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« Reply #120 on: October 03, 2006, 12:20:56 AM »
LOL...this chapter is HILARIOUS!! but i noticed something....
when Miki ran off after Kaori, she yelled "You aren’t going to show the head, eh?!" right?? i can understand if Reina or Maki heard it, they would know what she was talking about....but what about Aya?! does that mean Aya knows about the curse as well......??? or am i just over-thinking? -_-"

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« Reply #121 on: October 03, 2006, 01:53:33 AM »
lmao! That was so great! Poooooor pooooor Miki. No one can escape Aya's clutches. I personally think Aya is eviler than any devil or demon. The cute thing is a cover up for her true self.

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« Reply #122 on: October 05, 2006, 05:03:24 AM »
Wordsworth: Thank you, shame I changed the siggie and avvie now. :]

Slack: It's true! Everyone's cursed! XD

Chrno: Oh well, as I've said before: Fruits basket influence.

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Jafeijai: ;]

KrazyforKamei: Unfortunately, not even the groping devil could escape X]

Author's note: Now. What happened to my other reviewers? ;____; I had like, ten for the last chapter, now it went down to six o____O...

I'm placing new rules now. In order to view the next chapter, I must absolutely receive 10 reviews. Otherwise, no new chapter for you <3...
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Chapter 12: Painting


“Alright…” Reina pinched her face, returning the color of it, “Here I am, in front of her door… God I wish she still lived in our apartment…” Reina shook her head a bit furiously. Before she reached the doorknob, the very door she feared opened for her.

“Welcome,” Kaori said before turning around to enter another room. Reina took off her boots and followed after Kaori. “Forgive the mess, I was in progress of painting something.”

It wasn’t as messy Reina thought it would be. In the room, there were paint-splattered newspapers littered under the standing canvas. Even the stool had some paint, though dry, which evidently told Reina that Kaori wasn’t too careful at times. Communicating much? Reina couldn’t help but smile a bit. The room itself wasn’t a big grand thing either, other than the canvas; it only had a TV, a kotatsu, and some random works of art (By Kaori) on the walls.

“Already took out the kotatsu, in the ninth month?” Reina asked.

“Yeah, sensitive to the heat, but I’m sure someone told you about me,” Kaori went over and sat on the stool, “You may sit at the kotatsu if you wish.” Reina felt like Kaori demanded her seating rather than simply suggesting, so she did as she was told.

Reina’s wonky eyes wandered around the paintings on the wall. Although there were only eight, six of them, she recognized, were from the sketchbook Kaori released a rather long time ago. The two new ones, however, depicted a European landscape, probably Italy judging by the aged walls and the streets, and a painting of someone Reina has trouble recognizing, but she didn’t dare ask.

“Do you like them? I think you should already know by now how I paint a lot in my spare time,” Kaori took a dry brush from a jar and started twirling it with her fingers.

“Yes, very much,” Reina turned to look back, “I wish I had skills like that.”

“Alright, straight to the point,” Kaori had a more serious tone now, “I know Ojou-sama said that you may go on, and another member might have told you about me, but I feel obligated to tell you that I do have the memory suppression powers in me, and I have used them on people before.”

Reina nodded in comprehension.

“Do you enjoy your company by our cursed? As to say, do you spend much free time with any of the cursed members?”

Reina wanted to say she had spent her time with Maki lately, but feared that Kaori might be concerned, “Yes,” she simply said, hoping that a generalized answer would go by.

“In that case, stop involving yourself further in the curse. I saw you researching it, were you looking for something?”

“No, I was simply wondering if each head had a characteristic, to see who the other cursed are.”

“And I apologize if your intentions are shattered, but I highly discourage you from doing any further action about the Orochi. You can choose to follow or ignore this, but the main point is as follows—we are cursed people, and it may seem beautiful to you, but in truth there is a shadow lurking in it—something that makes it truly a curse, it is bizarre and very sinister.”

“I see…” Reina looked down on the kotatsu.

“You may now leave if you wish.”

Reina got up and bowed her head to Kaorin, “I apologize for burdening your time, Iida-san.”

“Don’t fret about that, I was in an artist’s block anyway.”

“May I ask you one more thing then?” Reina raised her head. Kaori nodded, and Reina continued, “Who is that woman in that painting?”

Kaori stared at the painting for awhile, before finally saying, “Honda, Ruru of the now dispersed T & C Bomber group. You could ask Atsuko about it if you’re curious.”

“That’s fine, I knew she was familiar, but couldn’t place my finger on it.”

“Yeah… You weren’t there the time they joined nor dispersed…” Kaori sighed.

“Hmm… Yeah…” Reina looked up, before standing and turning, “I apologize for my rudeness once again.”

Kaori smiled and waved her hand dismissively, “As I said before, don’t be concerned with that kind of thing here. See you whenever! Oh wait!” Kaori rummaged through a drawer in the other room, and came back with something. “Almost forgot about it!” And she placed the aforementioned object on Reina’s head. “It’s the camera I used earlier.”

“Wah…?”

“Didn’t I tell you? If you came, I would give you the camera?”

No you didn’t! You seriously didn’t!

“Nonetheless, you should get going now, there might be people who miss you!” Kaori turned Reina around and smacked her bottom a bit to get her going. Reina caught the camera before it fell in front of her, and turned her head to say her farewells, and left Kaori’s house.

Along the way of walking… “Dammit! I forgot to ask about the head again!” Reina turned and smacked her head against the nearest wall. The spectators began to gather, leaving a rather nervous idol no choice but to use the alleys on her way back to the apartment.

The apartment was always easy to recognize, even if it blended in with the other apartments among the rather high street. The front and back view of the apartment was rather grand, considering they lived on a raised street, where balcony views are magnificent on both sides of the pale apartment.

In the distance, Reina recognized her home, though at the front, there seemed to be many people passing by, so she went around the street through the alleyways, and came up from the left side of the building. Deciding a front entrance wouldn’t do, Reina could climb the fire escape and enter her room from there, since she didn’t lock her balcony door. As she jumped onto a ladder, she felt a rather odd apprehension in the air. Ignoring it, she stepped onto the escape. The trepidation was burdening her heavily, and not only that, a random flower petal flew past her face, which inclined her to follow where it came from—and she looked up at the far end of the apartment from where she was.

On the floor above Reina, to the very end of the building, was that person, with a flower vase sitting at the corner of her balcony. The woman was leaning heavily on the railing of the balcony, resting her head in her left elbow, while letting her right arm dangle over the balcony railing. Although it was very brief, the woman drifted back into her room after the stare down. Reina could only continue looking at the place where the familiar woman supported herself with. Collecting her thoughts, Reina turned to open her balcony entrance.

I wonder… Is she the hea—Reina was interrupted when she could not open the door. “Eh?! Eeeeeeh?!” She jerked back with the door, but to no avail, it didn’t open.

She flipped on her cellphone, and realized that it was turned off the entire time, probably to make sure no one interfered with her talk with Kaori. When she turned it on again, there was one new text messege:

Of course, this is to get the camera back.
-Kaori


“I should’ve left it on!” Reina smacked her head against the glass. But before complaining further, she called Maki.

“…Hahaha!” Maki gave a brief laugh, “Nice job! I’m on my way!” and she hung up, and in about the time before the first line of Shabondama ends, Maki came through Reina’s door, and transformed.

“Why the hell do I leave the AC on all the time?!” Reina twitched her wonky eye. She could tell Maki was a little aggravated, but she slithered towards the door and raised her head so she could unlock the latch with her mouth. “I…am SO…sorry…” and she shut off the always-seemingly-at-the-wrong-time air conditioner off.

“I’m used to it by now…” Maki-hebi sighed. “I think it’s about time you took that thing off.”

“Yeah, I was thinking tomorrow would be nice,” Reina rolled on her bed. Maki-hebi raised over the bed and slithered on. “Can you tell me something?” Reina moved her head up a bit to find that Maki was resting her snake head on Reina’s stomach. “I saw a painting of Honda-san of T & C bomber done by Iida-san, which strikes me as a little odd… Who is she to her?”

“Hmm… They used to love each other once.”

“Seriously?” Reina raised her head again.

“Yeah, when Ruru found out about the curse and all, she didn’t care at all, only laughed. She’s a really nice person though; however, her cooking is too…well, it can’t be shown on TV without proper protection…” Maki-hebi laughed a bit. “So yeah, they were both really happy with each other…”

“The past tense is worrying me,” Reina placed her hands behind her head.

“Well, Ojou-sama found out and… Kaorin… one of her wings was torn and broken by her. As for Ruru, she blamed herself for Kaorin getting hurt. Eventually, Ruru became too stressed out, and it began eating her heart…”

“I see…” Reina made sure to ask about the head after the story.

“So Kaorin had to erase Ruru’s memories of the time they were ever in love… And you now what happens next, T & C Bomber broke up, and Ruru went back to China… and poor Kaorin…” Maki-hebi didn’t finish, but Reina knew…

“Argh…” Reina sobbed a bit.

“Eh?” Maki-hebi rose from Reina’s stomach a bit, “crying? Is it my fault I made you cry?”

“No…” Reina retained her normal voice, and wiped a few tears away, “It’s just that… Iida-san…”

Stop involving yourself further in the curse…

“She didn’t want me getting hurt… I think that’s what she was trying to say to me… She was speaking from experience, right? So… I was worrying about what she was going to tell me about, but that made me assume that she was a villain… But damn, I was wrong, she only wanted to make sure I wasn’t hurt the way she was…”

“I see you did wind up speaking to her…” Maki-hebi rested her head on Reina’s stomach again. “She didn’t do anything to you, right?”

"…We are cursed people, and it may seem beautiful to you, but in truth there is a shadow lurking in it—something that makes it truly a curse, it is bizarre and very sinister."

“Maki?” Reina looked over.

The seventh head looked into Reina’s unique eyes, prepared for a question.

“What…is the curse really…? And who is the head? The Ojou-sama?”

“You don’t have to worry about that…As for Ojou-sama, knowing her, she’ll tell you herself when she wants to.”

“Leaving me hanging, like Miki, eh?” Reina sighed.

Poof!

Reina really didn’t want to look at the gorgeous (and naked) woman resting on her head on her stomach right now… She still thought about Kaori and Ruru’s history together. Though, thoughts are interrupted almost always in Reina’s case.

There were a few knocks on the door, and Reina immediately pushed Maki to the side of the bed with the wall the balcony was connected to in panic. And in came Eri.

“Thank you for the movie! It was good!” she smiled, and walked over and handed the DVD to the flustered rokkie. “You’re really red…Are you getting sick? I told you that the AC shouldn’t be turned on at this season!” she felt Reina’s slightly burning forehead.

“Nah! I’m fine!” Reina swatted Eri’s hand away, “just woke up from a little nightmare.”

“With the bed made neatly? And you woke up now? At 3 PM?”

“Yes, I sometimes sleep just on the bed, and that was just… a nap…”

“Whatever,” Eri shrugged, “have a pleasant nap!” she smiled again, and left.

Maki lifted her head over Reina’s bed, “Is she gone yet?”

“That would’ve been really bad if she caught you naked and resting on me…” Reina grasped her head with one hand and ached with all the consequences she thought up with it.

“Well, at least I’m not like Miki, if she was here instead of me, she’d be crawling all over you!”

[Meanwhile...]

Achoo! Miki sneezed. She looked over at Aya and then said, “Well, if it was just one sneeze…”

“Then someone is talking bad about you?” Aya giggled, “Come now, it’s only a superstition…”

[Back to Reina and Maki…]

Maki was back in her clothes and was ready to leave, but Reina tugged at Maki’s sleeve just before she reached the door. She turned her head and looked at her junior in question.

“Hey, uh…” Reina’s cheeks slightly flustered again, “do you want to watch the movie with me? In truth, I haven’t actually taken the time to watch it.”

Maki smiled and said, “Alright, I will.”
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« Reply #123 on: October 05, 2006, 05:19:20 AM »
Maki and Reina good!! Seems to be a lot of that going around...

Poor Kaori :cry: She needs love too. I wonder who the others are? I almost can't stand it.

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« Reply #124 on: October 05, 2006, 05:48:00 AM »
Awww. I'm sorry Yuuyami. I forgot to comment last time even though I did read that amazing chapter. And this chapter was just as amazing. I loved how Maki laid her little snake head on Reina's stomach as if it was a normal thing to do.

But I feel bad for Kaori. Could that be foreshadowing in any way?? Oh dear. I hope not. I like the Maki/Reina thing. Nothing should break it! But I'm sure you know exactly what you're doing, right?

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« Reply #125 on: October 05, 2006, 05:53:18 AM »
The MakiXReina combo is growing on me, thanks to Yuuyami and goosefish's fics.

Poor Kaori. Hope she gets over to what happened to her.She's been a good leader when she was still around. Nice to see that she still cares for the younger ones.

How come Eri didn't ask about the snakes? She forgot about Gogo and Shichiru already? XD

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« Reply #126 on: October 05, 2006, 09:24:56 AM »
This is easily the best non-perv fanfic I've read in a long while.  Though, I have a few questions about the camera and how Reina got back into her room if her balcony door was locked.  Perhaps Kaori threw in some post-hypnotic suggestions without Reina knowing it?
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« Reply #127 on: October 05, 2006, 12:50:56 PM »
I wrote it o_O Maki-hebi lifted the latch and Reina got in. XD

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« Reply #128 on: October 05, 2006, 04:52:00 PM »
whoa...yet another work of art by Yuuyami...:D
i like the random Eri moments cuts the tension of this fic XD so amusing :P

you do realize that with that little cut to Miki's sneeze that you're deepening my suspiscion about Aya right?? XD

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« Reply #129 on: October 06, 2006, 01:13:21 AM »
XD i love the random Eri moments as well....cuz i love Eri! I also love the Reina/Maki-ness....Reina must be very self collected if she can have naked Maki on her lap without spazzing. I sure would lol

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« Reply #130 on: October 06, 2006, 03:01:30 AM »
Oh god...I love this fic now! lol yep... There is a lot of Maki Reina being written around here isn't there? Doki Doki... uhh that untitled fic...and this... =] I LOVE THEM ALL! Keep writing Yuuyami! This is just so interesting... Who is the head...that was really cruel what she did to Kaorin....


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Hmmm...Who was that mysterious woman at the balcony? Lol at first when I read it, I thought it was that woman that locked the balcony door with her mysterious flower petal.
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« Reply #131 on: October 06, 2006, 04:08:00 AM »
I loved the bit about Miki's sneeze. XD

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« Reply #132 on: October 06, 2006, 11:00:45 AM »
OH yes! How I love this story!

By far my all time Sci-fi fic...I dont even know if you could call it Sci-fi. What would the genre be?

I would love to see this as a movie. It would be so funny! and a perfect excuse to see Maki without clothes :D (shame on me...)

I love the cuts you do. Eg, the cut to Miki sneezing. It makes it more like a movie in my head. Its nice...no, nice is an understatement. Its brilliant. An enjoyable experience.

Lol. Everytime you said Kotatsu, I made a mistake and read tonkatsu. there was an AD on TV just before I read this...On that note, you have a fairly deep knowledge in Japan lifestyle. Why is that?

Kaorin's story was sweet. A bitter love story. I thought she was the head? I must have mis-read something. Never fear! I will go back and read it again! The punishment for having your wing broken, ouch.

Im definately feeling some Love in this story...and Im all for it. Im totally looking forward to it. You have built up the charcters and the scene very well, so clearly, that when that moment comes its going to be down right awesome!!

Keep writing and Cheers to your Editors!

And Yuuyami, your signature banner...what is it from?
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« Reply #133 on: October 07, 2006, 05:01:01 AM »
Yayz! 10th review of the chapter! and YAY RuRu!!!!!!!!!!!!!Too much hotness, and I wanna see Reina x Maki without the Kaori x RuRu ending...><
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« Reply #134 on: October 07, 2006, 06:13:31 AM »
Ah, holding the forum random...the oldest trick in the book...

I agree with Yuuyami. Its satisfying to write and see its been read but its even better to be read and her what the readers have to say. To know that your work has affected someone somewhere.

Please, make a comment and tell the author and authors of any book you read what you thought.

They cant see the smile they gave you, so let 'em know and return that favour :D

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« Reply #135 on: October 07, 2006, 11:56:16 PM »
Thank you very much! Ten reviews, and you all got your next chapter <3

Rndmnweird: New member in this chapter :] Best thing is, I bet it's a member NO ONE suspects.

Youkaichica: You are forgiven XD And I have to say, think whatever you want to think about the future of this story >:]

Wordsworth: Yeah, Kaorin is a motherly figure to them, and I tried to capture that in the story as well.

Slack: As I said in the reply XD Maki-hebi lifted the latch and Reina got in.

Jafeijai: OHOHOHOHOHOHOHO <3

KrazyforKamei: I would spazz too XD~!

Seeya: The mysterious woman makes an appearance in this chapter XD And we'll know her... Through her alias that is. XD

JFC: Me too <3

Mikan: Funny, I thought I said a while ago that I decided to go without my editors because of how busy they are, haha. Yeah, I was thinking of drawing this as a manga, once I have the materials for it. Yes, I'm an (anime AND realistic) artist too, yay creative people XD.

Tanachan: Ohohohohohoho <3

Mikan again XD: Yeah, I've always been finicky(?) about this kind of thing, I love hearing comments from other people. It's what inspires me to go on. So I can make the story better and whatnot.
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Chapter 13: Snakes Galore XD
« Reply #136 on: October 08, 2006, 12:01:38 AM »
Warning: Pretty long chapter.





Chapter 13: Snakes galore XD




“Ah! Here we are!” Reina stretched her hands in the air, “The zoo!”

Maki tilted her dark brown fedora hat at an angle so that her eyes had a better view, “Didn’t know it was this far… Good thing the taxi driver didn’t recognize who we were.”

“You I understand, because you have a hat on, and you tied your hair in a low ponytail, but I still have trouble figuring out why he didn’t recognize me, I mean, I have the eyes. Don’t people usually know me by the eyes?”

“You shouldn’t be talking, you’re wearing purple sunglasses,” Maki chuckled. “With pretty thick black frames too, so even the side view is useless if they can’t see your eyes.”

“Nonetheless, our disguise is pretty efficient, so I don’t think the press will recognize us, unless you transform and the new deadlines would be ‘Goto Maki transformed into a new breed of snake’ or something to that effect,” Reina held a hand to her mouth to suppress a giggle.

“That’s why I’m wearing a hat and black sunglasses. That should block out sunrays easily for me.” To add to her appearance, Maki was, once again, wearing the classy brown coat with the four buttons, with black pants and dark brown high heels.

“Some fashion, who knew that such an idol has quite the bad sense.”

“That sounds odd, coming from a yankee,” Maki said, eyeing Reina’s abuse of purple in the rather casual outfit.

“Not a yankee,” Reina turned from Maki crossing her arms, and scoffed. As she turned, her necklace swung in the air and returned in front of her chest. Catching this, Maki stood next to Reina and leaned forward to turn her head back at Reina.

“I see you’re wearing the cross I bought you?” Maki smiled. Reina trudged onward, hoping to hide her blush.

“I thought Yankees don’t blush,” Maki called out.

“Am not!” Reina turned her head to look back at the cursed woman.

“So you ARE blushing!” Maki laughed.

“I am definitely not!” Reina turned her head away.

“Are you getting even more flustered?” Maki caught up with Reina.

“I am so not getting getting flustered!” Reina began running.

“Liiiiiiiies!” Maki shouted out and ran after Reina. With Maki’s powerful body, and Reina’s weakness of running, Maki easily caught up to Reina and clung to her from behind. “You shouldn’t run when it’s your weakness you know,” Maki whispered into Reina’s ear, “You never know when someone will kidnap you…” she sounded a bit intimidating… “Just kidding!” she smiled, letting go of Reina.

“They’re right when they said you were good at acting,” Reina also smiled, hoping to compensate for being flustered.

“I’ve always wanted to try a villain role, really,” Maki said as she started walking to the booth.

“Villain role, eh? I’d like to see you as a damsel in distress,” Reina smirked as she got out her wallet to pay for the ticket.

“Say what?”

“You heard me,” she smirked, paying for both. Then she walked past the stands and made it into the zoo with Maki tagging behind.

“Heeey~! You didn’t have to pay for me!” Maki tilted her fedora yet again, in hopes of being inconspicuous.

“What’s done is done, you can’t exactly take the money back you know,” Reina smiled yet again. “So anyway, I hear they got an aodaishou now!” Reina giggled in excitement. (Aodaishou = Japanese albino rat snake). “Ever saw one before?”

“No I haven’t actually,” Maki smiled and tilted her head up a little more to see where she’s walking, “though, the orochi look a bit similar, since aodaishou are like a pale light yellow with ruby eyes, and we are pale light silver with golden eyes.”

“So that means you and the aodaishou are very bright, huh? Hopefully, you two won’t be mistaken for each other if I compare, right?”

“I don’t think so, they are pale yellow, and we’re pale silver, so there’s a difference in value I guess.”

They both decided to view the other attractions before heading for the reptile exhibit. Reina immediately dragged Maki into the panda exhibit. After much squealing, Maki dragged Reina into the penguin exhibit. After much squealing from that, they decided to randomly walk around to get a feel of the zoo. Eventually, they spoke of their envy of the other members who got to see the animals up close, especially Nono and Miki.

“Alright, how about we enter the reptile house now?” Reina tugged onto Maki’s sleeve.

“You’re acting just like a cute kid!” Maki laughed, and laughed a bit more when Reina turned her head away in embarrassment, “okay, we can go.”

They both entered the Brazilian-esque doors and was immediately met with snakes slithering near the glass just to get a good look at Maki. Some of the children became frightened at the snakes’ sudden movement towards the spectators. Even some of the adults were a little uneasy with the snakes being near all of a sudden, regardless of the thick glass separating them.

“Then again…I think you should go alone…” Maki stepped backwards and opened the doors again, “it’ll cause too much of a commotion if the snakes try to bash the glass just to be near me…”

Reina frowned, not because of the snakes, but because she was going to be without Maki throughout her visit in this house. Maki caught this frown, and tried to smile again with an apologetic look. “Have fun, I’ll wait in the front,” and with that, she left.

“Oh greaaat, alone again,” Reina sighed. When she looked, most of the snakes returned to their position before Maki came. The bystanders were whispering curious questions as to why the slithering reptiles moved so suddenly, yet retreated. Reina wished she could say that the person she was with attracted snakes, but figured it wouldn’t be a smart thing to say.

The snake exhibits in the house was practically a maze. There were so many display glasses that Reina was sure she needed a map and a pencil to trace her whereabouts. Passing the reptiles from Africa, she came across an intersection. To the left, there were American snakes, to the right, were the Southern American snakes, and up straight were the Asian snakes.

“Ah ha! Maybe that’s where they’re holding the Aodaishou!” Reina clapped her hands and walked along the displays.

As she finally came to where the aodaishou was being held, she found that the aforementioned snake was surprisingly not in hiding, but was near the glass, coiled lazily. What Reina and Maki discussed about it was true. It was a pale light yellow, and it had beautiful dark piercing ruby eyes. “Very pretty…” Reina marveled.

What Reina found amusing was a kid trying to speak to the snake, opting to get the snake to do something. Next to the kid, the woman leaning on the railing in front of the glass turned her head and spoke in a rather familiar language, which caused the snake to look at the kid.

The little boy became a little frightened, but fascinated in the snake, before finally, being called away by his father.

“Huh…?” Reina scratched her head. That woman spoke in a language reminiscent of the time Maki talked to the snake in the park. “Is she another…? Then again, isn’t she…?”

That haircut was unmistakable. That bob-cut could be recognized by any H!P member, Reina went up to the woman, and leaned over carefully as to not attract the woman’s attention. Glasses. The woman wore glasses.

“Murata-san?” Reina poked the woman. The glasses-wearing Melon Kinenbi member turned her head and widened her eyes in surprised.

“Ah, Reina-chan?” Megumi asked, “Couldn’t recognize you in your abuse of purple yankee fashion,” she immediately said in a sarcastic voice.

“Just a random meeting and you still use sarcasm?” Reina raised a brow and gave a brief chuckle.

“Ah…” Megumi turned to look back at the snake, “I can not help it, part of my nature,” she said in a rather plain and bored voice.

“So, are you cursed too?”

Megumi looked at Reina again, “Ah…I wonder if I’m cursed indeed…” she said in the same bored tone.

“Well, I guess you are, you got the Aodaishou to look at the kid, right?” Reina turned her attention from the newly discovered cursed member to the aforementioned snake behind the glass, still looking lazy.

“Yeah, Chikane was wondering when the kid will stop bothering her, so I gave a suggestion and she followed.”

“Chikane is her name? How cute.”

“Yeah, she told me her name too, makes you wonder how smart snakes really are, right? They can really understand humans.”

“Which makes me wonder, did the snakes rush you when you first entered?”

“Nah, they were sleeping, so I got off easily,” Megumi continued showing her stoic expression, “Ah… Winter is coming soon…”

“It’s a very troublesome season for you all, as I could imagine,” Reina readjusted her sunglasses. “Anyway, I came for what I wanted, to see the Aodaishou. Going to get going now, Maki is waiting for me.”

“Ah… Gottsuan?” Megumi perked up, “I think I better get going too, since I was here for about two hours. I’ll walk with you.”

“Alright then,” Reina said, and then walked. “But since you were here for two hours, I trust you can find your way out easier than I can?”

“Hmm…” Megumi paused and stared blankly for awhile. “I can.”

“…What a long pause…” Reina feared that Megumi might not know.

Megumi lead the way, and true to her doubtful words, she and Reina reached the entrance once again. Megumi pushed the Brazilian doors opened, and a brief gust of really cold air blew in…

Poof!

Ohcrapohcrapohcrapohcrapohcrap! Reina panicked. Maki also saw from the bench outside and tried rushing to her. Thankfully, no one else saw Megumi transform. Reina went and picked up Megumi’s clothes and glasses, and was about to pick up Megumi-hebi too, when some one else shouted out, “Ah! Someone get the rogue snake!” and ran after zoo officials.

Another zoo official came and saw the unique pale-silver snake with the character for 3, 三, on its forehead. “Is that a new undiscovered breed of snake?!” and ran after.

Reina, Maki, and Megumi felt like their panic encased their bodies in ice. As the zoo official got closer, Megumi turned to slither away—and slithered straight into a wall. “I’m so blind without my glasses!” she pouted, before trying to slither in a different direction, towards the zoo official.

“Oh no!” Maki and Reina shouted in unison. Reina panicked on the spot, trying to figure out what to do. Maki, meanwhile, was racing the zoo official, and exceeding the official’s speed by a landslide. She quickly picked up Megumi, and got hold of Reina’s hand and ran away. The zoo official apparently called up more people, because now there was a flock of people after the three Hello!Project members.

“This better not be on the news!” Reina huffed, trying to keep up with Maki’s speed.

“It’ll be worse if they find out who we are!” Maki panted, letting Megumi coil tightly around her right arm while Maki held onto her fedora hat with the same hand, and holding Reina’s hand with her left.

The chase seemed forever, but it cut off as soon as Maki took a sharp turn and went into the Girls’ bathroom.

“For me, because I was outside the majority of the time, the temperature changed while I was out there so I didn’t transform, but you…” Maki let her hand drooped down so that Megumi could slither down, “You should be more aware of temperature changes when you’re in a building trying to exit.”

“Ah… My apologies,” Megumi bowed her snake head, before heading under the furthest bathroom stall from the door. Maki looked under the stalls to make sure no one else was here, and sure enough, no one was truly there asides from them.

“So what brought you to the zoo?” Reina asked, holding Megumi’s clothes neatly in her hands.

“Like you, I wanted to see the Aodaishou. You are aware that they can bring good luck to peoples’ houses, ne?”

“But you live in the apartment with us…” Maki sighed.

“…Since Reina-chan wanted to see it too… Double the meeting, double the luck, ne?”

“But the apartment doesn’t really need luck, nothing’s wrong with it,” Maki confirmed.

“Ah…But it’s okay to strengthen its luck…”

“Apartments don’t need luck, we’re the ones who need it, people,” Maki sighed.

A familiar tune of Mi Da Ra Matenrou ringed in the air. Recognizing it as Megumi’s cellphone, Reina pulled it out of Megumi’s pants pocket and looked at the ID on it. “Oh! It’s Ootani-san!”

Poof! Megumi walked out of the stall naked, “I’ll answer it…”

“Don’t walk around naked, it’s indecent,” Maki raised a brow.

“Ah…But it has an air of freedom to it, you know?”

“Don’t say ‘Ah…’ so creepily, it’s like an old man,” Maki turned her head away.

“Ah…” Megumi held her stoic expression again, “that one was to anger you.”

Reina could hear Maki hissing at Megumi, and smiled. She handed the phone to Megumi and she answered.

“Yes? Ah… I see… Of course… Haha, again? I’ll be there in as soon as possible. See you soon,” Megumi hung up with a chuckle. “I have things to attend to,” she grabbed her glasses and placed them on. “Oh how I miss my sight!” she smiled. “It was very unpleasant running into the wall at full force…” she rubbed her head.

“I can imagine,” Reina gave Megumi her clothes. The Melon Kinenbi member turned her back on them both to enter the stall yet again to put on her clothes. As she walked, Reina saw the 3 winged tattoos at her shoulder blades, and left mid-back.

Eventually, she came out again fully dressed. “See you whenever,” and she left.

“What…was that all about?” Maki clasped a hand to her forehead.

“Well, it has been an amusing day, yes?” Reina motioned for Maki to exit the restroom.

“I guess, running from zoo officials, what should we answer?”

When they both got out, they found officials interrogating Megumi, asking her about ‘a suspicious yankee and a very well-endowed suspicious woman’ to which Megumi could only go, “Ah…I’m sorry, why not look into the bathroom yourself?” To which Maki and Reina quickly took a different direction so that they wouldn’t be found.

As they headed for the exit of the zoo, Reina found a crepe stand, to which Maki immediately bolted towards, in order to pay for both.

“Heh, revenge?” Reina smiled before walking towards Maki and the crepe stand.

“I would like a banana crepe please,” Maki said to the crepe stand person, “what would you like?” she said to Reina, careful not to use her name.

“I think I’ll take chocolate,” she smiled.

Maki paid for both and Reina stood waiting for the crepes with her.

“I can taste it now…” Reina licked her lips.

“Same here,” Maki smiled.

- - - - - - -

“Seems like a very nice day today…So many people out and about,” Yossie stood at the balcony railing, gripping it with both of her hands and looking out into the busy world below.

“So troublesome…” the person next to Yossie mumbled. She was in her usual pose, dangling her arm over the railing again.

“Don’t overwork yourself and become sick again,” Yossie chuckled.

“Very funny,” the other person retorted, “Seeing how sick I’m feeling already…”

Yossie sat on a chair and allowed the sun’s rays to embrace her, “Shame summer’s coming to an end.”

“Good, summer is troublesome as well… Too many foolish people that time of year… And so unbearably hot…”

“Even so, I think…” Yossie began, but drifted off in a smile that is becoming her trademark all of a sudden—narrowing her eyes and smiling a rather scheming smile.

“Feh, summer… Stupid foolish people being so merry… So irritating… They think they’re so over confident…” The woman shifted her head a bit further, looking at Yossie, “What are you smiling about? Do you have a problem with what I say…?”

“Problem?” Yossie mused, “My dear Ojou-sama, I would never consider questioning your motives.”








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« Reply #137 on: October 08, 2006, 12:50:30 AM »
Lol, I was a little surprised but Megumi just fits.

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« Reply #138 on: October 08, 2006, 03:34:57 AM »
So Murata has wings too?

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Ohcrapohcrapohcrapohcrapohcrap! Reina panicked.
XD Damn nearly fell out of my chair that time!

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When they both got out, they found officials interrogating Megumi, asking her about ‘a suspicious yankee and a very well-endowed suspicious woman’ to which Megumi could only go, “Ah…I’m sorry, why not look into the bathroom yourself?” To which Maki and Reina quickly took a different direction so that they wouldn’t be found.
I can just picture the security trying to get through this without getting embarrased. :lol:

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« Reply #139 on: October 08, 2006, 04:23:54 AM »
I have to agree with rndmnwierd. Murata fits in perfectly XD

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“Don’t walk around naked, it’s indecent,” Maki raised a brow.

“Ah…But it has an air of freedom to it, you know?”

“Don’t say ‘Ah…’ so creepily, it’s like an old man,” Maki turned her head away.

“Ah…” Megumi held her stoic expression again, “that one was to anger you.”


:ROTFLMAO:

I love that part!

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