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WANTED: Themes and/or Topic Proposals
« on: September 26, 2015, 11:23:45 PM »
Hay readers! :welcome For all those that don't know me, I'm Tenninquill~ ;) More of a novel writer than fanfic writer to be honest -_-;  BUT, none the less, I didn't want to leave the people that supported me with nothing to read while I work on my current piece which is called "Transcendence".  If you haven't read that yet then feel free to ;) I had posted the prologue a little while back.. though don't be deceived.. I AM working on the first chapter so none of that is on hiatus ;) It doesn't contain the familiar pairings, but it, more or less, contains inspired characters from the 48 Group universe (most of which are VERY well known ;) ) . So if you're willing to give it a shot then go on ahead. :D I feel bad enough as it is not being able to update it as fast as I'd prefer  :banghead:, so I am writing this in order to ask for some relief.

I figured that it would be a good idea to ask the audience for some proposals on themes or topics that they would love to read about. :nervous While I'm finishing off my update for Transcendence, I can give you guys something to read in order to pass the time. (Plus it also gives me a chance to give my fingers some exercise and for you to get to know me more as a writer)

I have been, though, that type of writer that doesn't really post any of their works for the public eye to see, so this would be a first for me. Though I've got to give a warning ahead of time that the stories, OS, or what-have-it that will be surrounding this will be completely raw. So my apologies ahead of time for my grammar, spelling, and sentence structure mistakes that I may make when posting these extra stories. Advice, critiques, or any suggestions will be highly appreciated and I look forward to hearing some feedback.. if I am worthy of getting any ^_^;

So, basically, the only guidelines that I have for the suggestions in particular are listed below & If you have any questions that you wanna ask about me in order to narrow down options or to just get to know me then do feel free to ask those as well. ;)

Sincerely,
Tenninquill

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WANTED: Theme and Topic Proposals

Any suggestions are welcomed to follow these guidelines for reference:

My Strongly Acquainted Genres: Romance, Fantasy, A Piece of Life

My Weakest Known Genres: Horror, Action, Historical (at least the one that requires A LOT of detail)

My Most Preferred Pairing: WMatsui

Other pairing that maybe possible: Astumina, MaYuki, SaeYuki, SaeYaka, KojiYuu, and JuriYuki (As you can see I'm more of the old classics type  :lol: :nervous)

Please also specify whether the idea you have in mind would mostly likely fit into a drabble, OS, short story, or if it's a story that you would like to collaborate on with me

*I'll consider most ideas whether it be crazy, twisted, sensual, an SM type, or gore-ish if that tips your fancy. But my most appreciated thought is that you should just be creative and probably have some patience with me. Depending on how deep the idea or how well you explain, these things may dictate as to how long it will take me to update things.

Thanks for the consideration and even more so for just reading this. Whatever may come up next...  I'll give my best! ;)
 
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Re: WANTED: Themes and/or Topic Proposals
« Reply #1 on: September 27, 2015, 11:57:40 AM »
I have had ideas for WMatsui fics, but they mostly had Furuyanagi (my personal OTP) as another main pair. The worst part for me about writing is actually getting an idea to work... So...

The idea I had was that Rena was a captured princess, and Jurina was meant to get answers out of her about what her (Jurina's) family. Churi is Jurina's right hand and is very loyal, so she realises that something's wrong, as Jurina's usually an emotionless person. Airin is Rena's personal knight, very loyal to the royal family as she has her own pride to uphold. When she finds out that Rena was captured, she had went all out to find her. Once she's found her princess all goes wrong, as Jurina caught her red handed. Things go worse from there as Jurina starts torturing Airi for fun. Churi stops her and looks after the wounded knight, which causes her to start feeling some affection towards Airi. Going back to WMatsui, Jurina does all she could to Rena to force her to answer what she wants, but then Jurina starts feeling guilty for what she's doing. She also starts feeling something that she's never felt before. Love. She lets Rena and Airin go, but Rena doesn't want to leave Jurina, nor does Airi want to leave Churi.

I guess that's all I have XD I would like to collaborate with more writers so...

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Re: WANTED: Themes and/or Topic Proposals
« Reply #2 on: September 27, 2015, 05:42:05 PM »
Im more of a novel writer too!  Check out my story the Barbarian's cherry blossom, its a good read with a unique plot.
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Re: WANTED: Themes and/or Topic Proposals
« Reply #3 on: September 27, 2015, 06:07:40 PM »
My suggestion is this: remember the music video Bokutchi wa takainai? Try writing. A story of of that.

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Re: WANTED: Themes and/or Topic Proposals
« Reply #4 on: September 28, 2015, 06:22:29 PM »
My suggestion is this: remember the music video Bokutchi wa takainai? Try writing. A story of of that.

Ah  :w00t:, well, now I'm glad someone brought that up :3 I had actually made an idea inspired from that music video a while back when the music video was first released. It contains some of the same details expect without the immense war of it. (Being that I'm not that good with writing "action" scenes and all) It embodies more of the essence of the music video.. though I'm probably sure that I wouldn't make Paruru the main character... (forgive me  :nervous)  Since the idea that was presented in Bokutachi wa Tatakawanai is of interest then I'll get started on it right away ^^The only thing that makes me nervous is that its a story that, in my mind, was originally meant to be a novel type project and, to me, that means a lot of thinking and multiple drafting. Still, I'll make some tweaks and release the prologue soon. Even if the idea is a bit more on the "inspired from" route than going straight off the music video, I hope that you guys will still enjoy it ;)

Thanks for replying and giving the suggestion! ;) I'm sure we'll get along just fine being that we're both novel writers ;)

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Tenninquill
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Re: WANTED: Themes and/or Topic Proposals
« Reply #5 on: September 28, 2015, 06:54:56 PM »
I have had ideas for WMatsui fics, but they mostly had Furuyanagi (my personal OTP) as another main pair. The worst part for me about writing is actually getting an idea to work... So...

The idea I had was that Rena was a captured princess, and Jurina was meant to get answers out of her about what her (Jurina's) family. Churi is Jurina's right hand and is very loyal, so she realises that something's wrong, as Jurina's usually an emotionless person. Airin is Rena's personal knight, very loyal to the royal family as she has her own pride to uphold. When she finds out that Rena was captured, she had went all out to find her. Once she's found her princess all goes wrong, as Jurina caught her red handed. Things go worse from there as Jurina starts torturing Airi for fun. Churi stops her and looks after the wounded knight, which causes her to start feeling some affection towards Airi. Going back to WMatsui, Jurina does all she could to Rena to force her to answer what she wants, but then Jurina starts feeling guilty for what she's doing. She also starts feeling something that she's never felt before. Love. She lets Rena and Airin go, but Rena doesn't want to leave Jurina, nor does Airi want to leave Churi.

I guess that's all I have XD I would like to collaborate with more writers so...


Well it seems that you have a good baseline for the story...  :nervous All you'd really need to do is just add the meat to that structure.. It gives a bit like a "Beauty and the Beast" sort of feeling... So definitely the reason why Jurina is holding Rena has to be absolute and reasonable (even if its only justifiable to her). Given the time period you could make it more complex with how you wanted to tweak the setting and time period. All those factors can contribute to building your story. That as well as the genre that you want it to embody. Because if it is romance than everything else is only an accessory and doesn't overpower the main point in the story.. which in that case would be "love between the main characters"
My only issue with that is... if the reason for capturing Rena is absolute then the information to justify has to be backed up with a solid background. So you'll need to be a bit creative when creating the reasons that formed Jurina's obsession/determination to find answers. In other lights, I feel that there should be a bad-guy in this... Amongst the details that you put in there... it seems like Jurina is supposed to be the "bad" guy turned good... but the thought comes to mind "just because she's doing these things, making her a bad .... guy, doesn't make her a bad-guy" (if you can catch what I mean)
Plus there is the other issue in a realistic aspect (that is if you want to put that into consideration)... Who falls in love with someone that kidnaps and hurts them??? Well, if this were an SM than that might work. There has to be more depth taking place amongst Rena and Jurina that brings them together... Rena can't just immediately see the love that she has for Jurina and Jurina can't immediately feel pity for Rena because she needs those answers more than she needs her.... that is if she cares about those answers (even when that reason alone was enough to kidnap someone).

As for Airin and Churi.. well their story is actually pretty solid  XD But the one tid-bit that I have.. if they are so loyal to their causes (Churi to Jurina and Airin to Rena) Then that could possibly make the conflict between them, since both see their own sides as.... victims, perhaps?

This does have the makings of a great story.. just depends on how you tweak it ;)

So those are my main thoughts for now... I hope that helped a bit .. and feel free to continue to reply back and forth with me on this if you want. I'm very glad and honored that you'd want to collaborate with me on your story ;)

Can't wait to hear your thoughts and reply.

Sincerely,
Tenninquill
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Re: WANTED: Themes and/or Topic Proposals
« Reply #6 on: September 28, 2015, 07:08:51 PM »
I have had ideas for WMatsui fics, but they mostly had Furuyanagi (my personal OTP) as another main pair. The worst part for me about writing is actually getting an idea to work... So...

The idea I had was that Rena was a captured princess, and Jurina was meant to get answers out of her about what her (Jurina's) family. Churi is Jurina's right hand and is very loyal, so she realises that something's wrong, as Jurina's usually an emotionless person. Airin is Rena's personal knight, very loyal to the royal family as she has her own pride to uphold. When she finds out that Rena was captured, she had went all out to find her. Once she's found her princess all goes wrong, as Jurina caught her red handed. Things go worse from there as Jurina starts torturing Airi for fun. Churi stops her and looks after the wounded knight, which causes her to start feeling some affection towards Airi. Going back to WMatsui, Jurina does all she could to Rena to force her to answer what she wants, but then Jurina starts feeling guilty for what she's doing. She also starts feeling something that she's never felt before. Love. She lets Rena and Airin go, but Rena doesn't want to leave Jurina, nor does Airi want to leave Churi.

I guess that's all I have XD I would like to collaborate with more writers so...


Well it seems that you have a good baseline for the story...  :nervous All you'd really need to do is just add the meat to that structure.. It gives a bit like a "Beauty and the Beast" sort of feeling... So definitely the reason why Jurina is holding Rena has to be absolute and reasonable (even if its only justifiable to her). Given the time period you could make it more complex with how you wanted to tweak the setting and time period. All those factors can contribute to building your story. That as well as the genre that you want it to embody. Because if it is romance than everything else is only an accessory and doesn't overpower the main point in the story.. which in that case would be "love between the main characters"
My only issue with that is... if the reason for capturing Rena is absolute then the information to justify has to be backed up with a solid background. So you'll need to be a bit creative when creating the reasons that formed Jurina's obsession/determination to find answers. In other lights, I feel that there should be a bad-guy in this... Amongst the details that you put in there... it seems like Jurina is supposed to be the "bad" guy turned good... but the thought comes to mind "just because she's doing these things, making her a bad .... guy, doesn't make her a bad-guy" (if you can catch what I mean)
Plus there is the other issue in a realistic aspect (that is if you want to put that into consideration)... Who falls in love with someone that kidnaps and hurts them??? Well, if this were an SM than that might work. There has to be more depth taking place amongst Rena and Jurina that brings them together... Rena can't just immediately see the love that she has for Jurina and Jurina can't immediately feel pity for Rena because she needs those answers more than she needs her.... that is if she cares about those answers (even when that reason alone was enough to kidnap someone).

As for Airin and Churi.. well their story is actually pretty solid  XD But the one tid-bit that I have.. if they are so loyal to their causes (Churi to Jurina and Airin to Rena) Then that could possibly make the conflict between them, since both see their own sides as.... victims, perhaps?

This does have the makings of a great story.. just depends on how you tweak it ;)

So those are my main thoughts for now... I hope that helped a bit .. and feel free to continue to reply back and forth with me on this if you want. I'm very glad and honored that you'd want to collaborate with me on your story ;)

Can't wait to hear your thoughts and reply.

Sincerely,
Tenninquill

See, I'm not much of a writer in general and I just find pleasure in doing this, especially meeting new people through what I love is really enjoyable.

I might need to like bring ideas in to a word document or something because I have a lot of ideas in my head for it, I'm just too busy with my job to bring them together.

I don't know about the time and setting but if it means setting it in a medieval setting, I wouldn't mind. As for an antagonist in the story, I'm thinking it should be someone who had manipulated Jurina into kidnapping Rena, not telling her anything about what they've done to her family. They insist that Renas family had something to do with it, even though that in reality, they were the ones who penultimately killed her family.
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Re: WANTED: Themes and/or Topic Proposals
« Reply #7 on: September 28, 2015, 07:45:46 PM »
"See, I'm not much of a writer in general and I just find pleasure in doing this, especially meeting new people through what I love is really enjoyable.

I might need to like bring ideas in to a word document or something because I have a lot of ideas in my head for it, I'm just too busy with my job to bring them together.

I don't know about the time and setting but if it means setting it in a medieval setting, I wouldn't mind. As for an antagonist in the story, I'm thinking it should be someone who had manipulated Jurina into kidnapping Rena, not telling her anything about what they've done to her family. They insist that Renas family had something to do with it, even though that in reality, they were the ones who penultimately killed her family.
"


So just gather your ideas for that story together, list your thoughts out on what details you'd feel you'd want to incorporate and you could probably send that to me so we can work on it. I'll write and tweak what ever you send.. then I'll send it back to you to see if you like it. Is that alright?
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Re: WANTED: Themes and/or Topic Proposals
« Reply #8 on: September 28, 2015, 07:47:48 PM »
Sure, if you can work on Microsoft Word Online, I could work with you when we're both online. But I'm horrifically busy as of now so I'm not going to be able to put it together.

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