Doki Doki

[lil_hamz]

I can't decide their code names are funnier or the way they are behaving.
Closet-space and open-mouth are definitely classics

When I read Miki's "emergency plan", I knew she wouldn't be the winner. Nacchi probably needs to take things slow. I wonder if the ultimate winner's gonna be someone not in the game

[Mikan]

Maki tiptoed down the hallway in order to avoid unwanted attention. Since Makoto's last radio positioning Abe (also known as Target A) must have moved - fast. Being in H!P longer than any other participant gave her the upper hand. She knew all of Abe's quirks and after such an encounter with Fujimoto, Abe would have burnt up a lot of energy out of stress meaning by now she would be feeling peckish. To summerise - any minute now Abe Natsumi would sneak into the kitchen and that is exactly where Maki will be waiting.

Abe doubled back down the hall of the 1st floor and hid in the laundry. She could have sworen someone was following her. Paranoia told her that it might be Fujimoto. She let out a sigh of disapointment. How could such a beautiful girl be corrupted! After five minutes of mourning the loss of Miki, Abe remembered her hunger.

Maki watched Abe emerge from the laundry and walk into the empty kitchen. She smiled with a mixture of delight and relief. She was the first person to find Nacchi. Or so she thought. Maki got to her feet and silently skipped down the hall to the kitchen. She was half way there when Reina burst out of the living room a little way infron of her. Both girls stared at each other. A risk of a stalemate was at hand. Reina fainted an advance at Maki, threatening to hit her but instead ran quickly in the opposite direction to Abe. Maki jumped back a little startled but sped off after her opponent. Her longer legs gave her the advantage. Panicking Reina moved to plan B - stopping. Maki was right on her heels then seeing Reina stop it became more literal as they both tumbled in a heap on the floor. There was a great deal of squirming and wrestling. Foul play on Reina's part gave her a chance to escape as she kneed Maki hard in the crotch. Maki silently howled in pain, catching Reina's foot as she she tried to run. She dragged the young girl by the ankles back down the hall and into the laundry. Using a massive jumper that looked like it belonged to Tsunku she forced it over the top of Reina's head, tying the arms of the jumper in a hard knot behind her back like a straight-jacket. Reina swore and thrashed, trying to cling onto Maki with her legs. Maki gave her a kiss on the head to show it was nothing personal. As the motto of the Abe games state - Its every Musume for themself.




-Yay~ Thank you for the views I want to keep the counter as legitimate as possible. We got the needed views anyway. Thank you for the birthday cake! I have left a message for Bluekinoko to come and check this out because its so cute.
YES! WE HAVE HIT 70! 30 more till 100~

Stick around. Chapter 71 is coming up soon!

[lil_hamz]

You have over 4000 views Mikan. Its great news!!
Ooooh every Musume for themselves eh. Things are heating up! Can't wait for Chapter 71.

[Mikan]

A singular candled birthday cake was Abe's selected comfort food. She didnt know who it belonged to but the pink icing on top was too delicious to resist. Sitting at the table by herself she didnt bother with cutlery. Using her index finger she ran it along the top of the cake and carefully placed it in her mouth - sucking all the sugar off. It was just what she needed.

"Hey Nacchi"

Abe ran her finger around the perimeter of the cake failing to look up.

"Where did you get that?" Maki asked, tucking her hair behind her ears.

Abe shrugged. "It was just in the fridge"

Maki thought that stealing food was the kind of behaviour that Abe frowned on. Miki must have really messed the girl up. If everything was to go smoothly she would need to be subtle.

"Can I have some?"

Abe looked up at her with watery round eyes that could melt any man's heart. Maki resisted the urge to pat Abe on the head or possibly stratch her behind the ears.

"Some what?" Abe asked, acting dumb. Pulling the cake closer to herself.

"Cake. Just a bit?"

Abe pouted. Hoping to kill Maki by O.D-ing her on cuteness. It didnt work. She was immune. Maki took hold of her seniors pink coated finger and licked it clean. Believe it or not this was rather normal behaviour in the house and would have gone undetected by Abe's gaydar if she had not been savagely Miki'd earlier this morning. The tension was obvious. Maki wiped Abe's finger clean with a paper towel and turned herself down to Borderline Bisexual.

"Hey, you're free today right?"

Abe nodded cautiously.

"Did you want to watch a movie?"

Abe's head kept bobbing. "What one?"

"Titanic"

The suggestion floated around in the air. Maki's heart was racing. Under her breath she was uttering in an inaudiable voice - Say yes, Say yes, Say yes

"That movie is so old now! It brings back memories. Did you want to watch it in my room or do you have a Tv?"

"Ah, your room if that's ok"

Back on the Morning Musume floor several heads poked out of their hiding spaces as Goto Maki walked arm in arm with her prize. Downstairs, Tanaka Reina vowed revenge while Makoto continued to plot.



- I got thirsty so I went for a walk. Mmm, Pocari Sweat! Tastes like Calpis and Aquarius dont you think? So that is the reason for my delay. ..And yeah, Abe is eating the Doki Doki aniversary cake from Rndmnwierd

[Mikan]

I'll never let go Jack

Abe cried her eyes out. Just as expected. Maki gave her a shoulder to cry on which within minutes was soaking wet.

"Its just so sad!" Abe wailed.

"It is, isnt it" Maki consoled, holding back tears of her own.

Rose let go of Jack's hand and watched him float down and down into the darkness of the ocean.

Both girls sniffed.

A loud electrical crack split up the mood as all the lights went out and the T.v turned off.

"What the hell..."





Makoto put down her downloaded version of the Anarchy's Guide book: Electrical sabotage.

"Where's the meter box..." She asked herself, running a torch across all the equiptment in the basement looking for something that represented the diagram in the manual. "Ah, here is it!"

She opened the cream coloured metal box on the wall with caution. At an early age Makoto had learned the importance of safety with electricity when she was playing with 9V batteries. The desired orange tagged switch stood out from the board. With a shakey hand, she reached forward - sweat dripping from her forehead, trickling down her face. This can only go two ways - really well or really REALLY bad. The very tip of her finger caressed the top of the switch. She took a deep breath and prayed to god.

Ah Ah Nanka ii kanji (Ah ah, something feels good)
Aozora umi dou? kono LOCATION  (How are the blue skies and ocean? At this location...)
Ah Ah majide NICE BODY (Ah ah..really NICE BODY)
COME ON BABY DO THE LOCOMOTION

Makoto nearly died from fright. She cursed ORANGE RANGE for making such a catchy song as she pulled out her mobile.

"What!?" She screamed into the phone. Fear still running through her veins. The caller payed no attention to the agitated tone.

"Hi Mako-chan! It's me! I've finished study for the day. Did you wanna go out for dinner?"

"Asami, Im busy. I'll call you back"

She hung up abruptly and returned her focus to the meterbox. Gathering all her courage she slapped the orange switch down and listened to the sound of all the electrical equiptment turn off.



Asami closed the phone slowly. Blinking a few times to make her watering eyes less obvious. Takahashi and Niigaki stared at her. Makoto's yelling was loud enough for all to hear.

"What's up with her?" Niigaki asked, being curtious enough to stop staring.

Asami sighed. "I dont know...lately she has no time for me"

Takahashi and Niigaki exchanged glances.

"I wonder if she has ...I dont know...lost interest in me?"

Takahashi shook her head, wiping Niigaki with her hair ("Ow")

"No way. She likes you too much..."

Konno sighed again and pulled out a rice cracker and chewed on it to disperse her worry. Her friends shared her worry. They were the frustrated specators of the Konkon/Mako relationship and understood how much effort and blind leaps it would have taken those two to take their friendship to the dangerous place they call love. To lose all that was worked for would be tradgic. Besides no one could handle Konno's angsty lovestruck behaviour again.

"Maybe you should surprise her with something? Catch her attention?" Niigaki suggested.

Konno chewed the cracket slowly. Thinking deeply on what would be needed to catch Makoto's attention.

What indeed.

[lil_hamz]

Oh man I was wiping tears from my eyes when I read these 2 chapters  Mako sabotaging the electric box was hilarious. And so were the gokkies in their discussion. Mako could never tire of you KonKon. Who could??

[len.chan]

soo... the sabotage it's better for Maki, don't you think? XDD

[huggumwuggums]

soo... the sabotage it's better for Maki, don't you think? XDD

LOL Let's just hope that Nacchi's afraid of the dark..

[rndmnwierd]

A singular candled birthday cake was Abe's selected comfort food. She didnt know who it belonged to but the pink icing on top was too delicious to resist.

OMG! I love you! Lol!

Takahashi shook her head, wiping Niigaki with her hair ("Ow")

Ah, the hazards of long hair. Lol.
My computer was down for 12 hours and when I came back there were three new chapters.  You work fast, I'm officially impressed. As if I wasn't before.
Lub and cheese.

[Mikan]

Maki had her eyes shut in a state of half sleep. She was imagining flying over an ocean so great and wide that she couldnt see land. Free as a bird she swoop down and skidded along the waves. Although something was itching her - in the back of her mind. Something rather important she had forgotten.

"OH! SHOOT!"

Reina was asleep. There was not much else she could do. Her hands were well and truely tied and the lights had gone off about four hours ago. Screaming for help wasnt an option because on the way back to Abe's room Maki and ducked in and gagged her. It was understandable - if Reina had called for someone to free her she would have immediately murdered Maki without a second thought.

"Reina?"

Her shoulders were gently being shaken. She opened her eyes to see Maki looking back at her with those beautifully round hazel eyes.

"You're mad at me arent you..." Maki averted her eyes and bit her lip innocently.

"Awwwmawmanmymeymadmatmuu?"

"Oh right the gag.."

The sock was removed from her mouth leaving a bizzare after taste.

"Im not so mad anymore...uh...could you...you know.."

Maki took the hint and undid the tie and recieved another well deserved knee to the groin. Luckily that was all the energy Reina had. From being held in an unusual position for so long Reina's limbs were numb and weak. After a few minutes of recovery time Maki was ready to go. The same could not be said about Reina though.

"I'll carry you"

Up three flights of stairs and into the bedroom Maki carried Reina. Dropping her on the bed.

"Well...goodnight" She panted and made her way to the door.

"W-wait!"

Maki turned around holding up her hands expecting another attack. "What's up...?"

"Arent you going to sleep with me tonight?"

"Is this another lie to get me within striking distance?"

Reina shook her head. "Nope. Its outta my system"

Maki edged over to the bed and sat upright leaning on the pillows. When she settled Reina slid over and snuggled into her side. There was a long silence. Maki was sure that her loud beating heart would give away how tense she was becoming. And it did.

"Am I making you nervous?"

Maki denied it. Reina sat up and nibbled gently on her earlobes as she ran her fingers across Maki's chest and down her thigh in a tease.

"It's making you nervous, isnt it"

Maki gulped. Her head felt a little light.

"Uh..It's uh-"

Everything went dark really quickly as Reina put her hand straight into Maki's pants. Reina laughed out loud -

"You've got to be kidding me"





-Rndmnwierd how could I resist! Thats everyone for commenting! and yes, I do think long hair is a hazard! Stay tuned because Im still trying to load up more chapters although I should be sleeping! its 4:15am for christ sake!

[Mikan]

Nothing could drown out Ishikawa’s voice. It grows progressively louder through the day peaking at midnight. Miki consoled herself with a bottle of bourbon. She preferred it straight. No dilution to hinder its effect. The games were closing for the night and only those who hadn’t had filled their quota for the day were playing on into the night. She drunk alone until her feet felt heavy and her head light before crashing onto the floor in a fit of giggles, smiling at the world that was spinning around her at 100 miles an hour. Out of sight under the bed was Aya’s letter. Still unread.

Miki shut her eyes and felt like vomiting. It was like she was on a rollercoaster and as scary as it was she had to keep her eyes open. As open as they were, all her senses were distorted. Every noise was a blur, her nose burnt with the smell of bourbon and any shape before her was unrecognisable. Even the face that she had woken up to for so many mornings.

”Mikitty?”

A word was understood in her subconscious. She responded to the blur with a grunt.

”What have you been doing Mikitty…”

Her tongue lolled about in her mouth to make a more human sound. “Bleh”

”Bleh? Oh, you’ve been drinking haven’t you? How much have you had?...Oh”

Aya’s question was answered by the almost empty bottle on the floor. Much to her surprise, Miki made a full sentence.

”What are doing here...?”

”I needed to talk to you”

Aya brushed hair from Miki’s face. Her hand was beaten away lazily.

”Don’t touch me…Jerk”

The last word was spat out with all the repressed anger. It hit Aya, cutting her deep. Part of her knew she deserved it and regardless of how much Miki was willing to hurt her she wouldn’t give in. There would be no hope for them getting back together if she did.

”I need to talk to you…what ever happens is out of my control but I don’t want to lose you over this. Not when I haven’t told you everything…”

Aya had Miki’s full attention.

”People always talk about us as a couple, don’t they…more recently so. Not just the media but even other artists are convinced…I try to ignore it. Tell everyone we are friends…but when I went to Kobe in the summer there was so much pressure. People kept asking me – asking about you. It really got to me. My own family was bugging me about my sexuality. ‘Why don’t you have a boyfriend’”

Miki was sobering up. She was now moving her hands more controllably. “How come you didn’t tell me any of this?”

”I knew it would hurt you. If I told you we couldn’t spend so much time together you would think I was being a coward. I guess I am…but I can’t be like you Miki. You admit these things so easily – without a care. I can’t do that. I care about what they think of me” Tears prickled the corners of her eyes. “... so ...Tsunku was worried. He thought if I was given that view that it would affect my career. He organised it with Keita’s agent to set up a date….as a sort of stunt”

Miki had rolled herself over out of view.

”I’m so sorry, Mikitty. I know I should have told you this earlier. I am a coward”

”You are... Get out”

Those words weren’t the ones Miki would have liked to have said but taking Aya back wasn’t either.

[Mikan]

She wasn’t sure how but when Miki woke up she was miraculously in her bed. Tucked in and all. The miracle maker was in the corner snoring. Miki’s heart rose into her throat. For a second everything seemed back to normal but then she remembered last night’s talk. Parts of it at least. It wasnt long before Aya woke up.

“I thought I told you to leave last night, didn’t I?”

Aya was taken aback. She could do nothing but obey.

The door shut – letting the loneliness creep in. Miki smacked her forehead. It was too early in the morning and she was too hung over to deal with all of this. Ishikawa’s voice filled her ears again.

I bet it’s because you really love Aya

”Goddamn it”

With sudden burst of energy Miki stumbled into the hallway and collapsed, crawling the rest of the way to Aya.

”I don’t want you to go. I love you to much to live a life without you”

Aya knelt down on the floor holding Miki’s head between her hands. Tears streaked Aya’s face.

”I’m sorry I let this happen…please forgive me…please”

Miki laughed weakly even though it made her head throb.

”Of course I will...…Hey-...“ Miki placed her hands around Aya’s face. “Head Catch!”

[Elle_Driver]

That's sooo heart warming!

In return for the forgiveness Aya should finally allow Miki to have sex with her (or at least to go a step further than before).
Hopefully nobody tells Aya about the kinky things Miki has done in the meantime.

Wanna read more of the Abe games!
Great job again! :yay:

[rndmnwierd]

Yay for Lub! It was prolly just me, but the beginning of 74 sounded really pervy.  Keep up the sleepless good work. Try not to burn yourself out.

[lil_hamz]

3 Chapters straight! How do you do it

I'm glad Miki & Aya made up. They were kinda like the best couple cuz they make everything so open. Its really obvious they like each other loads

[Sukoshi]

aww reina and maki are just too cute!

[Mikan]

Reina helped the girl she had an ever growing crush on down the stairs and into the private dance hall on the first floor where a special participants only breakfast was in place. Tables from the storage room were set up to make one long table with a variety of healthy foods layed out in the middle. Yossui let the orange juice dribble down her chin as she watched GoMaki sway into the room with the guidance of Reina.

"What-on-earth-happened to you?"

Yossui wasnt the only one who was interested. Miki had stopped chewing just to hear the tale while Eri hovered the milk jug over her glass in suspense.

"Got up too quick. Im a little woozy"

Reina bit her lip and avoided the looks Yossui was giving her. She was the only one unconviced.




Konno stretched out in her bed only to find it was missing something - Mako-chan. Last night, well more truthfully this morning Makoto came home well past midnight. She didnt say where she had been and where she was going tomorrow. She just came in, showered and left. Konno gave a great big sigh.

"What are you doing Mako-chan...."

"Huh?" Makoto stuck her head out of the bathroom and nearly scared Konno to death.

"Your home!" Konno cheered gleefully after her heart stopping beating so rapidly it constricted her lungs.

"Yeah, I've been home for a while but I gotta rush now"

Konno's heart fell. "Why didnt you wake me?"

"I thought you would be mad...Oh damn it I'm late..I'll see you later, Asami"

Makoto picked up the backpack that had been lying on the ground and skipped out the door.

"W-wait!" Asami stuttered. "Where are you going?"

Makoto poked her head back in the bedroom. "Breakfast"

The answer didnt make the slightest bit of sense but Konno chose to ignore it.

"Well..uh...make sure you're back by 8o'clock ok? I've got -"

Makoto was slowly slipping out of view from the door way. "Ok I promise. I really got to go. Love you - bye!"

Konno lay back down in the bed, her tummy full of butterflies.




Makoto stuffed her face full of bread and fruit while the count down was in process.

"Games begin...Now!"

There was a rush to the door. Except for Maki who tripped and fell over her own feet and Reina who helped her up and Yossui who just stood there and did nothing.

Eri waited in the closet. Any minute Abe would walk past and she could step out casually and lay on her youthful charms by engaging in practically harmless chit-chat.

A door shut. Foot steps approached. Eri was ready with her tools to jimmy open the door and initiate her plan. A shadow was cast over the door and a loud scratching noise was heard followed by a click. The footsteps faded and Eri tried the door. No good - it was stuck fast.

According to Eri's phone it was 4 hours 22 minutes and 34 seconds before she was rescured. Yuko and Mari were passing by when they noticed the closet was singing. On closer inspection the lock was busted and fused together with glue. It took another 40 minutes for maintainance to get up and pry the door open. It was all enough excitement for one day - Eri retired for the night. Around the corner, Makoto grinned and made a note - 1:30pm Eri retires for the day




Aya spread herself out on Miki's bed. It felt like an eternity being away from her. She found that she had trouble sleeping in her own apartment without Miki there. With no one to warm the bed, sleep talk or accidently touch her when they think she is sleeping.

Miki was out for the day. Trying up loose ends or something. She didnt really say. Aya didnt mind. She was just happy to have everything back to normal. Or as normal they can be after a fight like that. To fill in the time Aya channel surfed, read all of Miki's comics which she denies she has and then started her own fashion show trying on all of Miki's clothes. As she spun around checking out her butt something caught her eye in the mirrors reflection. A little book poking out from under the bed amongst boxes and the broken stereo. She pulled it out with both hands and read it cover to cover then back again. A smile was tugging at the corner of Aya's mouth. Her world began to change.



- Its always a shock to lose someone. Mari Mari seems to have touched a lot of people here. My condolences.

[ChiruChaCha]

Yuko and Mari were passing by when they noticed the closet was singing

LOL

I LOVE Abe games xDDD

Btw... uhmmmm... who's Mari Mari?

[smoothee]

keep up the good work Mikan!! ehehe nothing like 4 new chapters of doki doki to brighten ones day arghh!! i want to see yossi's plan for the abe games!! and reinamaki.. SOOOO CUTE!!! lol!!

dok doki 73

"Everything went dark really quickly as Reina put her hand straight into Maki's pants. Reina laughed out loud"

ABSOLUTELY AWESOME!! WAHAHHAH!! HURRAH!!

[smoothee]

LOL

I LOVE Abe games xDDD

Btw... uhmmmm... who's Mari Mari?

http://forum.jphip.com/showthread.php?t=4693

he was a cool and very nice guy who contributed lots to this forum and to many other people.. tragically he lost his life due to disease today.. the link is the memorial thread on this forum..