When Love Hurts

[len.chan]

***23***


“Ishikawa-san… There’s something that Erika and I wanna ask you about”
“What do you want to know?” asked Rika without much interest.

Yui went closer to her and lowered her voice as if what she was going to say was the biggest secret ever.

“There’s a rumour… The girls are talking about Yoshizawa-san and you…”
“They say that you’re dating Yossi” said Erika more openly.

Rika-chan looked at the girls and smiled to reassure them.

“Look, there’s the same rumour since Yocchan and I joined the group and never happened anything. Don’t worry about that, ok?”
“But they…”

Yui’s words were silenced by some noise coming from the hallway. All happened so fast that they hadn’t time to react until it was too late.

“YOU BITCH!”
 
Ishikawa hardly had time to see the punch coming. Suddenly, she found herself in the ground with her nose bleeding and trying to run away from a crazy Miki that was getting ready to attack again.

Luckily, someone hold her back tightly before she could do anything more.

“Hey! Calm down, Fujimoto”
“Let me go, Maki!” said Miki fighting the grip from Goto’s arms “I’m going to finish her game once and for all!”
“I understand you, but you can’t punch people because of that. Listen to me!”

Yui and Erika helped Rika-chan to stand up.

“Yeah, listen to Gocchin” said with a devilish smile “She knows what’s talking about, ne Maki-chan?”
“Don’t pay attention to her, Miki. She just wants to hurt you”
“But that bitch is using Aya!”

Then, Matsuura arrived where the other girls were and saw the whole scene. Rika’s nose broken, Miki out of her mind and Maki trying to hold her. When she heard her name she knew that thing was going to be worst.

“I’m not using her” replied Ishikawa “I’ve only helped her to be more open about her feelings, that’s all”
“Rika-chan, don’t…” begged Matsuura who knew what Ishikawa was going to say.
“You know…, she was very shy at first” she cleaned the blood of her nose with her sleeve “…but touching the right buttons she becomes wild”

Everybody looked at Rika with eyes wide open and Maki felt Fujimoto’s muscles tensing.

“I still remember her screams of pleasure asking for more…”
“Ok, all yours”.

Gottsan let go Miki and everybody jumped back waiting for a new attack, but Fujimoto didn’t move. She just looked at Aya with the saddest eyes she ever saw and then walk away in silence. Ayaya wanted to follow her friend but Maki stopped her.

“I have to go with her…” said Aya crying “She has to know why…”
“If you follow her now, she’ll slap you and she’ll never talk to you again… And you…” Gochin turned to see Rika “…don’t smile so happily ‘cause you haven’t won the war yet”

Maki took Aya in her arms and left v-u-den alone again.

“I still don’t know what was all that about…” said Yui confused.

Erika looked at her and then turned to her leader.

“Come on, Rika-chan. We need to clean that mess…”

[asheravel]

omg! rika such a b*iotch ! >=( haha but the part wen Maki was lyk 'Ok,All yours' made me laugh =D ...aww miki n her sad eyes ='(

[JFC]

Funny thing is, after seeing the Sukeban Deka clips where Rika's doing the psycho evil character, picturing her doing all of the shit she's done in this fic ain't hard at all!

“I still remember her screams of pleasure asking for more…”
“Ok, all yours”.

Gottsan let go of Miki...

Best...part...evah!

[Mikan]

WOWx4!!

"Ok, all yours"

SOOOO FUNNY! I gave a loud "HA!". That was so cool. I like seeing a bitchy Rika. In real life I think she a little bit of a bitch..when she says "MURI!" Its so scary and I can totally imagine that as her real character

My heart hurts a little for Goto-san. She is caught in the middle of this. Lol.

[freya86]

What else can I do but agree with everyone??? Loved this chapter!!! And ...

“I still remember her screams of pleasure asking for more…”
“Ok, all yours”.

Yeah ... best part ever

I feel so bad for Ayaya all of a sudden ...

[stefy]

yea goto's “Ok, all yours” was i think the best part haha..
i was watching tokuba this morning, the one where morning grads were the guest.. evil rika saying "muri!" to kagaku-kun (did i spell his name rite?) that just stright way reminded me of this fic!

[len.chan]

The funny thing is that JFC's right. When I saw the Sukeban Deka clips instantly I thought "Hey! That's my Rika!" XDXD
In Tokuban, when she said "MURI!" to that guy she's more like pissed of than evil...

[YoukaiChica]

Amazing. I gave a laugh when Maki let go of Miki. And I feel so bad for Aya too. Ah! Its just so muddled up right now! Damn you Rika! But I still heart her, even if she is an evil bitch...

[len.chan]

another one

***24***


When Love Hurts 24


Yossi was worried. She had a bad feeling when she saw Aya and Miki leaving the room almost two hours ago and they hadn’t return yet. Ishikawa was missing too, and that made her worry even more.

She stopped a staff guy who was walking to the studio.

“You’ve seen Fujimoto?”
“Mmh.., yeah” said the guy surprised by sudden request “She was at 4th floor some minutes ago”

4th floor? What is she doing there? Oh… oh!

“Thank you!” exclaimed Hitomi while running towards the elevator.

Now Yoshizawa was sure that something had happened. As Yuko said, that was the best place if you don’t want to be bothered and there wasn’t another reason for Miki being alone there.

When she arrived at the service room the door was closed, but not locked.

“Miki?” she said switching on the lights.

There she was. Seated on the ground, with her head buried in her knees and a bag with ice upon her right hand.

“What happened?” asked Yossi kneeling in front of the girl “How did you hurt your hand?”
“It crashed against Ishikawa’s face” said Fujimoto without looking at her.
“You’ve punched her?!
“Sort of…” she raised her head a little to look at her girlfriend “Well.., I’ve broken her nose, actually”

Hitomi didn’t have to ask why ‘cause the other girl answer before.

“She slept with Aya” said Miki looking at her with her eyes red from crying.
“Oh…”   

Yossi didn’t know what more she could say. Even now that they were together, she knew that Miki will always love Aya and she couldn’t do anything to change that. The only she could do was to seat next to Miki and comfort her.

“Come here” she said passing an arm behind Fujimoto’s back and attracting her.

Miki leaned towards her girlfriend and rest her head on Yossi’s shoulder.

“Why it hurts so much?” asked beginning to cry again “Even now that I’m with you, now that I can love someone else, she continue hurting me. I’m such a bad person to deserve that?”
“Of course not” replied Hitomi holding her closer “Don’t dare to think that again”

After a few minutes in silence Miki seemed to calm down and fell asleep. She was too tired. Yossi caressed her cheek and cleaned the remains of the tears trying to fight the guilty that was growing inside her.

That’s all my fault and I can’t do anything to make you feel better. I’m sorry, Miki.

“I love you” she said leaning to kiss the girl in her arms.

She could hear a whisper coming from the sleepy as an answer.

“I love you too”

[asheravel]

Aww!~ i love this chappiee!!~

[Mikan]

The end of this chapter *tear* made me feel so sad and happy at the same time...oh gosh...

Hey, where did Aya go?

[MyDearYossi]

That was beautiful...

[stefy]

latest chapter put a smile on my face... awesomely written

[len.chan]

Hey, where did Aya go?

You'll see in the next. I'm writing it already

[_Hitomi_]

_Hitomi_ seats on the floor with a coke in her hand, and waits patiently for the next chapter

[Mikan]

Mikan sits next to _Hitomi_ and drinks from her coke using a long novelty straw

[YoukaiChica]

YoukaiChica plops down next to Mikan, who is next to _Hitomi_, and munches on some kettle corn, quietly waiting for more.

[Hitsu]

* starts selling chocolates and candies to everyone *

len.chan, your fic is simply a success. Write a book and spread the YoMiki love worldwide! The next Harry Potter is sooo gonna get Miki'd...

[len.chan]

a book?! that's too much for a person who just can write a page in english each time XDXDXD And i'm sure there's a lot of fics better than mine to spread the YoMiki love around the world


***25***



“How did she dare to hit me?!”
“Calm down”
“I can’t! Look at what she did!” shouted Ishikawa jumping in rage from the chair.
“It’s not so bad” said Erika forcing her leader to sit down again “At least it’s not broken”

Okada was standing near them looking worried and nervous.

“We shouldn’t go to the hospital or something?”
“Don’t be so dramatic, Yui. It’s just some blood” replied Erika “Anyway, can you go to bring some more bandages?”
“Uh.., yeah”

When Yui left the room, Erika stopped cleaning the blood and just stared at the other girl.

“What were you thinking to say that to Fujimoto? It could be worst”
“She can’t do anything worst than that” said Rika pointing at her swollen nose “She’s just an animal”
“But a hurt animal is the most dangerous, Rika-chan. You should know that already”


***

Maki was standing in front of Aya waiting for the younger to stop crying since they left the hallway, almost an hour ago.

“You’re better?”

Matsuura just nodded slightly.

“Ok, then, now that you’ve calmed down.., can you explain me why the hell you had to sleep with Rika?!”
“Do… don’t shout… at me” begged Aya scared.

Maki took a deep breath.

“Sorry. Can you explain me what happened, please?”

The other girl tried to recompose herself before she could begin to speak. All what happened was too much for her and her friend’s roughness wasn’t helping.

“She wa… she was… Miki” answered shyly.
“What?”
“I didn’t sleep with Rika-chan. She was Miki”
“Then…, why Ishikawa said all those things? She was lying?” asked Gottsan a little confused.
“No…”
“Ok, ok, ok… Maybe I’m too slow to catch you but…” said Maki scratching her head, searching for a way to join all the pieces together “…can you repeat the whole thing? ‘Cause I’m really lost”
Aya began to desperate again and the tears came back to her eyes.

“I was afraid to be closer to Miki and Rika-chan told that I had to imagine that she was Miki and then she began to kiss me and I lost myself ‘causeIreallywannabewithherandnow…”
“Aya, breathe” said Maki cutting her.

Suddenly, Gottsan was caught by surprise by a desperate and sobbing Aya Matuura who hugged her. She couldn’t do anything more than comfort her the best way she knew.

“I know it hurts…” said Maki moving away from the younger a little “…but you can’t let Rika to use that against the one you love…”

[bluekinoko]

*Re-reads len.chans fic with wide eyes. Using her other hands she steals some Kettle corn from YoukaiChica*

OMFG...ahuh..ahuh...then what happened?

Just let it flow maaaaan~ Its not quantity - its quality! and this is HIGH quality!