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Re: Engagement-16 part2-update-16/02/2015
« Reply #100 on: February 17, 2015, 10:35:17 AM »
Jurina went missing? Oh that is bad.
It was really funny with the JKT bumping incident. Unfortunately I don't know much about JKT --

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Re: Engagement-16 part2-update-16/02/2015
« Reply #101 on: February 17, 2015, 03:10:20 PM »
What happen with jurina?
And wow you just added two characters from JKT

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Re: Engagement-16 part2-update-16/02/2015
« Reply #102 on: February 18, 2015, 02:18:55 PM »
eh? what's wrong with jurina? why she so sudden left to forest? mayu bad feeling...
is there something related to the fox doll...or what?
*curious

there are ve & kinal jkt48, are they on date too? hehe
so, the author is an indonesian?
come to jakarta, and let's see the jkt48's theater :)
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Kashiwagi Yuki, Matsui Rena, Yagami Kumi, Okada Nana, Shinobu Mogi, Thalia, etc.
overall, i like all members hehe

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Re: Engagement-16 part2-update-16/02/2015
« Reply #103 on: February 18, 2015, 05:33:11 PM »
there are ve & kinal jkt48, are they on date too? hehe
so, the author is an indonesian?
come to jakarta, and let's see the jkt48's theater :)
Semangat author! :)

u from indonesia too? :shock:
wah!!!! banyak orang indo disini!!!! :ding:
cool!!!!!
ayo ngumpul di theater trus nonton jkt bareng2  :on lol:

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Re: Engagement-16 part2-update-16/02/2015
« Reply #104 on: February 19, 2015, 01:05:59 AM »
u from indonesia too? :shock:
wah!!!! banyak orang indo disini!!!! :ding:
cool!!!!!
ayo ngumpul di theater trus nonton jkt bareng2  :on lol:

yes, i'm from indonesia too :)
yeah, i found some authors and readers here are indonesian hahaha
asik pada mau ngumpul teater jkt48 nih? pada nonton konser jktxakb ga nih? hihihi
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Re: Engagement-16 part2-update-16/02/2015
« Reply #105 on: February 19, 2015, 02:46:36 AM »
eh? what's wrong with jurina? why she so sudden left to forest? mayu bad feeling...
is there something related to the fox doll...or what?
*curious

there are ve & kinal jkt48, are they on date too? hehe
so, the author is an indonesian?
come to , and let's see the jkt48's theater :)
Semangat author! :)


Hiii about ve & kinal, your guess~~ hehe
Iyaa saya orang Indonesia :) pengen banget nonton theater, tpi lagi gak bisa, jauh pula
Cuman bisa pantau dari layar kaca aja :)
Heyy yg nonton konser akb48xjkt48 bagi2 ceritanya yes! 8)
just love to read alot of fiction story

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Re: Engagement-16 part2-update-16/02/2015
« Reply #106 on: February 19, 2015, 07:41:35 AM »
Yang theateran kmrn hokie soalnya katanya kemarin shimada haruka perform di theater  :frustrated:
Pengen nntn konser jkt x akb tp apa daya,kondisi keuangan tidak mendukung  :on speedy:
Gmn klo kita culik aja member akb'y?   :kekeke: :mon psst: :on lol: :on lol:

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Re: Engagement-16 part2-update-16/02/2015
« Reply #107 on: February 19, 2015, 11:38:52 AM »
Jurina make thing complicated

Mayu like a supernatural being,he could sense dangerous thing
RENA-SAMA!!!

YUKI-SAMA!!!

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Re: Engagement-16 part3-update-26/02/2015
« Reply #108 on: February 26, 2015, 10:44:31 AM »
sidny48 hiii thanks for read and comment here!! yah yah MaYuki will get more moment for later update, but for now let's enjoy wmatsui moment  :twothumbs
cisda83 I glad you enjoying their moments  :) thanks for read and comment here!!
ryu201 Yooo you'll know in this update, thanks for read and comment here!!  :)
teru_fi I'm happy you enjoy the bumping moment hehe, its okay, I just added them here and about Jurina here's the answer... thanks for read and comment here!
Mayukishipper about Jurina, you'll find here, yeah its just popped in my mind so just added them here hehe thanks for read and comment here!
sastio13 hee something with the foxy doll...idk :p venal on a date~~ XD thanks for read and comment here!
kurogumi hmm..I Mayu's not, he just overprotective toward his little sister, you could say it's sibling's feeling? hehe  thanks for read and comment here!

so here's the update minna!!! hope you still enjoying this and the later later later :)
and sorry for the mess  English  :)



Chapter 16 part3

Yuko was wondering when her wife took longer time for just making a tea for them both. After dinner, they planned to have a moment at the balcony of their bedroom.

Waiting longer she got worry over the older woman, she then stood up and thinking to take a look at her wife. Walking down the downstairs she headed toward their kitchen.

“NyanNyan, why took you so long just to make…hey, you spill up the water!” yelled Yuko in surprised and running at the taller woman there that was pouring water to a cup.

Startled by the yell, the beautiful cat-like woman pulled up the kettle and settled it down. She’s surprised at the spilling water over the cup. Yuko took napkin and wiped out the water. After cleaning it she washed her hand and get back to her wife.

“Hey, what’s happened?” asked Yuko worriedly. She had known that her wife was air-headed one but, she’s rarely showing that side of her. Only when she’s getting worried over something or thinking about bad thing she’s become like that.

Haruna looked at her short wife that was looking at her in concern and worry, she let out a light breath and palmed her face.

“Hey…” called Yuko again softly. “Haruna, look at me, something bothering you?”

“Uhm…Yuu-chan, I…is Ren had called us?” asked Haruna instead after Yuko pulled her hand from her face so she can look at her face.

Yuko furrowed her eyebrow at the question, but then shook her head slightly. “No, he didn’t call us since they’re going. You’re worried about them? You want me call them?”

“Un. I want to know how’s they doing there.”

“Okay. Let’s just go to living room then.”

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“Jurina, wait!!” called Ren for the nth times already. He’s hardly stepping on the ground with roots, grass, and slipy land tried his best to following after a girl that was quite far away from him. He’s wondering, curiously thinking how that girl wearing a kimono could walking that fast also in this place like this, and why the heck she’s isn’t stopping every time he called for her, it’s looks like she’s didn’t hear him at all.

“Why are you keeps heading toward the forest, Jurina? There’s dangerous, hey! Comeback Jurina!!” called Ren again. Still not any respond he got, the girl only just keep walking a head, to the deep of the forest. Gah! It’s bad!!

Ren tried to quick his steps, carefully stepping on the slippy ground. Their distance were slowly closer and Ren let a slight sigh at that but..

“JURINA STOP!!!”

Never had he known that after the seemed a long time and how far they’re going already, that the girl’s direction had brought them to the deep in the forest until Ren could see, although by the dimly light in the forest is and only by the illuminate of the moon, there’s a head just a couple steps again was a valley…and by the time he realized that, Jurina’s foot had touch the edge of it…

Oh My God!!

Grep!!

“Oh my, Jurina!!!” Ren can’t help but shouted out his might.

Just in split of seconds or this girl will fall to the deep darkness there. He hardly pushing his self forward and managed to catch the girl’s left hand. And now their position is Ren was in his tummy with one hand fortunately gripping on a quite strong root while the other hand was holding tightly Jurina’s left hand. The girl though, she’s seems in conscious state but there’s no expression in it. It was likes she did not aware what were happens.

“Jurina!! Wake up, Jurina!!!” he couldn’t understand why he called the girl to wake up but he’s feeling that this girl was beyond in hypnosis or something like that.

“Jurina!!” he called again and again, shocking their hands but keep his holding tight, did not want to the girl to slip and lose from his hold.

“God, what happened to you, Jurina? WAKE UP!!”

Some minutes later finally the girl getting her awareness back, he was glad the girl seemed to getting herself back but…

Jurina’s head slowly register back, she regaining her conscious like she has been in deep sleep, looking around her…

“KYAAAAAAAAA!!!!!” and let out a great scream.

“Jurina! JURINA!!!” Ren had to hold tighter or else they both will fall due to the girl’s shake her body and screaming in panic and fear.

“OH GOD!  JURINA CALM DOWN!!!” Ren shouted his all out, tired to get the girl’s attention and hoping she’s stop her shaking body because that’s not help him at all.

Jurina startled at the loud shout and finally getting herself back again, slowly she turned her head up realizing that she holding up by a guy, her senpai.

“Se..sen..hiks, hiks..senpai..” Jurina started to crying, tears falling down on her cheeks wetting her face along with the rain that also started to fall. She’s looking at the older guy that was hardly holding her hand though the rain that soaking them.

“Jurina, calm down okay…calm down…” said Ren tried to calm the crying girl.

“Ko..hiks..kowa…ii..hiks…kowaii senpai, I don’t want to fall..hiks..”

“No no, you’re not. I wont let you, I’ll not let you..” Ren adjusting his grip on the root he’s holding on, hoping it still strong for him to hold on longer.

“Okay, Jurina…hey Jurina, listen to me,” called Ren softly, a bit relieved that the girl could tame herself. Hearing the soft called, Jurina focusing her attention toward the older guy.

“You heard me?” a nod the girl’s responded. Her face was a bit hurt due to the rain that hitting on her face when she looked up.

“Ugh, okay…because my right hand’s gripping on the root, I’ll swing your body left and right to lessen the weight and at my count I’ll pull you up and you’ve to circle your right hand around my neck, understand? Don’t worry, I’ll definitely lift you up and won’t let you fall,” said Ren telling his plan to the girl.

“But..but..what if, what if one of us slip and..and..we..”

“Shh…Jurina, look at me, hey..” called Ren softly. “Believe me, look at my eyes. I’ll not let you fall, okey. Believe in me.”

Jurina still wavering but the longer they’re at this stated, Ren can’t hold longer and they both will fall to the dark valley. Jurina shake her head a bit but then looked up, staring at the older guy’s eyes. She see the determined there and can believe on him. She gave the older guy a firm nod.

“I..I believe in you, senpai.”

“Great, no ready yourself…I’ll swing your body now.”

By the said, Ren started to swing Jurina’s body, carefully so he still can hold tightly the girl’s hand.a bit more swing and he can feel that her weight was not that heavy.

“Okay, Jurina..I’ll count, 1…2…3 push yourself up!!”

And she does what he told.

Grep!

Ren had to hold his cry off for the girl nearly chocked him out, but he was glad that she had clung to his neck then he quickly let Jurina’s left hand go and wrapped it around the girl’s body while Jurina circled her two hands now around his neck. Using all of his strength, Ren managed to pull the girl up and brought their body moved away from the edge of the valley. Not ready yet to steady his self again, Ren stumbled and fallen to the ground hard along with Jurina’s body that still clinging onto his neck, befalling on his body.

“Argh!!!” scream Ren in pain, hoping there’s not breaking bone.

They both still laying there for minutes, Ren was tried his best to not cry out in pain at his back while Jurina still in fear hugging the older guy tight. She buried her head on Ren’s neck and sobbing there.

Had enough of calm down and do not want to lay down there any longer, Ren tried to shake the girl to get up from his body, it started to dumb though.

“Jurina..Jurina, hey it’s okay. You’re save now, it’s all right,” soothed Ren slowly, he rubbed the girl’s back gently.

Jurina having herself calming down moving her body, she lifted up her head directly in face to face with the older guy. Realizing their position and the so close proximity of their face, Jurina felt her face burning up.

“KYAAA!!!”

“ARGH!!”

The sudden move though she accidentally gave the impact on older guy’s body. Ren was rolling his body in pain while Jurina got sit up and turned her body around, feeling all shy and embarrassed.

She’s startled from her stated after hearing the crying behind her, turned around again she shocked at the rolling guy there.

“Ren-senpai!” called Jurina in worry, she’s nearing the guy, shakes his body to get his attention. “Senpai..are you okay? Ren-senpai!” called Jurina in panic and worriedly.

“Argh..my back’s hurt..ugh..” groaned Ren in pain.

“Se..senpai..hiks..” can’t hold seeing the older guy in pain like this, Jurina can’t help but end up crying again. “Senpai..hiks..hiks..”

“Ma..hh..don’t cry, shh..ugh, I’m okay..I’m okay, Jurina..” holding the pain down, he do not want to worry this girl. Gather his strength again he tried to sit up with Jurina holding his right hand for help.

“Haaah…” let out a big breath, he felt his body get it energy back. A little.

“Ugh, come on..we’ve to going back , they’re certainly in panic right now. Especially your big brother,” said Ren tried to stand up.

“But..you’re hurt…”

“It’s nothing, I’m fine. Are you okay? You got hurt?” Ren was still holding Jurina’s right hand, tried to pull the girl up.

“Umh..ugh..my right leg..” Jurina was still sitting, her other hand rubbing the said leg. There’s Ren can see some red color. Panicky he’s scrunched down back looking at her leg.

“Let me see it..” he draw up her kimono and seeing a scratch on her shin, not that bad but it’s releasing blood. “Glad it’s not that bad,” he let out a sigh but cringe in pain, another pain in his heart seeing the girl’s holding her cry in pain.

“Hold still.”

Ren unwrap his jacket, tear up his left sleeve and cleaning the wound. After the wound’s cleaning he tearing up again another sleeve and wrapped it around the wound so it can stop the bleeding.

“It’s okay now. Are feeling another pain?” asked Ren concern.

“I..I think my left ankle got swollen,” whinged Jurina in pain.

Ren take a look and there’s swollen, he take a breath and let out calmly. “You think you can walk?”

“I don’t know.”

“Let’s just try, we’ve to get out off here, the rain’s getting heavier. We’ve to look up for shelter,” said Ren. Jurina nodded her head and then Ren wrapped his jacket to Jurina, putting the hoodie over her head. “Come on, I’ll assist you.”

He took Jurina’s left hand and circled it around his neck at the same time he circled his right hand around Jurina’s waist, brought the girl closer to his body and hold her tight so she would not fall. Jurina tried her best to stand up by the older guy’s assisting her.

“It’s okay? You sure you can walk?”

“Ugh..yeah.”

“Okay.”

Ren started to walk slowly while Jurina following after. Ren was making sure that they both carefully walking and trailing his gaze around the forest, hoping he can find a good enough place for them to rest and avoid the rain.

Lucky for them, after some minutes of walking Ren get a glimpse of shelter not far from them. not the big one though just a small hut, at least it could protect them from the hard rain.

“Come on Jurina, a little bit more.”

Finally they both arrived at the small hut, Ren placed Jurina carefully there and he too sat beside the girl.

“Ugh, I want us to go back as soon as possible but the rain was too hard and we’ve not so much light for us to go around in this forest. Afraid is something bad happens, are you okay?” said Ren, he’s checking the girl’s state, he clenching his fist seeing the younger girl trembling in cold.

“Urm…cold…” replied Jurina lowly between her gritting teeth. Her skin was getting pale due to the cold weather and her body was drenched.

“Come here,” Ren parted his leg and brought the girl in so he could wrap his arms around her and hopefully she can get some warmness of his body.

Jurina snuggled in Ren’s embrace, she felt the warmness and protected in the older guy’s hug. In her relaxed body, come to think of it again that never once she’s imagining for her to be so close to other people aside her family and being wrapped in embrace like this except from her big brother and her parents. Its like Ren has gave her another kind of feeling that made her comfortable, happy and saved even after she seeing this older guy in the student council room.

And the more they did their encounter which it accidentally or not, she’s always feeling butterflies were flying in her stomach and her heart flutter and beat a bit fast everytime the guy flashed his handsome and gentle smile. He was also seems to be always appear whenever she’s in trouble, like this.

She can’t deny the feeling that growing up for the older guy. The feeling that was new for her but she’s accept it for she want to having this kind of feels. The feelings of being love and loved.

“You aren’t sleep, right? Please not. Please keep awake, that will gave some warmness in your body,” said Ren, distracting Jurina’s thoughts. The girl startled a bit but then shook her head a little. “Mm no, I’m not sleeping…just thinking about something.”

“Hm..care to share with me what you’re thinking about? Maybe by the way you’re talking you’ll just forgetting the coldness,” cooed Ren gave his thought. Jurina thinking so too, but she’s embarrassed if she has to say what she’s just thinking earlier.

“Hey, it’s okay if you don’t want too. Hum for waiting the rain to stop, I’ll tell a story then..hm..” Ren started to talk. He was telling one of story he have with his friends back then. The story is quite funny though and just like the older had said she was feeling warmness instead of the cold. Also by the guy were talking she can feel and heard clearing his beating heart and the hot breaths of him that blew up toward her neck, made her shiver every time the older guy cracked into a little laugh at his own story.

“Haah…you know, I always said to give them some lesson for always switch my usual sauce to the expired one but I never had chance for that. Ah! I’ve said about this kind story to you, right? I wonder when it is..hmm Ah! Yah..when you’re mistaken as a pervert..uh, that was terrible, my stomach was hurt and you had to smacked me with your shoe, said that I was a pervert,” Ren was pouting at the last sentence, but alas he was happy that he can get to know about the younger girl although he didn’t asked for her name before.

Jurina hearing that again somehow make her guilty but whenever that accident pops out between their chatting the older guy had forgiven her already and said that was alright.

Ren was getting silent, not because he doesn’t have any story again but thinking of his feeling toward the younger girl. He was have battle inside for confession his feeling, real feeling toward Jurina or not. Not that he want to use this kind of time to confess but, he think it was the right time. Since the girl was seems so comfortable in his embrace.

“Hm..Jurina-chan,” called Ren softly, a bit flutters getting him the younger attention.

“Yes?”

“Err…you know, uhm…lately, I’ve been giving you more attention and care, I mean it was seems that I’m getting closer toward you. Like I’ve become a tutor to you, giving you somethings and other thing, it’s not that I was doing those things necessary, I mean…I meant it what was I’m doing. Ugh..” it seems telling his feeling is difficult, he was stuttering and blabbering instead.

Jurina did not that dumb to not knowing what the older guy want to say. But knowing it though, she can feel that her heart is beating faster and her face getting warmer, fortunately she had hid her face on the older guy’s shoulder.

“Uhm..Jurina-chan, the thing that I want to say is…I..I have a feeling for you, I mean..since the day at the accident in infirmary room, I can’t erased your figure from my head. Although your face was cute when you’re angry, guilty, and sad had made me want to change those expression into the cute face of happy one. Like I want to see your smiles heartily, your laugh and all, its really make my heart fluttering and really happy.”

Ren had tried to steady his beating heart but it was useless though that the more he talked the fast his heart beating and it was clearly enough for the girl to hear his beating heart. Can’t hold any longer, he placed his hands on Jurina’s shoulder pushed her a little just for him to can see her face, her flushed face. Aww so cutee~~!! Ren had to hold himself for not pinch those flushing cheeks.

“Jurina…I love you. I love you so much that I can’t bear it any longer. I want to be always protecting you, make you smiles and be happy. Can you…can you accept my feeling for you?” asked Ren staring lovingly at the girl’s eyes, prying for the girl he loved so much to reply his feeling.

It was silence. Jurina didn’t move her mouth a bit, only staring back at the older guy’s gentle brown eyes. She know it, already had known it, but..

“Senpai…”

“Yeah..?”

“I…ugh, for being honestly I…I also have the same feeling toward you too, but,” Ren had to smile but cool it down after he heard the word but.

“But?”

“But…umh, you know my big brother is. Mayu-niichan, he’ll don’t allow it. He’s so overprotective toward me and I don’t want to break the promise I had with my Papa..” added Jurina with sad voice.

“What promise? As for Mayu-kun, I’m sure I can have his blessing to me, trust me I can convince him to let his precious little sister to be together with me,” Ren winked at her make the younger girl giggled at that.

“Mou..I can see for that, but…my Papa had promised me to not having relationship until my graduate from high school. “

“Why?”

“I don’t know.”

“Hm..”

“You know, I’m quite a rebellious kid back then. Thought Papa had me to promise but I still tried to having boyfriends.”

“He?”

“Yep! But my said boyfriends were not longer than one hour, because my big brother, Kuumin, and my cousins were kicked them out, I didn’t know why but I didn’t see them after that,” said Jurina telling a bit story about her past.

“Your family’s really overprotecting you, huh,” said Ren, there’s slight fear in his voice. Jurina realizing it and let out a chuckle getting the older confused.

“Maa..okay! since I have the same feeling for you, ne senpai…and are you believe it or not, I’ll not let them even Nii-chan to take you away from me. Just like how you felt about I do have same feeling about you too and I believe in you. I love you Ren-senpai,” Jurina gave him her most cute cat-like smiles.

Hearing those things coming from the girl, he can’t help but suddenly yelled out in happiness.

“Ugh..hmm are you sure? I mean, did you accept my feeling?” a nod with smile for him and he brought the girl in his hug, embracing the girl that now officially is his girlfriend.

“Thank you..thank you, Jurina. I love you, I love you so much.”

“Hm..I love you too, senpai,” replied Jurina felt more than happy that her hidden feeling finally released.

“Ah yeah! Since you’re MY girlfriend now,” Ren marked at the word ‘my’ only made Jurina blushing in shyness. “Hmm can you call me by my name? not senpai, san, kun, of whatsoever, just Ren, can you? I want to hear it..”

His plead not helped her at all, that was only make her more embarrassing. But Ren gave her his pleading puppy eyes, not that cute though but successfully make her laugh, the result his pouting now.

“Jurina-chan~”

“Hahaha…hai hai..um..Sen-“ he gave a look, Jurina can’t help another laugh. Result, she was giving a tickles.

“Hahaha..stop..please..haha..okay okay! Re..Ren! stop it..Ren!”

“Haa~~? You call me what?” Ren was never being happier than this, hearing the girl’s lovely laugh make his heart fluttering in happiness.

“Ren..please stop,” watery eyed Jurina pleaded, still in little laugh but then she’s stunned feeling a peck on her cheek.

“That’s heard so nice in my ears, thanks,” said Ren gently at the reddish cheeks of the younger girl in his arms.

Calming herself, Jurina snuggled again in Ren’s embrace. “Mm..”

They’re in comforting silence, hearing the raindrops slowly getting lower.

“Ah, the rain had stopped. Jurina, hey..” called Ren softly. The younger girl nearly falling asleep, she opened her eyes looking at the older guy.

“Come on, the rain’s stoped we can go back to the Inn.” Ren helping Jurina to stand up but it’s like her legs can’t stand it.

“Hey, you okay?” a single shook and pained face. Ren then scrunch down, gesturing for the younger girl to hoop on his back.

“Hm, is it okay?” asked Jurina hesitate for she’s known that the older guy still having sore in his back.

“Its okay, come on,” Ren helped Jurina to hooped on his back, making sure she’s comfortable. After that carefully he is stepping out from the shelter, lucky that the rain really had stopped. While prying that they can find the way back to the Inn, Ren continuing his story just for filling the silence.

“Ah right! I remembering just now, why are you leaving me and walking toward the forest earlier? Didn’t you know that I’ve been following and yelled at you for stop? Its makes me curious, you’re made me worry, Jurina…Jurina?” called Ren when the girl didn’t gave any respond yet. He then sighed and let out a small smile feeling the soft and steady breath of the girl on his back.

“You must be tired, huh,” muttered Ren, Jurina had sleep on his back.

“Hmm..Nii-chan…” mumbled Jurina softly on Ren’s neck gave a tickle.

“Hee you’re really close to your Nii-chan, huh. Don’t worry, I’ll take you back to him and keep prying to not kill me right away..” he let out another chukle and continuing his steps.

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“Mayu, wait! Where are you going?” Kuumin stopped the short guy when he was about to open the door. The kids were back to the Inn after did searching for Ren and Jurina but them both can’t be found. Because the night is getting late, Yuria’s parents called them to come back to the Inn while they asked for the adult to search for them instead.

“Search for Jurina of course! I just can’t wait here while my sister is out there in the dark!” retorted Mayu frustration. “I won’t forgive myself if something happened to her.”

“Hey, hey…wait. I know you’re worrying her, me too and them also, but it’s late and it’ll be dangerous for us to forcing to search for them now. Let’s just wait here, she’s with Ren after all. I believe he’ll protect her,” said Kuumin tried to calm down Mayu.

Mayu didn’t give any reply, he just stared outside. Let out a sigh Kuumin bring back Mayu to sit on the couch. They’re waiting at the lobby. There’re Mayu, Kuumin, Yuki, Saya, Yui, Haruu, and Yuria while Miyuki and Haruka accompany Kanon until she’s sleep.

While waiting in silence, Mayu feeling his phone buzzing. Looking at the id, he stunned. Kuumin looked at Mayu leaving the room and following after him.

“Kuumin..” called Yuria.

“Wait here for awhile.” Yuki gave a look at Yuria but the younger girl just shrugged her shoulder.


“Yes, it’s me,” Mayu answered the call when Kuumin standing beside him, he already guessing who’s it.

“Mayu, we’re just arrived. How things there? Are you guys having fun there? Where’s Jurina?” some questions from the caller id.

“Papa, it’s glad you’re arrived there. Errr, yeah we’re having fun here, the festival here also interesting. And Jurina, she..she’s with the girl’s now, ah we’re already back from the festival and just resting in the Inn,” explaining Mayu, tried his best to sound normal despite of the worry and fear in in the neck.

“Glad to hear then that you guys having fun there, just want to check on your condition…hm, your Mama had a bad dream before when we’re still in plan. She’s got worried about you guys, nothings bad happening?”

“Hn..no. nothing! Just, Jurina had her ankle got swollen, not bad. You know, she’s clumsy and got excitement easily here..yeah..just like that,” Kuumin prying that his aunt got it nicely just how stutter Mayu talked to her.

There some pause and the two guys waited anxiously.

“..Mayu?”

“Ah, hai!”

“Let me hear the whole story later, you and Kuumin, okey? For now I belive you can take care of your little sister nicely. We’ve to go now, take care when you guys flying here and have fun there!”

“I will Papa, yes..don’t worry. Bye.”

After the phone ended, Mayu and Kuumin let out heavy breaths.

“Heh, not lied for the whole thing but yeah…it’s remind me for the old times,” said Kuumin with chuckle but got his back shivering a bit at what they’ll got from his aunt Minami later.

“Yeah…hm, just prepare yourself.”

“You to-“ Kuumin’s got cut off when they both hear yell from the loby, giving a look at each other them both then quickly running back to the others.


“Ren-nii!! Jurina-chan!!” called Yui, Saya, Haruu running out after noticing a glimpse out there in the dark, behind them was Yuki, Yuria along with Miyuki and Haruka also running at the older guy there.

“Ren-kun, what happened?” asked Yuki worriedly seeing the guy in such state, his sleeves was being torn out and his clothes are so dirty. “Jurina-chan, is she alright?”

“Nii-chan, are you okay? What happened to the both of you?” Miyuki also asked in worry. The others too asking him, worriedly about their condition, but before  he could answer them Mayu and Kuumin arrived.

“Jurina!” called Mayu worry. He stopped a bit looking at his girl in Ren’s back, she’s sleeping but his eyes got wide when there’s red thing on her leg. silently he walked toward the taller guy.

The others had been silent suddenly when Mayu walked toward Ren, another worry if the short hooded guy doing unexpecting action.

“Ma..Mayu-kun…”stuttering Ren when the big brother of the girl on his back nearing him in his expressionless.

“Let me held here. Thank you, Ren.”

Just that and he took the younger girl in his arms, carrying her in bridal style silently turned back leaving the others but stopped a bit, looking back calling Miyuki and Yuria for help. The two girls just tittled their head in confuse but then said something to the others and following the Mayu back to the Inn.

There’s another silent beween them.

“Maah! You guys had back now, let’s just also go inside back. Ren-kun, you’ve to clean your self too after that tell us what had happened to the both of you,” said Yuki broke the silent and walked first toward the Inn, Haruka tailed her behind.

“Or maybe you can tell us tomorrow morning, I’m sleepy, aww,” Haruu rubbed his shoulder glared at Yui.

“I’m sleepy too,” added Saya, Yui glared at him but then noticed that they all are tired. “Haa…me too.”

“Oke guys, let just go back and take a rest, we’ll hear the story tomorrow,” said Kuumin, the three guys walking first leave Kuumin and the still stunned Ren.

“Oi! Don’t just stunning here, you want to sleep here?”

“Hah? What? eh? Where are the others?” asked Ren startled looking around.

“Ck, come on, let’s get back,” without replying he leave the taller guy.

“Hee wait, Kuumin! Eh, hey..is Mayu had called me ‘Ren’?”

“Ha?” “Is him?”

“Hm..yes, why?”

“What’s that mean? Is he..is he..” there’s some hope in his voice. Kuumin stopped and looked at the excitement guy.

“Hm…there’re two possibilities, first he’s accepted you or second, he’ll kill you later,” said that and he continuing his steps, smirking at his best friend’s frustration back there.


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Re: Engagement-16 part3-update-26/02/2015
« Reply #109 on: February 27, 2015, 07:20:24 AM »
what was happening to Jurina is she have cursed or hypnotized by some one to make her suicide???

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« Reply #110 on: February 27, 2015, 02:41:13 PM »
Kojiharu worried mama....hehe .....

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Yes! They officialy together now!

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Re: Engagement-16 part3-update-26/02/2015
« Reply #112 on: February 27, 2015, 04:48:47 PM »
Talking about overprotective...

What will the reaction of the people once they heard what happened?

What's wrong with Jurina?

Why did she walk to the cliff?

What's going on in jurina's family?

Why was she not allow to have boyfriend before graduating high school?

Can't wait to give out

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« Reply #113 on: March 14, 2015, 09:27:33 AM »
crosteks you could find here and thanks for read and comment here!!
arawche079 she's a cute mother to me~~ hehehe thanks for read and comment here!!
gek geki yeeeeyyy for RenJurina~ yeah we will going for mayuki next, thanks for read and comment here!!
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sorry for the late update!!! things with college and such...so here is the update, hope you guys still enjoy this story of mine!


Chapter 17

Flashback-
Jurina POV

‘Aahh how happy I’m right now, being able together alone with my beloved senpai~’ I squaled in my head, trying to hid my flushing cheeks and snitching glance at the said senpai that I adore. Since the first time I saw him in the Student Council’s room, I had fallen for him. I had just realized it after he has saved me from those bad guys and me too accepted my feeling for him. I steal another glance, yappari! He’s really looks so cool, with that short bangs tought that I’ve to admit that Nii-chan’s bangs was way more kakkoii but his also looks cool.

‘Ah there’s a games stall and many cute dolls display there,’ I spotted a stand and unconsciously stopped my steps. My action being realized and Ren-senpai turned at me. He asked me if I want one of dolls there and I just nodded because there’s a puppy doll thatgot my attention, it was so cutee~~

Ren-senpai tried to play the games which is just to shot the doll that what we’re wanted. I got admired at him again, the way he hold the fake gun and pointed it at his target. He is look so cooolll~~!!! Ah behave Jurina!

But, ah! The first shot was resulted by the foxy doll got hitted. I don’t deny the disappointed but when Ren-senpai gave me the foxy doll, it was also cute. I held it in my hand because it was also gived by him. Ren-senpai tried once again and for this time I pryed for him to get it right. He was about to shot when I felt a little move in my hands. Curious I look down and suddenly the foxy that I held in my hand jumped down.

Eh?

Wait…WAIT!!

I don’t know…really, I do not know what’s really happening but I just felt my body move following the foxy doll, a freaking foxy doll that was just hoped of off from my own hands and walked cheerly? I actually was terrified out!!?

The doxy doll was skipped between the human’s feets and wait, did I hear it right? A soft and lull-like tune was sounding from it. What the heck with this foxy doll, although he’s looks so cute. Whaaaiitttt Jurina!!

But this body of mine did not stop also my eyes it seems only focusing on the foxy doll and didn’t I realize that I was already inside a deep forest. The foxy doll keep walking with that beautiful sounds from it, make me just following it unconsciously.

The longer it go on, I got worry. Where does this foxy doll lead me? Why I felt that I’ve being hypnotized? Everything in my surrounding feels like nothing, it’s black, cold, and scary…

Nii-chan

Mayu-niichan…it made me scared…I want to cry, I…

Where are you, Mayu-niichan…I need you, I nedd you…save me, Mayu-ni-

Jurina!

Eh? A voice… I heard a voice, but…it’s not Nii-chan’s voice…who, who’s that?

Wake up, Jurina!!

It’s getting cleary and not Nii-chan’s…but its sounds familiar. I tried to calm myself and following the voice.

“…WAKE UP! JURINA!!”

Ah! Ugh, wait…why suddenly I feel like my body was floating? And my left hand was being gripped tightly, it’s hurt…I tried to open my eyes, actually blinking it I don’t know why but it helps me to clearing my visions, and by the times my eyes got it clear back I got realized that I was…hanging on the edge of valley!!!!! WHAT??!!

“KYAAAAA!!!!!”

End of flashback
Normal POV

Everyone fell into silence after Jurina recalled back what was happening to her last night. The kids are now in the leisure room after eated their breakfat. At first Ren had to explained why he and Jurina can be in the forest, how the girl keep walking and they got into the live-dead hanging on the edge of the cliff, take shelter until they both could came out of the forest with Jurina sleeping on his back, and then continuing by Jurina’s story.

 She observed them one by one, Saya, Yui, Haruu got their mouth agape that’s looks funny but she held her chuckle and looked at Miyuki, Haruka, Kanon, and Yuki, they’re looks surprised but then curious painted on their face. She also looked at Yuria and Kuumin, this couple did a confused look, she averted her gaze at Ren and found him look down did not alow her to look at his expression which made her curious and the last was her older brother, Mayu did his expression calm but she’s sure that he’s freaking put inside, freaking that she was got into somekind of the things.

“That’s sounds ridicoulus and freaking me,” Haruu got the silents break. The others seemed too agreed on him.

“So, you really did not know how you can get into the forest and then hanging on the side of cliff?” asked Miyuki still curious and anxious with what happened to Jurina. The girl only shook her head.

“Is thing like this have happened before?” asked Yuki to Yuria.

“No, it’s not happened before, I was wonder too why she got into something like that.”

“It was strange then,” voiced Saya in wonder.

“Or maybe you’re just tired last night and did have a hallucination and without you realizing it you had walked into the forest,” pointing Yui out about his thought.

“I’m pretty sure I’m not feeling tired at all last night. I could just wonder around the festival for hours if I want.”

“Or maybe you’re-“

“At least she’s alright now, what happened to her last night let it is remaining in mistery. I don’t need to hear any ridiculous theories of you guys…and  I’m thanking to you Ren, for saved and protected my sister and brought her back,” said Mayu cut off the other’s talking. He said it calmly and makes the others a bit surprised especially Jurina, but they are sure that they can see relived and honest in his voice.

“I’m agreeing with Mayu-kun, let’s just leave it as a mystery for us. I know you guys are really curious about it and believe that I’m also curious too, but you know we came here for refreshing and not to make another problem that will just add the stress,” added Ren.

“Are you sure? I mean we can just ask Yuria’s parents or people in this village,” said Yuki.

“Yeah, I can ask my parents to help us,” said Yuria having nodded by the other.

“No need to Yuria, just like Ren had said let it be. Let just make it as mystery story for us later, maybe when we’ll back here we can prepare and have a mission-like vacation here?” said Kuumin, already understand by Mayu and Ren meaning for. He flashing an understand smile toward his girlfriend.

“And one more thing, not tell this accident to your parents. Let’s just make only for us,” added Ren

The other were went silent first but then agreed to Kuumin’s new idea, which looks interesting by the way. They are then just discussing about their experience last night, laughing at some weird and unexpected stories.

“Ah!” exclaimed Jurina suddenly stand up getting her friends attention.

“Hm, what is it Jurina-chan?”

“Err…I…I have a confession,” she said it shyly, her face slowly getting red.

“What confession?”

“Um..” she’s hestitate and looking at certain tall and pale guy there. Ren feeling the younger girl was staring at him and got his tensed. ‘is she serious to said it? I mean, I’m happy but…’

Jurina averted her gaze toward Mayu which she got a rised brow from her older brother. ‘Oh my, why I’m getting nervous like this? Alright, just said it Jurina!’ she encourage herself and walked abit limping because her leg still flet sting though it was healing now, a head toward Ren, she hold on his right arm and pull the older guy to stand beside her.

“Me and Ren are dating!” exclaimed Jurina loudly while closing her eyes and hold tightly on Ren’s hand.

It was silence at first but seconds later they are yelling out in happiness. Except for one person.

“Really? Omedetou Ren-nii!!!” Saya, Yui, and Haruu spontaneously gave the taller guy a big hug and congratulating him. Kuumin patted his bestfriend’s shoulder, gave a proud look at the taller guy.

“Yaayy... omedetou Jurina-chan~,” congrats Yuki, Haruka, Kanon, Miyuki, and Yuria happily. They are gave a hug and patted the girl’s head, Jurina looks so happy that her friends also happy for her relationship with Ren.

Just when they are congratulating the new couple, a cough interrupted and averting their attention toward a hooded and glasses guy there.

“Ah Nii-chan…” startled Jurina, she was forgetting about her older brother here and got an anxious if her older brother didn’t like it. She’s startled for the nth times when she felt a frim and gentle warm hand warpping her right hand, she looked at Ren and could see his confident and determination face. Seeing him, Jurina feel like she got her encourage too and hoping for the older brother of her would accepting their relationship.

“Mayu-kun,” Ren started first, he looked straight at the short guy. “I, Oshima Ren. Kindly asking for your blessing for my relationship with Jurina-chan, I know that I haven’t done enough to proof to you that I really love your dearly sister, but I can assure you that I will love her, makes her happy, and protect her,” said Ren with serious and determination look. He held Jurina’s hand tightly.

“Ren…” whisper Jurina in astonishment looking at the side of Ren’s face. His action makes her heart fluttering and beat abit faster, she can feel her face start to growing heat. Never once she got a guy to ask her older brother like this, not even her so called boyfriends before, they’re just coward guys that got easily scared even with her cousins.

The soft whisper did not go noticed by Mayu. He felt abit tug inside. Let out a single breath he got up and facing the “new couple” stood there with anxious in front of him. He glancing at the others that also seem to held their breath for what his decision.

“Ehm…should you just said that to Jurina’s parents? I mean you sound like proposing Jurina,” said Mayu and let out a little chuckle but furrowed his eyebrow when there’s no sounds of laugh from the others. He tapping his feet to less the embarrassement, let out a little chough.

“Ma..maa, I was just joking! Oi!” sunddenly Mayu seems to going frustrating his self. “I accepted you two relationships!”

Finally after he said that the others got back their conscious and staring unbelievably at the short hooded guy.

“Really? I mean, you let me dating with Jurina?” asked Ren for confirm. A nod and a small smile he got from Mayu.

“Nii-chan, thank you!!!” exclaimed Jurina jumping toward her older brother and hugging him tightly. Lucky that Mayu had prepared himself so their body didn’t face the floor.

“Hai..hai, anything if it makes you happy,” replied Mayu, whipering softly and rubbing her head gently. He took a look at the others that once again congratulating Ren for his afford to get his princess. Seeing the taller guy, a thought pop out in his mind that mayby he can turst this guy to his dearly little sister to make her happy and protect her.

Releasing from her older brother’s hug, she gave his cheeks a kiss and turned her body to face her friends that immediately surrounding her, congratulating for her relationship with Ren.

After the cheering lowering down, Mayu made another little choughing getting the others attention back to him. He walked up toward Ren that makes the taller got tens up at the serious aura the shorter guy emmited.

“I let you dating my Jurina, but in one condition.”

“Wh…what’s that?”

“If You ever break her or make her shed a single tear, I.Will.Not.Letting.You.Go. understand?” said Mayu coldly. Ren can felt shiver in his spine at the tension Mayu gave him. Gulped his saliva, Ren nodded his head frimly. “You got my promise! I’ll make her happy and not make her sad.”

Statisfed, Mayu then stepped back and observing the new couple. “So…seems that everyting turn out to the happy one. I give you and Kuumin sometimes before we go. I’ll wait outside,” he gave Jurina a light pat on the head and turned around leaving the room and the stunned teenegers.

“Go? Where are you going?” asked Yuria confusing.

“Err, you see me, Mayu and Jurina was a close friends before. Close as mean that our families are close too, so since we’ve reunited back, my family had to come to Takahashi’s important gathering that we weren’t able to go again after we moved here. You got it?”

“Err…I think so, but! Why now? We haven’t got time for us to have fun together…” whined Yuria pouting her lips. Seeing the cute pout Kuumin had to stop his urge to kiss that cute pouty lip.

“Maa, I’m sorry. Actually we’ve to go yesterday but, just want you to know that I’ve planned this all so that Ren can confess to Jurina-chan. “

“Mou…”

“Nah! Don’t be sad, I promise since we get back later I’ll spend my times with you, how is it?”

“You promise?”

“Pinky promise!” he held his pinky up. Yuria seeing it and the guy’s puppy face, make her giggling at held her pinky too and taut it to the guy’s one.

“Hehehe…”


“Mayu-kun!”

Mayu halted his steps and turned back just to see a tall beautiful long raven hair girl walked up to him. “What?”

“Hm…just saying thank you, that you finally let Ren-kun to dating your younger sister,” said Yuki while walking side by side with the short hooded guy. “I just wonder, what’s it made you accepting it? I mean, just the way you treating Ren-kun lately, it’s like you still not liking his to around Jurina-chan.”

Mayu shrugged his shoulder, “I’ve my reasons to accept his propose.”

“Hmm is that so? Well, whatever is that, I can assure you that Ren-kun will keep his promise to make Jurina-chan happy!”

“Yeah..yeah…”

“Ah wait!”

“What?” Mayu was again halted his steps when he was about to get inside the car.

“Err…”

“What’s it, Yukirin?”

That nickname…how many times he used that nickname to call her, she’s still can’t understand the sudden warm and dokidoki feeling in her heart. Hearing her nickname being called once again, Yuki snapped.

“Just reminder you that once you get back, we will try to act in the stage….yah…uhh..” a soft chuckle made Yuki to held her head up, sunddenly stunned at the gentle warm faceof the handsome short guy. And again she felt that heating and dokidoki.

“Hehe…I got that, don’t worry. I’ll not forget all the lines and the gesture, hopefully,” another chuckles slip out got along Yuki to held a warm chuckles with the not so expressionless guy.

After Mayu, Jurina, and Kuumin bid their good bye, Ren let out a soft sigh, the smiles on his handsome face did not noticed by his childhood friend.

“So, the prince finally got his REAL princess~” teased Yuki while nudging Ren’s side.

“Wh…what are you talking about?” tried to step aside, he can’t deny the warm feeling and his face got heating up. “But yah…finally I got my princess.”

“So…any plan to tell your parents?”

“No.”

“Huh?”

“”I…I’ll not tell them until the times come.”

Yuki stared at the guy and got the reason, although he doesn’t voiced it out, by how long they’ve been together she’s already understand it. She let out a soft breath and patted the guy’s shoulder before turning around but stops in halt when she heard her name being called, turned around and titled her head a side.

“Just an advice…leaves your past, Yuki.”

“….” The girl did not reply just expressionless face and turned again leaving the guy for real. Ren let a sight. “I just want you to be happy.”

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After done with the pray, Takamina caressing lovingly the beautiful written name on the tomb. She is staring at it lovingly and longingly, though there’s still sad expression on her face. A light tap on her shoulder awaring the woman to let out a small smile and she gave a light kiss on the cementary before stood up.

Atsuko held her “husband’s” right hand tighly, squeezing it lightly. “You done?”

“Un. Let’s go back inside.”

Still in holding each other hands, the married couple walking on the stepping of a beautiful small garden, comfortable silence company the couple to walking back inside of a big and astonishing mansion.

“Aunt Minami, aunt Atsuko,” a call in an English accent, halted the couple in steps and turning their sight at the young tall beautiful long brown hair girl. The young girl did a wave hands and with smile plestering on her cute face, she walked up toward the women.

“Ah! When did you came, dear?” asked Takamina also in English accent, abit surprised by the appearance of the younger girl. They waited for the girl to come and recived a warm hug from the young girl.

“Just a while ago, with my father and he’s now talking with granpa Michirou and granpa Maeda.”

“I see, hey did you plan to stay here? For the family gathering, and I bet you must be missing Mayu and Jurina,” said Takamina.

“Umm…I do want to stay and I really miss them, especially Mayu, but…we will go somewhere. Actually we just passed here thinking to have a visit,” said the girl with sad tone, she lowered her head abit. Atsuko patted the girl’s head softly.

“Maybe later time, you know you can visit us too in Japan right? Mayu and Jurina will be happy to be a guide for you.”

“Un, thank you aunt Atsuko. Later time, I’ll go to Japan,” she flashed a cute smiles make Atsuko patted the young girl’s head again.

“Umm, can I visit the garden? I want to give a pray.”

“Sure, and thanks dear. Aunt Atsuko will accompany you, I’ve something to talk to your father.”

“Un.”

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“Mayu! Jurina! Kuumin!!” aloud yells gotten their attention toward a woman holding a placard, waving it highly while yelling out their names. Her action easily getting the others people attention in the airport. Though that, they are not bothered by it.

“She’s never changes, huh!” said Mayu, giggling along with Jurina and Kuumin. The three kids walking toward the woman and Jurina did run first but forgetting her still injured leg, the younger girl nearly jumble forwad, thanks to the woman’s fast move she’s be able to catch the younger girl in her arms.

“Oh my God, Jurina!! You clumsy girl! Are you okay?” said the woman frantically while checking the younger girl in her arms.

“Sasshi! Sasshi! Sasshi!! I’m fine~~ hahaha…I miss you~~~” replied Jurina now hanging on the older woman’s body spoily. The woman was name’s Sashihara Rino protectively hugged the younger girl.

“Gah! You always made me worry, huh little princess. You aren’t fine, let me see….what’s this? Your leg, hey what happened to your leg?”

“Na Sasshi, let’s just discussing about that later. I’m tired, can we go now?” said Mayu while handing their belongings to the driver.

“Yeah…need little energy for later’s warth,” added Kuumin with sheepish smiles.

“Haa…you kids just can’t stand out from trouble, huh! Okay, I don’t pry you guys now, will know later by the way. Come on kids the others are already waiting at home.”

Still hangs in Sasshi’s body, Jurina along with Mayu and Kuumin, together walking toward the limo car.


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The Takahashi’s family took their times in America for almost a week. Fortunately for the kids that school already in the winter holiday so they’re not bothered by it, but said that Jurina still have to doing her practice with her bandmates. The date of the event just a week more and they’re had to smooth it for the perfect performance. So for the sake of the younger one, they are head back to Japan, but now without granpa Maeda because her other granpa Michirou asked for his companion and promise will go to Japan to watch her performance. Being told that, Jurina was a bit sad but knowing that her favorit two granpa’s will come she’s just happy.

And now the Majijo Band’s members were having their break after practicing. They are scattered in the practicing room, YuiParu pair were out for fresh air, Saya was doing some tricks from Kuu, Haruu got his meal,Kuumin did a discussing with Riku and their manager, while Jurina take time for herself sitting alone at the couch side of window that were having a nice scenery. She was eating her snack while humming a soft tune.

“Hey, why are you all alone here?” a gentle voice did startled the younger girl abit, the girl turned her sight at the blonde not so tall man that took a seat beside her. He was playing a can of coffee before open it and took a long gulp.

Jurina was startled abit, sighing as the gentle voice was from another member Persona. Seeing the blonde man for the first time did give her a warmth feeling, didn’t know why but she just felt secure around him. She offered her snack for the man and he took a piece and inserts it in his mouth.

“Having a nice time by myself, the scenery here is beautiful.”

“You like it?”

“Un!”

“I’m glad you seems to enjoying this all. Didn’t think before that you are so good at singing, a talented one if I may say,” said Kai smiling. Jurina hearing the prise felt shy and lowered her head.

“Mmm I’m not that good, but yah I loved to singing and used to have a nice moment with my Mama singing together.”

“Ah talking about your parents…hmm how is they are doing now?” asked Kai curious.

“Eh?” Jurina was abit taken at the sudden question, never she knew that this man knowing her parents, “You know my parents? Are you also one of Papa or Mama’s childhood friends? Why I’ve never seen you before?”

“Err…” taken back at the sudden bombared questions from the younger girl, Kai was fidgeted in his seat. “Ehem…you could say that I…I was your Papa’s childhood friend.”

“Ah so did you also known aunt Sae?”

“Miyazawa Sae? Yeah..I know her, we used to play alot together back then. So how is they are doing now?”

“Hmm Papa Mama is doing fine and aunt Sae, she often came to our house with her family. Naa if you also their childhood friend, why are you not meeting with them?”

“I see, glad to hear that then. I can’t meet with them yet, your Papa will kill me if I face her now.”

“Eeehh why?”

“Err…just say that I’ve done something terrible back then. I still need time to face her again, though I really miss her,” there are sadness and guility in his voice.

“Just meet up then! So you can solve that problem, do you want me to tell Papa?”

“No! not yet…like I said, I still need time to prepare myself. Please do not tell your Papa about me, I’ll meet her if the times come. Ne you are a smart kid Jurina, I’m happy I could met you here,” Kai flashed his smiles and patted the girl’s head gently.

“Okay, I understand.”

“Thank you.”

They both did talked another things and got laugh until the time for practice called for them.



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« Reply #114 on: March 28, 2015, 09:46:17 PM »
Ah... Been a while since you last update

Great long chapter there

Yeah... Ren and Jurina together officially

Next would be Mayu and Yuki then?

What's going to happen next?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

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« Reply #115 on: March 29, 2015, 07:52:22 AM »
:O that was a nice chapter  :thumbup
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Re: Engagement-18-update-04/04/2015
« Reply #116 on: April 04, 2015, 07:29:18 AM »
cisda83 I'm sorry taking so long to update, collage just didn't let me write it. ah yaahh congrats for RenJurina! and for Mayuki...it'll be complicated, hehe... thank  you for read and comment here!  :)
Dianalrs thank  you for read and comment here! here the update  :)

so here;s the new update, I'm really thanks for you guys that come to my story, whether reading, comment, thanks it or just pass by
I hope you guys still enjoy reading this stuff of mine. and always sorry for the mess English!


Chapter 18

“I’m nervous, I’m nervous, I’m nervous,” and so on the words keep repeating from a young girl’s mouth. Jurina was standing nervously in the waiting room that served for her teammates. She has been mouthed that since she was done with her make-up and all and now was waiting for the event to begin. And what made her more nervous now was that the manager of her band which is Kuumin, had said that their band will perform as the second performance.

“Kyaa!!”

“Hey, calm down..” Kai barely held back his head when the the younger girl suddenly throwing her hands due to shocked. Seeing the one that startled her is the blonde man, Jurina let out a sigh.

“Mou, you shocked me,” pouted Jurina.

“Hehe…sorry, you look so nervous, easy will you. It’s not that you’ll be watching of by all peoples in Japan.”

“Of course it is!! It’s Japan’s TV national! Waaa…I don’t think that join a school band will end me up here.”

“So you regret it? Joining the band?”

“Mmm..no, but..haaahh..” Jurina take a sit and let out another sigh. Kai looking at the younger girl can’t help but to let out a chuckle and patting the girl’s head, tried to not mess her beautiful hair. ‘It’s smooth and beautiful…like you.’

“Nah, you did enjoy singing with your friends, right?” a nod for him. “You are a great girl, just like your Papa. You aren’t alone there, your friends are also by your side, they’ll are also nervous too like you, see?” he tap Jurina’s shoulder to see he teammates there were also nervous and was with Kuu and Riku that tried their best to makes the kids calm down.

“I, we as Persona felt same too back then, the nervous of being the first one of new group that having performance at this large event. But we’ve to come up with our nervous and fear for the best and great performance that we were gave toward the audience so they all enjoyed it.”

Jurina just hearing what the older guy had said. Just hearing his talking, she felt secure and less nervous than before. She looked up when the man called her name.

“Your parents are coming right?”

“Un.”

“So, less nervous and getting up your guts and show them that their lovely daughter can make them so proud over you!” he gave his best smiles for the younger girl.

Feeling the encouraging she gets from the blonde man, Jurina finally get her courage back. “Un! I’ll do my best!!”

“That’s the spirit!!”

Announcement were speaking and didn’t they both realize that the event has starting and now two minutes left for Majijo Band to perform.

“Jurina-chan, come on we’ve to prepare!” called Saya.

“Hai!” she received another encouraging looks before catch up with the others.


Meanwhile at the reserved seat, Takahashi family was sitting peacefully watching the performances on the stage and also did talking with some business people and famous artists around their seating.

“Uwa! Jurina!!!” Takamina can’t help but let out an excited yell seeing her dearly daughter come out on the stage. She’s wear such a stylish costume make her looks beautiful and pretty, so her friends, also wearing such nice costume.

Atsuko seeing her daughter there feels so happy though the girl looks so nervous there but she believe that her girl could perform the best of her. Mayu looking at his younger sister and her teammates preparing their instrument, hoping for nothing bad and they’ll be perform all out.

Seating with them, two old men looking at their precious granddaughter, feeling so proud that their little girl can reaching such state like this, just by joining a band in her new school. Seeing her so happy like this also makes them happy.

And the music start with a single drum by Haruu that received a loud yell from the audience. Sure this school’s band already made their name in the entertainment world, even the singers and artists that attending the event get amaze by these young kids.

At the other side of the hall, there are some families gathering. Mariko with her family, Yuko with her family, and Tomochin with her wife was watching their kids performing there.

“Ah, Saya is really cool playing his guitar,” praised Mariko with proud face. “Our Haruka too, such beautifully playing her keyboard,” added Miichan smiling.

“Nah, My son did his job good too,” Tomochin too, did not want to lose, praised Yui that was playing with his bass. Her wife, Tomo~mi that sitting beside her, just chuckled at the older woman’s antic.

“Maa, they’ll are doing great there. Especially their vocalist, hmm..”

“Jurina-chan, Kaa-chan. Her name’s Jurina. Ah, Haruu too doing well in his drumming, right?” Ren voiced the vocalist name. Ren was quite happy that his mother seems to take interest at the younger girl.

“Ah yah, Jurina-chan! She’s so cute and beautiful also her voice is wonderful too. She’ll be a great singer if she’s serious in this kind of entertainment thing,” thought Yuko.

“I’m second with you, she’s already got things that can make her become the famous one,” agreed Tomochin.

“Nah, guys just enjoy the show for now. Our kids are also having things to make their self famous too,”said Mariko that earning chuckles from the others.

Performances after performance were showed up, and this time Persona will come up. Another loud voice from the audience when three men come up on the stage, exciting for the still famous boyband that will sing their precious and only one that had made them become this well-known in music world, 3 second.


Back to the Takahashi family place, just when the members of the group come out in the stage, Atsuko felt her ‘husband’ flinched. She looked at the short woman a bit worried, she hold Takamina’s hand and the woman turned her sight on her wife.

“You okay?”

“Un…don’t worry,” she offered an assure smile, hope to make her wife ease and tell her that she’s okay. She’s averted her sight toward her father and could see there are bit of proud in all guilty expression on the old man’s face. Sighing, she’s turned her sight back at the stage, tried to just enjoy the performance with her hand holding Atsuko’s hand.


The event is still on going with many more singers perform, but Mayu had an urge to go to toilet. So after saying to his parents that he’ll be back soon, the guy stood up and walking toward toilet direction. Finished with all of his things, on the way back to his place he accidentally bumped into a seemed lost kid.

“Hey, areyou in lost?” asked Mayu to a little girl, she’s seems in five.

The little girl was startled at the stranger guy and didn’t dare to reply his question. Sighing, Mayu bent down in level to the little girl and let out a gentle smile.

“I’m not a bad guy. If you’re really lost, I can escort you to your parents. Hm…where are they?”

The little girl seems still hesitated but looking at the gentle smile of this handsome onii-chan, she’s then nodded her head. “Um…can you, can you accompany me to Persona’s room? I want to meet my Papa.”

“Persona’s room? Are you by any chance one of their kid?” a small nod he got. ‘Isn’t Persona’s room is also the room that Jurina and her friends having? I remember she had said that…’

“Okay. I think I know where the room is. Come on and oh, my name’s Mayu, what’s your name?”

“Umm you can just call me Erena.”

“Okay then Erena-chan, let’s meet your Papa.”

On the way Mayu tried to make the little girl comfortable with him until they both arrived at the said room. But when the little girl offered him to go inside, suddenly he got a mail from his mother that Jurina will perform again.

“Sorry, I had to go back. Say hello to your Papa and don’t go anywhere when you are alone, okay?”

“Un! Thank you Mayu-oniichan.”

Mayu patted the little girl’s head before turned back letting the girl go inside alone.


“Why took you so long? Did something happened?” asked Atsuko looking at her son that taking his seat.

“Umm, yeah, I just escorted a lost little girl to her parents room,“ answered Mayu.

“Is that so? Okay, ah too bad you just passed Jurina’s performance then.”

“Aah yah…but I can watch it back at home later, Sasshi must be saved this event,” said Mayu grinning.


The event went nicely until the end and lucky for them that the side that Jurina and her friends join at winning this event. At the back stage everyone from their team were expressing their happiness some of them walking up to them and congratulating them for their first performance here. They all are really impressed by their skill of music and their performance too made them amazed.

“You were really wonderful Takahashi-san,” praised one of the famous singers that also take part in the event.

“Thank you so much. Ah, I’m not that good, really. It’s all because of them, Majijo’s members really helped me so much. I’m grateful that our Band could joint this event,” said Jurina shyly.

After did another talking with others, she wondering her eyes looking for a certain short blonde man but can’t find him so the other’s two of the members of Persona. ‘Maybe they had to leave first,’ thought her. Although they all are already did a little celebrate before, she’s still have something to talk with the Kai. Shrugged after can’t find him, she then gather back with her band-mates.

“Big success guys!!” excited Saya make the other laugh.

“It’s all worth all the practicing that we’ve done. And really guys, I’ve never ever dreamed that one day I can be stand and perform at the oh so wonderful stage of Japan’s national television, being able to watch by all people in Japan. Really, I’m so grateful for this. Thanks a lot to you guys, especially for Yui and our Princess Jurina-chan!!!” long speech Saya at his band-mates. The other are agreeing and smiling at each other.

It is indeed. Especially for Saya, Haruka, and Haruu, and of course for their new members Yui and Jurina that they become this success even they all can step and perform at the such famous place.

“Jurina!” suddenly a voice called for the so called Princess, made them turned their attention toward a family that walking towards them.

“Papa!” exclaimed Jurina, she left her friends and hugging the short woman. Takamina was hugging back her dearly daughter and patting her head. “You did good job Jurina!”

“Hehe… thank you, Papa.”

“Ah, is they are your teammates? Kids, thank you for taking care of Jurina and you guys all really amazing. As Jurina’s parents I’m really proud to you guys!”

“Ah, Takahashi-san thank you. It’s all because of Jurina-chan too that we’ll be able to become like this, she’s such a talent,” said Saya politely.

“You are a good boy! Ah I want to spend times with you guys but we’ve to go back home now.”

“Eeh we are going back now? But…” pouted Jurina.

“I’m sorry dear, but you don’t want your grandfathers that already tired to wait up for you to chatting, right?”

“Uhmm…” Jurina look at her two grandfathers that were talking with her Mama. “Okay. Ermm guys, I think I’ve to go now. I’m sorry if I can’t stay longer.”

“It’s okay Jurina-chan, beside its really late now. So see you later and have a good rest. Thank you so much for your hard work,” said Saya reassuring the girl.

After saying good bye, Takahashi family leaves them. Kuumin is still with them though, saying that he’s still need to do something and keep an eye at them. Until minutes later after they all are changing their clothes and ready to leave.


“Took you guys so long there,” greeted Ren at the members of Majijo Band that just leave their room and now approaching where their families were waiting for them. Ah, Miyuki didn’t come because she has to accompany Kanon at home.

“Mom!” called Haruka hugging her mother and resting her body on her. Haruka’s bit sad that her one-chan can’t come but she’s still watching at home, so it’s okay.

“You tired?” a little nod, “Aww…my baby, you’ve done well there Haruka, I’m so proud of you,” praised Miichan while rubbing her daughter’s back.

“Yeah, surprisingly they all are getting so much attention from other singers and they were amazed with their performance,” explain Kuumin.

“Good job kids! We’re really proud of you guys,” said Mariko congratulating the kids. “You are so cool up there, I’m so proud of you Saya.”

“It’s all because our hard work and the feel to not give up and here’s the reward.”

“That’s my boy!” she hugging her son and patting his back.

“Nice play, Yui,” said Tomochin to her son and patted his shoulder.

“Thanks, Ma.”

“Yuiiii~” Tomo~mi was holding her son in embrace and then parted so she can look at the smiling face of her son. “Happy?”

“Very much, hehe…”

“Ah, Haruu-kun, sadly your family can’t come but I’m certain that your parents are really proud of you ne. ah, hey you are still having us. You were so good at drumming back there!” Yuko patted the seemed left boy. She gave a gentle smile and Haruu too, feeling that he wasn’t left behind either, felt grateful that his friends of parents are so kind toward him.

“Hehe…thank you, Yuko-baachan.”

“Hey, where’s Jurina-chan?” asked Miichan wondered.

“Ah, her family had come and taking her home before,” replied Saya.

“Is that so…? Hmm, I’m wondering about her family,” thought Yuko.

“Alright, everyone! The event’s ended so it’s time to go home now. You kids have to rest,” announce Mariko.

“Ah, let me send Haruu back,” offer Kuumin.

“It’s okay with you? We can escort you two back home,” said Haruna offering a ride.

“Thank you, Haruna-baachan, but my driver is already waiting for me outside, so…”

“Okay, thank you for taking care of them, Kuumin-kun. Get rest when you are home.”

“Un.”

They all are bid good byes and each families going back to their home.

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The school’s started again and this term was the hard one, especially for the 3rd grade. Ren was alone in student council’s room. He was reading some papers, checking them all and making notes. Right after the bell for break time rang he had to leave the class soon and entering this room, thus doing his job as the student council’s president. Suddenly the door of the room opened, showing a head of a girl that was tried to take a peek inside. Aware that someone’s coming, he stopped his work and look up at the most cutie and loving girl of him.

“Ah, Jurina!”

“Ren!” Jurina was beaming going inside of the room and plopped her self at the seat beside Ren. Something was on her back. “What are you doing?” asked the younger girl curious.

“Just student council’s related things. Why you are here? Not that I don’t like it but, did you eat your lunch already?” asked Ren. He left his work aside and focused his attention at his girlfriend.

The school now already knows that their student council’s president is dating Jurina. At first they all are object it, already knowing that the said Prince was with Yuki and others (girl’s student) are don’t want their charming girl to dating someone. But after he had to clarify that he and Yuki are just best friend and he’s really really like Jurina and vice versa, they all are accepting it. Beside, Ren and Jurina did make a really cute and sweet couple.

“Not yet.”

“Eh, why not yet? Its already break time.”

“Because…I want to eat lunch with you! You are also haven’t your lunch yet, right?” said Jurina and brought out the something from her back.

“I’ve asked Mama to make for me more food, so I can eat with you,” said Jurina shyly showing a quite big of lunch box. She lowered her head in embarrassment. Actually she had lied to her mother, said that she wanted to share it with her friends but the truth is she’s just want to have lunch together with her beloved senpai-boyfriend. Already knowing that the older guy often skipping his lunch due to had to do her work as the student council’s president.

“Aww, how sweet you are….” Ren rubbing the younger girl head gently, offering a gentle and grateful smile.

“Erhmm….ah let’s eat then!”

Jurina placed the lunch box on the table, opened it and starting to eat their lunch together.

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Yuki plopped her body on her bed. Felt really tired after all activities that she’s doing today. Their practice was gone well although there are always somethings that didn’t going well, but fortunately that the members of the drama’s really fine and doing their jobs together.

She rolled on her stomach and closed her eyes, still in her school’s uniform though, too tires to changing it.

In her resting, she recalling back what the less thing of the drama is could be. The script, the lines, their acts, gestures and other stuff. She’s really wish this drama can be the best one of their last stage in the school.

While recalling it, suddenly her mind traced back toward the day she’s having trip with her friends back then. Recalling at the tall pale skin guy that said to her to leaves her past.

“Baka Ren…why are you reminding me when there’s already slowly rising a new feeling…” Yuki tightly closed her eyes and gripped the blanket. Having a breath she rolled again and stood up. Walking toward her closet and bent down, searching something below her clothes. Found the thing she’s searching, she went back and sat on the bed.

“Hyaaahh…” long sighed she breath out, there’s longing, missing, and daring in her expression while staring at the little thing in her hand.

“I don’t want to forget about you. The side in mine is still wants to waiting…but this new feeling…doushiyou~~”






hey, I was wondering what you guys like about this boring story? if you can let me know
just love to read alot of fiction story

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Re: Engagement-18-update-04/04/2015
« Reply #117 on: April 04, 2015, 12:00:13 PM »
Nahh..dont worry author san..~
it interesting and totally adventurous...
a bit confused but totally not boring~
Wonder who yuki forgetting about..
~her new feeling must be mayu~
Mayu are a kind brother~so caring~
Ren and jurina are soooooo cuteeeee~
still curious bout what happen to jurina at the festival
And why they didn't told their parents bout their relationship
relationship is the best with parents blessing~

Sorry for the long comment~anyway
Thanks for the update author san..
waiting for next update~ :on drink:
Live in the land of mist..nahh just kidding..
Live in the land of Wmatsui and Mayuki...
World of fantasy..World of Lalaland~

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Re: Engagement-18-update-04/04/2015
« Reply #118 on: April 06, 2015, 06:41:44 AM »
Ah... why was Takamina a bit weird during PERSONA performance?

Yeah.. the band was a sucess

What about Yuki and Mayu?

Would Yuki be able to move on?

Would Mayuki establish soon?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

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Re: Engagement-18-update-04/04/2015
« Reply #119 on: April 07, 2015, 06:32:25 AM »
Nahh..dont worry author san..~
it interesting and totally adventurous...
a bit confused but totally not boring~
Wonder who yuki forgetting about..
~her new feeling must be mayu~
Mayu are a kind brother~so caring~
Ren and jurina are soooooo cuteeeee~
still curious bout what happen to jurina at the festival
And why they didn't told their parents bout their relationship
relationship is the best with parents blessing~

Sorry for the long comment~anyway
Thanks for the update author san..
waiting for next update~ :on drink:

Thank you so much for reading and I'm glad that you're enjoying this story
Ah if I may know which part that confusing you?
For Jurina, you'll get it in the next chap, thanks to you I got an idea for tje explanation hehe..
As for mayuki, like I said it'll be complex but I try to not prolong it
RenJurina is just tooo cuutteee

Its totally fine to me, your comment is gave me motivation, thanks
Hope you'll still around  :) :) :)
just love to read alot of fiction story

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