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Offline pandami21

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Hello minna-san  :) :hand:
This will be my first attempt at writing a story
as well as posting it. Literally first at posting thats
why it took me an hour to understand how to do it.  :banghead:
Well without further ado here's the prologue.
Hope you like it.  :peace:

PROLOGUE

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Tomorrow is that day of the year again.
It still hurts, but I'm trying to move on.

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I still remember that day like it just happened yesterday,
yet it is more likely a distant memory.

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Today it's raining. Tomorrow, as well, will rain.
Similar to that day. Before we would always had fun under the rain,
but now... its scary.

plop plop plop

I don't know if it's intentional, or it is its way of comforting me
and mourning with me, or just plainly bored, but I'm glad.
I'm not alone in remembering you.

plop plop plop

Have you count how many teardrops I've shed for today?
How many more raindrops will fall before they totally stop falling?
Maybe you know. Tell me tomorrow will you? Afterall...

plop plop plop

I'm coming to visit you again. We'll celebrate it together again...
with our friends... with our family like every year.

plop plop plop

Your death anniversary.

plop plop plop

I miss you and still loving you, Minami.

 It is strictly a Kai/Atsuko/Minami story
with a few more pairs here and there. ;)  :peace:
« Last Edit: March 06, 2015, 05:12:28 PM by pandami21 »
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Re: I choose you (KaixAtsuko, MinamixAtsuko, and other pairings)
« Reply #1 on: March 06, 2015, 05:40:04 PM »
wow!!!
another kai x atsuko story  :shocked
lately,many story about kai x atsuko here heh?
but its cool! since i also love kai x atsuko story so please continue author-san im will waiting for update.
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Re: I choose you (KaixAtsuko, MinamixAtsuko, and other pairings)
« Reply #2 on: March 06, 2015, 07:21:14 PM »
Ah... Minami died here...

Yeah... another Atsumina story... even in form of Kai

Can't wait to see the next chapter...

And to know the past between Atsuko and Minami

And how Atsuko and Kai get together

Thank you for the prologue

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Re: I choose you (chapter 1 update)
« Reply #3 on: March 07, 2015, 04:17:48 AM »
Thank you minna-san for taking a look
to my story. Let me clarify, this is basically a
KaixAtsukoxMinami story, but that doesn't mean
it's all about them all the time. There are added
story of other pairings as well so you won't get
bored.
Btw my oshimen is Takahashi Minami.  :drool: :love:
:heart: and my favorite pairings are Atsumina, Marimii
And Kojiyuu.
Well let move on with the story. :peace:

Chapter 1

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'Acchan'

Someone is calling for me. I can feel her.
She shaking me just to wake me up.


'Acchan wake up. Did you sleep late again?
We're going to be late if you don't wake up now.
Atsukooo'

I woke up again from your call, I look around
but found you nowhere.

'-sigh- I should prepare for school. You
wouldn't want us to be late now, would you?'

knock knock

I look towards the door as it open. It's my mother.
Figures. Father never came to wake me up ever since
I can remember.

'Acchan wak-...Oh your awake. Ohayo.'

'Ohayo ka-chan. You should thank her.
That girl! Has the nerve to wake me up
from my beautiful dream. Tsk.'

'That gir-... Oh. Hmm.... Acchan it has
been 2 years. Don't you think it's time to
mov-'

She looks at me with that look again.
Pity. I saw it in her eyes, in fathers, as well
as my siblings and friends. But I'm used to
it by now.

'Ka-chan what's for breakfast?'

'-sigh- It's only toast and jam for today.
Haven't went for grocery.'

'I see. I'll just take a shower then and I'll
come down.'

'Okay.' Her mother said before she close the
door. 'Oh Acchan. Haven't you move on yet?
She would never want you mourning for her this
long. -Sigh-
As she thought of this, she went to
do other household chores.

Instead, inside the bathroom we find Atsuko
crying herself out again. It seems everyday, since
that day, this cicle has been going on.

'Minami. I want to see you. I miss you.'
She says yet barely audible. No one would
hear it though, even her.

After 20 minutes

'Ittekimasu!'

'Itterashai. Take care Acchan. Call me if you're
going to be late okay?'

'Hai ka-chan.' I said last as I make my way to
the bus station.

'I'm already at my 2nd yr in high shool. Time flies
by so quickly. Yet it feels not at all when your not
with me.'

I look around. TOKYO. My birthplace and the place
where I've lived my whole life so far. This city holds
many of my memories: good and bad.

'-sigh- It seems I've been reminiscing again.
I haven't even notice I've arrived at the bus station.'

clak clak clak

'Wait I know that sou-' Without finishing I found myself
struggling for air. The culprit? This girl who's hugging
me so tight.

'Wiffu!!! I miss you.'

'Mi-miiichan. C--can't breath.' I try to say but to no avail.
I search for help and then I saw her. A prince charming
dress in a girls uniform. Taking out a paper fan out of
nowhere she slaps it to the back of Miichan's head.

boink

'Ittai!!! What's that for old hag?!?!' Mi-chan accusingly
pointed at the so called old hag and because of this
got another lump in the head.
And this made me giggle.

'Stop it Gachapin! For kami-sama's sake your going to kill her!
With that fatty body of yours sandwiching that body of hers will
surely make her suffocate.'

'Why you...'

Before they went in to brawling each other I stop
the inevitable world war 3.

'Ohayo Miichan, Mariko-sama.'
It should be -senpai since she's older by a year,
but she insisted on -sama.
She's Mariko-sama, afterall.

'Ohayo Acchan.' responded the now identified
Mariko-sama as she smiles to me.

'Ohayo Wiffu. I really miss you, ya know. We
haven't heard anything from you the whole
break. What 'cha been doin'?' Miichan enthusiastically
said.

'-gigles- Nothing much. Just been hanging around
with Minami the whole break.'

This statement made them look at me and to each other.
This didn't go unnotice by me, of course. I know what
they're thinking, but I just let them be. Afterall who are they
to judge when they know what I'm going through.

Just then bus that will be taking us to our school arrived.
AKB48 University. It's called like that because the founder
of it was so fond of the number 48 and because it resides
in this street called AKIHABARA.

As we arrive at school I have only one thought...

'I'll spend another school year without you, Minami.'



Tell me if I'm going too slow minna-san. I would relly appreciate
your criticism: be it good or bad.
Thank you again for reading. See you on chapter 2.

« Last Edit: March 07, 2015, 09:15:21 AM by pandami21 »
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Re: I choose you (KaixAtsuko, MinamixAtsuko, and other pairings)
« Reply #4 on: March 07, 2015, 09:28:57 PM »
I am little bit confused, but I like this story..  :roll: 
If I understand right, then Minami  died long time ago, but Acchan still (somehow) can see her.. hmm.. :huhuh
I want to know why, how and whats happened between them!?  :D :)


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Re: I choose you (KaixAtsuko, MinamixAtsuko, and other pairings)
« Reply #5 on: March 07, 2015, 10:11:11 PM »
AH.. Poor Atsuko...

Still not moving on from Minami

Why did Minami die?

Why did Atsuko mean by spending time with Minami?

Yeah... Miichan and Mariko so cute together...

ah... Another school year...

What's going to happen next?

Can't wait to find out

Thank you for the update

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Re: I choose you (KaixAtsuko, MinamixAtsuko, and other pairings)
« Reply #6 on: March 08, 2015, 06:01:38 AM »
Since I'm not sure if I'll be able to
update tomorrow here's the next chapter.
Hope you still like it.


Chapter 2
Part 1

'Ohayo.'

'Ohayo gozaimasu.'

'Ohayo minna.'


It seems the summer break took its tool on everyone.
Students seems all eager to see their friends again.
On our left we saw this group of girls that started
gossiping on what changed or what not during summer.
At the back we hear this group of boys talking about love life:
others got girlfriends so it seems.

'Aaahhh. I hope we're all in the same class again.
It would be another fun school year, right Wiffu?'
Miichan said while looking around.

'I hope so too.'

Last year our cicle of friends were all in the same class,
well except Mariko-sama of course.

'Hmm. Unfortunately I don't know if I'll be able to spend much time
with guys. It's my last year so it's going to be hectic and busy year for me.'
Mariko-sama explains.

I look sympathetically at her. It doesn't matter to me as long as she
spends enough time with us but for Miichan I think that doesn't apply
to her.

'Really?! Yeah!! A year without seeing much of you...
This will be the best year of my life.' She happily proclaims
which causes her again to have another lump on the head.
Courtesy of Mariko-sama.

'-giggles- I'm pretty sure you don't mean that Miichan.
Besides it would be troublesome for us if Mariko-sama won't be around
to reprimand her every time you do something crazy.'
I say as I throw a knowing smile to Mariko-sama.

Arriving and looking at the bulletin chart I finally let escape a
sigh I've been unconsciously holding on. Our prayers have been answered.

Bid our goodbyes to Mariko-sama we walk towards our classroom.

In the classroom[/u]

'Ohayo minna.' Miichan shouted upon opening the door.

Even if I'm used to it I still covered my ears due to her
deafening loud voice. Seriously, this girls enthusiasm knows no bounds.

For the second time today I found myself catching for my breath again.
The cause this time...

'Ohayo Acchan, Miichan. I've miss you both.'

...is this squirrel-like girl, named Oshima Yuko.

'Ohayo, midget. But hey why don't I get a hug as well?' exclaims Miichan.

'-glares- I was about to hug you but you just had to call me midget.
-stick tongue out- Then, obviously because I miss Acchan more. '

Before Miichan could react another friends of us entered.
One of our classroom's pride: the beautiful, but airhead Kojima Haruna.
And because of her I'm now freed from my death threat.

'Ah! Ohayo Acchan, Miichan, Yuko.' she said as she approaches us.
Not knowing thats she's walking towards her doom.

'Nyan nyan!!' Yuuchan yelled while throwing herself on
Haruna and successfully landing face-first on her breast.

Let all be known to everyone that Yuko is huge pervert who
goes after every girls skirts, touching their butts.
Her favorite victim though is Haruna. Poor Haruna.

'Aahh Yuko!! Get off me you pervert.' -slap-

'-laugh- Serves you right Yuu-midget.' Miichan laughs hard while
poking Yuuchan's red cheek, where Haruna slap her.

'Hey!! -slaps Miichan's hand away- Stop calling me midget.
Everyone knows I'm still taller than Takamina by 4cm.'
Yuko looks at me as she realizes what she said.
Even Miichan and Haruna looked at me.

I turn around and walk towards my desk. What!? Why!?
Why do all of you look at me as if I'm going to suddenly breaks and cry?
It has always been like this. Everytime someone lets a topic about
Minami slips out of their mouth everyone will look at me with
pitiful eyes and full of guilt. Why?!

Can't anyone of you just talk about her normally?
Like as if she's with us waiting for the time when she can finally throw
some lame joke? Because I know that she's beside me,
laughing with us. I know it's true.


Thank you for liking and having the time to read so far my story minna-san.

@black_maa: Atsuko can't actually see, but instead pretend or more likely her brains, eyes made her think that she really can see Minami's soul or something like that. I can't say much so please hang in there for awhile.   :P2
@cisda83: good to know you like marimi pairs. I try to be humurous, but I'm not good at it

It's hard editing using only a phone so from now on
every chapter would be compose of Two parts. Sorry about that minna-san.
 

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Re: I choose you (KaixAtsuko, MinamixAtsuko, and other pairings)
« Reply #7 on: March 08, 2015, 09:12:42 AM »
Ah... Funny scene for Yuko and Haruna

I see so Atsuko just imaged if Minami was around she would do what.

But Atsuko instead of remembering she believed she is with Minami.

Minami is beside her everyday.

In another word, Atsuko is hallucinating minami's ghost haunting her.

Though, she wish it to be true or real.

Thank you for the explanation there.

Poor Atsuko... Not being able with the person she loved.

What's going to happen next?

Thank you for the update

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Re: I choose you (KaixAtsuko, MinamixAtsuko, and other pairings)
« Reply #8 on: March 08, 2015, 10:29:40 AM »
I hope then Acchan won't get in trouble or something like that, because of her imagination..  :( :huhuh
But at least, hers friends understand about this situation..

Also, will be there some kind of flashback about what happened between them?  :roll:

Waiting next update!  :)
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