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Re: Who You Are 「AtsuMina」Chapter 3: Maeda Atsuko 2015/02/08
« Reply #40 on: February 08, 2015, 09:24:14 PM »
Yeah! thank you for considerabout a kojiyuu part!

Jane sounds so dangerous..

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Re: Who You Are 「AtsuMina」Chapter 3: Maeda Atsuko 2015/02/08
« Reply #41 on: February 08, 2015, 10:34:05 PM »
Hahaha I think it's acchan who needs a psy

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Re: Who You Are 「AtsuMina」Chapter 3: Maeda Atsuko 2015/02/08
« Reply #42 on: February 09, 2015, 01:16:56 AM »
Ah... Atsuko really has busy day....

And now another problem pop up...

Atsuko personally would like to have Minami only without the other personality

Now she got Jane Doe asking for Minami to sleep forever....

What will Atsuko do about it?

Can't wait to see how the session is going

Thank you for the update

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Re: Who You Are 「AtsuMina」Chapter 3: Maeda Atsuko 2015/02/08
« Reply #43 on: February 09, 2015, 03:57:42 AM »
At the rate this is going, once everything have been solved and resolved, I think Minami will be made to become Atsuko's life-time psychiatrist in return for what Atsuko had been put through by her other troublesome personalities  :twisted:. So far Jane Doe seems the most confident, arrogant, dangerous, and scheming one - well it has to be since Nami is just an ambitious teen aiming to become an idol. Kai has yet to make an appearance but is it safe to assume that Kai's personality will be like Kai from Mendol?

I think the reason Atsuko wants to make Minami fall in love with her is that she wants to use romantic attachment to help Minami - the main personality - to get stronger so she will be able to repel and completely erase the other 3 personalities AND ALSO, of course, to turn her love from being one-sided to mutual  8)

Your updating pace is really fast. I hope you won't drop it halfway since the way the story is going is promising  :twothumbs

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Re: Who You Are 「AtsuMina」Chapter 3: Maeda Atsuko 2015/02/08
« Reply #44 on: February 09, 2015, 04:19:08 AM »
I was worried about acchan  :sweat: I think she needs treatment on her head  :err: :fever: :hiakhiakhiak:
Poor doctor ... :stuffed:
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Re: Who You Are 「AtsuMina」Chapter 3: Maeda Atsuko 2015/02/08
« Reply #45 on: February 09, 2015, 08:43:35 AM »
JANE DOE!!
She's the strong one huh, acchan have to work hard to handle her
Wonder what will happen to our psychiatrist
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Re: Who You Are 「AtsuMina」Chapter 3: Maeda Atsuko 2015/02/08
« Reply #46 on: February 10, 2015, 04:54:02 AM »
Really interesting story  :w00t:
hope update soon  :bow:

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Re: Who You Are 「AtsuMina」Chapter 3: Maeda Atsuko 2015/02/08
« Reply #47 on: February 10, 2015, 05:01:23 PM »
Hee~~
Jane doe first huh?
She is the strongest one,then when kai appear?  :huhuh
Im his fans actually  :mon lovelaff:
But wait,if jane doe want minami disappear,arent that kinda dangerous?
Wooo~ abunaii yo minami! :mon scare:
How acchan handle this?
I think acchan will be the one who need psychiatrist after minami recover  :hiakhiakhiak:


Please continue~

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Re: Who You Are 「AtsuMina」Chapter 3: Maeda Atsuko 2015/02/08
« Reply #48 on: February 11, 2015, 06:58:26 AM »
can they live for each other please don't kill any one of their personalities just make them all fall for achan make them all friendly to each other,,just thinking. heheh..

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Re: Who You Are 「AtsuMina」Chapter 3: Maeda Atsuko 2015/02/08
« Reply #49 on: February 12, 2015, 10:55:54 PM »
Mdyaya .... baseball bat for Nami.
Jane Doe dangerous. Baseball bat does not help. Need a gun. Or Atsuko shoot Jane... or shoot herself...
I feel the people rights and Kai will be the playboy. Atsuko need to make the stock Viagra....
It will be fun ...

Poor Acchan...

And then comes MajiMina :mon evil: :mon mad: and everyone will get to nuts.... :mon zoom: :on kimbo:

Anyway poor Acchan...

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Who You Are 「AtsuMina」Chapter 4: Jane Doe 2015/02/21
« Reply #50 on: February 21, 2015, 11:08:05 AM »
Chapter 4: Jane Doe
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Atsuko immediately banged her head on the hard surface of her session room's walls after she heard the ridiculous request that Jane Doe had given to her.

After being mocked as sensitive because of her age, got set up for a talking session with an unresponsive robot like girl, was drenched from her head to toe because of a troublesome sex maniac who made her look like a fool and now she hears a totally, super and really really idiotic, out of mind, literally impossible request by a personality that shouldn't even exist. Could her day even get any worse?

She stopped banging her head and moved her gaze to Jane Doe who has an amused face seeing her act like a mad and crazy person. She really wanted to wipe out that smile off and just yell at her right in front of her face telling her that she is the cause why Atsuko would act like that.

But a psychiatrist should be rational. She shouldn't just scream and get all emotional because of a ridiculous request. She should have the biggest heart and should act like a saint even though what she really wanted is to act like a satan and just get mad at everyone. But a professional shouldn't be like that.

She took a deep breathe, trying keep herself calm and composed. She shouldn't lash out. That would make her more idiotic looking than she already were.

Jane Doe grinned widely seeing the changes of Atsuko expressions. She thought that the psychiatrist's facial expressions were funny and amusing. One minute she had a troubled expression, the next minute she looked calm and composed but the next minute she looked angry, mad and was ready to kill someone.

Jane Doe wondered if someone as unstable as Atsuko could actually become a psychiatrist. Atsuko's mental state seems like it's not normal either.

Atsuko heaved a ball of air, she then turned her attention back to the annoying figure grinning at her, "Are you drunk or something? You should know your place. A personality like you wouldn't even exist if Minami didn't exist." The psychiatrist reprimanded the woman in front of her.

The grin of the patient was wiped in an instant and a frown replaced her earlier expression, "She created me because she can't take care of herself. I've been protecting her for all this time. When she can't even fight back people that are mean to her, I'll take her place and will beat and get beaten by those people instead. Isn't the least that she can do for me is making me the main personality? So now start putting her to sleep." Jane Doe slouched back down on her chair and crossed her arms while she kept on staring at the mentally tired psychiatrist.

Atsuko closed her eyes and tried to even her breath. She wanted to keep her calm. A professional psychiatrist should be composed and holds no grudge towards patients who have mental disability.

"You know, for someone who is wet from head to toe, you're pretty cute." Jane Doe suddenly said out of nowhere while Atsuko was still trying to regain her composure.

That, of course caught the psychiatrist by surprise. It was an unexpected statement and Atsuko didn't expect something so flattering could come out of the annoying person's mouth. The word cute caught her off guard and she immediately lost her composure once again because she blushed, something which was out of her control.

She cleared her throath and looked away from Jane Doe. Atsuko suddenly found the tiles very interesting because she was staring intently at those plain white tiles. All of a sudden, a black jacket was placed around her shoulder. She snapped her head to look at Jane Doe who was grinning at her.

"You'll catch a cold, with that wet clothes. Go change right now." Jane Doe ordered as she raised her eyebrows up and down with a perverted grin plastered on her lips.

Atsuko twitched, because she was almost reaching past her patient line. She took off the black jacket that Jane Doe had placed around her shoulders and immediately threw that jacket straight to the pervert's face. She also kicked the woman's stomach which sent her flying into the corner of the room.

After she kicked her, Atsuko expected Jane Doe to reply her with another kick or something but Jane Doe surprisingly kept the position in the corner of the room after Atsuko had kicked her with a jacket covering her face. Atsuko was honestly prepared for a punch or two after she had kicked the pervert away.

Slowly, the patient's hand removed the jacket that was covering her head, bit by bit her face was slowly revealed. Her facial expression was unexpectedly amazed. Jane Doe moved her eyes to look at the confused doctor and hastily approached her.

She grabbed the doctor's hand, "From now on, you're my woman." She declared with a smirk while she tightened the grip she had around the doctor's wrist.

To say she was baffled would be an understandment. Atsuko was shocked to the end of the world as she heard those words came out of Jane Doe's mouth. Why would Jane Doe declare her as her girl?!

'Don't tell me she suddenly likes me because I'm the first girl to ever kick her that far.'

"I like you because you're the first woman to kick me that far. Your kick moved my heart." Jane Doe seemed like she could read the psychiatrist's mind because her reason was exactly like what Atsuko thought in her head.

'What is this?! Is she an M?! I thought from her appearance, she is an S!!' It was really really frenzy inside of the doctor's mind.

Jane Doe pulled the psychiatrist closer, "Remember this day, Friday 13th of February. The day I made you my woman." Her smirk widened even more and Atsuko facepalmed so hard in her mind. How can a personality declare the doctor as her woman? It doesn't even make sense!

"Jane Doe-san... I guess you're really drunk. How about I take you home so you can rest? You're starting to say nonsense... Wait for me outside because I have to change, okay?" She slowly released the grip Jane Doe had around her wrist and softly pushed the mad woman through the door of her room. Jane Doe had given her more than enough headaches.

As she closed the door, she heaved out a deep sigh. The Jane Doe personality is the most troublesome one. She's even far more annoying than Kawachi Nami. She felt like Nami even won't stand a chance against Jane Doe if there is a competition on who's more annoying.

She really hoped that Minami would come back and make things easier for her. Minami is the only one who can keep her calm and relax. Her other patients are all troublesome. She heaved another sigh as she finally finished changing her clothes. Now all she needs to do is take that crazy woman home and she'll be freed by the headaches that are clouding her mind.

She turned around only to see that Jane Doe had peeked on her as she opened the door a little and that same annoying perverted grin once again on her face.

Atsuko yelled out, "Pervert!!" And she punched Jane Doe's face.

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"Your loving punch sure hurts a lot." Jane Doe muttered as she seated herself down on the passanger seat beside Atsuko, which was the driver seat. She kept on rubbing the sore spot which Atsuko had planted her fist there.

Atsuko grinned in mischief, "Well, that serves you right for being a peeping tom." She shrugged her shoulders and wore her seatbelt. But before she could even start the car's engine, Jane Doe suddenly opened the door of the car and got down from it.

She then opened Atsuko's door, "Come down, I will be the one to drive." She ordered the psychiatrist to step down from the car.

Of course, someone in the right mind would refuse such an order from someone who's mentally unstable. "No. You'll just drive to some weird place and cause trouble to Minami. I won't let you do that."

Jane Doe raised an eyebrow, "You're actually worried on that pussy? Don't waste your worry on her and just get down now." The bossy side of Jane Doe was showing and Atsuko had to restrain herself from harming her because she wouldn't want Minami to wake up and feel the hurt she had put Jane Doe through.

"I have the right to worry on my patient so you, go back to your seat." However, Atsuko wouldn't back down and insisted the woman to sit back on her seat. No way she would accept the order from Jane Doe. Jane Doe would definitely go and cause trouble again for Minami to clean up.

Jane Doe scrunched her eyebrows, "Then I'll just go on my own to cause trouble for that precious Minami." She looked away then started to walk, getting away from Atsuko's car.

Atsuko groaned, "Fine! But I will tag along so you won't do something stupid."

Jane Doe turned back and a grin was on her face, "No worries. I won't take you to somewhere weird because I will take you on a date." She pushed the psychiatrist aside as soon as Atsuko unblucked her seatbelt.

"Date?!"

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"If you take me to somewhere inapproriate, I'm gonna kick you real good!" Atsuko threatened as Jane Doe was driving.

"Hmph, you're gonna regret doubting me, Dr. Maeda." Jane Doe stepped harder on the gas and Atsuko screamed her lungs out in fear of her life being taken away in an unimportant car accident caused by a mad woman.

The psychiatrist tried to cling on anything that could make her feel safe. She ended up clinging on the driver's right arm and kept on screaming for her life. Jane Doe was distracted by the screams of the doctor. She couldn't focus on the road so she decrease the speed of the car.

She turned to look at Atsuko who was still breathing heavily because of the adrenaline she had caused, "Why are you exaggerating?! Your screams made me unfocused." Jane Doe scolded but she was surprised to see that Atsuko had tears in her eyes.

Atsuko cried like a baby and Jane Doe stopped the car. She was confused. Jane Doe was only speeding lightly but why did the psychiatrist overreact? She didn't even speed that much.

"Hey... Why are you crying?" She softly patted the girl to get her attention. But instead of lessening her cries, the psychiatrist kept on crying louder and louder, ignoring Jane Doe's question.

Jane Doe gave up trying to squeeze an answer from the crying girl and she just patted the girl's head lightly, hoping that she would stop crying soon. Atsuko was still clinging tightly to Jane Doe's arm, refusing to let go even though Jane Doe had tried to shake her arm because it was getting numb from the hard grip Atsuko had around her.

After a few minutes, Atsuko had stopped crying and she fell asleep instead. Jane Doe chuckled in amusement hearing how the doctor actually snored loudly and made her realize that she had fallen asleep.

Jane Doe turned on the gps of Atsuko's car and tried to search the adress of the doctor. She typed the word 'maeda atsuko home' but got no direction from the gps.

"How does this thing work?" She scratched her head and tried to push any buttons but none of them showed the route to Atsuko's home. Her patience were lessening and she tried so hard to kept herself from breaking the gps because then she would make Atsuko angry again.

She huffed, "Hey, gps-san, take me to this doctor's home, you heard me? It should be her home okay!" She started to talk to the gps to hold her unpatient self. Of course, she got no response from the gps.

She pulled out Minami's phone and opened the web browser, "Maybe I should ask Yahoo-san... Search engine always have the answer right?" She muttered as she typed, 'Dr. Maeda Atsuko from Accel Hospital adress'

The search engine loaded and showed the adress of the hospital instead of Atsuko's adress. Jane Doe opened the car's window and threw out Minami's phone out of the window, "Useless phone perfectly suited for its' useless owner." She mumbled and ruffled her hair, growing more and more frustrated.

"Should I take her to Minami's house? But what if I sleep and the one who wakes up isn't me?! That useless Minami might take advantage of my woman! So I shouldn't take her to that useless Minami's house. Yep. Good thinking Jane-sama, good." She nodded her head up and down with a smile, agreeing to her own idea.

But her smile slowly dissipated, "But then where should I take her?! I didn't bring enough money to rent a hotel room. Jeez, I should have taken Minami's credit card earlier... Damn." She clicked her tongue and after that glanced at the gps again.

"Gps-san, can you just cooperate with me? Just this once? I don't want to take your owner to useless Minami's house... Please show me the direction?" She didn't want to admit it herself but she actually begged to a gps.

Jane Doe sighed in disappointment as the gps kept its silence. "Maybe I should really bring her to Minami's house... And I should stay awake! Right! I'm a genius, really." She complimented herself and patted her own head.

She then stepped on the gas pedal and began driving to Minami's house.

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Jane Doe carried the sleeping psychiatrist on her back as they got down from Atsuko's car. Jane Doe had a hard time trying to open the front door of Minami's house but she fortunately managed to open the door. She brought Atsuko to Minami's bedroom and placed the sleeping beauty on top of the bed.

She stretched her sore body after she placed the girl down. With her short height, it was kind of hard carrying the taller doctor for her. She then slouched down on the floor and tried to even her breathe.

She glanced at the sleeping Atsuko who seemed quite comfortable, still with her loud snoring. Jane Doe chuckled hearing those loud snore again. She thought it was amusing that a cute girl actually had a sleeping habit, which is snoring like an old man.

She then looked around in Minami's bedroom and frowned seeing the dull colour of the room, "I haven't come back for only three months and she had painted the room back to white? Hot red was a good colour!" She grumbled as she stood up and traced the wall's paint.

"But I threw her phone earlier so maybe I should let this one slide." She crossed her arms and nodded her head, "You're so kind as always, Jane-sama. So kind." She began self-praising again and grinned.

Jane Doe went out of the room and began wandering around the house to see if anything else had changed. She didn't show up for three months because she suddenly felt bored. Nothing made her rush her adrenaline. Minami also was way too on guard so she couldn't cause trouble.

But she made her come back after getting the feeling that Minami's parents would be back. She wanted to see those scumbags who dared to call themselves as Minami's parents. She wanted to make them suffer so she came back. She also wanted to put Minami to sleep so the first personality won't be able to distract her.

She saw that the house was still the same. The empty and lonesome feeling were still surrounding the house which Minami lives in.

Jane Doe went into the kitchen and opened the refrigerator to see what was inside. She saw cans of beer so she picked them out and took them to the living room. Jane Doe wasn't a heavy drinker, however. She didn't have a high liquor so all she could drink was beer only. She sipped on her beer and sighed in content feeling the liquid freshening her dry throath.

She emptied the 8th bottle of her beer and burped. She was feeling drowsy already so she went to the bedroom to sleep, forgetting the fact that there was another person sleeping inside of the bedroom. Jane Doe slumped down on the bed beside the sleeping psychiatrist and soon, her conciousness flew away and she fell asleep.

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Atsuko regained her conciousness  with heavy eyes. The only thing she could remember before she fell asleep was that she cried like a child in someone's arm. She blinked her eyes several times before she tried to wake up. But something was holding her down. She tried to shake her body but still, she couldn't sit up.

She turned her head to see what was holding her down only to be met with a sleeping face right beside of her face. The doctor immediately yelled out in surprise, waking the figure beside her by her scream of horror.

Minami slowly opened her eyes and saw that her psychiatrist was looking at her in bewilderment. She was shocked to see Atsuko in front of her and inside of her bedroom.

"Why are you here, Atsuko? Why are you in my bedroom?" She asked the woman in front of her but Atsuko shook her head as the answer.

"I don't know why I'm here too, Minami." She spoke up but then remembered after seeing Minami's thick eyeliner that she met with another one of Minami's personalities, Jane Doe.

Atsuko groaned as she finally remembered that she had met with that perverted personality. She felt a sudden headache just by remembering it, "I met with Jane Doe yesterday... It seems that she's the one who brought me here..." Atsuko told her patient.

Minami was shocked, "Jane Doe? She came back?" Fear was evident in her voice. Minami felt fearful toward Jane Doe because that personality really likes to put her in trouble. And Jane Doe is also intimidating and likes to threaten her.

The psychiatrist nodded her head, "Yeah, she met me yesterday and asked me a favor..." Atsuko was contemplanting whether she should tell her patient what Jane Doe had asked her last night.

Minami waited the woman in front of her to continue her sentence, "What favor? What did she ask you yesterday?"

"She asked me to put you to sleep and make her the main personality..."

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Sorry for the late update! I was preoccupied with assignments and also I was a bit busy with AKB rhythm game lol sorry! Anyway, here is the new chapter sorry if it's short and hope you'll enjoy it!

Replies:
@Drakon: Acchan can't posses a gun lol or else she will shoot herself instead of Jane Doe beacause of her frustrations

@crosteks: I think one of the personalities won't agree to your idea lol

@ryu201: let's see who's the most dangerous personality! Hahaha

@Dianalrs: sorry for the late update!

@AI712: thanks for waiting and here's the update!

@deguchi: Acchan really worked hard by falling asleep and snoring loudly :lol:

@Yhuii: yeah, I think Acchan might turn crazy because of her patients :lol:

@Tanchan: thank you for the long comment! Haha I love long comments. Let's see, Jane Doe is really confident but I wouldn't say that she is smart lol. And yeah, Nami is kind of free spirited and doesn't care on anything else except becoming an idol. And we'll see what kind of person Kai is after he makes an appearance! And about why Atsuko wants to make Minami falls in love with her... You're quite right :p hahaha

@cisda83: of course Atsuko would want Minami to have on personality because that means less work for her! XD

@kahem: yeah lol Acchan needs a psychiatrist real bad

@Haruko: sorry that this chapter don't have any KojiYuu for you but the next chapter will definitely have KojiYuu!

@black_maa: instead of making Acchan's heart beat harder, Jane Doe makes Acchan's head hurting instead :lol:

@phoenix0i: hahaha Jane Doe is indeed troublesome fella!

Once again, thank you for reading and commenting! Have a nice day, everyone!

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Re: Who You Are 「AtsuMina」Chapter 4: Jane Doe 2015/02/21
« Reply #51 on: February 21, 2015, 12:25:17 PM »
Ah... So Jane Doe is the protector.

The one that fought minami's battle

And her parents were the trigger

What's going to happen next?

Would you show a bit Minami background or past as to how she develop all these personalities?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

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Re: Who You Are 「AtsuMina」Chapter 4: Jane Doe 2015/02/21
« Reply #52 on: February 21, 2015, 01:40:20 PM »
Jane Doe huh, troublesome indeed but she's funny I like her xixixi
So later is kai..
Can you add more atsumina please..I wonder how atsuko feeling about takamina
Nice chap author-san! :twothumbs
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Re: Who You Are 「AtsuMina」Chapter 4: Jane Doe 2015/02/21
« Reply #53 on: February 21, 2015, 03:34:40 PM »
I am wondering, why Acchan cried so much, when Jane Doe drives so fast.. :huhuh 
But how pity, that their date didn't happen...  :D  ...it would be funny...


Minami's personalities really can make a big headaches for Atsuko..  :lol:


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Re: Who You Are 「AtsuMina」Chapter 4: Jane Doe 2015/02/21
« Reply #54 on: February 21, 2015, 04:32:26 PM »
Jane Doe is the tough one, I guess.
I think, Kai would be the good and reasonable one.

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Re: Who You Are 「AtsuMina」Chapter 4: Jane Doe 2015/02/21
« Reply #55 on: February 22, 2015, 12:28:53 AM »
Ididn´t have kojiyuu butwe have perver jane doe... so it´s cool to me :D
yeaaaah kojiyuu next time!

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Re: Who You Are 「AtsuMina」Chapter 4: Jane Doe 2015/02/21
« Reply #56 on: February 22, 2015, 09:36:43 AM »
I feel that jane doe is very caring...and romantic  :wriggly: :on bleed:
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Re: Who You Are 「AtsuMina」Chapter 4: Jane Doe 2015/02/21
« Reply #57 on: February 22, 2015, 09:51:27 AM »
Jane doe is the protector
Nami want to be actress
Minami is the weak & concern to everything

Then what is about Kai heheh! can't wait for the next update

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Re: Who You Are 「AtsuMina」Chapter 4: Jane Doe 2015/02/21
« Reply #58 on: February 22, 2015, 02:45:33 PM »
This is a really good fanfic!
Poor Minami, trying to be normal and have friends but having those crazy personalities xD
I laughed a lot with Nami... xD

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Re: Who You Are 「AtsuMina」Chapter 4: Jane Doe 2015/02/21
« Reply #59 on: February 22, 2015, 11:59:39 PM »
jane doe was hilarious, i lived when he declared atsuko as her woman
she should just kiss atsuko already

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