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Hello! This is my first time to write fanfic~ hope all of you like it and... please give me a comment  :bow:
sorry if my grammar wrong. I'm a new writer  :)


Prologue

"daisuki-da! rin-chan!" i shouted loudly to her.. i don't know she hear it or not. She leave me alone here, she is my first friend and... maybe she is my first love. I will keep waiting her.. when she leave me, i didn't have any contact or something about her. I just have a necklace.. Yes, i have a half necklace and half of that necklace is on her.. i'm still wear it. My last hope is in that necklace and i hope we will meet someday~ Because..

I'm in love with her and i want to be with her forever...






Chapter 1: The First Meeting


MayuPOV
My name is Watanabe Mayu, you can call me Mayu or Nabe. But i don’t like when someone call me Nabe. Because nabe is my nickname when i was childhood and then i want to tell you about...

*kriiing-kriiing-kriiing*
“argh! Why this clock always disturb me? I want more sleep~”
*pip-pip pip-pip*
“okay-okay! I will get up now! Who the hell call me early?!”
*click*
“what do you want old man? Do you want push me to take my father position?”
“Eehh! don’t call me old man mayu! I just want to tell you about..”
“what? You want me to married your beloved daughter? I don’t want it! Or you want me to closed my flower shop? and continue my family company?”
“NO! i don’t want tell about that. Today your co-worker will come and please be nice to her! Don’t be so cold or emotionless in front of her!”
“WHAT? You give me a co-worker? I don’t want accept he or she. I can work by myself. I don’t want someone help me!”
“I wont hear any complain from you! Just accept her!”

*pip-pip.. pip*
Let me tell you who is that old man. He is my uncle, my father younger brother. I don’t know why he always call me in the early morning, always asked me to take my father position, and always broke my mood. Now he give me a co-worker, i don’t need any help, i can do all of it. Okay, i know that i’m just a young man who want leave alone and still remember my first love...

My first love is my childhood friend. I don’t know exactly where is she now, i didn’t meet her for a years, because i didn’t find her or searching where she is.. but i still wear my half necklace, and i promise to her, to keep wear this until we will meet someday.. and i give a half of my necklace to her

After finish take a bath, i go to the kitchen to make a cup of coffee and then i hear someone press the bell. When i open the door...
“Ohayou gozaimasu~ My name is Kashiwagi Yuki, etooo... i am the new worker and... emm” her face become red.. i don’t know why, maybe she have a fever or.... nervous?!
“yoroshiku onegashimasu!” she bowed to me and lend me her hand. I lend my hand to accept her
“My name is Watanabe Mayu. I don’t know exactly where i can place-“
“i can help you anything!”
“Okay please sit here and wait for me”
“hai”

5 minutes later..

“here” i make a tea for her.. and she said
“ah arigatou watanabe-san. You don’t have to make this for me” ooh now i know why her face turned red.. it’s because she’s too shy when she talked to me...
“no problem kashiwagi-san and i want to tell you about your-“
“wait! Please don’t call me ‘kashiwagi-san’. It’s make me so old. Just call me Yuki”
“okay.... Yuki-san. i will take you to my flower shop and then i tell you about your position”
She nodded to me and i take her to my shop. I think i will give her at cashier.. i don’t have any idea to give her another position.. my uncle didn’t tell me about her ability or anything about her..
“anoo.. watanabe-san? what is my position?”
“you will take at cashier.. is that alright?”
“ah.. i forgot to tell you about my ability.. i have a hobby to arrange bunch flowers”
“okay, maybe now you can help me at cashier. When the time is come, you can help me to design. Did you bring an example design?”
She open her bag and give me her design... this is beautiful, maybe i can ask her to help me next time
“watanabe-san? i’m sorry if my design isn’t good or-“
“your design is good. You can help me to next time”
"thank you so much watanabe-san!" she replied with a huge smile
Eeeehhh?! Why my heart beat so fast when i see her huge smile... her smile so beautiful~
wait.. wait! Why i can say that? Huge smile? Beautiful smile? What’s wrong with you mayu? Wake up please!!
“eh? Do you have a fever watanabe-san? your face is red” she looked to my face
‘WHAT? My face turning to red? Oh my god help me!’
“i’m fine. i just felt today is so hot..hehe”
‘mayu please don’t make any trouble!’
“maybe because of you didn’t open the shop yet or you didn’t open the window”
“you right. I will open the shop first” when i walk to the door, she called me and said..
“thank’s for accepted me watanabe-san!” she give me a huge smiled
 “your welcome yuki-san” I said that and replied her smile and continue to open the gate...

I don’t know exactly why my heart beat so fast..
Why my face turned to red like i have a fever or like a tomato
Why i replied her smiled
Why my mood upgrade after see her smile...

To be Continued
I will look forward to any reviews and comments~  :bow: can i continue this?  :?
Hehe See you next time!  :D

Happy Eid Mubarak 1435H everybody!  :twothumbs
« Last Edit: September 08, 2015, 06:29:20 PM by fath107 »
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Re: MaYuki >> My Beautiful Flower | Prologue & Chapter 1
« Reply #1 on: July 29, 2014, 07:39:50 PM »
Woooaaaaahhhh....... another MaYuki...... :mon star:

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I don’t know exactly why my heart beat so fast..
Why my face turned to red like i have a fever or like a tomato
Why i replied her smiled
Why my mood upgrade after see her smile...
so...Mayu already feel doki-doki huh :mon crazyinlove:

This fic is interesting...... :mon thumb:
...continue pleeeease..... :bow:

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Re: MaYuki >> My Beautiful Flower | Prologue & Chapter 1
« Reply #2 on: July 29, 2014, 09:37:10 PM »
Yea, her conscience love for Yuki

Update soon

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Re: MaYuki >> My Beautiful Flower | Prologue & Chapter 1
« Reply #3 on: July 30, 2014, 03:34:56 AM »
Yay yay new fanfic  :deco:

The story is interesting and Mayu, you know you love her  :smhid

Hahah can't wait for the next update  :thumbup
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MaYuki >> My Beautiful Flower | Chapter 2
« Reply #4 on: July 30, 2014, 09:03:28 AM »
Replies for commenters of the previous chapter:

@Siren: mayu didn't realize his feeling toward yuki  :smhid thanks for your comments and i already have next chapter  :thumbsup

@Kirozoro: thanks for your comments here..  :)

@MaYuki x JuRena: love at first sight  :nya: thanks for your comments  :)

I hope you will like this~ enjoy  :)



Chapter 2: Take Her Home

YukiPOV
Today is a good day, i hope so. Because this is my first day work after i graduated from botanic university. Yesterday, my mom told me that her old friend need her help to work at his nephew shop and then she asked me about that. When i ask what kind of shop, my mom told me it’s a flower shop. I’m so happy to hear that and i answer that i can help his nephew..

“Yukirin hurry up! You will be late if you not wake up now!”
“nnnnggghhh.... okay now i’m already get up mom. Don’t be so noisy at morning” i take my blanket over my face and then someone take my blanket and shake my body to wake up.. oh mom, why you always disturb my sleep time..
“wake up Yuki! Do you remember this is your first day work? You want to get fired at your first day because you late?! Wake up sleepy head!”
“okay! Okay! I remember now!” i get up and rushed my body to the bathroom..

After i finished take a bath, mom shout my name again.. oh my, can you please low your voice?!
“Yuki! Breakfast is ready! Your car is ready too!”
I went to the kitchen then eat the breakfast faster and i go to my car... then i drived to his nephew shop..

“Finally... i reach the shop.. yokatta~”
I checked my watch, it’s 7 AM now.. wow today i wake up so early..
I found the house is beside the shop.. when i click the bell, the door open slowly and then i see...
Handsome boy~ oh my am i daydreaming? why he so young? And why.. i forgot to greet him.. maybe i’m to exited when see his face teehee~~
 “Ohayou gozaimasu~ My name is Kashiwagi Yuki, etooo... i am the new worker and... emm”
He look to me confused..
‘take it easy yukirin.. you can do it okay.. just introduce yourself’
“yoroshiku onegashimasu!” i bowed to him and he stared at me.. then i lend my hand to give a handshake... i’m glad he answer my handshake

After that he asked me to waiting him.. when he appear, he bring me a cup of tea.. what a good men haha.. but i see his face.. it’s so emotionless and cold replied to. I don’t know why he like that, maybe because he lived alone here or he has a cold heart or he... wait.. why i thinking about him? Don’t ruin your first day yukirin!
 
I followed him to the shop, when he open the door.... wow the shop very clean and.. most of the flowers in there is an expensive flowers.. hmm maybe he loved white to, because the shop have white color paint, he wear a white shirt and white khakis too...  i’m totally stunned by his looks.. hmm i want to ask about something to him, but i’m so shy to look at him. So, i just stared at his back


MayuPOV
After i finish open the shop, i turned to her... and i found, she stared at me.. why she look at me like that? I don’t like it when someone stared at me without any explanation. Then i ask her..
“Why you look at me like that Yuki-san? am i did anything wrong?”
“ah no problem watanabe-san. i just thinking about... hmm can i ask you something?”
“yes you can, what do you want to ask?”
“how old are you and why you build a flower shop? I’m sorry if i ask about this”
“i’m 20 years old. Because i like flower since i was at childhood”
“oh i see. Thank you watanabe-san” she smiled to me and i just stared to her. Why she ask about that? Does she too curious about me or she just want to know about me? Hmm i don’t want to think about that. It’s just waste my time.


•••

Time goes by.. many customers come to my shop, thanks to yuki for help me at cashier and recommended many of flowers to the customer... she’s a good person after all
“watanabe-san when the shop will closed?”
“at 6 PM. Now already the time.. i want to closed it”
“okay.. can i help you something?”
“nope, i can do it by myself. Thank you for helping me today yuki-san”
She smiled to me
“ah i didn’t do much today. Your welcome watanabe-san”
“you can go home now.. i think it’s too late if you waiting me for close this shop”
“don’t worry watanabe-san. i can wait until you finish”
I just see at her and continue to close my shop... after i finish.. i become worried when i see my watch, it’s already 7 PM.. and she still waiting me..
“yuki-san, i told you to go home.. why you still waiting me? It’s already late you know”
“i know it watanabe-san but i just want to-“
“okay now i walked you go home”
“Eeehhh?! But i ride a car.. how can you walked me home?” i turned to her and said
“does your car have a empty slot? I want to place my bike”
“bike? Wait... you go home with your bike? emm.. yes my car have a empty slot”
“of course yuki-san. okay no more question. I don’t want you get any trouble just because of waiting for me. Let’s go”
why i become so worried to her? Of course i worried, she is my worker and she is a girl!
“o..o-kay watanabe-san”


To Be Continued
thank you for read my fic.. hmm this chapter kind of short one.. because i was really sleepy while i write this chapter hehe~ :mon sweat:
i'm sorry if i have a wrong grammar.. i'm still learn~  :mon determined:
Hope you like it :) next chapter wil be more interest! :mon thumb: please comment..  i need your comment :bow: see you next time!  :hee:
« Last Edit: March 12, 2015, 05:07:58 PM by fath107 »
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Re: MaYuki >> My Beautiful Flower | Chapter 2
« Reply #5 on: July 30, 2014, 09:44:42 AM »
Yatta, Mayu is a gentlemen  :w00t:

Nice progress here  :yep:

Can't wait for the development in the next chapter  :thumbsup
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Re: MaYuki >> My Beautiful Flower | Chapter 2
« Reply #6 on: July 30, 2014, 09:54:32 AM »
Great story :)
But you should use you 1st topic, and reply to it when you post new chapter, so that the forum dont have a lots of topic with few reply each time :)

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Re: MaYuki >> My Beautiful Flower | Chapter 2
« Reply #7 on: July 30, 2014, 10:55:40 AM »
I found the house is beside the shop.. when i click the bell, the door open slowly and then i see...
Handsome boy~ oh my am i daydreaming? why he so young? And why.. i forgot to greet him.. maybe i’m to exited when see his face teehee~~

Yuki reaction:  :yuki: *Kyahhh... Handsome boy....*drooling  :ptam-shy:


why i become so worried to her? Of course i worried, she is my worker and she is a girl!
are you sure that the reason you worried about her Mayu.....  :mon misch:



 :mon thumb: I really like this fic....
....update fast...hehehehe :mon sweat:
« Last Edit: July 30, 2014, 12:20:34 PM by MaYuki x JuRena »

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Re: MaYuki >> My Beautiful Flower | Prologue & Chapter 1
« Reply #8 on: July 30, 2014, 12:16:43 PM »
The story is interesting
Update soon please :bow: :bow:

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Re: MaYuki >> My Beautiful Flower | Prologue & Chapter 1
« Reply #9 on: July 30, 2014, 01:41:49 PM »
Hoho Yuki was stuck looking at Mayu handsome face XD

Mayu is worried about Yuki ahh~ gentleman

Update soon

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MaYuki >> My Beautiful Flower | Chapter 3
« Reply #10 on: July 30, 2014, 01:52:23 PM »
Thanks for read my fanfic  :hee: and thanks for your comments :)

@Siren:  Yea, mayu is gentleman.. that's why yuki fall to him :wub: but i think he have another reason right?  :hehehe:

@Senelcar: chapter 1 and chapter 2 already combine :) i'm a new writer and i don't know how to update  :mon whimper: so i ask Seigus-san to combine them..  :) thanks to seigus-san for helping me :bow: thanks to you too for remind me :)

@MaYuki x JuRena:
I found the house is beside the shop.. when i click the bell, the door open slowly and then i see...
Handsome boy~ oh my am i daydreaming? why he so young? And why.. i forgot to greet him.. maybe i’m to exited when see his face teehee~~

Yuki reaction:  :yuki: *Kyahhh... Handsome boy....*drooling  :ptam-shy:

hahaha she always show her reaction :lol: mayu is so charming there :wub:

why i become so worried to her? Of course i worried, she is my worker and she is a girl!
are you sure that the reason you worried about her Mayu.....  :mon misch:

I think so. he already have a feeling to her :shy2: but he didn't realize it and avoid it at the beginning :smhid

@mizuratpro95: Thanks!  :)

@Kirozoro: hahaha yea, she didn't focus to anything.. because she just focus to mayu :wub: maybe mayu fall to her to  :hehehe:

Hmm in this chapter is YukiPOV and i hope you will like it :)



Chapter 3: My Little Knight

Finally, Mayu and Yuki arrived at yuki house..

YukiPOV
“here we are.. this is my house watanabe-san. thanks for walked me home”
“your welcome. I want to prepare my bike. you can parked the car right?” he smirked to me
“of course i can! You can prepare now”
Mayu get out from my car and then he prepared his bike..
After i finish parked my car, he finish prepared his bike to.. wait? i heard someone calling my name
“yuki! Why you come home late? Oh i’m sorry, are you watanabe-kun?” my mom asked watanabe-san.. then he answer my mom and said
“yes, my name is watanabe mayu”
“nice to meet you and thank you for accepted yuki for work at your shop. Where is yuki? And why you here watanabe-kun?”
“i take yuki-san home. Because i don’t want something happen. It’s too late for girls go home alone. She at the garage miss”
“oh thank you watanabe-kun for accompany yuki” my mom smiled to him and he said
“my pleasure miss” he bowed and smiled to my mom..
Ooh i see, he still have respect to my mom, not bad
“mom, i’m home”
“there you are. Come on get in, don’t forget to ask-“
“i’m sorry miss, i have to go now. I can’t stay a longer here”
Then my mom turned to him, i see my mom face little worried
“okay take care” she smiled to him.. he aswer her just by a nodded and he get his bicycle.. when he want to ride.. i called his name
“wait watanabe-san.. once again, thank you, i will come early tomorrow”
He turned to me and said
“no, you don’t have to come early. Come on time, because tomorrow we have a lot customer. Several customer call me and said they will come tomorrow..”
“okay, be careful watanabe-san”
Without waving or smiled.. he ride the bicycle..
I don’t know why he always acted to me like that.. but when he talked to my mom, it’s so different you know..


•••

After i finish take a bath and have a dinner.. i go to my room.. when i want to dried my hair, i forgot something at bathroom.. i ran to bathroom and i found that thing
“oh my, why i’m so forgetful.. if i lost this, i can’t meet him..”
That thing is a half necklace, i get that from my childhood friend before i go home. Maybe he still at Tokyo. When i still young girl, i come to tokyo for visited my aunt and then i meet him, he like my hero because he saved me..


Flashback
“wait! I don’t have any mistake to you! And i don’t know who you are..” she pushed me and make me fall to ground and she said
“yes! You have a mistake! You didn’t realize it right? You take my swing!”
“you’re swing? Is not yours! That swing at the park. So, everyone can use that!”
“that’s mine! Nobody can use it!” she want slapped me. Then i hear someone shout and stop the girl
“hey! Don’t hurt her!” he take the girl by the wirst and said
“You older than me and her! Why you have to slap her just because of the swing! How childish you are!” he see the older girl with an anger eyes
“don’t scold at me! She make a mistake and she have to receive it! Let me go!”
“no! i don’t want let you go easily! You must say sorry to her and stay away from her!”
“i don’t want it! It’s make me fool!”
“you want to slap her and that’s make you so fool! Do it!”
“i...i’m.. so”
“say it! Why you so difficult to say sorry?!” he still hold her wrist.. maybe it’s to painful and make the older girl cried
“okay! Okay! I’m sorry! Now let me go!” she ran faster after he waive her wrist.. and then he help me to stand up..
“are you okay? Did she do anything to you before i come?” his face became worried..
“yes.. i’m okay.. no she didn’t do anything to me.. thank you so much for save me”
“no problem.. i just ride my bicycle.. and then i see beautiful girl at the ground and other girl scold her so loud” he smiled to me and i feel my cheeks burned up..
“haha your cheeks turned red.. don’t be shy. From now, i will protect you and we will be friend”
I know it, he’s younger than me.. i appreciate that he want to protect me..
“thank you.. i’m glad that you want to be my friend. You can call me rin” i smiled to him
“yeay i’m so happy to hear that! My name is nabe! Nice to meet you rin-chan!”

Days passed.. my relationship grew up and we become bestfriend... me and my mom stay little longer at my aunt home. Because my aunt want some help from my mom to arrange her new home.. yes, my aunt move to tokyo from kagoshima and she will stayed here because of her husband worked
 
When the day come, the day i have to back to kagoshima.. i went to my mom car and i heard someone called my name, when i turned, i see he ran to me and said to me
“rin-can! You will go now? Why time so fast... i don’t want you go, don’t leave me please.. i just have 1 friend! And that’s only you!”
“nabe-kun you have to find other friends okay?”
“no! i just want you! You’re my bestfriend rin-chan!”
“i know it.. but i have to go now” my eyes become red and i drop my tears
“okay... wait! You have to promise me we will meet someday!” he hug me so tight..
“i promise we will meet someday! You get it?” he release the hug and then
“i promise to you too! Before you go, i want give you something..” he take necklace from his neck and.. wow that’s necklace can be 2 pieces.. he give me half of that necklace.. and that is a beautiful necklace
“i give you this! My mom and father said that if i give this to you, i will meet you someday! And we will remember our best time!”
“thank you nabe-kun. Are you sure want to give this to me?”
“yes! I’m sure! Because you’re my bestfriend!” and then i heard my mom called me
“-rin! Come on get in! We will come home late if you still standing at there!”
“wait mom! I’ll be there” i turned to nabe-kun again
“do you hear that? I have to go now. I’m so sorry for leave you” i hug him again and i ran to my mom car... i see him just stand and waving his hand to me... i can see that he drop a tears on his red cheeks...

End of flashback


“wow it’s been a long time a go.. where is he? Is he alright or....” i feel my eyes drop a single tears.. i don’t know why..then i decided to sleep because it’s already too late..

I still remember him until now... because he is my bestfriend, loved flower.. and when i tell him i love flower too.. he always gave me a beautiful flower everyday.. before i’m back to kagoshima...
Wait... a man who loves flower... i think...


To be continued
Little mayu and little yuki is a childhood friend! how cute they are~ :nya: wait for the next chapter! :hee:
jaa nee~~  :byebye:
« Last Edit: July 30, 2014, 02:02:20 PM by fath107 »
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Re: MaYuki >> My Beautiful Flower | Chapter 3
« Reply #11 on: July 30, 2014, 02:06:32 PM »
Yea Little Mayu is a hero

Aww they so cute >\\\<


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Re: MaYuki >> My Beautiful Flower | Chapter 3
« Reply #12 on: July 30, 2014, 02:26:20 PM »
They are so cute  :lol:

Ara, Yuki found out already  :?

Hope Mayu know its Yuki, from his childhood memories  :bingo:

Can't wait for the next one  :hee: :kneelbow:
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Re: MaYuki >> My Beautiful Flower | Chapter 3
« Reply #13 on: July 30, 2014, 02:40:26 PM »
replied a comments:

@Kirozoro: :shy2: you right! little mayu and little yuki are very cute  XD little mayu is a hero.. so when he more older.. he become a gentleman :wub: thanks for your comment  :)

@Siren: she still didn't know who is he.. she just think, you know... yuki kind of....  :dunno: like that haha..  :lol: so, wait for the next chapter~  :hee:

i will post next chapter later :)

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Re: MaYuki >> My Beautiful Flower | Chapter 3
« Reply #14 on: August 01, 2014, 07:13:17 PM »
still waiting for the next chapter
update please......... :bow:

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MaYuki & Other Pairing (KojiYuu) >> My Beautiful Flower | Chapter 4 [UPDATE]
« Reply #15 on: August 05, 2014, 08:47:30 AM »
I'm back! i'm sorry, i can't update faster because i have an exam for enter university  :hee: gomenne~

so, this is chapter 4~ hope you like it!  :on asmo: because i have another pairing here~~  :kekeke:

please comment~~  :on cny1:



Chapter 4: What Kind of Feeling is This?

2 weeks later

YukiPOV
I have been work at watanabe-san shop 2 weeks.. i think watanabe-san isn’t like when i meet him first time. He didn’t change to much, but he become more care to surroundings.. i hope he can change a lot because of.... my attention to him..

“mom i must go now.. eh? what are you doing there?”
“wait yuki! I have something for you~” she come to me and bring something
“what is this mom?”
“2 bento for you and watanabe-kun! I hope he will eat and like my cooking” she smiled to me and give it to me.. i don’t know why she did this.. maybe because i told to her, sometimes me and watanabe-san didn’t have a lunch, we always busy with customer..
“thank you mom.. i hope he like it” i take the bento’s and i smiled to her..
Then i get in to my car and ride it to the shop

After i arrived in front of the shop, i see some grandmother fall on the ground and her items drop.. i ran to her and help her to take all of the items. But i realize someone help me and the grandmother.. when i see his face.. it’s watanabe-san. he help me to take it and after we finish, we give it to the grandma.. she said to him..
“arigatou-ne mayu-kun.. and your name beautiful girl?”
“my name is kashiwagi yuki.. nice to meet you oba-san”
“ah thank you yuki-chan for helping me”
“my pleasure to help you” i bowed to her.. and i feel, watanabe-san stared at me. Then grandma said to him
“did yuki-chan your girlfriend mayu-kun? You have a good girlfriend.. i’m glad to see her”
“wait, oba-san.. she’s not my girlfriend but she is-“
“don’t worry mayu-kun. I wouldn’t tell your father or your uncle about her. See you next time mayu-kun and yuki-chan.. please take care of him, okay..” he didn’t say anything.. we bowed to her and he smiled to her.. after that.. he walked to the shop without look at me, i just stand, stared to him.. and then he turned to me and said
“what are you doing there yuki-san? you want stand there and just stare to me?”
“iie.. i just.. never mind” i didn’t know what to answer him.. i follow him to the shop and begin our work..

I think he a good man, gentle too and always respect to everyone older than him.. but he still has a cold heart and emotionless on his handsome face..

2 Hours after that

MayuPOV
i’m still thinking about that incident.. she helped oba-san too. First time when i see her, i think she just cared to her look, her car, or flowers.. but, after the incident.. she has a beautiful face and great attitude too.. i think she already has a boyfriend.. of course she has! Not like me.. lonely man were didn’t interesting to relationship and care about himself.. how a lucky man have a girlfriend like that~ what i’m talking about?! I don’t care if she has a boyfriend or not! It’s not my business!

I heard someone call my name, i think it’s yuki-san but i’m wrong.. the person who called me is yuko. He with his wife, kojiharu-san come to my shop.. i don’t know why he come here..
Yuko is my brother.. my father married his mother after my mom death when i was 15 years old..
“Mayu-boy!” he approach me and tap my left shoulder.. i didn’t turned to him.. i said
“what yuko?”
“easy-easy mayu-boy.. i just want to greet you and-“
“what else? You come here just want to disturb me again? I have other job, sorry”
“wait-wait! father asked me to check you.. are you still healthy or-“
“i’m still healthy yuko” i stand up and walked.. when i want to stay away from him.. he take my wrist and he want to say something.. but i hear someone shout..
“yuki! What are you doing here?” when i hear that.. me and yuko turned to kojiharu-san and yuki-san.. and we just stared to the two person..
“me? I worked here haruna.. what are you doing here?”
“eh?! You work here? Since when? I come here with my husband to check his brother”
“his brother? Who is-“
“nyannyan... is that your friend?” i realize yuko didn’t beside me again.. because he approach yuki-san. i just stared to them and walk slowly to them
“yeah, she’s my friend when i was at junior and senior high school. Mayu, can you explain to me?”
“about what? Since when she worked at my place?”
“of course i ask about that” all of them turned to me.. i said
“she start work here 2 weeks ago. it’s because uncle.. he told me that i can’t do anything by myself and because of dad too.. maybe yuki-san can continue it. I didn’t know the detail” i leave them and i opened my house door to take something but.. i don’t like someone disturb my work and it’s to boring for explain all of that..  i think it’s waste my time too~
“wait! Mayu-boy!” he called me.. but i didn’t care and i closed my door.. i heard they talked to yuki-san.. i don’t want to know what they talking about..

“why he always like that yuu-kun? You must tell him to didn’t react like that..”
“i told you that i ever tell to erased his cold reaction.. but it’s not use and he always same like that”
“oh my... did he react like that to you, yuki?”
“yeah, but i don’t care about that.. i’m work here, just want to help him..”
Kojiharu and yuko just stared at yuki..
After i take something in my house, i get out to continue my worked.. i asked my brother again
“So, what are you doing here?”
“etoo.. can we talked mayu?”
“yes we can, you can talk now”
“not here. I just want talked just two of us..”
“okay we can talk at my house” i go to my house again and he followed me. When i want to close the door, he asked me
“how your left hand condition?”
“ha? It’s fine, fine if i always wear this glove. Why you ask that?”
“just ask. Because i don’t want someone tease you about your hand”
“oh, because of my discovery, i can use my left hand”
“did yuki-chan know’s your condition? And you’re a scientist?”
“hmm maybe she don’t know”
“okay, i hope you and yuki-chan wil-“ he smirked to me
“what? Me and her just a partner”
“just a partner? You don’t want higher then that? Look! Her oshiri is good too.. when you in high school, you told me that you like woman with good oshiri!”
“yes i know that.. why you peeked to yuki-san?! You already have kojiharu-san!” i feel mad when i heared my brother said, i feel my temperature up~
“i don’t peeked to her.. but i just- wait? Why you’re face like that? Are you jealous?” he smirked to me
“n-no! i’m not jealous. I’m just confused, why you always talked about pervert things”
“because we are oshiri-brother! Hahhaaha i know it.. you have a little feeling to her right?”
I just stared at him and get out from my house.. he followed me again and whisper
“you have to make a move. If you just stare or wait, you can lose her. You can do it” after say that he open the door and ran to kojiharu-san.
“come on nyannyan! My business here is finish! We must go now, because someone want to explode! Hahahahaa!” he smirked to me, then took kojiharu-san wrist and ran to his car.. i shouted to him
“Hey! YOU! Don’t escape!”
“bye yuki-chan! Have a nice day with mayu! HAHAHA!” and then he go.... why he always like that.. when i turned to yuki, she blushing so hard and look to the ground

1 hours later
I look to my watch, it’s already lunch time. i realized someone come to me, when i faced her, i see yuki-san hold something, what is that?
“watanabe-san, do you want it? My mom make it for me and you” she bring a bento and give it to me..
“thank you yuki. Would you mind if we eat together?”
“eh?? Yes we can..” I see her face become red.. i don’t know why.
“why you say ‘eh’ c’mon eat” i prepare 1 chair for her, because we eat at my desk and when we eat.. silence grow between us

So i decided to break the silence between us
“Yuki, if you didn’t help me here, what is your activity?”
“Before i take this job, i work at my bestfriend lab. Beacuse i already graduated from college and my friend ask me to work with her”
“Lab? What kind of lab?”
“ah, i forgot to tell you. I’m graduated from botanical. So, my friend have a botanic lab”
“Wait, why you take my uncle offer? You help your friend too right?”
“yes i help her. But i choose to take this job. Because i want to know more about flowers and since i young, i love flowers too”
“ooh i see, now let’s eat. After this, we have to continue our work. Oh, from now, please don’t call me watanabe-san. Just call Mayu okay. It sound’s like, i’m older than you”
“okay, if you want that. But, i think i call you like that because of your attitude like... you older than me hahahaha”
“hey! Don’t say that. I’m 18 years old and you 21 years old okay.. and sometimes your reaction it’s like an old woman haha”
“old woman?! Mouu~ i’m not like old woman you know” she pouted to me... aww so cute!
“just kidding yuki!” i pinched her right cheek.. wait.. since when i closed to her so i can pinch her cheek! My hand acted like that, so i just follow my hand or heart
She smiled to me but after that confused because of my act and her face turned to red..
I take my hand from her cheek and said “Ah i’m sorry yuki. I don’t mean that“
“no problem mayu” she smiled to me and i look to other way. i feel my heart beat so fast and my face become red too!
“Le-let’s finish our bento okay?”
“o-okay”

After we finish our bento.. i heard
“Thanks for the bento kami-sama” she connected her hands and close her eyes for a momment
Then she open her eyes and stared to me
“yuki, thanks for the bento.. and, if your don’t mind, can you bring this everyday? I think if you bring this everyday, we didn’t skip our lunch. Thanks to your mom too for make this for me. It’s so nice”
“your welcome mayu. You like it? Okay i can ask my mom for that. Ah, good idea, that’s my mom told to me.”
“thanks yuki. Let me clean this”
“no no, you don’t have to. I can clean it when i’m at home” she take our bento but i stopped her by take her wrist
“no, i can handle this. You bring this for me, so i will clean it” i didn’t realize, i hold her hand...
“m-mayu..” we stared for a momment and realize we’re to close each other.. i look to her...she look to me too.. wow why she so pretty.. and her soft lips, it’s make me want to...

I get closer to her, she realize what i’m doing so she get closer to.. when me and her lips inched.. i heard someone come to my shop
“sorry for disturb you two. But can i have this flowers?”
I broke it and i feel my face flushed.. without look to her.. i come to my customer.. he pointed to the flowers and i said to him
“ah sorry.. okay of course you can” i take the flowers and i give to him. He hand over his money to me
“thanks. you can continue that hehe” he smirked to me and leave my shop
‘why he say that. Argh what can i do now? Apologized to her or i-‘ when i turned to her back.. she still stand at the same position and her head look to the ground.. i approch her and i said
“sorry i ju-just want to clean this.. can i ta-take it?”
She nodded to me and give our bento.. “su-sure”
After i take it from her hands.. i said to her
“you can continue your works now.. i-i will give it to you after i finish clean it”
“okay” she walked to her work desk and looked to other way..
I don’t know want to say what.. so i went to my home.. i feel my heart beat so fast when i look to her..

I hope after this incident, i become her friends, because i want to know her more and i want to become more closer to her. I don’t know what i felt but i feel... i want to protect her and give her more  happiness..

To Be Continued
Aww Mayu realize his feeling to yuki! :shy2: Next chapter, mayu and yuki become more closer than before... :whistle: and i add more sweet momment between them hehe~  :nya:
jaa neee!  :byebye:

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Damn they almost kiss  :banghead:  :luvluv2:

That guy should not disturb them  :on chew:

More sweet scene pls  :on comhere:

Anyway thanks for update and update soon  :on GJ:
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Yay update.... :banana: and guess what ?!
Oshiri brothers~ :shakeit:

what happen to Mayu left hand? and he is scientist? :?

and Yuko....don't peeked Yuki  you perverted :on thumbb:
you already had NyanNyan
only Mayu can peeked on Yuki :mon suspect:

and that kissing part....... :grr:
if i know who the guy that come at bad time :angry:
i will... :kickass:

Maybe i should work with Mayu....lol
I take care the shop..and Mayu and Yuki can..... :mon kissy: :mon kissy:

thanks for the update... :thumbsup
waiting for more sweet scene :luvluv1:
and hope that no one disturb them next time... :lol:

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MaYuki >> My Beautiful Flower | Chapter 5 [UPDATE]
« Reply #18 on: August 06, 2014, 08:39:10 AM »
Replies for commenters of the previous chapter:

@Siren: yeah, that guy must stay away form MaYuki  :hehehe:

in this chapter.... they have a lot of sweet momment~~  :hiakhiakhiak:   :nya:

thanks for your comment and thanks for read my fanfic  :hee:


@MaYuki x JuRena: keep read my fanfic.. you will be know what happen to Mayu left hand :glasses:

i'm agree with you! just mayu can peeked on yuki  :wahaha:

hahahaha that man come at the wrong time.. if i there... maybe i will  :shifty: like that to him hahaha :on gay:

thanks for read my fanfic and waiting for the update~  :hehehe: thanks for commented here  :thumbsup

Hello~~~ i'm back again.. :on asmo: this is a new chapter  :whistle: i hope you enjoy my fanfic hehe~ please give me a comment  :kneelbow: i'll keep waiting~~  :on drink: so this is it!



Chapter 5: He is My Cute Knight

YukiPOV
3 months passed after i met him. Me and him become closer than before. I always bring bento for our lunch and he so happy after know that. I feel he changed, he didn’t emotionless, can smile easily... and he become more care... to me.. i don’t know why he like that, after that incident he like.. try be honest to me. He helped me to know more about flowers.. he told me that he is a scientist. But i’m curious about his left hand. Why he always wear glove? And why he wear it at his left hand? Maybe next time i will ask him.

When i arrive his shop, i see the shop didn’t open. I see my watch, it’s already 7 PM and he always open this time. I knock his house, but i didn’t hear any replied from him. So i decided to use my spare shop key. Yes, he give me a spare key because he trust me to keep it. When i open the door..

I see him.. sleep peacefully on his desk. I come to him and see his face
‘mayu, you have a cute face when you sleep hehe. Maybe i take a picture of you’
*click*
‘aww mayuuu~ why you’re so cute’
“nnngghh...” he open his eyes and he give me a face like ‘what are you doing’
“Whoa! Mayuu! Please don’t make me shock! Since when you wake up?”
“huh? I didn’t mean to make you shock yuki. I woke up since you take a picture of me.. Hoaaamm~~” he yawn and rubbed his eyes.. ‘aww why he soo cute!’ i look to other way and didn’t answer him
“yuki”
“yes?”
“give me your handphone.. now”
“eh? No i wont!”
“yukii~~ give it to me”
“for what? I didn’t do anything to you~”
“eeh~ are you sure yuki? I heard a sound like click. give it to me now~” why he tease me like that..
“no i don’t want to give you!” he hold my wrist.. so i can’t handle this situation..
“okay i give it to you!” i hand over my handphone to him and he take it..
“hmm not bad. I’m still handsome at this photo haha” i think i got an idea~ hahaha!
“Mouu~ mayu don’t delete that photo okay.. if you delete it, i didn’t want bring any bento for you~”
He stared to me.. i just smirked to him and then he give my handphone to me..
“okay you can keep it. But, don’t ever you share it to anyone!”
“hai-hai captain! Hehe thank you mayu~ i will open this shop okay”
“no, you don’t have to”
“why?”
“because i want to continue my sleep and maybe you can continue your sleep too or doing something in here”
“eh?! You want to sleep again? Come on mayuu wake up now. If you open this early, you can get a lot of customer”
“oh yea? I don’t believe it. I’m so tired yuki. Let me sleep okay. Just 1 hour”
“what! 1 hour? It’s so long you know! Don’t be lazy mayu!” i take his hand and it’s not working! He close his eyes again.. i shake his body.. he open again and said to me
“could you please stop shaking my body, miss kashiwagi? I want to sleep for a momment you know!”
“i didn’t allow you to sleep again Mr. Watanabe!”
“since when you can be my boss?” he closed his eyes again.. i don’t know what mayu doing at night.. when he fall asleep.. i see something on his neck.. and then i realize it’s a..
‘wait, i ever see this necklace before.. WHAT THE..! Ma-mayu...is my-my...’                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             
Watanabe Mayu... he is my boss and my partner work too... he... wear that necklace.. and that necklace is my.. knight necklace...
‘mayu.. is my... knight?! Is it real or just a dream..’ i pinched my cheek and i feel it’s hurt.. so this is real! Mayu is my knight. But wait.. how he can get that necklace? Hmm Maybe my knight and his necklace are same.. i’m so curious about that... i can’t believe it..

After i see it.. i go to my desk and waiting for him to wake up. I don’t want to wake him up, i’m afraid he will angry to me.. so i just wait.. and still thinking about his necklace.. i hold my necklace too..
‘why his necklace same to my knight necklace? Oh! I remember! Nabe-kun told me that necklace can be connect.. but.. how can i connect mine and his necklace?’ i feel little tired so i decided to sleep..

1 hour later
I fell someone poke my cheek. When i open my eyes.. i see he stared to me
“ah.. you already wake up mayu”
“yes and you fell asleep to haha. I want to take a bath first. Hmmm you have to wash your face”
“Okay”
He walked to his house and i followed him. He go to bathroom, so i head to the sink..
After i finish wash my face.. i take a little tour at his house. His house so clean and it paint white.. He told me that he like white so much.. When i go to living room, i see a lot of photo..
‘wh-why he have nabe-kun photo? An-and why nabe-kun mom wi-with him?’
I can’t believe.. nabe-kun and mayu is a same person... Mayu is my knight.. when i look to other pict... i heard someone come to me
“eh? Yuki, what are you doing here?” I turned around.. and i see him
“Ma-mayu can i ask you something?”
“Sure, what do you want to ask?”
“Who is this?” i pointed to nabe-kun photo and his mom
“ooh that’s me when i childhood.. why you as-“ i cut him and i hugged him so tight.. and i can’t hold my tears.. i cried at his shoulder
“yu-yuki.. why you cry? Am i did anything wrong?”
“Ma.. no.. Nabe-kun! This is me! Rin-chan! Do you remember me?!”
“huh? Yuki it’s not funny you know..” he break the hug and i look at him
When i look to him.. i see he still wear the necklace.. i take my necklace out from my shirt and said
“do you still remember me? I always wear this”
“how you can get th-that?” his eyes grew wide
“i’m get it from you”
“you lie! Your name is yuki, Not rin-chan!”
“Yes you right, my name is Yuki, but my family call me yukirin.. and my cousin call me rin. So i told you that you can call me rin-chan!”
Silence grew between me and him.. we just stared each other.. and then i felt warm on my hands.. mayu intertwined his hand with mine..
“i-is it really you rin-chan? Is it real or just a dream?”
“no, it’s not a dream.. it’s real nabe-kun”
He smiled widely and then he connect our necklace.. *click*
“I miss you so much.. i-i want to search where are you.. but i don’t have any clue or something.. so i just can wait here and always wear this necklace. Gomenne rin-chan~ but..”
“But?”
“But i’m glad rin-chan and yuki it’s a same person..  so i don’t have to confess my feeling to 2 person hehe”
“eeeehhh?!”
“Why you always say ‘eh’ in wrong time!”
“i’m sorry mayu. I just... happy you know”
“just happy? Not anything else or something.. i already tell you that i miss you so much”
“I miss you too. But i have 1 trouble now”
“what? Tell me now!”
“ummm what should i call you? Nabe-kun or.. mayu? Hehe”
“of course you must call me Mayu! I’m not a child you know!”
“oh! I know.. i will call you mayuyu~~”
“eh? Why you call me like that? It’s sounds like-“
“cute? Haha yes you right it’s cute because when you sleep, your face still cute when you still at childhood until now hahaha” i just smirked to him.. and he give me face ‘whatever!’
“do whatever you like yukirin~ emmm can i get my reward hehe~~?”
“haha i know that you will allow me to call you mayuyu~ why you ask that? Sure!” i feel my cheek burned up and reddened..
He smile to me and hug me so tight.. i don’t want to break this hug.. i hug him back..
“I love you.. both of...yuki and rin-chan. Would you be my girlfriend?”
He say that... it’s feel like a dream.. i’m speechless.. i just hug him tight than before.. he stroked my hair and i can hear his heart beat so fast.. same with me
“I can take that.. yes..” he break the hug and look deep into my eyes..
“i love you so much yuki. i’m sorry if i always cold to you or emotionless to you.. but when you give me a kindness.. i’ll try to be honest to you and i decided to confess my feeling today.. i’m shocked when you tell me that you are rin-chan.. i can’t believe it before. I don’t want to lose you again, i promise i will protect you and give you much of happi-“ i cut him again with my lips.. i peck him.. i can see his face flushed red and then i said
“hmm to much talking.. i can’t believe you’re a sweet talker hehe”
We stared each other.. he become closer to me.. i become closer too and then i felt warm on my lips.. he kiss me and he wait me to allow his tongue go inside my mouth.. i allow his tongue and.. we kiss passionately. It is a long kiss.. maybe we already miss each other and hungry of kiss. He break the kiss because we lack of air.. and he cupped my cheeks
“I will ask you one more time.. Would you be my girlfriend?”
“Yes i will...”
“Glad to hear that..” he smiled and embraced me.. then he broke it and say
“hmm today you have a day-off kashiwagi-san”
“day-off? We didn’t open up the shop?”
“yes, i don’t want to open it today. I’m so lazy and bored you know”
“why? Don’t be lazy mayuyu~”
“not just a lazy but.. it’s because i want to take my girlfriend to somewhere and we want to spend time just two of us..” he smirked to me and then he laugh because i pouted to him
“why your reaction always cute? I can’t hold my hands to pinch your cheeks!” he pinch my cheeks..
“kawaiii~des-nee~”
“a-a ita-itaiiii mayuuu~ moouuuu~ stop it!” he stop pinch my cheek and then he hold my hand so tight
“can we go now my princess?”
“hmm no i can’t”
“eeeh~ you refuse my invitation? Okay you will get the punishment miss kashiwagi!”
“pu-punishment what do you- Kyaaaa!” he carry me like a bridal style and take me out from his house.. i can see his smile so widely and... i didn’t see it before.. he take me to in front of a garage.. i give a confused face to him and then he said
“just wait and see~ open up please!”
My eyes grew wide... the garage open without he touch any button or something.. it’s like this garage can be open by his voice.. my eyes grew more wide...
“hmm do you want go somewhere by car or motorcycle or just take a walk, my princess?”
Ah he called me princess again.. it’s make my face burned again
“why you ask me? It’s up to you mayu!”
“eeh~ i don’t want to choose.. i want my princess choose it..”
“etooo i want to~” 5 minutes left
“too late! okay i will take you by car!”
“mayu! You are so mean!”
“whatever~ haha!” he placed me at second seat..  his car is a white ferrari and that car just have 2 seat and he sit beside my seat then he kiss my left cheek
When he want to press the gas.. his face turned to serious.. i don’t know why
“i want to tell you about something... and this is so important... i hope you didn’t shock, i hope if i tell you about this, you didn’t leave me here.. emm”
Why you tell that to me? Is it really important? I don’t want to lose you again mayu.. he interwined his hands with mine and i said to him..
“okay, so what is the important things?”
“i want to tell you about....”

To Be Continued
Kyaaaaaaa~ MaYuki formed!  :cow: too much sweet momment here  :luvluv2: wait for the next chapter!  :on GJ:

I’m sorry if i have a repeating grammar..  :kneelbow: i have to learn more..  :on study:

next chapter will have another sweet momment  :farofflook: hmmm mayu want to tell about what?  :dunno:

thanks for read my fanfic...  :) see you later~~  :byebye:
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 :mon angel: :mon angel: :mon angel: :mon angel: :mon angel: :mon angel: :mon angel: :mon angel:
nabe-kun and rin-chan finally reunited.... :farofflook:
so sweet moment they had there  :luvluv1:

What the important thing that Mayu want to tell Yuki..??
Yuki...whatever Mayu tell you
please don't leave him.. :bow: :bow:

I really....really...realllyyyyy........like this chapter..!!  :twothumbs :twothumbs
Thanks for the update fath107-san :thumbsup

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