Author Topic: Doki Doki (Read 151115 times)

Mikan · « **Reply #580 on:** November 05, 2006, 07:51:50 AM »

Both girls lay facing each other, alseep. Heads only just touching. Out of habit, Maki's legs were wrapped around Yossui, pulling her closer and making the scene look that little more intimate and even a little innocent. The sheets had been twisted and eventually kicked completely off the bed.

Which only made Yasuda's task that little bit easier. She smiled at the sleeping beauties and began removing their pants with the help of Johnson. Megumi was to stay outsisde to keep watch.

"Score!" Johnson whispered, emerging from Yossui's room with a pair of pants tied around her neck and Yasuda by her side dressed in a similar fashion. "Maki was in there too"

The three girls fairy clapped to express their joy but the celebration was brought to a sudden end as Tsuji, Saito and Yuki appeared at the end of the hall looking very sober.

"They're not in Miki's room?" Johnson asked, taking Tsuji into what seemed like a much needed hug.

"No they were there" The smaller replied, peering out at her two accomplices who both nodded in affirmation.

Johnson stroked the traumatised girl's face sympathetically. "So where are the pants?"

"Umm...we didnt get them"

"Why not?" Yasuda hissed , trying not to raise her voice "What happened?"

The three exchanged awkward glances before silently agreeing that Yuki should re-tell the story.

"Well, we decided to go for the surprise tactic...and burst in right..."

"Right"

"Well we did the count down...and rushed in..."

"Yeah..."

Yuki's voice shook slightly. She cleared it before continuing.

"When we, uh, cornered them...on the ...bed...it became apparent they werent wearing....pants"

"I see..."

stefy · « **Reply #581 on:** November 05, 2006, 10:46:14 AM »

HAHA hilarious! miki and aya not wearing pants... and i wonder what yossie and maki will do when they realise their pants are missing.... better yet i wonder what if rika comes back and sees that scene!!

Gomaki · « **Reply #582 on:** November 05, 2006, 11:04:07 AM »

yeah cool:ONkekeke:

Yuuyami · « **Reply #583 on:** November 05, 2006, 02:41:34 PM »

Aww, did they barge in on an intimate AyaxMiki 'scene'?

Wondering what Maki and Yossie'll do when they find out

I look forward to your next chapters <3

rndmnwierd · « **Reply #584 on:** November 05, 2006, 08:03:37 PM »

Lol at traumatized peoples! XDXD

JFC · « **Reply #585 on:** November 05, 2006, 09:07:00 PM »

Quote from: Gomaki;228899

yeah cool:ONkekeke:

Indeed. The pants were probably there, but they were too "in shock" to go and get them. :ONwahaha:

Question now is, were Aya and Miki aware the others were there, and if so, how soon before Miki goes on a rampage, vowing to kill them all?
:ROTFLMAO:

KrazyForKamei · « **Reply #586 on:** November 06, 2006, 12:14:09 AM »

Success getting Yossie's pants! lol and

Miki and Aya's missing pants. That was perfect lol. Poor (or lucky depending on your view

) Tsuji and crew though...musta have been a sight to walk in on. And yeah im excited to see how Miki gets revenge ^_^

Mikitty-saikou · « **Reply #587 on:** November 10, 2006, 05:19:00 AM »

!!!!!!!!!

Well, As a lot of people have said before me- I just spent almost all of today reading this fanfic in progress.

!

I'm addicted~!

Mikan · « **Reply #588 on:** November 11, 2006, 05:41:29 AM »

Miki's room held an awkward silence as both occupants sat motionless, naked and stunned on the bed.

"Jeez, what a mood killer" Now over the initial shock Aya flopped back to rest her head on the pillows again.

Miki looked at her friend. The role reversal was almost as creepy as being busted in the act. "You're not really fazed by this?"

"My boob was broadcast across the nation...Honestly, after being in the Hello! Project this long I'd like to think I have grown immune to it"

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Ishikawa let down her hair and dropped her shoes at the door. The bedroom was filled with darkness and quiet snores could be heard.

"Yocchan?" She whispered.

There was no reply so she gave it another try. If Yossui wasnt awake, then she'd call out until she was.

"Yocchan~?"

"Rrrnnn..."

Success. There was movement from the bed.

"Can I turn the light on?"

"Rrn..."

"Thanks"

Rika hit the switch and illumiated the room. Yossui was sitting up in the bed rubbing her eyes while Maki smothered herself with a pillow to hide from the violent light.

"Sorry.." Yossui apologised, combing her hair with her fingers and rolling out of bed to greet the newcomer while Maki did the same. "Maki came over and we must have fallen asle- ......"

Rika looked between her pantless girlfriend to the pantless Gomaki. "Where...." She trailed off.

Yossui laughed awkwardly and held her hands out. "It's not what you think. Definately not"

Rika nodded and turned to look at Gomaki. Her gaze falling down to the anime panties and the lump hidden beneath.

Goto shook her head and covered herself. "No, that's not what you think either"

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The clerk approached the simply dressed woman in the bone coloured coat browsing through the magazines.

"Im sorry lady, you cant stay here unless you buy something"

Once realising she was being spoken to, Yuuko lowered the magazine. "Oh...I'm just waiting for a friend"

The clerk, who by the looks of his acne scars had just graduated high school, said again "Sorry Ma'am, You still have to buy something"

Yuuko rolled up the paper and scooted off down the aisles looking for a purchase. She returned to the counter with two more magazines and a case of beers. She forced a smile as the clerk swiped the items.

"Oh..." The ex-Musume exclaimed suddenly, reaching into her purse and producing her drivers licence. "Here's my I.D"

The cleak bagged the purchase smuggly and handed over the change. "No, It's ok. I can see you're over 21"

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Yaguchi looked at her list. "Almost done" She annouced gladly. "We've only got a few more to go. Soloist, Gomaki and a stranger"

The team cheered at their quick success and waited for their next intructions.

"Ok, We'll split up. One Group go upstairs to Maki's room, One go find the soloist and the last group will come with me to the conbini. We'll steal someones from their and the rest of you meet up when your done"

The obvious yet effective plan was in place.

And so, the game continued.

A1 · « **Reply #589 on:** November 11, 2006, 05:59:07 AM »

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"Oh..." The ex-Musume exclaimed suddenly, reaching into her purse and producing her drivers licence. "Here's my I.D"

The cleak bagged the purchase smuggly and handed over the change. "No, It's ok. I can see you're over 21"

I damn near choked to death on a tootise roll pop because of that.:lmao: Yuko never get any slack.

Yuuyami · « **Reply #590 on:** November 11, 2006, 06:29:58 AM »

I died laughing when Yossie and Maki were like "It's not what you think. (either)" and when the clerk was like "I can see you're over 21"

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Do continue~! <3

Mikan · « **Reply #591 on:** November 11, 2006, 06:53:24 AM »

Im baking cookies. I'll be back later

Hopefully with a new chapter but also a picture of my special treat I baked becasue Im stupid and have too much free time

freya86 · « **Reply #592 on:** November 11, 2006, 10:14:56 AM »

Quote from: Mikan;232827

Rika nodded and turned to look at Gomaki. Her gaze falling down to the anime panties and the lump hidden beneath.

Goto shook her head and covered herself. "No, that's not what you think either"

Then ... what is it????

Quote from: Mikan;232827

"Oh..." The ex-Musume exclaimed suddenly, reaching into her purse and producing her drivers licence. "Here's my I.D"

The cleak bagged the purchase smuggly and handed over the change. "No, It's ok. I can see you're over 21"

*rofl* Poor Yuuchan, how depressing for her

And you're baking cookies???? Yummmy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

DO Me DO Me · « **Reply #593 on:** November 11, 2006, 12:38:11 PM »

Quote from: Mikan;232857

Im baking cookies. I'll be back later Hopefully with a new chapter but also a picture of my special treat I baked becasue Im stupid and have too much free time

wait a min. is this the same "baking cookies" you were referring to on my GAM story?

j/k j/k j/k

great chapters as always

rndmnwierd · « **Reply #594 on:** November 12, 2006, 01:12:23 AM »

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If Yossui wasnt awake, then she'd call out until she was.

Lol and lol @ the stuff that was already mentioned.

Cookies! Real or figurative, I love cookies!

bluekinoko · « **Reply #595 on:** November 14, 2006, 05:46:44 AM »

They are real cookies...shaped like the figurative

Owaranai_sLaVe · « **Reply #596 on:** November 14, 2006, 06:51:10 AM »

. . . :ONshock:
I can't believe i almost looked over this fanfic! WOW, definitly wow...
Took me two days of lazin' out to catch up, man was that an experiance~
*Cureses Jphip for having Fanfics and me actually reading them*
*Stamp of definite PTA approval*

I dont even know where to begin on my favorite parts!
But Im totaly lovin the YoRika (this is the first time Ive seen this as the MAIN Yossui couple and Im loving it) couple. Its hot and cute. What's even hotter is the on-the-side YoMiki *sneaky sneaky

*
What I'd like to see is more CharMikitty stuff... Hell, even a Yo.Char.Mi encounter would be enough for me and the rest of the story can be about TSUNKU! *barfs*
To add, does Aya lossing Miki mean that Miki might end up with YoRika!?

when I read the chapters about turning Naachi to the other side, I couldnt help but think of how much Yossui really pimps the girls. damn, thats pure gangster. And dont even get me started with Miki's stories! Damn, drama and entertainment! Love thot horny yankii!

When i read the Takahashi and Niigaki (which by the way, I always like this rookie couple next to YoCharMi) encounter with the ghost *sorry, Im not familiar with her, so I dont know her name* it reminded me a lot of the Japanese movie ONE MISSED CALL (mostly Pt. 2, since there was a little girl with her mouth as you described).
Please don't tell me Maki is boy and thats the reason why she can't get intimate with Reina. which also kinda has to interfre with the whole "batting for the other team". My crazy mind likes to analyze it as (note: if Maki really is a guy and she was clueless): If Reina decides to hit the ball and bat for the other team, then she really cant do it with Maki if Maki is really a guy *with breasts

*. OR if she doesn't hit the ball, and Maki is a guy, things can work out?

Who the hell knows, I've got 5.something hours before I wake up to get ready for school...
THANKS FOR A GREAT STORY!!!

-Owaranai_sLaVe

Yuuyami · « **Reply #597 on:** November 14, 2006, 09:02:12 PM »

Whoa, Maki a guy? I kinda disagree with you there. I think Mikan intended to write that Maki put socks in there just out of curiosity, like Yossie did way long ago

Sukoshi · « **Reply #598 on:** November 14, 2006, 11:36:39 PM »

Eh? I thought Mikan said it was a weird bone thing sticking out :ONscared:

Yuuyami · « **Reply #599 on:** November 15, 2006, 12:03:11 AM »

Ohhh, my bad. Sukoshi's right. It's a hip bone that sticks out more than it's supposed to.