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« Reply #160 on: July 21, 2006, 02:54:30 PM »
LOL I fell sorry for you but from the looks of it, it was worth it!

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« Reply #161 on: July 21, 2006, 03:10:20 PM »
"Thanks again for letting me stay the night...Tsunku promised to have my new room ready by today"

Niigaki rolled over rubbing the sleep from her eyes. "Dont mention it"

Takahashi patted her head as a display of her gratitude and hoped out of bed only to be horrified. She stumbled back, her hands feeling around behind her.

"What? what is it?" Risa asked sleepily, rolling out of bed and looking at the sheets to see what was matter.

Takahashi spun around in circles. Stopped. Then tried going the other way. In one of her rotations Niigaki caught a glimse of a small red stain on the back of her pants and giggled.

"It's mine isnt it?"

Niigaki tried to hide her laughter. "Yeah dont worry about it"
She pulled the sheets off the bed and threw them in a ball in the corner of the room. The corner she put all the 'to be washed' items in.

"Risa, what do I do!"

Niigaki shrugged. "Change your pants and move on with your life. Washing day is tomorrow..."

Takahashi looked close to tears. "I dont know what to do!!"

She doesnt really mean that does she? I hope she doesnt expect me to do it Niigaki thought to herself, taking a tiny step back.

"You...have never had your period before..this is the first one?" Niigaki asked.

Takahashi stripped her pants off inspecting them with teary eyes and nodded.

Niigaki burst into laughter. "My god...how old are you? Talk about a late bloomer"

After much instruction and embarrassing moments Takahashi was clean and fully equipt with the right gear.

Niigaki tucked in the sheets under the matress "Can I ask you something?"

"Yeah I suppose"

"Well, I just dont get how you can start your period now but have...in loss of better way to put it...such lovely breasts"

Takahashi gave them a squeeze. "They are nice, arent they...They're not real though"

Niigaki gasped. "Wow...can...can I touch them?"

"Yeah sure go for it"

It hadnt stopped her touching them before but Niigaki thought it would be best to ask for permission this time. She helped Takahashi unbutton her pyjama shirt exposing her beautiful natural looking bust.

And thats when the worst happened.


(sorryI would have written what the worst was but Im going to bed now... :) )

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« Reply #162 on: July 21, 2006, 06:21:41 PM »
you tease...

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« Reply #163 on: July 22, 2006, 08:34:00 AM »
Nacchi pushed open the door holding a box full of Takahashi's things yet to be moved. She dropped the box and glared at the two girls. One with her hands firmly around the other girls bare chest.

"I KNEW IT! I TOLD HIM! SHE'S A BAD INFLUENCE ON YOU!" She cried out, storming in and grabbing both of them by the ear. "THIS NEVER WOULD HAVE HAPPENED IF HE TOOK MY ADVICE AT PUT FUJIMOTO IN CHARGE!"

They howled with pain as they were dragged out of the room. Niigaki tried to pull away. "Abe-san, it's not what it looks like I swear!"

Takahashi was merely cried and whined all the way saying. "Im not gay. Im not!"

Natsumi wouldnt hear it. She took both girls down to Yossui's room who had only just returned from the Futsal match. Yossui answered in a black tracksuit, her hair wet. She must have been having her shower.

"Oh Abe-san. I didnt know you were moving back in this week otherwise I -"

"YOU!" She pointed at Yossui in threatening way. "Sort these two out. Such indecent behaviour shouldnt happen even with you as leader"

She threw Niigaki and half-naked Takahasi (still rocking back-and-forth muttering. "Im not. Im not. Im not") into Yossui's room.

"You know what Tsunku would do if he found out?!"

Yossui was too stunned to say anything. In each hand she was holding one of the girls. Natsumi bid them good day and pulled the door shut, stomping back to her room.

Yossui offered a chair to each of her unexpected guests and sat herself on the edge of the bed. She dried her hair off as she spoke.

"You wanna tell me what that was about?"

The girls were counting there blessing that Yossui was hard to anger. Before anyone could explain the door opened again as another 5th generation member was kicked in with the words "I caught this one too! I dont believe this.."

All three of them turned to look at Makoto on the floor.

"What the hell happened?" She looked around confused. "One minute I was putting up my posters and the next...hey why is Takahashi naked?"

T wrapped her hands around her chest to cover herself. Yossui took the sheet off the bed and gave it to her. She tied it up like a toga. Yossui threw Makoto a pillow to sit on before she continued her questioning into why these girls were in trouble.

"Ok, what did you do to anger Abe-san?"

A knock followed by a bodiless voice interrupted. "Yocchan? Is she gone? Can I come out now?"

"Oh yeah sure.."

The closet door creaked open revealing a wet Ishikawa who hadnt quiet finished drying her body when the madness began. Tucking the towel around her body she dried herself using a smaller hand towel and sat next to Yossui.

"Ok sorry...what did I miss?"

The 5th gen (minus Konno because she wanst there) were speechless. Especially Makoto who kept looking back and forward between Toga Takahashi and a dripping wet barely covered Ishikawa.

Niigaki cleared her throat. "Uh, I touched Ai-chans bust - Not in a perverted way, it was in the name of science"

"And what kind of science is this?" Yossui inquired, smirking.

"Well, she has..."

"They're fake" Takahashi sighed.

Ishikawa gasped. Yossui grinned and Makoto reminded herself to close her mouth.

"Well, now I understand why you're here" Yossui said furrowing her brow. "But Mako-chan...?"

Makoto shrugged and Niigaki called attention back to her issue. "Is there anyway we can explain that we werent doing what she thought we were?"

Ishikawa shook her head sadly. "I dont think there is. For some mysterious reason Abe Natsumi hates girls that play for the other team"

They all looked and the floor in despair and Takahashi called a time out.

"But wait...I dont even play Futsal"

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« Reply #164 on: July 22, 2006, 08:59:04 AM »
On weekends after practice Miki would hang out with Aya. Thats how it always was. Even if Aya was busy Miki would wait at her apartment until she came home. But she cant do that anymore. She needed to find something else to do. Stepping out into the hallway to look for that something see saw Abe-san walking full speed in her direction. It was a scary sight.

"Ooooooooh, Mikitty!"

Abe pinched Miki's cheeks. She smiled politely dispite the pain radiating from the newly broken blood vessels on her face.

"Abe-san. Tsunku told me you'd be coming"

Abe giggled her high pitch giggle. Miki twitched and laughed uncomfortably.

"Oh Mikitty it's great to be back here. Did you want to hang out?"

Depends if the hanging out activity requires clothes or not Miki thought then mentally slapped herself for thinking something so disturbing.

"No, Im on my way out. Maybe another time"

It was the half truth. She was on the way out so it techinically wasnt a lie.

"Oh, that's right! It's Saturday. You're going to Aya's..."

"Yeah. Im going to Aya's.." She replied flatly.

"Oh, well did you know she has a letter for you at the front desk?"

Miki canned the surprise that exploded in her heart.

"No. I didnt. I'll pick it up on my way out, shall I? Later Natsumi"

Abe waved and skipped off happily, forgetting the previous events that had frustrated her.

Miki wondered if this is suppose to be the letter of explaination which she didnt want to read. It brought up mixed feelings. Anger, sadness, regret. They all bubbled around inside of her. She looked around for a release.

Toga Takahashi waddled down the hall to her new room. In her arms was the large cardboard box Abe had dropped off earlier. Miki couldnt help herself. She was borderline desperate.

"Can I help you with that?"

Takahashi's head wasnt visible for the box but she gave a nice clear "Yes please!" and Miki opened the door to T's new room and shut it behind both them.


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« Reply #165 on: July 22, 2006, 12:58:18 PM »
Ahh, it's Takahashi's turn now... :D
Abe is such a bitch! :evil:

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« Reply #166 on: July 22, 2006, 01:03:41 PM »
"No way!" Maki exclaimed. The bag of pease slipping off her head and onto the kitchen table.

"No joke. She had a fit and blamed me for all the bad behaviour that has been going on"

Reina picked up the peas and pressed them onto Maki's bump. She was hit on the head by a rogue soccer ball. To make it worse she knocked the same spot getting out of the car. "Like what behaviour?"

Yossui rubbed her hair in the oppsosite direction letting it spring back in a messy wave. "There was this whole incident with Niigaki and Takahashi but...yeah I cant go into detail.."

Maki laughed but the motion made her head throb so she stopped immediately. "Well I hardly think its your fault. This kind of stuff has been happening way before your time. Then again, it was Nakazawa who was leader"

Yossui sat up straight. "What do you mean by that?"

"She is like the older, crankier, Kansai version of you"

"Version of who?" Makoto asked, entering the kitchen with Konno on her back. She let Konno climbed down and go to the fridge to collect more of their pudding.

"Nakazawa is like Yossui" Reina informed.

Makoto shook her head vigourously. "Yossui is like Yossui. She is kind unique. Special..."

They all stared at her blankly. Maki stole a glance at the blushing Yossui and smirked.

"Nakazawa-san is more like....Fujimoto-san"

"What? how?" Yossui said, trying to get Maki to stop looking at her.

"The way Nakazawa communicated with people....its very Fujimoto-ish"

"You talking about me behind my back?"

Fujimoto was walking past the kitchen and stuck her head in at the sound of her name.

"No we are talking about Abe moving back in and complaining about the indecent behaviour that has apparently been going on" Maki told her, putting the conversation back on track. "She says its all Yossui's fault"

Fujimoto rested her back again the kitchen bench feeling a little guilty. "Really? Is that so?"

Reina put the peas back in the freezer. "Y'know she probably doesnt know much about girl/girl relationships so she freaks out"

Makoto agreed. "Yeah she is..uh...homerforbrick"

Konno crawled out the of the fridge with a look of confusion. "Homophobic. It's called homophobic. The fear of same sex relationships"

Konno's encylcopedic knowledge was always welcomed in the Morning Musume house. She was also the only person who could translate Makoto's nonsensical jibberish. A light went on in the light bulb above Yossui's head. It sooned jumped across to Maki and both their faces lit up with excitment.

"Oh my god!" They yelled at each other. Reina jumped back with surprise.

"What do you guys have Ishin Denshin or something?" Fujimoto smirked.

Makoto and Reina quickly turned to Konno.

"Ishin Denshin - The art of communication without words or gestures. Only thoughts"

"We should totally do it" The two mentally connected girls laughed.

"Woah woah woah, for those of us who are not blessed with any supernatural gift. Can you fill us in?"

The two went through the details of the plan they formulated without words.

"We should totally get someone to -"
"- convince Abe to join the team"

The both laughed like maniacs. Konno feared for their sanity but the rest thought it was a pretty cool idea. Yossui stretched back in her chair.

"Give me a day. I could have it done" She boasted.

Maki snorted. "A day? Thats way too long. I'll do it in less than that"

"Oh yeah? So could I but I thought a whole day would give me plenty of time. I could do it in an hour"

"Alright. I'll give you an hour, hotshot. You cant exceed spending more than an hour with Nacchi a day starting tomorrow until who ever wins"

The smile was wiped from Yossui's face. "So its like a free for all? We both go at once?"

Maki nodded. The rest of the room was dead silent as Yossui contemplated whether or not to accept the challenge. Even Konno had stopped eating, leaving the spoon hanging outside her mouth. Yossui could never deny a challenge. Especially one made by GoMaki.

"You're on"

They shook on it.

"I want in too" Fujimoto placed her hand on top of theirs.

She was a tough competitor but it would only make the game more fun.

"Me too" Reina piled her hand on.
"Count me in" Makoto followed suit.

All eyes were on Konno.

"Oooooooh no. Im not playing"

"Ok well if that's all of us then what do you want as the prize?"

"The usual - Slave for a week sound fine?" Yossui suggested.

"Yeah sure"

They let go of the hot and heavy hand shake and went back to their resting postions. Maki beemed at her competition -

"Starting 8am tomorrow. Let the games begin"


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- God must hate my novels. The power went out and I lost the story but Im happy with this chapter. It took a while to re-write. In the meantime about 20 people logged on and read the story. I hope your still here to read this one too. I would appreciate more new commenting people. I dont worry about how many people comment but I would like some feedback on the direction of the story from our quieter readers. Btw, huggumwuggums do you sit on my thread because every time there is a post you are so quick to reply! Elle_Driver you too!! its so weird but I think its cute :D   -
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« Reply #167 on: July 22, 2006, 01:13:56 PM »
AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It's Takahashi, it's Takahashi!!!! Horny Miki :drool:

*hehe* Maybe Nacchi's just jealouse???? I'm so curious who'll win the bet, Maki or Yossi!!! [whispers] Maki, Maki, please Maki [/whispers]

Also, "She is like the older, crankier, Kansai version of you" completely cracked me up ... *rofl*
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« Reply #168 on: July 22, 2006, 01:25:05 PM »
Well, what can I say? I'm totally addicted to this story. I really love your writing style. So I look for updates as often as possible :D

Making Abe join the team is so hilarious. I'm so excited who will win the bet.
I'll keep my fingers crossed for Yossui or Miki! :P  
But it will be pretty much interesting what kind of orders the slave for a week has to obey. :drool:

Can't wait to read more of this!

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« Reply #169 on: July 22, 2006, 10:33:09 PM »
To put it simply I really like it. The situations, the diaoluge, all good stuff.

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« Reply #170 on: July 23, 2006, 06:08:58 AM »
KONKON!!! XD XD XD Giving her definitions while in the fridge!  I can TOTALLY picture that! It's SO CUTE!!! :ROTFLMAO:

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« Reply #171 on: July 24, 2006, 02:22:39 AM »
WaffleT told us his NG.

O.K SCENE:
.....She walked into a little room labeled broom closet and turned on the light. In front of her were rows and rows of security footage...

NG:
.....She walked into a little room labeled broom closet and turned on the light. In front of her were rows and rows of security rootage...


Thank you WafffleT for that :D

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« Reply #172 on: July 24, 2006, 10:45:00 AM »
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WaffleT told us his NG.

O.K SCENE:
.....She walked into a little room labeled broom closet and turned on the light. In front of her were rows and rows of security footage...

NG:
.....She walked into a little room labeled broom closet and turned on the light. In front of her were rows and rows of security rootage...


Thank you WafffleT for that :D


lol WaffleT got me good...I read that like 5 times over...my reaction was like :) .....;).... ;)..... XD

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« Reply #173 on: July 24, 2006, 12:12:07 PM »
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Btw, huggumwuggums do you sit on my thread because every time there is a post you are so quick to reply!


 LOL I can't help it since it's just so bloody addictive! I'm really looking forward to how the story progresses now that Abe's in the picture and the girls have been caught. Maybe the girls could give Abe a bit of the taste of how sweet it is
on the other "side" :twisted:

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« Reply #174 on: July 24, 2006, 12:27:07 PM »
Miki returned to her room and threw the letter on the floor. There was an arguement going on inside her head. One half was telling her to run and apologise to Aya while the other side was chanting Aya's a prick! - Gimme a P!

"God why am I hurting so much!" She yelled to which and angellic voice replied.

"I bet it's because you really love Aya.."

Miki spun around opening the door so hard it nearly snapped off its hinges.

"WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING OUTSIDE MY DOOR"

Ishikawa stoof frozen on the spot regretting ever letting those words slip out of her mouth.

"I-I-I.....was suppose to ask you about tonight..I wasnt eavesdropping I swear!!"

Ishikawa put her hands infront of her face expecting it to be hit with Miki's fist. Instead Miki slapped the door frame with despair.

"No, Im sorry...what did you want to ask me about tonight?"

Ishikawa lowered her hands. "Oh...we having a U21 get together. 8 o'clock - Yossui's room"

Miki ran her fingers through her hair, messing it up a little. "Thanks. Sounds nice. I'll be there"

"Good. Yossui said she'll make us one of her notorious dry maternities"

They both laughed and Ishikawa returned to her room. Miki starred at the letter on the floor.

I bet it's because you really love Aya..

The whole thing seems so simple when you say that.

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« Reply #175 on: July 25, 2006, 01:18:48 AM »
Awwww, I always love Miki & Rika interaction ... especially when they mention how much Miki loves Aya :heart:

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« Reply #176 on: July 25, 2006, 09:36:11 AM »
Sorry I didnt want to post this in any other forum. :D
These are all stories I have heard from people I have met and some are things I read on the net. I'll get the ones I read on Yahoo!Gossip channel out -

Ishikawa has smelly armpits (we all do but hers are really bad)
Niigaki was a loser and was subjected to some harsh teasing.
Fujimoto Miki was a real rebel and had to go to some sort of reform school.
The real reason Kago left was because she was bullied by Fujimoto Miki (Yeah, even though Kago is her sempai)

Ok. And now the stuff I have heard people tell me.

Friend of mine was in Shibuya and was walking down the streets when she realised that some MM girls were there walking in the same direction (she isnt a fan but you could recognise them). She kept walking and heard one of them sneer at her and say "Oh god, dont follow us"

The next one I couldnt believe.
I met a girl that made it through the auditions for Morning Musume and went on the final camps with Makoto, Risa, Ai and Asami. She told me a little about what they were like in real life. She didnt talk to Takahashi or Niigaki much but she did chat with Makoto and Konno.
Makoto was describe as a generally happy person and Konno was quiet and comtemplative. She didnt say much and would usually nod and go "oh hmmm" after you said something.
I guess this isnt amazing stuff because it all is a little obvious.

Another thing was sus. Bluekinoko's friend's friend (who we shall call Bambi) was given a phone number. It was popular at the time to get someone's phone email address at randomly become penfriends with them. So she got the address from her friend and started mailing this girl. She never found out her name and the girl never said much about what she was going but she did every now and again say things like "Oh Im in a green room" or "Im with the tutor" (even though it was a normal school time). The story goes on and on as they messaged each other for a while. It ends like this - the girl was Nono.

Nono or Aibon. Im sure she said it was Nono. If it wasnt then it was just some wacky Otaku.

Cool story, right?

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« Reply #177 on: July 25, 2006, 09:52:14 AM »
I guess most of the stories about Miki are true. If i'm not mistaken, there were recordings of her scolding Aibon but that was when she first joined, I guess she's tamed by the other girls(maybe Yossi, if you know what I mean :lol:) And about Niigaki, I think she was already already known before the  auditions as she's done CMs and I've heard that her family has connections with the guys behind the scenes so the fans thought she was using that to get in MM and was victim to some very harsh booing. I may be wrong though XD
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« Reply #178 on: July 25, 2006, 10:23:46 AM »
There must be some truth in some rumors and gossips since there's no smoke without fire. Back then when I heard the secret recordings, it was kinda upsetting, but well they are humans too.

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« Reply #179 on: July 25, 2006, 10:38:58 AM »
Oh yeah I heard about the recording too!

Hang around people because Im still writing the story now! This chapter is really long (and Im watching Ayaka's English lessons :P ) It will be done within the hour and I can start on the next one! yay!

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