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« Reply #200 on: September 01, 2006, 09:02:35 PM »
impatient for updates!!! XD

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« Reply #201 on: September 01, 2006, 10:19:01 PM »
I'm s0o0o0o0o impatient for this, I just wanna know what it is. I don't care if it's not what I expected, because yea... I dunno what to expect. XD
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« Reply #202 on: September 02, 2006, 12:25:35 AM »
Yossi went for LIPosuction?

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« Reply #203 on: September 02, 2006, 11:28:20 PM »
No update:cry:  
Damn you! Must I go to bed without anything new to read?:o :)

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« Reply #204 on: September 03, 2006, 12:29:46 PM »
sorry, i didn't sleep at home yesterday and i couldn't finish the next chapter :P but there'll be update today, don't worry

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« Reply #205 on: September 03, 2006, 01:46:36 PM »
*be happy, and start to wait update*:) XD

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« Reply #206 on: September 03, 2006, 04:28:28 PM »
and as I promised, new update :P


***34***



“We shouldn’t do that here…”
“You wanna stop?” asked a playful Ai-chan.
“No…” Risa’s answer was followed by a kiss “…but the cameras…”
“It’s funnier this way”

Gaki-san complaints were silenced by another kiss, this time deeper, and a hand travelling down her body.

“Don’t tell me you’re not enjoying it…”

A mischievous smile appeared on Gaki’s face.

“You’re really a weird girl, Takahashi”
“Yeah, but that’s why you love me”

Ai-chan was leaning to kiss her again when they heard steps going towards the room. Quickly, Risa lifted up and took her girlfriend to the closet that was in the room, which luckily it was big enough to hide both girls inside. Gaki-san closed the door just in time to see two girls coming into the room.

“Hmm… we’d never done that before…” said Takahashi playing with Risa’s hair between her fingers.
“Sshhh… I wanna hear them”

‘So, how’s everything?’
‘Fine’
‘Really? It seems like you’re avoiding me these days’
‘I have more things to do than just think about you…’


“Isn’t that Rika-chan?” asked Takahashi who was already interested in the conversation too.
“I think so… But I can’t hear them clearly…”
“Let me see…”

Ai-chan opened slightly the door looking through a little gap.

‘Your plans aren’t going how you want, right? That’s why you’re so upset’
‘I have all under control’
‘Then why I’ve seen Yoshizawa and Fujimoto so lovely with each other today? They don’t even seem to be hiding their relationship…’


Ishikawa looked hurt. It was like if the other girl enjoyed seeing her this way.

‘You wanna help me or just make fun of me?’
‘Help you, of course’ said the other girl taking Rika-chan from the waist and attracting her ‘You know I’m the only one who has been at your side since all that started’ she tried to kiss Rika but Ishikawa moved away before.
‘Not now, Erika. I have to go…’


“What’s happening?” asked Risa trying to reach the door too “I want to watch too”
“You’re not going to believe it…”
“What?”

Then, they heard Rika-chan leaving the room.

‘That stupid girl…After all I’ve done and she still loves Yoshizawa. I can’t let her to give up or she’s going to ruin all the fun…’


“Why the hell she’s talking alone?” asked Risa.
“And you said that I’m weird…”

Erika leaved the room too and the gokies were alone again.

“Come on…” said Gaki opening the closet’s door “We have to tell Makochi about this”

But before she could go out, Ai-chan’s hand took her by the arm and pulled her into the closet again.

“Wait…” she whispered into her lover’s ear “We still have to finish something…”

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« Reply #207 on: September 03, 2006, 04:38:55 PM »
erika??... but she wasn't around during the yoshigoto period.. hmm kinda confusing
anyways... i loved the taka-gaki moments lol

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« Reply #208 on: September 03, 2006, 04:49:12 PM »
chapter 13, remember when i said that the problems between Yossi and Rika began? XD

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« Reply #209 on: September 03, 2006, 04:56:19 PM »
ahhh okok.... went back to read chapter 13 now everything fits... sorry abt that

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« Reply #210 on: September 03, 2006, 05:18:42 PM »
So that's the mystery person? I KNEW IT! Best part was it was mostly TakaGaki <3~! -jumps for joy-

Can't wait til next chapter!

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« Reply #211 on: September 03, 2006, 05:54:10 PM »
Erika?! O_O I didn't see that coming. XD But now everything makes sense! Yay! Also, YAY for TakaGaki moment! -joins in with the jumping for joy-
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« Reply #212 on: September 03, 2006, 06:00:21 PM »
Wow that was a shocker. I thought it was gonna be Aya for some reason...then it was Erika. Then again Erika does have like...an evil look in her eyes sometimes. Maybe its just me...anyway...nice story ^_^ *3 cheers for TakaGaki*

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« Reply #213 on: September 03, 2006, 07:36:08 PM »
Yei! Can't say anything elseXD

Hmmm... I guess I'll read chapter 13 again:D

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« Reply #214 on: September 03, 2006, 08:06:50 PM »
Sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet. :twisted:

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« Reply #215 on: September 04, 2006, 07:54:56 AM »
***35***


As she was leaving the studio, something told her that it wasn’t going to be so easy to go home. Her fears were confirmed when she saw the two girls in front of her.

“Miki-chan! Let’s go to drink something!” Yuko didn’t bother to ask, she just took Fujimoto and pulled her into the car in spit of the younger’s complaints.
“We shouldn’t wait Yocchan?” asked Kei laughing “She’ll be angry if we kidnap her girlfriend this way”
“Naah, I want to talk with Miki-chan alone”

Fujimoto looked at her elder with fear in her eyes and asked something knowing perfectly the answer.

“You’re already drunk, don’t you?”   

***


“Where the hell is she?”

Yossi pressed the call button in her cell-phone again. It was the fourth time she was trying to speak with Miki and she didn’t pick up the phone. Yoshizawa didn’t know if she should be angry or worried. It became a habit to wait for each other at the end of the day even if they weren’t going anywhere, just to enjoy each other company for a little longer. But that day it seemed that Miki forgot about it.

When Hitomi was going to do the fifth attempt, someone appeared at her side.

“You’ve lost your princess?”

The cold tone in Aya’s voice made Yossi shiver. It was a sign that told her that this conversation wasn’t going to be a friendly one.

“She probably went home already” answered Yoshizawa trying to avoid Aya’s eyes.
“You know…., you don’t deserve her”
“And who deserve her? Someone who has been ignoring her feeling for years?” fight back Yossi.

 Hitomi knew that Matsuura wasn’t the type of girl who likes verbal fighting but this time it seemed that the other girl didn’t want to give up so easily.

“I know how you are, Yoshizawa. You like to play the knight in shinning armor saving helpless girls and then…”
“You don’t know anything about me” cut Yossi tired of Aya’s words “It was Miki’s choice to be with me. You had your opportunity and you lost it. Deal with it”

Yossi put the phone in the jacket’s pocket and began to walk away leaving Matsuura behind who didn’t dare to say anything to reply.


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“So… it’s official now?”
“Well, just some people now about us” answered Miki “I don’t know if you can call that to be official”

Yuko had been making silly questions all night but it seemed that, as much as she drunk, more serious she was.

“You know… I love Yocchan…, we love Yocchan” corrected herself holding Kei closer to her “And we’re not going to let anyone hurt her. She’s our favourite girl”
“I know” said Fujimoto a little scared with Yuko’s look.

The older released the grip on her girlfriend and move closer to Miki who tried to avoid the contact.

“Then, if you’re serious about that relationship, you should tell Tsunku before he knows it through another person”

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« Reply #216 on: September 04, 2006, 09:49:06 AM »
Damn, I sort of lost track of this story ... I'm gonna go re-read it again and then leave a comment :D

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« Reply #217 on: September 04, 2006, 11:03:23 AM »
O_O Erika? O_O My Erika? O_O I just... That can't... Ah... O_O My brain...O_O How could you villify my sweet Erika? O_O I can't believe I like it O_O

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« Reply #218 on: September 04, 2006, 01:56:23 PM »
Oh, it was short. But I don't care:)  It's enough to me.
I have a bad feeling about Tsunku. Or not Tsunku, but I guess someone will tell him about Yossi and Miki. It's hard to explain what I mean, so just ignore meXD

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« Reply #219 on: September 04, 2006, 02:07:10 PM »
haha wonder who was planning to tell tsunku anyway lol, wonder will Miki tell him..hmmm..cant wait for the next part!!

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