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« Reply #160 on: August 26, 2006, 12:55:58 AM »
(Few months later)

“Yocchan, have dinner with me.”

The request from Miki is too sudden, Yossi looks at her watch and hesitates.

“Why? You meeting someone? Postpone it.”

Miki is seldom so demanding, Yossi knows Miki really need her company, may be she needs someone to confide in.

“Alright, I’ll be ready in a minute.”

Yossi hurriedly stuffs her belongings into her bag.

Miki: “Ask Makoto along.”
“She is at Konkon’s place, today is their rest day.”
Miki: “That lucky girl…”

From the sarcastic tone, Yossi guesses Miki must have some problems with her lover again.

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Miki looks around for a suitable place to empty the contents from her tea cup, the bbq stove looks inviting but she knows Yossi will scream if she does it. Left with no choice, Miki pours her tea into Yossi’s tea cup in the most natural way, hoping Yossi will not notice it.

“Again? You’re getting bolder ya, we’re outside now.”
“Nobody will know, it’s only you and me in this room.” Miki takes out a can of beer from her bag “You want some?” Actually Miki just asks out of courtesy, she knows Yossi dislike beer.

“Aren’t you going to talk? I’m not here just to yakiniku with you…”
“Gosh… can’t you show some compassion to your friend?” When Miki says that nonchalantly and the way she pokes the meat with her chopsticks, Yossi knows she doesn’t deserve any.

“What did Aya do this time?” asks a deadpan Yossi.
Miki: “She… she hasn’t touch me for weeks…”
“Goodness me, that’s what been troubling you?” Yossi cannot believe her ears.
Miki: “It’s a very important issue.”
“You guys always hold hands don’t you…”
Miki: “BAKA, I don’t mean that!”

Yossi knows, she just hopes to cheer up Miki a bit with her unappreciated sense of humor.

“Maybe she doesn’t find me interesting anymore…” Miki downs her beer at one go and refills, warm beer sure tastes bad.

Yossi really cannot understand how important that is to Miki, she has never done it, although occasionally she do fantasize about it.

“True love surpasses all physical attractions.”

Miki: “It’s a big joke, that coming from you, Mr. Roman. Girls throw themselves at you now.”

Yossi does not agree with Miki, no doubt she has quite a reputation in Haroporo now since she has successfully threw off those excess fats, the farthest she has gone with girls is just holding hands and polite kisses on the cheeks.

Miki: “You think I don’t know about the bets you always have with Makoto? She will name someone then you’ll…”

“It’s just for fun.” Yossi chips in.
Miki: “You’re such a flirt nowadays.”
“Yeah… maybe I’ll try my charm on Aya.” Yossi says spitefully
Miki: “That will be wonderful, we’ll do threesomes.”
“I surrender...”

Yossi knows she can never beat Miki with words. Miki isn’t called ‘tsukkomi queen’ of the group for nothing.



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@rndmnwierd; don't worry, no comments are lame (imo).

recently I seemed to have lost the interest for writing, the good thing is I have few chapters more waiting to be posted so I'll post them once or twice a day. Hopefully before I run out of chapters, I'll have found the motivation to write again. :P

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« Reply #161 on: August 26, 2006, 01:00:28 AM »
Take your time, space out the posting of chapters. Hopefully you'll find your inspriation again. Maybe you should just step away from writing for a little while, do something else, don't force yourself or you just might burn out. Good luck, friend!

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« Reply #162 on: August 26, 2006, 01:24:14 AM »
Hopefully before I run out of chapters, I'll have found the motivation to write again. <------- we hope so! I'm addicted to this fic!
If you run out of ideas, maybe I could help you

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« Reply #163 on: August 26, 2006, 02:59:42 AM »
Your latest chapters are amazing! I'm so addicted.:popcorn:
Your chapters are more addictive and thrilling than any TV soap. I love your Miki, I can feel her pain. You often make me feel sorry for her. :cry:

I'll keep my fingers crossed for you that you will find your motivation to write again. This story has to continue!

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« Reply #164 on: August 26, 2006, 03:07:24 AM »
Quote
Miki: “You’re such a flirt nowadays.”
“Yeah… maybe I’ll try my charm on Aya.” Yossi says spitefully
Miki: “That will be wonderful, we’ll do threesomes.”
“I surrender...”
I love this bit, it's TOTALLY Miki! :lol:

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« Reply #165 on: August 26, 2006, 10:42:26 AM »
Yossi is in love with rika or not? because she didn't say anything to Rika, yet.

I love your AyaxMiki moments :P

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« Reply #166 on: August 26, 2006, 01:13:22 PM »
LOL....oh gosh your chapter took me by surprise. I thought "Are? Perv moment?"

Yay!

Dont worry I sometimes loose motivation to write. Watching videos or starting something fresh can help..

Read the complete Doki Doki!!

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« Reply #167 on: August 26, 2006, 01:37:43 PM »
@_Hitomi_; the reason I'm losing interest is becos it's getting very tedious for me to put my thoughts in English (not my mother tongue) there are times I have to type and retype just to get one phrase right. :P

Elle_Driver; I bet mine's more long winded than soap tv.

JFC;   personally I feel Miki's the most havoc girl in MM, given all the negative reports. Rumored that she and Rika 'kenka' again in the musical, Rika face is totally black when they are back on stage to thank the audience.

GeTaWay; Yes, Yossi likes Rika but was rejected. (chapter 32)

Mikan; there's more 'perv' moments coming up. :P

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« Reply #168 on: August 26, 2006, 02:05:30 PM »
Quote from: katatsumuri


GeTaWay; Yes, Yossi likes Rika but was rejected. (chapter 32)



Yossi can't surrender!!!!

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« Reply #169 on: August 26, 2006, 02:56:12 PM »
Miki looks on with doubt at the skimpy piece of black lingerie, but since the idea is from an ‘experienced’ Yossi, she decides to give it a try.

A little while later…

“I can’t believe I’m doing this.” Miki looks at her reflection from the mirror. “So Yocchan gets turn on with these?” Miki makes a few half body turns to the left and right, her eyes fixed to the mirror. “Should I wear the bra? It so clashes with this see-through lingerie…”

Miki takes off her bra, her nipples slowly hardens against the soft fabric of the lingerie. Looking in the mirror, she can see herself turning red, she is feeling embarrassed even if she is alone in the room.

Aya is going to be back soon, so Miki switches off the lights and tugs under the blanket, “This has better work, or you gonna get it from me, Yocchan.”


Miki wakes up to someone sitting on the bed. She has fallen asleep while waiting. Aya must have been back for some time, she has taken her bath and the scent eluding from her body is sweet and refreshing. Miki sticks out her hand from under the blanket and touches Aya.

“Okaeri.”

Aya turns and smiles “I wake you up?”

“No. Why didn’t you switch on the lights, you will trip in the dark.”
“You’re sleeping so soundly, I can’t bear to wake you up.”

Miki sits up and hugs Aya from behind, these simple words are enough to melt Miki’s heart.

Aya feels something soft yet pointed pressed against her back. Turning around to face Miki, her guess is confirmed. “Nice lingerie.” She kisses Miki on the cheeks.

Miki closes her eyes, wondering what Aya will do next…

Contrary to Miki’s thoughts, Aya lifts her legs onto the bed, adjusts her pillow then puts her head comfortably on it. “Oyasumi.”

For a moment, Miki does not know how to react, it is not what she expects.

“Oyasumi yo?” Aya pats on Miki’s pillow, indicating Miki to lie down. “It’s getting late.”

Miki sinks her head on the pillow… (She doesn’t love me anymore?)

Just when she has this thought, Aya turns and puts a loving arm over her, with another peck on her cheek, Aya nestles her head on Miki’s shoulders and goes to sleep.

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« Reply #170 on: August 26, 2006, 03:39:38 PM »
. . . Hello? Aya? . . . She's a little slow, right? loooooool

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« Reply #171 on: August 26, 2006, 04:17:14 PM »
how can Aya reject her? she's crazy? come to me Miki! I'll give you some love!:heart:

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« Reply #172 on: August 26, 2006, 04:59:37 PM »
...No sex? :( Oh well, it's cute anyway! :D

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« Reply #173 on: August 26, 2006, 08:14:33 PM »
:w00t: :w00t: :w00t: :doh:
maybe Aya was just too tired to do Mi... errr I mean anything at all :P
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« Reply #174 on: August 27, 2006, 12:34:21 AM »
It is supposed to be a pass instead the ball is heading ferociously in her direction and Yossi tries to stop it with a light tap. The ball just bounces off her shoe and lands straight into her face. Yossi’s mind goes blank for a moment before laughter from her team mates calls her back to reality.

(What is Miki doing?)

The friendly match continues. This time, Miki chooses to pass the ball to Rika who is heavily marked instead of Yossi who has been signaling for the pass. It results in the opponents claiming procession and with a few quick passes, Asami sends the ball past Tsuji, into the back of the net.

“What’s wrong between Miki and you?” Rika runs up to Yossi and asks.
“Not sure, she was ok two days ago…”

The game goes on, Yossi’s team is on the attack again, Miki has the ball, a right pass to Yossi will definitely ends up in an open goal, however she decides to shoot it herself. The ball goes straight into Konno’s arms.

“Hey! What’s wrong?” Yossi runs up to Miki and asks.
“You have the cheek to ask? You and your stupid plan…” Miki last words cannot be heard clearly as she has run back to her own half to play defend.

However, when Yossi hears the word ‘plan’ she finally knows the cause of Miki’s weird behavior but she cannot agree with Miki for mixing personal affairs with ‘work’ so Yossi calls for a break and within seconds, she has dragged Miki to a corner for a talk.

Other team members are guessing the contents of the one-to-one talk. Just looking at the expressions of a serious Yossi and that of a defiant Miki, they expect a huge argument or maybe a fight to happen at any time. They get increasingly worried when they see more words and hand gestures being exchanged. It is lucky that today is not an official training session with coaches and staffs around, or else the two will have lots of explaining to do.

Rika seats on the bench with her hands grasped, hesitating if she should go forward and play nice guy. She predicts a clash is inevitable. Ever since Yossi had been appointed as the captain, the stress of being one has made her easily irritable. She lost count the times Yossi has flare up during practises.

“Rikachan, do something.” Tsuji urges and continues, “Too bad Matsuura-san isn’t here, or else she can go handle Miki.”

Rika slaps her hand on the knee and stands up. Tsuji is right, she has to act now. Then she sees Yossi pats Miki on the shoulders and both have smiles on their faces again. Rika cannot believe her eyes. Later, both of them walk back to court with arms around each other’s shoulders like the best of friends and signal to the rest to resume the match.

An inexplicable feeling grows in Rika, the sight of Yossi and Miki being buddies again makes her uneasy…

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« Reply #175 on: August 27, 2006, 05:05:11 AM »
Oooo, jealous Rika begins to surface.... I can't wait.

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« Reply #176 on: August 27, 2006, 12:46:52 PM »
It's time to Rika Action!!! :D

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« Reply #177 on: August 27, 2006, 03:43:59 PM »
“Rikachan.”

Yossi calls out to Rika who is walking alone on the pathway to the subway station. Rika waits while Yossi quickens her steps to catch up.

“Isshoni?”
Rika: “Sure, it’s been a while, ne?”
“Huh?”
“Nothing.” Rika meant to tell Yossi it has been a while since they are alone together.
“Are you okay?” Yossi asks concernly.
Rika looks sideway at Yossi and wonders why she says that.
“You’ve been quiet… since practise.”

Rika’s eyes dart back to the front, she has mixed feelings. She is glad that Yossi does notice her change in mood; at the same time angry with herself for letting her feelings show so easily.

Rika: “Is it? Maybe I’m tired.”
“Then I’ll see you home.”
Rika: “No need for that, it’s so out of the way.”
“It’s ok, I’m free anyway, besides you really look pale now…”

As they walk into the station, they hear an announcement on the public speaker system.

“Hurry! The train is coming.”

After they go through the automatic gates, Yossi grabs Rika’s arm and heads for platform. They make it into the train just before the door closes.

The train is crowded. They are sandwiched. After some hustling and jostling, Rika finds herself in an awkward position. She is standing very near to Yossi, so near she can feel the later’s breath on her face. Then she feels Yossi wraps her arms around her waists. Out of mutual understanding, she knows it is just a caring and protective gesture from Yossi, but she does not understand why her heart beat is getting irregular.

Throughout the journey, Rika does not talk much. Yossi thinks Rika must be really sick and she is glad she offers to see Rika home.  

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“Nice neighbourhood.” Yossi says as she admires the rows of beautiful houses placed sparsely apart and the serenity surrounding it. “and it’s so near to tv station.”
Rika: “That’s why my dad just bought this place.”
“Ermm, expensive? Maybe our family should move here too.”
“Really? Then we can become neighbours.” Somehow, Rika is quite excited with the thought.
“Yeah, I think it’s quite a good idea. I can even get your mum to give me a lift to work together.”

Rika stops at the gates of a white-colored three storey house. “I’m home.”
“Oh. I was looking forward to a pink looking house.” Yossi grins.
Rika: “Actually I wanted it painted in pink but dad objected.”
“You should be glad to have such a wise father.” Yossi adds.
Rika: “HIDOI!”

Both girls look at one another and laugh, it has been ages since Rika has used that word on Yossi. Ever since months ago when Yossi confessed her feelings to Rika and was rejected, they aren’t as close as before. It takes months and countless Gatas training together before Rika can finally forget the unpleasant episode and once again feels comfortable with Yossi around.

Rika: “Wanna come in? My mum’s been complaining that you hadn’t visited her for so long.”
“Not today, it’s getting dark.” (ok, it’s a lame excuse.)
Rika: “Alright, won’t force you. I’m going in now, thanks for walking me home. And give me a call when you reach home, ok? Bye bye.”

Yossi waves and watches Rika enters the house. Later she heads back to the station to take another train home.

Walking on the path leading to her house, Yossi realizes she is whistling, funny because she is not the least tired with all the traveling even after a tedious training session. She knows the reason, she is happy because the misunderstanding with Rika has been resolved.

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« Reply #178 on: August 27, 2006, 08:00:59 PM »
When will they get together!!!! Argh!!

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« Reply #179 on: August 28, 2006, 06:39:23 AM »
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When will they get together!!!! Argh!!


Make it soon. Please? XD

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