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« Reply #140 on: August 21, 2006, 12:36:10 AM »
Yossi crashes the empty can in her hand, being able to do so easily; she knows she is not as drunk as her two friends. She never knew Miki and Makoto can drink so much, as for herself, she seldom touch alcohol, she hates the bitter taste.

Miki: “Now your turn, how is it going for Rika-chan and you?”
“I blew it. She went hysterical when I asked if we should start dating. And you?”
Miki: “I’m still undecided…”
Makoto: “ALRIGHT!  Three Cheers to the three love torn musketeers!”

There is a loud thud, Makoto collapses on the mat, and Miki laughs herself silly at the sight.

“You aren’t any better.” Yossi thinks to herself. “I’ll better substitute these with tea.”

Yossi slaps her knee and stands up. The switch to the kitchen’s lightings isn’t hard to locate. Miki does keep her kitchen clean despite she stays alone in this small apartment, courtesy of the company.

Miki’s head is resting on the table by the time Yossi came out of the kitchen.

(Looks like that’s the end of today’s session)

Choosing between Makoto and Miki, Yossi decides to carry the lighter Miki into her room first. Using the light from the living room, Yossi holds up Miki and fumbles her way to the bed in semi-darkness. “There you go.” However, the sheer weight of Miki makes Yossi loses her balance and they fall together onto the bed.

Yossi finds herself landing in an awkward position. She is lying on top of Miki, their faces are just inches apart as she supports her torso with both arms pressing on the bed with Miki in-between. Blood gushes up her face, plus the intoxicating smell lingering from Miki’s breathe; Yossi can feel something churning inside her.

“Ayaya…”

Suddenly Miki wraps her arms around Yossi’s neck and pulls her down for their lips to meet. Shocked, Yossi tries to move away but Miki’s lips are soft to touch. It’s the first time she has tasted a woman’s lips. Miki open her mouth slightly, like inviting Yossi to explore. Without hesitation, Yossi sticks out her tongue to meet with Miki’s, the sensation is great. Then Miki’s arms embrace Yossi and pulls Yossi closer to her. Yossi closes her eyes and enjoy the kiss, suddenly a touch on her chest sends thrills up her spine. The touch soon becomes a caress and Yossi feels her body goes weak.

(Rika…)

Yossi pulls herself away from Miki and stands up. Miki’s arms falls back on the bed, her eyes closed. She looks asleep.

“Miki” Yossi asks softly.

No response.

Yossi closes the door and lets out a big sigh, her mind is in total blank, things that happened just now suddenly seem surreal.

(Alcohol sure is bad.)

She hopes Miki will have no collection of their kiss when she wakes up tomorrow. Things always turn ugly when the friendship line is crossed.

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« Reply #141 on: August 21, 2006, 05:38:43 AM »
WOOT YOMIKI ACTION!~ hehe its alrite if u dont get to update as fast, i dont rite fics but i noe how it feels to hav a writer's block XD
100% supports YoMiki !~:D

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« Reply #142 on: August 21, 2006, 08:41:35 PM »
:w00t: :w00t: :evil: aaaaaargh you tease! :P

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« Reply #143 on: August 22, 2006, 11:26:43 AM »
I couldn't stop, so I read all 10 pages:lol:  And now I'm waiting for more to read:)

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« Reply #144 on: August 22, 2006, 03:41:10 PM »
Only Makoto is having hangover the next day. Miki steps out of the washroom looking fresh. The trio plan to spend the morning out for breakfast and shopping since they only need to be in the studio for Hello! Morning skit recording at 2pm. However, the plan is ruined when Yossi and Miki each received an email from their manager requesting them to turn up for a meeting at 10am.

In the cab, Yossi keeps checking out Miki’s expressions. It seems Miki really had no idea what happened, she must be dead drunk last night. Yossi secretly feels relieved.

“So how? Makochan.” Miki asks.
“I’ll drop you guys off at Upfront, then I’ll go to the studio.”
“No, you should head off to Konkon’s place and ask her out for lunch.” Yossi grins.

Miki makes a slight point at the driver. They realize the driver is listening attentively, not to mention his constant checks on the rear mirror. It will be bad if he passes information to gossip magazines so the trio stop talking.

Before Yossi and Miki get off, Yossi stuffs some cash to Makoto to pay for the fare and closes the cab’s door.

“That was sweet of you.”
“Standard senpai behavior, besides I earn more.”
“Oh! That means I must always pay for you from now.”
“Geez! What are you implying…”

*** *** ***

They are early. Seated alongside each other around the long meeting table, Yossi checks out on Miki once again. (Ok, confirmed she can’t recall a thing.)

“Your smirk irks me, what are you thinking just now?”
“Oh, I was wondering if this could be another announcement on adding new members.” Yossi lies.
“I see you always leave your brains at home. Makochan wasn’t called in and there are no cameras around.” Miki quips.
“WHAT! Sometimes I wonder why Rikachan and you always pick on me? Do I always make silly comments?”

There is a knock on the door, Rika walks in, speak of the devil, Yossi and Miki laugh out spontaneously.

Rika: “Nani?”
“Nothing.” Yossi smiles “By the way, ohayou.”
Rika: “Ohayou gozaimasu.”

Rika chooses the seat next to Yossi much to the later’s surprise. But when Maki is the next to come in, Yossi starts to panic. (Rika, now Maki, did the management know something about us?). Then Aya enters the room, Yossi nearly falls off the chair. It definitely spells trouble this time.

***

Manager: “… More members will be added at a later date. Meeting dismissed, Yoshizawa-san, please stay behind, need a word with you.”

When all her friends had left the room, it suddenly becomes so quiet, Yossi can hear her own heart beat. Looking stern, the Manager asks Yossi “Can you define the word ‘Idol Group’?”

“Appealing…”

“Do you in any way looks like an idol now?” the Manager clears his throat.

Yossi’s face turns bright red.

Manager: “Your merchandise doesn’t sell, your fanbase is declining, and you’re becoming a liability to the company. SO what you think the company should do?”

“moushiwake arimasen deshita.”

Manager: “You’ll be given three months to produce some results. Make good use of your futsal training, it’s the reason why we include you in the team. Buck up, ok?”

“Yes.”

Before the Manager leaves the room, he turns and says one last sentence “You’re a very beautiful girl. Don’t ruin it.”


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ok, an update, nothing 'happening' in this chapter, nevertheless, hope you guys like it. :)

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« Reply #145 on: August 22, 2006, 04:09:30 PM »
Ah, I've been so busy with soccer I didn't get a chance to catch up on this, until today. Keep up the good work.

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« Reply #146 on: August 22, 2006, 07:26:39 PM »
Quote from: katatsumuri

ok, an update, nothing 'happening' in this chapter, nevertheless, hope you guys like it. :)

ah, don't worry about it.

I believe an update is always welcomed :D

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« Reply #147 on: August 22, 2006, 11:23:52 PM »
>_< why Yossi has to change!!??? She is perfect!

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« Reply #148 on: August 23, 2006, 08:42:13 AM »
I hate that ManagerX( But I can't wait to read how Yossi shows her perfection to everyoneXD

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« Reply #149 on: August 23, 2006, 02:25:19 PM »
“Pssst! Over here.”

Yossi follows the voice to see a weird girl signaling at her. She takes careful steps forward; it is only when the unknown girl pulls down her shades does she realize it is Miki.

Miki: “Why are you dressed so ‘yossi’? You’ll get recognized.”
“It’s ok. I have these.” Yossi takes out her huge, oblong sunglasses.
Miki: “I hope you won’t trip inside…”
“Where’s Makochan?”
Miki: “On the way.”

*** *** ***

They are ushered to a table at a corner. The smell of cigarettes smoke and alcohol in the air is overwhelming.

“You come here often?” Yossi cannot help asking Miki.
“Only once, Ayaya brought me along.”
“Sugoi ne!” Makoto suddenly points at the direction of the bar counter. Under the very dim lightings, they vaguely see the silhouettes of two long-haired women locking lips.

“WOO~”
Miki: “Compose yourself please…”
Makoto: “So what are we supposed to do here?”

Candidly, the three of them look at the passionate couple again.

“No way!” Yossi protested.
Miki: “Of course, who wanna do it with you!”
Makoto: “I’ll only kiss Konkon’s lips.”
“eeeew~ kimoi!”
Miki: “Just relax and you know… go meet new friends. Nobody knows anybody here.”

Both Yossi and Makoto give Miki a doubtful look though she sure talks like one with experience.

Makoto: “You mean we go around picking up girls?”
“Ok, we see who ends up with some girls’ email first.” Miki says, obviously ignoring Makoto dim-witted question. “Shoo shoo, let’s go.”


Makoto makes her way back to their table alone. When she sees Miki already back, she knows she has lost on the bet.

Makoto: “How many you got?”
Miki: “First tell me about yours.”

Makoto turns both her palms to indicate she has none.

Miki: “Weak…”
Makoto: “Hey! It’s not easy, ok. They look intimidating. One smiled at me then walked away. One doesn’t even bother to talk and the last one said I’m too short!”
Miki: “Short? Come on, our height is the average height…”

Makoto leans forward to Miki and says “She meant my fingers…”
“OOOOOooohhhhh~” Miki nods knowingly.

At the same time, Yossi comes back, throws herself on the seat and grumbles “Can you believe it? She says I’m too fat!”

Yossi stares at her rude friends, who are nearly dying from laughing. She does not understand why they are laughing at her comment? She has always been on the plump side, but she does not know that her friends have interpreted other meaning from the word ‘fat’.

“Looks like nobody really care about me when I remove my Morning Musume tag…” Yossi continues although her friends aren’t really interested.

“Yeah, when they don’t know you’re from momusu, they just treat you like a plain-looking desperate fatty.” Miki says, with tears in her eyes, result from laughing too hard just now.

Yossi becomes quiet, Miki’s remarks hurts. Her weight never really bothers her that much, but today’s events do show her the harsh side of reality. Maybe it is time she has to take her weight issue seriously; it is jeopardizing her career and social life.

Makoto notices Yossi’s change in mood so she tries to change the topic. “So Miki, you are the winner, how many you got?”

Miki smiles sheepishly. Makoto and Yossi have a hunch they are being played out.

Miki: “None… I didn’t even leave this table.”
“Shit! I knew it. You sneaky one.” Yossi slaps the table.
Miki: “It’s so embarrassing. Besides I hate rejections.”
“Alright, we will forgive you but the bill is on you.” It is Makoto’s smartest quote of the day.

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« Reply #150 on: August 23, 2006, 03:14:35 PM »
Miki: “Weak…”
Makoto: “Hey! It’s not easy, ok. They look intimidating. One smiled at me then walked away. One doesn’t even bother to talk and the last one said I’m too short!”
Miki: “Short? Come on, our height is the average height…”

Makoto leans forward to Miki and says “She meant my fingers…”
“OOOOOooohhhhh~” Miki nods knowingly.


lol lol lol lol looooooooooooooooool!!!!!!!!

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« Reply #151 on: August 24, 2006, 03:50:32 PM »
Ok, first things first -
The manager is a prick. Now that I have that out of the way, on to business!

If I could have ONE thing...just one! It would be to have a more bar scene...gosh, I laughed out loud. That was so cool. I can imagine Yossui, Miki and Makoto trying to pick up chicks. haha. I beg of you - write more on it!

That YoMiki moment was a sweet one. To be honest...it was a little hot :P I enjoyed it.

Read the complete Doki Doki!!

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« Reply #152 on: August 25, 2006, 06:16:26 AM »
One more bar scene is quite 'muri' for me though :) :) cos I can't really imagine how girls pick up girls :) , maybe you can write that on my behalf? :D

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« Reply #153 on: August 25, 2006, 06:17:07 AM »
Rika joins Yossi on the long bench, she places a comforting arm over her friend’s shoulders. She has never seen Yossi acted so violent.

Rika: “You’re scaring me.”
“Sorry…”

Rika’s presence somehow has a calming effect on Yossi.

Rika: “It’ll be better if you tell it to them too.”
“I’ll do it later.”
Rika: “You’re being too hard on yourself.”
“I have to, sports festival is next month but look at our team.”
Rika: “We’ll improve with time.”
“With this kind of attitude? Just look at Gotchan, she has missed one week’s training already. Even those who did turn up…”

Yossi shakes her head and buries her face in the towel. Rika pats on Yossi’s back, she is shocked to hear Yossi grumbling at Gotou, Yossi always place Gotou on the pedestal. However, she is more interested to know the reason behind Yossi and Aya’s bust up.


Asami, Tsuji and Miuna sit at the furthest end of the bench, surprised to see Yossi’s ugly side. Everyone stays rooted to the bench in case they start any provocation again.

Asami: “Can’t blame her, we’re giggling all the time.”
Miuna: “Yep but the worst is Matsuura-san. The way she plays, you think she has a grudge against Yoshizawa-san.”
“Ya, I saw it. The bumps and the tackles…” Asami nods with agreement.
“Actually… _ … _ ….” Tsuji’s deliberate pause makes Miuna and Asami so irritated, they spontaneously slap her on her arms.
Miuna: “Say it!”
Tsuji: “Well... before Yossi pushed Ayaya, I saw Ayaya taunt Yossi repeatedly, she kept saying things to Yossi.”
Asami: “Oh~ any idea what she said?”

Tsuji shrugs her shoulders. “I only hear Miki being mentioned.”

“OOOOHHHHhhh~” Asami and Miuna exclaim. “No wonder Fujimoto-san has gone after Matsuura-san.”

Tsuji nudges her friends to stop talking, Yossi and Rika are walking towards them. She hopes they are not going to get lectured again.

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« Reply #154 on: August 25, 2006, 10:01:29 AM »
The 3 of them in the bar trying to pick up girls was hilarious and kinda sweet too. Its like a bonding session :)

Ok who snitched? Who told on Mako and KonKon? *Growls* :lol:

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« Reply #155 on: August 25, 2006, 03:43:40 PM »
Aya storms into the locker room, she pushes the door so hard, it makes a loud thud when it hits the wall. Before the swing door has any chance to return to its initial position, someone pushes it open again.

“Stop there!” Miki demands.

Aya stops and stands still, but with her back still facing Miki. “So you’re here to tick me off?”

Miki feels sadden with Aya’s harsh tone. “NO! I’m here because I’m concerned about you.”

“Really?” Aya snorts

“I care about you and I don’t understand why you do that to Yossi, it’s childish.”

“ME childish! Of course! Who can be as suave as your Yoshizawa.” Aya kicks the lockers located conveniently on her right, venting all her anger on it.

Still defiant, Aya keeps her back turned towards Miki. There is a long pause, then Aya hears a slight crying sound coming behind her. Turning around, she sees Miki covered in tears. Aya can feel her heart tearing up, she rushes forward and hugs Miki. “I’m sorry… sorry…”

“Why you keep hurting me…” Miki locks her arms behind Aya’s waist and holds on tight.

“I’m really sorry…” Tears swell up in Aya’s eyes. She suddenly hates herself for hurting Miki with her unkind words. “Jealousy just turns me into a monster.”

“Don’t you understand?” Miki looks at Aya with big watery eyes. “I’m yours, always…”

“Mikitan…”

Aya leans forward and kisses Miki. It is a bittersweet kiss. The taste of Miki’s tears that has found its way down the cheeks reminds Aya how she has hurt Miki once again.

Miki returns Aya’s kisses, she really loves this woman before her…

*** ***

Miki follows Aya into a bathroom cubicle. After making sure the door is locked, she turns and sees Aya looking at her with a burning desire in the eyes. When Aya moves forward, she closes her eyes. Aya’s kisses are deep and passionate; she can feel Aya wants her badly. Then her towel that is wrapped around her bodies drop on the floor, she feels both Aya’s hands behind her trying to undo the hook on her bra. Her bare breasts come into contact with the cool air and it sends a ripple down her spine. Miki opens her eyes and sees Aya has her eyes fixed on her chest.

“Why? Don’t you have these too?” Miki cups her breasts and teases.

Obviously Aya is too turn on to say anything. She lowers her head and kisses the pair of beautiful breasts.

The touch of Aya’s tongue on her nipple makes Miki go weak, she leans back on the wall for support and gently caresses Aya’s silky hair while enjoying every touch and kisses.

Suddenly, they hear loud chatters and laughter outside.

“Kuso…looks like we have company.” Aya says disappointingly.
“It’s ok, We’ll continue later…” Miki has a cheeky glint in her eyes. She undresses Aya and turns on the water shower. “Allow me?” She says and sensually soaps every inch of Aya’s body…

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« Reply #156 on: August 25, 2006, 08:14:08 PM »
... I'm a little lost... what happened between Yoshi and Aya?.
I need a "Previously on Till then..." XD

BWT Yoshi 35 and 36 are so touching!
But I want Yoshi to place Goto on the pedestal again ^_^
And Miki crying... O_O unexpected!

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« Reply #157 on: August 25, 2006, 10:07:58 PM »
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... I'm a little lost... what happened between Yoshi and Aya?.
I need a "Previously on Till then..." XD
Yeah, what happened? You forget a chapter or are you just being a tease? :P

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« Reply #158 on: August 26, 2006, 12:27:45 AM »
oops, I didn't forget any chapter, my fault for not writing more on tat. sorry :( ... Aya is just jealous with Yossi cos Miki been really close to Yossi now. Aya just keep finding fault.

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« Reply #159 on: August 26, 2006, 12:40:08 AM »
Wow, I've had lots to catch up on. I really like where the story is heading! Keep up the good work, and sorry for my lame, non-descriptive comments...

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