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Re: [Atsumina's OS collection] Power of Love (Atsumina) Part 7 23/04/2016
« Reply #120 on: April 23, 2016, 06:04:18 AM »
@black_maa, @AI712: Thank you!  :D

Thank you everyone for reading my fic  :D

Here is part 7  :)

Power of Love

Part 7

After leaving the skiing area, Minami carries Tomomi back to her house which is near the hotel.

On their way

Minami just stays silent and walks very fast.

“Are you trying to make my leg worse with your speed, Takamina?” Tomomi said

“Of course not” Minami said and slows down

Then he keeps walking while checking his watch every 1 minute.

“Is Atsuko going to be ok by herself?” Minami thought worriedly

“Just left for no more than 5 minutes and you already miss “your Atsuko”.” Tomomi speaks up cutting Minami’s train of thought

“Because this place is new to her. I don’t want to leave her alone like that” Minami said

Tomomi chuckles

“How long have you two knowing each other?” she asks

“Not long. It is about 1 month” Minami answers

“Really?” Tomomi said in surprise

“Yes, why?” Minami asks

“Nothing. I just thought that you two have to know each other for a long time” Tomomi said

“Really. What make you think so?” Minami asks

“ just you two seem to be very close connected. That is just feeling” Tomomi said

“I see. I met her at Japan airport. That was the first time I felt my heart skip a beat. The whole world becomes so bright with no reason. That is when I realized what love is” he continues

Tomomi can feel his happiness through his tone.

“3 years really can’t compare with that short time?” She mumbling

Hearing something, Minami asks

“What did you say Tomochin?”

“Ah nothing, nothing at all” she said

“Say Takamina” Tomomi said

“Huh?” Minami asks

“What part of her that make you fall in love with her that deep?” she asks

“Uhm...everything about her.  I love her eyes, her smiles, her voice, her action, everything about her. Her kindness and childish side sometime, too” Minami said while smiling

"That kid looking girl is that good?" Tomomi thought

Suddenly she hears someone calls her

“Tomochin, Takamina”

They look at the direction and see a man rushing toward them

“Hey Tomo” she calls him

“What’s wrong, Tomochin? Why Takamina carries you like that?” he asks her

“She went to skiing and injured her ankle. Therefore I’m taking her back to her house” Minami said

“I see.” Tomo said

Then an idea flashes in his head

“Tomo, can you take her back to her house for me. I have to go back to the skiing area. My girlfriend is waiting for me there” Minami asks

“Your girlfriend? You has a girlfriend?” Tomo asks in surprise while looking at Tomochin

“Uh, I will introduce her to you later.” Minami happily said

“Congratulation, Takamina” Tomo said

“Thank you.” Minami said

“By the way, can you take her back for me?” He asks

“Sure” Tomo said

“But my ankle…” Tomomi said

“Your ankle will be fine. Atsuko already checked for you. You just need to listen to her and rest.” Minami said and puts her down

Tomo comes and carries her on his back

“Thank you Tomo. See you two later” Minami said

“Takamina” Tomomi calls him

He stops and said

“Tomochin, I’m sorry, but there is a feeling that have to come from heart. Forcing a feeling will never be good. You should look at people around you, and ask your heart to understand what you really need. ” He said and rushes back to the place.

“Huh?” Tomo looks at them in confuse

“I won't accept this lost.” She mumbles

“What are you saying, Tomochin?” he asks in confuse

“Nothing” She said

“Anyway, are you ok? Does it still hurts?” Tomo puts her down and checks on her ankle while asking in worry tone

“I’m fine. There is nothing wrong with it” Tomomi stands up and said

“But Takamina said…”

“I’m tired, I will go back to my house now” Tomomi said cutting Tomo’s words

“Let’s me take you back” He said while following her

“I won’t accept this defeat. I have to see what side of her that better than me. I won’t accept this lost” She thought


At the skiing area

Atsuko is playing with snow while waiting for Minami. She draws Negi-chan on the snow and smiles happily. Suddenly some people step on her drawing and stands in front of her. She looks up and sees three men standing in front of her.

“My my, why there is a beautiful girl all alone here.” one of them said

Atsuko quickly stands up  and steps back.

“W...who are you?” Atsuko asks scarily

They smirk and surround her.

“What do you want?” She asks again

“We just want to ask you to play with us” the leader comes closer to Atsuko and said

“I don’t know you” Atsuko said

“We will know each other later” He said

“My boyfriend will come back here soon” Atsuko said

“Your boyfriend” They said and laugh together

“Don’t lie, cutie. If you have a boyfriend, he will never leave you alone like this. If yes, he must be have fun with other girls. Now let’s have fun with us” The man said and takes her hand

“Let’s go off me or I will call someone here” Atsuko slaps his hand away and said in trembling tone

Tear starts forming in her eyes

“Calling someone. Don’t joke cute girl. There is not much people around here. Even if you yell your lung out, there will be no one here” a man said

“Now be a good girl and go with us” He said and takes Atsuko’s hand again

“Let’s go off me, Minami, Minami” Atsuko calls Minami’s name scarily

At the moment

Minami is rushing back to the skiing area. Suddenly he hears Atsuko’s shaky voice

“Minami, Minami”

“Atsuko” Minami thought

He speeds up his speed. When he got to the place, he sees three men surrounding Atsuko, and one of them is pulling her hand. Minami is very angry. He rushes to them and shouts

“Get your filthy hand off my girlfriend, you jerk”

Then he punches the man that holding her arm very hard making him fall on the ground.

“Minami” Atsuko hugs Minami scarily

He can feel she is shaking

“I’m here, Atsuko. Don’t be scare” He pats her head and said

“Who do you think you are shorty? Don't interfere with my business” the man angrily shouts

“I’m her boyfriend and you are bothering her. That is my business” Minami shouts

He is very angry right now

“You two get him” He orders his men to attack Minami

“Come here. I will make anyone who make my Atsuko cry pay a very heavy price” He said in anger tone

Then he rushes to the men. Minami bends down to dodge the punch from the man on his left. Then he raises his feet and kicks his stomach making him fall on the round.

The other man rushes toward him from behind. Minami uses round kick to kick his face and then takes his collar and throws him aside.

After that Minami rushes to the boss and takes his collar. He strongly slams him down on the snowy ground. Then he raises his fist and punches hard on the ground near his face. The man looks at Minami with terrified eyes

“Let’s me warn you this, don’t ever, ever, ever come close to my girlfriend again. If I see you around here, marks my word, I won’t go easy like this next time. This punch will break your stupid face and more than that” Minami said angrily while looking at the man with anger eyes

Those three men are scared by his words. They quickly stand up and rush away

“Jerk” Minami said angrily

“Minami” Atsuko rushes to hugs Minami tightly from behind

“Sshh...I’m here Atsuko. Don’t be scared” Minami turns around to hugs her and gently said

“Luckily that I saw Tomo. If not I don’t want to image what will happen. Just only 5 minutes, those jerks” Minami angrily thought

Atsuko hugs him tighter while burying her face on his chest. Minami stands there and stroking her back to comfort.

After awhile

Minami gently asks her while lifting her face up

“Are you ok, Atsuko?”

“Uh, thank you, Minami” Atsuko said

“Minami, I want to go back to the hotel” she continues

“Ok, let’s take a rest. Tomorrow we will come back here and play ok” Minami said and smiles gently at her while wiping her tear

Atsuko gaps when seeing blood on Minami’s hand

“Minami, your hand. Is this injure because you bunch on the ground” Atsuko said in worry tone

“I’m fine, Atsuko. I will treat it when I get back to the hotel. So don’t worry ok” Minami said and pats her head

“Now let’s go Atsuko” Minami said

“Uh.” Atsuko nods

Then he takes her back to the hotel. Yuko is sitting at the receptionist table. Seeing them walk in she greets them

“Yoo Takamina, Acchan, how is the skiing? Why did you guy com…”

She stops when she notices Atsuko's tired face

“What's wrong?” she asks in worry tone

“Nothing, I’m just tired” Atsuko said

“Let's me take you to your room and rest ok” Minami said

“Uh, thank you, Minami” Atsuko said

“I will bring some hot tea for you to relax” Yuko said

“Thank you, Yuko” Minami said

Then he takes Atsuko up to their room. Minami helps Atsuko sit down on the bed.

“Are you ok, Atsuko?” he asks her in worried tone

“I’m fine, Minami. Just a little scared and tired” Atsuko smiles at him and said

“Then you should sleep a little. However, firstly, let's wait for Yuko to bring some tea for you. Maybe it will help you relax” Minami said

“Uh” Atsuko nods

Then they hear the knocking sound

“It must be Yuko. Let's me open the door for her” Minami said.

Then he goes and opens the door for Yuko.

“Here, Takamina” Yuko said and gives him the tray

“Thank you, Yuko” Minami said

He takes the tray and bring it into the room. He pours the tea out into a small cup and brings it to the bed

“Let's drink this Atsuko” Minami sits down and said in gently tone

“Thank you, Minami” Atsuko takes the cup and said

After drinking it, Minami helps her lie down. He pulls the blanket to cover her

“Let's sleep a little. I will call you when it is dinner time” Minami said

“Uh” Atsuko nods

“Rest well, Atsuko.” He kisses her forehead and said

Then Atsuko slowly falls in sleep with Minami sitting next to her and stroking her hair to comfort her. After Atsuko fells in sleep, Minami leaves the room

“What's wrong, Takamina?” Yuko asks worriedly

“She was scared by some jerks when I was not there. Luckily I came back on time. If not, I don't know what will happen.” Minami said

“I see. That is a very serious matter. Fortunately that you was back on time” Yuko said

“Uh” Minami nods

 “I should tell Riku to call security to patrol around this resort. It will be safer.” Yuko said

“Uh” Minami nods

Then he sighs again while looking down

“I shouldn't leave her alone after all. It was my fault” he said in sad tone

“Don't blame yourself about that. She is fine now. I believe a long sleep will help her to relax and forget everything.” Yuko said

“Uhm, I hope so.” Minami said

Then he goes back to their room to check on Atsuko.

In the evening

Atsuko wakes up after a good sleep. She sits up and looks around. She smiles when seeing Minami sitting on the sofa. He is doing something on his laptop. Atsuko smiles and stealthily walks down from the bed. She slowly walks toward him careful not to let him notice. Then she hugs him from behind and uses her hands to cover his eyes

“Who am I?” Atsuko asks in happy tone

Minami is taken by surprise. Then he smiles happily when hearing her cheerful tone.

“Who is it? I wonder” Minami said while smiling

“Is this…?” he said and pauses

“Is this my cute angel, Maeda Atsuko” Minami said

Then he takes her hands and pulls her down on his laps. Atsuko lost her balance and falls on Minami.

“Ouch…Minami” Atsuko said in surprise while frowning

Seeing that, Minami quickly said

“I’m sorry, Atsuko. Are you hurt?” he asks her while checking on her

Atsuko catches his face and pecks on his lips.

“I’m fine, Minami. Just a little surprise.” Atsuko said

Minami smiles at her. When Atsuko is about to stand up, Minami hugs her back to his laps

“Where are you going, Atsuko?” he asks

“No, I just want to sit down next to you” Atsuko said

“No need. I just want you to sit here. This place is for you” Minami said while smiling at her

“Ok” Atsuko nods shyly

“Are you feeling better now, Atsuko?” he asks while gently caressing her face

“Uh, a lot better” Atsuko said happily

“I’m now full of energy” she continues while holding her fists showing her energy to Minami

Minami laughs softly when seeing her doing that

“I’m glad” Minami pinches her nose and said

Atsuko turns and looks at the laptop’s screen. She sees a lot of pictures of different places around Europe. She turns and asks Minami

“What are you doing, Minami?”

“I’m planning for next week. I look at those places and decide where to take you next” He said

“I see. You are the best Minami” Atsuko hugs him tightly and said in happy tone

Her happy face makes him very happy. He breaks the hug and look at her

“Then where is my reward, Atsuko?” He asks her

“What do my awesome boyfriend want?” She asks him

“Hum….What do I want?” He said and smiles at her while tapping his lips.

Atsuko smiles at his action. She leans and kisses his lips lovingly. Minami hugs her and replies her kiss gently.

“Do you like that reward, Minami?” Atsuko asks

“A kiss from my princess, what more do I need. That is the best reward ever” He said and pinches her cheeks

Then he asks her

“Are you hungry, Atsuko?”

“Uh” Atsuko nods

“Then let’s go down to eat” He said

“Yes, I will add more power for tomorrow” Atsuko nods and said happily

“Uh” Minami smiles at her lovely face

Then they leave the room to the hotel restaurant


In another place

Tomomi is sitting on her desk and looks out at the skiing field.


3 years ago

While Tomomi is preparing to go skiing, her brother walks in with a young and handsome man. She widens her eyes in surprise when realized who he is

“Cold Prince?” she thought

“Riku-nii” Tomomi calls him

“Hey Tomochin, are you going to ski?” He asks

“Come here with me a little” Tomomi pulls him to the kitchen

“What is it, Tomochin?” Riku asks in surprise

“Riku-nii, is he the famous “Cold Prince” in school. The Takahashi Minami who good at every subject, sport, and more?” she asks him in small tone

“Yup, that is him. He is my old buddy in high school. After graduated here, he came back to Canada and attended medical university. He is now a young medical student” Riku said

“I see” Tomomi said while looking back at the front door

“Hey, Tomochin, what wrong with you today? Normally you don’t mind about those things” Riku asks in confuse

“Nothing. Just I heard a lot of rumors about him, so I’m curious” Tomomi said

“That is not rumor. He is a smart person.” Riku said

“I see. Just want to ask that. Now I will go skiing” Tomomi said

“Ok” Riku nods in confuse

Then they come out together. Minami is reading his book

“Sorry buddy, my sister wanted to ask me something” Riku said

“It is ok.” Minami said

“Also, here is my little sis, Tomomi.” Riku said

“Hello, my name Takahashi Minami, you can call me Takamina. Nice to meet you” Minami said and shakes her hand

“Uh...nice to meet you, too. You can call me Tomochin. My friends call me that” Tomomi said

“Ok” Minami nods

“Takamina, wait here, I will bring that book here for you.” he said

“Ok” Minami said

Then Riku goes up to his room to take it. Tomomi just stands there and look at him while Minami is still reading the book in his hand

“Uhm...Takamina” Tomomi calls him

“What is it, Tomochin?” Minami asks while looking up

“Do you live here?” she asks

“No, I just come here to take vacation. I live in Canada. I used to live here in high school” Minami answers.

Then he continues reading his book

“You seem to like reading a lot” She said

“Yep. He is a bookworm. In a day, most of his time is studying, the rest is for reading.” Riku said

“Uh, I like reading a lot. You can find a lot of interesting things here” Minami said

“Here Takamina, this is the guide book for around here.” Riku said and gives Minami the book

“Thank you. I leave now. Bye Riku” Minami said

“Also, bye Tomochin. See you two later” he said and smiles at them

“See ya” Riku said

“Uh...uh bye Takamina” she said

End flashback


While Tomomi walking to the skiing area with her friend, she sees Minami. He is skiing very fast and skilled. He looks very cool when he is doing that. Tomomi smiles and starts skiing toward his direction. When Minami stops, she also stops in front of him.

“Good morning, Takamina” Tomomi said

“Tomochin?” Minimi calls in surprise

“You are very skilled” she said

“Thank you. This sport is my favorite winter sport.” he said

“You also are very good. Just like a pro” Minami said

“Of course, my parents own this resort after all. I grow up with this” Tomomi said proudly

“You are right” Minami said

“When will you go back to Canada, Takamina?” she asks him

“This Saturday” Minami said

“Two more days” She thought

“Uhm...Takmina, will you come here tomorrow?” she asks

“Uh, just morning. Evening I will go into the city” Minami answers

“Would you like to go skiing like today? We will ski together” she asks

“Sure.” Minami nods

“I will go back now. See you later Tomochin” he said while looking at his watch

“Ok, see you tomorrow, Takamina” Tomomi said to him while smiling happily

End flashback

“I don’t believe that 3 years can’t compare to that short 1 month” Tomomi thought

At night

While Atsuko is playing with her laptop on her bed, Minami comes and gently hugs her from behind.

“Atsuko, I have a question to ask you” he said

“What is it, Minami?” Atsuko asks still playing with her laptop

“You knew that there is no problem with Tomochin’s ankle, right?” Minami asks

Atsuko stops playing and closes the laptop. Then she turns to look at Minami.

“Uh” Atsuko nods

“Then why did you let me take her back home?” he asks

“Because I knew you notice that too” Atsuko said

“She did that is because of you. Therefore, I want you to settle everything with Tomochin. I don’t want to flow her cover right there. It will be very hurt” Atsuko said

Minami looks at her and smiles gently

“I see, I never thought that my cute girlfriend is so thoughtful like an adult” Minami said in teasing tone

“What do you mean, Takamina? Am I that childish?” Atsuko asks while pouting

Minami looks at Atsuko and laughs loudly. Then something appears on his head. He turns around and pushes her beneath him. Atsuko looks at him while blushing

“Don’t you feel anything when I’m alone with Tomochin, Atsuko?” Minami asks

“Nope” Atsuko said while shaking her head

Minami looks at her with surprised look

“Really?” He asks her

“Uh, because I trust you, Minami” Atsuko leans on his ear and whispers

“I trust you completely” she said

Minami smiles widely at her words. Then he asks her another question in whisper tone

“Then you don't feel jealous right, Atsuko?”

“Who said that I don’t?” Atsuko pulls back and said in pouting tone

“Huh, but you just said that” he asks

“That feeling and this feeling are different. When seeing you give her piggyback, I was so jealous, but I had to endure that. However, I don’t want to see you carrying any girl on your back like that ever again, Minami” she pouts

“Of course, my back is only for you, my princess” Minami said and pecks her lips

“However, because you carried other girl on your back today. You have to be punish” Atsuko said

“But you give me the permission” Minami explains

“But I still feel so jealous about that” she reasons

Minami sighs in defeats

“Then what is my punishment then, princess?” Minami asks her

“ would be a very hard one” Atsuko said

Minami gulps while looking at Atsuko

“Uhm...your punishment is you have to carry me on your back every day, forever” Atsuko said

“Huh?” he thought in confused

Seeing Minami confused face, Atsuko laughing innocently

“Don’t worry Minami. I’m just kimhm…” When Atsuko is about to say that is just a joke, Minami already seals her lips with his

Then he breaks the kiss and smiles at her.

“I accept the punishment with no objection because after all this is the greatest punishment ever, Atsuko” Minami said while caressing her face

“Really, Minami?” Atsuko asks in surprised tone

“Of course. I will happily carries you on my back forever. That is what I really want to do” He said gently at her

Atsuko smiles lovingly at him

“I love you, Minami” Atsuko said while hugging him tightly

“I love you too, Atsuko” Minami said

After awhile Atsuko breaks the hugs and looks at Minami seriously.

“What’s wrong, Atsuko?” Minami asks in worry tone

“Actually I was so scared” Atsuko said

Minami looks at her in surprised look

“When I said to those men that you will come, they laughed at me and said that “your boyfriend properly are having fun with other girls right now”. Even though I knew that it is not true, you aren't that kind of people, my heart still hurt when hearing those words.” Atsuko said.

“Their words remind me of the incident when we just came here. I remembered Tomochin’s words about she is your girlfriend. Suddenly a thought appear in my head. I was so scared of that thought. I was so afraid of losing you, Minami. The first and only person I love with all my heart” Atsuko said honestly while tear starts rolling down on her cheeks

Minami is very happy when hearing what Atsuko said. He is happy because she trusts him. Also, he is happy because she loves him a lot. He smiles gently at her

“Thank you, Atsuko” Minami said gently

“Thank you for trusting and loving me, Atsuko” he continues

“You are also the first and only girl I love with all my heart. Only you can make my heart feels special. Let’s me tell you this, Atsuko. You will never lose me, and I will never let anything take you away from me. I will fight against everything even the whole world to have you by my side because you are mine and only mine, Atsuko” Minami said while caressing Atsuko's face

Atsuko smiles brightly at his words.

“I’m happy, Minami” Atsuko said

Then she leans up to peck his lips. When she is about to move back, Minami pushes her down while kissing her passionately. Atsuko closes her eyes feeling Minami's love full kiss. He kisses her intensely and roughly. Atsuko hugs his neck to pull him closer to her and deepen their kiss. Then Minami slips his tongue in Atsuko's mouth to explore while unbuttoning her shirt and caressing her skin. His action makes Atsuko moan softly. Then he moves his kisses to Atsuko's neck and marks her there. After that Minami pulls out to look at Atsuko. He laughs softly while looking at Atsuko's cute blushed face. He said

“You are so cute, Atsuko”

“I love you very much” he whispers

“I love you, too Minami” Atsuko caresses his face and said

Then Minami kisses her lips again, and that night they drown into their own world of love


Hope you guys enjoy reading this  :D

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Re: [Atsumina's OS collection] Power of Love (Atsumina) Part 7 23/04/2016
« Reply #121 on: April 23, 2016, 01:13:13 PM »
Uh.. in one moment situation wasn't very, nice when those jerks came.. At least her prince was back in time.  :D
Hehe.. in the end day really ended quite good..  :roll: XD
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[Atsumina's OS collection] Power of Love (Atsumina) Part 8 30/04/2016
« Reply #122 on: April 30, 2016, 03:08:48 AM »
@Saint0angel, @black_maa: Thank you!  :D

Thank you everyone for reading my fic!  :D

Here is part 8  :)

Power of Love

Part 8

In the morning

Minami wakes up. He smiles when seeing his angle still sleeping soundly in his embrace. He kisses her lips and calls her gently


Atsuko opens her eyes and smiles at him

“Good morning, my love” he said and smiles at her

“Good morning, Minami” Atsuko rubs her eyes and said in sleepy tone

“Let’s prepare and go skiing Atsuko” Minami said

“Ok” Atsuko nods

After preparing everything, they leave the room. When they just got out of the room, Minami suddenly bends down and lifts Atsuko up on his back.

“Minami, what are you doing?” Atsuko asks him in surprise tone while hugging his neck to keep her balance

“Doing my duty. Carrying my princess on my back every day” Minami said happily

“But not right here, Minami. It is embarrassed. Everyone is looking at us” Atsuko said shyly

“That doesn't matter. I just show my love to my Atsuko.” Minami laughs softly and said

“That married couple is co cute”

“They are so admirable”

“They are adorable”

“They are so cute together”

A lot of people whisper about Minami and Atsuko

“How great it is, Atsuko. They thought we are a married couple.” Minami said happily while Atsuko is hiding her face on his neck because of embarrassed

However Minami can feel her smile on his neck. When they get down stair, Atsuko said

“Minami, put me down.”

“Why?” Minami asks

“I...I want to hold your hand and walk together with you” Atsuko said shyly in small tone

Minami smiles widely at her words

“Of course” he said and puts her down on her feet

After that they happily walks out of the hotel together while holding each other hand. When they step outside,

“Wow, it is cold” Atsuko said while hiding behind Minami

“Uh, it is a little colder today.” Minami nods

He turns to Atsuko and said

“Wear your scarf a little higher so it will be warmer.”

Then he gently fix her scarf and also her hat.

“Also I got this for you” Minami said

He wears an earmuff for Atsuko

“Yesterday, I saw you kept putting your hands on your ears. They are cold, right?” Minami said

“Uh” Atsuko nods

“That is why I have this for you” Minami said and smiles at Atsuko

“When we ski, I will wear the helmet for you. However, for now, wear this to keep warm” he smiles and said to her

“Thank you, Minami” Atsuko said and kisses his cheek

Riku and Yuko are cleaning and checking some skiing materials outside. Seeing Atsuko and Minami are so happy together, they walk toward them and said in teasing tone

“You two are so sweet this early morning”

Atsuko and Minami turn to the source of the sound, and they see Yuko and Riku

“Good morning Riku, Yuko” Atsuko happily greets them

“Hey, since when did you two come here?” Minami asks

“We were here even before you two come out. You are so busy taking care of your lovely girlfriend that you didn't notice us” Yuko said in teasing tone

Atsuko blushes at her words. Minami coughs to hide his embarrassment. Yuko and Riku look at them and giggle

“Anyway, you two also go skiing today, huh?” Yuko asks

“Uh” Minami nods

“Where will you go, Takamina?” Riku asks

“The same as yesterday. We will go to the skiing area in the other side. There is less people there. It is suit for me to teach Atsuko how to ski. Also that place, the slope is not so high. It will be safer for her” Minami answers

Yuko and Riku look at each other and giggle. Minami looks at them with confused look

“What now?” He asks

“Nothing” Riku and Yuko shrug

Then Riku turns to Yuko and said

“I never thought he is that sweet, Yuko. I’m still surprised because of that” 

“Yes, me too. This is the first time I see a “Cold Prince” Takamina being so caring.” Yuko agrees while giggling at Minami

“Cold Prince?” Atsuko said in confuse

“That is Takamina’s nickname when we study in high school” Yuko said

“Uh, he was called “Cold Prince”.” Riku said

“Why is “Cold Prince,” Minami?” Atsuko asks him in curious tone

“Don’t mind about that, Atsuko. I also don’t get it myself” Minami said

“That is easy” Yuko said

“In high school, he is very popular among girls because he is smart and handsome. He is also the top student in school, and the student council president. A lot of girls follow him, confessed to him, but he didn’t look at any of them even the prettiest girl in school. All he done is studying. That is why he got that name” Riku explains

“Oh” Atsuko nods

“I told you two before, everything has to come with feeling. I don't have any feeling for them. Moreover, I don’t even know who they are, so why bother.” Minami said

“After all, my heart will know my soul mate” he entwines his hand with Atsuko and said while looking at her lovingly

Atsuko looks at him and smiles gently

“That is why I said Acchan completely captured the “Ice Heart” of our “Cold Prince”.” Riku said

“Uh, but that isn't surprise since she is very cute and lovely. She has a very special aura that not any person has. Right, Takamina?” Yuko asks and winks at him

“Of course, my Atsuko is the cutest” Minami proudly said while hugging Atsuko’s shoulder

“Minami” Atsuko calls him shyly

“By the way Acchan, what do you feel about this “Cold Prince” that make you fall for him?” Yuko asks curiously

Atsuko blushes at her question. Minami also looks at Atsuko seriously waiting for her answers

“ can I say it?” Atsuko said

“He is very special to me. So special that I can't describe by words. I just feel it by my heart. Since the first day I met him, my heart keeps telling me that he is my second half, my soul mate. This is the first time I know how loving someone like. It is so special” she answers honestly while looking at Minami

“Also he is very cute and nice” she smiles brightly and continues

Minami is very happy when hearing those words from Atsuko.

“Aww!!! How sweet! You are so cute, Acchan” Yuko said and pinches Atsuko's cheeks

“If I were a man, I would definitely fall for you. You are just so cute. Soooo cute!!” she continues while hugging Atsuko

“Maybe I already fell for you, Acchan. You are soo adorable!” She continues while keep hugging Atsuko

“Hey, don't hug my girlfriend and say thing like that.” Minami pulls Atsuko into his arm and said

“You don't have to be that jealous. I’m also a girl like her, so hugging is fine” Yuko said

“Not fine with what you just said. Plus you are famous in school as a pervert. I thought when you got married you changed, but you are still a pervert with girl” Minami said

“Riku, you should keep your pervert wife away from my Atsuko” he continues while glaring Yuko

“I will protect my cute girlfriend from you” he said

“Bakamina” Yuko calls him

“That is just how I show my feeling to any cute girl.” she mumbles

“Hahaha….ok, ok. You sure changed a lot Takamina. It is a good thing though” Riku said

Then he turns to Yuko

“Don't pouting like that. How about I will take you out for a date, and you can do whatever you want, my lovely wife?” He said

Yuko turns to look at Riku. Her eyes turn brighter

“Sound great, when?” she asks excitedly

“This evening” he answers

“Great” she happily said

“I love you most, my Riku” she said and kisses his cheek

Atsuko and Minami look at them and smile

“Ok, newlywed, we will go skiing now leaving the space for you two.” Minami said in teasing tone

“Or you want “alone time” with your Atsuko” Yuko said in teasing tone while emphasizing her words

Minami and Atsuko blush be her words

“S...shut up. Anyway, see you two later” he shouts in embarrassed

Then he takes Atsuko’s hand and pulls her with him. Yuko and Riku laugh at his action. Then they said and wave at them

“Ok, have fun”

When they just went out, they see Tomo rushing to them

“Good morning, Takamina” He said while smiling at him

“Good morning, Tomo” Minami greets him

“Who is it, Minami?” Atsuko asks him

“His name is Kasai Tomo. He is tomochin’s childhood friend” Minami introduces him to Atsuko

“Tomo as I told you before this is my girlfriend. Her name is Maeda Atsuko.” he introduces Atsuko

“Hello Maeda-san. My name is Kasai Tomo, nice to meet you” Tomo greets her

“Nice to meet you too” Atsuko shakes his hand and said

“Uhm...Takamina, can you do me a favor?” Tomo asks him hesitantly

Atsuko and Minami look at each other with confused look. Then Minami asks him

“What is it, Tomo?”

“ little cousin is sick, but she doesn't want to go to doctor. You know kid always like that” Tomo said while scratching his head

“Uh, so…?” Minami nods and said

“Her parents and I used a lot of way to convince her to go to doctor, but she refused. Finally, when I said I have a friend who is doctor, she said that, if you come, she will let you check her health.” Tomo explains

“So Takamina, can you come to my house to check on her health for me?” he asks while bowing

Minami laughs at his action

“Tomo, you don't have to be like that. Just ask me normally. I’m gladly to help you” he said

Then he turns to Atsuko

“Seem like we have to postpone our plan this morning, Atsuko. We will get back here and play after I finish” he said

“No problem, Minami” Atsuko smiles and said

“Let's go Tomo” Minami said

“Thank you, Takamina” Tomo said happily

“This way, Takamina. My house is not far from here. About 20 minutes.” He said

“Ok, let's go Atsuko” Minami said

“Uh” Atsuko nods

Then he holds Atsuko's hand and follows Tomo. Suddenly he turns back and looks at them reluctantly.


“What's wrong, Tomo?” Minami asks

“Uhm…” he scratches his head reluctantly

Atsuko looks at Tomo, then she speaks up

“Ah, I almost forgot.”

Minami turns to look at Atsuko

“What's wrong, Atsuko?” he asks her

“I promised my auntie that I will call her this early morning, and I almost forgot. Minami, how about you go with him to his house? I will wait for you in the hotel. When you get back, we will go skiing, ok” Atsuko said

Minami looks at her hesitantly. He doesn't want to leave her alone

“I will be fine, Minami. Just go” Atsuko said

“O...k” Minami answers

“Wait for me in the hotel. Don't go out alone, ok” he said in worry tone

“Uh, I know. After talking to her, if you aren't back yet, I will play game and wait for you” Atsuko said

“Ok” Minami said

Then he turns to Tomo and asks

“Tomo, can you wait for me here. I will take Atsuko back to hotel, first”

“Uh” Tomo nods

“Now let's go back to the hotel, Atsuko” Minami said

“Ok” Atsuko nods

Then he takes her back to their room.

In their room

“I will be right back” Minami said

“Uh, bye Minami” Atsuko pecks his lips and said

Minami bends down and kisses her lips deeply. Atsuko hugs his neck and replies his kiss passionately. They kiss until they out of air. Then they break the kiss.

“I need energy to work” Minami said and pinches Atsuko cheeks

Atsuko smiles brightly at him. Then he leaves the room.

At Tomo’s house

“Takamina, please wait here a little. My uncle will bring my cousin here shortly” Tomo said

“Ok.” Minami nods

After 30 minutes

Tomo’s cousin came. That is a very cute little girl.

“Tomo-niichan, where is Dr-san?” She asks Tomo innocently

Minami stands up and walks closer to her

“Hello little girl, my name is Takahashi Minami. I’m your doctor. Will you let me check on your health?” Minami asks her while smiling gently at her

“You are Dr-san, wow” She said in amazed tone

“Just call me Takamina-niichan” Minami smiles and said

“Ok, Takamina-niichan” She nods and said

“Takamina, I will go out a little. You just check on her health” Tomo said

“Ok” Minami nods

Then Tomo leaves the living room.

Inside the room

Minami lifts her up on the sofa. Then he bends down and asks her

“Now tell Takamina-niichan, what is your name?”

“My name is Izumi” She said

“Izumi-chan, how old are you?” Minami asks

“I’m 7 years old” She said

“Ok, Izumi-chan, how do you feel now?” Minami asks her

“My nose is running. I also sneeze a lot.” Izumi said

“I see, now let’s me check your temperature.” Minami said

Then he starts checking on her health.


In the hotel

In front of Atsuko’s and Minami’s room

Tomomi is standing at the door. She is hesitant to knock the door. She closes her eyes and thinks. After thinking, tomomi decides to knock the door. When she is about to knock, the door suddenly opens. Atsuko is a little surprise when seeing her, but then she smiles at her

“Good morning, Tomochin” she said

Tomomi is a little surprised at Atsuko's normal face

“Why she just showed a little surprise when seeing me here?” She thought

When Tomochin is about to say something, Atsuko asks

“Are you free, Tomochin?”

“U...uh” Tomomi nods in confuse

“Let's go out and play. Minami is busy treating Tomo’s cousin.” She said and pulls Tomomi with her

Tomomi just follow Atsuko with confuse.

“Why she look so normal?” Tomomi asks

Then Atsuko turns and asks Tomomi

“Tomochin, where is your favorite place, here?”

“In the east side of the resort, near the place you two went skiing yesterday” Tomomi answers

“Why did you asks?” she asks

“Let's go there and play” Atsuko said excitedly

“Why?” Tomomi asks

“I just want to go there.” Atsuko said

“But why?” Tomomi asks again

“I want to see what the place looks like. Please show me that place, Tomochin. Please” Atsuko said while giving her her puppy eyes

Tomomi sighs in defeat

“Ok.” she nods

“Yatta!” Atsuko jumps happily

“She is more childish than I thought” Tomomi thought

“I wonder why Takamina love her?” she looks at Atsuko and mumbles to herself

After walking for awhile

“Here is my favorite spot” Tomomi said

They are standing at a very beautiful place which covered with a lot of snow. Everything is very white

“Wow!!! So cool” Atsuko runs around and said

Tomomi shakes her head while looking at Atsuko’s childish face.

“Just like a kid” She thought

Tomomi stands there and keeps looking at Atsuko who is playing with snow innocently and happily. Her innocent face makes Tomomi smiles unconsciously

“She is very pure. What a cute girl” she thought

Realizing what she just thought, she shakes her head to erase the thoughts

“No, I can't think about my rival like that”

Then she turn to look at the white field and takes a deep breath

“This is very relaxing” she thought and smiles happily

“It is very relaxing to come to the place we like, right?” Atsuko suddenly speaks up

Tomomi turns and looks at Atsuko with surprised look. Atsuko looks at her and smiles.

“That is what I always do whenever I feel so stress when studying. I will go to my favorite place, take a deep breath and enjoy the view. All my worrieness will go away” she said

Tomomi is very surprise.

“She noticed my thought” she thought

Then she looks at Atsuko

“She is not so immature and childish as she looks” she thought


“Huh?” Atsuko looks at Tomomi and asks

“Did you notice that my ankle doesn't hurt? Also did you know that Tomo helps me to bring Takamina away?” Tomomi asks seriously

Atsuko looks at Tomomi

“Uh, I knew that your ankle didn’t hurt. However about today, I just thought that there is something wrong. Therefore I decided to stay in hotel. After I saw you at my door, I understand some of it” she said

“Then why didn't she reveal it to Takamina?” she asks

“Because I’m a girl like you” Atsuko said

Tomomi looks at Atsuko with surprised look

At Tomo’s house

After a while, Minami finished checking on her.

“You are fine. Just a little cold. I will tell your daddy to buy you medicines, ok” He said

“Thank you Takamina-niichan” She said while smiling innocently at him

“See Izumi-chan, Dr. is not so scary, right. From now on, whenever you are sick, you have to let your daddy take you to doctor, ok” Minami said

“Izu doesn’t afraid of Dr.” Izumi said

Minami looks at her with surprised look

“Izu really likes doctor. I want to become doctor in the future.” She said to him

“Tomo? What does this mean?” Minami thought

“I see, Izumi is a good girl” Minami pats her head and said

After saying goodbye to Tomo’s brother and cousin, Minami goes back to the hotel.

On their way

“Thank you Takamina, if you weren’t there, I don’t know what to do” Tomo said

“Why did you lie, Tomo?” Minami asks seriously

Tomo turns to him and asks in confused tone

“What are you talking about, Takamina?”

“Your cousin told me that she like doctor a lot. She also wants to become doctor in the future” Minami said

“Uhm…” Tomo scratches his head while looking down

“I felt a little strange since this morning. You acted very weird, Tomo. What’s wrong?” Minami asks

“I...I...I’m sorry for lying to you, Takamina” Tomo bows deeply and said

Minami looks at him with confused look

“Why did you lie?” He asks

“T..Tomochin wants to talk to your girlfriend a little” Tomo said

“What?” Minami shouts in surprise

“What does she want to talk to Atsuko?” He asks

“I don’t know. Tomochin asked me to help her, so I did this” Tomo shakes his head and said

“What does she want?” Minami thought while scratching his head

Then he quickly takes out his phone and calls her. However he doesn’t hear any response. Minami quickly rushes back to the hotel with Tomo following him from behind. Yuko and Riku are sitting at the main hall while talking to each other.  Seeing Takamina, Riku greets

“Hey Taka…..”

Haven't finished his words, Minami already rushes to his room

“Atsuko” He thought while rushing to their room

“Atsuko” He opens the doors and calls Atsuko loudly

However the room is empty. He takes out his phone and calls Atsuko again.

*ring* *ring* *ring*

Minami hears her ring tone. He rushes to their bed and sees her phone there.

"She forgot her phone here" He thought

Then Minami quickly turns and rushes back to the main hall


After talking to Atsuko for awhile. Tomomi smiles and turns to look at the view

"I admitted my lost." She thought

"Tomochin" Atsuko calls her worriedly

She turns to looks at Atsuko and said

"Now I know why he is in love with you so deep like that, Acchan." she said

Atsuko smiles at her

"Humm...I wonder when will I find someone who love me like you two love each other" Tomomi said

"I believe you will find the person who love you more than anything soon, Tomochin" Atsuko said

"No, let's me rephrase my sentence. Just look around you and you will see that person" She continues

Tomomi looks at her with confused look. Then she remembers Minami words

"You should look at people around you, and ask your heart to understand what you really need"

"What do you mean, Acchan? Takamina told me the same that" she asks in confuse

"Look in your heart and you will know" Atsuko said

"Now let's go to another place to play" she continues while pulling Tomomi

*Rumble* *Rumble*

Suddenly Tomomi hears some strange sound. Following it is the ground shaking

"Don't tell me" Tomomi said

"Acchan, let's get out of here. There will be a avalanche" She said in hurry

Then she pulls Atsuko to run out of the place.

"Where is that cave? I know it is somewhere around here" Tomomi thought while looking around

Then she spots the cave

"Let's go there, Acchan" Tomomi said

Then they all run to the cave to evade the snowslide.

Inside the cave

Atsuko and Tomomi sit down while panting. Then Atsuko notices Tomomi's strange expression. She comes to her and asks in worry tone

"Are you ok, Tomochin?"

"My ankle" Tomomi said

"Let's me see" Atsuko said

She looks at her ankle. It swells and is so red

"Tomochin, your ankle is hurt very bad." Atsuko said in worry tone

Then she turns outside and sees that the avalanche stopped already

"Tomochin, you stay here. I will call for help" Atsuko said

"No, it is dangerous. As my experience, there will not only be one avalanche here. If you go out now, it is too dangerous" Tomomi said

"Don't worry, Tomochin. I will be fine. Your ankle need to be treated right away" Atsuko said

"But..." Tomomi looks at her with worried eyes

"I will be fine. Wait for me, I will be right back" Atsuko said

Then she rushes out of the cave.

"I should be quick" Atsuko thought

Suddenly she hears another rumble. It is bigger than the other one. When Atsuko looks up, she sees a lot of snow sliding down from the mountain toward her place. 

At the same time

At the hotel

Yuko and Riku look at each other with confused look. Then they turn to Tomo and ask

“Tomo, what's wrong with him?”

“Uhm…” Tomo scratches his head doesn't know what to say because he promised to Tomomi to keep this as secret

“Not you too, Tomo. What's wrong?” Riku asks


When Tomo is about to say something, Minami already rushed down and calls Riku


He turns to look at Minami with confused look

“Riku, where is your sister? Where is Tomochin?” Minami holds his arms and asks in worry tone

“What's wrong, Takamina?” Yuko asks in confuse

“Where is Tomochin?” Minami repeats in serious tone

“She is at her house. I guess” Riku said

“Tomo, did she tell you where will she go with Atsuko?” Minam turns to Tomo and asks

“I...I don’t know. She just said that she wants to talk privately with Acchan a little” Tomo said

Minami then rushes out of the hotel.

“Wait Takamina” Riku catches his hand to stop him

“What’s wrong?” He asks

“I have to look for Atsuko” Minami withdraws his hand and rushes out of the hotel

Riku and Yuko turn to Tomo and ask

“What’s wrong, Tomo?”

Tomo told them everything. Then they rush out of the hotel to look for them with Minami. 


“Atsuko, Atsuko” Minami calls her while running around

“Acchan, Tomochin” Riku and Yuko call them

“Tomochin” Tomo calls out loud

Suddenly Tomo remembers a place which Tomomi very like.

“Tomochin could be in that place” Tomo said

“Where is it, Tomo?” Minami asks

“It is near the skiing area at the east side of this resort” Tomo said

“Let’s go there” Minami said

Suddenly Riku’s phone rings

“Hello” Riku said

“What?” he shouts in surprise

Everyone turns to look at him

“Ok, I got it” He said

Then he hangs up

“What happened, Riku?” Yuko asks

“There is a big avalanche at the east side of the skiing area just now.” Riku said

Minami widens his eyes in surprise. Suddenly his heart beats faster.

“What did you say, Riku?” He holds his arms and asks

“My security just told me that just now there is a big avalanche at the east side of the skiing area.” Riku said

“Atsuko, Atsuko” Minami thought

Then he turns around and rushes to the place

“Takamina waits for us” Yuko shouts

Then they run after Minami. When they reach the place, it was covered with a thick layer of snow

“Atsuko” Minami shouts loudly

“Let’s split up to find them” Riku said

“Ok” they nods

They rushes to different ways to find Atsuko and Tomomi

After 15 minutes

“Atsuko, Atsuko” Minami calls her while looking around

“Please be safe my love.” he thought while holding his fists tightly

Suddenly his phone rings. It is Riku who calls him

“Did you find Atsuko?” Minami asks

“We found Tomochin” Riku said

His eyes shines up the hope and happiness

“Where are you?” Minami asks

“The place where we splitted up” Riku answers

Minami quickly rushes back there in the hope of seeing Atsuko again.

“Takamina” Yuko waves at him

Minami smiles happily and rushes to them. However, when he reaches the place, he doesn't see Atsuko.

“Where is Atsuko?” he asks

Everyone looks down at Minami's question

“Where is Atsuko?” Minami asks again with a strong tone

“We just found Tomochin in a cave. She said that because her leg is injured, Atsuko told her to stay in the cave and waits for her to find the helpers” Yuko said

“So where is Atsuko?” Minami asks again the same question

“We....haven't found her yet” Riku said

Minami thought that his heart is about to stop when hearing that.

At the same time,

Tomo takes Tomochin back. Minami rushes to them

“What did you want to talk to her? Did you fake your leg hurt again to trick her. Why did you do that?” Minami holds Tomochin’s arms tightly and said in loud tone

“I’m sorry, Takamina” Tomochin said

“Why did you do that?” Minami asks angrily

He is now very worry for Atsuko that he can't control his anger

“Calm down, Takamina” Tomo pulls him out and said

“I can't. Atsuko is out there. What if she was caught in the avalanche? My Atsuko” Minami said

“I bet this time she also fake hurting…”

Haven't finishes his words, Tomo strongly punches him at his face making him fall on the ground

“I won't allow anyone shouts at Tomochin like that.” Tomo angrily said

“Tomo” Tomochin is surprised with his action

"Don't you see that her leg is hurt very bad" He shouts

"I know that you worry about Maeda-san, but you can't shout at Tomochin like that" Tomo continues

“Shut up. A coward like you don't have any position to lecture me.” Minami stands up and said

He rushes to Tomo and punches him hard at his face. Tomo wants to punches back, but Minami dodged. Then Minami takes his collar and said

“You can't even confess to the girl you love then don't say that out loud”

Minami punches him again making him falls on the ground. Tomo stands up.

“Yes, I’m a coward. I’m too coward to confess. However, that doesn't mean I will forgive anyone who hurt the girl I love” He shouts and rushes to pushes Minami one the ground

“The girl I love” Tomochin thought in surprise

“He love me” she mumbles

“You two cut it out” Riku shouts

He rushes to hold Tomo out while Yuko calm Minami down

“Calm down, Takamina. Now is not the time to fight crazily with each other like this. What important is we have to look for Acchan” Yuko said

Hearing Atsuko's name, Minami slowly calm down. He stands up and fixes himself. Then he turns and walks away without looking at Tomo or Tomomi. When he is about to walk away, Riku calls him and said

“Takamina, I have a question”

“What is it?” Minami asks

“If a person is buried under the snow, how long can that person survive?” he asks

His question makes Minami's heart stops for moment. He doesn't want to think about that possibility. He is so scared of that thought

“About 15-35 minutes. Still depend on their position under the snow” Minami said in shaky tone

Yuko looks at her watch.

“We still have 10 minutes.” she thought

“I will call more security here to look for Acchan. Let's find her quickly.” she said

“Atsuko” Minami rushes to look for Atsuko

“Please be safe, Atsuko” Minami thought shakily


Hope you guys enjoy reading this  :D
Fic Index

OS & Short Story
Atsumina's OS collection
     +[OS] Forever and Ever
     +[Short Story] I Love You (Completed)
     +[OS] Promise
     +[Short Story] My Lovely Ojou-sama (Completed)
     +[OS] Perfect Valentine
     +[OS] Our Love Story
     +[Short Story] Power of Love (Completed)
     +[Short Story] Escape (Completed)
     +[Short Story] My Feeling for You (Completed)
     +[OS] Miracle of Christmas
     +[OS] Christmas Wish

Fateful Encounter (Atsumina, Wmatsui) (Completed)
Beyond The Sea (Atsumina, Mayuki, Kojiyuu, Wmatsui, Marimii) (Completed)
Key of Happiness (Atsumina, Kojiyuu, Wmatsui) (Completed)
Mission of Love (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) (Completed)

Offline black_maa

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Re: [Atsumina's OS collection] Power of Love (Atsumina) Part 8 30/04/2016
« Reply #123 on: April 30, 2016, 12:53:30 PM »
NOOo!!!! Atsukoo!!!!  :shocked  Where are you!? :O
Oh my... oh my.. .
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Re: [Atsumina's OS collection] Power of Love (Atsumina) Part 8 30/04/2016
« Reply #124 on: April 30, 2016, 03:00:34 PM »
update soon . please :D

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[Atsumina's OS collection] Power of Love (Atsumina) Part 9 07/05/2016
« Reply #125 on: May 07, 2016, 04:00:01 AM »
@black_maa, @AI712: Thank you!  :D

Thank you everyone for reading my fic  :D

Here is part 9  :)

Power of Love

Part 9

At the eastside

Minami rushes around the place near the cave where Tomochin was found because she properly not went too far from that.

“Atsuko, please” Minami thought

Another 5 minutes already passed. A lot of people still look for Atsuko

“Atsuko” Minami calls her loudly




The last 5 minutes passed by with pain to Minami.

“Atsuko, where are you?” Minami thought

Suddenly, Minami sees a small piece of a white scarf on the snow.

“A scarf” Minami thought

He quickly rushes to it and pulls it out.

“Atsuko’s scarf.” Minami thought

“Atsuko, Atsuko” Minami calls loudly while looking around

“If her scarf here, she has to be near here” Yuko said

Then they all gather to that place and look for her

“Atsuko, ATSUKO” Minami calls loudly

They looks everywhere for Atsuko until sunset. However, there is still no sign of Atsuko.

“Takamina, we should go back now. It is already late. It is very hard to look for her at night.” Riku said

“Uh, maybe Atsuko already found a safe place to hide. We will continue looking for her early tomorrow” Yuko said

“Leave me alone. I won't go back until I see her.” Minami said

“Takamina, 35 minutes already passed long ago. If she was…”

“Shut up” cutting Riku’s word, Minami shouts while holding his collar

“She will be fine. I will find her. Don't ever say that to me” he angrily said

Then he continues looking for her

“Atsuko, please come out here.” Minami

“Where are you, Atsuko?” He continues shouting

Then with the flashlight in his hand, Minami rushes around to look for Atsuko in the cold night


In a cave

There is a small figure sitting cowerly. The person is Atsuko. She is shaking because of cause and hungry.


Atsuko is standing there and looking at a lot of snow rolling toward her.

“Another avalanche. This is bad” she thought while looking around

Fortunately, she notices a cave opposites of her. Atsuko quickly rushes to the cave and jumps into it before the snow rushes down the ground with rock. Atsuko looks at it and sighs in relief. However the cave is blocked by the rock and snow.

End flashback

Suddenly she hears someone's voice


"Atsuko, where are you?"

“Minami” Atsuko thought happily

She quickly stands up and takes out a small flashlight in her pocket

“Luckily Tomochin gave me this” Atsuko thought

Then she rushes to the front cave which was blocked by rock and very thick snow. There is a small opening at the top of the cave where she can breathe. Atsuko tries her best to climb on these rock to the hole. She calls Minami through the hole.

“Minami, Minami”

She flashes the dim light from her flashlight hoping Minami can see it.

“Minami” she calls him again

Back to Minami

Minami keeps running around and calls Atsuko loudly


Suddenly he hears a very faintly voice


“Atsuko?” Minami thought

Then he hears her voice again. He looks around trying to trace where the voice come from.


“This way” Minami thought

Then he rushes to the sources of the sound. When Minami reaches the place, he sees a small light, but suddenly it disappears. Minami rushes around and uses his flashlight to look for Atsuko.

“Atsuko, are you here. Please answer me” Minami calls loudly

“Minami” Atsuko calls

“Minami, I’m inside a cave. I’m blocked. My flashlight is out of batteries.” Atsuko said

Minami moves his flashlight to trace the cave. When he sees the cave, he quickly rushes to it. He climbs on the rocks and looks through the small gap. He smiles widely when seeing his lover.

“Atsuko” Minami calls her happily

“Minami” Atsuko smiles at him

He tries to extent his arm to caress Atsuko's face.

“Atsuko wait for me. I will take you out real quick, ok” he said

“Uh” Atsuko nods

Then he rushes to Riku and the rest.


Because Minami refused to go back, Riku have to call his security to build a temporary camp. Minami rushes to them and shouts

“I found her. I found Atsuko”

Yuko and Riku smile at each other. Then all of them follows Minami.

After 30 minutes

They finally remove the rocks blocking the cave.

“Atsuko” Minami quickly rushes into the cave

“Minami” Atsuko calls Minami happily

He rushes to her and hugs her tightly

“Atsuko, I’m so glad. I’m so glad” he said in tear while burying his face on her neck

“Me too, Minami. I’m so happy….” Atsuko said

Then she faint in his arm because of tiredness

“Atsuko, Atsuko” Minami calls her worriedly

He quickly checks on her. He smiles in relief when realizing that she only faints because of tiredness. After that he lifts her on his back and carries her back to the hotel.

In Minami's room

Atsuko wakes up. She sits up and looks around to find Minami. Then she hears the sound of the door opens. Minami comes in with a tray of food in his hand.

“You are awake, Atsuko” Minami said happily

“Uh.” Atsuko nods and smiles at him

Minami puts the tray down and sits on the bed.

“How do you feel now, Atsuko?” he strokes her hair and asks in worry tone

“I’m fine now, Minami” Atsuko leans to pecks on his lips and said

“Good” he smiles and said

Then Minami takes the bow and said

“Now let's eat something. Then go back to rest again, ok Atsuko”

“Ok” Atsuko nods

He gently blow the spoon of porridge to cool down a little. Then he said

“Say ah, Atsuko”

“I can eat by myself, Minami” Atsuko said shyly

“No, I have to take care of my lovely girlfriend.” Minami said lovingly

“Now Atsuko, be a good girl and say ah” he continues

“Minami, I’m not a kid” Atsuko pouts

Minami looks at her and laughs softly

“Ok, ok. Now say ah” He said, and Atsuko nods shyly.

Then she sits there for Minami to feed her. After awhile, Minami finished feeding her.

“Ok, let's lie down and sleep a little more, Atsuko” Minami said

“Uh, thank you, Minami” Atsuko kisses his cheek and said

Then he helps Atsuko to lie down.

“Rest well, Atsuko” Minami kisses her lips and said

“Uh” Atsuko nods

He sits on his bed and looks at sleeping Atsuko while stroking her hair. Her lips form a small curve. He smiles when seeing that.

“She must be have a good dream.” He thought

Suddenly he hears knocking sound

*Knock* *Knock* *Knock*

He stands up and walks toward the door. He opens and sees Tomomi standing there

“Hello, Takamina” she said

“Hi” Minami said

“Do you have a moment?” she asks him

Minami turns and looks at Atsuko. Then he turns back and said

“Uh” he nods

They come out of the room and go outside of the hotel. Minami stands there and looks at the night sky silently while Tomochin is sitting on the bench because her ankle still hurt a little. Then Minami turns to her and bows deeply

“Tomochin, please forgive my rudeness today. Atsuko told me everything. She said that you helped her. You also stopped her from going out. I’m really sorry”

“It's ok, Takamina. I know you were like that because you worry about her. I understand that” Tomomi said

“However, I have to thank you for that” she continues

“Thank me?” Minami said in confuse

“Uh” Tomomi nods

“Thank to you that I realized the mixed feeling in me. My false feeling and my real feeling” she said and looks at the hotel’s door

Minami turns and looks at where Tomomi looks. He smiles when seeing Tomo. He is hiding there while secretly looking at them. Seeing them turning at his direction, he quickly hides.

“That is your real feeling, right?” Minami said

“Uh” Tomomi nods

“I always believe that I’m very smart. However the truth is I’m a stupid one. Even after hearing yours and Acchan's hinting about this, I still doesn't realize until that incident.” Tomomi said

“Tomo is a very calm person. He is very nice. So nice that sometime everyone will think that he is so weak. However, today, he just shows me a side that even I have never seen. That is when I realized my false and real feeling”

“When I entered high school, I heard a lot of rumors about an honor student whose name is Takahashi Minami.” Tomomi starts her story

“He is a very smart and talented student. Then I saw his picture when I joined the student council. He has a very special aura. As the time goes by, my admiration for him grew more and more when hearing all different stories about him.” she continues

Minami turns and looks at her with surprised look

“Then in my head appeared a thought. I wonder if everything is true. Did they exaggerate it? Is there a person like that? I kept my thought until I graduated. I thought I will forget about that extraordinary person. However, I still can't get him out of my mind. Maybe it is because that is the first time I admire someone.” Tomochin said and laughs

“I kept wondering if I ever can verify my wondering. Then I met him in person. He really looks very special just like in the picture. He also looks very cool, and his knowledge is unbelievable”

“Then I have another thought in my head. I believed that he and I would be perfect together because I’m also an honor and talented student. However, just as the rumor, he is not interested in anything even love. Therefore I did a lot of thing to get his attention including playing some pranks on him. However, he didn’t change much his action.” she said while looking up to the sky

“Then one day, I saw him walking hand in hand with a girl. He smiles happily when talking to her. He shows her a side of him that I have never seen since the first time I met him. He gently takes care of her from every little thing. He smiles when she pouts. He teases her to make her smile. Those sides of him, of a famous “Cold Prince” that no one know.” Tomomi said

“Then I look at his girlfriend. She looks young and act just like a kid. My mind keeps telling me ‘How can he loves a childish girl like that?’ Then I knew another thing. They only know each other for a month. 'How can that only one month compare to us, we knew each other for 3 years?’ I said to myself.” She continues

“After talking to him, I realized that he is deeply in love with her. He loves her a lot. However, I don't want to think that. I don't want to accept this defeat. I think ‘What is so good about her that makes him falls in love with her like that? I have to see it myself.’ I, Miyamoto Tomomi never lose in anything. How can I accept this defeat?”

“Then I decided to meet her. To see what is good about that little childish girl”

“I asked Tomo to bring him out because I don't want anyone to know about our conversation”

“After talking to Acchan, I realized one thing. She is really special. I admitted every assumption made about her, most of them are wrong. Also I understand now why you love her that much.” Tomomi smiles and said

“Uh, she is very special” Minami nods and said

“However why did you say most of them are wrong?” he asks on confuse

“My correct assumption is that she is really very childish” Tomomi said and laughs

Minami laughs when hearing that.

“After that conversation, I kept wondering why I didn't feel anything when losing him. I thought maybe because I accept the defeat by her.” Tomomi said

“However, when you had a fight with Tomo, the person I’m worry is him. My heart hurt when seeing he is hurt to protect me. At first, I thought that is because he is my childhood friend, but no. There is different feeling in me. When hearing his determined words to protect me, the memories of me and him flood back to me. Our time together, how he always take care of me, protect me gently. I overlook all of that because of my assumptions that I love you. Now I know that is just an admiration feeling as a junior to a senior.” Tomomi smiles and said

“I see. I’m glad you realized it” Minami smiles and said

“Thank you, Takamina. Let's be friend” Tomomi said and extends her hand to him

“We are always friend” he shakes her hand and said

“After saying all of that, I felt so refresh” Tomomi takes a deep breath and said

“I will go back to my house now. See you later” she continues

“Uh, bye” Minami said

Then he returns to his room. When he passes by Tomo, Tomo said

“I’m sorry for hitting you, Takamina” he bows and apologizes

“It's ok, that is my fault too.” Minami said and pats Tomo’s shoulder

“I will go back to my room now. Good night” he continues

“Uh, good night” Tomo said

Then Minami walks up stair.

At the same time

Tomomi steps in. Tomo turns and looks at her with worry eyes

“A...are you ok, Tomochin?” he asks

Tomomi looks down. Seeing that, Tomo panics. He quickly rushes to her

“Don't be sad Tomochin. I will do everything to make you happy. What do you want? Just tell me anything” Tomo said while holding her shoulders

“Really Tomo?” Tomomi asks

“Uh, I will do everything” Tomo answers strongly

“Then can you be with me forever?” Tomomi asks shyly

“Of course I will be with you forever. I will protect you from everything. Please don't be sad anymore” Tomo said

Tomomi looks at him and smiles

“Then I will wait for our date tomorrow, Tomo” she said

“Date?” Tomo looks at her with confused looks

Tomomi laughs softly at his face. Then she leans and pecks on his lips

“I accept your confession, baka” she said and rushes out of the hotel leaving a dumbfounded Tomo standing there

Riku walks to Tomo and pats his shoulder

“Way to go man” he said

“Huh? What do you mean, Riku-nii?” Tomo asks him on confuse

“I can't believe that you are this baka.” Yuko sighs and said

“What?” Tomo said

“She just kisses you, right?” Yuko asks

“Uh, why did she kiss me?” Tomo asks

Yuko and Riku look at each other and laughs loudly. Tomo is now more confuse than ever

“Riku-nii, Yuko-neechan” he calls them in begging tone

Yuko looks at him and sighs

“Ok, what did she told you?” she asks while crossing her arms

“She is looking forward to our date tomorrow” Tomo answers

“And what did she tell you when she kisses you?” Riku asks

“She accept my confe…”

He realizes it now. He smiles widely with his realization.

“Does she mean she love me, Riku-nii, Yuko-nee?” he asks them happily

“Of course, you are a big idiot” Yuko said

“What are you waiting for? Chase after her now” Riku said

“Uh.” Tomo quickly rushes out of the hotel

“Tomochin, wait for me” he calls out

Riku hugs Yuko’s shoulders and looks at Tomo

“I’m glad that Tomomi finally realized her real feeling” He said

“Uh, this will be a great start for them” Yuko said



Minami opens the door and walks in. He sees that Atsuko is sitting on the bed and looks at him with a big smile on her face

“How was it, Minami? Is Tomochin ok?” She asks him

“Uh, she is fine” Minami sits down on their bed and said

Then he holds her hands and pulls her to sit into his embrace while hugging her waist

“The incident makes her realize her real feeling” He buries on her neck and whispers

“I see. That is good” Atsuko leans on his chest and said

“Uh” Minami nods while kissing her neck

Then just like that they stay silent and enjoy each other present.

After awhile

Minami speaks up in whisper tone while tighten his hug

“I was so worry, Atsuko”

“Minami” Atsuko holds his hand

She can feel his shaking

“I was so lost when hearing that avalanche. I don’t know what to do. I crazily look for you everywhere. My heart was nearly stop beating. My mind went blank. ‘What can I do if I lost you?’ ‘How my life going to be?’ I was so scared of that thought” Minami said

“Minami” Atsuko turns and hugs him tightly

“Minami” she calls him again while burying her face on his chest

“In that cave, I was so scared. I was so scared that I can’t see you again. My heart jumps in joy when hearing your voice calling my name. I was so happy” Atsuko said

“Me too. I’m extremely happy” Minami whispers and kisses her neck

Then he bends down and kisses her lips lovingly. Atsuko hugs him tightly and replies his kiss deeply

In some place

There is a person sitting on the table. The person is talking on the phone

“I see”

“Ok, that is easy”

After a month of happy vacation together, Atsuko now has to go back to Japan.

At German airport

“I have to go into the terminal now, Minami. I will miss you at lot” Atsuko said sadly

“I miss you, too, Atsuko. However don’t be sad. I’ll go to Japan right after settling my business in Canada” Minami said and pecks her lips

“Uh, I’m waiting for you, Minami. I hope to see you soon” Atsuko said

“Of course, I will settle everything real quick, ok, Atsuko” Minami smiles and said

“Uh, bye Minami” Atsuko pecks his lips and said

He pulls her into a tight hug

“I love you, Atsuko” Minami whispers in her ears

“I love you, too” Atsuko buries her face on his chest and said

Then Atsuko goes into the terminal to go to Japan, while Minami goes into the terminal to go back to Canada.

While Atsuko is walks toward her plane, her phone rings. She takes out her phone and sees Minami’s message. She smiles when reading the text

(I miss you already, Atsuko)

“I miss you too, Minami” She text back to him

One week later

At Atsuko’s house

It is a very big and beautiful mansion. While she is walking down from her stairs, her phone ring

(Good morning, my love) Minami said lovingly

“Good morning, Minami” Atsuko happily said

It has been a week since they part in Germany. Every day, Minami will call her every morning and night. He also texts her a lot of times

(Are you about to go to the hospital?) Minami asks

“Uh, I just got out of my house” Atsuko said

(Today, you will officially become a doctor. Good luck, Atsuko)

“Thank you, Minami. I’m so nervous”

(Keep calm, Atsuko. There is nothing to be nervous. Relax) Minami said

(Do you need my magic to make you feel better?) he asks

“What is it, Minami?” Atsuko asks

(Turn on your camera)

Atsuko does as Minami said. When the camera turns on, Atsuko smiles widely when seeing Minami. On his forehead, he wrote a sentence

“Good luck my love”

(How is my magic, Atsuko?)

“It works perfectly, Minami. I feel full of power now.” Atsuko said

(I’m glad.) Minami smiles and said

(Then what is my reward, Atsuko?)

“ it, I will give you a big reward when you come here”

(Ok, but at that time I want double) Minami smiles and said

“Ok. Everything for my Minami”

Minami smiles brightly at her word.

“Minami, I have to go now. You also should sleep now. It is late” Atsuko said

(Uh, be careful when driving. Text me when you reach your hospital.)

“Ok. Love you” Atsuko nods

(Love you too)

Then she hangs up and goes to hospital.

After 30 minutes

Atsuko finally reaches the hospital. She parks her car and goes to her auntie office

“Good morning, auntie” Atsuko said happily

“Good morning, Atsuko.” Mariko said

“You seem to be full of power this morning huh?” she asks

“Uh, I feel great” Atsuko answers

“Hum…” Mariko stands up and walks toward Atsuko

She walks around looking at Atsuko while stroking her chin

“Hum….” She is humming while looking at Atsuko

Atsuko looks at her with confused look

“What is it, auntie?”

“I feel something strange since the day you came back here. You are happier than you always are. Texting, smiling, face full of happiness...hum….” Mariko taps her chin and thought

“I’m still normal. There is nothing wrong with me” Atsuko said

“No no, my little baby. I take care of you since you were a kid. I knew everything about my little girl. Your action show that…” Mariko pauses

Atsuko looks at her aunt with confused looks. Mariko smiles evilly while leaning closer to Atsuko

“You are in love, right my lovely niece” she said

Her words makes Atsuko blushes madly.

“Aha, so that is true.” Mariko said happily

Atsuko stays silent while looking down shyly. Suddenly Marilo laughs loudly

“ blushed. This is the first time I see my little niece blush. So cute” she said

“Auntie” Atsuko pouts

She looks at her face and keeps laughing.

“If you keep laughing like that, I will leave” Atsuko said and turns away

“Ok, ok my princess” Mariko said

“So who is that spectacular boy that can make our princess fall into the world of love?” She asks

Atsuko thinks for awhile and said

“That is a secret.”

Then she rushes out of Mariko’s office. Mariko is surprised, but then laughs at the shyness of her niece.

“That child” she laughs and thought

The first week of work passed smoothly. Minami always calls her asking how her work is. Atsuko is very happy. Everyday she can always talk to the person she loves. Then one day.

At Atsuko’s house

In the dining room

Atsuko is eating her breakfast while looking at the clock in her phone. It is 7:30 a.m

“Why Minami hasn’t call me yet?” She thought

Normally this time, Minami will call her and say good luck for her at work. He also calls to hear Atsuko says goodnight to him. No matter how busy he is, he will always call her this hour. Atsuko picks her phone and plans to call him. However she stops

“Maybe, today he is tired. I shouldn’t bother him. I will call him tonight” she thought

Then she leaves her house to work

In Atsuko’s office

Atsuko keeps looking at her phone. She is still worry about Minami not calling her. Finally she picks her phone up and texts him

“Hello Minami, are you asleep? Are you tired?”

She sends the text and wait for him to response. However she hasn’t received any reply from Minami.

At lunch

Mariko and Atsuko come to the cafeteria at hospital to eat lunch. Atsuko just stays silent and spaces out. Mariko looks at her and notices that she keeps looking at her phone.

“What’s wrong, Atsuko? You seem not like yourself today” Mariko asks

However Atsuko still spaces out and doesn’t hear what Mariko said.

“Atsuko” Mariko calls her again while shaking her hand

Her call snaps her out of her thought. Atsuko looks at her with confused look

“What is it, aunt Mariko?” She asks her

“I asked you what’s wrong. You haven’t touch your food and space out” Mariko said worriedly

“Ah nothing auntie.” Atsuko said and smiles

“Really Atsuko?” Mariko asks

“Uh” Atsuko nods

“Ok, if you say so. Eat your food before it turns cold, Atsuko” Mariko said

“Yes” Atsuko nods

Then she starts eating her food.

At night

Atsuko immediately calls Minami right after she got home. She is very worry because he didn’t text her anything

*Ring* *Ring* *Ring*

However no one picks up the phone.

“Minami” Atsuko thought

She calls him again, and get the same result.

“Maybe he is busy” Atsuko thought

Then she lies down on her bed and closes her eyes. Suddenly she sits up. Her heart beats faster

“What if something happen to him?” She thought worriedly

“No, he properly is busy” Atsuko shakes her thought away and said to herself

Then she texts him again

“Minami, are you busy? Text me when you have free time. I just want to know that you are ok”

Then she sends to him. After that she lies down on her bed still holding her phone in her hand waiting for his text. She slowly falls in sleep because of tired

In the morning

Atsuko slowly opens her eyes. Then she quickly sits up and looks at her phone. She still doesn’t see any message from Minami.

“Minami” Atsuko thought sadly

She misses how every morning he calls her and say good morning to her, and every night he will say goodnight to her.

“Good morning my love”

“I love you, my Atsuko”

Then she remember their happy time together, his warm embrace. Suddenly a tear drops on her phone

“Minami, I miss you” she whispers

Then she steps down and prepare to go to the hospital.

At night

In Atsuko’s room

Two days passed and Minami still hasn’t call or text her. She calls him countless time, but he neither answer nor call back. She misses him a lot. Atsuko sits on her bed. Then she takes her phone and calls him again

*Ring* *Ring*

Atsuko smiles happily when she hears the sound of the phone picking up. When she is about to call Minami’s name, she hears a girl's voice through the phone


Atsuko suddenly feels pain in her heart. She tries to say in normal tone

“Excuse me, is this Takahashi Minami’s phone number?”

(Yes this is his...)

(Hey, why did you answer my phone?) Minami’s voice cutting her words


“Minami” Atsuko calls his name

(Atsuko) Minami calls her in surprised

“Who is she, Minami?” she asks him immediately

(She is my cousin.) Minami answers quickly

(Why did you call me, Atsuko?) he asks her

His question makes her heart hurt even more

“It has been three days and you didn’t call or text me. I’m worry so I want to call you” Atsuko answers in shaky tone

(I’m fine, Atsuko. These days I was so busy. I’m sorry) Minami said

“It is ok, Minami. I’m glad that you are ok” Atsuko said

(Atsuko, I’m sorry. I’m busy. I will call you later ok) Minami said

“Uh” Atsuko said

(Bye Atsuko) Minami said

“Minami” Atsuko calls him in whisper tone

(What is it, Atsuko?) he asks

“I love you, Minami” Atsuko said

(I love you, too, Atsuko) Minami said

Then Atsuko hangs up

“Minami, what’s wrong?” she thought while wiping her tear

Then Atsuko lies down on her bed and shrinks herself into her blanket. She doesn’t want to do anything today. Then her phone rings. Atsuko looks at the phone and sees that is Mariko

“Hello aunt Mariko” Atsuko said

(Atsuko, tomorrow is the day off, do you want to go shopping with me)

“Uh-uh. I’m tired. I just want to sleep now, sorry auntie” Atsuko said

(It is ok, rest well, ok) Mariko said

“Uh, thank you auntie” Atsuko said

Then she hangs up and puts her phone away

in the morning

At a shopping mall

There is someone talking on the phone while walking

“So everything is done right”




Hope you guys enjoy reading this.  :D
Fic Index

OS & Short Story
Atsumina's OS collection
     +[OS] Forever and Ever
     +[Short Story] I Love You (Completed)
     +[OS] Promise
     +[Short Story] My Lovely Ojou-sama (Completed)
     +[OS] Perfect Valentine
     +[OS] Our Love Story
     +[Short Story] Power of Love (Completed)
     +[Short Story] Escape (Completed)
     +[Short Story] My Feeling for You (Completed)
     +[OS] Miracle of Christmas
     +[OS] Christmas Wish

Fateful Encounter (Atsumina, Wmatsui) (Completed)
Beyond The Sea (Atsumina, Mayuki, Kojiyuu, Wmatsui, Marimii) (Completed)
Key of Happiness (Atsumina, Kojiyuu, Wmatsui) (Completed)
Mission of Love (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) (Completed)

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Hmm.. I think there will be some surprise from Minami... hmm...  :roll: :huhuh  ...maybe...  XD
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update soon :D

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[Atsumina's OS collection] Power of Love (Atsumina) Part 10 14/05/2016
« Reply #129 on: May 14, 2016, 02:03:40 AM »
@black_maa, @Jsheep, @AI712: Thank you!  :D

Thank you everyone for reading my fic  :D

Here is part 10  :)

Power of Love

Part 10

In the next day

Atsuko wakes up and prepares to go to the hospital. She turns and looks at her phone as if she is waiting for it to ring. However it still lies silently on her desk indicates that there still isn’t any phone call from Minami.

“Minami” Atsuko thought

Then she leaves her room. When she steps down from the stairs, her maid greets her

“Atsuko-sama, your breakfast is ready” She said

“I don’t want to eat today.” Atsuko said

She doesn’t in the mood to eat or do anything. After that she walks out of her house and goes to work.

At the hospital

When Atsuko walks into the hospital, she sees a nurse walking toward her

“Good morning, Dr. Maeda” she said

“Good morning” Atsuko said


She coughs. The nurse notices that Atsuko’s face looks pale, so she asks

“Are you ok, Dr. Maeda? You don’t look good” She asks

“I’m fine. Thanks for asking” Atsuko said

“I see. Dr. Maeda, director wants to see you” she said

“Ok” Atsuko nods

Then she walks toward her aunt’s office and knocks the door

“Come in” Mariko said

“Auntie, you want to see me?” Atsuko asks

“Uh, our hospital will have a new doctor. He will come here this evening. Can you give him a tour around?” Mariko asks

“Aunt Mariko, I’m not feeling well. I planned on going home early today. Can you ask other doctors or nurses to do this? ” Atsuko said

She don’t want to do this not in this state of her

“No, this job suit you the best.” Mariko said

Atsuko looks at Mariko with confused look

“Atsuko, you will be better after this” Mariko said

“But auntie…” Atsuko said

“Atsuko, please do this for me” Mariko said

“Ok” Atsuko reluctantly accepts

Then she goes back to her office.

In the evening

At Atsuko’s office

While she is looking at her patient’s information, she hears knocking sound

“Come in” Atsuko said

The door opens. A nurse with flower in her hand comes in. That is a bouquet of very beautiful red roses

“What is it?” Atsuko asks

“This flower is for you, Dr. Maeda.” she said

“For me? From whom?” Atsuko asks in confuse

“The new doctor. He told me to bring this to you, and he will come here shortly” The nurse said

“I see.” Atsuko said

After giving Atsuko the flower, the nurse leaves her room. Atsuko looks at the flower. She sees a small card in there

“Beautiful flower for beautiful and lovely girl”

She furrows her eyebrows while reading the sentence

“What is with that person? Don't even know me and can say this” she thought and throws the flower into the trashcan.

Then she goes back to her seat and continues her work.

After a while

*knock* *knock* *knock*

Atsuko hears another knocking sound. Then a voice said

“Dr. Maeda, I'm a new doctor.”

Atsuko looks up and sighs

“Why did auntie want me to do this?” She thought

Then Atsuko looks back at her patient’s file.

“Please come in” Atsuko said

The door opens and a man comes in with a smile on his face. That person is Minami. Because Atsuko only looks at her file, she didn’t realize that is him.

“Good evening, Dr. Maeda” he said faking his tone

“Good evening” Atsuko said shortly, still looking at her files

“Wait for me a little. After I finished this file, I will take you around here” she continues

“It is ok. No rush” he said

He looks around the room and sees that the bouquet of rose is in the trashcan

“You don't like my flower?” he asks

“Yes” Atsuko answers annoyingly

“Why?” he asks

*Cough* *Cough*

Atsuko coughs.

“I don’t know you, and I don’t want to receive anything from someone I don’t know” she said

Her voice shows that she is sick. Minami looks at her with worried eyes

“Are you sick?” he asks in concerned tone

“I’m fine” Atsuko answers shortly

“You seem to be upset” he asks

“What's wrong with him?” Atsuko thought

“I’m fine” she said still refuse to look up

“Does your boyfriend do something wrong?” Minami asks her

Atsuko is writing something in the file. Hearing what he said, she stops writing and looks at her phone next to her.


She keeps silent and continues her work. However she can't focus anymore. Noticing that her eyes slowly turn sad, he scolds himself

“Takahashi Minami, you are an idiot.”

Minami stands up and slowly walks toward her. Because her mind is still thinking about him, she didn't realize that Minami is standing next to her. Suddenly he turns her chair to pull her into his embrace and hugs her tightly. Being taken by surprise, Atsuko struggles and said

“What are you doing?”

“Let's go of mhmm…”

Minami pulls out and kisses her lips. Atsuko widens her eyes in surprise. Then she stops struggling when realizing who he is.

“Minami” Atsuko thought

Minami kisses her strongly and gently while hugging her tightly. Atsuko slowly closes her eyes and kisses him back showing how much she misses him. They kiss until out of air. Then they break the kiss. Atsuko immediately pushes him out and turns away.

“Why are you here?” she said in sad tone

“Atsuko” Minami calls her while turning her chair back to look at him

Atsuko turns her face away refuses to look at Minami

“Please don't ignore me, my love” Minami said to her in begging tone

“It is hurt a lot” he continues

Suddenly Atsuko turns to look at him with her already red eyes

“You know it is hurt to be ignored especially by the person you love the most, huh?” she said in shaky tone while tear rolling on her cheeks

“Atsuko” Minami caresses Atsuko’s cheeks

Atsuko pushes his hands away. However, Minami holds her hands back and pulls her into a tight hug.

“Let's go of me. I hate you, Minami” Atsuko said while hitting his chest

“I’m sorry, Atsuko. I’m bad. I hurt you. I’m sorry, Atsuko. I’m sorry my love, my life. Please don’t hate me” Minami hugs her tighter and said

Seeing her cry and hurt like this, Minami can feel his heart tighten.

“Minami, why didn't you call me? Why didn't you text me? Why did you ignore me, Minami?” Atsuko said hurtfully while keep hitting his chest

Minami tightens his hug. Atsuko just keeps crying while burying her face on his chest. He strokes her hair and pats her head to comfort her.

“I’m sorry, Atsuko” Minami whispers

He kisses her hairs and strokes her back gently

After awhile

Atsuko finally calms down. She stops crying, but still hugging him tightly

“Atsuko, I'm sorry. I didn't mean to hurt you like this. From the bottom of my heart, I only want you to smile happily every day, every second.” Minami speaks up

“Then why did you ignore me, Minami?” Atsuko asks

“I didn’t ignore you, Atsuko. Actually, I just want to surprise you.” Minami said keeps stroking her hair

Atsuko is very surprised with Minami's words. She pulls out to look at him with confused look

“Surprise me?” she said in confused tone

“Actually, I contacted your aunt, Maeda Mariko long time ago to ask her about working here. I also asked her to keep it as a secret from you to make you surprise” Minami said

“You did?” Atsuko said in surprise

“Uh, I looked for her number on your phone. The day you came back to Japan, I already finished all the paperwork to go back here. However, I have to settle my things in Canada.” Minami said

“After I already bought the flight ticket and prepared everything, I got an idea. I want to surprise you when I come here. That is why I didn't call or text you. I’m sorry, Atsuko” He hugs Atsuko tightly and said

“I’m so stupid to think about surprising you this way. I’m so stupid. I hurt you” he continues while burying his face on Atsuko's neck

“I’m sorry, Atsuko” he whispers

Atsuko smiles in her mind when hearing what Minami said

“Minami, baka” Atsuko hits his chest slightly and said in pouting tone

“I was so worry about you. I was so lost and don't understand why you didn't text or call me. I miss you a lot Minami. You caused a big hole in my heart” she continues

“Then when I finally heard the answer from your phone, the first thing I heard is a girl voice. At that time, I can feel my heart broken in pieces. In my head, there are a lot of different questions. ‘Who is she? Why did she have his phone? Why did she answer his phone?’” Atsuko said while hugging him tighter

“Atsuko, trust me, she is really my cousin. Her name is Minegishi Minami. She is daughter of my aunt” Minami said

“She came with my other cousin and her husband to help me pack my thing. At that time, I got some business at my room, and I left my phone there.” he explains

“Trust me, ok Atsuko” he whispers

“Of course, I trust you, Minami” Atsuko said

“I’m happy” Minami said while smiling

Then he stands up and sits down on the chair. He pulls Atsuko to sit in his embrace.

“I miss you so much, Atsuko” Minami whispers in Atsuko's ear lovingly.

“Your eyes, your voice, your hug, your kiss, and your scent, I miss everything about you, Atsuko” He continues while burying his face on her neck inhaling her scent.

“I miss you too. I miss everything about you” Atsuko said

Minami turns Atsuko to look at him. He kisses her lips and said

“I'm sorry my love. I just thought that by doing this you will be happier when seeing me in front of you. I’m sorry for my stupidity” Minami said and kisses her forehead

“I love you, Minami. Don’t scare me like that ever again” Atsuko said

“Uh, I won’t do this again.” Minami said

“I love you, too Atsuko” He said

Then he pulls her closer and kisses her lips again. They kiss each other passionately and intensely. Minami hugs her waist tightly while Atsuko hugging his neck to deepen their kiss. Minami misses her a lot. He kisses her roughly and strongly. They kiss until out of air. Then they break the kiss. However, Minami still doesn’t want to part. He keeps hugging her and sucks her lips. Then he slowly break the hugs

“Atsuko” Minami strokes her hair and caresses her face

Atsuko looks at him

“I want you to come to this place with me, Atsuko” He said gently

“Where is it, Minami?” Atsuko asks

Minami pecks her lips

“It is a secret. You will know when you came there” Minami said

“Ok” Atsuko nods

“Now let’s me take you around the hospital, Minami” she said

“Ok” Minami said

Then they leave the room

On their way

“Did you meet my aunt, Minami?” Atsuko asks

“No, she told me over the phone to just come to your office” Minami said

“I see. Then let’s me take you to her office. You have to meet the director of the hospital anyway” Atsuko said

“Ok” Minami nods

Atsuko takes him to Mariko’s office

In front of Mariko’s office

Atsuko knock the door and said

“Auntie, it is me. I take the new doctor here”

“Come in” Mariko said

Then Atsuko and Minami walks in

“How do you feel now, my little niece?” Mariko asks while giggling

“Your beautiful auntie is correct, right? You feel way better, right now, right?” she continues in teasing tone

Atsuko blushes by her words and looks down shyly. Mariko looks at her and laughs softly. Then she stands up and walks toward Minami.

“So this is the person who talked to me through the phone last month…”


At a big mansion

While Mariko is working on her desk, her phone rings

“Hello” she said

(Excuse me, is this Maeda Mariko’s phone number?) the other side speaks up

“Yes this is me” Mariko said

“May I know who I’m speaking with?” she asks

(My name is Takahashi Minami.) Minami introduces himself

“Hello, Takahashi-san, what can I do for you?” Mariko asks

(Please just call me Takamina. I’m your niece’s boyfriend) Minami said

“My niece’s boyfriend? Who? Atsuko?” She asks in confuse

(Yes, I’m Atsuko’s boyfriend) Minami said

Mariko widens his eyes in surprise

“You are Atsuko’s boyfriend?” she said in surprised tone

(Yes) Minami said

“How can I trust you? And why did you call me?” Mariko said in suspicious tone

Minami explains everything for her. She tells Mariko everything about Atsuko including her favorite foods, activity, habit even very little things about Atsuko. Mariko is very surprise because Minami knew all Atsuko’s habits including thing that only she knew

“I see. You really her boyfriend” Mariko said

“So why did you calls me?” she asks

Then Minami tells her how they meet. He also told her that he lives in Canada. Then he asked her if he can work at her hospital.

End flashback

“I was very surprised when you introduce yourself to me. I even more surprised when you said that you are Atsuko’s boyfriend. The little girl who I take care since she was a kid. She is a very cheerful girl. However, she is not a social type of person. She doesn't like stranger. When she parted for her vacation, she didn't even have a male friend. Then now she has a boyfriend that is very surprise.” Mariko said

Then she comes to Minami

“Handsome boy, tell me, how can you stole my little niece’s heart?” Mariko asks

Minami and Atsuko blush by her question

“Auntie” Atsuko calls her in embarrassed

Mariko looks at her and laughs

“Ok, ok, just want to tease you two a little. Now back to business” She said

“Takamina, welcome to my hospital.” she said to Minami

“Thank you, auntie” Minami said

“Auntie?” Atsuko said in surprise

“Uh, I told him to call me that. He is your boyfriend after all” Mariko said

Suddenly, Mariko’s face changes serious

“Takamina, this time because you want to surprise her so I let this pass. Next time, if I see you make her sad, and look so down, mark my words, I will make you regret for doing that.” she said in serious tone

“Yes, I won't ever make her sad ever again” Minami said seriously

“Good, I entrust her to you” Mariko said and puts Atsuko's hand into Minami's hand

“Thank you, auntie.” Atsuko and Minami said happily

“By the way, auntie. Please keep this as secret from daddy and oniichan. I want to tell them personally when they come here” Atsuko said

“Ok” Mariko nods

Then they leave the room.

Mariko looks at them until the door close. Then she goes back to her desk. She sits down and sighs

“I wish you two can be happy forever, Takamina, Atsuko.” she thought

Then she looks at the picture on her desk. In the picture is her and another beautiful woman

“Miko, please protect your daughter and her love” Mariko thought

At night

After finished their work at the hospital, Minami takes Atsuko to the place where he told her. His car stops in front of very big and luxury restaurant. Minami steps down and opens the door for Atsuko.

“Thank you, Minami” Atsuko said

Then he leads her to the restaurant’s door. At there, they are welcomed by the waiters

“Welcome Mr. Takahashi and Ms. Maeda” they said

Atsuko is very surprise

“Minami, you reserved this?” She asks

“Uh, for my love” Minami said

Then the waiter takes them to their seat. The restaurant today is also empty like in Germany.

“Please wait for us, the food will be here shortly” The waiter said

“Ok” Minami nods

“Do you like this place, Atsuko?” Minami asks while holding her hand

“Uh, it looks very nice.” Atsuko said

Then they talks happily together.

After awhile

The food are served on their table. They eat their food happily under very romantic music.

After finished eating, Minami said to her

“Atsuko, I will be right back, ok” Minami said

“Uh” Atsuko nods and smiles at him

She sits there and wait for him. Suddenly, she hears Minami’s voice


She turning her back to the sources of the sound. She sees that Minami is sitting behind a piano.

“Atsuko, I have this song I want to play and sing for you. This is what I really feel since the first time we meet.” Minami said

Atsuko blushes at his serious voice. She turns to look at him. Minami turns to the piano and plays the song “When You Tell Me That You Love Me”

Atsuko sits there and listens to his singing voice. After the second half of the song, the violin starts playing in place of Minami's piano. Minami stands up and walks toward Atsuko. Atsuko stands up and looks at Minami. He still singing lovingly while looking at Atsuko.

When the song end, Minami bends down on one knee in front of Atsuko. She is very surprised with his action. He takes out a ring box in his pocket and raises in front of her

“Maeda Atsuko, I’m Takahashi Minami. I love you since this first day I met you. I want to hold your hand every day. I want to see your face every morning. I want your good night kiss every night. I want to hug you tight in my arm. And lastly, I want to hold your hand and walk with you forever” Minami said seriously

Then he opens the ring box and asks her seriously

“Atsuko, will you marry me? Will you make me, Takahashi Minami, the happiest man in the whole world?”

Atsuko is very surprise. Her tear of happiness unconsciously rolls on her cheeks. She looks at him lovingly

“Yes, Minami. Yes, I will marry you, Minami. I love you” Atsuko said happily

Minami smiles brightly because of happy. He quickly wear the ring on her finger. Then he stands up and hugs her tightly. He lifts her up while turning around

“Yeah!!!” he said while laughing loudly because of happy

Atsuko also hugs his neck tightly while smiling happily

After that

They go to the car and go back. After driving for a while, Minami said.

“Atsuko, I have another surprise for you. Can you wear this sleep mask?” Minami asks and gives her the mask

“Ok” Atsuko nods

“What is it?” Atsuko thought in confuse

After 1 hour of driving

The car finally stop at a very big and beautiful mansion. In front of it is an English style fountain. Minami parks the car and leads Atsuko out.

“We are at that place, Minami?” Atsuko asks

“Uh, my wife to be” Minami pecks her lips and said

Then he slowly leads her into the house.

“Can I take this off, Minami?” Atsuko asks

“Not yet honey” Minami said

Then he opens the door and comes in.

“Stand here, Atsuko” Minami said

“Ok” Atsuko nods

Then he walks behind her. Minami slowly opens the mask that covered her eyes. Atsuko slowly opens her eyes. She widens her eyes in surprise while looking around a very neat and beautiful house.

She turns to Minami and calls him happily

“Minami, this is…” Atsuko said in happy tone

“Uh, this is our house when we get married. I bought it right after I landed here” Minami said

“Do you like this house, Atsuko?” Minami asks

“I love it, Minami. It is more than perfect. I love it a lot, our new house” Atsuko rushes to hug him and said

“I’m glad that you like it” Minami hugs her and said

“I love you, Minami” Atsuko said

“I love you too, Atsuko” Minami said

Then he bends down and kisses her lips lovingly. Atsuko closes her eyes and replies his kiss passionately. Minami lifts her up in bridal style still keeping their kiss. He carries her up stair. Then he uses his back to opens the door and walks in.

“This will be our room, Atsuko” Minami said

“Wow, this is so beautiful, Minami” Atsuko said

“I personally decorate according to your favorite, Atsuko” he said

“Thank you, Minami. You are my wonderful Minami” Atsuko hugs his neck and said

“I’m glad you happy.” Minami said

Then he puts her down on their bed and moves on top of her. He smiles while caressing her face

“Now I will get my reward” he said

Atsuko blushes by his words

“You are so cute” he said and kisses Atsuko lips

Atsuko hugs him tightly and replies his kiss. Then Minami kisses down her neck while slowly undressing her clothes.

“I love you, Atsuko” Minami said between the kiss

“I love you, too Minami” Atsuko said

In the morning

Minami lies on his bed and looks at the girl next to him. The girl, he love the most, who will soon be his wife. He strokes her hair and smiles happily. Then he sees that Atsuko's eyelids slowly move. She slowly opens her eyes.

“Good morning Mrs. Takahashi” Minami smiles and said

Atsuko smiles happily at his word.

“Who is Mrs. Takahashi? I don't know” she teases him

Minami puts his elbows on two sides of Atsuko's head. Half of his body is on top of her. He bends down and said into her ear

“It is you. You are Mrs. Takahashi Maeda Atsuko, Takahashi Minami's wife which is my wife”

“Really? Who said that?” She teases him more

Minami smiles at her. He bends down caressing his nose with hers and moves down to kisses her lips gently. He moves his hand down to her left hand and holds it. He breaks the kisses and raises Atsuko's hands showing the engagement ring on her hand

“This said that” Minami said

Atsuko laughs happily.

“I love you, Minami” Atsuko said

Minami smiles back at her. Then he lies back next to her and hugs her tightly.

“I love you too” He said

She rounds her arms around his waist and hugs him tightly while resting her head on his chest

“Minami, thank you for loving me and giving me so much happy like this” Atsuko said

“I’m the one who should be thankful for every moment I can spend with you every day, Atsuko.” Minami said and kisses her hair

Minami turns and looks at the clock on his phone. It is 8:00 a.m.

“Atsuko, let's prepare. I will take you to this place” Minami said while patting her back

“Where Minami?” Atsuko asks

“You will know later. Now my love let prepare our thing” Minami pecks her lips and said

“Ok” Atsuko nods

Then they prepare their things. After that Minami takes Atsuko to his car and drives back to Tokyo because their house is on the mountain outskirt of Tokyo.

After one hour

Minami's car stops at a big traditional looking house.

“Where are we, Minami?” Atsuko asks

“We come here for you to meet your mother in law” Minami said

“We will go meet your mother” Atsuko said in surprise

“Uh.” Minami nods

Atsuko feels so nervous all of sudden. She doesn't know what to do. Minami didn't told her before hand

“Minami, why didn't you say that to me. How do I look? You should tell me so I can prepare myself. What should I do now?” Atsuko said in panic

Minami looks at her and laughs. He holds her shoulder to turn her to look at him. He smiles and kisses her lips

“Don't panic my love. You will be fine. You look perfect as ever. She will love you. I’m sure about that” he reassures her

“Now, take a deep breath and relax” he said

Atsuko takes a deep breath while closing her eyes to relax

“Yes relax. I will always be with you” Minami said

Then Atsuko opens her eyes. She is calm down now.

“How do you feel now, baby?” Minami asks

“I’m fine now, Minami” Atsuko said

“That is good. However, before we go into the house, I have to tell you this.” Minami said

“What is it, Minami?” Atsuko asks

“Actually the person you are about to meet is my step mother. My mother passed away when I was 5 years old” Minami said

“Although she is only my step-mother, she takes care of me as her own son. So I see her as my real mother” he continues

“Also we will visit my mother’s grave here too”

“I see. No matter she is your real or step mother, I will always see her and treat her as my mother, Minami” Atsuko smiles and said

Minami smiles happily at her words

“I’m so lucky to have you, Atsuko” he said and pecks her lips

“Now let's go, Atsuko” Minami said

“Uh” Atsuko nods

Then they come into Minami’s parents’ house. When they reach the gate, his servants greet them

“Welcome back Young Master”

“Where is my mother?” Minami asks

“Ayumi-sama is at the garden in the back yard. Do you need me to inform her for you?” the maid said

“No, I can go there and meet her myself” Minami said

Then he turns to Atsuko

“Let’s go” he said

“Uh” Atsuko nods

Then he takes her hand and walks to the back yard. When they get there, they see a beautiful woman there. She is taking care of some flowers

“Mom” Minami calls her happily

She turns and smiles at him gently

“When did you came back to Japan, Minami?” She asks him

“I came back here a week ago” Minami said

“I see” She said

Then she sees Atsuko who is standing shyly next to Minami. They are holding hand

“Who is this beautiful lady, Minami” his step-mother smiles and asks him

“She is the reason I came here today, mom” Minami said

“Her name is Maeda Atsuko. She is my fiancée” he introduces Atsuko

Atsuko bows at his mother

“Hello Mrs. Takahashi” she said

“Just call my mom like me, Atsuko. She will be your mother in the future” Minami said

His mother looks at him and smiles gently. She is very happy that her son finally found the one he loves.

“Uh, just call me like Minami, Atsuko” she smiles gently

Then Ayumi takes them to Minami’s mother’s grave to visit her


In a room

A butler walks into the room. There is a man sit on his desk

“Young master is back sir” he said

“He came back here? For what?” the man asks

“I don’t know. There is a girl with him. Her name is Maeda Atsuko. They are at the backyard with mistress” the butler said

“I see. You can leave now. I will go there to see him” the man said

Then he stands up and leaves his room

Back to the garden

After visiting his mother, Minami, Atsuko, and Ayumi return to the garden. They are talking happily together

“So you are also a doctor?” Ayumi asks

“Yes, I just graduated as a doctor 5 months ago. I just start working at my aunt hospital this month” Atsuko said

“I see” Ayumi said

“I also work there, too. I decided to move back here to be with Atsuko” Minami said while holding Atsuko’s hand

“Really? I’m so happy Minami. I want you to live here for so long.” Ayumi said

“Thank you Atsuko. You changed him” she holds Atsuko’s hand and said

While talking happily, they hear someone coughs. They turn and see a man walking toward their place

“Tachi, Minami is back here. He also brought his fiancée here.” His mother comes to the man and said

“Father” Minami bows at him

Atsuko also bows at him

“Her name is Maeda At…”

“I won’t approve this” cutting Minami’s words, Tachi said

Ayumi looks at Tachi with surprised look. Minami and Atsuko are also surprised about this.


Hope you guys enjoy reading it  :D
Fic Index

OS & Short Story
Atsumina's OS collection
     +[OS] Forever and Ever
     +[Short Story] I Love You (Completed)
     +[OS] Promise
     +[Short Story] My Lovely Ojou-sama (Completed)
     +[OS] Perfect Valentine
     +[OS] Our Love Story
     +[Short Story] Power of Love (Completed)
     +[Short Story] Escape (Completed)
     +[Short Story] My Feeling for You (Completed)
     +[OS] Miracle of Christmas
     +[OS] Christmas Wish

Fateful Encounter (Atsumina, Wmatsui) (Completed)
Beyond The Sea (Atsumina, Mayuki, Kojiyuu, Wmatsui, Marimii) (Completed)
Key of Happiness (Atsumina, Kojiyuu, Wmatsui) (Completed)
Mission of Love (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) (Completed)

Offline Jkugang

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Gasp!  Σ(・□・;) :shock:
Takapapa is against the marriage! :cry: :( :panic:
I hope things will workout ok...
waahhhhh! You never fail to amaze me with your updates author-san!
Keep up the good work!  :mon determined: :gmon bang:

Offline AI712

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what !?

update soon :D

Offline black_maa

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What!?  :shocked  Ah.. of course, from the beginning it sounds too good to be true and here we goes..  :(
Hardest part only comes..
Uh..  :roll:
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Offline Jsheep

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Oh no!!! :shocked

Offline Narukami

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Eh~ why minami's father won't approve the marriage. :shocked  :w00t:

Atsumina nooo~ :panic: :panic:

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What the hell????  :shocked

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[Atsumina's OS collection] Power of Love (Atsumina) Part 11 21/05/2016
« Reply #136 on: May 21, 2016, 03:19:16 AM »
@Jkugang, @AI712, @black_maa, @Jsheep, @Narukami: Thank you!  :D

Thank you everyone for reading my fic  :D

Here is part 11  :D

Power of Love

Part 11

At the Takahashi’s mansion

In the big garden

Tachi coldly look at Atsuko while Minami standing shield in front of her. His mother is holding Tachi’s arm.

“I said once again, I won’t approve this” Tachi said

“Why?” Minami asks

“I forbid you to go out with the Maeda. Never” he said

“What’s wrong with Maeda? Why did you always like that?” Minami raises his tone

“That girl definitely wants to come here to take revenge. She wants to take this house down, you idiot man” Tachi said

“Minami” Atsuko hides behind Minami scarily

“Tachi, don’t say to Minami like that. She is Maeda, but maybe she isn’t that Maeda” His mother said

“She is Maeda Atsuko, daughter of Maeda Ken. She is that Maeda clan. The clan that has a long grudge with our Takahashi. Those Maeda always wants to take revenge. She uses him.” Tachi said while pointing at Atsuko

“Don’t you say that to her. I didn’t come here to ask for your approval because I know you never see me approve anything I do. I just came here to inform my mother about this. I love her, and I will marry her no matter what” Minami said back

“You are an ungrateful child” Tachi said and slaps his face

“Minami” Atsuko said in surprise

“Tachi don’t hit Minami” his mother said

“I don’t have a son who never listen to me. While I told him to go back here and manage the family business, he stubbornly stays in Canada to be a doctor. Now I told him not to marry that girl, and he talks back to me” Tachi said angrily

Minami looks at his father angrily.

“I said what I want to say. I won’t listen to you and your stupid reason.” Minami said

“Stupid reason? You forgot how your big brother die? It was them who did that. It was them who threw your brother into jail in Canada. He was beaten to dead there” Tachi said angrily

“He was thrown into jail because he raced illegally and nearly kill innocent people.” Minami turns and said


“Please Tachi” Ayumi holds Tachi back

“Look at him. He always goes against me” Tachi said angrily

“I said what I want to say. I will marry Atsuko no matter what” Minami said

Then he pulls her with him out of his house. He leads her to their car and drives back to their house.

“Are you ok, Minami?” Atsuko asks him worriedly

Minami holds her hand

“I’m fine, Atsuko.” he smiles and said to her

“What is your father talking about, Minami? The grudge? Maeda and Takahashi? Also about your brother” Atsuko said in confuse

“I don’t know either. About my brother, I don’t know if this related, but I remember that he was arrested because he racing illegally in Canada. At that time, I was studying at Germany.” Minami said

“I only know through my friend who is police. He said that my brother raced illegally and hit a car causing it to roll down on a cliff. Luckily the victim is ok. About the reason why he died. My friend said that my brother caused some conflict with some prisoners there, and they beat him up making him fall down the prison 2 level and died” He continues

“My brother is a very hot temper person. I must admitted that he is not a good person either, so I didn’t surprise about that.” Minami said

“I see. So why is it related to my family?” Atsuko asks

“I don’t know. I didn’t hear anything about that” Minami said

He turns and sees that Atsuko looks down sadly. He raises his hand and pats her head

“Don’t worry Atsuko. I don’t know what the grudge that he is mentioned, and I don’t care. You are you. Your family are your family. I love you, and I will definitely keep you by my side no matter what. I won’t let anything prevent me from being with you” He said to her gently

Atsuko smiles happily at his words

“Thank you, Minami” she said happily

Suddenly her phone rings. She takes her phone and sees that is her brother.

“Hello oniichan” Atsuko said

“Really? Where are you and Rena?”

“Ok, I will be there, right away. I also have a very special person for you two to meet” Atsuko said happily

“Ok, see you” Atsuko said

Then she hangs up

“What is it, Atsuko?” Minami asks her

“My brother just came back here. He is at my house right now, and he wants to see me” Atsuko said

“I see” Minami said

“Minami, do you want to meet my brother now?” Atsuko asks

She is afraid that Minami still upset about the incident

“Of course, you said to him that you want them to meet your special person. Therefore, I have to meet them” Minami said

Then he turns his car and drives to Atsuko’s house.

After 15 minutes

They reach Atsuko’s house. She holds Minami’s hand and rushes into her house

“I’m here oniichan, Rena” Atsuko said happily

Exchanges for her happy face are very serious faces of Rena and Jun. Seeing that, Atsuko stops smiling. She looks at them with confused look

“What’s wrong, Oniichan, Rena?” Atsuko asks

“Atsuko, dad wants you to stop your relationship with Takahashi Minami, right away. Not only dad, but I also want you to end this” Jun said seriously

Atsuko widens her eyes in surprise, and her heart beats faster after hearing that. She holds Minami’s hand tightly with her shaky hand. Minami steps up and looks at Jun seriously

“Hello, I’m Taka…”

“You don’t need to introduce. I know you are Takahashi Minami, a doctor. You met my sister at the airport. You also travel with her to German, right” Jun said cutting Minami’s words

“You know quite a lot huh?” Minami said

“Of course, we have to protect our Atsuko from those traitors and killer” Jun said

“I’m sorry, but I don’t quite understand what the meaning of your words, Mr. Maeda” Minami said

“I also really want to know why did you want Atsuko to end her relationship with me?” he asks

“If you want to understand my words ask your father. He know that way better. Also about the killer, that is your brother Takahashi Kohei” Jun said

“Now please Mr. Takahashi, I want you to leave our house and end this relationship immediately” Jun said

“Why oniichan? What’s wrong? Why can’t I be with Minami?” Atsuko asks

“Because he is a part of Takahashi, and all Takahashi are bad people” Jun said

“Oniichan, I can’t accept that reason of yours. I love Minami, and I want to be with him” Atsuko said

“Atsuko, don’t be stubborn. Today, I come here is to take you back to Canada with us. Dad and I will find a good person for you.” Jun said

“No, I won’t go. I only love Minami. I won’t marry anyone” Atsuko said strongly

“Atsuko” Jun slams the table and said

“You never talk back to me like this. Did he teach you that?” Jun raises his tone

“Jun, calm down. You shouldn’t yell at Atsuko like that” Rena said

“Rena, please tell oniichan for me. Minami is very nice. He loves me a lot, and I also love him too.” Atsuko said to Rena in tear

Rena looks down. She really wants to help her, but she said what she had to. However she can’t change Jun’s mind


Before Atsuko comes

In the Living-room

“Jun, how about we talk to him first to see how he is. As the report, he is really care for her. Maybe he is a good person.” Rena said

“No, I will definitely take her back to Canada with me. There is no good person in Takahashi clan. That year was his brother car caused our car to crash and roll down on the cliff. You nearly got killed by that. It is unforgivable” Jun said angrily

“But that is his brother. His brother is his brother. He is him. Maybe he is different” Rena said

“None of them are good, Rena. This is come from his ancestors. They all are bad” Jun said


“Rena, you don’t have to say anything. Dad and I know what is best for her. This is all for Atsuko’s happiness” Jun said

End flashback

“Rena” Atsuko looks at Rena

“You don’t need to call her. This all for your own happiness, Atsuko” Jun said

“My happiness is Minami, oniichan. Please understand me” Atsuko said sincerely

“Atsuko, don’t be stubborn. Listen to oniichan” Jun stands up and walks toward Atsuko

“Atsuko let’s go with me” Jun holds her hand and said

Minami holds Atsuko’s hand and pulls her back behind him.

“I won’t let you take Atsuko away from me” Minami said seriously

Jun furrows his eyebrows while looking at Minami

“You have nerve to act like that in front of me, huh?” he said

“I won’t let anyone take my Atsuko away from me. Never ever” Minami said

“Atsuko, come here” Jun said

“Oniichan” Atsuko calls him

“Please oniichan, I really love Minami. Please accept our love” Atsuko bows at him and said

“Atsuko, don’t be stubborn. Come here” Jun said again

Atsuko doesn’t know what to do. Her heart is really in pain. One his hear brother, her family, and one is the person she loves the most.

“Please oniichan” Atsuko bows deeply and said

“Atsuko, we only want what is best for you” Jun said

“You always said that you want what is best for Atsuko. However, you only force your thought on her. Is it what you say best for her?” Minami raises his tone

“Shut up. I don’t need a Takahashi to lecture me. Now get out of my house” Jun shouts

“You don’t need to say that. I will leave this house. However, I will take her with me” Minami said while holding Atsuko's hand

“You dare to take her out” Jun stands in front of the house and said

Minami ignores him and walks toward the door with Atsuko

“Atsuko” Jun calls her

Atsuko looks at Jun, and then she looks at Minami.

“Let’s go Minami” Atsuko pulls him and runs out of her house

“Atsuko” Jun rushes to her

“Jun, don’t force her too much” Rena said while holding him back

“Forcing her to leave the person she loves is very hurt, Jun” she continues

“Rena, you don’t understand. I do this is for her own good. I don’t want her to get trick by those people” Jun said and rushes out of the house.

However when he gets there, Minami’s car already drives away from the house. Jun looks at the car angrily

“I won’t leave like this” he said

“Jun” Rena said

“Rena, I won’t change my mind no matter what” Jun said

Then he walks back into the house. Rena looks at him and sighs.

“I should ask auntie for help” she thought

Then she takes out her phone and calls Mariko

(Hello Rena)

“Hi auntie, I really need your help right now” Rena said seriously

(What’s wrong, Rena?)

“You knew about Atsuko and Takahashi Minami, right?” Rena asks

(Uh) Mariko said

(Did Ken-nii and Jun know about this?) She asks

“Uh, they knew about this because father ordered some people to follow Atsuko to Germany. They reported to him” Rena said

(I see. So what did they do?) Mariko asks

“Jun and dad want to take Atsuko back to Canada and separate them. I tried to convince Jun about this, but he didn’t listen to me. He is still very angry with that accident” Rena said

(I see. There is one thing that Jun and his father have the same is stubbornness. They won’t easily listen to anyone) Mariko said and sighs

“Yes, that is the problem. Atsuko seems to be very hurt and sad about this. This is the first time I see those sad eyes of her when hearing Jun said that he wants her to separate from her love. It breaks my heart when seeing those eyes of her” Rena said

(I see. I expect this thing since the day I heard his name. However I still hope that they will change their mind because of Atsuko. However, I was wrong) Mariko said

“Uh, that is why I want your help auntie” Rena said

(Uhm...let’s me see if there is a way to change those stubborn heads. If not, I’m afraid a very bad thing will happen) Mariko said

“Uh, I also has a very bad feeling” Rena said

(Let’s me talk to Atsuko first) Mariko said

“Ok, I will hang up now. Thank you auntie” Rena said

(We only want Atsuko to be happy with her love) Mariko said

Then they hang up. Rena looks at her phone and sighs. Then she turns and goes back to the house


At the beach

Minami takes Atsuko to the beach to help her feel better. They sit on the sand, and Atsuko hugs him and cries a lot.

“Minami, I really want oniichan and Daddy to approve our love. Why didn’t they accept you? I love you, why didn’t they see that, Minami” Atsuko said and chokes

Minami hugs her and pats her back

“Don’t worry, Atsuko. Trust me. I will fight until the end to have your hand. I will prove to them that I’m not a bad person, that not all Takahashi is bad. I will make them approve our love” he said

“Thank you Minami” Atsuko looks at him and said

Minami smiles gently at her. He bends and pecks her lips

“Don’t cry ok. We will find a good solution for this. We will definitely be together forever, Atsuko.” He said to her while hugging her tightly

“Uh, we will always together” Atsuko buries her face on his chest and said

Minami sits there and pats her back gently to comfort her. After a while, Atsuko falls in sleep because of crying. Minami caresses her face and kisses her forehead

“I won’t let anyone separate us, Atsuko. Never ever” he thought while stroking her hair.

Suddenly his phone rings. Minami looks and sees the caller is Mariko.

“Hello auntie” Minami said

(I heard about that. How is Atsuko now, Takamina?) Mariko asks seriously

“She is very sad and cried a lot. However, she calmed down now.” Minami said while looking at Atsuko

(I see) Mariko sighs and said

“Auntie, what is really happened between Takahashi and Maeda?” Minami asks

(Come to my house and I will tell you guys everything) Mariko said

“Ok” Minami said

Then he lifts Atsuko up back to his car. After that he drives to Mariko’s house. When they reach Mariko’s house, Minami calls Atsuko gently


Atsuko opens her eyes and looks at Minami

“Where are we, Minami?” Atsuko asks him

“We are at aunt Mariko’s house. She told us to come here. She will tell us about our family” Minami said

“I see” Atsuko said

Minami bends down and kisses her lips

“Get a hold of yourself ok. I will be here with you, Atsuko. There is nothing to be worry of” He pats her head and said

“Uh, thank you Minami” Atsuko kisses his cheek and said

Then they go into Mariko’s house

“How are you feeling now, Atsuko?” Mariko asks her while sitting down

“Uh, I’m fine auntie. Thank you” Atsuko nods and said

“That is good” Mariko smiles and said

“So what is really happened between our family, auntie?” Atsuko asks

Mariko leans back on her sofa and said

“It happened very long time ago between Takamina’s great grandfather, Takahashi Kochiro and your great grandfather who is also my grandfather, Maeda Daichi. I heard this from Atsuko’s great grandmother.”

“Maeda’s family at that time own a very big company, and your great grandfather is the CEO. Takamina’s great grandfather also work there. Your two great grandfather are good friend of each other. Those two are very good at business, and they get countless contract for the company. Until…”


On the street

Daichi and Kochiro are walking while talking to each other. Suddenly, they hear someone calls for help

“Anyone, please help me”

Kochiro quickly rushes to the sources of the sound. When he got to the place, he sees 5 men surround a girl.

“Hey, what are you doing?” He shouts and rushes to them

“Don’t interfere with my business” one of the men said

“How can I ignore when seeing you do this to a girl” Kochiro said

Then he rushes and kicks the man that holds her hand hard at his face.

“Don’t worry, I will protect you” he smiles and said to the girl

The 5 men rush to him. At the same time, Daichi rushes to the place. Together they defeated all of them. After that the girl thank them and they take her back to her house. The next day, to their surprise, she is the new secretary of Daichi. They are very happy to meet her again. Slowly between three of them create a very complicated love triangle. Daichi and Kochiro both love her. However the person she loves is Kochiro the person who saved her. Daichi knew that and withdraws from this complicated love.

However their happiness is not last long. Another problem appears. Emi’s parents don't allow them to be together because Kochiro is not compatible to her family. They want to separate them no matter what. Moreover, they even want to engage her with Daichi.

In the coffee shop

“Emi, please run away from this place with me” Kochiro said

“Let’s leave everything. We will start a new life.” He continues while holding her hands

“I can't Kochiro. I still have my parents. They only have me.” Emi said

“Kochiro, let's think of a way to make them accept us. Let's show them how good you are. We will do our best together” She continues

“Plus Daichi agreed to help us” she said while holding his hands

“There is no way they will accept me. Even though they know that I’m way better in business than Daichi. They still choose him because he is rich. I won't ever get their approval” Kochiro said angrily

“Kochiro” Emi calls him

“And don't believe what that man said. He is a two-faced person. In front of me, he said that he wishes our happiness. However, behind my back he did dirty thing to get you” Kochiro slams the table and said

“Kochiro, how can you say that? He is your best friend” Emi said

“I don't have that kind of friend” he said

Then he looks at Emi. Suddenly he laughs loudly and steps back

“I know...I know now. You also want to marry him because of his money, ri...”

Hasn't finished his words, Emi slaps his face strongly

“Takahashi Kochiro, I can't believe that you said thing like this to me” Emi said in tear

“Our love, is our love that cheap? What kind of girl do you think I’m, Kochiro?” She shouts and rushes out of the shop

“Emi wait” Kochiro shouts and rushes to her.

When Emi got out of the shop, she accidentally bumps into someone.


When she is about to apology, the man speaks up

“Emi, what's wrong?”

Emi quickly looks up and calls him in surprise.


“What's happened, Emi? Why did you cry?” he asks her worriedly

“I...I...I’m fine, Daichi” Emi said and wipes her tear

“You’re not fine. Your eyes are all red because of crying. I knew that.” Daichi said and wipes her tear

“Tell me what's happened, Emi. I will help you. Although I can't have you as my love, I’m still your friend. I will help you with everything, just tell me” Daichi said with serious eyes

Emi looks at him with her teary eyes

“Daichi” she calls him and cries on his chest

“What's wrong, Emi? Tell me I will do everything to help you” Daichi asks while patting her back.

Suddenly, someone grabs his hand and pulls Daichi out. He strongly punches Daichi at his face making him fall on the ground

“Daichi” Emi calls worriedly while helping him to stand up

She turns and sees Kochiro looks at Daichi with angry look

“What are you doing, Kochiro? Why did you hit him?” Emi shouts

“He is a despicable person. He tries to steal my girlfriend” Kochiro shouts

“Kochiro, you misunderstood. I just comfort Emi because she is sad. I know that you are my best friend, and she is your girlfriend. I won't do that unforgivable thing” Daichi said

“Don't act in front of me. I know it was you who asked your family to engage you with her, right?” Kochiro said

“I didn't. I can swear about that. I don't even know about that until yesterday. I admit that I’m extremely happy when hearing that I can marry Emi” Daichi said

“Daichi” Emi thought while looking at him in surprised look

“Haha...I know” Kochiro said and looks at Daichi with disgust look

“However…” Daichi shouts

“However then I realize one thing. In her heart, there is only you in there. Even I can marry her, I only get her body not her heart. I don't want that. Moreover. You are my best friend. How can I hurt my friend like that? I’m a human not a cold-hearted monster” Daichi said seriously

“That is why I already told my parents that I won't accept this engagement. The only thing you have to do now is do your best so that her parents can see your good side” he continues

“Shut up, don't act as a good person here. I know you Daichi. You have money. You can buy whatever you want” Kochiro shouts

“Kochiro, do you mean I’m just only a thing to buy?” Emi shouts in tear

“Emi, of course not. I’m sorry about my word earlier. I didn't think of you like that.” Kochiro said and holds her hand

“Don't touch me. You aren't the Kochiro I know. Not anymore” she slaps his hand away and said

Kochiro looks at her with surprised look

“Good….very good….I will prove to you who is better. Wait and see Emi. Your parents also wait and see” He shouts and rushes away

“Kochiro, wait” Daichi shouts

“Don't chase after him, Daichi. I really don't know what's wrong with him. He changed a lot since the first day I met him. His mind always thinks about money. Why did I feel so distance between me and him?” Emi said in tear

“Give him time, Emi. I think he just worry too much about your parents. When he thinks through everything, he will be back to his normal self. Don't worry” Daichi said gently while patting her shoulders

“Daichi, thank you” Emi said in whisper tone

After that day, Kochiro disappears from Tokyo. No one knows where he is. Emi’s heart breaks in pieces because of that. However, Daichi always stay by her side and encourage her

4 years later

Another miserable thing happen to her. The employee in her father's company fraud a big amount of money. He also signs some fake contract. The incident caused the company went bankrupt. Her father died because of shock. Her misery didn't stop when her mother got cancer.

In Daichi’s office

“Daichi, you call me” Emi said

“How is your mother, Emi?” Daichi asks

“Her condition is stable now. But it can get worse any second” Emi said in tear

“Don't cry Emi. My father knew a very good doctor. He can help your mother” Daichi said

“Also don't worry about the fee. I will take care of it” Daichi smiles and said

“No, no, no, I can't receive anything from you anymore, Daichi” Emi shakes her head and said

“You don't see me as your friend?” Daichi said sadly

“Of course not. You are my best and most important friend. However, you helped me a lot. You even pay all my mother’s hospital bill and her recently surgery. I can't accept anything from you anymore.” Emi said

“Baka” Daichi said and smiles gently

“I have to help my friend with everything I’ve got right” he continues


“No but, just do as I said” cutting Emi’s words, Daichi said

Then the doctor comes, he is able to treat for her. However, after two years, the cancer relapses again, and she dies the year later.

At the cemetery

Emi is standing there and looking at her mother's grave. Daichi is standing next to her

“Don't be sad, Emi. She will be very sad if seeing you like this. Plus, I promised her that I will take good care of you, and I will do everything I can for you” Daichi said and pats her shoulder

“....” Emi still stays silent

Seeing that, Dachi said more

“Your mother is definitely in heaven right now, looking at you and watching over you”

“...” She still keeps silent

Suddenly, he pull her into his embrace and hugs her tightly. Emi is very surprised

“Emi, please don't be sad. You know that I’m not good at talking, and I really don't know what to do to make you feel better. If you want to cry, just cry on my shoulder. I will always stay by your side, and you can always depend on me in everything.” Daichi said in panic tone

Suddenly he hears a small laughter. He looks down and sees Emi is laughing

“I’m fine, Daichi. Being able to live with her for two more years make me very happy. Thank you, Daichi” Emi said and kisses his cheek

Daichi is widens his eyes in surprise.

“Haa!! You helped me a lot. I wonder how I can repay you” she stretches her arms and said

“How about marry me?” Daichi said jokingly

Emi turns to him and looks at him with surprised look.

“Haha...I’m just kidmhm…”

When Daichi is about to said that he is kidding, he feels a soft lips touch his gently. Then Emi breaks the kiss and steps back

“E...E...Emi…” Daichi calls her while touching his lips

“So Daichi, what will you do now?” Emi said teasingly while raising her left hand.

Daichi still looks at her with confused looks. Emi looks at him and laughs

“Daichi is that how you propose to a girl?” Emi said

Realizing what she just said, Daichi quickly takes out the ring. He kneel down and wears it on her ring finger. Emi looks at him and smiles shyly. Suddenly Daichi stand up and hugs her tightly

“Yeah!!!! Emi will be my wife” He lifts her up and shouts in happy

Emi smiles happily and hugs him back.

Wedding day

In the bride’s room

Emi looks at her in the mirror and smiles happily. Suddenly, she hears the door opens. She turns around to see who it is. She stands up and widens her eyes in surprise

“I’m back Emi” the man said and smiles at her

“Kochiro” Emi calls the name of the man that left her for 7 years

He rushes and hugs her in his arms. Emi quickly pushes him out and steps back. Kochiro looks at her with surprised look

“What’s wrong Emi? I’m back for you” he said

“You came back here for me?” Emi said and laughs bitterly

“Uh, I finally have a lot of money. Now let’s go with me, Emi” Kochiro said and holds her hand

Emi slaps his hand away.

“Do you know what day to day is?” Emi asks

“I know today is the wedding. That is why I quickly come back here to take you with me. Let’s leave here, Emi” Kochiro said

“You knew it” Emi asks

“Yes, I ordered my man to come here to look for you.” Kochiro said

“Then do you know what happened to my family? Do you know how my life is in those past 7 years? Do you know how hurt I’m when you left that year?” She shouts at him

“I...I…” Kochiro looks down

“Do you know how hard my life is?” Emi shouts

“I’m sorry Emi. But now I’m here, I will make you happy. I will do everything to requitie to you those time that you are sad and hurt” Kochiro said

“requite? That is great huh?” Emi laughs bitterly

“You still think that I love money that much, huh?” she said

“No it is not what I mean, Emi” Kochiro said


“Emi, are you ready?”

While they are talking, Daichi rushes in and asks

“Daichi” Emi smiles at him

Then she rushes to hugs him. He hugs her back. When he looks at her, he sees her eyes are red

“Emi, your eyes, are you crying?” Daichi asks worriedly

“I’m fine, Daichi.” Emi smiles and said

“Anyway, how do I look, Daichi?” Emi asks him

“You are very beautiful. More beautiful than ever” Daichi said and smiles gently

“Sweet talker” Emi said

“I’m serious Emi” Daichi said seriously

Emi looks at him and laughs

“You are so cute, Daichi” She said

When Daichi looks up, he sees a man standing in the middle of the room

“Who is he, Emi?” He asks in confused

“He is…”

“We meet again, Daichi” Kochiro turns back and said

“Kochiro” Daichi calls in surprise

He turns and looks at Emi.

“Emi, it is great that Kochiro is back right?” Daichi said and force a smile at Emi

“What do you mean, Daichi?” Emi asks him in confuse

“I know that you love him, Emi. I’m very happy when you accept my proposal. However I knew that you accepted it because I helped you. I want you to know that I helped you because I want to. It is not because I want you to repay me or anything. I won’t force you Emi.” Daichi said

He tries to hold his tear, but it still fall on his cheek.

“Daichi” Emi calls him

“I’m fine, Emi” He wipes his tear and smiles at her

“Baka” She flicks his head and said

Daichi looks at her with confused look

“Do you think I’m that kind of person marrying you just to repay you?” Emi asks while frowning

“No, I didn’t mean that. It is just I don’t want to force you. I don’t want to see you sad” Daichi said while shaking his head

“I’m sorry Emi” he continues while looking down

Emi looks at him and smiles gently. Then she turns to Kochiro

“When I’m in the deepest of despair, where are you? Desperately looking for money. Only him, only Daichi, he always stays by my side, taking care of me, worrying about me, helping me. He did all of that without wanting for anything.” Emi said

“He just acts in front of you. He has money, so he can do whatever he wants. However, I don’t have a big fortune like him. I have to make money so that your parents will approve that. He is an unfaithful friend. He stole you from me when I’m away. Why didn’t you see that?” Kochiro said

“You are so selfish, Kochiro” Emi said while shaking her head

“Are you done with your talk? My wedding with Daichi is about to begin. If you want to bless our happy day, you can stay. If not, you can leave now.” She continues

Kochiro looks at her then Daichi

“So you still choose money over me huh?” Kochiro said

Then he angrily walks away. Emi looks at him, and her tear unconsciously falls.

“Emi” Daichi calls her gently

Emi looks at him and smiles gently. Then she walks toward him and cups his cheeks

“Daichi, let’s me tell you this. I will never accept your proposal if I don’t love you. I’m the person who will never go against my heart no matter what. If I don’t love you, no matter how big I owe you, I won’t ever accept your propasal. I will find a way to repay you but not myself” She said to him serious

Daichi widens his eyes in surprise.

“Kochiro and I are already in the past. The only person now I love is Maeda Daichi. You are my husband, my one and only one.” she continues

“Emi, thank you. I love you” Daichi hugs her and said in happy tone

“I love you too” She smiles and hugs him back.

8 years later

In Daichi’s office

While he is working, his phone rings. Daichi picks up his phone


(Sir, our company is in big trouble. Our supplier just contacted me. They told us that our goods can’t ship here in time. It can be late for a month)

“What? Without their supplies, we can’t finish our contract in time. What’s wrong?” Daichi said

(They also have no idea what’s happened. The police said that they have to keep the goods because someone reported that there is some illegal act in the goods)

“What? If they want to check, they can check right away, right? Why the deliver time is delayed for a month?” Daichi asks

(They asked, and was told that the police have to investigate about that)

“If the goods is delayed for a month. Our contracts can be delayed for 5 month. Did you contact our customers? Try to negotiate with them about that” Daichi said

(I did, but they don’t want to negotiate. They said that if their project is delayed, their company will be lost a lot of money and benefit. They also said that there is another company that offer them a very good deal. They all now want to cancel contract because we violate the contract)

“Tell them it is not our intention to violate that. Try to talk to them. I will find way to solve this” Daichi said

(Yes sir)

Then Daichi hangs up. He sighs while caressing his temple.

“What's wrong, Daichi?” Emi gently asks him while giving him a cup of tea

“Our supplier just told us that there is some delay with our material when shipping them here. Our goods are kept by the police and delay the goods for one month.” Daichi said

“It causes our contract to delay for 5 month. Our customer is very not pleased about it and want to cancel the contract.” he continues

“But it is not our fault.” Emi said

“I know, but the customers didn’t want to negotiate” Daichi said

“How about we go there and talk to them. We will personally go to each of our customer and apology. We will use our sincere to ask for their understanding” Emi said

“Yes, you are right, Emi, let….”

“You don't need to go anywhere, Maeda Daichi” a voice said

Daichi and Emi turn to the door and see the person that they haven't seen for a very long time

“Long time no see, Daichi, Emi” Kochiro said to them

“Kochiro” They call in surprise

“What with that reaction? Did you greet your best friend like that Daichi?” Kochiro said and smiles at him

Daichi smiles widely

“Kochiro, I’m so glad. I thought you…” Daichi rushes to hug his best friend and said

“Everything is in the past now” Kochiro said

Daichi looks at Emi and smiles happily. However, his and her smile aren't last long.

“Is that what you two want me to say” he said coldly

Daichi looks at him with confused look

“What are you saying Kochiro?” he asks

“I come here today to take away everything from you, Maeda Daichi. You used your money to steal away the girl I love. Then I will take all your money. I will take away everything that belong to you” Kochiro said

“What do you mean, Kochiro?” Emi asks him while frowning

Then Daichi hears his phone rings

“What is it? How is the talk?” he asks

(The representative of T.K refuses to negotiate. Other companies also follow him.)

“Did you state our reason for them clearly?” Daichi asks

(Yes I did.)

“Ok, I will go and meet the president of T.K. I wi…”

“You don't need to go anywhere to meet him. He is right here” Kochiro said

Daichi and Emi look at him with surprised look.

“What are you saying, Daichi?” Daichi asks

“Let’s me introduce myself. My name is Takahashi Kochiro. President of the T.K. group. I come here to collect this company” Kochiro said and smirks

Daichi furrows his eyebrows and asks

“What do you mean, Kochiro?”

“I will buy your company. I will take away everything from you” He said

Seem to realize something, Daichi asks while holding his fists tightly

“Kochiro, it was you”

“Yes, it was me” Kochiro said

“I was the company that told them to cancel their contract. Just follow me and I will give them a great deal” he continues

“Hum...I wonder why your goods can’t load into the ship…” He said while smirking

“You did that? You was the one manipulated that?” Daichi said in shaky tone

Kochiro laughs loudly

“I wonder” he said in scornful tone

“You...why did you do this to me? We are friend, right?” Daichi said angrily

“Shut up, I don’t have a friend who stole the girl I love.” Kochiro shouts

“I told you before I don’t love you anymore. You are the one who threw away your love. You are so selfish, Kochiro” Emi said

“Shut up, you left me for money. I became like this because of you all. It was all your fault” Kochi shouts

“However, Emi, I will give you a chance. Follow me now, I will forgive everything before” he said

Emi slaps his face angrily

“You are despicable.” she said while looking at him with disgusted look

“You always said that everyone is at fault. Why don’t you look at yourself, right now? Disgusting, despicable. All you can think now is money. I love Daichi, I will always love him, and I will never betray my husband” Emi shouts

Kochiro is very angry with her words

“Good, then let’s me see how can you live poverty with him” Kochiro nods and said

“Now I will take away everything from you, Maeda Daichi. Everything” Kochiro said and laughs

“You…” Daichi said angrily

*Pant* *Pant*

He holds his chest and pants. He is very shock because he is betrayed by his best friend. Then he faints

“Daichi” Emi calls him worriedly

End flashback

“Your great grandfather had a heart problem. That shock nearly killed him. Although he recovered, he was very weak. After recovering, he left Japan to Canada to find a new life. He and your great grandfather had to work very hard to raise your grandfather. Because of working too hard, he died after two years. Your great grandmother keeps working until your grandfather graduated. Your grandfather is a very good business person. With his talent, he created a company and developed it into the big group as now.” Mariko said

“Atsuko, about your grandfather, because he witnessed everything and experienced the hardship, he very hates Takahashi. He told me that he will never forget Takamina’s great grandfather’s face. ‘The face of a traitor’. It was because of him that his father died, and his mother has to work very hard” she continues

“However because your great grandmother told him before she dies that do not take revenge, and that is also your great grandfather's will. Although he listened to them, he still said that ‘Takahashi and Maeda will never befriend with each other’. ‘Maeda will never forgive Takahashi, the clan of traitor” she finishes

Atsuko and Minami stay silent after hearing the story

“That is unacceptable. The past is in the past. Why did they force us to separate just because of that?” Minami speaks up

“Uh, I will talk to oniichan and Daddy about this.” Atsuko said

“The problem here is that, there is another thing that enforced this hatred in Jun and your father” Mariko said and sighs

“Is it because of the accident that my brother caused in Canada?” Minami asks

“Uh, that accident nearly took Rena’s life which made Jun very angry. The grudge in the past and the accident enrage Jun and Ken-nii more. They swore to not forgive Takahashi no matter what” Mariko said and sighs

“I won’t give up” Atsuko said

“Uh, I will show them that I really love Atsuko, and not all Takahashi is bad” Minami said

Mariko looks at their determined eyes and smiles

“Good, I will help you two with everything I got” Mariko said

“Thank you, auntie” Atsuko said happily

“You silly girl, all I want is my lovely niece to be happy” Mariko pats her head and said

After talking to Mariko, Minami and Atsuko go back to their house

At their mansion

In their room

Atsuko lies on Minami’s arm while hugging him tightly

“Minami, please don’t leave me” She said while burying her face on his chest

Minami smiles gently

“Of course I won’t leave you no matter what. We will definitely get over this obstacle” He pats her back and said

“Now, you should sleep Atsuko. We have to go to work early tomorrow” He continues

“Uh” Atsuko nods

He bends down and kisses her lips

“Good night, Atsuko”

“Good night, Minami” Atsuko kisses his lips

Then she shrinks herself in Minami’s embrace and falls in sleep.

In the morning

Atsuko walks into the hospital first while Minami parking the car. When she just steps up from the stair, she sees Jun and Rena standing there

“Atsuko, go back to Canada with oniichan” Jun said while walking toward her

“I won’t go back oniichan. Auntie told me everything. The past is the past. I won’t accept that reason.” Atsuko said

“Atsuko” Jun calls her

“I also knew about that accident. I’m really mad too, but Minami is Minami, and his brother is his brother. Minami is not his brother. He is a good person” Atsuko said

“Atsuko, you are still young, you don’t understand anything. They all are the same. Those traitor and killer” Jun said

“Let’s go with me” He takes her hand and pulls her with him

“No I won’t go” Atsuko struggles

“Atsuko, don’t be stubborn” Jun said

“Jun, please calm down.” Rena holds his arm and said

“I’m very calm right now” Jun said

“Atsuko, until now, you never go against us in anything. Just knowing him, you learn a lot of bad thing” he said to Atsuko

“Oniichan, I’m not learning bad thing from Minami. I just said what I really felt. Please oniichan, please understand me. Minami is not a bad person” Atsuko said

“Atsuko, he is not a good person. Now, be good and listen to me. Let’s go back to Canada” Jun said

“No I won’t” Atsuko withdraws her hand and steps back

“Atsuko” Jun walks toward her

“No I won’t go back, I won’t” Atsuko shakes her head and steps back.

Suddenly she trips on the stair and falls.

“Atsuko” Rena calls in surprise

Jun tries to catch her hand but misses it. Atsuko falls and rolls down from the stair. At the same time Minami reaches the place. He widens his eyes in surprise.

“Atsuko” He quickly rushes to her and calls her

Atsuko is unconscious. He lifts her up and rushes up stair. He looks at Jun angrily

“Get out of my way” he shouts and rushes into the hospital

In the patient’s room

Minami, Rena, Jun, and Mariko are waiting for Atsuko to wake up. Rena sits down on the chair near Atsuko. Then she notices that Atsuko slowly wakes up

“Atsuko” she calls happily

Minami quickly rushes to her

“Atsuko, are you ok?” Minami sits down and holds her hand

“Get away from her” Jun pushes him out

“I won't, she is my love” Minami said

“You two stop it. Let’s check to see how she is” Mariko said

Then they all stay silent.

“Atsuko, are you ok?” Rena asks

Atsuko looks at her. Then she sits up and looks around

“Atsuko, are you ok?” Jun asks her

“Are you ok, Atsuko?” Mariko also comes closer to her

She keeps looking around until she sees a pair of worried eyes looking at her. She quickly steps down and rushes to Minami

“Minami” Atsuko calls him while hugging him tightly

“Atsuko” he hugs her back

“Are you ok, my love? Does your head hurt?” he asks her

“I’m fine. But Minami, who are they?” Atsuko looks up at Minami and asks him in confuse.

Everyone looks at Atsuko with surprised look


Hope you guys enjoy reading it.  :D
Fic Index

OS & Short Story
Atsumina's OS collection
     +[OS] Forever and Ever
     +[Short Story] I Love You (Completed)
     +[OS] Promise
     +[Short Story] My Lovely Ojou-sama (Completed)
     +[OS] Perfect Valentine
     +[OS] Our Love Story
     +[Short Story] Power of Love (Completed)
     +[Short Story] Escape (Completed)
     +[Short Story] My Feeling for You (Completed)
     +[OS] Miracle of Christmas
     +[OS] Christmas Wish

Fateful Encounter (Atsumina, Wmatsui) (Completed)
Beyond The Sea (Atsumina, Mayuki, Kojiyuu, Wmatsui, Marimii) (Completed)
Key of Happiness (Atsumina, Kojiyuu, Wmatsui) (Completed)
Mission of Love (Atsumina, WMatsui, Mayuki) (Completed)

Offline Jkugang

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An update!!! :on gay: :mon XD: :wigglypanda:
Was worried when I was reading the part where atsuko fell down the stairs I thought she was going to have amnesia when she wakes up and forget about minami and only recognized her family like any typical amnesia story, but then she had but was the opposite!  :shock:
Shocking! Hahaha!
Anyway, can't wait for your next update! Weeeee! 😁  :onioncheer: :gmon heartu:

Offline AI712

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yeay ! an update
getting more interesting :D

update soon

Offline black_maa

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Okaa~y...  :huhuh
That's makes things little bit complicated.. :roll:
Uh.. what's next?  8)
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