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« Reply #100 on: August 14, 2006, 08:21:44 AM »
I like how Mako is so hilarious :lol:
As much as I like Yossi with Rika, it'll be nice to have a Miki-Yossi pairing too. They are so hawt in the musical together.

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« Reply #101 on: August 14, 2006, 03:28:36 PM »
Yoshi managed to find the reason behind Miki’s conflict with Kago. It takes a lot of coercion before Kago finally budged. Kago vaguely said she broke something that was wrapped in a box. Judging on Miki’s reaction, it has to be something she treasured. Valuable, wrapped? Soon Yossi has it figured out. It must be a present meant for Ayaya since the later’s birthday is around the corner.
 
Yossi feels the need to apologize to Miki. She dials Miki’s number. No one picks up. Left without a choice, She knocks on Miki’s hotel room.
 
It takes a while before someone answers the door. The air coming from the room reeks of alcohol; Yossi hurriedly makes her way in and closes the door behind her.
 
Miki’s room is in a chaotic state, the bed is messy, clothes strewn everywhere and empty beer cans littered the carpeted floor, staining it. The owner of the room isn’t any better, all she does is laughing at herself. Yossi is appalled, Miki has broken so many rules, then she feels sorry for her friend, something drastic must have happened.
 
Yossi quickly holds on to a drunken Miki as the later zigzags her way to another beer on the coffee table.
 
“Stop it please!” Yossi drags Miki to the bed and forces her down. It’s all she can do to restrain Miki. Miki starts to talk with a slur which Yossi hardly understands, all she can make out is the word ‘Ayaya’
 
Luckily for Yossi, Miki soon does what drunkards do best, she falls asleep. Looking at the serene Miki, Yossi wonders what she had gone through to end up like this. Intuition says Ayaya must have played a part.
 
Before Yossi leaves, she cleans up the mess. Hell will break lose if manager-san come to know about Miki’s drunken stupor.

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« Reply #102 on: August 14, 2006, 03:29:27 PM »
Yoshi answers the knock to her room, she is greeted by a fresh-looking Miki.

Miki: “Care to join me for breakfast?”

They make their to the hotel’s cafeteria.

Miki: “Thank you for last night.”
“Don’t mention it.” It’s the first time Yossi sees Miki smiles sweetly.

Miki: “At least there’s still a nice character in the group.”
“Don’t say that please, they are nice too.”

Actually Yossi hopes Miki will blend into the group, but then one party has to take the initiative to clear the misunderstanding.

Miki: “Not asking me why I got drunk?”

Yossi is amazed, she begins to suspect Miki can read people’s mind.

Miki: “Actually your guess is right, I quarreled with Ayaya.”

Yossi looks at Miki, surprised that Miki is telling her all these.

“It’s common for friends to argue.” Yossi tries to console Miki but later knows it’s not an intelligent answer.

“Quit your bullshit, you know Ayaya and me are more than just friends.” Miki rolls up her eyes.

Yossi laughs.

Miki: “This thing called Love, it sure hurts… ne?”

Yossi couldn’t agree more.

Miki: “I know she’s toying with me…”

There is a long pause. Yossi wonders why Miki is suddenly telling her all these and what she will do if Miki breaks down in tears.

Miki: “Don’t worry, I won’t cry.”

Yossi couldn’t control her laughter, Miki is an interesting character.

“Sorry, I don’t mean it.” Yossi apologizes for the imprudent laugh.
Miki: “I won’t be telling you all these if I mind.”
“Then I’m curious, why are you confiding_...”
Miki: “Because we are the same.”

Yossi has a ‘care to elaborate’ look.

Miki: “Because we’re both gay.”
“I’m not.”
Miki: “Then you’re a closet gay.”
“I said I’m not.”
Miki: “Ok conclusion; you’re a closeted gay in denial stage.”

Yossi is speechless, she will strangle Miki if she can. The other hand, Miki succumbs into a girlish chuckle, Yossi’s expression is priceless.

“You’re beautiful when you smile.” Yossi cannot resist commenting.

Miki: “Nice try~ too bad it doesn’t work on me.”

Yossi shakes her head in disbelief; will she ever understand this girl?

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« Reply #103 on: August 14, 2006, 03:30:30 PM »
Yossi and Miki run to the waiting bus. During breakfast, Iida’s call reminded them they were way past the gathering time.

“suimasen deshita.” Both girls keep their heads low, avoiding the hostile stares from some members.

The bus drive off right away, poor Yossi and Miki, they have to struggle to keep their balance as they move down the narrow aisle. The seat besides Rika is empty, Yossi hesitates if she should take it then she feels a nudge from Miki from behind and so moves on, but she immediately regrets it.

Rika’s heart sinks when Yossi passes her, she has reserved the seat for Yossi, however the moment she sees Yossi and Miki get up the bus together, she knows things ain’t going to turn out the way she wants.

Miki chooses the seat besides Iida, much to the later’s surprise, while Yossi shares the back row with the groups’ haversacks and bags.

Bored, Yossi checks out her spy-on-a-mission. She and Konno are in the world of their own, illustrated with animated gestures and hearty laughter, happiness fills the air around them. Sitting on their left is Takahashi and Risa. (what a pair!) Yossi laughs to herself. Everyone turns to check on Yossi, except Rika. She cannot bear to see her friend frolicking with Miki (she presumes.)

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During the break from the musical full dress rehearsal, Yossi sees Makoto sitting alone, a rare sight nowadays.

“Makochan, where’s your kanojo?”

“SSSShhhhh.” This seems to be Makoto’s favourite phrase now. “She’s gone to the toilet.”

“Not bad, I see you got her…”

“Not yet, I don’t wanna scare her off.”

“Coward, just pop the question, my gaydar says she likes you too.”

“Ssshhhhh.” This time is because Makoto sees Rika approaching.

There seems to an invisible force pulling Rika back, looking at the way she drags herself forward.

‘na-ni?”

“You can have this, bought extra.” Rika shoves a drink into Yossi’s laps and walks away.

“Rikachan!”

Rika turns back.

“Thanks.”

“Don’t mention it.” A smile appears on Rika originally solemn face.

“Told you she likes you.”

“Based on this?” Yossi waves the bottle in front of Makoto. “Alright I’m terminating your services, now I have serious doubts on your analyzing capabilities.”

“Anyway you know what I meant.” Makoto pats on Yossi’s shoulder and walks away.

Yes, Yossi knows. In Rika’s dictionary, the words ‘give in’ never exist, but she makes an exception just now… the drink.

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« Reply #104 on: August 15, 2006, 02:23:10 AM »
I love the way you wrote Miki in!! OMG! I wanted to laugh out loud so bad!

And Makochan? and her kanojo :P      Haha!
Is this what Yossui was tlaking about on Mathew's hit generation when she said "Oh she bought me juice yesterday"?
Just wondering :D

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« Reply #105 on: August 15, 2006, 06:10:24 AM »
I'm so interested in how the IshiYoshiMoto thing wil work out. Keep up the good work. :thumbsup

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« Reply #106 on: August 15, 2006, 12:33:46 PM »
The crew from the musical gather at the hotel’s restaurant to celebrate the end of it’s run.

“Yotchan, join me at the table.” Miki pulls Yossi along.
“If you want ME to join you, I guess you’re still angry with her?”
“Can’t we just talk about the happy things?” Miki hisses

“Is there something on my face? Everyone seems to be looking here…”

Pairs of eyes dart away when Miki look up, the most obvious being Rika and Aya.

“They must be wondering why is the group’s comedian hanging out with an outcast.”
Miki sinks her fork into the defenseless steak.
“If you keep having this kind of mentali_”
Miki: “I can see that Rika likes you.”
“Wait! The way you always cut in when I’m _”
Miki: “You should check out her expression now that I’m talking to you? No, don’t look now.”

Yossi pinches Miki on the cheeks, her desperate attempt to get Miki’s attention “Do you ever bother to listen to what people sa_”

Miki: “Oh! Now Rika’s face is…”
“Stop it please, it’s freaking me out. Makochan and you are always saying the sam_”

“Makochan??” Miki diverts her attention to Yossi, finally showing some interest.

“I said nothing…”

“Makochan? I know she likes Konno.” Miki says casually “by the way, please close up your jaw.”
“but… but how you know? I don’t remember telling y_”
“There’s another pair in the group?” Miki interrupts again.

Yossi shuts up this time, she is not going to give Miki any more chance to disrupt her. She gives Miki a look, urging the later to continue whatever she is saying.

“Which of course I think you don’t even know exists.”

Hearing the challenge in Miki’s tone, Yossi retorts “Says who! It’s Aichan & Gakisan.”

Miki lets out a sheepish smile and it strucks Yossi. “Oh shit! You tricked me!”

Two tables away, all four 5th gen members vaguely hear their names mentioned and wonder how they get involved in the conversation.

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« Reply #107 on: August 15, 2006, 04:15:24 PM »
:w00t: nice update!

I've been waiting for yossie/miki to happen since the beginning of this fic
I seriously hope it's getting there....right?

the Miki in your fic is indeed a very interesting character :panda_haha:

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« Reply #108 on: August 15, 2006, 04:49:45 PM »
I hope Ishiyoshi... There're too much Yomiki fics!!

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« Reply #109 on: August 15, 2006, 05:03:06 PM »
Its just so Rika to not admit what she really thinks. Just tell Yossi you like her already :D

I love all those little sprinkers of the 5th gen :)

For some reason I feel really happy after reading your story. I'm in a ice-cream mood now :lol:

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« Reply #110 on: August 15, 2006, 05:47:04 PM »
Yay update! *shakes pom-poms* Gimme a U! Gimme a P! Gimme a.... What was I doing? I like how Miki keeps interrupting Yossui. Lol.

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« Reply #111 on: August 15, 2006, 07:13:42 PM »
I like a lot the relationship between Yoshi and Miki. I want to know what does Ayaya did to Miki...
I fell sorry for Rika, but she can't going on acting this way. She must talk to Yoshi about Miki and her felings

Where is Maki????????

Yoshi & Goto please!!!!

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« Reply #112 on: August 16, 2006, 12:44:45 AM »
The comments are great, Thanks! But then I'm in a dilemma, MIKIisLOVE wants more yomiki action, Getaway likes Ishiyoshi and I know _Hitomi_ loves to see Yossi ending with with Maki. I have written up to chapters 47 (finally there's a sex scene) :P :P :P  and it's difficult for me to change some details for the story. I hope you guys will still support this fic regardless where it's heading and who ends up being with who.

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« Reply #113 on: August 16, 2006, 12:46:23 AM »
There is a knock on the door. Miki opens the door thinking it must be Yossi again, minutes ago they just parted. To her surprise, it is Aya waiting outside. The first thing that Miki does is to close the door.

Aya lets out a cry when the door closes on her fingers. She had placed them there in her last resort. Miki flings open the door “Does it hurt?” She grabs hold of Aya’s fingers which is turning red from the impact.

“My heart hurts more.” Aya plants her lips on Miki’s.

Miki’s mind goes blank, it is so sudden, the only thing she remembers is this is the first time they kiss. She always dreams that their first kiss will be done in a romantic way definitely not like now, so sudden and unscripted. It does not taste as good as she has imagined. Still in shock, Miki let Aya kisses.

Aya stops and steps back when she knows Miki is not responding. “Did I scare you?”

Avoiding Aya’s eyes, Miki walks to the bed and sits down, her back facing. She hears the door closes and footsteps approaching so she speaks “Why do that? You never let me touch you before, we only hold hands...”

“I…I..”

The stammering just serves to remind Miki that Aya does not even bother to think of any excuses to coax her after having hurt her so badly before. Tears flow down Miki’s face.

There is a long pause, Aya is cracking her mind thinking of what to say. However. the longer Miki waits, the deeper she feels hurt.

“Get out.” Miki gathers all her strength to say it.

“I’ll be a jerk if I go out now.”
 
“Then say something!” Miki can hear herself shouting now. “Is it so hard to come out with even one LIE? You wouldn’t be here if you haven’t seen me with Yotchan right!”

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« Reply #114 on: August 16, 2006, 01:12:57 AM »
I'm addicted to your fic now. Great to see you updating so fast.
That 85ers triangle with a little bit of Aya is always thrilling. :D

No matter in what direction your story heads, I will support it. :)
As long as there are Aya, Miki, Rika and Yossi in it it doesn't matter who ends up with who...:D :P

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« Reply #115 on: August 16, 2006, 02:35:10 AM »
Poor Miki. Poor Aya. I definately like the YoMiki coupling, Ishiyoshi girl that I am....

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« Reply #116 on: August 16, 2006, 04:35:34 AM »
*cries*
AyaXmikitty!!!
YAY!!!!!!!!!

Love hurts so much. Its even more painful to read. I agree - Miki is a truly hilarious girl in your fics!

Go go keep it up!

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« Reply #117 on: August 16, 2006, 02:57:38 PM »
i love your fic its awesome! but theres gonna be a ishiyoshi moment rite??

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« Reply #118 on: August 16, 2006, 08:16:23 PM »
Quote from: GeTaWay
I hope Ishiyoshi... There're too much Yomiki fics!!


I beg your pardon?

There can never be too many yomiki fics! :panda_haha:
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« Reply #119 on: August 16, 2006, 08:21:12 PM »
Quote from: katatsumuri
The comments are great, Thanks! But then I'm in a dilemma, MIKIisLOVE wants more yomiki action, Getaway likes Ishiyoshi and I know _Hitomi_ loves to see Yossi ending with with Maki. I have written up to chapters 47 (finally there's a sex scene) :P :P :P  and it's difficult for me to change some details for the story. I hope you guys will still support this fic regardless where it's heading and who ends up being with who.
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of course I'll still be cheering for you regardless of wherever it's heading and the pairings :pen_whirl:

but I'll :pen_whirl: and :bow: before you if miki ends up with yossie XD
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