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« Reply #100 on: September 25, 2006, 04:37:00 AM »
:D! I love this chapter! So funny! XD
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“Then I’ll push you in, and go in casually,” Miki smirked, and stood behind Maki, waiting to set her five-second plan in motion.

“Reina? We’re coming in!” Maki announced, before opening the door, regardless of the aforementioned person’s detests of ‘wait! I have the thing on!’. Miki pushed Maki hard into the room, and got in as well. Only for one thing to happen.
XD She still fell for it, and I laughed so hard!

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“My summer is the smell of the air conditioner, you know,” Reina said in a shifty-eyed face.
I can so picture Reina saying something like that, after all she did say once that the smell of the air conditioner reminder her of the summer. XD

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She backed slightly, seeing two snakes. “Why snakes?! What if they bite?! And why is one of them holding onto your bra?!”

Reina yanked the bra away from Miki-hebi, and tossed it in her closet as well.
HAHA! What a great idea to put in there, brilliant, I must say. :D It must take a real genius to think of that. :D

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…And she likes them?! Miki and Maki both widened their small golden snake eyes.
Of course she likes them :D It IS Eri after all. XD

And w00t! I'm the 101th post on OCG thread! :panda_love: (I have no clue why I feel happy about that.)
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« Reply #101 on: September 25, 2006, 04:40:27 AM »
Suddenly noticed that the 10th chapter was the 100th post :]
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« Reply #102 on: September 25, 2006, 05:00:09 AM »
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“You didn’t hear me?” Reina ran over to the door and dragged the clothes in, “I said wait! I have the air conditioner on!”

“No you didn’t!” Miki-hebi waved her tail dismissively, “you said you had the ‘thing’ on! You didn’t specify~!”


That was amazing!! Just like that whole chapter in general. I was cracking up the whole time!! I know I've said this before but you're my hero even more.

Where do you come up with all this hilarity and brillance?? If its in bottled form, let me know.

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« Reply #103 on: September 25, 2006, 06:58:02 AM »
Gogo and Shichiru. Not bad. :lol:

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The wonky eyed teen then figured out a plan, she went and kissed both of the snakes…Every ten seconds…


Brilliant!!! If Miki loved it, so would have I :D

Kamei's so clueless. But that's why we like her, right? XD

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« Reply #104 on: September 25, 2006, 09:19:29 AM »
There is too much in this last chapter to quote the bits I liked. Oh my gah, I loved it, lol. I was laughing so much!! I had to take a quick break because I jsut ate and my stomach started to hurt. Ah, the mental images your words gave me!

I'll be different and start from the end and work my way up -


“Sometimes…” Reina sighed, “I feel like the whole world is conspiring to destroy my room.”

I can relate. I loved this as the ending comment. Just an extra spice of comedy that made you giggle.

“Well, what would you do if you walked into your junior’s room finding two gorgeous women rolling around naked?”

Lol I was thinking the same thing Yossui was - "Heelllooooo" ^_^

Maki guiltily raised her tail in the air.

Lol. The mental image of a snake looking guilty :P

My other number one image would be Maki and Miki entering the room, turning to smoke and slithering under the bed just seems too funny for some reason. Ah, I love it.

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« Reply #105 on: September 25, 2006, 03:08:21 PM »
OMG Yuuyamiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii !!!:ROTFLMAO: :ROTFLMAO: :ROTFLMAO:

this chapter was hilarious-uproarious-screamingly-funny as hell XD

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“So, why are you in front of her door?” Miki glared at the person next to her.

“No, I must ask why you are in front of her door, and why are you?” Maki glared in reply.

“No no no noooo, I asked you first!”

“What do you mean? I got here first!”


just the fact that those two are fighting for...nothing(?) like  primary school kids killed me

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Maki and Miki reached for each other’s lips with their hands. Then they both tried their hardest to stretch the other’s lips out of shape, making odd noises cursing the other.

that remind me the openning of Love Hina again XD (hope anyone have seen that part XD)

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“Alright, I’m here just to retrieve something, I forgot it when I left her room,” Maki sighed. She turned and leaned against the wall for support.

“As for me, I wanted my blow dryer back, she’s had it since yesterday morning,” Miki mimicked her fellow cursed member, and also leaned against the wall for support.

at first i thought they were in front of the head room...:lol:  :hammerself:


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“Then I’ll push you in

wth !!! XD XD XD

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Double Poof.


at that part my stomach was hurting me so much

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“do something about our clothes!”

:lol:

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the door was knocked upon, and in came a certain person.

suspense XD

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“I don’t mind if your room is messy, but why is it so… cold?” [...]
“But summer’s over…”

“But I wanted to savor the last bit of summer…”

“With an air conditioner?”

“My summer is the smell of the air conditioner, you know,” Reina said in a shifty-eyed face.



i wonder how can i be still alive after that XD

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“Is there someone else here?”

“No!” Reina waved her hand dismissively, “no one at all!”  she smiled wide to compensate for her internal panic.


PANIIIICCCC !!! XD XD XD XD

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“You’re weird,” Eri smiled.

“Like you’re one to talk,” Reina replied in a sarcastic tone.

:ROTFLMAO:

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Maki, hearing the title, saw the very same movie near her location. She slithered around it, and pushed it towards Reina’s hand which was conveniently half under her bed. Reina felt the DVD and took it from Maki’s grasp, and looked at it, confirming that it is the correct title Eri had said, she lent it to her. “This is it, right?”

Reina classes her DVDs under the bed ?:lmao:

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Poof!

Eri, still looking at the backside, asked “what was that noise?”


PANIIIKUUUUU XD XD

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Miki was back in human form, however, her face was close enough… I can’t believe I’m doing this of my own will… Reina thought dreadfully, before quickly moving her head forward to kiss  the unsuspecting Miki, and she transformed back into snake form.


!!!!!!:shocked:  :w00t:


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“Why snakes?! What if they bite?! And why is one of them holding onto your bra?!”

:ROTFLMAO: you have weird ideas XD XD XD but that so damn funny XD

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The wonky eyed teen then figured out a plan, she went and kissed both of the snakes…Every ten seconds…

i supposed if Wonky crew read that they all die :lmao:  :mrgreen:

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“You must really love your snakes.”
who doesn't love those one XD

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Miki-hebi didn’t seem to mind the showering of kisses she received from Reina, though Maki-hebi’s looks say otherwise.


:ROTFLMAO: *dies*


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“What are their names?”

PANIC! XD

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Reina paused for a moment before nearly shouting, “Go…go… and Shichi…ru?! Yes, their names are Gogo, and Shichiru!”

Gogo? Miki thought, giving a shifty-eyed face.

…Shichiru? Maki thought, also giving a shifty-eyed face.

“What wonderful names!” Eri smiled again.
…And she likes them?!


what to say ...i ve used all the emoticones that laugh like hell...oh wwait! --> :panda_argh:

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There was yet another poof, and the two women continued attempting to strangle each other on Reina’s bed.


:D  i just still wonder why they need to fight that bad XD but that so fits them hahahaha

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Maki kicked Miki off the bed, and folded her legs to one side, while using her arm to hold her bare chest, “Jeez! You scared the crap out of me! I thought Eri came again!”


*dies again*

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“Well, what would you do if you walked into your junior’s room finding two gorgeous women rolling around naked?”

“Sometimes…” Reina sighed, “I feel like the whole world is conspiring to destroy my room.”


R.I.P

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« Reply #106 on: September 25, 2006, 03:35:30 PM »
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“Sometimes…” Reina sighed, “I feel like the whole world is conspiring to destroy my room.”


LOLOLOLOLXDXDXDXD I die!!! This whole chapter was great!

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« Reply #107 on: September 25, 2006, 04:46:37 PM »
oh wow....hilarious chapter indeed :lol:
everything i was gonna say was taken by ChrNo though XD

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« Reply #108 on: September 25, 2006, 06:07:20 PM »
It took me the better part of last night to sleep on it, but I finally figured out what Reina's made-up snake names meant. Go = 5, Shichi = 7, for those of you wondering as well...
 
Damn I was tired when I read this last night. Maki x Miki naked wrestling on Reina's room floor :heart: :masturbation:
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« Reply #109 on: September 25, 2006, 06:52:14 PM »
OMG, This is one of the funniest fan fics I have ever read, Im laughing sooo much when I reads it :ROTFLMAO::ROTFLMAO:

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« Reply #110 on: September 25, 2006, 09:02:01 PM »
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It took me the better part of last night to sleep on it, but I finally figured out what Reina's made-up snake names meant. Go = 5, Shichi = 7, for those of you wondering as well...


Oh! Lol, when I read this post I went :doh:!

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« Reply #111 on: September 25, 2006, 09:59:57 PM »
LMAO that was the funniest thing ive ever read! I can only imagine Yossie's look on her face when she saw them on Reina's bed. XD. And Maki raising her tail lol! Omg that was the greatest. *is now a full fledged Yuuyami fangirl*

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« Reply #112 on: September 25, 2006, 10:44:45 PM »
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Oh! Lol, when I read this post I went :doh:!

i second that :doh: couldn't believe i missed that...:evil:

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« Reply #113 on: September 26, 2006, 10:51:05 AM »
Is that a snake? I love this story so much, it was the first thing that came to my mind when I saw this XD


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« Reply #114 on: September 27, 2006, 07:30:14 AM »
Hahahaha!! Omg...That does look like a snake..

Im thinking more about why Wordsworth was zooming in around that area in the first place :P

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« Reply #115 on: October 02, 2006, 04:15:51 AM »
To everyone: Thank you so much! I was also laughing like hell when I was writing the chapter, haha~! Get your fill! Because chapters like this are going to be uncommon in the story!






Chapter 11: Memory



“Feh… The internet isn’t helping at all…” Reina slammed the printed paper down on the desk in frustration. “It barely gives detail at all! Just generalized information…” Reina sat down on the computer again. “Is there not a single historian who actually has detailed information?” Reina leaned back on the chair and stretched her arms backwards. As she tilted her head back, she found someone towering over her.

“Are you researching the Orochi?” The person said, looking at the papers on the desk.

“Wow, do you visit book stores often, Iida-san?” Reina composed herself and turned her body on the chair.

“Hmm… Not really, I only came to see if a book I ordered came today. Unfortunately, it isn’t. So I was just on my way to leaving.”

“Sorry to keep you from leaving,” Reina bowed her head slightly to Kaori.

“There is no problem with that,” Kaori smiled before leaving Reina alone.

The wonky-eyed teen continuously researched for another hour, but to no avail, nothing that was considered efficient information was found. With a groan, she finally gave up on the research, threw the papers away, and walked home.

Once again, Reina found herself at the park. “I seem to come here often, eh?” she scratched her head. She looked at the center of the park—where the fountain was, and saw someone sitting on the bench, petting a snake on their lap. Knowing who that person was, Reina walked towards the fountain.

“So, what brings you here again?” Maki called out.

“Nah, just passing by from the library,” Reina ran a bit to the bench, and sat on it.

“Oh? What were you doing in the library?” Maki stopped petting the snake and turned her head to Reina. As she did so, the snake began swaying, as if it wanted Maki’s attention, “What’s with you?” Maki looked a bit annoyed at the snake, but still focused her attention on Reina.

“Was trying to research the Orochi, to see if I can figure out who the rest are,” Reina rested her arm against the bench and leaned on it.

“You’re really into this, aren’t you?” Maki smirked. “Gah!” she winced, the snake had bit her left hand.

How could you do this?! You have me, yet you’re all over another girl! The snake seemed to say. The snake turned away, almost as if saying I thought fate connected our meeting… This is too much, I’m going home to mother! And the snake slithered away, as if it was crying.

“What was that all about?” Maki rubbed her wound.

“Ah!” Reina widened her unique eyes, “Are you alright?”

Maki flexed her hand a bit before saying, “At least the bite isn’t deep, it should heal in a day or two. Anyways, continue.”

“So…” Reina tried to remember where she left off, “Ah! I came across Iida-san at the library!” she clapped her hands, “She said she was going to pick up a book she ordered, but it didn’t come yet.”

“Kaorin? I see...” Maki looked up at the sky, then back at Reina, “Want to go home now? If I stay out here any longer, it might get colder, and you know what that means.”

“Alright,” Reina stood up as Maki did the same. They both walked down the meandering paths out of the park, and the streets, side by side.

“Gah!”  a familiar voice shouted, “I am SO not wearing this!” the voice objected. Reina and Maki turned their heads to find two VERY familiar people in a store. Miki with her arms crossed in front of Aya who was holding a rather interesting outfit.

“Come on,” Aya smirked, “doesn’t this remind you of your days as Tsubomi?” she laughed, emphasizing the intense pink and white frilly dress. “It’ll look so cute on you!”

“It does, and I hated that! And I’m so NOT cute in it!” Miki shivered and cringed, “Don’t force me to wear thaaaat!” she whined in a very high voice.

“Ah! It’s you two!” Maki walked towards them, Reina following.

“She’s right Miki, it suits you, frilly dresses,” Reina laughed.

“See? Reina agrees!” Aya then smiled evilly, “I’ll make sure you wear it!” Miki knew that devious look anywhere. The groping devil turned and began to run, but Aya caught her by the ankle and the devil fell over. “You’re not escaping from me~!” Aya said in a singsong voice, dragging the silently complaining Miki into the fitting room.

Reina and Maki both laughed at the completely random event, using each other for support. When Miki stepped out of the stall, she truly looked cute, but ridiculously-outrageously-hilarious cute. Reina and Maki couldn’t hold their laughter yet again, and rolled on the floor laughing.

“Dammit, this is WORSE than the outfit I had to wear as Tsubomi!” Miki made a disgusted face, twirling around a bit in the flamboyant outfit.

“It really suits you m’dear,” Aya patted her back.

“How could you say that with a straight face?!” Miki turned around and shook Aya, who broke out laughing as well.

“What’s the commotion?” someone asked. Everyone looked around to find Kaori, with a shopping bag, signifying that she had just paid.

“Kaorin! Save me!” Miki waved her hand.

Kaori stared at Miki, “…………..Nice dress.”

“Shut uuuup~!” Miki fumed.

“Actually, can you do me a favor? Can you stand over there and answer a question please?” Kaori motioned at the spot Miki ought to be in. The now dolled-up devil moved as Kaori said and waited for the question. “What’s 1+1?”

“Ni*?” Miki said. (*Ni = Two)

FLASH!

“Thank you, this will make an excellent picture to show her.” Kaori said, shutting off the digital camera and stuffing it back in her bag. “Good day to you all!” and Kaori began walking away.

“You aren’t going to show the head, eh?!” Miki ran after Kaori. As Miki ran, she set off the detectors at the entrance of the shop.

“Gah! I need to get the dress back!” and Aya went after Miki. Soon, they went out of sight.

“That was too hilarious!” Reina laughed, supporting herself by holding onto Maki’s shoulder. Maki couldn’t help but laugh along with Reina.

Soon, they both calmed down and decided it was best to leave again. Along the way, they found Miki upset because she couldn’t get the camera back. After the brief talk, Gam went back to the store, while Reina and Maki traversed the streets to reach the apartment.

Stopping in front of Reina’s door, since it was close to the stairs, Maki decided to place her hand on her junior’s shoulder, “I forgot to tell you, but watch out for Kaorin.”

“Huh?” Reina gave a questioning look.

“Well, you see, normally when someone finds out about the curse, the head decides if the person is reliable to keep that secret, if that person isn’t reliable, then their memory is erased.”

“Erased… You can do that?” Reina now has her full attention on Maki rather than the door.

“Yes, well, it’s more of hypnotism, and only the Sixth Orochi head could do that, now I’m about to spoil you, and that Sixth Orochi head is Kaorin.”

“Ah… I see…” Reina frowned.

“So watch out when you are alone with her,” Maki patted Reina. The wonky eyed teen nodded, and retreated to her room after she and Maki exchanged farewells.

Reina plopped herself on her bed and thought about the day’s events. “Eh… I really got a lot to learn about the Orochi… Who are the others…?” she rolled over. Just then, her cell-phone rang a brief tune, indicating that she has a new text messege. “Eh? Maybe a rokkie?” she turned over and grabbed her cellphone. After a few button pressing, she read the messege:

I want you to come by my house immediately. There are important matters I wish to discuss with you.
-Kaori.
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« Reply #116 on: October 02, 2006, 04:37:53 AM »
Iida-san's one of them huh. Don't take away Reina's memory. :(

Nice chapter again, Yuuyami. BTW, nice sig and ava too. :)

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« Reply #117 on: October 02, 2006, 07:49:07 AM »
Suddenly those long "communicating" sessions Kaori goes into make perfect sense.  Staring at nothing with her huge eyes must be related to her hypnotic powers!
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« Reply #118 on: October 02, 2006, 09:31:48 AM »
...nice chapter...
but it was hard to not think about Fruits basket in this one ><
the last one made me laugh so hard that i didn't think about it one sec.

But i liked it, you find the perfect role for Kaori :)

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« Reply #119 on: October 02, 2006, 06:32:12 PM »
LOL GAM, LOL. Awwww Kaorin, what are you thinkinnnnnn'?

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