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Offline minami_pops

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MY DEAR FAILURE DADDY, SWEETEST GIFT
« on: March 12, 2014, 05:27:57 PM »
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Okay now I will make the second fanfic.
maybe a little bored and a little touch of violence..
i want make it one shot but if i had time hehehe
if it not I would divide it into several chapters
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Main Characters:
Takamina
Yukirin
Mayuyu
Yuuko


« Last Edit: March 13, 2014, 07:32:43 AM by minami_pops »
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Offline mgxx

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Re: MY DEAR FAILURE DADDY, SWEETEST GIFT
« Reply #1 on: March 13, 2014, 10:37:57 AM »
Who will be the mom?? Atsuko isn't she?

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Re: MY DEAR FAILURE DADDY, SWEETEST GIFT
« Reply #2 on: March 13, 2014, 04:42:03 PM »
:jphip:


Main Characters:
Takamina
Yukirin
Mayuyu
Yuuko




I hope their couple would be Acchan, Sae, Jurina, and Nyan Nyan...  :prayers:

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Re: MY DEAR FAILURE DADDY, SWEETEST GIFT
« Reply #3 on: March 13, 2014, 04:58:14 PM »
here i made the daddy had divorced..
i cant tell the detail..
ok lets begin..



One day a teenage girl walking home after a day of learning at school. simple girl long black hair, tall, white and smooth skin.

but the girl often gets a bad treatment from some of her friends at school. sometimes she feels like people do not need to be seen and considered, it becomes difficult to make friends at school, the school is well-known. lucky he was able to attend school as good as it was.

There is suddenly pushed her from behind until she fell. "look who just dropped?" a girl laugh. "n .. Noro, why did you push me? anything wrong?" the girl said as she stood up and dusted her clothes were dirty "I'm sorry I did not see you there" said Noro relaxed. "Noro, come on, do not be rude to Yuki" said another girl helps Yuki to stand. "thank you kimi" Yuki bowed grateful. "hm I hear tomorrow is your birthday, right?" said Kimi smiled. "ah you know my birthday? I think no one cares about me at school" Yuki a little surprised, "yeah, but you're not our friend" Noro snapped out "ah .. but I'd love to be friends with you" yuki give a sad face "kay, you can be our friends if you invite us to your birthday party. if not, you're just looking for another friend" kimi said with a serious face.

Kimi and Noro passed leaving Yuki who have not had an answer. Yuki just stood there silent for a few moments until she walked back toward the house.

"oi kimi, are you sure you will make friends with Yuki? she's not our level" said Noro upset. "huh, you are stupid or pretending to be stupid?" kimi replied feel annoyed with her ​​friends, "What do you mean?" Noro asked "just look at her usual appearance was, did she could make a party like us?" said Kimi arrogant. "anyway if she is successful, we can use her intelligence to help us complete all school assignments easily" added her, Noro nodded and smiled evilly.


[Yuki POV]

"party? how I invited them while I was never to celebrate a party my own" i thought when i got home.

my name is Takahashi Yuki. yeah .. this is my house, is very small, made ​​of wood salvaged, oh my father was a female but she is very manly, that's why I call her daddy. Takahashi Minami is her name, she married a beautiful woman it's my mother. there is no reason to explain why they want me to get married and divorce.

My father liked to collect goods that have been abandoned, you could say 'rubbish' we are not rich people who can buy whatever we want. sometimes I also want to have a new and good stuff, I always get the garbage that the father had brought from the outside, she's just cleaning up and fixing it for me. My father loved to make something from garbage she had collected, probably because we were not able to buy anything except food and a little money for school fees.

"Yuki, daddy come home!" someone shouted from outside. "daddy.." I ran towards him and hugged him. "i'm hungry let's eat, you'd be hungry too right?" Minami said smiling softly as she stroked  yuki's head.


[normal POV]

after eating, they sat outside as usual, staring at the bright sky and chatting. minami always talk about herself to Yuki and Yuki loves that story..

but this time its not as usual, Yuki seen getting bored and not excited.

"father, hm .. a .." Yuki looked down and did not continue her words. "What is it? you have a problem? tell me" said Minami worried, "ah .. about my birthday.. do you have something.. for me?" yuki said a little nervous. "oh.. you can't wait to see your gift?" minami laughing at her daughter. "I could not forget your special day, I've made a special gift for your seventeen birthday " minami stood and went to her room took the special gift

"I wish my father had more money for my birthday this time" Yuki said expectantly and waited for minami curiosity and heart started pounding. "ah yuki, your gift is not finished yet, you may have to wait until tomorrow" Minami said half shout from the room. "dad, what did you make for me?" yuki approached Minami in her room.

Yuki closes her mouth when she saw the contents of her father's room, she saw iron like-human, having eyes, hands, feet, even some already have skin that either made ​​of something that is Yuki didn't know, maybe rubber. Minami smiled nervous when yuki approached "a .. This is your gift, I made ​​it for you so you do not feel lonely at home when I'm not there, I'm creating this robot to be your friend and .." Yuki cut Minami's words before Minami finish her sentence. "Can you give me a more worthy object? it's my special birthday, you still give me garbage and junk .. I want to party, celebrate my birthday party with my friend, why did you just give me this garbage?" yuki cursing, emotions began uncontrollably, she began to burn with anger, it's the first time Yuki shouted at her father.

Minami surprised to hear the words of her daughter, she did not think yuki would mad at her like this. her legs began to numb, her heart trembled, her eyes shined pain in her heart, she leaned against the wall room without saying anything.

"I want to be like everyone else, I also want to feel so special in my special day, and you can only give me garbage every year. I HATE YOU! why do I have to be born into a poor man like you!" Yuki ran out with the flames burning her heart, ran without knowing where she go.

"go-gomen.. gomen nasai" it only come out Minami's mouth, her eyes began to wet, tears flowed uncontrollably.







nah.. inm done here for today, i'll update this soon.
I even forgot to continue the previous story.  :grin:
soon i'll update my first fanfic.
arogatou gozaimasu
Jā matane~
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Offline cisda83

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Re: MY DEAR FAILURE DADDY, SWEETEST GIFT
« Reply #4 on: March 13, 2014, 05:22:55 PM »
Poor Minami for being told off like that by her own daughter

How did Minami be able to have a child with another woman?

What's going to happen to Yuki and Minami?

Can't wait

Thank you for the update

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Offline edogawa4869

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Re: MY DEAR FAILURE DADDY, SWEETEST GIFT
« Reply #5 on: March 15, 2014, 06:42:30 AM »
yuki is a Bad daughter...  :smhid

Poor minami...

I hope she can find a good mother for Yuki...
(good mother = acchan..  :P)

Offline KaoriChan

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Re: MY DEAR FAILURE DADDY, SWEETEST GIFT
« Reply #6 on: March 15, 2014, 09:49:53 AM »
iron like-human... Mayuyu?? :?
and Minami  :cry:

Update Soooon~

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Offline minami_pops

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Re: MY DEAR FAILURE DADDY, SWEETEST GIFT
« Reply #7 on: March 20, 2014, 04:44:32 PM »
Oiiii.......
i'm back 
yeyyy  :shakeit:


technological advances can make her pregnant.
Well think of it like that  :grin:


Chapter 1



[Yukiri POV]

I ran without knowing where. I do not care what I say to my father, I just wanted to make friends. I have to celebrate my birthday, if i didn't do that they will stay away from me again. i just want to have a real friend not robot or doll, I'm not a kid who always play with toy.

I think I've run too far away from home, Daddy will not be able to chase me up here. I'm tired of running, I do not have the money to buy a drink, I'm thirsty but I do not know anybody here. if I go home daddy definitely will give me that cyborg not a party. I just want him to understand what I need.


now it was getting late I began to starve, I was determined not to go home tonight if daddy did not make my party. "ahh I'm hungry, cold and... lonely" I said, hugging my knees and body were getting cold. "i miss you" i whisper to myself.

"eto.. you are yuki takahashi right?" i hear someone from afar as approached me. "who are you? don't get closer!" i warn. i saw a figure like a girl, black twin tail hair, cute, sparkle eyes. "stop there!" as i stood up.

"I'm your friend, watanabe mayu" she said "i never know you, i never see you, don't lie to me" i cross my hand on my chest. "we've met already, you are the girl who yelled at my master, you scold her, you leave her and know she cry all day long because of you" she stare at me without any expression. "you.. how did you know that?" i surprised to hear her words.

"let me explain to you" now she's getting closer to me.


[FLASHBACK]

[Mayuyu POV]

i saw her crying every night, she made me with her heart for her beloved one. i only can stare at her, i can't move but i remember what i saw at the first she turn me on.

"I'm sorry if I couldn't give a better gift, I can only collect garbage to be assembled into the robot, daddy hope you will accept this. daddy will make you happy, daddy struggling to create robot mayu so you can have a friend who can protect , love you and play with you. I'm sure you will receive this gift as usual, I made ​​this just for you wholeheartedly yuki" she smile as her tears drop on my right hand. it's warm and lovely tears, i want to hug her as i completely perfect to move.

she cried all night when created me. until that time came, I saw her cry harder, she's scold by her daughter. I want to move but can not, I'm not perfect to move. it's hurts me to see her weak and helpless when her daughter leave after scolded her.

[END FLASHBACK]


"you..are that robot?" yuki covered her mouth as she realized that mayu is the robot in minami's room. "now you should go back to her, she miss you a lot, i won't see her crying again cause of you" mayu grab yuki's wrist but yuki still didn't want to go home, she wants her party. "i don't need cyborg like you! what you can do for me huh?" she shouted "i had weapon to attack who wants to hurt you, i can be your shield to protect you, that's why my master made me" mayu force yuki to follow her.

unfortunately yuki can't do anything, she can't fight against this cyborg. that cyborg is really strong behind her cute face. "you are lucky have an awesome father like her, she loves you more than herself. if you didn't come to apologized to her, I do not guarantee if one day she went away from you and you will regret it later. money can not be compared with your happiness, that's what your father thought" mayu lecture yuki all the way. "i'm tired to searching on you all day long, you trouble me" she complaining "i guess she's right, I promise my daddy not to complain against whatever I get" yuki thought to herself.


NEXT MORNING

their steps suddenly stopped when they saw the house in their place was destroyed and razed to the ground. "W-what happened here?" yuki clasped mayu's hands as her eyes getting wet. her body felt weak, she started looking for minami and called her name but she did not find her. their house was destroyed, the only remaining is building debris. "ahh Yuki here you are, where's your father? we should leave this place because that rich businessman displaced our place, they would build a big mall here without thinking about our predicament" a neighbor approached carrying a child.
 
"what? then where's my daddy? where did she go? i should find her" yuki run to the place they always spent time together but she didn't find her. yuki called her name and ask every neighbor she knew but she got nothing. she start to cry, she was regret had to leave minami, she feels guilty and panicked. she was looking for minami all the places she knows. mayu help in searching for her father, she was worried if something bad happens to her master.

"where did you go master? i've told you to stay at home but why you leave? i've promise to bring your daughter back into your arms"


uggh i thought i should stop here.
it's late to going home.  :sweatdrop:
thanks for read also the review.
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