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« Reply #160 on: August 30, 2006, 02:46:25 PM »
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:o Evil Aya! Looooove this story, last night I didn't want to stop reading it until it was about 4 AM and I read the same line over and over about 6 times. :D



hey, get some sleep too, the fic isn't going anywhere XDXD
now i'm curious.. what line do you read 6 times? :P

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« Reply #161 on: August 30, 2006, 03:02:53 PM »
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hey, get some sleep too, the fic isn't going anywhere XDXD
now i'm curious.. what line do you read 6 times? :P

“It doesn’t matter, ok?” cut Gottsan “Just take care of Miki and tell her that she’s a lucky girl for having you”

XD I thought it was sweet (and still do ^^)...But I think I was so tired it actually took me the first 4 tries to actually comprehend it. :sweatdrop: I ended up reading the whole fic over this morning. There are a lot of things that I didn't remember, so thank gahh I did so. XD
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« Reply #162 on: August 30, 2006, 10:24:22 PM »
I need more to read! I'm so sleepy right now but I couldn't go to bed before I had read this. It's the same every day:I can't go to sleep before I have checked your ficXD

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« Reply #163 on: August 30, 2006, 10:46:57 PM »
then, the day that i don't post anything you go early to bed? XDXD
don't worry, tomorrow you'll have another chapter to make you stay awake until late :P

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« Reply #164 on: August 30, 2006, 10:51:09 PM »
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then, the day that i don't post anything you go early to bed? XDXD
don't worry, tomorrow you'll have another chapter to make you stay awake until late :P

Staying up late reading it, or staying up because of what was read? :panda_shifty:
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« Reply #165 on: August 30, 2006, 11:03:12 PM »
well, i meant reading it but i can't predict the side effects that every chapter will have in the readers:twisted:

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« Reply #166 on: August 30, 2006, 11:30:07 PM »
:panda_love: Yay! I can't wait. I'm horribly impatient about things, but I will TRY to wait. XD

I bet it's fun reading the reactions of everyone, huh?
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« Reply #167 on: August 31, 2006, 12:02:15 AM »
Ohohohoho! Was a lurker, but now as a member, proud to say YOU ROCK! My heeerooo! Rika was such a bitch here, but driven from love by hate, very nice touch to the antagonist :] I loved all the Ai x Risa moments, sho vury fooneh :]. I look forward to the future chapters!

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« Reply #168 on: August 31, 2006, 12:12:06 AM »
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I bet it's fun reading the reactions of everyone, huh?


well, more than fun.., to read peoples comments and how you're enjoying the fic it cheers me up to write more and more ^^

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Ohohohoho! Was a lurker, but now as a member, proud to say YOU ROCK! My heeerooo! Rika was such a bitch here, but driven from love by hate, very nice touch to the antagonist :] I loved all the Ai x Risa moments, sho vury fooneh :]. I look forward to the future chapters!


wellcome to the active life in the forum! I was a lurker for long time too XDXD

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« Reply #169 on: August 31, 2006, 07:16:02 AM »
I know.. a little short this time :P


***32***


Yossi was heading to the dance room to meet with the other girls when, suddenly, someone unexpected jumped in her way. Hitomi didn’t try to avoid the assault. She just looked at the person in front of her and remained as cold as she could.

“Happy to see me?”
“Not really” answered Yossi.
“That hurts, Yocchan” said Rika while she began to move closer to the younger “At least you should ask how I’m feeling after you’re girlfriend’s attack…”
“You look fine” Hitomi’s reply was colder than ice “I guess you’ll live”

The answer hit Ishikawa like a direct kick in her stomach but she wasn’t going to give up so easily.

“Why you’re acting so cold hearted today?” she said putting her arms around Yossi’s neck. Hitomi didn’t move a muscle.
“I don’t have time to play with you today, Ishikawa”

Another kick. Yoshizawa’s attitude began to serve her nerves on edge.

Finally, tired of staying there with someone she couldn’t stand, Yossi released herself from Rika’s grip and tried to keep on her way to the dance room.

Then, Rika-chan decided to use her last weapon to catch her attention.

“I was wondering…” she said with a playing tone “You’ve tell Miki about our little secret already?”

Yossi stopped dead. She wasn’t expecting that move.

“I mean… She should know how her girlfriend really is, doesn’t she?”

Rika took advantage of Yossi’s surprise and hold her again. Goosebumps travelled around the taller’s skin when she felt Ishikawa’s body pressing against her back. She couldn’t believe that Rika could dare to use something like that to keep her.

“That’s something between us…” she managed to say finally.
“Yeah…” whispered Ishikawa “And that’s why you’ll always be mine…”


***


Fujimoto didn’t know if she should be happy or worried about her friend’s attitude. Since they’d talked in the morning Aya was smiling happily…, too much happily for someone who was just rejected. It was as if Ishikawa’s incident never happened. They had lunch, talked about silly things and now they were walking together hand in hand as the best friends. It was too weird…

Maybe she wasn’t in love… Maybe she was just jealous because I didn’t pay attention to her…


She keep wondering what was happening with Aya when she heard a voice coming from somewhere near.

“…You’ve tell Miki about our little secret already?”

Aya stopped next to her friend and enjoyed the look at Miki’s face, who seemed taken aback by Rika’s words.
 
“That’s something between us…”

What the hell…?

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« Reply #170 on: August 31, 2006, 07:24:27 AM »
Oh no she didn't! Bad Rika! God, I'm really starting to dislike her, that's not good for my fic...

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« Reply #171 on: August 31, 2006, 07:44:06 AM »
whoa! evil tacit coming from the Rika and Aya duo. :cry: I feel sorry for Yomiki.

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« Reply #172 on: August 31, 2006, 07:47:44 AM »
Oh Gahh! O_O -punts Rika and Aya-

:].

So suspensful ; ; But I love it!

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« Reply #173 on: August 31, 2006, 08:07:07 AM »
OMG ahhh !!! the suspense is killing meee >.<
100% supports YoMiki !~:D

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« Reply #174 on: August 31, 2006, 11:18:20 AM »
What secret can it be that can make Yossi yield to Rika... Argh.. it's getting suspenseful...

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« Reply #175 on: August 31, 2006, 03:16:01 PM »
Oh man! This is bad. Don't listen Miki!!! DON'T LISTEN!!!!!

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« Reply #176 on: August 31, 2006, 04:21:34 PM »
Ou my... And like YoukaiChica said: DON'T LISTEN MIKI! You and Yossi belong together!
I guess I can't sleep untill I have read what will happen nextXD
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« Reply #177 on: August 31, 2006, 04:29:26 PM »
O_O OH MY GAHH!!

That's so...arg! I dunno the words for it! XD Leaving us in suspence might just kill me one of these days.

BAD RIKA AND AYA! -smacks them both-
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« Reply #178 on: August 31, 2006, 04:40:57 PM »
I don't think Rika is really really bad :S

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« Reply #179 on: August 31, 2006, 08:34:25 PM »
The secret had better not be that Yossi was a D-Girl before.


*shudders violently and then :puke:'s at the thought.

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