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Offline im-a-fool

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« on: April 01, 2014, 12:13:51 PM »
Hello  :)

Untitled 1.1 | Not A Prologue

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Two bodies were closely pressed together with their noses and forehead touching. They could feel the other’s breath on their face and their breaths were the only sound made filling the decaying room.

A few moments later, tears were slowly falling down on Minami’s face as she seems to be in pain but she tried to put up a smile on her face.

“Minami..” Atsuko whispered as her tears began to fall as well.

“I’m alright..”

Looking deep into Minami’s eyes through her wet eyes, “I’m sorry..” Atsuko’s voice broke into a sob.

Minami pulled Atsuko closer and put her lips to her lover’s ear, “Don’t be sorry for having the courage to do something that I don’t..” she then gently kissed Atsuko’s cheek and made her way down with light kisses until their lips were almost touching.

“Minami..”

“Shhh..” Minami pressed a soft kiss to her lover’s lips. “Push it deeper..”

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a/n: sorry for any mistakes. English is not my native language  :sweatdrop:

Offline cisda83

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« Reply #1 on: April 01, 2014, 12:22:03 PM »
Eh... what's wrong with Minami?

What's happening there?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the nice mysterious intro

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« Reply #2 on: April 01, 2014, 07:53:49 PM »
It sounds like sex to me, but then again, it could just be my dirty mind  :shy1:

Though let me warn you, if its really sex, then you need permission to the perv forum and post it there.

anyway, please continue, I'm curious to what needs to go in deeper  :hehehe:
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« Reply #3 on: April 01, 2014, 08:55:35 PM »
I wonder wat happen

Update soon

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« Reply #4 on: April 01, 2014, 09:57:56 PM »

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« Reply #5 on: April 08, 2014, 08:49:19 PM »
I wonder what's going on...
Update soon!

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« Reply #6 on: April 09, 2014, 05:28:45 AM »
I wonder what's going on...
Update soon!

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please update  :twothumbs

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« Reply #7 on: April 13, 2014, 12:33:04 AM »
It sounds like sex to me, but then again, it could just be my dirty mind  :shy1:



Me too, the first thing that's on my mind lol :kekeke:

Please continue  :cow:

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« Reply #8 on: June 27, 2014, 03:01:08 PM »
Hmm~ I want to know what happen next~  :lol:
Update soon please~  :cow:

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« Reply #9 on: June 28, 2014, 04:47:13 PM »
it's short... i wanna know more... hehehe
i'm curious. please update im-a-fool :bow:
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