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Offline WaffleT

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« on: July 05, 2006, 05:44:13 AM »
he he im such a tease with my writing now



A fully clothed Miki walked purposely across the hallway

This can’t go on she thought grimly I need to stop her

She knocked on Ishikawa’s door and walked in without waiting for a reply

“I hate you” she screamed with her eyes closed… nothing happened for a while then she slowly opened her eyes and Ishikawa was sitting there shaking her head

“I’m sorry, but you know why I’m doing this” she croaked tears running down her face

****

Something must be done Tsunku thought to himself Ishikawa’s file scattered across his desk she cannot be allowed to continue

****

“What are we gonna do!” cried a distraught Iida Kaori “we need to do something!”

The rest of Morning Musume were gathered around her, visibly shaken and franticly looking at each other with desperate looked on their faces.

“I have an idea” Yaguchi Mari cried suddenly “All we need to do is…”

****

Konkon and Maki looked up from their card game saw the others running about then went back to playing, “Go fish” announced Maki triumphantly

Offline WaffleT

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« Reply #1 on: July 05, 2006, 05:45:50 AM »
Hi people i'm not gonna post the dramatic conclusion until i have some posts with suggestions or guesses about what is going to happen :P

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« Reply #2 on: July 05, 2006, 06:06:38 AM »
AW DUDE!!! :evil:

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« Reply #3 on: July 05, 2006, 08:04:18 AM »
*thinks*.... a huge orgy party?

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« Reply #4 on: July 27, 2006, 08:51:22 PM »
This seems to be a pretty intense beginning. Is this going to be a 'Why Rika had to graduate' story? Or a 'Hey everyone let's freak out randomly' story?

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« Reply #5 on: July 27, 2006, 09:05:00 PM »
ishiyoshi fic? A fight betwen rika and yossi... xD

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« Reply #6 on: August 04, 2006, 07:32:30 AM »
YAY! more poeple posted on my fic i know threats would work ^^
well here is the next piece so lets see how this changes your predictions :P

The previous day

“Owww” Ishikawa said opening her eyes and looking around. The movement caused a sharp pain in her head Oww I have a hangover she thought slowly  

“Owww” groaned Iida Kaori waking up “hangover”

“Wait wha?” Ishikawa said in surprise “What are you doing here!”

This loud accusation woke up the other 5 members

“Owww” they all chorused, this being the universal hangover wake up

“Wha-“  

“Who-“

Everyone started talking at once trying to find out what was happening.

Suddenly the lighthouse of Morning Musume, Iida Kaori stood up “STOP!” she screamed catching everyone by surprise “Does anyone know what actually happened last night?"

They all looked around scared for a bit noticing that all the members of Morning Musume were there but with a severe lack of clothes

There was a long silence that was broken as everyone started panicking again

"WHAT ON EARTH HAPPENED LAST NIGHT!" Ishikawa shouted frustrated.

"I'm not sure exactly what happened but good news - it looks like we taped it" Reina said quietly pointing towards the small blinking red light in the corner of the room.

****

They were all gathered around one of the giant Morning Musume TVs that the girls had access to with the tape inside and a nervous Goto with the remote

There was a silence from the room as the lights were dimmed for dramatic effect by Mari who had a fondness of dramatics

The TV played...

Another long silence stretched out through the room as the light from the TV faded and the tape ended

"Well crap…" muttered Goto.

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« Reply #7 on: August 04, 2006, 11:19:44 AM »
:o eeep *gives a look at huggumwuggums* *followed by a look at WaffleT* *looks back at huggumwuggums* :o

Offline rndmnwierd

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« Reply #8 on: August 06, 2006, 05:35:07 AM »
Lighthouse... Love....

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"I'm not sure exactly what happened but good news - it looks like we taped it"

Lol, Tonight at eleven, the shocking Morning Musume sex tape!

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"Well crap…" muttered Goto.


:ROFL :ROFL :ROFL :ROFL :ROFL

Offline WaffleT

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« Reply #9 on: August 16, 2006, 05:26:18 AM »
Ah its good to write again, ive been sick and havent been doing anything but i started writing this and it was alot of fun Lets see how many people get sonfused with my random timelines!

That other day… not that one, the one before
Arms and legs went everywhere as they crashed to the ground

A voice emerged from the pile of girls “Ok whose bright idea was paintball?”

A hand suddenly appeared from the pile accompanied by the word “MINE!” there was a brief silence “Well I think it was a good idea and have you noticed that no one has tried to get up yet?” Maki announced proudly

Everyone started moving and trying to get up, this resulted in 4 gropings and the loss of Koharu’s virginity

After about 10 minutes to organize themselves they were all standing in their full paintball gear and talking

“Naked time!” Maki said cheerfully walking over to the dressing room

“Do you need to say that every time we change?” said an annoyed Mari following her

While Maki and Mari were enjoying their ‘Naked time’ the other members were wondering what to do next, this being the together day they couldn’t just leave as most of them wanted so they needed to find something to do this usually involved some kind of stimulants.

Koharu shot Iida on the bum “What was that for!?” she shouted

“Just testing”

Iida considered this “can I borrow that for a second?”

“NO!” she laughed triumphantly and ran into a wall, resulting in unconsciousness  

Iida walked over and stole her gun and after a minute’s thought her pants

The rest had ignored this display as it was considered normal Koharu behavior and she deserved what she got

“Let’s go to a love hotel” suggested Miki

“Umm why?”

“To freak out the fans of course, it’s always good to give them something to think about or they might get bored and start writing fan fiction” she said with horror

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« Reply #10 on: August 16, 2006, 06:08:58 AM »
Quote from: WaffleT
“Let’s go to a love hotel” suggested Miki

“Umm why?”

“To freak out the fans of course, it’s always good to give them something to think about or they might get bored and start writing fan fiction” she said with horror
:ROTFLMAO:

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« Reply #11 on: April 06, 2008, 01:45:27 PM »
aww c'mon where's the next chapter? do you need more posts? cause I can probably get some friends to post here too! BTW this is so funny! I hope you keep it up, and maybe pick it up now that you remembered it..... Please? We all want to know what happens in that love hotel. Also you are probably the first to write about Koharu losing her virginity (which also made roflmao) and I think it was legal... I hope..... Maybe it wasn't but it still rocked..... And it wasn't in that way so..... You know? I hope you continue this fic.
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« Reply #12 on: April 06, 2008, 06:41:11 PM »
haha this is amusing
really seemingly random in my eyes but completely amusing xD
I love it

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« Reply #13 on: January 15, 2009, 06:43:33 PM »
Quote from: WaffleT
“Let’s go to a love hotel” suggested Miki

“Umm why?”

“To freak out the fans of course, it’s always good to give them something to think about or they might get bored and start writing fan fiction” she said with horror
:ROTFLMAO:

Jajajajajaja xDDDDDDD

That was so funny, I'm almost crying xD


God!! She knows she's HOT!

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