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Offline yanki-kun

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Rock 'n' Roll Sukeban girls!
« on: December 09, 2014, 06:05:17 PM »
Hey! Its my first time writing a fanfic. I'm nor that good at writing stuffs but I hope you can have open heart and mind and bear with it. In future, i do hope to improve in writing stuffs.

                                                                                                                    PART1
(The characters in this are based on real life ones but some have different approach and appearence)
Kanon Girl's High School, a place filled with a lot of good and bad pasts. A home for the toughest delinquent girls passed on and being carried on with different leaders from 60's-70's to 80's and to today's generation. Miki Sugimoto, Reiko Ike and Meiko Kaji in 1970's ( based on real Miki Sugimoto, Reiko Ike and Meiko Kaji. Google them) were one of the first leaders of the school.

Kanon High School in today's generation, have various factions and tough fighters lurking around everywhere. Its a place where no man would step his foot into or he'll be half killed by the terrifying and notorious girls.
Among all the 1st year factions in this school, one faction tries to confront and challenge others for a duel. A boss of a faction tries to attack this particular faction which is defeating the other factions. When she sends her girls to attack her place, there she sees the boss of this particular faction. This boss along with her gang beats up this faction and finally the boss collapses when her rival boss gives just one punch on her face. This particular faction's boss finally defeats the last ever faction they have challenged among the first years. Now, she and her faction is the strongest and now is the boss of the first years faction.
One of the girls in this gang take out a flag which shows the name of the gang as "Hungry Wolves". The girl then shouts "All Hail, The Leader!!" all the girls shout along with her for their boss Matsui Jurina who sits on a big chair with a wild and serious look on her face.
One of the girls now comes to her and bows as a form of respect where she shows her the following table of all those rivals they want to fight against and who they have defeated.
The girl: Banchou! (boss) We have finally defeated all the first year factions. Now nobody can stand a chance against us.
Jurina looks at the map and looks at the girl now,
Jurina: Akane....
Akane(The girl's name, Takayanagai Akane): Yes!
Jurina: Are you sure if we have taken over the whole first years?
Akane: I'm certainly sure!
Jurina: Then why are there several names left out?
Akane: Oh! They're nothing. They're just lone fighters or random rookies. They probably dont have big vision of becoming a boss or being under a faction. I don't think they're strong. They're waste of time.
Jurina: What do you mean?...
Akane: eh?
Jurina: My dear..... sometimes loners can't be underestimated. Just because we dominated many Banchous doesnt mean that loners can't be strong.
Lone wolfs are to be feared the most..

Akane shows her boss the table where she points out all those fighters who have got nothing to do with factions.

Akane: These are the following rookies who're nothing to any gangs.
She reads some of the names written down
            Yokoyama Yui
            Watanabe Miyuki
            Amina Sato
            Karen Iwata
            Ayaka Kikuchi
Akane: Then there are these 3 who are always hanging out together
            Iriyama Anna
            Kawaei Rina
            Kato Rena           
   
Jurina sighs,

Akane: Banchou whats the matter?
Jurina: Cant believe until now were only fight weaklings. But we haven't completely made our reign in the first years. We cant go ahead and fight the 2nd and 3rd years if this goes on       
Akane:ah...
Jurina: no excuse. Since we're in power, we have enough free time to lurk around this small school and find these loners and make them join our faction.
Akane: Yes, Banchou! I understand. We'll track down these rookies until tomorrow.
Jurina: Good, do it soon i might run out of patience. This wolf is too cunning!

Akane becomes scared

Akame: Yes!

Jurina gets up from her chair

Jurina: aaahhh...... am starting to love this school.

END OF PART 1

« Last Edit: December 09, 2014, 08:42:57 PM by yanki-kun »

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Re: Rock 'n' Roll Sukeban girls!
« Reply #1 on: December 09, 2014, 10:00:01 PM »
Typos with the names and then you should have wrote their last names first. Great fic BTW, loved it!

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Re: Rock 'n' Roll Sukeban girls!
« Reply #2 on: December 09, 2014, 11:12:00 PM »
                                                                                      PART2

Near an underground railway

A delinquent girl falls down with her nose bleeding. She looks behind and gets up again. There is a girl standing in front of her. the delinquent girls then charges to attack her with a punch. The other girl evades and slips her punch and punches her back again with force. The delinquent girl falls down again.

The girl who beats the delinquent girl: I heard that there is a new faction going all out against others. Are you one of them?
The delinquent girl from Hungry Wolves's faction: Thats right! Iwata! You may have beaten me but you will never beat our boss.
Iwata Karen (the girl who beats the delinquent girl): *smiles* Bring it on anytime *then laughs*

Another stranger girl comes in,

The stranger girl: You sure are having fun there huh?
Iwata: *looks behind* oh gosh not you again.... like i said i don't wanna be around you Sato!
Sumire Sato (the stranger girl): Who's that btw?
Iwata: Some rookie from the new faction. It seems they're bothersome. Btw what the HELL are YOU doing here!? Wanna fight!?
Sumire Sato: Oh! no way! I know you're the champion! *sarcastic* anyways i found you by coincidence.
Iwata: I heard you're always lurking around here but you hardly come to school.
Sumire Sato: Yeah i know...
Iwata: Scared??
Sumire Sato: What was that?
Iwata: Never mind. Btw I've heard that these little rats are all going around to hunt us. So you better be careful.
Sumire Sato: Tch! worry about yourself first...
Iwata: How is she btw?
Sumire Sato: She's recovering...
Iwata: I guess that's the reason why you don't come to school
Sumire Sato: Don't ask so many questions! *goes away*

Iwata *in her thoughts*: I wonder how is senpai doing...
The delinquent girl from Hungry Wolves's faction: Hey!.... This isnt over! The wolves will come to get you.
Iwata: If you really wanna hunt someone stronger, its not me...
The delinquent girl from Hungry Wolves's faction: What?
Iwata: Am just a transfer student here. If you wanna find someone powerful, you better find someone like Yokoyama Yui. *she then leaves the place*

At the school,
Jurina is told by the girl who was beaten by Iwata at the underground railway.

Jurina: This school sure has tough girls.
Akane: Banchou, there are some girls who have seemed to join much before. Probably it won't take much time for them to become 2nd years. Yokoyama Yui is one of them.
Jurina: If this Yokoyama Yui is such an interesting character, then i wanna meet her right now.
Akane: We'll find her for you, Banchou!


Suring sunset, In a playground, someone seems to be sitting on the swing and is always in her own thoughts
Another girl passes carrying ramen, drinks and stuffs and looks at the girl on the swing.
Yamauchi Suzuran (The girl that passes by): Shimazaki san!
Shimazaki Haruka (The girl on the swing): *looks up* Ah! Suzuka!
Yamauchi: cheh.... always spaced out and lazy. Didn't I tell you enough times that i am Suzuran. Not Suzuka! Besides, you should call me RanRan. Here
*gives her a can of drink with a smile*
Shimazaki: Thanks *smiles slightly*
Yamauchi: What do you even think about?
Shimazaki: Don't know...
Yamauchi: *uhm...-_-*


then Iwata appears
Iwata: Hey!
Yamauchi: OH! It's you! Haven't seen you for a long time now.
Iwata: Been busy with some things. Anyways, what're you guys doing?
Yamauchi: Nothing much. Why?
Iwata: There seems to be a gang that hunts all the first years like us. You guys gotta be careful
Yamauchi: What?? A gang?
Iwata: They've beaten all the factions of the first years. Now wants to hunt us down.
Yamauchi: what about you?
Iwata: ofcourse that includes me. But I told them if they wanna fight someone stronger, you gotta find Yui-han XD
Yamauchi: What the.... now that's rude!
Iwata: Relax! Am sure she can handle this.
Shimazaki: Yui-han?
Yamauchi: Oh you don't know? She's our school's martial arts champion. And just like us, she isn't interested to be in any faction.
Shimazaki: Oh.....
Iwata: Anyways, do you know where is Chiichan senpai?
Yamauchi: Oh you mean Nakata senpai? She works in her parlour as always. She's training Maachun
Iwata: I heard that you and Maachun are getting more and more closer?
Yamauchi: What do you mean?
Iwata: Its obvious.... She likes you :3
Yamauchi: Wha...what?!! Baka!
Iwata: Dont be shy. I know she likes you. Oh.... that feels..... :3
Yamauchi: Stop imagining! stupid things! You baka! >////< You wanna get beaten up!
Iwata: relax duh.... i was kidding -_- Okay catch you later.
Yamauchi: Where are you going?
Iwata: The parlour ofcourse.
Yamauchi: Hmm..? Why does she wanna go there?? Oh wait! well i did hear somewhere that she is always fond of Nakata Chisato senpai. hmmm... girls these days... btw Shamazaki san you fight great too dont you? :D *looks at Shimazaki spacing out as always*
Yamauchi: uhm...-_- Shimazaki san the coffee's warm. So its better to drink it soon.

                         END OF PART2
« Last Edit: December 09, 2014, 11:30:15 PM by yanki-kun »

Offline yanki-kun

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Re: Rock 'n' Roll Sukeban girls!
« Reply #3 on: December 09, 2014, 11:19:15 PM »
Typos with the names and then you should have wrote their last names first. Great fic BTW, loved it!



Ah thankyou so much! Its the first time i have been using a forum. i have written the part 2 hope you enjoy it :) there are more parts to come.
yes, typos with the names. i'll be careful LOL

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Re: Rock 'n' Roll Sukeban girls!
« Reply #4 on: December 10, 2014, 09:40:34 AM »
                                                                                              PART3       
Somewhere near a park, a girl is thrown against a tree. The girl is the delinquent girl from kanon high school who was being hunted down by the HungryWolf faction.
The girls from the faction all together pick on this one girl and shout at her to tell her where Yokoyama Yui can be.
When so much noise was being made in front them there was a seat where a girl was sleeping but woke up because of the noise.

Girl on the seat: Will you guys cut that out! Do your party somewhere else! You guys are disturbing my sleep here.
One of the girls from the faction: Whats with you heh? go and sleep somewhere else!
Girl on the seat:*gets up and is in anger* You guys are seriously annoying. Why can't you just go and do it somewhere else!!
The victim who was being picked on by the girls of faction: eh!? You're Watanabe Miyuki!
One of the girls from the faction: aahh!? So she's the one!
Watanabe Miyuki(girl on the seat): What's up with you guys? o_O
One of the girls from the faction: Congrats! You've been found and you're in the wanted list of our faction. We'll beat you up and make you join our gang.
Watanaben Miyuki: *sigh* what is with you girls nowadays........you idiots are annoying!!

Miyuki charges to attack and beats up the girls from the faction in 30 seconds.
(there were 5 girls from the faction) The victim who was being picked on was stunned.

Miyuki: *shouts out a name. since she always wanted a duel with that person. But the person is not often found* Yokoyama!!!


Meanwhile, Iwata comes to the parlour to see how the senpai (Nakata Chisato/Chiichan) is doing.
Iwata: Chiichan Senpai!

the senpai hair dresses her customer and turns towards the entrance door where she sees Iwata calling her.

Chiichan: OH! Karen chan! *glad to see her* It's been such a long time!
Iwata: How are you doing? :)
Chiichan: Am allright as always... You've really grown up and look at you...you're more prettier
Iwata: Eheheh Thankyou senpai ^///^
Chiichan: And your chest has gone bigger too! *gropes Iwata's boobs*
Iwata: AAH! Chiichan senpai! What're you doing! DX *hits chiichan's hands*

then comes Maachun,

Maachun: hmm? Oh its you. Haven't seen you for quite a while. What happened? Scared of fighting me?
Iwata: What was that!? For someone who often flirts with pretty girls, you sure act cocky!
Maachun: What? O.o
Iwata: Its  RanRan ofcourse! I know you love her ever since you joined the high school :3
Maachun: You goddamn.... *grabs Iwata's collar*
Iwata: Wanna fight!? *grabs Maachun's collar*

Chiichan then gets angry and hits the 2 with a fan.

Macchun and Iwata: Aaa ita..ita..itai
Chiichan: You 2 are disturbing the customers here!
Maachun and Iwata: sorry, senpai!
Chiichan: Now you 2 go out and play. Give me 5 minutes and i'll come spend some free time with you 2 ^_^ And NO FIGHTING!!
 
The both stand near a bridge which is near to their sempai's parlour,

Maachun(Ogasawara Mayu): So what made you come here?
Iwata: Nothing much, just felt bored and wanted to visit senpai.
Maachun: So you still don't know what you wanna do after you finish schooling?
Iwata: nope..
Maachun: heh! NO aim as always
Iwata: Huh!?
Maachun: relax we're not supposed to fight here...
Iwata: Ah yeah
Maachun: I guess you like travelling? Since you hangout a lot. Let's see....Oh right! you can be a tv programmer! you know going around and exploring stuffs...
Iwata: Hmmm?LOL That is such a pain XD
Maachun: You should think about something you know..
Iwata: oh well....
Maachun: You've been lurking around near the school lately? i heard that there is something big happening out there
Iwata: yeah well....a new group seems to have come. They wanna hunt all the first years. They defeat all the factions already.
Maachun: huh!? I wonder what's their motive.
Iwata: Dont know either
Maachun: Who cares? You should think about your future now.
Iwata: just worry about yourself..
Maachun: Hey...

then Chiichan suddenly appears,

Chiichan: Oh when Karen chan finishes her school, she'll be living with me as my wife! ^_^ *gropes Iwata's chest*
Iwata: Aah! Chiichan senpai! What're you doing!? DX
Maachun: heh!? I didn't realize you had such a big chest! LOL *joins in to grope Iwata's chest*
Iwata: Get off me you perverts! DX

                                                                                END OF PART3
« Last Edit: December 10, 2014, 09:47:00 AM by yanki-kun »

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Re: Rock 'n' Roll Sukeban girls!
« Reply #5 on: December 10, 2014, 03:30:54 PM »
                                                                                     PART4
At night, a group of Hungry wolves gather around with their bikes to discuss something. These are stronger.
One of the girls from the Hungry Wolves: We seem to have been searching this Yokoyama character everywhere, she doesnt seem t appear. Is she scared
Another girl: Baka! Who knows whether she has even heard of our faction.
Akane: I guess, it can't be helped we will have to wait for her to come. Or probably assume that she has quit schooling.
So anyways, if we cant find her, there are others who we can be able to find. there is a big list of these loners who have got nothing to do with any faction or gangs.
A third girl who just recenly joined Hungry Wolves in the scene: hhhh... what a pain..
Akane: Hey Kikuchi! Mind your tongue!
Kikuchi Ayaka (the girl who just joined Hungry Wolves): This is getting us nowhere...Why the hell should we work for her!?
Akane: Have you ever faced the wrath of our boss? You'll fear her the most.
Kikuchi: I'm not a coward like you guys here! You're all just a lapdog for her. Especially you, Takayanagi Akane
Akane: What was that!?
Kikuchi: You dont stand a chance against me!
Akane: Yeah!? Wanna try!?

The other 2 girls watch a mysterious woman who wears a sailor uniform of kanon high school walks around night time like a ghost.

one of the 2 girls: Hey look. A rare sight

Akane and Kikuchi look at the girl. The mysterious girl seems to be surrounded by a bunch of delinquent girls.

Akane: Murashige! Non! Go and try to take a closer look!

The 2 girls Murashige Anna and Non go to check out the scene but when they came, she already disappeared while the delinquent girls were on the ground, beaten up. They were all surprised.

The next day at school,
Jurina: Ghost? o_O
Akane: Well yes......
Jurina: Dont make me laugh. What were you doing all this time? You're supposed to find this Yokoyama. You guys aren't supernatural hunters.
Non: That ghost is basically the ghost of this school....
Jurina: Hmm?
Akane: *showing the table where she points out an isolated name in the 3rd year's list* Yamanba
Jurina: Yamanba? Dont tell me she's lurking around here...
(Yamanba is a devil from japanese folklore who has a long messed up hair. Today some of the Ko-Gyarus adopt this style where they completely paint themselves black which a long ghost like hair. The style is said to be a level higher than Gonguro. But now, this fashion is rare.)
Akane: This school seem to have some bad pasts. 2 years ago, i had heard a rumour that this devil was once a beautiful girl who lost her best friend in a fight against some rivals. In return, she went alone and half killed the whole rival gang. One of them almost got her wind pipe slashed because of a knife. But luckily she survived. The police wanted to find out whether who did this but this girl disappeared.
Jurina: So she's a yamanba now so that the cops don't find her eh?
Akane: I heard that she is a very depressed girl. It seems that there is something more to this story. She seems to have done something that makes her regret her best friend's death.
Jurina: Do the 3rd years never thought of looking at this matter?
Akane: The third years are filled with notorious gangsters. Some of them don't even care if they have friends. But this is probably regarding to the incident that happened 2 years ago. Many 3rd year girls don't appear to school at all.
Jurina: Hmmh..*smiles and laughs slightly* If that is the case, then I better call them out....This'll be interesting.

The other girls smile to see that their leader is quite determined and strong.

Mean while, A new girl seems to have appeared to the school. Seeing the address of Kannon High School, She sees around and can't find anybody except a girl seems to be walking slowly around a corridor.

The transfer student: uhm Excuse me??

The girl walking around the corridor turns back. And its Watanabe Miyuki

Watanabe Miyuki: Hmm?
The transfer student: Is this Senju Kannon High School?
Watanabe Miyuki: What if it is??
The transfer: Aa.. Well...Am a new transfer student. My name is Yamamoto Sayaka.
Watanabe Miyuki: *speaks with annoying face* There are better schools out there. Why transfer here??
Yamamoto Sayaka(The transfer student): Eh??
Watanabe Miyuki:*sigh* anyways, welcome to Kannon High...*goes passing by her*
Yamamoto Sayaka: Aa.. btw..
Watanabe Miyuki: Hmm?
Yamamoto Sayaka: I'm finding for this person here. She's my Close friend. Mostly cousin. Her name is Miyazawa Sae
Watanabe Miyuki: Sorry. Don't know her.
Yamamoto Sayaka: Oh.....well... see you again?
Watnabe Miyuki: *just walks away*
                                                                                 END OF PART4

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Re: Rock 'n' Roll Sukeban girls!
« Reply #6 on: December 10, 2014, 03:50:31 PM »
There are mistakes here and there but still, keep up the good work! :)

I really like Iwata Karen here  XD

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Re: Rock 'n' Roll Sukeban girls!
« Reply #7 on: December 10, 2014, 03:52:10 PM »
Oh, part 3 & 4 are already posted. Thanks author-san!

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« Reply #8 on: December 10, 2014, 04:19:29 PM »
There are mistakes here and there but still, keep up the good work! :)

I really like Iwata Karen here  XD

Thanks :) i just casually took her as a cutesy attention without thinking LOL and i thought she actually is adorable.

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« Reply #9 on: December 10, 2014, 04:20:47 PM »
Oh, part 3 & 4 are already posted. Thanks author-san!

no problem, i hope you enjoy reading. more parts to come as always

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Re: Rock 'n' Roll Sukeban girls!
« Reply #10 on: December 10, 2014, 10:39:26 PM »
DEM SAYAMILKY FEELS DOUGH!!! With JuriChuri to boot~

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And its Watanabe Miyuki

Watanabe Miyuki: Hmm?
The transfer student: Is this Senju Kannon High School?
Watanabe Miyuki: What if it is??
The transfer: Aa.. Well...Am a new transfer student. My name is Yamamoto Sayaka.
Watanabe Miyuki: *speaks with annoying face* There are better schools out there. Why transfer here??
Yamamoto Sayaka(The transfer student): Eh??
Watanabe Miyuki:*sigh* anyways, welcome to Kannon High...*goes passing by her*
Yamamoto Sayaka: Aa.. btw..
Watanabe Miyuki: Hmm?
Yamamoto Sayaka: I'm finding for this person here. She's my Close friend. Mostly cousin. Her name is Miyazawa Sae
Watanabe Miyuki: Sorry. Don't know her.
Yamamoto Sayaka: Oh.....well... see you again?
Watnabe Miyuki: *just walks away*

Milky very tsuntsun indeed, very OOC~

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Re: Rock 'n' Roll Sukeban girls!
« Reply #11 on: December 10, 2014, 10:46:36 PM »
                                                                                       PART 5
One day, Iwata Karen seems to be passing by the school since the Hungry Wolves weren't there that time.
She came across a girl who seemed strong but had a cutesy type of appearence.
She seemed to be a transfer student.
The transfer student then came across another new face who called out to her

The transfer student (2): Anoo...
The transfer student (1): hmm..?
The transfer student (2): Are you new here?
The transfer student (1): um... yes
The transfer student (2): yatta! I'm new here too. I'm Mukaichi Mion. I came here all the way from Saitama.
The transfer student (1): Oh! That's nice! I'm Owada Nana. This place somehow freaks me out.
Iwata: *interrupts* Yes it will.
Owada Nana: huh?
Iwata: This isn't the kind of place for little girls like you.
Mukaichi Mion: I know there are gangsters here. That's why i was transferred from my place to here.
Iwata: And you're not scared?
Mukaichi Mion: Hmmm scared?
Iwata: Don't expect this place to give you peace. If you wanna be here, you need to fight.
Mukaichi Mion: LOL well that's interesting. Are there no students here learning lessons?
Iwata: Lesson!? Are you joking? The teachers hardly come here!
Mukaichi Mion: Oh! then it's not a bad place. I can kick asses!
Iwata: Hmm... So you fight huh? What about you? (asking Owada nana)
Owada Nana: I.....
Iwata: You'll have a hard time if you have never fought before. School like this are always full of tough delinquents and the strongest are always dominating.
Mukaichi Mion: Hey Don't worry there! I'll protect you Nana-chan! :)
Iwata: Hmm... looks like I have a new company. I guess we're in the same year.
Mukaichi Mion: Ah that's great...umm..do you know any place to stay? Currently am staying in a hotel.
Iwata: Oh that's easy. You can stay in my place :)
Owada Nana: You don't mind?
Iwata: Ofcourse not! Besides am staying alone for now. You guys might give me company.
Mukaichi Mion: Oh! That's so nice of you! Thankyou so much! ^^

Iwata takes them to her place.

Iwata: You girl's are lucky that you have someone like me who is helping you guys out

Then suddenly they come across a girl sitting on the stairs of Iwata's apartment.

Iwata: You!
The girl sitting on the stairs: *looks up towards Iwata* found you finally! *charges to attack Iwata*  Haaaaaaaaa!!!
Iwata: Woah! *evades her punch and moves back* What the hell do you thinking you're doing? Suddenly attacking me like that..
The girl who was sitting on the stairs: I'm Okada Nana. And i came here to challenge you for a duel.
Iwata: What?? Are you crazy?
Okada Nana: I heard that you're a good fighter. So you're the first step that I have to climb to become strongest fighter in Senju Kannon High...
Iwata: Hey! I have no intention of fighting you. And am busy! So go away! And stop stealing others names!
Owada Nana: Umm... Actually I'm Owada Nana. Not Okada.
Iwata: Hmm... that means she must've known you and stolen your name and changed Owada to Okada
Okada Nana: What the hell are you talking about?? o.O I'm Okada Nana. And i dont even know this cutesy kid.
Iwata: Never mind... anyways leave us alone! I have no time to deal with you!
Okada: Then am gonna force you to! *She goes again to punch*

Iwata evades her punch again and now punches Okada's face. Okada then goes to punch Iwata again. Iwata covers herself with her elbow and deflects the punch and then gives a hook to Okada's left ribs. And then gives her an uppercut. Okada almost slips and falls but manages to avoid happen. This time she uses is in her boxing stance where she then goes to punch Iwata. Iwata evades first few punches of her but suddenly Okada gives her a low kick. Iwata almost slips and now takes Okada's punch. While taking punches, she manages to avoid falling down but suddenly Okada shoots in like a wrestlers and trips Iwata. Iwata then locks Okada's head and then elbows her head. Somehow Okada seems to get out of the lock and manages to finally mount Iwata. Iwata is in  difficult situation. Before Okada starts punch her, Iwata turns her head towards her left and gives a powerful hook with her right fist to Okada's face and then tries to pin Okada's feet behind with her legs and trips Okada out of her position over Iwata's body. Okada falls to Iwata's left and then Iwata kicks Okada's face to keep a distance from her and get's up. Both of them stand again. Okada gives a powerful roundhouse kick to Iwata's chest area but Iwata manages to block and then charges forward to give a punch to Okada's face, where Okada is about to fall down. Then Iwata immediately gives a right hook and makes Okada fall. Iwata then immediately mounts over here and goes to punch but Okada then surrenders.

Okada: Stop!
Iwata: Aaa!?
Okada: Allright.... You win...

Iwata get's up and then Mion comes towards Okada

Mion: Aah.. are you allright? You seen to be hurt. *gives Okada a hand*
Okada: *looks at Mion, grabs her hand and get's up and then grabs her another hand and holds them towards her* You were worried about me, I'm so glad to see a pretty lady like you is concerned about me ^_^
Mion: aa..I... O///O

At first sight, Okada falls in love with Mion. Suddenly Okada get's a hit on her head by Iwata

Okada: Aaa itaitaitai...!
Iwata: Who the hell do you think you are!? Coming like this suddenly and now causing trouble to my friends here!
Okada: aaaah! Forget it. Not gonna do this in front of you. Nee-chan, I hope to meet you again :) *says to Mion and goes*
Mion: aa.. O///O
Iwata: You're gonna meet her again?? o_O
Mion: well...I...
Owada: heeeeh Is it love at first sight :D
Iwata: What!? Hey Mion don't tell me you've fallen for this girl! o_O
Mion: un..un.. Let's just go...


                                                                               END OF PART5
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Re: Rock 'n' Roll Sukeban girls!
« Reply #12 on: December 10, 2014, 10:50:14 PM »
DEM SAYAMILKY FEELS DOUGH!!! With JuriChuri to boot~

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And its Watanabe Miyuki

Watanabe Miyuki: Hmm?
The transfer student: Is this Senju Kannon High School?
Watanabe Miyuki: What if it is??
The transfer: Aa.. Well...Am a new transfer student. My name is Yamamoto Sayaka.
Watanabe Miyuki: *speaks with annoying face* There are better schools out there. Why transfer here??
Yamamoto Sayaka(The transfer student): Eh??
Watanabe Miyuki:*sigh* anyways, welcome to Kannon High...*goes passing by her*
Yamamoto Sayaka: Aa.. btw..
Watanabe Miyuki: Hmm?
Yamamoto Sayaka: I'm finding for this person here. She's my Close friend. Mostly cousin. Her name is Miyazawa Sae
Watanabe Miyuki: Sorry. Don't know her.
Yamamoto Sayaka: Oh.....well... see you again?
Watnabe Miyuki: *just walks away*

Milky very tsuntsun indeed, very OOC~

AAAh hahah! Am glad you like it. Yes, quite tsun tsun XD stay tuned for further parts :D

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Re: Rock 'n' Roll Sukeban girls!
« Reply #13 on: December 11, 2014, 10:44:35 AM »
                                                                                             PART6
In the school,
 Yamamoto Sayaka just joins the school and its her first day. She hopes to have a nice day in the school. She sees nothing but only girls having fun and fighting each other, she then is disappointed with the environment. While walking alone, she comes across a group of Hungry wolves passing. She moves aside and let's them pass. That time even their boss Jurina is present. Then Jurina sees Yamamoto Sayaka. When they both see each other, Jurina stops.

Jurina: Transfer student???
Yamamoto Sayaka: Ahh...yes
Jurina: Guess we're in the same year? You're a first year huh?
Yamamoto Sayaka: well...maybe different divisions
Jurina: I see....*goes ahead*

Then there are 2 girls who seem to be transfer students and stand in front of the gate.
Yamamoto Sayaka walks out of the school gate when suddenly she encounters them when one of the new 2 girls call her.

Girl1 out of the 2 new transfer students: Oi, Ojou-chan..
Yamamoto Sayaka: hmm?
Girl2 out of the 2 new transfer students: Is this Kannon High?
Yamamoto Sayaka: Are you transfer students?
Girl1: hhhh! What does it look like? You think we're Gay or retarded magazine reporters?
Yamamoto Sayaka: aah...well. Nice to meet you I'm a transfer student too.
Girl2: Oh good. But I guess Kannon high is a disappointment since they have cute girls like you.
Yamamoto Sayaka: What?
Girl1: My name is Kotani Riho
Girl2: I'm Jounishi Kei. Just call me Keicchi.
Yamamoto Sayaka: So you 2 are close friends?
Jounishi Kei: Close friends?? We're more like sisters
Kotani Riho: So you're a transfer student as well huh? What division?
Yamamoto: C
Jounishi Kei: Oh that's surprising. So we're in the same class huh? Anyways, Ojou-chan, you got cash? *stomach growls*
Kotani Riho: You do realize we're hungry don't you?
Yamamoto Sayaka: Uh I see
Jounishi: Lend us some money! Quick! *goes to punch her but suddenly stops and both of them faint*

In a restaurant,
Kotani: *finishes her food* Aaaaa! That was good. Hey Ojou-chan If it wasnt for you, we'd be dead you know
Yamamoto: I cant believe that you 2 came all this way from your city without any food.
Jounishi: Aaah anyways, now that we're saved by you. We owe you our life. So let's be friends. Neh? :)
Yamamoto: Oh sure... :)
Kotani: great. So we'll help each other. Now that we're friends ^^
Yamamoto: Btw why did you want to join Kannon high?
Jounishi: To have an easy life ofcourse
Yamamoto: You mean, you don't wanna study?
Kotani: Study?? Are you serious?
Jounishi: Don't tell me you joined Kannon high to study LOL
Yamamoto: well, my mother already has a grocery store in Osaka so I guess I'll be handling that.
Kotani: Then you're the same as us. We hate study too LOL. But we love fighting
Yamamoto: Oh
Jounishi: Hey ojou-chan you still haven't told us your name.
Yamamoto: I'm Yamamoto Sayaka.
Jounishi: So Yamamoto. If you ever need help, just let us know okay?
Yamamoto: Ah sure.
Kotani: aah am getting bored here. I wonder if there is anything interesting...We don't even have any place to stay
Yamamoto: well.....
Kotani: hmm??
Yamamoto: If you have no place to stay, then you can stay at my place.
Jonishi: No.... I don't think we should be disturbing you.
Yamamoto: Don't worry, I don't mind ^^

At Yamamoto's room. Both of them cause noise. They play video games.

Yamamoto in her thoughts: Hhhh... They sure are noisy, but no choice...I had to help them out...

Yamamoto: Hey, you guys enjoy here. I'll be going out shopping.
Kotani: Oh allright, be careful out there.

It was evening sunset. She suddenly came across a group of girls who were bikers from Hungry Wolves faction. There were 20-25 girls surrounding one girl who Yamamoto could recognize. It was Watanabe Miyuki.

Yamamoto: Oh it's her!
One of the girls from the faction: Hey Watanabe! Today you're gonna pay for what you did to our girls!
Watanabe Miyuki: *in her fighting stance* Bring it on!

All the girls attacks her. Miyuki beats 7 girls but this time she was out numbered. One of them takes a stick and hits her from behind. Miyuki weakens and gets beaten up by rest of the girls and falls to the ground. One of the girls uses her stick to beat her up but suddenly she is kicked on the face where she falls unconscious. Miyuki Looks her right side and sees it's the girl who she met near the school corridor few days ago.

Miyuki: you...
Yamamoto: *runs near Miyuki to give her a hand. Holds Miyuki's hand with one hand and helps Miyuki get up by lifting her back* Ojou-chan. Are you allright?
Miyuki: Ojou-chan??

Both of them get up and fight. They beat the group of Hungrywolves.

Yamamoto: Ojou-chan are you allright?
Watanabe Miyuki: Miyuki...
Yamamoto: eh?
Watanabe Miyuki: That's my name...
Yamamoto: Oh, Miyuki-san..are you allright?
Watanabe Miyuki: You didn't had to help me.
Yamamoto: But...
Watanabe Miyuki: now those girls will come after you too.
Yamamoto: oh....well.....couldn't be avoided I guess. Can't see someone....um.... someone...pretty like you get beaten up hahah ^^'
Watanabe Miyuki: pretty??
Yamamoto: Yeah... I guess :D
Watanabe Miyuki: What was your name again? Yamamoto?
Yamamoto: Ah, yes. Yamamoto Sayaka.
Watanabe Miyuki: You fight pretty well actually. I thought you made a mistake coming to this school.
Yamamoto: Aa..well...right now now...it's going smooth ^^
Watanabe Miyuki: But you can't expect same to go on in future.
Yamamoto: Well, you're not wrong about that.
Watanabe Miyuki: *sigh* you're not afraid that they might come after you too?
Yamamoto: I dont think so cuz I think wasn't wrong in helping you out.
Watanabe Miyuki: *slightly laugh* You're interesting...Takecare. Remember my name. I'm Watanabe Miyuki *leaves the place*
Yamamoto: Ah, you too Miyuki-san.
Yamamoto in her thoughts: She's cute.

                                                                                                 END OF PART 6
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Re: Rock 'n' Roll Sukeban girls!
« Reply #14 on: December 12, 2014, 04:31:27 PM »
                                                                                               PART7
It's the end of the year. Many several transfer students seem to have come. Many lone fighters from the first years have are making a comeback to the school. Since vacations are almost over and student never care about any vacations since for them everyday in school is a vacation because the teachers hardly come and the students always fight. But where are the powerful fighters like Yokoyama Yui hiding?

there were 3 girls who formed a small group arriving in Kannon high. The Hungry Wolves were in a break so they didn't come since there aren't many students appearing due to vacations of thosse who're almost done with their first year. The girls were standing in front of one girl who was just standing near the corridor.

The main one out of the 3 girls: Hey Yoshida! Good to see you remember this day
Yoshida Akari: What do you want now? I just wanted peace. But whenever I come here it's always you 3 monkeys...
The main one out of 3 girls: Hahah well...It's Kannon High after all. You can't run away.
Yoshida Akari: gaaahhhhh... damn you Fuuko!
Yagura Fuuko (the main out 3 girls): Hyaaaaa!!!! *charges to attack*
Yoshida Akari: Go and have fun with the other 2

Suddenly a group of 20 girls come out and fight the other 2 girls out of the 3 friends.

In the fight between Yagura and Yoshida, Yagura and Yoshida punch each other on the face. But of them were about to fall down but manage to hold on.
Yagura then holds Yoshida's collar and tries to throw her but fails when Yoshida gives her an uppercut. Yagura is about to fall down but falls down when Yoshida gives another punch. Yoshida is about to mount on her but is blocked with Yagura's knee. But Yoshida still goes to over take her and mount on her but suddenly Yagura holds her collar and turns upside down where she mounts Yoshida. Yoshida is punches 3 times but later on she lifts up her hips where Yagura slips forward a little. Then Yoshida grabs her hairs and punches Yagura. The second time she gives a big hook and makes Yagura out of balance from the mount. She then get's up. Yoshida then goes to punch her Yagura evades her punch but takes her punch the second time. When Yoshida goes to punch the 3rd time, Yagura immediately punches her before that.

Mean while in the fight between the other 2 girls with Yoshida's 20 girls.
Girl1: *punches one girl who charges towards her and then clinches her and gives a knee kick. And then asks the other girl* Hey Ryoka. You're allright? >:D
Oshima Ryoka(girl2): Yeah am fine completely, Nao. It's been a long time we haven't fought like this.
Furuhata Nao (girl1): Yeah, seems that we've gone rusty. *punches and gives a hard low kick to trip the other girl*
Oshima Ryoka: rusty?? You gotta be kidding me! I've got my strong legs here! And you've improved with your kickboxing and judo throws.
Furuhata Nao: Well I guess nobody realized that your have sexy legs XD *a girl comes and punches her face*
Oshima Ryoka: No distraction please! Haaaaa!!! *gives a low front kick to a girl stomach*
Furuhata Nao: *punches a girl's face and grabs her arms and throws her with judo hip throw* But there will be someone who would fall in love with those legs :D
Oshima Ryoka: Stop talking stupid things and let us just fight! Hyaaaa! *gives a big hook to a girl charging at her and makes her fall* Besides, you've got some stronger hips and a good curve body XD
Furuhata Nao: Eww What're you talking about? Am not that good!

In the fight between Yoshida and Yagura,
Yoshida corners Yagura to wards a wall and tries to choke her by placing her elbow arm on her neck.

Yoshida: Those 2 friends of yours are quite strong there.
Yagura: e..eh... They have their own way of finding their real strength.
Yoshida: Then show me all your strength, Yagura!

Yagura grabs Yoshida's sailor collar and gives a knee kick to her stomach and then punches her to keep her away. Then goes to punch her with a big hook coming after her Yagura blocks it, and punches back.

Yoshida: I wish I had strong friends like you do....
Yagura: then find one yourself! Aaaaa..! *goes to punch her but gets immediately punched back*

It was a long fight, when Yagura is pushed back to the wall, both of them fall down. Yoshida falls down too. Both of them are exhausted. And the other 2 girls Furuhata Nao and Oshima Ryoka beat Yoshida's girls. The both girls carry Yagura and go.

Yoshida: hh....Lucky brat....*gets up on her own with difficulty*
Yagura: Hey Yoshida....*pants* get a friend for yourself already. You don't have to fight to aim for the strongest everytime. You've already proven your strength. And I'm much too tired than you are. You can't keep this up for long.
Yoshida: Idiot! Mind your own business.
Yagura: *slight laugh* just relax and okay? You're in high school now. We won't be fighting each other forever like this. I'll get bored you know.
Yoshida: You.... *splits a little blood*

Yagura goes away.
Yoshida always wanted a friend who can fight along her side. But at times she had a kind of mean girl like attitude that it was kind of difficult for her to have one and only made enemies. Her only aim was to be the strongest. But she never realized that there are many yanki girls in Kannon high school who are doing the same thing since she had a tie with Yagura.

During that evening time, there is a small lake near a small mountain behind apartment where Yamamoto Sayaka lives, along with her 2 friends Jounishi Kei and Kotani Riho. Kotani Riho that time goes on the small mountain near the lake and suddenly comes across someone who also sits near the lake. The one who she sees is nobody but Yoshida Akari. Riho sees her beaten and wounds on her face. Then Riho goes near her

Riho: ne, ojou-chan.....
Yoshida: *sees her* What???
Riho: You don't look good. Are you allright??
Yoshida: Mind your own business, brat...
Riho: Aaa!? What was that?
Yoshida: What do you want?
Riho: First of all, you better calm down and give me a proper reply understand??
Yoshida: Or what?
Riho: You goddamn! Wanna fight me!?
Yoshida: hhh... forget it... I don't feel like.
Riho: Then talk properly! uhm.....So what's with the wound?
Yoshida: Why would you wanna know?
Riho: Why?? Well you're bleeding, so I've got a bandaid and a handkerchief with me.
Yoshida: hmmm?
Riho: *Turns Yoshida's face towards her and tries to wipe the blood on the wounds...* well..
Yoshida: TSssss! Itaitaitai....
Riho: What's wrong with you? Can't even hold one to a little pain?? Just stay quiet.
Yoshida: ummmmph! *controls herself and get's her blood wiped*
Riho: Well...that's a big wound there on you lips *puts bandaid on her face*

Yoshida suddenly get's a strange feeling when Riho touches her lips. Her face becomes red. So she pushes her hands off.

Riho: hmm? * slight laugh* What??
Yoshida: Nothing...am allright now...  ~///~
Riho: Why is your face red?
Yoshida: What!???
Riho: You're from Kannon High?
Yoshida: How did you know?
Riho: The uniform ofcourse...
Yoshida: uh...right..
Riho: I'm from Kannon High too. Transferred there recently.
Yoshida: ohh...
Riho: I'm Kotani Riho.
Yoshida: a..I'm Yoshida Akari.. *that was the first time she introduced herself in such a calm way*
Riho: Hmmm... Then from now on I'll call you Akarin! :)
Yoshida: Why would you wanna do that.
Riho: cuz calling you Akari-san or Akari-chan is too boring.
Yoshida: -_-
Riho: Oh yeah. You can call me Ripopo :D
Yoshida: That's lame -_-
Riho: *laughs*

It was a clear night sky with moon over the small lake where they were sitting together.

Riho: So why're you here alone??
Yoshida: Why? shouldn't I?
Riho: Oh.... It's not like you can't...but sometimes I get bored. So when am alone, I only sleep XD I guess you feel more calm here.
Yoshida: Maybe....
Riho: Hmm...You must've been fighting huh? No wonder you got that wound on you.

Riho sits alongside her for a while and then she sees Yoshida is asleep.

Riho: uh?? *sees her sleeping* Hey...hey it's too late you know... *doesn't get up*
Riho: Oh well..... you sure are like a kid. *carries Yoshida on her back and takes her to her place which is Yamamoto Sayaka's home*
Yamamoto Sayaka: What!? Another one?
Riho: She looks cute when she's sleeping ^_^ *Yoshida sleeps on the bed*
Yamamoto Sayaka in her thoughts: Not another one T^T my house is gonna be a real mess! DX

                                                                                       END OF PART7
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Re: Rock 'n' Roll Sukeban girls!
« Reply #15 on: December 13, 2014, 10:03:14 PM »
                                                                                                    PART 8.1

 Few weeks later, the Hungry Wolves faction appear and start hunting down fighters. Once Owada Nana was casually walking near the school classroom when suddenly she came across a gang of 3 girls who started fighting a bunch of 10 girls from Hungry Wolves faction. The main boss of the 7 girls was one of the strong fighters of Hungry Wolves faction who was under order of Jurina's general Akane. She was just watching them fight. The 3 girls who she was fighting was Yagura Fuuko, Oshima Ryoka and Furuhata Nao. Yagura and Oshima Ryoka were kicking the girls. And Ryoka was getting the upperhand where she almost beat up the rival girls. But suddenly, she was attacked by the one incharge of those 10 girl where she punched Ryoka's face. Ryoka wanted to do the same but the girl incharge of the 10 girls dodges and punches her again followed by a front kick where Ryoka falls down. Ryoka get's up again to fight her. She charges with her wrestling shoot while the person incharge of the 10 girls uses s stance where she changes her position by turning her hips towards her left and elbows on the back of Ryoka's neck to push her down and manages to break the lock which Ryoka did on her and then gives an uppercut to Ryoka where she falls down. When the incharge of Hungry Wolves faction goes to attack her, Nao suddenly comes and locks the Hungry Wolves's girl incharge's neck to choke her but suddenly fails when she grabholds Nao's arms and throws her upside down with the power of her hips. Nao falls down and when she sees the Hungry Wolves's girl incharge about to punch her from above, she uses her legs to kick her face from above which backs of the Hungry Wolves's girl incharge. Nao then get's up.

The girl incharge of the Hungry Wolves's girls: You guys seem to be good. No wonder why I was asked by the Hungry Wolves to challenge you guys for a duel.
Furuhata Nao: Who the hell're you!? What do you want from us?
The girl incharge of the Hungry Wolves's girls: Just a challenger. Haaaaa! *charges her to attack*
Furuhata Nao: uh! *evades her punches when suddenly the girl incharge of the hungry wolves charges at her by grabbing Nao's right arm and using her another arm under Nao's left arms and goes to throw her like judo*
Furuhata Nao: *falls* Judo?
The girl incharge of the hungry Wolves's girls: So that is why i was asked to come and fight you guys...to test my judo-karate skills. *Nao get's up* cuz even you do some judo.
Furuhata Nao: You....! *charges towards her to attack her with a punch but her opponent dodges*
The girl incharge of the Hungry Wolves's girls: Why don't we do this in the judo way huh? Punches don't suit us. As long as we slam someone.

Nao grabs her opponent's right arm to hipthrow her but fails when her opponent just changes her position by moving towards Nao's rightside and then grabs Nao's right hand with her right hand and using her left hand to grab her under Nao's left arm and making her off balance by tripping her legs.
Nao falls down and then her opponent keeps her down when she places her knees under her chest.

The girl incharge of the Hungry Wolves's girls: Judo is a great sport. You can't take it lightly....you actually feel like defeating any kind of opponent using judo....but it seems someone like you can't understand...you have a long way to go my little darling....

Then, Oshima Ryoka appears suddenly,
Oshima Ryoka: Hyaaaaa!!! *gives The girl incharge of the Hungry Wolves's a big kick. she is Ryoka's opponent now.*
The girl incharge of the Hungry Wolves's girls: uhh....*falls down*
Oshima Ryoka: Hey!... This is a fight! Not judo!
The girl incharge of the Hungry Wolves's girls: Ignorant! *charges at her*
Oshima Ryoka: You.....! *goes to punch her but suddenly her opponent  goes lower and  grabs her right arm which Ryoka used to punch and goes to throw her with seoi nage throw*
                        Ohh!! Not so fast! * she uses her hips to pull herself up using only left leg and goes outside the position where she wouldve been thrown, very quickly and then pushes her opponents head down and gives her face a knee kick twice and then releazes her lock to give her an uppercut.*
Oshima Ryoka: Baka!! *goes to punch her again but her right arm is caught again*
The girl incharge of the Hungry Wolves's girls: Haaaa!! *goes to do seoi nage throw again. this time she puts her off balance and goes to throw her but fails when Ryoka uses her left leg to hook her left leg and using her right leg to lock it completely and makes her fall off behind her where Ryoka goes to choke her*

While all this happens, Owada Nana sees the police and shouts.

Owada Nana: Everybody! The cops have come here!
One of the girls from the HUngry Wolves faction: What!?
Owada Nana: Hurry up! They're coming inside right now!

By hearing this, everyone stop and run away. The other 3 girls were about to run

The girl incharge of the Hungry Wolves's girls: You there! *calls Nao, Ryoka and Yagura Fuuko* This isn't over yet. Am gonna come again. Remember my name, I'm Shibata Aya. *runs along with the other girls*

Owada Nana: Wait! *calls Oshima Ryoka*
Oshima Ryoka: huh??
Owada Nana: Are you all okay?
Oshima Ryoka: This isn't time for that! We gotta...
Owada Nana: Uh! Don't tell me that you'd fall for that just like they did -_-
Yagura Fuuko: What??
Owada Nana: Anyways, I hope you guys are allright.
Yagura Fuuko: Why did you do that!??
Oshima Ryoka: Ahahahah! That was nice work there Onee-chan! XD
Owada Nana: Really!? :D *eyes sparkle*
Yagura Fuuko: What?? Not you too Ryoka
Oshima Ryoka: Why do you even want to waste your time with them anyway?? Oh and Nao...

Nao's lost in thought after seeing her own defeat. She was surprised. She is feared.

Yagura: Nao.....?
Nao: I...I have something to do....I gotta go
Yagura: Hey what's up with you?  You don't have to be depressed because of what happened here.
Oshima Ryoka: Yeah you were just careless...Just because she's an expert in judo, doesn't mean that we can't beat her. We all just fight you know...
Owada Nana: Ano....
Oshima Ryoka: Oh yeah! Onee-chan, thankyou for helping us out :)
Owada Nana: Oh... Don't mention it ^///^ *Ryoka's smile made her face red. It felt like as if Ryoka's sweet smile was so beautiful that it captured her heart*
Oshima Ryoka: Oh btw, I think it's not safe for you to be here. Let me walk you to your place. Since the school time is over already.
Owada Nana: Oh...w..well I can go by myself. You don't have to be troubled by this ^///^
Oshima Ryoka: Oh no I insist ^^
Owada Nana: Oh..okay...Thankyou..
Oshima Ryoka: No problem :)
Owada Nana in her thoughts: Just why is my face red??  Don't tell me I have feelings for a delinquent girl! DX Uh...calm down...just calm down... You're just an ordinary girl who just needs a nice guy. Not a girl LOL

While they go,

Yagura: Nao..The next time we meet her, I'll let you alone fight her.
Nao: hmmm??
Yagura: You don't look satisfied. So you need to settle this. And we'll meet her again!
Nao: *feels a kind of relief* Right... :)
Yagura: :)

Meanwhile at Iwata's place. Oshima Ryoka and Owada Nana come and stand near Iwata's place.

Iwata: Hmmm....It's boring today...I wonder where is Naanya(nickname for Owada Nana. Because she is gentle like a kitten)...Hmmm? *looks down via her window*
Oshima Ryoka: This is it? Well then, thanks for helping us back there :)
Owada Nana: ah..No problem ^///^ *in her thoughts:Why the hell is my face still red!?*
Oshima Ryoka: What's your name, btw? I'm Ryoka :)
Owada Nana: I...I'm Nana.
Oshima Ryoka: Ah...well Nana-chan. See yah.
Owada Nana: W..wait! *in h er thoughts:What the hell!!? Why did I stop her!?*
Oshima Ryoka: huh?
Owada Nana: Oh..o sorry... It's nothing.....
Oshima Ryoka: Okay, Ja ne :) *goes away*
Owada Nana in her thoughts: Just when I saw her...I felt a kind of....Why was my face red....why did I blush so much??? Did I really....Aaaaa! snap out of it Nana! You're just an ordinary girl who needs a nice guy!
Iwata: Hmmm....what's up with her?? And how did she meet that Ryoka?

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                                                                                           PART8.2
 Shibata Aya: *sitting on a roof top of the school* haaaah... am feeling bored.... was just having fun last time. wonder what could she be doing. she was cute though.
*turns behind* hey! Nakanishi you said that you like that innocent girl didnt you?
Nakanishi Yuuka: Yes *evil laugh* she's just my type (She has a very evil beastly appearence and behaviour with her long hair covering her face and sharp teeth and boyish looks and she likes cute innocent girls like nana owada)
Shibata Aya: you know, maybe you wouldnt feel bored since you've found your prey. but i dont know how should i get myself out of this boredomness
Nakanishi Yuuka: I'll do it. I'll make both of us getting into something exciting *evil laugh and going out*
Shibata Aya:hmm?

Meanwhile, Nao sits in front of a bridge where she thinks about her previous fight with the judo fighter Shibata Aya. She suddenly gets up and starts working on her techniques where she practices her judo forms and punches. Then she now feels better and then is ready for the fight that she wants to do the next time she meets Shibata Aya.

Yagura Fuuko: Hey Nao!
Nao: Fuuko :)
Yagura: Are you okay?
Nao: I'm fine. Don't worry.
Yagura: Do you still feel down about the last fight that happened?
Nao: Nah, i think i will manage. I dont know how the next fight will result to. But I think I will put up a good fight.
Yagura: Thanks good to hear :) I'm glad you're just happy here with us. You know that you used to be a lot like that Yoshida when we in middle school right? XD
Nao: oh ahah those were some good old childhood times. i miss them. i used to be strongest until i came at you and got beaten.
Yagura: We all 3 used to be the same LOL

At the same evening, Owada Nana is outside taking a fresh air until she encountered the scary looking boyish and beastly looking girl who suddenly ran after her while Nana was about to run from her but failed since she already got caught and was kidnapped by her.

It was about to get dark but Ryoka was on her own casually reading manga when she suddenly came across the beastly girl Nakanishi.

Nakanishi: *evil smiles* Your girlfriend. She's mine now.
Ryoka:haaah? o.O
Nakanishi: You Nana is all mine now *evil laugh* you want her? come to the old building next to the school *goes away towards the entrance door*
Ryoka: Hey! What did you do to Nana!? * opens the entrance door of the manga store and she sees nobody.* who is she?

Meanwhile,
Iwata: Any clue where could she be going?
Mukaichi Mion: I searched her everywhere around this area. Couldn't find her.
Iwata: She said that she wanted some fresh air here but I wonder from where exactly does she want fresh air from
Mion: Is that even important? Look, we need to find her, It's getting dark.

While at that, Oshima Ryoka enters inside the old abandoned building next to the school. The door closes suddenly and she sees herself surrounded by a bunch of girls who are ready to beat her up and behind them is the girl Nakanishi and beside her is Owada Nana who is tied to a chair.

Ryoka: What do you want?
Nakanishi: I want her! This cute girl here! *touches Nana's boobs*
Nana: um.. >< (her mouth is tied too)
Ryoka: Hey! Leave her alone!
Nakanishi: Look at that. Love is in the air. Tell me Nana, you feel embarassed when especially in front of her when i do this right? *presses Nana's boobs*
Nana: *looks away* aahh ><
Ryoka: You!!! *charges at her to attack*

The girl who surround Ryoka, attack Ryoka.
Ryoka beats most of them. She evades their attacks and punches back. Her speciality is her kicks since her kicks are quite powerful and she has strong legs.
But suddenly, her leg is hit with a stick from behind. Ryoka falls down for a second and the other girls beat her up. Ryoka gets up again and beats them back but there are more girls to handle. She almost get's exhausted but doesn't give up since she needs to save her new friend. But Nana knows that she has feelings for her so she starts crying. Ryoka almost falls down but manages to hold herself. When other girls try to attack her, the door of the abandoned building sudenly opens up where Ryoka sees her friend Yagura Fuuko and Nao along with Iwata and Mion.

Ryoka: huh? How did you guys find this place?
Nao: We heard a noise when we arrived at the school.
Iwata: Hey! Naanya is a sensitive girl! Stop touching her boobs you bastard!

Nakanishi is angry. now the 4 girls fight alongside with Ryoka. Ryoka's leg is injured so she has a hard time fighting the other girl. This time, Fuuko fights Nakanishi where fuuko dodges every punches of her and is caught in a situation where Nakanishi goes to choke her since Nakanishi is not just a psycho wolf but also good with grappling. While choking her neck. fuuko turns her neck a little to her left and pulls her forward where Nakanishi is thrown forward. Then Fuuko mounts over her and beats her up.

Iwata: God! What's wrong with people these days. Naanya are you okay *unties Naanya*
Naanya: Ryoka-san!
Iwata: Oh don't worry she'll be fine
Naanya (Owada Nana): *runs towards Ryoka* Ryoka san!
Iwata: aa?

Ryoka is approached by Naanya.

Naanya: Ryoka san are you really okay? T^T
Ryoka: It's okay don't worry ^_^
Naanya: I'm so sorry I had to put you vis such trouble T^T
Ryoka: Nah, don't worry! XD you know it's not your fault. stop crying you silly *wipes off Owada's tears*

Naanya's face becomes red.

Then suddenly comes the main girl who was waiting for another fight with Nao and the others.

                                                                                           END OF PART 8.2
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Re: Rock 'n' Roll Sukeban girls!
« Reply #17 on: December 26, 2014, 07:58:18 AM »
..these girls are dangerous LOL

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Re: Rock 'n' Roll Sukeban girls!
« Reply #18 on: December 26, 2014, 09:22:39 AM »
..these girls are dangerous LOL
THANKS!
yeah they're dangrous. cuz they're delinquent high school girls :D
i hope you liked it

stay tuned for further part
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Re: Rock 'n' Roll Sukeban girls!
« Reply #19 on: December 28, 2014, 03:22:32 PM »
Having nice time of reading XD
Become AKB fan after watching AKB0048.
Oshimen : Takamina and Mayu
Favorite pair : TakaAstu, Mayukirin, KumiYuria, Wmatsui, JirinaMayu etc.
(After reading the fanfic, my favorite pair just keep increasing :( )

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