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Re: [Louise-sama] Breakeven
« Reply #60 on: December 02, 2013, 01:07:34 AM »
I would definitely have voted for AtsuHaru though knowing they would not win :(.

STAND FOR YOUR SHIP NO MATTER WHAT!  XD (well yeah so unfortunate okay let's blame Louise for once!  :nervous )

@Louise: Can I ask one question? How hard would it be do you think to plan an ending based on the poll result? Sometimes when your story is going smoothly in one direction with undoubtedly logical sense, then the poll points in another direction, how would you change the plot of the story to make it happen without forcing it, especially when everything is settled down into their rightful place where if you change it, it's as good as writing a totally new story?

This is a very good question, it's even worth to bring up to the fanfic discussion thread. I wanna know the answer...and the other writers as well. Thanks for this question.  :)
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Re: [Louise-sama] Breakeven
« Reply #61 on: December 02, 2013, 01:21:11 AM »
She'll find a way around that.
What I'm worried about is, what are you going to do about the sole character with the short end of the stick?
The one without any pairings.

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Re: [Louise-sama] Breakeven
« Reply #62 on: December 02, 2013, 01:48:44 AM »
Then that sole character can pair up with Louise-sama instead XD. You know , a payback for not including Atsuharu in the poll earlier

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Re: [Louise-sama] Breakeven
« Reply #63 on: December 02, 2013, 01:50:58 AM »
 :cow:
@Louise: Can I ask one question? How hard would it be do you think to plan an ending based on the poll result? Sometimes when your story is going smoothly in one direction with undoubtedly logical sense, then the poll points in another direction, how would you change the plot of the story to make it happen without forcing it, especially when everything is settled down into their rightful place where if you change it, it's as good as writing a totally new story? That happens a lot with J and K dramas where they're airing the dramas and filming at the same time. At times the ending just don't click with the flow of the story. One example would be the Korean version of Kaseifu no Mita. Sometimes it strays from your original intention and results in an awkward ending while, otherwise, would have become an excellent story.

Um...
Can I just dumbly laugh at your question? Because I don't really know, myself. Hahaha. I knew it. Just kill me now.
But I expected that to happen beforehand so I got all possibilities laid. I really have something in mind already (the flow of the story). But I don't know how to end it. Hence, the poll. It wouldn't be easy, but I think I could manage. And in this story, the real-life characters have a knit relationship among each other, so I hope it wouldn't be too awkward if the poll result shifted here and there.

Plus, I love curveballs! Don't you love 'em?

Anyway, this is a good question. I'd like to know answers from other writers as well.

She'll find a way around that.
What I'm worried about is, what are you going to do about the sole character with the short end of the stick?
The one without any pairings.

Genius.
Will she end up the heck of a heartbreak? Kill herself? Get killed? Let go? I don't know. I hope not. But let's see how it goes.

Then that sole character can pair up with Louise-sama instead XD

MONSTER KILL! I'd love to! Lol.
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Re: [Louise-sama] Breakeven
« Reply #64 on: December 02, 2013, 01:55:00 AM »


Plus, I love curveballs! Don't you love 'em?



If it curves in favor of my OTP, then yes. Then if you can't manage, just break them all up and turn them into Mariko-sama's harem just for the troll.  :lol:

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Re: [Louise-sama] Breakeven
« Reply #65 on: December 02, 2013, 02:24:06 AM »
I vote for mariko-harem if two of her tallest maidens have a relationship behind everyone's back XD

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Re: [Louise-sama] Breakeven
« Reply #66 on: December 02, 2013, 02:34:26 AM »
*Just passing by*


For the record there I thought author-san already posted chap 1 since it's on the 4th page of this thread :sweatdrop: guess not


Oh well I just hope KojiYuu wins! :cow: ifnotI'mgonnareleaseanarmy 8)2


P.S. AtsuHaru?? Wow that's New :D

Milky: “With Sayaka… I’ve been wondering what she thinks of me.“It’s not that type of relationship, but I wanted to figure out what she thought of me so… I kind of tried to seduce her. And she blushed.”

Sayanee: “I did not!” || Milky: “You did.”

Sayaka: “I actually wasn’t though! I didn’t know what she was trying to convey with that in the first place.” || Milky: “She was kind of shifting around in her seat and looking really puzzled so it was fun.”

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Re: [Louise-sama] Breakeven
« Reply #67 on: December 02, 2013, 02:35:43 AM »
I vote for mariko-harem if two of her tallest maidens have a relationship behind everyone's back XD

Man you're even more evil than I am :lol:, but I like that :inlove:. Louise-sama, what do you think? We've presented a lot of options for you so you don't have to be afraid of running into a corner.

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Re: [Louise-sama] Breakeven
« Reply #68 on: December 02, 2013, 03:00:01 AM »
A Mariko-sama harem. Now that's hawt~ Who doesn't want Mariko-sama anyway? Love her~~

So let's just wait until the poll ends. Until then, I'll give you the whole teaser. Yup. I still haven't released the complete teaser.
Ain't I evil?

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Re: [Louise-sama] Breakeven
« Reply #69 on: December 02, 2013, 05:19:32 AM »
AtsuYuu! AtsuYuu! AtsuYuu!  :heart: :heart: :heart:

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Re: [Louise-sama] Breakeven
« Reply #70 on: December 02, 2013, 12:09:35 PM »
I hear harem. Mariko Harem FTW!! and make her a guy MarioxYuko please?! someone WRITE MarioxYuko, I'm begging you..... :bow:
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Re: [Louise-sama] Breakeven
« Reply #71 on: December 02, 2013, 12:15:46 PM »
I hear harem. Mariko Harem FTW!! and make her a guy MarioxYuko please?! someone WRITE MarioxYuko, I'm begging you..... :bow:

I promised I will write MarioYuko, give it a break, auntie  XD

Ah, the fight for le second place is head to head~  :twothumbs

Maybe AtsuYuu still has a chance to win.... *sigh*

We'll see, nee?  :nervous

and hah, AtsuHaru is a nice ship, I wrote a small mini OS once  XD for which Ashu claimed his love to me  :lol: oh well, he knows I am taken  :roll:

That aside, I shall write AtsuHaru, nee?  XD
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Re: [Louise-sama] Breakeven
« Reply #72 on: December 02, 2013, 12:41:29 PM »
aho, You're ruining my image! ><

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Re: [Louise-sama] Breakeven
« Reply #73 on: December 02, 2013, 12:45:29 PM »
I was there Ashu. I was there. No point in denying :V

OHMY MarioYuko!!!  :deco:  :w00t: YES!!
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Re: [Louise-sama] Breakeven
« Reply #74 on: December 02, 2013, 12:51:59 PM »
I DUN NO WAT CHU TALKIN A BOUT!

Besides, AtsuHaru first!

and as for the current situation, anything can happen. who knows. Maybe Atsuharu will come up from nowhere and beat the two major ships XD

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Re: [Louise-sama] Breakeven
« Reply #75 on: December 02, 2013, 12:57:08 PM »
Oh my gosh! Yes, please! Make a MarioYuko!!!
I declare my support on that ship!  :peace:
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Re: [Louise-sama] Breakeven
« Reply #76 on: December 02, 2013, 12:58:36 PM »
there...there.... Ashu it's okay. We still love you...right? guys?  :D

I'll grant Louise AMNESIA to forget the POLL and PULL OFF MAH MariYuu then  8)

OMG really? COME LET ME HUG YOU LOUISE!!
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Re: [Louise-sama] Breakeven
« Reply #77 on: December 02, 2013, 01:06:48 PM »
*comes running to TD with open arms*
MariYuu~~ :heart:

But NO! Stay away from me, amnesia! I still have to finish this fic for these awesome readers.
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Re: [Louise-sama] Breakeven
« Reply #78 on: December 03, 2013, 01:50:46 PM »
I know the dust has settled but just let me put a few reminders here:

1. The poll for the pairing of your choice is right up there. Cast your votes and wait patiently for the results. Refrain from flooding the thread with posts supporting your preferred pairing or posts rallying for votes. The first chapter is not even out yet and this thread is already in its fourth page.

2. Want to show your love for your favourite pairings? Head over to the respective threads in the Kinjirareta Futari Forum. Debating over which pairing is "better" gets no one anywhere because everyone's view is subjective.

3. Stay on topic. Feel free to ask questions relating to the story; however, if you want to make requests for fanfics of a particular pairing, do so via PM, not in the thread.

4. Respect and chill. No one likes to have a heated argument in his/her thread. This started out as a harmless poll. Why so serious? If your preferred pairing doesn't win, wait for someone else to write a fanfic about them, or even better, write your own.

We all feel strongly for our OTPs but let's keep things cordial and remember that everyone has his/her preferences :)
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Re: [Louise-sama] Breakeven
« Reply #79 on: December 07, 2013, 10:56:40 PM »
when the first chapter begins  :peace:

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