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Offline MyDearYossi

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« Reply #100 on: August 22, 2006, 09:07:41 AM »
*Buying candy from Hitsu. And eating it very quietly in order not to disturb anyone*

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« Reply #101 on: August 22, 2006, 10:46:12 AM »
ummm I think that Aya it's not an angel. She isn't inocent. I feel bad for her in this fic because Rika is a b..! but is her fault too.
What does Miki and Yossi thinks about this? ^_^ I want to know.

(_Hitomi_ goes to the market to buy some beers. "I think we are going to need them! ;)")

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« Reply #102 on: August 22, 2006, 08:18:17 PM »
:w00t: there is a party happening here!

*MIKIisLOVE reflexively invites herself to the party :bounce:

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« Reply #103 on: August 22, 2006, 09:08:05 PM »
*erink tired from kana writting takes a sip of _Hitomi_'s beer and tosses herself down in the corner. must read update*

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« Reply #104 on: August 22, 2006, 09:20:52 PM »
ok.. here's a party and nobody gives the writer some chocolate¿? that's unfair:baa60776:

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« Reply #105 on: August 22, 2006, 09:40:57 PM »
*gives all the chocolates that he's selling to len.chan*  xD

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« Reply #106 on: August 22, 2006, 09:51:46 PM »
i wish that finally yomiki  triumph!!!!!
Yomiki...Real Love:heart:

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« Reply #107 on: August 23, 2006, 07:04:33 AM »
Quote from: MyDearYossi
*Buying candy from Hitsu. And eating it very quietly in order not to disturb anyone*

:popcorn:

And I don't really like popcorn. :P

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« Reply #108 on: August 23, 2006, 07:36:55 AM »
thanks for the chocolates Hitsu :P

***26***



“Then, everybody agree with the plan?”
“I’m not sure, Mako-chan” answered Eri “What if they catch us?”
“That’s a risk but we have to know what’s happening” said Makoto serious “We have to keep the group safe”

All the girls looked at her but just Reina dared to say what everybody was thinking.

“Oh, come on. You’re not doing this for our safety” said her with a derogatory tone “You just want to know why your beloved Yoshizawa-san forgot your existence”

Makoto was going to say something but Tanaka continued.

“If you want to keep the group safe we should talk about them, too” she said pointing at Ai-chan and Gaki-san.

Everybody turned to look at the girls.

“Why… why are you saying that?” asked Risa.
“’Cause I couldn’t sleep two nights ago because of your little party”
“I don’t know what you’re talking about” said Ai-chan trying to seem indifferent.
“No?” Reina began to speak with her mocking voice “Maybe the words ‘oh, yes!’, ‘harder!’, ‘don’t stop, Risa!” refresh your memory?”

The two girls looked at each other and her faces turned deep red

“I told you to be quiet!” complained Gaki-san.
“Hey, it’s something I can’t control, ok?”
“Then next time I’ll gag you!”
“Really?” asked Takahashi in a playful voice.

Makoto shook her head and decided to return to the main theme.

“Well, eh…” she cleaned her throat before speak again “We’ll see later what we do with those two. Right now, Yoshizawa-san is the priority”


***

From the other side of the studio, three silhouettes were looking at the younger girls with curiosity.

“What are they talking about so seriously?”
“Something about discover Yoshizawa’s dark side” joked Yuko.
“Yossi has a dark side?” asked Abe surprised.

Nakazawa crossed her arms and smiled.

“Nah, they’re just curious about Yossi’s private life. She’s been playing with fire lately and they’re worried”
“You know what’s going on, don’t you?” said Kei.
“She’s in love, and that’s dangerous”
“Rika-chan again?”
“Miki”

Natsumi was turning her head from Kei to Yuko trying to follow the conversation but she was already lost.

“Wait, who’s in love with whom?”
“Yossi and Miki” answered Nakazawa “But I’m sure that something happened with Rika-chan and that’s why I’m so worried”
“Anybody saw her since she left the rehearsal three days ago” said Kei, who was beginning to worry too “Maybe we should call her”
“I don’t want to interfere. Not yet”

Yuko was more worried than she wanted to say. She could feel that there was something big behind Rika’s behaviour.

“I hope that Yossi’s able to handle this…”
« Last Edit: August 23, 2006, 08:31:16 PM by len.chan »

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« Reply #109 on: August 23, 2006, 08:02:01 AM »
Oh man! The drama and intensity is building up! I need more!! Jeez, I feel like an addict or something....

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« Reply #110 on: August 23, 2006, 09:01:07 AM »
Every morning I come to check this place and become veeeery happy 'cos len.chan has written more:heart:  So really big thanks to you!:)

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« Reply #111 on: August 23, 2006, 09:20:35 AM »
*Pulls fresh batch of cookies from protable over*

These are for len.chan when she is ready :P

I totally laughed at loud with -

“I told you to be quiet!” complained Gaki-san.
“Hey, it’s something I can’t control, ok?”
“Then next time I’ll gag you!”
“Really?” asked Takahashi in a playful voice.


HA! OMGosh!

We really have started a party in here :P

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« Reply #112 on: August 24, 2006, 07:49:05 AM »
*takes a cookie*

thanks Mikan :D

well, no update today... yesterday I couldn't write a single word...

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« Reply #113 on: August 24, 2006, 01:19:54 PM »
*hops in the same boat as len.chan*

Dont worry I know exactly how you feel. When it's ready it will come.

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« Reply #114 on: August 25, 2006, 07:37:08 AM »
well, the problem was that I needed like a bridge chapter to be able to write what I have in mind and I didn't know how to do it exactly, but hey! here it is XDXD


***27***



It didn’t matter how many times she looked at the mirror. It was still there. A big bruise around her nose which didn’t disappear, not even with all the make up she was using.

Rika Ishikawa was cursing the day she met Miki. She had to do something, and she had to do it soon. The question was what… What more she could do that won’t end with Yossi and Miki even closer?

Then, the answer knocked at her door.

“What are you doing here?”
“You didn’t pick up the phone”
“You shouldn’t be angry at me or something?”

The answer was a slap in Rika’s face.

“Hey! It still hurts, you know?!”
“You deserve it” said Aya with an inexpressive face “She doesn’t wanna talk with me. Why are you doing that to us?!”
“That’s not about Miki and you. She was just in the wrong place”
“You want Yossi…”

Rika-chan looked at her and smiled as if what the other girl said it was the funniest thing she ever heard.

“And who don’t?” she replied “She’s so kind, lovely and charming that everybody falls in love with her. The problem is that she knows that and she uses it.”

In some way, the way Ishikawa was talking seemed like she was really hurt or, at least, it was what Aya thought.

“That’s why I’m here” said Matsuura.
“What?”
“I don’t wanna see Miki getting hurt so I’ll help you”

Ishikawa couldn’t believe what she was hearing. The innocent and pure Aya Matsuura wanted to be involved in her plans?

“Maybe you’ll have to lie to her…” she said to be sure about Aya’s intentions.
“I know”
“And you don’t care?”
“She’s the only thing that matters to me”

Love sure is a bad thing if can change someone’s mind that way. She lied to Aya, she used her in a deliberated way and even knowing that, the younger wanted to be her ally. That’s why is so dangerous to be in love. It makes you act desperately just to have the one you want. But that was good for Rika. Now she had someone like her.

“Just one more thing” said Aya.
“Tell me…”
“If we’re going to do this together you have to be honest with me”
“It’s fair” answered Rika.
“Show me the real Ishikawa” Matsuura went closer to the older girl “Tell me why you’re doing this. Why do you feel so bitter?”
“That’s a long story that you don’t need to know…”

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« Reply #115 on: August 25, 2006, 08:43:10 AM »
But I, and I'm sure everyone of us, need to knowXD

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« Reply #116 on: August 25, 2006, 09:14:24 AM »
I definitely need to know!!

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« Reply #117 on: August 25, 2006, 09:46:40 AM »
Drama, tension, bitching.... you could be a scriptwriter!!! I bet this series will have ratings that shoot through the roof!

I can totally imagine Rika as the b****. That image of her in the Sukeban movie just flashed through my mind XD

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« Reply #118 on: August 25, 2006, 09:59:25 PM »
:popcorn: :popcorn: :popcorn: :popcorn: :popcorn: :popcorn: :popcorn:

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« Reply #119 on: August 25, 2006, 10:06:48 PM »
I need to know her story too XD

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