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Same here ^ :dizzy: Just woke up and you've given me a headache :wahaha:
But it's nothing to sorry :bigdeal: Another mystery pop out again :on kimbo: :shock: :ding:
What's happen to Acchan in the past and also Mayu :grr:
Such a hard questions for me to think of the answer :frustrated:
Who's the call Mayu... Maybe Yuki but I think it's not her since that one call Mayu is Mayu-chan :on ksweat:
Or maybe it's Jurina :depressed: So many possibilities :scared:
Anyway, update soon, please :kneelbow:
P.S: You update fast :on gay:
« Last Edit: January 29, 2014, 09:03:22 AM by leEwẬy »
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DONT THINK! THE ENDING IS A MUST BE GOOD!!

GOOOOOD ENDING!!


BUT I KIND OF LIKE IF MAYU WAS THE EVIL PERSON PUHAHAHHAAHAHA

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I'm really curious about Acchan. She will contribute a lot to the plot.

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I'm really curious about Acchan. She will contribute a lot to the plot.

I agree with this. If it's Mayuyu wouldn't Yukirin wake her up or is it the teacher? I wonder if Takamina and Yukirin will react with the whole Mayuyu & Acchan situation~

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OS: Mayu and her Seven Friends [Mayu x 7 friends + 1 lady killer . lol ]
« Reply #104 on: January 28, 2014, 06:18:14 PM »
I'm very happy to know that there are those who reads my fic  :yep:

Sorry, I'll reply to you're comments on my next update.  :thumbsup

So I was laying around too lazy doing my homework when I suddenly wanted to make an OS

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Mayu and her Seven Friends

“Mirror, Mirror on the wall, won’t you come out, and show me your form?” a young woman wearing a black dress said as she face a mirror.

“As you wish, Rena-sama” the mirror answered.

Suddenly, smoke came out from the mirror, within seconds, the room was filled with smoke. After waiting for the smoke to vanish, a young woman, with a shorter structure was standing in front of Rena.

“Is something the matter, Rena-sama?” the young girl ask.

“Airin, my magic mirror... Who is the fairest in the land?”

“My highness, you are the fairest in the land”

Rena was pleased with the answer, as the mirror had never lied.

“Then I believe that I can take the Princess’s heart, no?”

“… Is it, Princess Jurina?” the mirror ask.

“It is”

“…”

As the mirror herself was in love with Rena, the mirror did not want to state the fact that Princess Jurina would’ve fall in love with Rena from the first sight. Airin did not want her Rena taken away from her.

“My highness, you are the fairest here so true, But Mayu-sama, with her skin as white as snow, her lips as red as blood, and her hair as dark as ebony could make Princess Jurina easily fall in love”

Airin didn’t lie. Jurina was indeed a lady killer who would’ve fall in love with any beautiful women.

“What?! She is more beautiful then I? Then she shall die!”

From that hour, Rena’s heart turns against Mayu, her own sister. With every following day she hates Mayu more and more. Envy, jealous, and worried grow in her heart taller every day, until she has no peace day or night.

After months of holding her jealousy, Rena couldn’t keep it and ordered a huntsman to take Mayu to the deepest woods to be killed.

The huntsman takes Mayu into the forest, but deep in her heart, the huntsman knew that she could not kill Mayu.

“I know that I am a mere huntsman, but I have admire your beauty for since I was little! I cannot find myself to kill you, please run away!”

The huntsman leaved Mayu in the middle of the wood.

After wandering through the forest, Mayu came across a tiny deserted cottage.

“Oh my! What a cute little cottage”

Without thinking twice, Mayu entered the cottage.

Since there was no one at home, Mayu ate some of the meals. After having a full stomache, Mayu test all the beds.

The first and second beds were too small for her, while the fourth was too big. The fifth and sixth bed was cold. The last bed was warm and had a very nice fragrant. Mayu was comfortable enough for to sleep, which she did.

Not long after that, the seven mistress of the house returned.

One of the young mistress immediately notice that someone had sneak in, because everything in their home was disordered.

“Wait! Someone has sneaked in!” Takamina warned the others.

“Are you insane? Our cottage is in the middle of nowhere!” Yuko laugh at her friend.

“I’m sure of it! Something is wrong guys!” Takamina kept on warning the others, were no one didn’t listen… because they didn’t really care.

“Mou… Shut up, Takamina” Miichan said as she sat down.

“Nee, I’m sooo hungry… Why isn’t there any food?” Acchan wailed as she saw nothing but empty plates on top of the dinning table.

“What? Milky and I always bake some bread and make some soup before going to work!” Paruru said in disbelieve.

“That’s right, we made some this morning, but where is it?” Miyuki wondered.

“I told you there’s something weird!!” Takamina shouted angrily.

During the loud discussion about the lost food, how Acchan was hungry, and about who sneaked in, one of the young women discovered Mayu sleeping in her bed!

“Aaah! There’s a beauty sleeping on my bed!” Yuki pointed towards Mayu who was still in dream land.

The others, surprise by the information, immediately stood up and rush to see the ‘beauty’ that Yuki had said.

“Wow! She’s is exactly the kind I like!” Yuko said with gleaming eyes.

“Hey, hey, let me kiss her!” Micchan said before getting slapped by the others.

“She’s so cute!” Paruru poked Mayu’s cheek.

“Stop touching her, she could wake up!” Acchan slapped Paruru’s hand.

“Guys, she’s an intruder! This reaction of yours are wrong!” Takamina shouted again.

The whole ruckus made Mayu open her eyes.

“Nggh…”

“Good morning, beauty~” Miyuki smiled.

“Eh?”

“Why don’t you use my arm as a pillow?” Yuko smiled cheekly.

“E-eh??”

“Do you want to taste the sweets I just made?” Paruru showed a newly bake cake on top of a plate.

“Ah, gimme some!!” Acchan jumped and tried to reach for the cake, which she successfully got.

“No, why don’t we get tipsy with this wine?” Micchan showed Mayu a bottle of wine.

“Uugh, would guys shut up! It’s clear that she has chosen my bed, so this maiden shall sleep by my side!”

Everyone wasn’t able to refuse what Yuki said.

It was true that Mayu had chosen Yuki’s bed, so she has the right to sleep by Mayu’s side.

Meanwhile, Mayu being the naïve maiden, was mute by the sudden women assault. She lay there like a helpless little rabbit, when suddenly someone tugged her shirt.

“I’m sorry for all the ruckus. But anyway, my name is Takahashi Minami. You can call me Takamina” Takamina introduce herself.

“Ah, my name is Watanabe Mayu…”

“… It’s rare for someone to be in the woods, so I assume you have troubles with your family.” Takamina said right in the spot. “It’s alright, you can stay with us as long as you want” she continued.

Mayu smiled at how nice Takamina was. She jumped and hugged the little leader.

“Thank you very much, Takamina!”

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Rena called her mirror once more.

Airin told her the whole story.

“I can’t believe it! And how they shower her with affection… Uh, how nice!”

“I-If you want, I could love you…” Airin said in a whispering voice… but too bad, Rena was busy feeling jealous.

“Did you say something, Airin?”

“N-No! Nothing at all, you’re highness!”

Rena keeps thinking on how to get rid of Mayu. She suddenly remember how her little sister likes to eat sweets.

Rena baked apples candies, cakes, pie, cookies and so on… but all of them was poisoned apple treats.

In disguise, Rena paid a visit in to the cottage where Mayu lived.

“Would you care for an apple?”

“Aah~ It looks so delicious!”

Mayu eagerly takes a bite of the apple, her ruby lips lost their color and her skin was as pale as a paper.

Mayu lay unmoving, causing Rena to triumph.

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“Please wake up!”

Yuki, who found Mayu lying unconscious shake her shoulders.

After hours of trying to wake her up, Mayu still didn’t open her eyes.

The seven young mistress who had already grown so close to Mayu decided to place her in a beautiful glass coffin and pray for her.

Time passes, and yet Mayu was still in a beautiful pale state of not waking up.

A princess traveling through the land sees Mayu inside the coffin. Enchanted by her beauty, the princess, who happens to be a lady killer, Matsui Jurina strides to her coffin.

“How beautiful…”

Looking left and right, there were no signs of someone else around. Princess Jurina carefully opened the coffin.

Pale skin and black raven hair was indeed Jurina’s type of woman. The princess immediately fell in love with Mayu.

“… You’re mine”

The princess leaned, making the gap between them getting shorter.

As Jurina was only less than an inch to kiss Mayu …

“WHAT DO YOU THINK ARE YOU DOING??!”

Yuki did a kamen rider kick on the princess.

The seven young women had return home from their daily labors.

“Don’t you ever touch our beloved Mayu!” Takamina dragged the coffin away from Jurina.

“Get away Hentai!!” Yuko shouted as she spread her arms, showing not to touch Mayu.

“… I don’t think you have the right to say that…” Acchan commented.

The young women were so angry that they started to beat the innocent (?) Jurina.

“O-Oy, stop it!!” Surprise by the sudden assault, Jurina could only shield herself with her arms. “Girls, is it that wrong to kiss someone who I love?!”

“Hah? And who the heck are you?? Do you even know Mayu??”

“Eh… no?”

Jurina regret saying that.

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“Sheez, who are you anyway, trying to take our Mayu like that” Miyuki puffed her cheeks.

“… Hey, if I think about it, doesn’t a kiss usually breaks a curse?” Acchan innocently stated out.







“THE KISS IS MINE!!!”

Everybody started to rush towards the coffin were Mayu was lying down.

Not giving up, Jurina quickly stood up and followed the others.

Yuko and Micchan kissed Mayu’s right arm, while Paruru kissed her left.

Miyuki sneaked and was able to kiss Mayu’s neck from her back.

Acchan kissed Mayu’s right cheek, while Takamina kissed her left.

Jurina kissed Mayu’s ears…

While Yuki, luckily kissed Mayu’s lips.



“Fuaah~” Mayu yawned. “E-eh? Why are you guys so close??” Mayu continued, suddenly awaking.

“Mayu!!”

“You’ve wake up!”

“Eh?” Mayu innocently tilt her head to the side.

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Jurina was heartbroken.

The woman she fell in love with, turns out to have many guardians that Jurina couldn’t pass through.

A big sigh escaped from her lips.

After continuing her and finding a small village, Jurina decided to sit down on a bench.

Sigh.

Jurina and a girl besides her sigh at the same time.

“Eh?”

“Ah…??!”

Airin was surprised to find Jurina, her love rival sitting right next to her.

“Y-You’re Jurina, right?! The Princess from the other land?”

“Eh?? Y-yeah…?”

“What in heavens are you doing here! A princess like you should’ve went right to the castle!”

“…Er… well, some things happened” Jurina tried to look at any place except for the strangers eyes.

“… I see, you decided to go away from that cottage and leave that girl alone, huh?”

“Uwa, how did you know that??!”

“I have the ability to see things far away…” Airin scratch her cheek.

“A-anyway…”

She took a deep breath.

Airin didn’t have any choices again. She knew that the only thing that would make her beloved Rena be happy was with meeting her with Jurina.

Airin doesn’t mind getting hurt for the sake of her love.

That’s why, Airin will introduce Jurina to Rena… And make Jurina fall in love with Rena.

It was a promise that Airin made on her heart. “Anything to make Rena smile again” Airin thought.

“J-Jurina…”

“Y-yeah?” Jurina turned her head towards Airin.

“… The Princess of this land… Matsui Rena wants to meet you”

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And so, Mayu lived happily with her seven friends (?), Jurina fell in love with Rena, while Airin was happy to see Rena happy… And Airin was way happier when she met Jurina’s assistance, Churi.

Anyway, Jurina married Rena, while Airin dated Churi.

In the end, everyone lived Happily Ever After.

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ok... lol. I know, it's wierd  :lol:
but hey, I had fun writing that... Hmn, I remembered reading a snow white version like that, so it's based on my memory...
But the ending was different... I'm not sure, I don't remember  :smhid

Ok, the reason I chose the girls as Mayu's harem (?)

Takamina: Because there's TakaMayu
Yuko : Beloved Oshiri Sisters
Acchan: I find Acchan and Mayu interesting...
Miyuki: WWatanabe
Paruru: Payuyu
Miichan: Cuz Miichan loves everybody and visa versa  :peace:
Jurina: JuriMayu
Yuki: Because I LOVE MAYUKI  :heart:

the ending was wierd, but I hope you like the story
thanks for reading  :cathappy:
« Last Edit: January 29, 2014, 12:26:16 AM by chroumia »
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Re: OS: Mayu and her Seven Friends [Mayu x 7 friends + 1 lady killer . lol ]
« Reply #105 on: January 29, 2014, 09:24:35 AM »
That OS's actually weird :mon sweat: But it's still great :on GJ: :mon thumb:
Snow White and the 7 dwarves ver.chroumia :mon lmao: :wahaha:
I like the reason why you choose those girls as the dwarves :mon misch:
Yuko, Acchan, Takamina, Milky, Paruru, Miichan, Yuki, they all funny and so cute :mon lovelaff:
I just want to kipnap Yuki, Yuko or maybe all of them home :on crazygran:
Mayuki everywhere :mon crazyinlove:
Rena as a witch :on freeze: She sure suit for that :mon spit:
Poor Jurina, cannot stay close to Mayu because her 7 guardians :on lol:
After all, they all live happily ever after :mon firecrack:
Waiting for your update :on drink:
« Last Edit: February 01, 2014, 09:15:36 AM by leEwẬy »
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NTG - Chapter 17: That Voice
« Reply #106 on: January 31, 2014, 10:45:06 AM »
kenjoy12 : Sorry, hope it's not too confusing...
but, hey, glad you like it  XD

gek geki  : wow, you just gave me a whole new idea   :twisted:
sure, I'll try my best and make the ending good  :thumbsup

Konoe  : Yep. Kind of like the second Main character~  :cathappy:

MaYukiIsLife : Ah, How I like it when I write down your account name  :heart:  :lol:
Takamina and Yukirin... and everybody has a complicated relationship with Acchan. that's actually kind of obvious...  :catglare:

leEwẬy : lol, is it that mysterious??  :huhuh
the one who woke Mayu up is right on this chapter~
Thanks for reading my OS.
yep, I know, it's wierd, right?  :yep:  :lol:
I know how you feel, I want to kidnap Mayu  :cathappy: But Yuki and the others would kill me if I did that.   :nervous


Thank you for the comments guys  :heart:
If there's something you don't understand on my story, feel free to ask  :yep:

Chapter 17: That Voice
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Ring

I could hear a bell ringing from inside my head.

My head suddenly hurts.

The bell is ringing so loudly.

It hurts.

Stop.

Stop ringing…

Stop it… I… can’t…
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“Mayu-chan! Mayu-chan!!!” Someone was shaking my shoulder.

“Uuhn…” It seems like I was asleep…

Then … was it all a dream?

… My head hurts…


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… I’m sure it was a dream.

It’s just an illusion…

Because my father wasn’t like that. That’s right, I don’t even want to acknowledge him as my father.

“Mayu-chan!!” The blurry figure kept on shaking my shoulder.

“… Yukirin …?” I rubbed my eyes.

“Well, sorry to disappoint you but it’s me! The one and only Matsui Jurina!” Jurina was in front of me.

“Ehmm… ok, Jurina… but isn’t your face too close?” I said as I notice the distance between Jurina and I. Her nose was only centimeters from mine. Making our lips only inches apart.

“Aree? You’re right??” A frown appeared above her eyes, her expression showing that she was confused. “You’re sleeping face was so cute that I thought about kissing you… but I don’t remember getting this close” She scratch her cheek.

… Was she just about to kiss me unconsciously? Wow, she sure is dangerous…

“Akh! That’s not important!!” She suddenly shrieked out.

“Well, personally, I think a kiss is important!” I stood up while holding on to my aching head.

“That’s not it! There’s something more important!!” Jurina gripped my arms.

“Ouch! What are you doing?!”

“There’s an Attack!!”

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“The attack… it’s none other than the Little Red Riding Hood!” Jurina said as we ran towards the clubroom.

“Little Red Riding Hood… Isn’t that, like one of the strongest spirit?! But… wasn’t it eradicated by Akimoto Yasushi?”

“… Folktale’s Spirit… It’s only a title. Once a spirit is eradicated, the spirit is gone, but the title will be given to another spirit. Which then after, the new spirit given the title will start to gain the abilities of the former title handler”

“But what about Hansel and Gretel? We didn’t eradicate them” I asked as I remembered the two spirits I first fought.

“Those aren’t an evil spirit, if they keep their good heart soul, then we won’t need to fight with them again… except if they die and some other spirits takes the Title.”

“Then, as long as the title is being held by a nice hearted spirit, we don’t need to fight them?”

“Bingo”

“And this Little Red is …?”

“… I heard rumors, Mayu-chan. The title Little Red Riding Hood is taken by a dangerous spirit…”

“Dangerous…”

“…It’s the Queen or you could call it the Ace. It’s like the highest rank of all spirit. And… well yeah, every spirits has to obey the Queen’s words”

“…”

We were already in front of the clubroom, Jurina knocked the door.

“Matsui Jurina and Watanabe Mayu-desu!” she gently spin the doors knob.

“Jurina-san…” Iriyama Anna was alone at the room. “Quickly head to the sport grounds. It’s the Little Red, and Oshima-senpai is handling her alone”

“Right away!” Jurina open a window and jumped outside.

Being awkwardly left behind with Annin-san, I gripped my uniform and gathered my courage to ask my job. “W-what about me?”

Iriyama-san stared at me for a couple of seconds.

“Watanabe Mayu-san… I’ve seen your battle before, and it seems like you’re not the battlefield type. So why don’t you try and check out the control room?” She pointed towards a door at the corner of the room.

After hesitating for a while, I gulped my fear and walk towards the door.

Creak




The room was dark.

The only thing that light up the whole room was the light from some computer monitors.

Wrong. Not some. It turns out to be many!

I courage myself to go in and close the door, when suddenly I saw something move.

It needed a while for my eyes to adjust with the darkness.

When my eyes were finally able to catch up, it turns out that the moving figure was the raven hair girl, Matsui Rena.

There were 3 computers in front of her, but there were about 40 monitors on the wall.

Each monitor had 4 different video’s… wait, is that from the security camera?

Wow, I guess this is the security camera system room!

“Watanabe Mayu…” she stared at me with a lollypop on her mouth. “Sit down here” Rena tapped on the chair beside her.

“Sorry if it’s a little bit dark, Believe it or not, I think it’s easier to operate things this way” She turned her head back to the monitors.

“Is that from security camera’s?” I sat down right beside her.

“It is…” She squirt her eyes “… Excuse me for a while” Rena hold her headphone and pressed on a button on the control pad.

“Kaichou, I see enemy reinforcement from your west”

“Roger that” Kaichou answered with a robotic voice throughout the radio… or is it a walkie talkie? Anyway whatever it is, it seems like Rena’s job was too keep an eye on the schools land and inform every danger coming.

I kept on darting my eye on the monitor.

Too many monitors… my eyes are already tired…

Wait, is that Yukirin?

She was fighting with some random people… I guess it’s a spirit…

Anyway, my eyes aren’t tired anymore, seeing Yuki sure makes me refreshed~ I’ll just keep on watching Yuki…

As I kept on watching Yuki fight, Rena suddenly called me. “Watanabe-san”

“Just call me Mayu” I kept on watching Yuki fight.

“… Mayu, help me search for Kojima Haruna” Rena said without looking at me.

“Uuh…” I still wanted to watch Yuki, but… oh well.

I tried my best to search for Haruna-senpai. Camera 1, 2, 3… 54, 55, 56… 74, 75... Still no sign of her…

When suddenly I noticed something from camera 102, the school’s sport ground.

“I-Is that Yuko-chan?!” I pointed towards 102.

Yuko was on the ground, beaten by a girl wearing a red hood.

After realizing what happened, Rena quickly pressed the same button as before.

“Kaichou! Oshima Yuko at the sport ground is in danger!”

“Right away!”

“Tck, I didn’t think that Little Red Bastard would’ve really showed up” Rena forced out a rather dry smile.

“…”

That red hoodie… has a cat ear on it…

Wait, isn’t that MINE??!

I mean, it’s exactly the same as the one I left at my room!

“Nee, Mayu, Doesn’t that hoodie looks familiar?” Rena tilted her head.

“Y-Yeah, it sure looks familiar…”

“…”

“…”

“It’s yours, right?” She stared at me with a flat emoticon face.

“I swear, I don’t know anything!”

“Sure… I believe you can’t do a Kagebunshin Justu” she sighed. “But you’re too suspicious, mind explaining the hood?”

“I-I got it from Yuki…”

“Directly?”

“No… Atsuko-san gave it to me”

Crack

Rena’s lollypop fell to the floor and broke to pieces.

Her eyes widen, she looks so surprise.

“A-Atsuko…?” she repeated.

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Yuko’s P.O.V

The girl is on top of me.

I can’t move.

I’m too tired…

My whole body aches…

And there’s this smell of blood...

What’s worst, it’s my blood…

Well, this sucks.

Brak!

Another hit on my cheek. I swear I heard something crack…

Brak!

…Ouch.

Brak!

Isn’t she supposed to be tired punching me rapidly like this?

Brak!

… Why is it… that I can’t fight this girl? This spirit… gives off a familiar aura.

I know this spirit. I know her.

But I’m not sure about it.

Her God damn hood is hiding her face.

And this damn blood on my face is making my vision become red and blurry…

I feel so tired. I’m sick of this.

I want to meet NyanNyan and grab her boobies.

Yeah, that’s a great idea.



Suddenly, drips of water fell on my face.

… Is it raining?

“…Hiks”

Ah… It’s not rain…

This spirit… she’s crying?

Why …?

Damn, I’m at my limit…

My vision began growing black, when suddenly…

“Yuko…”

Someone called me.

That voice. I know recognize it.

Why? Why?

Why am I hearing her voice?

The weight on top of me was gone. The spirit was no longer there.

Fuck. I can’t hold it anymore…

The scene around me began to fade…

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Jang Jang Jang!!!
What the heck would happen to Yuko? Who is the one who beat Yuko? Seek out in the next chapter  :shakeit:

oh btw, Kagebunshin Justu is Naruto's Kagebunshin no Jutsu...  :P

Thank's for all the comments, thanks and reads  :cathappy:
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Re: NTG [MaYuki,Atsumina,KojiYuu,WMatsui and others] - Chapter 17: That Voice
« Reply #107 on: January 31, 2014, 12:08:23 PM »
That red hood is atsuko?

Why used the same hood as mayu?

Should mayu keep atsuko as secret?now rena knew it,she kinda shock,

Well i think everyone will shock if they know atsuko often meet with mayu


What mayu should remember?

Ano maybe is a little weird,is mayu are half human cyborg or something?


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Runners, until the race is run
Soldiers, you've got to soldier on
Sometimes even right is wrong
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Re: NTG [MaYuki,Atsumina,KojiYuu,WMatsui and others] - Chapter 17: That Voice
« Reply #108 on: January 31, 2014, 02:26:01 PM »
What happen next??? :shocked Yuko is beaten up :bleed eyes:, and what's with the red hood? Acchans power??
Will Nyannyan be angry about yuko? Can't wait~ :drool:

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Re: NTG [MaYuki,Atsumina,KojiYuu,WMatsui and others] - Chapter 17: That Voice
« Reply #109 on: January 31, 2014, 05:17:42 PM »
Who is that spirit

Why Rena is surprise when Mayu talk the doll was Maeda give her?

Please updatesoon

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Re: NTG [MaYuki,Atsumina,KojiYuu,WMatsui and others] - Chapter 17: That Voice
« Reply #110 on: February 01, 2014, 08:51:02 AM »
W-WHAAT!??

WHO'S THAT RED HOODIE GIRL????

MAYU WITH HOODIE SHOULD LIKE NEZUMI KEKEKE BUT NEZUMI WAS BAD PERSON,MAYU IS A GOOD GIRL HERE WHO LOVED HER FRIENDS

WHAT MAEDA WANT FROM MAYU??

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Re: NTG [MaYuki,Atsumina,KojiYuu,WMatsui and others] - Chapter 17: That Voice
« Reply #111 on: February 01, 2014, 09:26:10 AM »
So the one waking Mayu is Jurina :mon trudge: The red riding hood appears :shock:
I why she's wearing Mayu's hood :dunno: She has the familiar aura and aslo the recognizable voice :mon dunno:
Maybe Acchan :bigdeal: Mayu told Rena about she met Acchan :mon spit:
Oh no, Yuko's on the edge of passing out :mon oshitwc:
Even though she's gonna faint, she still had that perverted old man's mind :mon duh: To grab Haruna's oppai :grr:
Anyway, update soon, please :on gay:
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Re: NTG [MaYuki,Atsumina,KojiYuu,WMatsui and others] - Chapter 17: That Voice
« Reply #112 on: February 01, 2014, 12:22:37 PM »
Acchan is definitely Little Red Riding Hood but she didn't want to inherit that spirit so now she's battling her friends against her will. :cry: How did that title ended up on her?!

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Re: NTG [MaYuki,Atsumina,KojiYuu,WMatsui and others] - Chapter 17: That Voice
« Reply #113 on: February 01, 2014, 12:25:49 PM »
Acchan is LRRH!? How did that happen in the first place!? Did she beat up Yuko out of her own will!? Will she target MaYuki!?

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Re: NTG [MaYuki,Atsumina,KojiYuu,WMatsui and others] - Chapter 17: That Voice
« Reply #114 on: February 01, 2014, 01:03:18 PM »
Acchan is definitely Little Red Riding Hood but she didn't want to inherit that spirit so now she's battling her friends against her will. :cry: How did that title ended up on her?!


Eh? If that the case,then could it be...

The real LRRH is mayu? Or should be mayu instead acchan

 Thats why  acchan want mayu to remember that,but it imposible,i coudnt belive this though


Ugh what happen 5 year ago?

If yuki ask atsuko to give those jacket and her email,she should know that mayu and atsuko are friend

And yuko is mayu friend,how can yuki doesnt know it,and why yuko wont tell yuki about mayu



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Re: NTG [MaYuki,Atsumina,KojiYuu,WMatsui and others] - Chapter 17: That Voice
« Reply #115 on: February 01, 2014, 01:41:26 PM »
Eh? If that the case,then could it be...

The real LRRH is mayu? Or should be mayu instead acchan

 Thats why  acchan want mayu to remember that,but it imposible,i coudnt belive this though

That is possible! Nice one Terragen. :thumbup

Ugh what happen 5 year ago?

If yuki ask atsuko to give those jacket and her email,she should know that mayu and atsuko are friend

And yuko is mayu friend,how can yuki doesnt know it,and why yuko wont tell yuki about mayu

My head hurts. :banghead: :banghead: :banghead:

Chroumia your updates never fail to make want more.

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Re: NTG [MaYuki,Atsumina,KojiYuu,WMatsui and others] - Chapter 17: That Voice
« Reply #116 on: February 01, 2014, 03:16:08 PM »
 :shocked :shocked :shocked :shocked :shocked

omg omg ..... who is really atsuko!!  :panic: :panic: :panic: :panic:
please update soon .... Thanks for this great fic ...
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Re: NTG [MaYuki,Atsumina,KojiYuu,WMatsui and others] - Chapter 17: That Voice
« Reply #117 on: February 02, 2014, 06:26:10 AM »
Too much mistery.... :? :? :?

 :banghead: ah... my head....

Cant wait the next chapter....  :twothumbs :twothumbs

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Re: NTG [MaYuki,Atsumina,KojiYuu,WMatsui and others] - Chapter 17: That Voice
« Reply #118 on: February 03, 2014, 11:05:59 AM »
Since I'm generally outdated  with everything, I'm lost with  everyone's comments.  XD It seems everyone is playing Detective Conan here  :lol:  My schedule is at the worst state right now but sure I'll have time for this and join the people here smashing heads  :rofl:
my hat is off. saluting.

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Re: NTG [MaYuki,Atsumina,KojiYuu,WMatsui and others] - Chapter 18: No Mercy?
« Reply #119 on: February 08, 2014, 12:37:49 AM »
yuu9 : Thank's for the comment xD

Kirozoro : sorry, still a secret guys xD

gek geki : yep, right here, mayu is a girl who loves her friends <3

leEwẬy : yep  :cathappy:
honestly, I'm also wondering   :sweatdrop:
nah, joking, I have an idea for it  :grin:

of course, because it's yuko here <3

Terragen : that's something that would be on some next chapters :p
honestly, if i became mayu i would've told everybody about rena  :nervous

Well, because of her fathers experiment, you can say that Mayu's a half human robot... or maybe there's going to be more explanation on the future chapters? :p

Wow, you made some great analyze :D

Konoe : well, that's still a secret for now. I hope you can be patient with me because I'll need time to update...

Thanks for the compliment~  :cathappy:

DKA48 : sorry for the long update  :sweatdrop:

achina-chan : Tehe, sorry, I didn't mean to put that much mystery... :p

imteedee : Actually... me too  :nervous
Ganbatte TD-san ~
lol, smashing heads huh...
I remembered doing that while reading your fic  :yep:  :lol:


Sorry for the long update guys, I kind of forgot about what to write down at this chapter  :nervous
Chapter 18: No Mercy?
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Takamina’s P.O.V


My blades were stained crimson as I slashed my way from the countless crowd of spirits. It seems like Jurina was right. The Title Little Red Riding Hood is with the Queen. And the Queen can send as many spirits as she wants…

“Kaichou! Oshima Yuko at the sport ground is in danger!” Rena said through the control room.

Yuko? What in the fuck are you doing, making yourself in danger…?

“Right Away!” I answered as I did a double slash to one of the spirits in front of me.

I jumped out from the crowd with some little bruises on my cheeks.

“Yui, Sakura, I’ll leave this field to you!”

After hearing them answer, I dashed towards the sport ground.

My breath was heavy. My uniform was getting wet as it kept on absorbing my sweat.

Damn it, why am I born as a normal…

If I wasn’t a normal, I could’ve saved my girlfriend!!

Fuck, I’m suddenly feeling so pissed off.

I can’t take a rest. I have to quickly go to Yuko-

“!?”

Somebody suddenly lashed out an assault that came like a lighting.I luckily dodged it by a small leap to the back.

I gripped my sword tighter, getting ready for a fight with this spirit who looks different than the others.

“Who are you?” I glared at … her? Him? Well, he looks pretty for a guy. That is if he is a guy.

“You should introduce yourself before asking for someone’s name” He smirked.

Honestly, I don’t think there’s a point for doing so. But since I have my manners, I guess I will.

“Takahashi Minami. Your turn”

“Minegishi Minami… Ara, looks like we have the same name?”

“Huh, fuck you Minami”

“Fuck you as well, Minami”

We exchange smiles before waiting for the right time to attack.

In a speed of light, Minami -uh screw that- Minegishi swirl his dagger before dashing towards me.

Swish!

Shit, he’s too fast!

The sharp metal made a cut on my arm.

I quickly swing my blade up, making him dodge backwards.

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Mayu’s P.O.V

Rena leaned to her chair and closed her eyes. It was confusing, I don’t know if she’s taking a rest or thinking about something.

There was a long awkward pause.

…I think I’ll just continue to search for Haruna-senpai. I turned my head towards the monitors again.

“Rena-san” someone came in and tapped my shoulder. “I’ve knock onHaruna-senpai’s room but there were no answers…Where should I check again?”

“Well I think you should go to her room and check that place again. She might’ve been sleeping under her table or bathroom. If not, check out Yuko’s room. Maybe she had a night there. Oh, by the way I’m not Rena” I turned my head and pointed at Rena with my thumb.“That’s Rena”

“Eh? M-Mayu-san…”

“Ah, Miyuki’s friend… Shimazaki-san, right?”

“U-un…” she nodded timidly. “You can call me Paruru…”

I smiled. “That’s right, we’re on the same class anyway”

Rena suddenly stand up and walk towards the door.

“Do what Mayu said and check her room once more. I’ll call Murashige-san and ask her to check Yuko’s room” she said before leaving the room.

“Murashige…? I memorized the members, and I believe there was no member with the surname of Murashige” I ask Paruru who was still standing beside me.

“Murashige Anna-chan isn’t a member of the club, but she’s Sakura-chan’s best friend. So she usually visits the club and help out”

“I guess the writing written on the club’s door means nothing huh”

“Ahaha…”

“…Na.. Can’t...plea..body…me…”

I heard someone mumbling something.

“Paruru, did you hear that?”

“A-Ah, It’s from Rena-san’s headphone!”

My god, Rena, why did you leave your headphone like that! What if something bad happens to Kaichou?

I quickly took the headphone and wear it.

“Rena, where the heck are you?!” Kaichou was shouting angrily.

“K-Kaichou” I answered Kaichou’s call instead of Rena.

“Mayu? Why are you…Tck, AnywayI’m besides class XII B and I can’t go on. Please send somebody else to go help Yuko”


“I-I Understand!”

I reached my hand to the control panel… when I then I remembered that I DON’T UNDERSTAND ANYTHING.

“P-Paruru what should I do to call somebody??”

“Eh?? I-I don’t know!”

I quickly lift my head towards the camera where Yuki was.

She was still busy fighting a woman with a bow… Long distance huh, Ganbarre, Yuki!

I look at camera 102, Yuko was alone. The girl who had beat her was gone.

Yosh!

“Paruru, I’ll leave this place on you! I’ll go and get Yuko!”

“E-Eeeh??”

>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>.

I was near the sport ground, just another turn again and I’m there. When suddenly…

Brak!

“Ouch…”

I ran into someone.

“M-Mayu-chan??”

“Jurina? Why are you here?! You should’ve quickly go and help Yuko!!”

“Wha-?! T-There were so many spirits on the way!”

There was blood on Jurina’s hand and uniform.

“Are you bleeding?” I ask as I quickly checked her.

“N-No… this isn’t… my blood… I-It’s the spirits” she stuttered.

Honestly, I didn’t see Jurina on the monitors… but I wasn’t really paying attention, so I guess she’s saying the truth.

“Whatever”

I left Jurina behind and continued to run to the Sport’s Field. After all that running, I finally could see Yuko.

She was lying unconscious on the ground.

“Yuko!!” I ran faster as I was disturbed by the scene.

Yuko’s uniform was stain in red.

I honestly don’t want to think about it, but she looks… lifeless…

I quickly unbuttoned her blood-soaked uniform.

“It seems like a she was pierced by a sword” Jurina was panting as she stood beside me.

“No shit, captain obvious” I was angry at how Jurina would state out the obvious at a time like this.

I quickly focused back at Yuko and examine the cut on her stomach. It wasn’t that deep, but seeing how blood kept on flowing out, I know that it’s dangerous for her.

Without hesitation, I took of my uniform, fold it, and then put it on top of the injury.

“M-M-M-Mayu-chan???!” Jurina was surprised. “If you need a cloth, why didn’t you ask for mine??” she hurriedly unbutton her uniform and covered me with it.

Jurina was right, she was wearing a shirt under her uniform, while I didn’t wear anything except for my… –ehem- well, undergarments.

I gave Jurina a quick thank you while continuing to aid Yuko.

“M-Mayu-chan, it is dangerous here, let’s take Yuko and bring her to somewhere safe” Jurina kept on complaining.

I didn’t answer her as I was still busy.

“Mayu-chan” Jurina kept on calling me.

I felt stress with my situation; my friend is dying while I have to keep on listing to this little girl complaining behind me.

“Mayu-“

“SHUT UP!!” I yelled at Jurina. “Our friend is dying and you keep on complaining, can’t you just shut up?!”

“…” Jurina was speechless. She was surprised by how angry I was.

Honestly, how Jurina kept silent and didn’t say anything was awkward, but it’s not the time to think about that.

I continued on pressing the cloth on top of Yuko’s bleeding stomach.

When suddenly...

“Mayu-chan!!”

Jurina suddenly grabbed my collar from behind and pulled me away, right at the next second, someone was swinging his dagger at me.

Jurina quickly wield out her sword and pushed me behind her, trying to defend me from this stranger.

“…”

The two stood up, looking down at each other.

Swish!

The stranger with a short hair swing his dagger in front of Jurina.

Jurina was able to defend herself with her sword, but a duo slash forced her to jump backwards,

The blade was able to make a cut across Jurina’s skin, but Jurina was amazingly able to throw her small knife towards the stanger’s eye.

Reflex, the Stranger dodge the knife by ‘catching’ it, even though his hand’s was bleeding, it was better than losing an eye.

As Jurina and the stranger kept on fighting, I was thinking of a way to get to Yuko.

“There’s no way Jurina could protect me while I go away recklessly.” I panicly thought.

Slash!

The stranger’s back was suddenly squirting out blood.

Yuki was looking down behind him as he fell on his knee.

“Ahaha, never thought there would be someone as fast as you…” The stranger praised Yuki with a dry chuckle.

He turned his back and faced Yuki “Hah, I don’t believe that I’m losing because of a girl like you…”

The stranger flinched as Yuki raised her dagger once more.

With Jurina in standby, there was no place for him to run…

He’s the villain, so it’s normal if Yuki would kill him… right?

Then why… Why am I feeling that this is wrong?

“Y-Yuki…” stuttering, I called out for my lover’s name.

Yuki didn’t even glance at me. Her eyes were glued to the person in front of her…

Her eyes… were showing no mercy.

I gulped. “Yuki, let him live. We could interrogate him later” saying that had already made my throat dry. I was scared that Yuki would be angry. But she didn’t.

She didn’t even reply. She just kept on glaring at him…

Slash!!

Drops of blood spattered to the grass.

“?!!” The stranger hold his scream of pain, Yuki’s dagger went right through his hand, making it stick on to the ground.

“Jurina, quickly take Yuko to a save place” Yuki, with the aura of a Captain, gave a command to Jurina.

“U-Understood!” Doing as what she was told, Jurina ran towards Yuko and gently carried her.

I only watch as I needed time to progress on what happened… Yuki… didn’t kill him.

I lifted my head and found Yuki staring at me.

“Don’t worry Mayu, even though I don’t know why you’re trying to save this cockroach, but I’ll do what you said” she smiled and patted my head.

“Sakura is on her way. I told her to accompany you to get back to the headquarter, so leave this guy to me”

I was surprised. By the looks of her eyes minutes ago, it seemed like she was about to kill him right away! I didn’t thought that Yuki will accept my idea.

“T-Thank you, Yuki!” I gave her a surprise hug.

“Whoa, easy girl~” She patted my head again.

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Yuko’s P.O.V

It’s dark.

I looked around, there was nothing but darkness.

I can’t even feel my feet touching the ground.

“Where am I?” I asked myself.

I closed my eyes. Actually nothing changed, it was still dark…

Anyway, let me try to remember what happen-

“Fuck”

I started to remember all that happen before I passed out.

“Does that mean I’m… dead?”

I unbutton my uniform to find out something that looks like a scar on my stomach.

But… there’s no blood coming out from it.

Am I… really dead?



“I want to meet NyanNyan once more…!!”

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Yuko, wanting to meet NyanNyan again... is there something she wants to tell to her?

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