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« Reply #240 on: August 01, 2006, 08:03:49 PM »
OMG, tell me Ayaya found the book Miki stole from Yossie. :drool:

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« Reply #241 on: August 02, 2006, 09:40:33 AM »
It boiled down to the final three.
Fujimoto Miki
Yoshizawa Hitomi and
Ogawa Makoto.

These were the girls that survived all sabotage attempts by Makoto and were still in the race. Maki was still nauseas from yesterday. Reina had to take care of her and Eri was taking a break. Being stuck in a closet for 4 hours or so really shook her up. If Makoto had a good chance to get ahead it would be now. Miki and Yossui were good players. Very good in fact.
But nothing to the tricks Makoto still had up her sleeve.

6:12pm

Makoto slowed her jog down to a power walk. She had been going at it for ages but no sign of Abe. No sign of the others either. Makoto wondered if she had been out played, her day’s plans foiled. Maybe someone had beaten her. She slumped against the wall in defeat.

”You seen Abe?”

Yossui panted, dropping down on the floor next to Makoto.

”No, I thought she was with you”

Yossui shook her head. “I haven’t seen her since this morning. Maybe Miki got her…”

They both sighed deeply.

”I haven’t seen her either”

Miki walked casually up and leant against the wall. Confused, Makoto pulled out a copy of Abe’s schedule that she had made and gave a long ‘hmm’.

”She should be home according to this…unless she was called out suddenly…”

Yossui stroked her chin. “I would have seen her leave then…maybe I missed her…oh well…tomorrow is another day right?”

”Right” They all chorused. Yossui stook up and dusted her pants. “My room for drinks?”

Arm in arm they walked merrily to Yossui’s room.

“Bourbon ok for you Miki?”

Miki’s stomach shrivelled up. “Uh just water…I got to be going soon anyway”

They clinked cups in a cheers and drank. Makoto, sculling the whole glass, coughed loudly as the liquid burnt it’s way down her throat. She pulled a face of disgust. Yossui grinned, thumped her back and poured another round. “Maybe it’s an acquired taste”

Two drinks later Makoto was up-side-down, red faced, her head on Yossui’s knee and Yossui’s head in Miki’s lap (who still refused to drink anything other than water much to everyone’s surprise)

There was a thumping noise.

”Sorry I think that’s my que”

Miki stood up leaving Makoto and Yossui to cuddle up on the floor by themselves.

”Later!”

”Bye bye!”

Makoto poured another drink and handed it to Yossui. ”Can I ask you something?”

Yossui rubbed her eyes. “Sure”

”Did you ever –“

The thump sounded again. Seeing Makoto’s disappointment Yossui quickly apologised and went to answer the door.

”Did you forget something?” She opened the door and asked the empty hallway. “You heard it too right?”

Makoto sat up on her elbows and nodded slowly. Thinking back she was sure that someone was at the door too. Yossui shrugged and shut the door.

Irregular thuds sounded again mixed with groans and voices.

Makoto was now on her feet ready to investigate. ”Maybe it’s coming next door”

The explanation seemed fair. Yossui accepted it and crashed on the bed with another drink. Makoto on the other hand pressed her ear to the wall to hear the goings-on more clearly.

”Who’s room is it?”

Yossui fluffed the pillows and thought. “Uhh…no ones…”

The word ‘no one’ hung in the air in dread. The thought of being out played while they were progressively getting drunk was too embarrassing to comprehend.

Yossui’s eyes were wide as she laughed weakly. “...Maki…”

Makoto crept out onto the balcony and with silent stupidity - jumped. She very luckily caught hold of the railing and pulled herself on. Yossui followed eagerly with a little more poise landing clean and quietly on the other side. The room next to Yossui’s was a spare room that was Iida sempai’s before she moved. The only memento she left in the spot less room were the cream curtains that now hindered the view from the two peeping toms.

“Can you see anything?” Makoto whispered.

”No…wait yes. Look through here. There’s a hole”

Makoto squished her head against Yossui’s to share the view through hole. The room was dark inside with two faint silhouettes moving majestically.

”Who is it?” Makoto asked, squinting her eyes.

”I don’t know”

The shadows seemed to dance together beautiful. Slowly moving into the light that shone through the curtains.

They both gasped as the identities of the figures were revealed.

”I don’t believe it…”

Makoto closed her jaw. “This means we've lost...”

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« Reply #242 on: August 02, 2006, 09:52:32 AM »
AHHHHH!!! the suspense!! who got Abe!!!??? OH GOD!! quick mikan!! put me out of my misery!! :(


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« Reply #243 on: August 02, 2006, 10:25:17 AM »
Konno waited anxiously in the bedroom for Makoto to come home. She wasnt late. There was still a full hour to go but Konno couldnt find any thing else other than waiting that she could do. Her heart was beating so firmly against her chest it served as too much of a distraction. So she sat - sat and waited.




In Italy a bull is set loose in the streets as a part of a celebration. Only the bravest of citizens participate in the out-running of this vicious animal. Its horns alone make you're throat dry and knees weak. With sheer power and speed it could toss you and break you like a twig. You've got to be fast if you want to escape such a daunting beast.

The same could be said for Abe-sempai. If you werent fast enough you were dead meat. With her nose-flared she charged at Makoto and Yossui like a red sheet, nearly forgetting to open the sliding door.

"WHAT-ARE-YOU-DOING!" She demanded between puffs.

Abe threw both girls into the room and out of the sight of passers-by with unbelievable strength. Yossui made an attempt to stand. Bad Move. She was instantly hissed at back down to submission.

"If-I-hear-A WORD-from-ANYONE!-about-this...mark my words...There will be hell to pay for"

The whole time through this lecture Abe's secret lover merely sat on the bed and enjoyed the show. Yossui shot her pleading looks in hope of an intervention. Anything to stop Abe's rant.

When all the steam had been let out, Abe covered her face with her arm and took deep breaths. In this process she wiped some of the dull red lipstick smeared across her mouth.

"Get out...go on.."

She kicked Makoto lightly on the shin as a sign of dismissal.

"I'll walk with you" Yuko annouced, flipping her golden hair back holding back a smirk. "I was just passing by..."

Yuko ushered the girls into the hallway. "Guess this ruins your game then, huh?"

Makoto was stunned. "How did you know about the game?"

"Oh please, did you think you were the first generation do play?It's almost become a tradition in Hello!Project now, hasnt it..."

Yossui blushed a little. "Come on, I'll walk you to your room Mako...Bye Nakazawa"

"Wait - so who played in the origanals?"

Yuko smiled pleasantly, happy to see someone take interest in the history of the game she invented. "Yasuda (although she rarely had any luck), Yaguchi and Ichii Sayaka were the origanal players"
She stroked her jaw line thinking back all those years. "Then Maki came...and the next year Kago joined us-"

"Hey come on Mako let's go" Yossui spoke over the top of Nakazawa but Makoto refused to leave until all the story was told. One question begged to be asked. "Wait, how come Kago was the only one from the 4th generation to play?What about Yossui"

It was too late and Yoshizawa knew there was nothing she could do to stop the flow of the conversation.

"Oh thats because she was the target"

"You promised never to bring this up with another member!" Yossui whinned, collapsing into Makoto to hide her embarassment.

"Yoshizawa, you didnt know any better at the time. Nothing to be ashamed of! Besides! it was cute!"

Yossui waved her arms madly, signalling her displeasure. "No no no...it wasnt...let's never speak of it again...alright we're outta here"

Yossui linked her arm through Makoto's and quite forcefully dragged her down the hall. "I beg you Mako...dont tell anyone"

Makoto glowed from the inside out. The fact that Yossui was now trusting her with a secret made her satisfied in some way.

"Dont worry! Your secret is safe with me"

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« Reply #244 on: August 02, 2006, 11:01:28 AM »
YUKO!!! awww.. so the games are over? i wanted to see what yossi wouldve done!!


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« Reply #245 on: August 02, 2006, 12:44:38 PM »
Takahashi wailed as she pounded the door.

"Pleeeeease! You gotta let me use the toilet!"

Niigaki's unamused voice was her reply. "For the last time no! I just got home and I'm using the shower! Cant you wait?"

For anyone sharing apartments for the first time getting use to sharing facilities was hard, without a doubt. Especially when those room mates where both girls.

"I really need to pee! Let me use it, pleeeeease Gaki-san!!!"

"I said no!"

This was final. Takahashi needed to find another toilet. Outside on the balcony was a very inviting potplant.

"Are you nuts? Find a toilet" She told herself, hurrying out into the hallway.

"Asami-chan!A-SA-MI~" She cried, thumping the door. No answer.

She sighed with disbelief. "She's out..."

Moving onto the next door she hesitated before realising how desperate she was. "Abe-san! Abe-san! I need to use your bathroom, please!"

The door opened to a very, very angry looking Nacchi. "What?" She said hastily.

"Bathroom, please ... I really need to -"

"Use the one downstairs, for christ sake!" Was the answer she recieved before the door was slammed in her face.

Takahashi's bladder ached. She thought it might give at any moment. Just then a glimmer of hope stuck its bed-head out the door.

"What's going on?" Maki yawned, the comotion waking her up.

Ai thought she saw a halo hover above Goto-sans head when her request for a toilet was answered.

"Yeah I think you can use it"

Ai zoomed into the room and into the steamed filled bathroom and tumbled down into Reina's towel covered body. There was a lot of cursing and at one stage the sound of a whip crack as Reina used her towel to hit Maki for saying the bathroom was free.

"Why dont you use the one downstairs?" Maki suggested as she farewelled the poor girl.

"Looks like I'll have to..."

Ai had always avoided the 1st floor toilets. They were out near the entrance. One of the very first things you see after the landlords office. It wasnt designed to be used by anyone except the janitor and landlord so they didnt bother with tiles or fancy faucets. Just plain cement and stubby tabs. Takahashi didnt have a problem with that but it was something else that you couldnt see that bother her. Every girl who used it said they had a feeling of being watched.

The door closed heavily behind her with a loud bang. She jumped and hurriedly found a cubical and shut the door behind her. She sighed with sweet relief. She'd made it. Happily she whistled to herself. That was until she heard a noise.

At first it was quiet. Distance. But the sound of slippers slidding along the cement floor grew louder and passed her right by before fading out. Never did she hear the sound of a door open or close. Under the gap of the toilet stall she could see nothing. No legs, no feet - nobody. It chilled her to the bone.

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« Reply #246 on: August 02, 2006, 12:52:16 PM »
Quote from: Mikan

"Hey come on Mako let's go" Yossui spoke over the top of Nakazawa but Makoto refused to leave until all the story was told. One question begged to be asked. "Wait, how come Kago was the only one from the 4th generation to play?What about Yossui"

It was too late and Yoshizawa knew there was nothing she could do to stop the flow of the conversation.

"Oh thats because she was the target"

"You promised never to bring this up with another member!" Yossui whinned, collapsing into Makoto to hide her embarassment.

"Yoshizawa, you didnt know any better at the time. Nothing to be ashamed of! Besides! it was cute!"
:lol: I would love to hear the story of Yossie being the games target

For some reason I thought Konkon was going to win even tho she was not in the game.
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« Reply #247 on: August 02, 2006, 01:57:04 PM »
lol. It was all up in the air. Bluekinoko and I spent a whole night talking over the possibilities. Due to recent events (some being personal) I couldnt take continue writing and needed to finish the games up. Sorry about that. I dont thnk I would have been able to continue them with flare anyway. Sometime I would like to do a flash back to certain unseen events. :D

and yes... DEMANDING MORE MAKOTO!

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« Reply #248 on: August 02, 2006, 02:19:39 PM »
"Takahashi needed to find another toilet. Outside on the balcony was a very inviting potplant." <--- This was fun-neeeee XD tee hee

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« Reply #249 on: August 02, 2006, 03:27:23 PM »
It was a good fic. I enjoyed it.

I also like how the grammar began to get worse as the sex ensued. XD

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« Reply #250 on: August 02, 2006, 03:38:23 PM »
Thanks for this huge update. I enjoyed the new chapters very much.
It's not that bad that the Abe games are finished now (maybe because Yuko won :D ). I'm sure that many other funny and interesting story lines will follow. ;)
By the way putting flash backs in the stories is always nice. :)

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« Reply #251 on: August 02, 2006, 08:02:59 PM »
Yeah, as Demanding More Makoto and Elle-driver said i wouldn't mind a flashback of the yossie games at all...

And hummmmmmm, the 1st floor toilet thing seems thrilling...

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« Reply #252 on: August 04, 2006, 04:23:41 PM »
Makoto rested her head in her hands. It had been an interesting evening and now, due to the effects of the alcohol and those events she felt incredibly happy. Opening the door to her room she stopped in her tracks and stared, jaw slightly open.

Konno twirled around as the door opened. Her short skirt swishing and swaying as she did so. Makoto stood gobsmacked as she skipped up and kissed her quickly on the cheek. Just like the first time she had worn such an outfit - Makoto was speechless. Reduced to a DokiDoki Puddle.

"Okaeri!"

"T-T...Tadaima"

Makoto was guided into Konno's arms for a long embrace. The scent of strawberries filled her nostrils. Konno's shampoo.

"I was looking forward to spend time with you tonight. Its seems like forever since we have been able to..."

Makoto felt a little guilty. "Im so-"

Konno shook her head. "We'll do something fun tonight"

Makoto's jaw opened a little more. If her face wasnt already red her blushing would have been more obvious. Konno winked at her and held back the devious grin forming on her face.

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« Reply #253 on: August 04, 2006, 04:44:48 PM »
HURRAH!! gratz Mikan on doki doki 80 :D


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« Reply #254 on: August 04, 2006, 04:48:20 PM »
Niigaki held the limp body of Takahashi Ai her arms who was sobbing hysterically. Ai's accent was hard enough for her to understand but the stream of cries and tears made it almost impossible.

"Oh, the bathroom!!!"

Niigaki raised an eyebrow. She had no clue what could be so sad that concerned a bathroom.

"And I was in there...and someone was out there...and the door....I just ran...Oh Gaki-san, Im so scared"

The pieces started to go together. What ever had spooked Ai in the toilets on the first floor had spooked her once more on the way out by rattling the cubical doors and slamming one of them shut. Niigaki wasnt a real believer in ghost stories especially those told by Takahashi. The novels that girl read had to much of an influence on her rashionality. It would be cruel to say all this out loud though. She kissed the top of Takahashi's head as a gesture of comfort.

"How about we go back down together and check it out?"

Takahashi's wet eyes gleamed with joy as she stared up in admiration at her brave button-nosed hero.

"Y-You'll come with me?"

"Yeah sure..."

Armed with a flashlight and crowd taser (Tsunku ordered that all youngest members have one) the two girls ventured down to the first floor. The lights for the bathroom were turned on at a panel near the door. The flick echoed across the solid floors and was answered by the electrical hum of lights.

"Which cubical was it?"

Clinging onto Niigaki with emense fear, Takahashi used her other free hand to point down the end row of toilets to the only cubical with it's door firmly shut. Risa bent down to check if someone was in there. No feet. Nothing. She had to admit, it was a little creepy. But come on, anything could have shut that door! A draft, poorly contructed door frames, Anything! With Takahashi holding onto her arm tightly they edged towards the suspect toilet. The hairs on the back of their necks stood on end. Even Niigaki's eyebrows shuttered a little as she kicked open the door.

"See, it's empty...nothing there"

To soon had she said so. The door swung shut with a great an unseen force nearly hitting Niigaki directly in the face had she not jumped back. Ai couldnt take it. She whimpered and ran for it - to the safety of her bed covers. Risa wasnt far behind.





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« Reply #255 on: August 04, 2006, 05:50:26 PM »
"Is this the right spot?"

"No" Konno giggled in the way she only did when she was having fun with Makoto.
 
"There?"

"No" She giggled again, grabbing hold of her girlfriends hand and pushing it lower. "Let me help"

Konno spread her legs wider causing her to grunt just a little.

"Have I found the spot?"

"Yeah, You got it"

Makoto wiped imaginary sweat from her brow. "Ooook! Your turn"

Konno spun the board. "Right foot Green"

Being amazingly flexible, this game was easy for both girls. It usually ended with a declaration of a stalemate.

Tired and stretched, they both lay on the floor, limbs entwined. Makoto playing with Konno's fingers. They were small and narrow. In comparison to her own they looked tiny, almost porcelien like. She put the hand over her own heart so Konno could feel how hard it was thumping. Under her shirt her nipples hardend in response to the gentle touch. Konno moved lightly over the bump under the fabric. With planned movements, Konno ran her hand down then up under the shirt, using her other hand to turn Makoto's face towards hers and kiss those lips she missed so much. Being so bold made her blush.

Makoto felt like the luckiest girl on earth.




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« Reply #256 on: August 04, 2006, 05:54:58 PM »
I love the brave Niigaki :heart: just like in the haunted house in Hello! Morning protecting eri's from ghosts and then running away XDXD

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« Reply #257 on: August 04, 2006, 06:09:42 PM »
Yay mush! Yay ghosts! Yay girl-sex!

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« Reply #258 on: August 04, 2006, 06:24:31 PM »
The lock clicked. Aya panicked. She stuff the book under her bottom and pretended to be asleep.

Miki laughed to herself. Aya was alseep on the bed. Snoring softly. It was beautiful. She wished there was a way she could freeze this moment and hold onto it forever. It was great having her home again.

"Argh, I smell" Miki said aloud.

Aya pressed her lips together to hold in a smile.

"Shower....first pajamas..."

Miki gathered her things for a much needed shower but she couldnt leave. Not yet. She leant against the bathroom door and watched the sleeping beauty. Her perfectly shaped chest rising and falling with every breath. The sun was under the horizon now, shining only a red light through the windows and tinting Aya's usually honey coloured skin. Miki's heart started to ache as she couldnt hold it in any longer. She gave Aya a kiss and poked that funny shaped nose of hers.

The bathroom door shut silently.

Aya thought she would have died. One from laughter and two from Miki's kiss. She wanted to pull Miki close and kiss her more. The thought of having Miki again, pressing her body against her own made her grow warm inside. She remembered the book.

The warm water had washed the day's stress from her shoulders. Miki stepped out of the bathroom wearing a T-shirt and towel to cover her lower half (even though she had underwear on). Aya was sitting up on the bed with a guilty look all over her face.

"What did you do?"

"NoTHiNG" Aya said as inncoently as possible. Her voice betrayed her by cracking.

"What's that in your hand"

Caught. Miki laughed evilly, determined to find out what Aya was hiding from her. She saw it as a game. Tickling Aya into submission.

"Where did you find it!"

Aya shrugged. "Under the bed. How long have you had it?"

"It's not mine. It's H..I borrowed it from a friend"

Miki leant over to the bed side table and put it in the draw. "Were you reading it?"

Aya feined disbelief. "Oh god, no!"

"You're a terrible actor Matsuura" Miki teased, hanging millimetres away from Aya's lips. "You were reading it, werent you"

Aya stole a kiss and shoved Miki aside. "Good night Fujimoto"

They lay in silence for a while. It was too early to actually sleep.

"Mikitty, you awake?"

"Yeah..?"

"I love you"

Miki grinned. "I love you too"

Another silence followed which was interrupted by Aya sitting bolt upright in bed. Miki jumped. "What..what happened?"

Aya slowly lay back down, this time so she was side on facing Miki.

"I really really love you"

Hearing those words - as lame and as sweet as they were - made Miki shine on the inside. She tried to play it cool like always. "I know.."

Aya cheeks went red. She covered Miki's eyes with her own hands and stole another kiss. "I want to make love with you"






-Argh, writing late again! I feel this is all not up to scratch and I should keep this chapter and edit it tomorrow but really..I dont have time. Love you all!! Yes, I'll tell you when this side of the story will be posted in the Perv :D

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« Reply #259 on: August 04, 2006, 06:26:03 PM »
Lol nocturnal readers, hello!!

Its almost 2:30 am!! I'll write tomorrow as well :D

Good nights!

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