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Re: 48 Family
« Reply #20 on: April 26, 2015, 08:01:43 PM »
To saito, sorry if i misspelled your name, but i will put Papa Sae in next chapter and probably will make another special chapter, but of course i will make this fanfic about within 10-? so each chapter is a diffrent day unless its connecting chapter, and i also plan to make another fanfic after i finish 48 family and also i will explain for confused, fyi this will be at the start chapter 4

So they went on the courage test, Rena got hurt, they went to the hospital to see if Rena hurt her ankle, while waiting for Rena, Mayu meets and unusual friend who of course likes to kiss, Milky gives a piece of paper to Mayu, saying to meet at the beach, Mayu does as follows leaving Yukirin in a suspicious state, Mayu hangs out with Milky and the 2 becomes friends. After that Mayu returned only to be kidnapped by Yukirin and kissed by her. In the next chapter Mayu  is chatting to Yukirin on the phone, after Yukirin was done and hanged up Jurina and Yukirin talked about happy places, Yukirin then received a phone call from the police station saying that Mayu and Milky were there just because they were doing something bad towards a kid. While Yukirin was on the phone with the police, Jurina grew bored and went off to meet Rena at HKT Park and thats when Jurina got hurt and ended up at the hospital, the whole must tell her thing was....well thats for the next chapter, but i will tell you why she must tell her, or Rena, Jurina had something to tell Rena which is very important, anyways so thats the whole thing about what happened sorry for confusion thanks for supporting me

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Re: 48 Family UPDATE Ch 6
« Reply #21 on: May 26, 2015, 10:53:42 PM »
Chapter 6: the last days

Jurina woke up in a white room, she looked to her side and saw that she was all alone

"...where am i" Jurina said, somebody came in, it was Rena

"ah you're awake..." Rena ran over and hugged Jurina tightly

"ow..." Rena lets go

"ah sorry Jurina...here" Rena handed Jurina a bundle of flowers

"ah arigato..." Jurina puts the flower on the nearby counter. Yuki came in along with Mayu

"ah Jurina you're awake~" Yuki said as she came rushing in and hugging Jurina. Mayu came in and gave Jurina a get well soon card. Jurina opened it up and saw a drawing of herself along with Mayu, Rena, and Yuki

"aw..y'know you're a good drawer Mayu" Jurina said as she set aside the card, Mayu blushed. Rena's phoned ringed all the sudden

"moshi moshi? Papa?"

"ah Rena where are you?"

"at the hospital"

"what...are you okay? is your sister okay?!"

"yes we are fine just a friend got injured"

"oh okay phew~" Sae replied back

"oh wait but just remember that we are heading back home in 3 days"

"Ok...wait 3 days?" Sae already hanged up the phone. Rena went over to Mayu

"Mayu, papa said we are leaving in 3 days..." Mayu was shocked by this

"wait 3 days? why?" Rena shrugged, Yuki and Jurina was talking happily.

"neh Rena-nee im hungry...can we go out to eat?" Rena nodded and the 2 left the ward and out through the hospital doors. They walked by a nearby restaurant and went inside. The waiter led them into their seats

"ah this is nice, been a long time since we ever spend some quality time..." Mayu said as she looked around at the restaurant

"oh thats right...where were you last night?"

"ah me and Milky got in to some trouble and we had to do community service..." Rena shot a sly look at Mayu

"and i thought you were that goody-twoshoes, but i guess im wrong~" Mayu pouted after Rena said this

"RENA-NEE~IM AM GOOD~"

"and if you are good follow what your sister has to say" Mayu nodded

"kiss me on the cheek~" Mayu glared at Rena for bit but quickly did it and turned away

"t-there..." Rena squealed and went over to hug Mayu. Mayu kept on retorting her body away from Rena. After the 2 had eaten they went off back into the hotel. Milky was waiting over by the doors for Mayu

"ah Mayu~" Milky went over and hugged Mayu

"ah Milky~ what are you doing here?"

"ah im just waiting for my ride...im leaving now"

"eh you are? then whos gunna spend some time with me during my last days here?" Milky shrugged but then there was a honk

"OI Miyuki! lets go~" a girl said as she was waving

"ah Sayanee~~" Milky then grabbed her stuff and went off but before she did, she hugged Mayu but while doing that she finally kissed Mayu, then she went off and waved goodbye. Mayu was stunned

"\what was that?" Rena asked. Mayu shrugged and they both went inside the hotel. The 2 went up into their room and started to pack up early. There was a knock at the door

"kids its me~" Sae came in when Mayu opened the door

"papa~" Sae came in and sat down on the bed

"cool room kids, but anyways wanna have some REAL family vacation before we go?" Mayu and Rena nodded and they immediately pushed Sae out the door

"WAIT KIDS WHAT ARE YOU DO-ing" The kids shut the door. Sae then had watery eyes

"my kids...why must they do that..." All the sudden the kids came out with their stuff

"lets go papa~!" Mayu shouted out as she pulled Sae, Rena was behind them

Yuki was at the beach doing some photoshoots.
 
"ah~i knew it, it doesnt feel right without Jurina, always attacking me from behind..." Yuki let out a deep sigh and looked at the waves crashing around

Mayu and Rena and Sae were busy playing around the sand and the ocean

"AHHH~ RENA-NEE STOP~" Rena was tackling Mayu in the water,

"AHHHHH~" Sae said as he sat down in a beach chair drinking coconut juice

"these girls are so full of energy..." Sae took another sip from her coconut juice, all the sudden he received a call

"moshi moshi~ ah Boss~"

"heh but im still in-"

"alrighty i will see you soon bye" Sae hanged up and let out a brief sigh. He then got up and walked over to where the kids were

"kids im afraid our vacation has shortened..." the kids looked up at Sae

"what do you mean Papa?" Mayu asked

"my boss called me and said i have to back to work since it was an emergency"

"then...we have to leave right now?" Rena asked, Sae nodded and the girls left the beach along side with Sae. They quickly changed and took off towards the airport. The sad thing was, that they never said goodbye to Yuki nor Jurina. Mayu looked down at her camera and saw a whole bunch of pictures of her and Yuki. Rena did the same except they were with Jurina. They finally arrived at the airport and had to aboard the plane, before the 2 kids left, they looked back and had flash backs of all the wonderful memories they had. They also wished that Jurina would get better soon and then they left.

END~

Not really the end ima end it with about 2 more chapters or more if i need to~

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Re: 48 Family
« Reply #22 on: May 27, 2015, 02:40:55 AM »
Wait..dont they have each other number.?..or not??
Why no goodbye..ur gonna make them worried and tried to find you..=='

Thanks for the update author san~
« Last Edit: June 29, 2015, 06:31:01 AM by kuro_black29 »
Live in the land of mist..nahh just kidding..
Live in the land of Wmatsui and Mayuki...
World of fantasy..World of Lalaland~

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