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Too Young: Can You Keep A Secret?
« Reply #60 on: September 22, 2006, 12:49:05 PM »
Miyabi-chan called me earlier and told me what happened to her the other day. She's asking me to go with her and meet Sugaya-chan's classmate so she could return something he dropped. But she also told me that she wasn't really sure if it was him.

"How sure are you that it was Sugaya-chan's classmate?" I asked her.
"About 90% sure." She said.
"What about the other 10%"
"That's why I'm bringing you along."
"Why?"
"So you can cheer me up in case I'm wrong."

Somehow, I find it hard to say no. Even if I'm a bit older than her, she acts and thinks more like an adult than me. We're not really close but I feel happy when she calls and tells me things like this. She seems to have more trust in me than the other girls in our group. Though all of us treat each other like sisters, we never tell our secrets. Miyabi-chan is an exception. She has told me a lot of things, even things that I wasn't supposed to know. I'm good at keeping secrets though. I've never told anyone else about the things she told me.

"Why don't we bring the others along too?" I said.
"I don't want them to know about this."
"Why?"
"I'd be so embarrassed if they found out. You're laughter is enough for me."

She told me that she already told him that we'll be meeting him later. I said that we should go there early so we can verify if it is indeed Sugaya-chan’s classmate. We arrived thirty minutes early but we didn't enter the shop. Miyabi-chan chose a coffee shop so that there won't be a lot of people. A few minutes later, the one we were waiting for arrived.
 
"He looks like him alright and that is the uniform for boys in Sugaya-chan’s school. But what's with the glasses?" I said.
"I dunno. Maybe it's a new fad. Let's wait for him to take it off." she told me as we watched him outside the window. 10 minutes passed and he did take it off to wipe off some dirt or moisture.

"I told you it was him!" she said. "Come on!"

We approached him and I bet he doesn't know that it was us.

"Natsuyaki-san!" he said. "Oh, hello! She didn't say that you were coming too."

He stood up and bowed. I was wrong. He saw right through our disguises. I always thought that these disguises are useless anyway.

"Shh. Keep it down, people might hear us." Miyabi-chan said. "My arm still hurts because of you bumping me the other day. Why were you in a hurry anyway?""
"Huh? What do you mean" he asked.
Miyabi-chan took out a silver bracelet out of her pocket. There was a sign of relief on his face but he suddenly got excited when he remembered something.

"Ah! So you're that underwear girl!" he said as he pointed to her.
"What are you two talking about? Underwear girl? Miyabi-chan?" I felt out of place but the look on Miyabi-chan's face was priceless when he called him 'Underwear Girl'. I couldn't control myself and started laughing out loud.
"I'm missing a lot, am I?"
"Don't call me that." she said.
"I'm really sorry. I didn't mean to call you that, Natsuyaki-san. How'd you know it was me? It was kinda dark ...."
"Your disguise sucks." Uh-oh. I think she's mad. You won't like Miyabi-chan when she's mad. "Here's your bracelet." she said as she stood up and tried to drag me. "Let's go."

But he had something to say.

"Natsuyaki-san, I'm really grateful that it was you who was able to find it. I really thought that I lost the bracelet. Who knows where it would be now if you didn't go out of your way just to pick it up. I know there's no way I can repay you but just tell me that you forgive me and I'll be fine. I don't want to be in trouble with any of Sugaya's friends."

Miyabi-chan decided to sit down. But she was quiet. I tried to lighten the mood.

"That's a nice bracelet. Where'd you get it?" I asked him.
"It's from a new store. I can take you there if you want." he said.
"Nah. I might end up buying a lot of stuff in there. Maybe some other time. How come you didn't recognize each other that night?"
"It was dark and I was in a hurry to go home. Though I had a feeling that I met that girl before. Oh I haven't apologized for bumping you, Natsuyaki-san."
"It's fine." Miyabi-chan seems to be calm already. "When are you gonna give it to her?" she asked.
"I don't know. I was thinking of giving it to her after class tomorrow but she told me that she won't be going to school. By the way, can I ask a favor from you?"
"What is it?"
"Can you please tell me more about her? We've been classmates for a while but I don't have any idea what the things she likes are and I'm too shy to ask her that. I had a hard time choosing this bracelet, thinking if she would actually like it. Can you help me? Please?"

I don't know why Miyabi-chan decided to help him. I guess it's not really a big favor. Miyabi-chan knows Sugaya-chan more than anyone else in our group.

***

When we were walking home, I noticed that she looked a bit disappointed. Maybe she likes that guy who bumped her that night.  Perhaps she was hoping that the owner of the bracelet wasn't him after all.

"He looks better with glasses doesn’t he, Miyabi-chan?" I said.
"Yes. He sure does." she said as she sighed.

Oh no...

Don't tell me...

Though she didn't say anything to me this time, this is probably another of her secrets that she wanted only me to know.
« Last Edit: September 29, 2006, 10:17:09 PM by wordsworth »

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« Reply #61 on: September 22, 2006, 01:55:22 PM »
you are really going to kill me...
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"Ah! So you're that underwear girl!" he said as he pointed to her.
"What are you two talking about? Underwear girl? Miyabi-chan?" I felt out of place but the look on Miyabi-chan's face was priceless when he called him 'Underwear Girl'. I couldn't control myself and started laughing out loud.
"I'm missing a lot, am I?"
"Don't call me that." she said.
"I'm really sorry. I didn't mean to call you that, Natsuyaki-san. How'd you know it was me? It was kinda dark ...."
"Your disguise sucks." Uh-oh. I think she's mad.


i laugh so hard...i'm still laughing...it just killed me ...XD

well i guess it's Chinami:D

great chapter. i loved it. it was longer, maybe that's why... more delicious details.

haha good job wordsworth

the weather is kinda bad here...you made it better

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« Reply #62 on: September 24, 2006, 09:25:18 AM »
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well i guess it's Chinami:D


Really its Chinami? But I thought she was pretty close with Miya.
I always thought their relationship went something like this...

Momo + Maiha
Yurina + Maasa
Saki + Chinami
Risako + Miya

But recently Miya seems more stuck with Saki and Chinami while Risako seems closer to Momo.

Anyone wanna correct this cuz I ain't sure?

Therefore.... haha I'm actually using therefore. Anyway I'm guessing the girl is Maasa.

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« Reply #63 on: September 24, 2006, 03:02:26 PM »
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Really its Chinami?
i'm not sure of that :o  (the only thing is sure, it's not Yurina XD)

Well..Wordsworth wrote that so good that it can be both of them...i'm sure he did that on purpose : to left those two at the end ...hu hu hu

let's check the clues lil_hamz :D

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Even if I'm a bit older than her,she acts and thinks more like an adult than me.


Chinami bday is 1992-05-22 , Maasa's is 1992-07-03, Miya's is 1992-08-25. So two of them are a bit older than her. Now who is childish ?...i really don't know...Chinami always laugh...and Maasa in some making of does some weird stuff XD...

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We're not really close

i thought Miya was close to everyone...so that one doesnt help me XD
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I'm good at keeping secrets though.

how can we know XD

this made me think it is Chinami
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You're laughter is enough for me

and of course this one too
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I couldn't control myself and started laughing out loud.
but it can be both XD

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"Nah. I might end up buying a lot of stuff in there. "
...well...looks like girls like shopping...so...which one of them would do that XD ?

looks like we'll have to wait untill the next chapter ! :D

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Too Young: Enter Adolescence||Parallelism
« Reply #64 on: September 29, 2006, 10:36:33 PM »
It was dark. I was sitting. I heard someone approach me from behind. I try to stand up but two hands on my shoulders prevent me from doing so. The person whispers something to me. Her voice was familiar. I can feel her breathing. I can feel her body against my back. She wasn't wearing anything. She started to unbutton my uniform. I don't stop her. She takes it off once all the buttons were done. But she was not finished. Now her hands start to unbutton my pants. I put my hands on hers, but I don't stop her. I felt something cold on her wrist, probably a bracelet. I guide her hand to where the last button and the zipper is. She hesitates but she does it anyway. I hear her giggling...



...That's when I wake up. I'm always almost out of breath and my throat is dry.

That's not the first time I had that dream. It was always the same dream but some things change.
Sometimes the cold thing on her wrist isn't there.
Sometimes her wrists are smaller.
Sometimes she takes off my glasses as if she knew I was wearing them.

I don't need to see who they were. I can tell them from their voices. I won't tell you their names for you may think bad of me but by the time you reach this part, that's probably what you think of me now.

I do not know if those dreams meant anything.

Now even if I'm awake, I can hear her whispering, I can hear her breathing, I can hear her giggling and I can hear my heart beating.

Am I the only one having these kinds of dreams? I hope not.

Is this normal? I hope so.
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It was dark but I could see the stars in the sky. I was sitting down then I felt someone was approaching me from behind. I tried to stand up but a hand on my shoulder and a bouquet of flowers stopped me. I hear the person whisper something. His voice was familiar. He then puts his hands on my wrists, guiding them to where the buttons of my uniform were. Slowly and gently, he unbuttons it. It seems that he knows that I like it that way. My uniform was unbuttoned but he didn't take it off. He tells me something to make me smile and I actually do. He puts his head on my shoulder and then he puts something on my wrist. Then he puts our hands to where my heart is and he asks me why it is beating so fast...



...That's when the dream ends. I always look at my wrist and there is nothing on it.

I'm afraid but I'm glad at the same time. Why? Because the voice never changes.

I always call him when I wake up from this dream and he always answers the phone. He asks me what's wrong. I tell him that I had a dream. He doesn't say much but his voice calms me down. We talk until I feel safe again. I apologize to him for waking him up but he always tells me that he is always happy to hear my voice.

I wanted to tell him about my dream but what would he think?

I trust him, no I love him, but I decided to keep it to myself.
« Last Edit: October 02, 2006, 06:39:53 PM by wordsworth »

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« Reply #65 on: September 29, 2006, 10:41:10 PM »
Okay, you can start stoning me to death now...

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« Reply #66 on: September 29, 2006, 10:47:38 PM »
*gathers rocks for stoning* wait a minute..I thought Risako and our main character were dating, right?

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« Reply #67 on: September 30, 2006, 07:03:58 AM »
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*gathers rocks for stoning* wait a minute..I thought Risako and our main character were dating, right?


Yes they are dating. Oooh the hero has dreams of the other Berryz girls... naughty ones too. But who can blame him? They are the other Berryz girls XD

I ain't stoning you wordsworth, cuz I need to read more :P

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« Reply #68 on: September 30, 2006, 01:15:24 PM »
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I don't need to see who they were.

don't worry you gave us enough clues to know it...

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I won't tell you their names for you may think bad of me

too late...

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but by the time you reach this part, that's probably what you think of me now.

&#@=$%§

XD

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I do not know if those dreams meant anything.

it's a unconsciously way to tell us all of them love you hahahaha (even if you don't already know that...)

darn i start to talk to him now i should stop XD

that was a ....don't find the exact word...a...well...hum...nice astonishing chapter...


i just hope you won't write too much nasty stuff XD

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« Reply #69 on: October 01, 2006, 07:53:32 AM »
"How are you?"
"I'm fine. But I miss you."
"I miss you too."

"I'm going to have my own photobook."
"What's a photobook?"
"You'll find out."

That's what she told me when we talked on the phone earlier. She's been absent for quite a few days already.

What is a photobook? I really have no idea.

It was a weekend and I had nothing to do at home. I dropped by the store where I buy my manga and asked the manager what photobooks are.

"They're the ones over there, but I 'm not sure if I can sell them to you." he said as he smiled at me. What does he mean by that?

I went to the area he pointed. There were some books wrapped with plastic, stacked on top of each other. A lot of pretty girls, most of them wearing bikinis, were on some of the covers. I recognized one of them. Goto Maki of Hello! Project. The title of the book was "Foxy Fungo". I took one which was open and scanned its contents.

I seems that I looked at every page for at least twenty seconds. I felt really strange while looking at the pictures, almost the same kind of feeling when I'm having those dreams I told you about. I was standing there for a long time but I didn't realize it until I heard some girls giggling on the other side. I looked at them and recognized one of them.

"Murakami-san?" I said.

She took a good hard look at me. I must really look different with my glasses.

"Oh, it's you! It's been a while.  So you're looking at some naughty stuff while Risako-chan's not around huh? Why, are you tired of the usual manga?"
"Not really. I was just checking out what photobooks are." I said as I put what I was holding back on the table.
"Really? I 'm certain that you're excited with Risako-chan's own, aren't you? Come on, it's written all over your face."
I didn't answer her question. After finding out what photobooks are, I got a bit confused. And what she just said could probably be right.

"So you go here not just for the manga, huh, Megumi-chan? You're seeing 'Pretty Boy' over here." her companion said.

"Pretty Boy?" This is probably what I get for giving Sugaya's friends some nicknames without them knowing it..

"Silly, this is only the second I saw him here. Plus I don't go for younger guys."
"You mean he's younger than us? I though he was Erika-chan's age."
"That's what I thought too the first time I met him. He's Risako-chan's classmate. That's what she told me. But I think they're more than that"
"Oh. Are you saying that they're more than classmates?"

The other girl looked at me, and checked me from head to toe, I don't know why. I returned the favor. Her long, black hair was the first thing to catch my attention. I've told you before that I have a weakness for long-haired girls, right? She's pretty. Probably all of them are. She's probably a member of Hello!Project too. But she's intimidating.  The members of Berryz Koubou were also intimidating at first but hers was a different kind of intimidation. It looked like she played sports. I'm not sure. I'm just assuming that because of her Adidas jacket, jogging pants and rubber shoes. Those long legs of hers probably help her run fast. Yes, I checked out her legs, got a problem with that?

She then whispered something to Murakami-san. They both giggled.

"This is Maimi-chan. She's asking me if you have an older brother."
Her companion nudged her on the shoulder.
"Hey, I didn't say that! Anyway, pleased to meet you. I am Yajima Maimi." She said as she bowed.
"Sorry, I don't have an older brother." I said as I bowed to her.
"Don't listen to Megumi-chan, I didn't ask her that."
"So what are you up to? Risako-chan's busy with her photobook right? Are you seeing other girls?" Murakami-san asked.

I don't know how she can ask me questions like that in front of other people.

Am I supposed to answer her question? If yes, do I tell her that went out with Captain and saw Natsuyaki-san a few days back? If I say no, there could be a slim chance Captain and Natsuyaki-san told them about it and I would be caught red handed.

"I'm just her classmate." that's what I said but it's not the answer to the question she asked.

"Come on, we won't tell her." Yajima-san said.

I wanted to run away but that would be rude. There seems to be no escape.

My phone started to ring.

"Excuse me." I said as I answered it.

"Hello. Are you busy?"
It was her.
"Not really. But I'm not at home. Where are you?"
"I'm already home. But I'm tired. I just wanted to talk to you before I go to sleep."
"Have a nice rest then. And thanks a lot."
"For what?"
"You just saved me."
"How?"
"I'll tell you later."
"Okay. Bye."
"Bye."

"Who was that?" Murakami-san asked.
"I have to go home now." I didn't answer her question again.
"That's probably your girlfriend, isn't it?" Yajima-san asked.
"Probably. Nice meeting you, Yajima-san." I said and bowed.
"That was Risako-chan, huh." Murakami-san said. "Oh well, hope you two get along. We were just kidding a while ago. Sorry if we scared you."
"No problem. And Murakami-san, I hid the last copy of the latest issue on that aisle. I was hoping to get it tomorrow when I get my allowance but it's probably the reason why you're here so you can have it."
"Ha ha. Thanks but I already have a copy of it. Just get it tomorrow then. But you better save up for a copy of Risako-chan's photobook."
"Right."
"You really go here not just for the manga! Don't deny it, Megumi-chan!"
"You're silly, Maimi-chan. I told you I don't go for younger guys."
"So you're telling me that your're like Shimi-chan now?.."

They didn't notice me leaving, which was good.

That's what happened today. I found out what photobooks are, I ran into Murakami-san, met Yajima-san and I was called "Pretty Boy."

What else could happen next?
« Last Edit: October 01, 2006, 07:56:46 AM by wordsworth »

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« Reply #70 on: October 01, 2006, 10:54:47 AM »
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Her long, black hair was the first thing to catch my attention. I've told you before that I have a weakness for long-haired girls, right? She's pretty. Probably all of them are. She's probably a member of Hello!Project too. But she's intimidating. The members of Berryz Koubou were also intimidating at first but hers was a different kind of intimidation. It looked like she played sports. I'm not sure. I'm just assuming that because of her Adidas jacket, jogging pants and rubber shoes. Those long legs of hers probably help her run fast. Yes, I checked out her legs, got a problem with that?

I was like Maimi, its Maimi!! when I read that XD I got a little excited there cuz she's my fav C-ute girl :P

I like how you have Megumi popping in at times especially when she's the only one who doesn't like our hero. Or does she? ;)

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« Reply #71 on: October 01, 2006, 01:44:47 PM »
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"Oh, it's you! It's been a while.  So you're looking at some naughty stuff while Risako-chan's not around huh? Why, are you tired of the usual manga?"
"Not really. I was just checking out what photobooks are." I said as I put what I was holding back on the table.
"Really? I 'm certain that you're excited with Risako-chan's own, aren't you? Come on, it's written all over your face."


:ROTFLMAO:

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My phone started to ring.


Safe !!! XD XD XD

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I hid the last copy of the latest issue on that aisle. I was hoping to get it tomorrow when I get my allowance


i would probably have done the same hahaha

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What else could happen next?

i bet a lot of surprises "Pretty Boy" hahahahaha...


great chapter wordsworth ^^ and fast posted...almost made me forget about the last one but too bad you mentioned it..grrr...anyway keep the nice job coming

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« Reply #72 on: October 02, 2006, 11:39:41 AM »
[color='purple']"Do you think he'll like it?"[/color]
"Do you like him?"
"Yes."
"Do you love him?"
"Umm. Yes."
"Then it won't matter if he likes it or not."
"Right."
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"Do you think he'll like it?"
"If he doesn't, then there's something wrong with him."
"Really?"
"Nah. He'll like it. Honestly, I think I'm gonna like it too."
"What?"
"Gotcha!"
"You scared me for a while."
"Ha ha. You're so gullible"
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"Do you think he'll like it?"
"Does he like you?
"I think so."
"Then he'll like it."
"How would you know?"
"I just do."
"Wow!"
"By the way, did you two kiss already?"
"Gotta go now! Bye!"
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"Do you think he'll like it?"
"Like what?"
"My photobook."
"Who are we talking about here."
"You know who."
"He is a guy isn't he?"
"Well...yeah."
"There's no way guys won't like it. Unless..."
"Unless what?"
"Never mind."
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"Do you think he'll like it?"
"Of course. By the way, did he give anything to you these past few days?"
"No. Why?"
"Nothing. Pretend I didn't ask you that."
"Okay."
"Don't worry, he'll like it."
"Sure?"
"Sure."
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"Do you think he'll like it?"
"If he doesn't, what would you do? Will you break up with him?"
"What?"
"Just kidding. Why are you worried? He'll like it, definitely."
"Thanks. Can I ask you another question?"
"Sure. What is it?"
"Do you like him?"
"Yes. But he likes you more."
"It doesn't feel that way."
"He likes you. Just you wait."
"I've been waiting for a long time but somehow I don't feel tired."
"That's probably how he feels too."
"I hope he doesn't get tired."
"He won't."
"What if he does?"
"You can cry on my shoulder."
"Thanks."

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« Reply #73 on: October 02, 2006, 01:56:11 PM »
Aggh! I wonder what Sugaya's present is? I hate cliffhangers:P

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« Reply #74 on: October 02, 2006, 04:39:33 PM »
hahahahaha Variation, what a good choice XD


i really think Green looks to be Chinami here...so...if you used the same color for the Chapter in green...does it mean it was Chinami ?

Blue is Momoko...

Is Orange Captain ?

Magenta is definitely Miyabi hahahaha

Red sounds like Yurina...

i loved this chapter, quick and fun to read. :D Orange part is my fav hahaha :lol:

oh and your sig wordsworth is :heart:  Airi:heart: :heart: :heart:

cool_kickin_dude, i just hope you are kidding :D

edit : mmmmm i was thinking...when i first read the orange, i thought it could have been Maasa...but she didn't appear yet so ...and when i read purple, i thought she was asking herself...but now to think of the color stuff...you havn't uses orange yet, so it can be Maasa, and you used purple for Captain too...
so now i think Captain is purple and Maasa Orange...
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« Reply #75 on: October 03, 2006, 03:20:38 AM »
OMG I read from start to finish. This fanfic is AWESOME. Can't wait to see what happens when he sees her in a Photobook XD
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« Reply #76 on: October 03, 2006, 08:11:49 PM »
I amazed ChrNo, that's a really detailed guess :D
Speaking of Maasa, she'll be on the upcoming HPH with Rika (guest) and Shibata (MC) *YAY!!*
I would have prefered Momo on this epi just for any possible random Rika-Momo moments. But Maasa would be cute too.
Great job on the 6 different conversation types wordsworth. I could imagine the girls talking as I was reading :)

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Too Young: Long Weekend
« Reply #77 on: October 08, 2006, 09:36:31 AM »
Sugaya started to go to class again this week. Even if we didn't say anything to each other, we both knew that we'll be going to her house after class. It seems that that's how it goes. I'm not complaining, actually I'm glad because I kind of miss it. When we hold hands while walking together to her house, when she asks me questions about the lessons, when she solves the problems faster than me, when we eat the snacks prepared by her mom, and when she tells me "See you again tomorrow." As I leave. I miss everything. But it was her that I miss the most.

It's a weekend so I was thinking of asking her to go out. But she called me first.

"Hello. Are you busy today?"
"No. How about you?"
"I'm thinking of getting a haircut. Can you go with me?"
"S..Sure. Why not?" I can't believe I hesitated.
"Great! Meet you in my house at 2. Bye."

She's getting a haircut? But her hair looks fine to me. Then I remembered something. I actually had the whole week but I didn't get the chance to give her the bracelet.

This will be actually the first time we go out together, just the two of us. I didn't have the time to get the manga from the store so still have some money with me. I left home early. I didn't want to keep her waiting.

I pressed the doorbell and she came out after a few seconds after saying goodbye to her mom. She wore a pink hooded jacket that covered a colorful striped shirt, jeans and a pair of Adidas sneakers. She looked gorgeous. Well, she always does.

"Before we leave, I want to give you something."
"What's is it?"
"Give me your hand."

She lifted her left hand. I took it and pulled the sleeve of her sweater down to reveal her wrist. She looked at me. The look she gave was like she was expecting me to do this a long time ago. I put the bracelet on her wrist, the bracelet that almost got lost but was miraculously recovered by one of her fellow Berryz Kobou. I was finally able to give it to her. I didn't plan anything fancy. I just wanted her to have it. It was a bit loose on her wrist but she didn't complain. Then she saw that her name was engraved on it. Now it looked like she was gonna cry again.

"Thank you. It's beautiful."
"Do you like it?"
"Of course. You always surprise me and make me happy."
"That's what I'm here for."

She smiled at me and held my hand and we started to walk away from her house. Her hands were soft and smooth, just the way I remembered.

No more words were spoken.

Now she wore a pink hooded jacket that covered a colorful striped shirt, jeans, a pair of Adidas sneakers, the bracelet and the most beautiful smile I have ever seen.

***
We arrived at the parlor after a few minutes. I felt uncomfortable because when we entered, everyone looked at us and when I looked around I found out that I was the only male inside the establishment. Was it a blessing or a curse? That's what I was about to find out.

Sugaya told me to sit down on the couch. I started to look around again. Most of the customers were cute girls, some of them our age and some of the a bit older. I recognize some but I didn't know their names. With the amount of idols we have, it's impossible to know them all, unless they have a really large following. Some of them smiled at me and I just smiled back at them. Some of them gave me a piercing gaze and it made me not look at them again.

"It's finished. Thanks for waiting."

I turned around slowly. Now I'm glad that I went out with her today. She looked really beautiful with her new hairstyle. And I was the first to see her with it.

"You look really..."
"Really what?" she said as he put her hands on her hips.
I stood up and whispered "You're the most beautiful girl in this parlor!"
She blushed and put out a semi-frown. "You're kidding me."
"No, it's true. Now let's go before they get jealous." she just shook her head and giggled.

She paid at the counter and we sneaked out of the parlor . However, I could still feel them looking at us as we left.

***
We weren't that far from the parlor when we heard someone talk behind us.

"Is that a new haircut Sugaya-chan? And who's the cutie with you?"

We turned around to see who it was. Sugaya's eyes were wide open and so was her mouth when she found out who the person was.

It was a woman with thick sunglasses wearing a coat over some very stylish signature clothes. She's probably an idol too, hence the disguise. However, the disguise she had was nothing compared to what the Captain wore, and even Natsuyaki's when I saw them. It was like she was an undercover agent or something. It was definite that she really didn't want to get known. But Sugaya was able to recognize her.
 
"G....Goto-senpai?"

Goto? As in Goto Maki? I couldn't believe that I was standing in front of Goto Maki. I was ready to kneel and bow down but like Sugaya, I was also frozen on where I stood.

"Hello?" she broke the trance we were under. "I told you before Sugaya-chan that you don't have to be afraid of me." she said as she put her hands on Sugaya's shoulders.
"I was just....I didn't expect to see you here Goto-senpai."
"That's alright. Hmm. Nice hairstyle. Don't ever dye your hair okay." She said as she stroked Sugaya's hair. "Hey you haven't answered my other question yet."
"Oh. About him right? He's my friend."

I'm her friend. I'm not just her classmate. I'm her friend.

"He's your friend? That's nice. He's cute and he's tall. Nice catch." Sugaya blushed as her senpai said that.
"Nice to meet you, ma'am." I said as I bowed down.
"Nice to meet you too. But don't call me ma'am okay? I feel old when someone calls me that."
"Umm, what do I call you then?"
"Gocchin would be fine."
"Really?"
"You have my permission. Say, you two should join me for some coffee. It's on me." It was more like an order that we couldn't refuse. I looked at Sugaya and she nodded. But I don't drink coffee and I think Sugaya also doesn't drink coffee.

She took us to a coffee shop, the same coffee shop where Natsuyaki-san told me to meet her. It looks like idols have similar tastes, especially in bad disguises. When she asked us to order anything we want Sugaya and I looked at each other. I was right. She doesn't drink coffee too. Goto-san already ordered for something and the waiter was just waiting for us.

"Um, senpai, we don't know what to order." Sugaya told her with an innocent look.
"That okay. Waiter, please give them Hot Chocolate then."
"Will there be anything else ma'am?"
"That will be all." Goto-san really doesn't want to get called 'Ma'am'. She gave the waiter a weird look as he walked away. I had a hunch that she won't be giving a tip to him later.

A few minutes later he came back with what she ordered.

"So how did the photoshoot go, Sugaya-chan?" she said as she added sugar to her coffee.
"Umm. It was fun. But it was tiring as well. It was very different when I was doing the photobook with Miyabi-chan and the rest. I felt a bit lonely."
"Better get used to it then." I didn't know what she meant by that. Is she saying that Sugaya will be having another one? But her first photobook isn't even out yet.
"Yes. I should. Umm, can you excuse me for a while, I need to go to the comfort room."
"Sure. I'll take care of 'Pretty Boy' here." Pretty Boy? Not again. Sugaya giggled as she heard her say that.
"Better behave yourself 'Pretty Boy'." she said as she went out.

Now I was left alone with Ms. Foxy Fungo, one of the most famous artists of Hello!Project. She looked really good in her photobook. I hope she's a nice person as well.

"How long have you known Sugaya-chan?"
"We've been going to the same school but we only became classmates this year."
"Okay. So you wrote letters for her right?"
"I haven't actually."
"What did you do then?"
"I teach her the lessons she missed when she was out for rehearsals."
"I see. So aside from being her friend, you're also her private tutor. How quaint."
"I was just trying to help her out."
"Thanks for helping her. Now my next question, how long have you two been 'on'?"
"'On'? What do you mean?"
"She's your girlfriend now right?"
"No."
"Not yet?"
"Not yet. Wait...I mean....Yes....No....Sorry but what was your question again?" That's the problem when words come out of your mouth when you're in panic. You can't take them back. I was able to last Kumai when she was asking me questions but I don't think I can last Goto-san.
"Haha. You're funny. Now I think I know why Sugaya-chan likes you. When I was her age I didn't have time for this, you know, falling in love and stuff. I'm just amused at how much the world has changed since then."
"Oh. So it's really hard being an idol, huh?
"Right. That's why you should take good care of her."
"I already am." Brave words for someone who doesn't even have the courage to ask her out for a date.
"I'll be watching."
"I'm back." It was Sugaya. What a relief.
"Aww. I was just getting to know your friend over here."
"Did he behave?" Sugaya said as she glanced at me.
"Haha. Why don't you ask him?"

We stayed for a long time in the coffee shop. Goto-san shared a lot of her experiences when she was just our age. I think Sugaya was happy because it gave her an idea how things work in the field they are in and it prepared her for whatever might happen. Also, I think it's Goto-san's way of helping out her kohai.

"It's getting late, we should get going." Goto-san said as she checked her Chanel watch. She called the waiter and she paid the bill. The waiter came back with the change but she told him to keep it. I was wrong about her. Aside from having talent and a wonderful voice, Goto-san's is also a very good person. Maybe that's why she has a huge following.
"You walk her home, alright. Take care Sugaya-chan."

***
She held my hand tight as we walked to her house. It was a long walk but we didn't get tired.

Then we stood in front of their gate.

"I had fun today." she said.
"Me too."
"We should go out often."
"Righ..."

She kissed me again in the cheek. But this time she didn't hurry inside. She just looked at me. Even though it was dark I could see that her cheeks turned red. She took my hand and placed it where her heart was. It was beating fast. So was mine. The silver bracelet shone brightly under the light of the moon. The day was almost over but she still wore the same smile after I gave the bracelet to her.

"I....I..." Could I say it to her?
"You what? Go on."
"I.................I wonder if Goto-san's already at home." What a lame attempt. All I could do next was scratch my head.
"Haha. Looks she really got into you. Good night. I'll call you tomorrow."
"Okay. Good night Sugaya-chan. Sweet dreams."

Today was another amazing day.
« Last Edit: October 08, 2006, 09:53:01 AM by wordsworth »

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« Reply #78 on: October 08, 2006, 08:22:23 PM »
I heart your story so much, I sometimes wish I had your writing talents!

My style is odd and strange.

Yours look so professional and I envy your skills Wordsworth

I've stalked this story before I became a member because it was so damn adorable (and it was one the first stories that didn't involve the writer getting the idol girl or it was an inter-group relationship)

I don't think that made much sense! haha
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« Reply #79 on: October 08, 2006, 09:00:34 PM »
what a cute chapter :cry:

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"Hello. Are you busy today?"
"No. How about you?"
"I'm thinking of getting a haircut. Can you go with me?"
"S..Sure. Why not?" I can't believe I hesitated.
"Great! Meet you in my house at 2. Bye."

hahahaha...poor guy...oh well i guess it's better than nothing :p

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"Before we leave, I want to give you something."
"What's is it?"
"Give me your hand."
[...]Then she saw that her name was engraved on it. Now it looked like she was gonna cry again.

"Thank you. It's beautiful."
"Do you like it?"
"Of course. You always surprise me and make me happy."
"That's what I'm here for."


very cute part :cry:


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"You look really..."
"Really what?" she said as he put her hands on her hips.
I stood up and whispered "You're the most beautiful girl in this parlor!"
She blushed and put out a semi-frown. "You're kidding me."
"No, it's true. Now let's go before they get jealous." she just shook her head and giggled.


geez...i'm speechless...this sentence killed me XD ...awesome

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It was a woman with thick sunglasses wearing a coat over some very stylish signature clothes.

at the moment i saw that word, it remind me Our Cursed Gift and Maki Goto came on my mind. i can't believe it was really her XD


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I'm her friend. I'm not just her classmate. I'm her friend.

a good improvement, isn't it :D ...maybe when he'll meet Yuko she will say he is her boyfriend...

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"Sure. I'll take care of 'Pretty Boy' here." Pretty Boy? Not again.

exactly what i thought :lmao:
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"Now I was left alone with Ms. Foxy Fungo

:ROTFLMAO:

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"I'm back." It was Sugaya.

safe! XD hahaha...poor boy...poor boy...always getting saved by her heh...

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She took my hand and placed it where her heart was. It was beating fast.

what a innocent gesture :D  

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"I....I..." Could I say it to her?
"You what? Go on."


now the mystery is to find what he wanted to tell her, huh ? :P

lovely chapter wordsworth :heart:

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