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Offline Fynn

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Fynn's Fiction~
« on: June 14, 2016, 04:42:35 PM »
Hello guys~   :welcome  :welcome
I don't know what happened to me today. Suddenly I spend my whole day today just to write a story. I also make an account here, being a member here though I don't really mind it before. Since I already used being a silent reader, communication are just hard for me. So, don't mind me here ~
This is my first fanfic, don't expect too much, it might be confusing since English is not my main language, If I do some grammar mistake or spelling, please point it out, cause I want to improve my English. Thanks ~ :peace:


I’m here again today. I sighed. Settling myself down at the corner of the rooftop, watching the night sky.
It always happened whenever I remember about her. That special person. She been missing like 6 months now.
As I closed my eyes, all of our sweet memories came flashing like a movie in my head. The first time I met her, the first time I became her friend. It all came back rushing to me. I cry remembering  her antics even though she act so cold towards me sometime but I still keep a happy smile because it’s fun to be with her and mostly because I love her. I never told her about that cause I know she won’t feel the same feeling that I have for her.

But now…  I love you Mayuyu. Whispering that word to the air, hoping that the wind are kind enough to sent my message to Mayuyu, hoping that she would hear it, my feelings for her, reaching her somewhere else she might belong now. Hoping that she would come back home, to our home, and especially to me.

I love you too Yuki. I just smile when I heard that, knowing the person who answering me just now. Feeling a pair of cold hands that caressing both of my cheek then gently leave a soft kiss on my eyes wiping my tears and sadness away. Then I open my eyes. Hoping that Mayuyu are the one who answering me back and she is here..

Mou Rena, why did you come here? It’s cold being up here, you still sick right ? See, even your hands are cold I said as I grab her hands that still attached to my cheek.I know you are here, since you not in your room. It’s time for dinner she said. By just watching Rena eyes, I know she worried about me. Thanks Rena but you should worry more about your health than me. Hugging her closer to make sure her warmwith my bodyheat. I don’t mind it, being sick if it for your sake Yuki. Baka I said while cluchting her shirt, making it crumpled in my hand. Of course, I mind it if you being sick. You are my best friend Rena, and who gonna cook for me everyday then ? I like your cooking the most you know as I lightly patting Rena head making her comfortable on my shoulder. I could feel she is smiling then laughing at me. That’s because your cooking skill are really bad Yuki, you almost burn up the whole kitchen before. She laughed. Yupp, that was my bad, cooking aren’t just for me you know, that’s why I like your cooking Rena. Even though it’s always a lil bit spicy ? Rena said to me with her questioning look. A lil bit spicy you said ? It’s sure more than a LIL BIT SPICY definition you have in your mind Rena as I tickled her weak spot making Rena squirmimg trying to stop my little revenge  towards her. Stop she said. Asking me to spare her life from dying of laughter. I gave her a minute to catch her breath slowly. I pat her head as I watched her regaining her breath again. When she seem to be relax and dropped her guard, I pinned her down making sure she trapped below me. And this is for my poor lips, I always end up having swollen lips after devouring your dish, Gekikara. I said before tickling her again. She keep laughing and squirming under me with her hand punching softly on my chest. Hahahaha, Yu.. ki.. It’s ticle. Stopp… haha Yuki.. Her breathing become heavy, and I smirked feeling that I have gotten my little revenge toward Rena. Yuki s..top... If chu won’t stop now I won’t cook for you anymore!! She said. Immediately I retreat my hands ASAP and staring at her below me trying to regain her breathing again. Rena ~ I could die of starving without your delicious dish, I said giving her compliment while giving her my cutest puppy eye that I could do after all these time since Mayuyu gone hoping that she would forgive me. Rena is always there for me. I don’t want her to leave me too, negative thought keep clouding my mind.I keep staring at her blankly. Soon after Rena calming herself. I thought that you said my dish are too spicy for you and plus you lips always end up swollen right ? It would be better if you stop eating my dish. Rena said while puffing her cheek and averting her eyes from me. Seeing her action, I smile. Rena is so cute while rubbing her cheek with my hand. I’m sorry Rena while staring at her eyes, hoping that my action would reach her. Seeing Rena looking at me, I smile, showing her my best smile. I’m sorry too Yuki she said feeling her fingers tracing my lip. Your lip must hurt a lot or not. Haha~ Then she clutch my shirt, dragging my upper body down to her and hugging me close to her body. You doesn’t have to go all black on me just to get your sweet little revenge you know, Rena said softly whispering.

Feeling  Rena body move again mine as she breathing, I just snuggle closer to her smelling Rena favourite scent. Strawberry scent. With her cold body, against mine that warm. It feel too much comfortable here with Rena. My mind was clear from any negative thought, I guess I’m still happy without Mayuyu here. Nee, Rena~ I don’t really mind if your dish are a LIL BIT SPICY and my lip getting swollen after that.I can manage that, I can eat ton of ice cream if that happen. Just don’t leave me alone. I don’t want to be alone.  I hate being alone, I said to Rena even my tears started to form again by just thinking that she might leave me alone . Rena nodded to my statement, I won’t leave you alone Yuki. I won’t leave your side. Even if you get fat by eating lots of ice cream later, hehe~  I won’t get fat Rena, your  amazingly spicy and delicious dish can burn all the fat that I have, don’t worry about it.. Glad to hear that, then you have no choice but to eat my cooking  forever Yuki, even though it’s a LIL BIT SPICY.  I don’t mind it Rena. As long as you are here with me.

As we enjoying the night view and each other comfortness, suddenly, my stomach decided to protest and breaking  the quite peace scene that we have now. ggggrrrrggrrrrrr~ Yuki~ haha. Looks like you are so hungry right  now, let’s have dinner shall we ? urmmm…  5 minutes more Rena, I’m so comfortable with you being my pillow here, as I snuggle closer to her seeking comfortness. Yuki~ just wake up already. Seeing no response from Yuki that might have fallen asleep. Rena just played it along with Yuki, letting Yuki embracing her tonight. Thinking that they might sleeping on the roof tonight, Rena try to move her hands  but it stuck between Yuki and her. With no other choice to wake her up, Rena bite her neck. Ouchh, Rena. Yuki immediately wake up. See, I told you to wake up before. Yeah, I’m sorry, I guess I’m falling asleep just now. You are just too comfortable. Right~ Let’s have dinner ok, your stomach keep growling loudly when you fall asleep just now. Ehh~ really ? Well, let’s go then, to dinner~

¬--Dinner Time--

Yuki, just wash your hand first and sit ok ? I’m going to set up the plate.

Yes momm reply Yuki. She obediently sit after washing her hands and watch Rena set up the plate.

As Yuki see the dish for today dinner.. Yeayy~ Today dinner is curry. I like your curry Rena giving her the best smile she could.

Really Yuki ? Hope you really like it cause I have added some little special ingredients for tonight.

Yuki eyes show some interest toward the dish, her eyes keep sparkling and don’t even blink for a second. Then I wouldn’t hold back Rena.

Itadakimasu~

Yuki happily entering the SPECIAL curry into her mouth.

After a  few seconds…

Rena….

Yes my dear Yuki. What’s wrong ? Did you like my SPECIAL curry ?

It’s SPICY !! said Yuki with tears on her eyes.

Rena who could't stand her laughter anymore, just laughing at Yuki while giving her some ice cream that she have prepared before...



END~


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Offline yocelin17

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Re: Fynn's Fiction~
« Reply #1 on: June 14, 2016, 08:12:52 PM »
Where did Mayu go?
Why she left Yuki like that? Fortunately Yuki still have Rena so she won't be alone,

Will you continue this story?
Thanks for your story
Usually a silent reader.

Sorry for my broken english, english is not my first language.

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Re: Fynn's Fiction~
« Reply #2 on: June 15, 2016, 02:03:51 PM »
Continue! Continue! Continue! Continue!
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Offline Rena-chan Daisuki

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Re: Fynn's Fiction~
« Reply #3 on: June 15, 2016, 02:34:07 PM »
Nice story Author :thumbsup
But you should make a space between conversation n the othet, so it'll be alot more easier to reaf

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Re: Fynn's Fiction~
« Reply #4 on: June 16, 2016, 07:23:17 AM »
Where did Mayu go?
Why she left Yuki like that? Fortunately Yuki still have Rena so she won't be alone,

Will you continue this story?
Thanks for your story
I'm still figuring things out. My imagination are sucks. :banghead:  If I able to think some plot then definitely I will continue this story. Thanks for reading this amateurish story  :)

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Re: Fynn's Fiction~
« Reply #5 on: June 16, 2016, 07:25:28 AM »
Continue! Continue! Continue! Continue!
:on GJ:
Yepp, I will try to continue this story  :thumbup :thumbup Thanks for reading  :)

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Re: Fynn's Fiction~
« Reply #6 on: June 16, 2016, 07:29:29 AM »
Nice story Author :thumbsup
But you should make a space between conversation n the othet, so it'll be alot more easier to reaf
Thanks for the compliment and the tips. :thumbsup  I will try to enchance my poor writing skills. Once again, thanks for reading  :)

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