet!
Why? Why? Why?
Why Mayu looks suspicious? Hmm?

Continue it soon! Really soon! Aaargh (۳º̩̩́cº̩̩̀)۳

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Re: [MaYuki] It Started With A Bet Chapter 7 Part 1 05/20/14
« Reply #128 on: May 20, 2014, 06:05:05 PM »
Yoohooooooo  :twothumbs
Well it's a short but totally worth it update that you gifted us ;)
Yuki like LITERALLY and NOT ONLY LITERALLY kissed Mayu ♥ ♥ (I'm in paradise here,let me some time to get back to earth xD).
Well seems like the kiss didn't really helped Yuki since she didn't scored the top 10 but i guess she was near right?! I'll wait for the 2nd part patiently to know it ^^
So do what you have to do,and you have free time well,grant us this 2nd part hehehehe~
Thank you for the update and the answer of our comments,as always you take time for us and it's really kind!

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Re: [MaYuki] It Started With A Bet Chapter 7 Part 1 05/20/14
« Reply #129 on: May 21, 2014, 02:33:54 AM »
yeeyyyy!!!!! u're back!!!   :on GJ:
happy seeing u update even its late *late*
kkkkkk~ kidding author-san  :on cny2: :on cny2:
thank for update this awesome fanfic,please dont be lazy again  :on hypto:

hm~~~ yuki failed? so what will happen to them?  :dunno:
i kindda confused with this fiction,should i re-read it?  :mon huh2:
well i thinki should read it,so u better update this fic soon ok? so i will not lost again  :mon thumb:
ganbatte author-san  :mon firecrack: :mon blowhorn:

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Re: [MaYuki] It Started With A Bet Chapter 7 Part 1 05/20/14
« Reply #130 on: May 21, 2014, 03:19:58 AM »

I DID NOT SEE THAT COMING!
WAIT.
There's only a month left for Yuki to date Mayu...
I wonder how they get together before then...
The break-up is going to be something to see!
Mayu seems happy (though I'm guessing she's more relieved than anything else)...
It feels like we're getting closer to present time...
If Mayu becomes past Yuki, what has Yuki become...

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Re: [MaYuki] It Started With A Bet Chapter 7 Part 1 05/20/14
« Reply #131 on: May 21, 2014, 04:49:34 AM »
UWAAAA~ :wub: :wub: :wub:

Lol. Yuki didn't made it in the top 10 and lost the bet with Mayu! :lol:

ANTICIPATION!! :fap

Hope to see more, yeah?

Thanks for the update and hardwork. :bow:

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Re: [MaYuki] It Started With A Bet Chapter 7 Part 1 05/20/14
« Reply #132 on: May 23, 2014, 08:15:26 AM »
yeah ! welcome back konoe-san !!! yuki lost their bet so she don't have girlfriend in 3 year hehe :3 someway, I think she won a bet because she has mayuyu's first kiss hehehe I really want to see their date <3 I wonder yuki's rank ? no.11 ? wait for part 2 ! thank you for updating !
« Last Edit: May 23, 2014, 03:18:56 PM by giotuyet »
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Re: [MaYuki] It Started With A Bet Chapter 7 Part 1 05/20/14
« Reply #133 on: May 25, 2014, 03:31:08 PM »
uaaaaagh!!! it's still about 3-4chapter more untilll (&*(^*%&$&^ happen and it's chapter 7 part 1!!!  ONE!!! PEOPLE!! there's will be TWO!!

but i dont care the story is interesting

i can feel

a flowers start to grow in yuki heart

uh what a lame of me



part 2 and bzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz___________BANG!! chapter 4 already on teh next update

LOL


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Runners, until the race is run
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Re: [MaYuki] It Started With A Bet Chapter 7 Part 1 05/20/14
« Reply #134 on: May 26, 2014, 02:29:05 PM »
If Mayu found out about the bet, she'll definitely be cold to Yuki but...

I CAN'T HELP BUT TO IMAGINE A COLD MAYU PINNING YUKI TO THE WALL SAYING,

"you can never date anyone else..nor fall in love with anyone else for three years...except from me, bakarin."

it's like an indirect way of saying YOU'RE MINE YUKI!!!

omygosh!!!

update please~~

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Re: [MaYuki] It Started With A Bet Chapter 7 Part 2 06/17/14
« Reply #135 on: June 17, 2014, 11:56:32 AM »
Chapter 7 Part 2

With the score of 486 top 10 is....


Huh?....


It's not me....


“You lost our bet.” A voice said from my back. I turned my head only to find Mayu smiling.

This is impossible! I was very sure with my answers! I need to see Akimoto-sensei!

“I will talk to Akimoto-sensei.” I said to Mayu. I want to know my rank this instant.

“You will only get more frustrated if you talk to him.” Mayu said but I ignored her and headed to the faculty room.

I can't believe I lost to our bet. I never lose my bets so I'm really mad right now. But I need to keep my cool or else I will end up shouting at Akimoto-sensei. I finally reached the faculty room and went inside only to be greeted by a smiling Akimoto-sensei. Why are the other people so happy today while I'm in a bad mood?

“Kashiwagi-san I was about to call you through the P.A. but I guess I don't need to anymore.”

“I need to talk to you Sensei.”

“Oh but before you tell me your concern let me congratulate you.“

“Eh?”

“Watanabe-san really worked hard and I saw the splendid outcome of her performance. You insanely improved your grades Kashiwagi-san. Congratulations for being the overall top 11 with the score of 485.” Akimoto-sensei happily broke the news to me.

I'm loss of words to say. My score is 485. Just one point behind the top 10. THIS IS SO FRUSTRATING! I LOST BECAUSE I'M ONE POINT BEHIND!

“Sensei can I see my papers!? Maybe there are corrections. I might have right answers that were wrongly corrected!”

“Your respective teachers to the subjects will give your test papers later. If you have some questions then do so after you get it.”

“But I want to see my papers now!”

“I'm sorry but you need to wait so please be patient and follow the rules.”

“.....” I can't help but let out a sigh tiredly. “Hai. Please excuse me.” I told Sensei and took my leave.

Class started and I was able to see my papers and tried to find corrections but to no luck I found none. I couldn't find any flaws at all! Damn, I couldn't fool the teachers to consider my answers too. They are too strict! I only need one point! Why are they so greedy!?

Although I got a lot of praises, which I used to get a lot during elementary years, today from the teachers and classmates I'm still very upset with my ranking. I don't have a choice. I will ignore the bet Mayu and I made and start to be aggressive with my moves on her.

Just when I was thinking about her I received a mail from her to see each other at the rooftop. She's probably going to slap to my face that I lost....

Who am I kidding? That's impossible. Mayu is not like that. I know that deep inside she's happy right now but she will try to cheer me up because I lost. Mayu is a kind person after all. She showed that to me a lot of times during the tutorial and her part-time job but the kindest act she has ever done to me was cheering me up because of the upcoming divorce of my parents.

Remembering what happened that day always made me smile even if I was weeping that time. Strange, isn't it? I wonder why it always makes me happy. I admit I don't understand myself these days. I have been often feeling strange too but only around Mayu.

I arrived to my destination. I took a deep breath before turning the knob. I have been in this school for the past three years but I have only gone to the rooftop once. This will be my second time coming here. I finally stepped outside and saw how much the place has change since the last time I was here. In the past there were just benches but now there are already plants and trees. I wouldn't be surprised if Mayu actually likes this place. She seems to love nature.

The sun is about to set. Today has been busy. After the regular school schedule, we third years were forced to practice for the graduation ceremony. It took a very long time to finish the rehearsal today so we were dismissed later than usual.

I walked around the rooftop and realized that it's actually big. I walked further and saw Mayu standing at the farthest part of the rooftop watching the sunset. Another thing that wouldn't surprise me anymore. Mayu loves staying at the corners or somewhere very quiet, far from people but the place has beauty in it.

I stand beside her without saying anything and joined her watching the sunset. She took a small glance at me but went back to admiring the scenery. The setting was very peaceful, calm, relaxing, and I can't believe I will say this but the place is romantic too. I regretted not visiting the rooftop throughout my school year here. The sunset is too beautiful. You'll forget about the reality and get mesmerized how beautifully orange the sky is. It’s very very relaxing here.

“It's beautiful, isn't it?” Mayu said while looking at the sky while I nodded in reply. “I would love to always spend my lunch break here but couples often visit this place so I rarely come here. I'm glad the rooftop is empty today.” Mayu continued.

I looked at Mayu planning to only steal a glance but somehow my eyes can't return back to the sunset anymore. My eyes don’t want me to look away from her. It feels like looking at her is much better than the sunset. She is more beautiful than th- Wh-what the hell am I thinking!? Which part of her is be-beautiful? She looks like a big nerd! Calm yourself Yuki!

“The sunset can't seem to cheer you up that much huh and you're glaring at me too.” Mayu said turning her head to me.

“Eh? I'm not glaring at you. I swear!” I'm actually happy because I was right about her cheering me up and I know the sun has got nothing to do with my happiness... Maybe a little. And lastly, I was definitely not glaring at her. “I was just staring....” I said to myself and was gladly not heard by Mayu.

“You still looked troubled.” Mayu whispered.

“......” How can I not be troubled that I lost a bet for the first time?

“I was amazed that your grade drastically improved. From one of the failing students you suddenly became the overall top 11.” Mayu paused a little then she faced me. “I can't just ignore your great effort so, uh.. I'll give you a chance.” She continued.

“Really!?” A wave of hope appeared before me. Yosh! Don't mess it up this time Yuki!

“Really. Listen carefully.”

“Hai!” I eagerly waited for her words.

“Not dating with anyone until you graduate in high school remains but..”

“But?” What could she be planning? And why is her face red? Is blushing because of the sun or because what she'll say is embarrassing or maybe because the sun made me more beautiful than usual and her heart is now beating very fast?

“But.. Um.. Ano... I'm an exception to that.....” Mayu said slowly and her voice getting smaller.

Exception!? She's an exception to that rule!? Does that mean!?

“You agree to be my girlfriend?” I said in disbelief.

Mayu nodded towards the sun but she then turned her gaze towards me all of a sudden with her panicky voice “B-but only a w-week okay!”

“Eh? Why?” I whined for show. Only a week. If that's the case then I got to start thinking where I'll dump her before she dumps me and the bet will finally end with me winning.

Huh? This is weird. How come I'm starting not to feel well? My heart feels uneasy all of a sudden..

“Th-think about the bet ca-carefully. You technically lost and I shouldn't be d-d-dating you but here I am giving you a ch-chance.” Hm.. She's right and stuttering. Well, this must be very embarrassing for her to say. Seeing her like this is so cute-Teh! What are saying Yuki!?

My feelings changes so fast these days, really. At one point I'm happy then I become uneasy then later on I can go back to being happy. What in the world is going on inside me?

“Yuki-chan?” Mayu hesitantly called out my name. Not hearing any response from me must have made her more nervous. Action speaks louder than words so I pulled her to my arms and embraced her. She tried to struggle but it only made me hug her tighter until she finally stopped.

“Thank you Mayu-chan. Even though it's only a week this is very important to me. I will always treasure our times together as friends or not. But this time let me show to you how much you mean to me in a different way.” That's right, this week is very important to me. If I don't succeed I will end up embarrassing myself to the whole school. I need to sway Mayu's heart more and then I will get the reaction that I love to see when I dump her.

“......” Damn, the feeling of uneasiness is coming back again. Am I feeling guilty? But I have always done this and I never felt guilty or pain seeing people get hurt because of me. Something is really weird with me.

“!?” Mayu unexpectedly hugged me back. “Mayu..” I whispered her name.

“Ssssh. I-if you want to co-c-continue h-holding me then y-you better be quiet.” Mayu said as she buried her face on my shoulder.

The feeling of confusion came to me accompanied by the fast beating of my heart. Confused as to why I'm feeling this way at the moment. The feeling to not let go and stay like this with Mayu forever.

I can't possibly!? No! This is not possible! There is no such thing called love!


TBC



Replies:

@olive29: I don't know what happened to you but I'm waiting for your updates too, always. :) Although the last update was very short it sure did surprised everyone. :lol: lol Better late than never. ;)

@Senelcar: Nah, Mayu has nothing to do with it. She's just happy that time. And please do read the incoming chapters. :D

@kcard: As you just read, Mayu gave Yuki a chance. Well now, what will happen to those two? You'll see in the future.  :D

@anakpanti: lol It has been a while indeed. XD Yuki was too relaxed and underestimated the brains of her batch mates that's why she didn't get in. :P Hmm.. Mayu, huh.. You'll get a little idea about what she feels for Yuki in the next chapter. :D   

@Kirozoro: I know you're curious about Yuki but Mayu will do something for her again. Look forward to that. :D

@gek geki: I can't seem to predict the length of your comments. :lol: Mayuyu's henshin to happen in 2 more chapters is impossible! Wait for 4-5 chapters more. 

@MayuxMatsuixMusic: Yuki is sort of has an idea now but until when will she continue to deny? :?

@Akblaire48: lol Your feelings are contradictory. :lol:

@Renshuchan: Yup, she was too confident and in the end it backfired on her but good thing for her Mayu is kind. :nervous   

@soolim: I'll try to get back to my usual length in my chapters. They seem to be getting shorter. :roll: God didn't allow for the good luck kiss to work in it's full power. XD Thank you I'm just doing one of my duty, to reply to all. :peace:

@ryu201: Hah! The hypnotism didn't work. It's almost a month since the last update. XD You're confused? I guess I'm at fault with that. :nervous Go ahead and re-read whenever you can. :)

@yuuyu: You and your gifs. :twothumbs The break-up is something to see(although i haven't written it yet). Actually we're still years away from the present.  :nervous     

@kenjoy12: And she's behind 1 point. How lame to lose like that when you're almost there. :twisted:

@giotuyet: Yup, rank 11. :w00t: Date, huh? :yep:

@Terragen: I miscalculated a little. It's 4-5 chapters more until new Mayu shows. :nervous Hehehe The flower is indeed starting to bloom inside Yuki. :D

@xsilentreader: The hell are you imagining!!! :inlove:  And also, hindi lang sa inyo. Pasukan na din sa amin... :(

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Re: [MaYuki] It Started With A Bet Chapter 7 Part 2 06/17/14
« Reply #136 on: June 17, 2014, 12:56:35 PM »
How Yuki would end it before their times running out is the most awaiting moment. Even it must be freaking hurt, it can't be helped because it's the turning point.

By the way, Mayu is really kind, letting Yuki date her even she lost the bet. Please Yuki, don't give mayu a really bad ending, just a bad ending is enough (╥﹏╥)

Please update soon :bow:

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Re: [MaYuki] It Started With A Bet Chapter 7 Part 2 06/17/14
« Reply #137 on: June 17, 2014, 01:07:42 PM »
hurm~ hurm~
Mayu gave her a chance~
but Yuki!!! You keep denying your feelings towards mayu!!  :angry:
and she still with the bet with her friends ne~ to dump Mayu..
wonder what will happen next~  :huhuh
Please don't break Mayu's haatoo~~  :cry: :cry: :cry:

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Re: [MaYuki] It Started With A Bet Chapter 7 Part 2 06/17/14
« Reply #138 on: June 17, 2014, 01:09:59 PM »
I really wonder what will happen to mayu if yuki dump her?
I hope mayu get more beautiful or more hansome lol

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Re: [MaYuki] It Started With A Bet Chapter 7 Part 2 06/17/14
« Reply #139 on: June 17, 2014, 01:31:45 PM »
Omgawd they became couple..omg yuki stop thinking how to dump Mayu

Update soon

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