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Re: Outcast and the Exiled Announcement (Q & A Today and Tomorrow)
« Reply #120 on: July 30, 2014, 09:13:48 PM »
@Minamiyuki:

There is a good reason why Kumi is pregnant, and it will explained in a few chapters.
But if you strangle us, we won't be able to explain!
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Re: Outcast and the Exiled Announcement (Q & A Today and Tomorrow)
« Reply #121 on: July 30, 2014, 11:37:52 PM »
Hello Charlotte -san and Sei-san..

Firstly before I get to say anything else, I just want to say thank you for using some characters that aren't oftenly used in fics. I don't usually read sayamilky since I have seen all of them all over the place, bit this fic managed to catch my attention due to how you both developed the obvious two main character (sayamilky), then adding the other supporting characters with a unique distinctness that I find it hard to find within fics these days. Short terms for it: I love this story.  :fap

Now, after seeing what has come so far, I have a few things in my mind such as why is that you two decide to make it all girls characters? Well I am fully aware the purpose of this thread is to use 48G girls as the chara, but why is it that the two of you decided not to use cross gender elements in here? Did you made the system of all tribes in the world where this story takes place (Akiba, Namba, Sakae, Hakata) to be all shewolves?

I'm sorry if my words a bit jumbled up here. I'm writing this from my phone, since I'm busting to at least get these things settled down in my mind  :nervous

Thanks, you guys are awesome~ keep up the updates onegaishimasu!

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Re: Outcast and the Exiled Announcement (Q & A Today and Tomorrow)
« Reply #122 on: July 31, 2014, 01:08:25 AM »
Hello senpai-san and sei-tan (hope you're okay with it  :) )

How are you guys doing? :rock:

I wanna ask a few thing.

Hopefully you guys wull write how rena realized jurina is her mate, and exactly where is kuwabara?

I wanted to ask about yuiparu as well but they've all been ask by other readers :D

If all of this will be answered in the later chapters, then... YAHOO! Cant wait for it!

Thanks for opening this Q&A ^^

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Re: Outcast and the Exiled Announcement (Q & A Today and Tomorrow)
« Reply #123 on: July 31, 2014, 03:51:03 AM »
Questions:

1. Do you going to add the more famous OTP like Kojiyuu, atsumina..?

2. milky going to return home, someday?

3. If a wolf and a human have a "kid/pup" they are half wolf or half human? or could be like harry potter that the kid/pup gonna be a full wolf or a full human..

4. About Sakae tribe.. Kubawara was the leader back then.. but like a leader I think she must left a succesor.... i guess.

5. If Sayaka and others are from Hakata when they were pup.. How they ended in Namba?... Hakata doesnt have a "adult tribe" like sakae or osala?

I think this are a few :3 of my questions

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and of course thanx for the fic is awesome!!

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Re: Outcast and the Exiled Announcement (Q & A Today and Tomorrow)
« Reply #124 on: July 31, 2014, 01:32:30 PM »
Hello Charlotte -san and Sei-san..

Firstly before I get to say anything else, I just want to say thank you for using some characters that aren't oftenly used in fics. I don't usually read sayamilky since I have seen all of them all over the place, bit this fic managed to catch my attention due to how you both developed the obvious two main character (sayamilky), then adding the other supporting characters with a unique distinctness that I find it hard to find within fics these days. Short terms for it: I love this story.  :fap

Now, after seeing what has come so far, I have a few things in my mind such as why is that you two decide to make it all girls characters? Well I am fully aware the purpose of this thread is to use 48G girls as the chara, but why is it that the two of you decided not to use cross gender elements in here? Did you made the system of all tribes in the world where this story takes place (Akiba, Namba, Sakae, Hakata) to be all shewolves?

I'm sorry if my words a bit jumbled up here. I'm writing this from my phone, since I'm busting to at least get these things settled down in my mind  :nervous

Thanks, you guys are awesome~ keep up the updates onegaishimasu!

I like this question but first thank you for reading our fic and enjoying it as well.

It originally started as a SayaMilk idea only but as Char and I kept talking about we started making headcanons of that small idea and it expanded. As we wrote we started adding characters too and we like to make sure they each have a role in the story.

As to why we made it an all girls characters, well simply because this is based on the 48G itself and has a bit of inspiration from the Amazons. You know, all women nation and they were hella strong. And not all the characters here are female, we mentioned Togasaki and Yuasa, there's also the OC character Aki and the fat ass Futuotta which is an OC too. There aren't many male figures here because we are mainly focusing on SayaMilky and the people around them.
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Re: Outcast and the Exiled Announcement (Q & A Today and Tomorrow)
« Reply #125 on: July 31, 2014, 01:45:28 PM »
Questions:

1. Do you going to add the more famous OTP like Kojiyuu, atsumina..?

2. milky going to return home, someday?

3. If a wolf and a human have a "kid/pup" they are half wolf or half human? or could be like harry potter that the kid/pup gonna be a full wolf or a full human..

4. About Sakae tribe.. Kubawara was the leader back then.. but like a leader I think she must left a succesor.... i guess.

5. If Sayaka and others are from Hakata when they were pup.. How they ended in Namba?... Hakata doesnt have a "adult tribe" like sakae or osala?

I think this are a few :3 of my questions

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and of course thanx for the fic is awesome!!

1. Undecided yet. SayaMilky will be the mainship and NishiKumi will be sailing along with them.

2. Her home is where ever Sayaka is.

3. The offspring will be a shewolf just like Sayaka and the other shewolves in this story.

4. SKE's original leader was Hirata Rikako when she graduated Kuwabara and Nakanishi took the roles as leaders. It was not discussed but something that came naturally and when Kuwabara graduated, she did not announce a new leader nor consult anyone about. So the announcement of Nakanishi being SKE's leader at Gaishi Hall 2013 concert was something that Nakanishi did not expect (and maybe Kuwabara too) but something everyone else did. I'm not sure if you notice some of the parallels that this story has with the real 48G.

6. That will be answered in the later chapters.
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Re: Outcast and the Exiled Announcement (Q & A Today and Tomorrow)
« Reply #126 on: July 31, 2014, 01:47:36 PM »
Hello senpai-san and sei-tan (hope you're okay with it  :) )

How are you guys doing? :rock:

I wanna ask a few thing.

Hopefully you guys wull write how rena realized jurina is her mate, and exactly where is kuwabara?

I wanted to ask about yuiparu as well but they've all been ask by other readers :D

If all of this will be answered in the later chapters, then... YAHOO! Cant wait for it!

Thanks for opening this Q&A ^^

We're doing fine, still falling over idols.

I think Char already answered your questions about Rena but as for Kuwabara, her whereabouts are unknown. One of the many mysteries of this story.
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Re: Outcast and the Exiled Announcement (Q & A Today and Tomorrow)
« Reply #127 on: July 31, 2014, 03:45:55 PM »
for starters, i'm an avid fan of O&E on tumblr and when i read the announcement, i thought why not leave a comment since it really deserves one. so yeah, i end up making an account here after being a lurker for about a year (reason is i'm kinda lazy posting on forums. lol )

 anyway, I really love it. I think it's the one of the most decent and well thought fic that i've read after joining the 48group fandom. and it's SayaMilky for crying out loud! who doesn't want sayamilky?!  I agree to what the others are saying that there isn't a lot of fics for this pairing, so this my friends is pure awesomeness.

The fact that i'm starting to ship other pairings that I don't usually follow i think speaks a lot. Aside from that, i seriously love the interaction between Yokoyamamoto and NishiSaya. i find it always fun and amusing. and can i just say that satocest started to grow on me, especially after that last chapter. lol. about sayamilky....what can i say about them?...well, they're gay.  :lol:

As for questions, i think most of it are already answered here , so i don't have any as of the moment. but i would love to know more about paru's story because that's been bugging me since the beginning.

that's it for now, i guess. thanks for this. seriously guys, thanks a lot.

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Re: Outcast and the Exiled Announcement (Q & A Today and Tomorrow)
« Reply #128 on: July 31, 2014, 04:53:57 PM »
@maknaeshi:

Thanks for reading first of all, it means a lot to the both of us.
I understand the struggle of being lazy, so it's no problem with lurking around here.
You're also not the only one to confess that in this thread.
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Re: Outcast and the Exiled Announcement (Q & A Today and Tomorrow)
« Reply #129 on: July 31, 2014, 05:43:35 PM »
Well, I really don't have any questions as I'm just patiently waiting for every update.
Although I did feel a serious temptation to read up on the progress of O&E, when Sei left her laptop with me, but I was firm that I won't cheat on other readers.
Well I read O&E twice evey update, one on tumblr and one here, I think I'm addicted to your fic. When Sei told me she was doing  collab with Char, I was like "omg those two would make such a wonderful fic" and you guys did. And since there aren't that many yuiparu and sayamilk fics please continue to work had on O&E! You guys are the best!!
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Re: Outcast and the Exiled Announcement (Q & A Today and Tomorrow)
« Reply #130 on: July 31, 2014, 09:13:32 PM »
@maknaeshi

Thank you for the support, I was kinda like you; too lazy to open an account here. As for Paru's story, we're still considering on how to make it happen.

@kahineechan

I would have cut you if you did read it, I'm glad I had SKE concerts to distract you at that time and thank you for reading.

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We all appreciate the comments and support! Thank you for reading, O&E!  :shakeit:
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Re: Outcast and the Exiled Announcement (Q & A Today and Tomorrow)
« Reply #131 on: August 01, 2014, 05:19:40 PM »
@sei-tan48

Oh the kouhaku did the trick. And Yukko's birthday LoD. Plus I was pretty sure that tye good in me will bug me if I did read that.
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Outcast and the Exiled Chapter 15 (SayaMilky and others)
« Reply #132 on: August 04, 2014, 12:38:57 AM »
Chapter 15:
Warning: Let's see, Fighting, Lots of blood, and....oh yea! Death! Post reactions at the bottom

The rest that anyone was able to gain through the night was limited, as the sun was beginning to to rise, and along with it, the tension around the camp. As the first rays of light hit the camp, wolf after wolf began to awake to prepare for the coming blood bath.

Among them was the soon to be leader, Yuka barking out any commands needed to her lieutenants, she was busy double and triple checking everything. She couldn’t risk anything going wrong or else her people’s blood will be on her hands and she won’t be able to handle the guilt for failing them.

Kumi on the other hand was right beside her, helping the wolf put on her armor and doing her best not to show her nervousness to the shewolf. Yuka’s armor was made up of a brigandine fitted with a steel chest piece to protect her heart, a steel plate pauldron for her shoulder and plated vambraces for both of her arms, and a set of knee-high plated greaves completed her armor, she wore it over a much lighter version of her usual desert robes. Lastly, strapped by her side was her most prized scimitar.

Every piece that she wore was hand crafted by Seira and her second advisor had decorated with Sakae’s colors. She was grateful to have a friend like Seira who was dedicated enough to create an armor that fit her perfectly.

She looked at her mate who was tightening the straps on one of her vambraces. Even though she hoped to not face combat, Kumi too was in a similar set made of leather, but not as heavy as everyone elses with the pauldrons and vambraces removed. If push came to shove, she needed to get out of any situation that didn’t seem favorable. She’d assigned several of her guards to simply protect Kumi while hidden in the girl’s armor was the dagger that Yuka gave to her, an extra precaution and a last resort. Better safe than sorry.

“Thank you.” Yuka turned her attention to her mate, once she noticed that she was done being suited up.

Instead of responding, Kumi simply gave the shewolf a pat on her shoulder, followed by a peck on her cheek. She wasn’t sure if she could speak normally right now.

Seira approached the two, interrupting their moment and Yuka reluctantly looked away. Seira was dressed similarly to Yuka, except her’s was of a different color and covered a little less of her body. It left her belly and thighs exposed, when she was asked as to why she wore so little the shewolf mentioned something about ‘being able to breathe better in it’, but Yuka didn’t pay too much mind about it. As long as the armor did it’s job correctly.
 
“We’re finished preparing everywhere.” She said, as she dug her spear butt into the ground beneath them.

A moment later, Mieko showed up, she was dressed in the same gear as Kumi. Meant for movement first, protection second. “All the tents are up, and supplies accounted for.” She reported, before looking over at her younger sister. “Where are you positioned, Seira?” She asked.

“Near your tent naturally. No one is getting past my defenses.”

“Remember what I said last night? I’m holding it to you.” Mieko reminded the younger wolf.

Watching the two siblings bicker, Yuka scanned the area. “Where is Sayaka and Miyuki?”

Hearing the question, Mieko put the argument to a halt. “Miyuki’s is at another tent, she has to fix a mistake made by some of the younger wolves. They put too much dry root into a mixture, and now she has to dilute it or else it could ruin a whole batch of pain relieving exilers.”

Yuka nodded. “And Sayaka is with her I assume?”

“Yes.”

Running a hand through her hair, Yuka looked up at the sun and glared at it, it was nearly at it’s perch.  “Tell everyone to get ready. They’re nearly here.” She addressed the Sato sisters, a moment later, they ran off in different directions of the camp. They’re yells could be heard in both directions.

With the information they have gathered about Rena, the shewolf’s tactic was quite simple; overwhelm the enemy with massive forces and the best way to counter it was to do the same. Hopefully, their numbers will be enough.

Feeling a hand on her own, Yuka looked over at Kumi. She could feel her mate’s hand shaking on top of hers, so she grabbed it and brought it up to her lips. “We’ll be fine. I promise both you you.”

She kissed her mate’s palm again, her thumb stroking stroking the knuckles in what she hoped was a comforting way. Anything could happen today and Yuka wanted to spend every possible moment looking into her mate’s eyes.

Kumi nodded slowly, swallowing a lump that formed in her throat. The impending battle was starting to worry her. As she glanced around, she wasn’t even sure who would come back from it. ‘These negative thoughts are no good.’

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‘This gear is a pain in the ass.’ Sayaka huffed to herself, adjusting her chest plates for the 100th time, since putting it on. She understood that everyone was required to put something on, and since she was going to in the front lines, she needed something heavy but the weight on her chest was killing her.

Sighing to herself, she glanced into the tent where her mate was fixing a mistake, a pretty bad one. She was still working hard at it for two hours in and had been patiently waiting that long, ignoring the reminders of those that passed by that she need to get to the front lines as soon as possible. Hearing Miyuki’s voice, she fixed her ears on it, and a moment later, she came out, a neutral expression on her face. “I fixed it.”

Smiling, Sayaka offered her arm to her, in which Miyuki took it gratefully. “Good job. I have to get you back to your tent, I heard Seira as she passed by...more like ran by.”

Nodding, Miyuki allowed herself to be escorted to the tent she was stationed at. Unfortunately, it was nowhere near where her stubborn mate was going to be fighting. But she was near Mieko and Seira, it meant that her mate will be safe.

“Something on your mind?” Sayaka asked, noticing the look on Miyuki’s face. “You can tell me you know.”

“I’m just worried that something bad will happen.” She stopped, making Sayaka turn to face her. Her hands went up to the hold her wolf’s face. “You’ll be careful, right? You won’t do anything stupid like take an arrow to the knee for Yuka?”

Sayaka laughed. “I’ll try not to take an arrow to my knee.” She paused, her mood changing to a more serious one. “Take care of yourself and I promise to come back to you in one piece.”

“Make sure that you do or I’ll smack your nose so hard that you won’t even be able to smell anything.” Miyuki retorted and the shewolf leaned forward for a quick kiss, not minding that they could be blocking someone’s path.

“Let’s go.” Sayaka stated, taking Miyuki’s hand.

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The first sign that Rena’s army had arrived was a lone arrow falling into their camp. Fortunately, it hadn’t struck anyone down but it landed far too close to where Yuka was standing. There was nothing special about the arrow but a quick inspection showed that the tip was dipped with aconitum. A poison lethal to humans as well as shewolves. Whoever fired this must have amazing skills and intended to their leader down as soon as possible.

Yuka had sent out a warning for everyone to stay alert. Using aconitum in combat was cowardly amongst their kind but from the looks of it Rena didn’t seem to care about that. Fortunately, no arrows followed after that and it seemed Rena had sent it to warn them.

By midmorning Rena’s forces had arrived, appearing first as black spots over the dunes but as time went by the spots had changed to a long dark line that surrounded their camp. The tension within the camp rose when the black spots surrounded them on all sides and slowly started to approach them, there will be no escape.

Shaking out her limbs one last time, Yuka looked back at her own troops. They seemed about as ready as they were going to be. She could see a variety of different faces, she could see those from the people that had been with her since this war started and amongst those familiar faces were those that have just joined her but believed in her ability to be their leader. She could feel their gaze on her, they were all putting their hopes for a much better future but most of all she could feel their determination to win.

“For the past five years, we spent our days running, surviving and watching those we love forcibly taken away by death’s hand, we lost our homes and a bit of ourselves… We started to forget what it was like to roam our land without fear for our lives and mostly for our children’s future.”

She paused and took a deep breath as her face change from sadness to determination. “But today we will no longer have any of that!”

They all cried out, cheering for their leader and gathering strength from Yuka’s words. The shewolf said each word slowly, making sure that everyone understood her. “We will no longer cower with our tails tucked between our legs, we will no longer live each day by the skin of our teeth, we will no longer dread the day that we will lose someone that we love from this meaningless war because today we will take up our arms to fight for our home, for those that we have lost but most of all…”

Yuka unsheathed her weapon, catching a glimpse of Seira’s proud smile as she raised it high, the blade shining like a beacon under the sun. She pointed it towards the charging black mass of their enemy. “...for the glory of Sakae!”

With a deafening cry, Sakae’s army charged forward. The two groups continued until they met in the middle with a loud clang of metal on metal. Cries of pain and effort could be heard from both sides.

Blocking an incoming sword slash, Yuka sidestepped it, before kicking the enemy back. While she was dealing with this one, another tried to attack from her left, and she just barely dodge that too with her own blade. Cutting down the other, she continued onward. She had to find Rena and take her down as soon as possible.

Maneuvering her way through hordes of wolves, she tried her best to assist anyone while continuing her search. She could hear the harsh breathing of wolves around her, followed by the clang of metal on metal, occasionally the sound of someone hitting the ground followed. The smell of blood and sweat was starting to get stronger, as the high sun beat down on them

The battle had only just begun and the shewolf knew that the longer this lasts the more people they will lose.

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Opting to go in weaponless, Sayaka danced her way through the battlefield. She always loved the thrill of a fight, she trusted that her armor would protect her through most of her carnage going on around here. Punching the day lights out of the nearest wolf, she continued on with her own pile of wolves surrounding her. She has yet to move from her spot, she just waited for more to come her way.

What she didn’t see was one wolf sneaking up from behind her. The sneaky wolf almost had the full element of surprise, until she stepped on someone’s tail. Hearing someone’s shrill in pain, she turned her head, and saw the enemy wolf. Tackling her, she began bashing her face in but stopped when her attacker fell unconscious. She had no intention of killing anyone today, but making it so they can’t move for a while would do just fine. She’ll let Yuka’s soldiers do the rest.

Feeling someone yank her off the wolf, she rolled on the ground a bit, before coming to a rest in a crouching position. Shaking her head to remove the dizzy sensation she was experiencing from the rolls, she tried to find the one responsible for throwing her. Feeling something run down her arm, she looked at her arm to find small pinpricks of blood flowing down.

‘When did I get hurt?’ Sayaka wondered, before soft giggles were heard. Head shooting back up, Sayaka found a figure looming over her, a lone shewolf, who was wearing a different set of armor than anyone else on the field.

Her knew opponent had a dark red leather chest plate with a pauldron on her right shoulder and a battle skirt that seemed to be cut unevenly but instead of making her look rugged it only somehow made her more menacing. But the most noticeable feature was the finger claw that she had on each hand her index fingers and thumb encompassed by the unusual weapon. The most menacing aspect of the weapon was the jagged curved blade jutting out of it, she couldn’t imagine what it would feel like to have those things stabbing her. She had a very intimidating aura around her and the blood spatters that she could see on the shewolf only added to the aura.

“You look strong. Let’s fight.” The strange wolf smirked, raising her clawed hand, and making a beckoning motion with her index finger. The wolf had no stance, she just stood there straight and Sayaka felt insulted at being treated so lightly.

“If you see Rena, take her down immediately. Once an army loses their leader, they have no reason to fight. But be careful.”

Yuka’s words echoed in her head. ‘She must be Rena. The nutjob that outsmarted us.’ Grinning to herself, Sayaka stood up and brushed the dirt off her gear before cracking her knuckles. She could see the interested glint in Rena’s eyes. “Come then, Rena.” She said.

Hearing her name, the wolf began giggling again, as she charged the Namba shewolf. Sayaka could barely keep her eyes trailing the speed the crazed wolf had. When the first punch landed on her, she left the air leave her lungs. Quickly recovering, Sayaka grabbed the arm and twisted it sharply before returning a punch with all her strength. Her punches were strong enough to knock out a fully grown bison.

But this time the punch didn’t even make the wolf falter, as it made impact with her face. Rena turned her head to look at Sayaka, before she started laughing. Blood was trickling from the side of her face, as Sayaka busted her lip open and her teeth had accidentally cut the inside of her mouth.  Halting the laughter, Rena smirked once again. “My turn.”

Before Sayaka had a chance to hear the words, a knee made contact with the exact same spot of the punch before. ‘I’m going to be bruised up later.’ She cringed, feeling fingers in her hair, her locks were tugged roughly, forcing her to look up at the crazed wolf.

Rena’s nose flared, as she caught Sayaka’s scent. “Your scent….was on J’s body. Ah! You’re the one who hurt her I bet.” She mumbled, before turning her gaze back to the wolf in her hold. “That’s no good.” Tightening her grip of Sayaka, she trailed her clawed hand down the shewolf’s face, the blades just barely adding pressure to her face, but small pinpricks of red was starting to show up.

Struggling, Sayaka kicked the wolf’s feet, causing them both to tumble down to the sand, using the fall to her advantage, Sayaka began punching Rena. But to her own discomfort, the girl just kept giggling. ‘What is wrong with this freak!’

“Are you done?” Rena asked in a neutral tone, Sayaka’s fist still attached to her face from the latest punch. Feeling the wolf shift from under her, the Namba wolf found herself being thrown off, before the positions changed. “Let me hear you scream.”

Sayaka’s eyes widened in fear.

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Yuka took down her opponents as fast as she could, barely taking a moment to check if they were down for good. Her armor was now stained with blood, she wasn’t sure if the blood was her’s or from her enemies, the rush of the battle was making her feel a bit numb to her own pain. She kicked the dead shewolf off her weapon, cringing when the entrails still clung to the blade and started look around for any sign of Rena.

She hadn’t found the crazed leader yet and the longer it took for to find the Rena, the higher are the chances of them losing this battle. She spied one of Jurina’s lieutenants struggling with two of Rena’s soldiers. Yuka started to walk towards her, prying a spear stuck to the ground before throwing it towards one of the attackers. The spear struck the back of the shewolf’s head, burying through it with the spear’s tip peeking out just a little bit from their face and the shewolf stood still for a brief moment before dropping to the ground.

The other shewolf froze upon realizing that her companion was dead and the lieutenant that she’d been harassing immediately struck her down with a blow to the head with a mace.

“Masana!” Yuka yelled out, catching the other shewolf’s attention. “Follow me!”

Without waiting for a reply Yuka turned, raising her arm just in time to block a scimitar about to slice her head off. Her vambraces were strong enough to take the blow but the impact still rattled her and Masanya was on her side to help the caravan leader.

A few shewolves joined the small group that Yuka had formed and they made quick work on any enemy they encountered. Her personal guards would have been in their place but she had made sure that they were all protecting Kumi, Mieko and Seira. The last two were capable of protecting themselves but she only wanted to keep the rest of her family safe. The caravan leader was taking a moment in cleaning off the blood from her weapon when her hearing caught a familiar voice. Her ears twitched, homing in the direction of where the scream from and her eyes widened after recognizing Sayaka’s pained screams.

She quickly resheathed her weapon and shifted forms, she needed to get to Sayaka as fast as she can and in her wolf form she’ll be able to get to her destination faster. As she neared where Sayaka is, the other sounds of battle slowly faded and she caught the sound of manic laughter.

Yuka skidded to a halt, the few shewolves that managed to keep up with her did the same. The site before them was beyond horrifying, there were a mix of dead bodies from both warring sides all of them cut up to bits. Blood was starting to stain the sand and the little bit that the sand couldn’t absorbed stayed stagnant.

In the midst of all the blood and gore was Rena, sitting on the Namba shewolf’s belly and pressing her body to Sayaka’s, rocking her hips in time with her own moans. She was running her clawed fingers down Sayaka’s face, creating more cuts and causing more blood to cover the tortured shewolf’s face. The crazed shewolf shuddered, biting down harshly on Sayaka’s lip as she sliced open the shewolf’s arm.

Acting on instinct, Yuka rammed her body against Rena’s and shifted forms as soon as she found her footing. She unsheathed her sword, pointing it threateningly at Rena while stealing a few glances at her comrade.

“Sayaka!” She called out but only heard a pained groan from the shewolf. Sayaka was practically covered in blood and several cuts can be seen all over her body. At this point she couldn’t tell how bad the shewolf’s wounds were but the lack of any movement or response worried her. “Dammit, help her!”

The shewolves that followed Yuka sprang into action, they inspected her wounds and Masana managed to stammer out that she needed to be taken to a medical station.

Yuka cursed again. “Go, she needs to stay alive! I’ll take care of this monster!”

They scrambled around to lift the shewolf up, carefully so as not to aggravate her wounds. With the knowledge that Sayaka is being taken cared of, she focused her attention to Rena. She had immediately recognized the crazed shewolf from the descriptions that Jurina had given her but the insanity in the other shewolf’s eyes was what made her easily recognizable. Rena hadn’t stood up yet but instead she was on her back, licking her claws sensually.

Sayaka had been a worthy opponent but she lacked tenacity, still the fight with the Namba shewolf still gave a pleasant rush and Rena wasn’t one to be picky with her opponents.

“Get up.” Yuka growled out but Rena ignored her, so she trudged towards the still prone shewolf with her weapon poised to cut her down already.

As if realizing that her time to bask in her own little victory was over the crazed wolf dodged Yuka’s blade, barely missing her neck by a few inches. She sweeped Yuka’s feet with her leg, making her opponent fall on to back. Rena slowly stood up adn Yuka recovered, she would’ve done to Yuka what she did to Sayaka earlier but the other shewolf just arrived and she wanted to play a bit.

Noticing Yuka’s face twisted in rage, Rena tilted her head to the side, clicking her claws together the sound only served to make Yuka angrier. She knew who her new plaything was and looked forward to the fight. “Hey, Yuka… are you mad?”

Yuka sneered at the girl and charged towards Rena and instead of dodging, she hooked her claw on the blade before delivering a kicking to the shewolf’s midriff. Yuka felt her breath rush out of her lungs and on instinct she retaliated by shoving the shewolf away with her own strength.

“You are mad.” Rena stumbled back a bit, smiling maniacally at Yuka before charging at the shewolf.

The fight continued both managing to land blows on their opponent, there was even a point where Rena shifted, her coat reddish brown and lankier than Yuka’s, she ran with Yuka following closely and snapping her jaws at her tail. They weaved in and out of the battlefield, only to be seen as streaks of brown and black. Rena suddenly stopped, shifting again but Yuka kept going, leaping forward and shifting halfway. Her left shoulder collided with Rena’s back and the crazed shewolf cried out, the steel plated pauldron made the impact more painful.

Yuka landed on top of Rena, she sat on her opponent’s back and was about slam her fists into Rena’s head when she heard her student’s voice.

“Jurina?” Yuka looked up and realized that they had reached a small camp. There was only one tent and it might even be Rena’s private tent.

She saw her student tied to one of the tent’s poles, struggling against her bonds to try and get to her. Yuka stood, drawing her weapon for to cut her student’s bonds. All of her attention was on her precious student, she’d been worried sick about Jurina’s safety and was relieved to see that Jurina looked unharmed.

“Hold on, pup. I’ll get you out of there.” Yuka consoled. “Just let me cut those bonds.”

Jurina stopped struggling and waited for her teacher to free her. Her wrists were chafed and bleeding a bit from her struggles, there were tears in her eyes and Yuka hurried her steps to reach her charge.

Just as Yuka was within arms reach, the younger shewolf started to struggle again, attempting to get close to her teacher.

“No! No, Yuka!” Jurina cried out, when she saw Rena approaching Yuka from behind but her warning was too late.

Yuka screamed as she felt sharp claws dig in to her lower back and side. Rena dug her claws deeper, making Yuka drop to her knees and drop her weapon. The crazed wolf kicked it away, uncaring as to where it landed. She rested her head on Yuka’s shoulder, rubbing the side of head against Yuka’s neck like a cat seeking for some attention would. The lower half of face covered in her own blood with her nose still bleeding from when Yuka had slammed the butt of her sword onto and from Sayaka’s punch earlier.

“No… no…” Rena said slowly almost lovingly. “You’re not taking her away from me. No, nobody will be taking her away from me, understand? She’s mine! Jurina is mine!”

Rena ripped her claws out when she said the last part, Yuka’s blood splattering to every direction and a few drops landing on Jurina, making the young shewolf cry harder for her teacher. Yuka fell forward, shocks of pain shooting through her body.

“Yuka… no, please stand up, please...” Tears ran down Jurina’s face as she watched her teacher suffer, writhing on the ground. She tried to reach for teacher again but with her hands tied and tethered, she only caused her wrists bleed more as she begged for Yuka to stand up.

Rena scoffed, noticing the way her mate crying like a newborn pup. She lazily delivering a kick to Yuka’s side. “Why are you crying for her? Stop wasting your tears on her!”

But Jurina continued to ignore Rena, she kept begging for her teacher to stand up and it only served to increase Rena’s ire. She scowled then she removed one her claws to pull out a dagger from her boot.

She glared at Jurina, holding the weapon tightly in her hand. “If I kill her, will you stop crying?”

Jurina half cried and wailed. “No! Don’t kill her please! Don’t kill Yuka, just please don’t hurt her anymore! I’ll do anything just please don’t kill her! Please… please...”

“Fine.” Rena dropped her dagger and smiled sweetly at Jurina, walking towards her mate as if nothing happened. She cupped Jurina’s face with one hand while the other wiped away her tears. “See? I won’t hurt her anymore now stop crying.”

She carefully moved away the stray locks of hair that covered Jurina’s face, her mate was still crying and she did her best to comfort her. “No more tears, I want to see you smile. Please, Jurina? Smile for me? I promise you, I won’t hurt Yuka anymore. Now stop cryi-”

Rena screamed as she reached behind her, trying to reach the dagger that was suddenly buried in her back but Yuka grabbed her collar and dragged her away from Jurina. “Get away….from my student!”

Jurina sat there with wide eyes, she was unsure of what to do. Someone was going to die, either her teacher or her newly discovered, but insane mate. She still wasn’t sure to believe Rena but something was urging her to do something. Spotting Yuka’s scimitar laying nearby, she squirmed over, trying to reach it. The sound of Yuka and Rena fighting nearby, causing her to shift her attention to them for a moment, before continuing with her own struggle.

Finally managing to reach the sharpened blade, she began dragging it closer to her body with her foot, trying not to scratch it up. Once it was close enough for use, she began rubbing the binding against it. Her wrists were becoming looser and loose with each movement, moments later, she was free.

Turning around, she found Yuka about to give her final blow to Rena and her teacher looked like she was going to fall over at any moment. Scrambling to her feet, she began running to them.

“You know I was going to give you a way out, but you’re a monster.” Yuka hissed, as she sat on Rena, the dagger in her hand tightly gripped, as it was held right above the crazed shewolf’s heart, ready to pierce it. “Monsters have no place in this world!”

She raised her hand and quickly brought it down. Right as the blade was near the shewolf’s heart, it’s target changed last second, hitting someone unexpected. Jurina grunted as it went into her shoulder. “I made...it.” She coughed, as she felt as if all the air in her lungs left her mouth.

“Jurina! Why did you take that blow?” Yuka screamed, she was confused fully, a bit angry and worried at the same time.

“She’s mine to deal with. I won’t let you take her. If she has to die it will be by my hands.” Jurina explained, looking up at her teacher, her signature grin on her face. Yuka was taken back by those words, but trusting her student, she slowly got off Rena.

Yuka didn’t take out the blade yet, removing it from this position will only aggravate the wound she’d caused. Instead she helped Jurina sit up.

“Juri..na?” Rena called out, she was surprised at the young wolf’s act.

“Shut up for a second!” Jurina barked. Wincing a bit from the blade still stuck on her, she helped the older Matsui up. Still unsure of what to do, she sat there. “Call off your troops. Now.”

Surprisingly obedient, Rena shifted and threw her head back, howling to anyone who was still left to stop their attack and to fall back. Looking back at Jurina, Rena seemed to be waiting for her next order, but as she felt a hand on her head, she shifted back. “Thank..you…” Jurina said, before falling forward. Catching her, Rena felt something warm and sticky on her hand, and for the first time, she showed emotion besides rage.

Yuka saw the whole exchange, it was like Rena completely calmed down. “Help her!” She heard Rena pled her, tears streaming down her face. “She’s losing too much blood.”

“We need to get her back to camp. Come.”

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“I need more bandages!”

“Another elixir please!”

“Incoming 3 more wolves!”

“Make way! This one is really bad!”

“Miyuki! We need you for this one!”


Hearing her name, Miyuki turned around with bandages in hand, along with an elixir, but nearly dropped everything as she saw who her patient was. Her own mate. “S-Sayaka…” As the shewolf’s name left her mouth, she rushed over to the heavily wounded shewolf, and began working on her. Doing her best to swallow back her tears for now.

Holding Sayaka’s head up, she gave her an elixir to stop the pain for now. Once it was empty, she began peeling the armor off her body and assessing the damage. ‘She’s lost so much blood.’ Miyuki scanned, as she began to clean the wounds. Her fingers trailed over a large cut on Sayaka’s arm, Sayaka shot up and bellowed in pain, even though she was unconscious.

Through Sayaka’s cries of pain, Miyuki heard a howl through the whole area, cheers of the wolves all around could be heard.

“Get ready for more wolves. We won, but now comes treatment!”

Turning her attention back to Sayaka, Miyuki could see the cut had started bleeding heavily, as Sayaka arced, making a lot of her wounds much worse. She tried to hold Sayaka down, with  tears were streaming down her face, her breathing started picking up as well and a feeling of helplessness came over her. Miyuki fell back and for the first time she didn’t know what to do. Her mate was experiencing pain beyond her help, even if she did cover it up, she would only continue to bleed.

“Make way! We have more coming.”

“Get Mieko now!”

A few more people came in and at the opening of the tent was Yuka being bandaged up, talking to the closest person in charge while an unknown wolf carrying Jurina to another spot that happened to be open. She looked just as bad, as anyone else in here, but she was sitting calmly beside Jurina, tears flowing from her eyes.

A moment later two bodies rushed into the tent, Mieko and Kumi. Immediately, the older Sato’s eyes widened, as she surveyed the damage done to the two wolves. But Kumi on the other hand looked like she was going to faint, her attention stuck on her surrogate parents and especially at Sayaka.

“Sayaka!” Kumi cried, as she rushed over to her.

She knelt down next to Miyuki, taking hold of the shewolf’s face and listening to the shallow breathing of her surrogate parent. She looked at Miyuki and took both of the girl’s hand in hers.

“Miyuki, do something! We have to help her!” She begged but Miyuki shook her head, she gathered Kumi in her arms and held on to the girl tightly. She wanted to save her love but what was in front of was her skills.

“Move!” Mieko shoved them away, dragging along a nurse who was carrying supplies. She did her best to staunch Sayaka’s bleeding as well as replenish her blood with elixirs but there were too many wounds and the amount of blood covering Sayaka was making them difficult to find. There also something preventing the elixirs from working.

It was several minutes later that Mieko stopped, she grabbed the nurse's hand that was about to give Sayaka another elixir and shook her head. Her shoulders slumped, there was nothing they could do now. She stepped away, unable to look at Miyuki and Kumi as they watched Sayaka slowly slip away.

As Namba’s Alpha took her last breath and Miyuki’s felt the world fade, her gaze only focused on her wolf. She wanted to move, to crawl next to Sayaka and lay with her, pretend that they were laying under stars as they travelled to Sakae and Sayaka making her feel safe even just holding her. Her arms falling to her side listlessly and silent tears falling from her eyes.

Kumi on the other hand, wasn’t coping well, she had just witness someone she had come love die right in front her. She brought her hands up to her face, her shoulders shaking as she held back her cries. Without any warning, Kumi’s hand rushed to her head, a sharp pain on her head almost made her fall back. Noticing the girl almost falling, Miyuki tried to help her. “Don't!” She yelled, at this point both hands were gripping her head. Hot tears were streaming down her face, the pain was becoming so intense.

A sudden growl left her mouth, leaving everyone in the tent confused, as they stared at the source. The growling got louder, until a bright light enveloped the area, and only continued to expand from tent to tent, even spilling into the battle field, where once dead wolves lay. As the light died down, those who were injured, even to the brink of death had no evidence of the battle before them, they looked as good a new, and Kumi…

Yuka approached her mate with wide eyes, she had assumed the girl was human, but she was wrong. She didn’t look much different from before, the girl’s hair had grown longer and she looked more mature, on her wrists were markings that flared for a few times before they vanished. Just as Kumi started to fall and Yuka caught her, briefly noting that she no longer felt any pain.

She effortlessly picked her mate, making sure that Kumi’s head was resting comfortably on her shoulder before looking around to the people that surrounded them. There was a mix of fear, confusion and awe on their faces but Yuka ignored them. Whatever had happened it seemed to have just saved their lives.

“Mieko, check on the wounded, make a body count and…” She looked at Rena, noting that the manic gaze from her eyes was gone. “...treat our new allies as our own. I want a full report from you and Seira before dusk.”

Yuka exited the tent and Mieko started to direct everyone rushed to as what the elder shewolf ordered them to. The stillness from what had just happened had disappeared.

In the midst of all the hustle and bustle, Miyuki gingerly crawled towards Sayaka. She had seen her wolf take her last breath and she could’ve have sworn her heart had stopped the moment Sayaka’s did. But now it seemed the shewolf was fine, all her wounds were gone but Miyuki was having a hard time believing what she saw. She placed a shaky hand where Sayaka’s heart would be and she let out a relieved sob when she felt the rise and fall of her wolf breathing as if she was only sleeping but what relieved her the most was that she felt the shewolf’s heart beat. It was there sure and strong, she fell to her knees next to Sayaka’s cot, burying her face deeply into the unconscious shewolf’s hair and finally letting herself cry.

This wasn’t a delusion that her grief filled heart made up, Sayaka was alive.
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Re: Outcast and the Exiled Chapter 15 (SayaMilky and others)
« Reply #133 on: August 04, 2014, 01:13:22 AM »
I can't believe that you nearly killed Sayaka, and I can't believe that I almost believed it too...  :cry:
What's Kumi anyway? Seems like she's not a normal human huh? //Maybe an angel? That would be so cool. Hahahahahhaha
Looking forward to the next chapter, really want to see how what will happen next.
As always, thanks for the great work!                                                             
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Re: Outcast and the Exiled Chapter 15 (SayaMilky and others)
« Reply #134 on: August 04, 2014, 01:26:58 AM »
I've been waiting for this chapter ... and it's awesome (乃•̃_•̃)乃

Will Milky get angry at Rena when she know that Rena is the one responsible for hurting Sayaka?
And who is Kumi,really? She's not a normal human
I can't wait for some WMatsui moment and your next chapter

Keep up the good works (´>ㅅ<)b

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Re: Outcast and the Exiled Chapter 15 (SayaMilky and others)
« Reply #135 on: August 04, 2014, 04:35:58 AM »
Omg i was tearing when Sayaka almost dead...then a miracle came YES!!

SAYAKA IS ALIVE..banzai!!

Update soon

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Re: Outcast and the Exiled Chapter 15 (SayaMilky and others)
« Reply #136 on: August 04, 2014, 05:46:21 AM »
you guys...this was....wow, just wow.

i was wondering how will the war will turn out after reading the last chapter but this one is beyond my expectation.i'm glad that you keep it to just one chapter because prolonging it will be a bit agonizing for a reader (i think). i could just imagine my frustration if you guys left us hanging. so yeah, that was really nice of you.  :P

i think we all have an idea how crazy rena is in this story, mainly because of Magisuka, but  with the way how her fight against sayaka turned out...oh boy, she's scary. the more i re-read that scene, the scarier she gets. please correct me if i'm wrong but  i think one of the reasons why sayaka lost to her was because she let the fear gets into her. 

i was starting to wonder what's happening to jurina while the war was on going but that was immediately answered when rena and yuka end up fighting right in front of her. and it end up being a good thing  since only J has the power to control rena.  btw, i like how J grinned at yuka at the end of the fight and told her that rena's for her to deal with. though i think J meant a different kind of thing. . . . .

when rena and sayaka was fighting and it started to get really messy, the first thing that came into my mind was milky...like how will she react when she sees her mate or how will she scold sayaka for being careless but i was thinking like that without knowing that sayaka was in a really bad shape. so imagine my reaction when you momentarily killed her. you know i need to re-read that scene to make sure that i'm reading it correctly. "WHAT DID YOU DO?!" and "HOW DARE YOU!" were some of the things that were running inside my mind.  :lol:  i'll admit that it left me speechless for a couple of seconds...then you came trolling us when baby kumi did.....'something' (whatever you guys  call it).... which is an interesting twist in the story... not just because it revived papa sayaka or it cured cray cray rena...but because it opens a lot more room for the story to develop and it also gives us readers this feeling of curiosity that will make us anticipate for the next chapter.

now there's a lot of things i really want to know right now...like what's the story behind kumi's power(?); what will happen to wmatsui now; how will sayaka's momentary death, will affect sayamilky's relationship; and  now that yuka's the alpha of sakae, what will happen next? next arc perhaps?

thanks for this awesome chapter char-san and sei-san (is it okay to call you that?) 

keep it up guys. :twothumbs

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Re: Outcast and the Exiled Chapter 15 (SayaMilky and others)
« Reply #137 on: August 04, 2014, 07:01:15 AM »
Things are getting more interesting here. .
The Sakae Arc has lot of surprises store. I'm having lots of adrenaline rush. .

I'll be waiting for the next update.


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Re: Outcast and the Exiled Chapter 15 (SayaMilky and others)
« Reply #138 on: August 04, 2014, 07:33:41 AM »
Epic chapter, and with new questions to answer. That battle was quite a rollercoaster of emotions X)

YES BLOODBATH!!
First thing. Hmmmm...Seira's armor that doesn't cover her tummy?? :-| She should have fought naked instead, it would have been seriouly more effective (the power of distraction~ XD )

Gekikara in her element was awesome X) Rena was utterly insane♥ she lives up to her reputation mwahahaha great jobs dear authors (do you have a name for your combi? X) )
And Jurina, poor pup saves a part of the day, she deserves pats on the head and hugs~

THEN with Sayaka, I was like NO WAY! YOU KILLED HER?? THAT CAN NOT HAPPEN! SHE'S THE MAIN CHARA!  :on blackhole:
No babies then, such a pity.
BUT then GODKuumin did her things and rose everybody from the dead (IS SHE GOD?).

Glad Sayaka made it, SayaMilky is safe.
Waiting for the incoming SayaMilky-WMatsui drama or will they easily forgive Rena.
And I'm wondering how Ju and Rena will settle as mates. X)
Did God completely heal Rena's madness? Is insanity something curable though? X)
Seems like Yuka is the alpha now.
And we will know Kumi's story, I hope.

It feels like Sakae's arc is ending soon T__T
Thanks for the update!

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Re: Outcast and the Exiled Chapter 15 (SayaMilky and others)
« Reply #139 on: August 04, 2014, 04:44:04 PM »
chapter update~!!! :shocked:

when you said character death, i just though 'oh, well.'

but to read that it was sayaka i was like, "No! how could you kill her?!!" :angry:

rena's finally show other feelings due to jurina's act  :monk gboy:

hehehe..i knew i was right. there's definitely a mystery behind kumi. :glasses: :mon geek:

and sayaka's alive! Hurrah! :luvluv2:

great chapter by the way. update soon! :omamori:

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