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« Reply #100 on: August 25, 2006, 10:05:36 AM »
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Ok 'Cause Dj_Jo didnt link the perv I thought I should do the honours -
 
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Hope you enjoy~
 
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« Reply #101 on: August 26, 2006, 01:29:24 AM »
COOKIES  FOR  YOU!!!


And poor Miki. At least she has Eri to cry on!

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« Reply #102 on: August 30, 2006, 07:49:56 AM »
Aww! Poor Miki indeed! Thank gahh Eri is there to help! :heart:
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« Reply #103 on: August 31, 2006, 12:04:50 AM »
Miki! Don't be sad! Eri's there for yooou! :]! Gahh, you got me into your crackdom pairings XD!!! Rooting for Miki x Eri! And hoping to see Ai x Reina again soooon!

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« Reply #104 on: September 02, 2006, 12:09:35 PM »
More bad news


Waiting for Makoto to answer the door Yossi can’t stop her heart from racing.

Stumbling down the stairs Makoto trips and Yossi hears a loud thump against the door before it opens and Makoto stands on the other side rubbing her head.

“Agh my head” she groans “What’s going on Yossi its 3 a.m.”
 
The annoyance soon went away when seeing the look on Yossi’s face.

“Come in.. What’s wrong?” stepping inside she leads her very scare looking friend into the living room.

“I … erm… agh…” the words can not come out of her mouth as she herself can not believe what is happening.

Slowly moving closer Makoto offers a warm reassuring hug as if to say
Its okay, you can tell me anything.

Still unable to speak Yossi takes Makoto’s hand and places it on her breast, making her fingers press harder in one spot.

In shock Makoto steps back realising the lump on Yossi’s breast. But as tears start to fall down the scared girl’s face she moves back, hugging her and holding her close.

As tears fall down Yossi’s face her words are muffled by the pain inside…

“I don’t want to die.”

Rocking her back and forth Makoto tries reassuring her by stroking her hair and soothing her heart with kind words but no words in this world could make the pain disappear.

Whilst Makoto is in the kitchen fixing a drink for the two Yossi takes out her phone and messages Aya.

‘I love you Aya, you’re the best thing that’s happen to me. I can’t do this anymore… It’s over… I’m sick of hiding’

Lying to Aya broke her heart, but knowing she probably didn’t have long to live she would have rather Aya think she was a jerk then be put through the pain of losing Yossi…

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« Reply #105 on: September 02, 2006, 03:13:51 PM »
O_O WHAT?! Butbutbut... THATS SO SAAAAAAAAD! :cry: :cry: :cry: No, it can't be that...Right? -is over-reacting-
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« Reply #106 on: September 02, 2006, 03:15:58 PM »
I don't understand what happens to Yossi...

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« Reply #107 on: September 02, 2006, 03:58:16 PM »
She's overdoing it!. Maybe it's not cancer. (I think that she thinks it is). Sometimes those lumps are non-malignant.
(... I hope this is the case...)

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« Reply #108 on: September 02, 2006, 05:54:05 PM »
noooo, yossi..:shocked: :cry: , she will get through it i know it!

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« Reply #109 on: September 02, 2006, 09:59:48 PM »
O_________O;

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« Reply #110 on: September 03, 2006, 12:18:29 AM »
the title attracted me...i was just curious to read some fanfic and i've chosen yours....and i have to say you are amazing...what a great job you did here ! the couple are kinda weird but yet so cute...i really like the Yossi/aya - Miki/Eri part...really great written and as some said before we can feel the emotions, and i really like the ending of each chapter...keep it up !

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« Reply #111 on: September 03, 2006, 01:31:49 AM »
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I don't understand what happens to Yossi...


Yossi has just found a lump on her breast, she is afraid that it may be cancer so to save Aya the pain she decides to leave her.

I was glad to see this chapter get so many comments, I was running low on ideas but now I have the next few chapters lined up.

This chapter is really close to my heart and I am very amazed to see that people are enjoying it.

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« Reply #112 on: September 03, 2006, 02:42:40 AM »
Once again babe u've completely blown me away with ur writing, i absolutly love ur the way u put so much emotion into ur writing.  keep up the brilliant work baby.

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« Reply #113 on: September 03, 2006, 04:20:51 AM »
this is great, i cant wait for the next chapters! keep up the great work!!

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« Reply #114 on: September 03, 2006, 08:03:13 AM »
O_O Yossui? No! O_O

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« Reply #115 on: September 03, 2006, 03:31:57 PM »
XD         Explains why she has smaller breasts than the others

No, seriously breast cancer is a bad thing...I hope you arent intending to kill off Yossui ^^


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« Reply #116 on: September 05, 2006, 12:59:13 AM »
Holy crap! No Yossi! NO!!!!

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« Reply #117 on: September 05, 2006, 01:10:11 AM »
come on Dj_jo, everyone is waiting for you XD XD XD

i can't wait longer lol...

sorry><...POST !

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« Reply #118 on: September 06, 2006, 12:00:05 AM »
NO YOSSIE! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
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« Reply #119 on: September 10, 2006, 05:36:55 PM »
why does bad things happen to yossie? car accident and now this?? nooo... and what happened to Ai and Reina?

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