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« Reply #100 on: July 07, 2006, 09:25:08 PM »
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I loved this chapter! Maki is so sweet, i can imagine all this, you write so well. I'm really enjoying the details you put into your chapters. For example, Maki playing with the can when talking to Reina.

Can't wait to read more from you!

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« Reply #101 on: July 07, 2006, 10:14:30 PM »
Poor Ayaya, though I can't stop laughing at the thought of a Keita fangirl slapping her :D

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« Reply #102 on: July 08, 2006, 09:03:17 AM »
Shopping alone was no fun so after Aya's immediate departure Miki caught the train home. The day was muggy like yesterday and just how tomorrow will be. The humid air choked anyone who stayed out long enough so it wasnt uncommon to see small groups of people lining up for icecream. However, Miki's train would be leaving soon meaning she didnt have time for a Baskin Robbins treat and had to settle for another Coolish at the Kiosk.

"150 yen thank you"

Miki hesitated, picking up a magazine on the stand near by.

"I'll take this too"

The register corrected itself to 1050yen. Miki walked slowly with the Coolish hanging from her mouth while she read the cover of the magazine and the main article.

Who's Matsuura's new man?

Miki's train left without her. It didnt matter much because her destination wasnt home anymore.


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« Reply #103 on: July 08, 2006, 09:14:16 AM »
poor Aya...and poor Miki :cry:   Now I'm wondering if this is about Keita or even someone else :o

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« Reply #104 on: July 08, 2006, 09:55:06 AM »
Makoto pushed the poster hard against the wall trying to make it stick.

"Amuro-san..." she sighed, taking a step back to look at her newly decorated bedroom wall. Pictures of Britney Spears, Ueto Aya, P!NK posed suggestively next to photos she had taken at concerts with such stars as Matsuura Aya, Nakashima Mika and Koda Kumi. She dusted her hands and smiled proudly back at them as Konno came in with a shopping bag of pudding.

"Oh dear god ..."

Makoto didnt take her eyes of the beauties. "What's wrong? Too many?"

"No...I suppose not...it's just a bit..."

"Bright?"

"Um..."

"Tacky?"

"Er..."

"Obsessive?"

"Well..."

Makoto slouched and sighed. "What is it then?"

Asami bit her tongue, it would be best not to say anything. Besides, it could just be her imagination. "Nothing. Nothing at all, it looks cool"

A blinding flash followed by a loud crack from the sky made the conversation cease. The couple drew back the curtains and stood by the window. A storm was on its way.






-Sigh,I hope my standards pick up soon. Bare with me.

U wanna know something scary? I was writing that other chapter of Doki Doki where the first line is "Do you wanna go out for a drink?". I left the room for a split second to see my brother. He and I were the only ones home at the time. When I came back I maximized the window to continue writing. 2 lines under where the "Do you wanna go out for a drink?" was written someone had typed "yeah". My brother isnt a liar and he swears that he didnt touch the computer, besides he was with me and no one else was home. Conclusion - A ghost wants to go drinking with me! Uwa! ..no no! this is totally true! I should have print screened it. Weird stuff. -


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« Reply #105 on: July 08, 2006, 10:30:27 AM »
There was a knock at the door. Aya woke up with a start, checking her surroundings. She must have fallen asleep as soon as she came home. The knock at the door sounded again.

"Mikitty, your soaked. Did you walk through the rain?"

She hadnt noticed it had started raining but there could be no other explanation for Miki's damp clothes and matted hair.

"Actually I kind of ran..."

Miki's voice was uneven as she spoke. Her eyes were slightly glazed and seemed to be staring not at Aya but straight through her...

"Come in, you can borrow my clothes"

Aya tugged Miki's sleeve but she didnt move an inch.

"Say...are you dating someone, Matsuura?"

"What?" Aya's eyes were wide but she didnt deny anything so Miki asked again.

"Are you?"

"No. Im not" She replied sternly.

A spine of a magazine collided with Aya's nose. White pain rushed over her body as she became momentarily blinded and stumbled back. Another painful wave englufed her as she was slapped on the face with it's back cover this time. She tripped and fell on her back. Miki sat on top of her, shoved the main article in her face and the titles aloud.

"A new couple has bloomed this Spring in the music industry as W-inds member Tachibana Keita and H!P Matsuura Aya were spotted on many different occasions holding hands and showing their affection...."

Miki's faced showed distaste as if the words of the article were making her physically sick.

"What the FUCK Aya!"

The snap shots were hard evidence to argue against. But nothing is ever what it seems.

"It's not like that"

Miki laughed menacingly. She was too angry to be crying.

"How is it then?Tripped and fell on his lips? TELL ME"

She was referring to the photo of her kissing Keita in the studio parking lot.

"Please let me explain, ok? We're just friends -"

"Friends? That's total bullshit"

Aya's lost her temper and pushed Miki to the ground beside her.

"Im NOT a liar"

Miki got to her feet. "No, you're just an ass"

Aya opened her mouth to protest by the magazine struck again. Tiny droplets of blood stained the cover.


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« Reply #106 on: July 08, 2006, 10:44:16 AM »
I knew it! I knew she was going to get her ass kicked. Thank goodness it wasn't as bad as I thought it was going to be.

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« Reply #107 on: July 08, 2006, 11:28:36 AM »
oh man! :shock:  Miki is so abusive! :kcrazy: oh this might take some big effort on both their parts to work things out...and now I wonder back to the dream part...since the crazed fan girl slapped Ayaya...maybe she'll come back later to do more harm! :confused:

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« Reply #108 on: July 08, 2006, 12:42:15 PM »
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I knew it! I knew she was going to get her ass kicked. Thank goodness it wasn't as bad as I thought it was going to be.


Its not? You are talking about Aya right?

Okkkkk that's REALLY spooky bluekinoko *shudders*
You gotta stop being so attractive so "they" can back off a while.  :P
I hope KonKon doesn't feel weird if she sees my room wall. Filled with Momosu stuff :D

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« Reply #109 on: July 08, 2006, 01:04:05 PM »
OMG!!thats miki!!totally what expected from her:D.aya deserves it to deceive her.im so addicted with your fanfic hehe
Yomiki...Real Love:heart:

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« Reply #110 on: July 08, 2006, 03:31:02 PM »
Aya held the bridge of her nose over the sink. Blood ran freely from her nostrils, some dripping inside her mouth. She spat it back out. It tasted foul. Pinching the dridge didnt seem to be helping, the blood wouldnt clot quick enough. Tiny black and white stars floated past Aya's eyes. As if someone was turning off the light ever so slowly, the world went black. She woke up later - not sure how much later but just later. The nosebleed had stopped and the blood that was on her hands and face was dry although now she had a really bad headache.

Miki ran through the rain again, all the way home. It must have taken her over an hour to do it. She collapsed in the apartment lobby with exhaustion. She ran all the anger and disbelief out in the form of sweat which was mixing with the rain on her brow. Takahashi was the first to find her. She then called the others. Tsunku was out meaning Yoshizawa Hitomi was the 'man of the house'. With the help of Goto Maki, Yossi carried the emotionally and physically drained Miki to her room.

When they reached the Morning Musume floor Goto lifted Miki onto Yossi's back. They had decided it would be best if she was closely monitored. Yossi volunteered.

"You're...really...heavy...you know that?" She heaved, unlocking the door to Miki's room and lying her on the bed.

"Buh"

She muttered something unintelligable. With a little help, Miki undressed and crawled under the covers of her bed. Yossi wasnt sure what was wrong with Miki but a wild guess would say shock - but from what?

"What happened?"

Miki still had her eyes shut but she was still concious.

"No. Nothing"

Yossi could take a hint she didnt want to talk about it. She ran her hand across Miki's damp face and through her brown hair before leaving, hesitating at the door.

"Miki, I should say thanks...for calling Ishikawa for me..."

Miki smiled wearily, possibly already asleep. Neither of them knew it but a deep frienship was blooming.



-Sorry I wanted to make this chapter longer but yeah, I have to go out to a dinner function. I'll be back in 4 hours...so like 8 or 9 and I might be able to throw out the next chapter..which I was looking forward to write! If not then, then tomorrow! -
« Last Edit: July 09, 2006, 09:26:41 AM by bluekinoko »


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« Reply #111 on: July 08, 2006, 09:29:34 PM »
Oh my god! That fic is absolutely brilliant. You've made me so addicted. I love the GAM plot. :heart:  Can't wait to read more of it. :drool:

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« Reply #112 on: July 08, 2006, 09:35:26 PM »
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Its not? You are talking about Aya right?


Yes, I am talking about Aya. I thought she was going to have a broken nose, black eye and a busted lip.

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« Reply #113 on: July 09, 2006, 02:53:49 PM »
Note -
In Australia it's called GLADWRAP
In America it's called SARANWRAP
In UK it's called CLING FILM

It's all one in the same but I had to tell you know so the chapter would make a little more sense. Atleast you all learnt something







The rain kept Maki awake. It had drizzled in the afternoon and by about sunset the clouds had opened up letting the cascade of water fall down on the many districts that made up Tokyo. It was now after 4am and there was no sign of it stopping. To be totally blunt - Maki was bored. Only recently moving back into the Mo-musu apartments meant that a majority of her things were still at her parents house. She had no Tv, no MD, no nothing. Only her clothes, some kitchen supplies and a closet full of soft drink. Ultimately boring.

Reina was bored too. She had meditated for an hour, did some yoga, stretched, emailed her friends and was now running low on things to do. It was nearly a full moon so she blamed her restless behaviour on that. The full moon has strange effects on the way act. Outside in the hallway came a noise, Reina was overwhelmed the joy at the idea that someone might be awake too. She pressed her ear to the door. There was a muffled yet long squealing noise followed by a click. Reina opened her door a crack in order to investigate this intriging sound. Three doors down sat Maki on the floor pulling pieces of sticky tape off the roll and them around the edges of the door. Her height only let her tape the doorframe so she stood on tippytoes, jumping to get the top of the frame. Reina still wasnt sure what exactly was being stuck to the frame of the door. She leant out to get a better look. That's what gave her away.

Maki frooze like a possum found with a flashlight. Her eyes were big, round and full of shock. It soon melted away to a relieved grin.

"Oh, its only you" Maki sighed.

Reina didnt know whether to be offended or not. She stepped out into the hallway with curiousity.

"Can you give me a hand?" Maki asked, trying to bite the tape with her teeth.

Reina crept over to Maki not really with the intention to help but more so to see what on earth she was doing. Over the door frame was a near invisible layer of gladwrap. She wouldnt have seen it if the hall lights werent on.

"Get on my shoudlers"

Maki crouched down infront of Reina, prompting her to climb aboard. With their combine height Reina was now able to fastly secure the top of the door with gladwrap, finishing Maki's prankster masterpiece.

"And now we play the waiting game..." She giggled, tugging Reina into a corner where they waited for an unsuspecting Takahashi.

Rising time for some was around 5 or 6 o'clock. There was a false alarm when I zombie like Miki stumbled out of her room and across the hall which startled them but apart from that there was not much movement. Showtime came at twenty minutes to six when Takahashi's door opened and....Nacchi walked out, straight into the gladwrap before either could stop her. She hung there for a moment in a pose that resembled that of Han Solo from Star Wars. Maki lowered her phone (she had recorded the whole thing) and dashed away with her accomplice. If they were found out, there would be hell to pay for.

Both girls collapsed in a fit of laughter on the floor of Reina room. Maki found it most hilarious and played the moment back over and over again on her phone. Reina however found herself looking elsewhere, there was something new she hadnt seen in Maki and now more than ever it was shinning through. It was something she couldnt quiet explain although one day, maybe, she would be able. What ever it was that she saw made her lean over and kiss Maki for the first time. Just once. Softly on the lips.

First kisses do taste like lemon.


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« Reply #114 on: July 09, 2006, 03:55:03 PM »
AWWWWWWWWWW its so sweet :heart: :heart: :heart:
Definitely some sweetness overload there. Liking it loads though.

Maki x Reina = :heart:

Doki Doki inspired me so much I actually sat down for 3 hours straight writing something. But after reading your latest chapter I think I wrote like crap :D

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« Reply #115 on: July 09, 2006, 06:03:19 PM »
Dude...44...BRILLIANT!!! Love the sig too! :lol:

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« Reply #116 on: July 10, 2006, 01:37:05 AM »
gahh this is too good! bluekinoko you're making me unhappy that I won't be able to check this thread as often in the coming week :evil: However being in Hong Kong should make me feel slightly better :rolleyes:

anywho, hope you post more chapters before my flight on Monday afternoon *hint hint* :-P

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« Reply #117 on: July 10, 2006, 08:43:14 AM »
"HOLY SH -"

Thunder rumbling overhead drowned her out. Miki stood over Yossi's bed, her head drooping slightly making her look like Sadako from the ring. That's exactly who Yossi thought she was.

"What the hell is wrong with you" She hissed, trying not to wake Ishikawa sleeping next to her.

"There's a storm"

Yossi rolled her eyes and hoped that's not all Miki wanted to tell her at 3am.

"I know...and?"

"Im scared"

There was an awkward pause.

"You're not serious are you?"

The dim street lights allowed Yossi to see Miki as she nodded slowly. Yossi sighed heavily.

"Ok fine..."

She rolled over to make space. Miki climbed in eagerly.

"Thanks"

Yossi held her arms above her head not sure where to place them. She wrapped them around Ishikawa beside her and tried to go back to sleep.

When morning came it still hadnt stopped raining.


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« Reply #118 on: July 10, 2006, 10:43:59 AM »
"This doesnt make us gay does it?"

Takahashi asked, sliding her hand up and over Niigaki's left nipple.

"No, course not"

The obstructing bra ws undone and thrown to the floor along with the T-shirt.

"People do this all the time, dont they?"

The pile of clothing on the floor grew until both girls were only wearing underwear.

"Im pretty sure they do"

Niigaki reassured, brushing her friends hair aside so she could get a clear view of her face. Takahashi kissed her way down Risa's body but stopped at the navel.

"Besides...you're too cute to resist anyway"

Niigaki laughed and rested her head back down on the pillows giving herself entirely to the overwhelming sensations that followed.


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« Reply #119 on: July 10, 2006, 11:10:52 AM »
Yossi smiled as big a smile as you can do with a mouth full of tooth paste. In the time it took her to have a shower her girlfriend had snuggled up to their guest in her absense. Both Rika and Miki were smiling contently in their dreams. It was a sight so cute, words failed to describe it. Yossi sucked up the dribbling toothpaste and returned to the bathroom to dry her hair.

Ishikawa woke from an unsettling dream but was reliefed to find herself in a comforting embrace. She grinned whole heartedly to herself, stretched out and kissed the mop of hair snoozing in her arms. She couldnt help but note that Yossi's new shampoo was in some way familiar and...a little arousing.

The mop of hair spoke.

"Buh"

She giggled and kissed the mop again, making her way down to her lips. Fondling Yossi's breasts with her one free arm. Something wasnt quiet right though but she couldnt out her finger on it.

"Oh dear god!" She cried out in disgust, kicking Miki straight out of the bed and on to the floor. Miki hit the ground with a thud, taking the bed sheets with her. Yossi rushed back into the room, hair half dry on one side.

The two did their best to explain and much to their surprise, it worked.

"It was all a misunderstand right?"

Yossi nodded. "Yeah, exactly. No biggy!"

Miki just sat on the floor muttering. "Well not like I minded really..."

She didnt mean for anyone to hear but with all eyes now on her they must have.

"What? I was kidding!!..."


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