JPHiP Radio (13/200 @ 96 kbs)     Now playing: bomb factory - exciter (DOA2)

Author Topic: Our Cursed Gift [Chapter 47: Our Final Promise][COMPLETE]  (Read 160878 times)

Offline Slack

  • Professor of Konkonology
  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 3734
    • Slackius
Our Cursed Gift
« Reply #260 on: October 30, 2006, 10:51:56 PM »
Kinda surprised no one commented on Kaori's snake form being so short!  That part really made me smile. :)
 
and about Miki's kiss, she was talking about using plastic on her lips, right?
( ・e・) :heart: marimari  ● 川o・-・) :heart: Jabronisaur :heart: (・o_・`川 ● ノノl∂_∂'ル :heart: ChrNo ● Never Forget.

Offline ferrar1

  • エロリン ~ 大っスキ ~
  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 1833
Our Cursed Gift
« Reply #261 on: October 31, 2006, 03:08:43 AM »
Quote from: rokun;225018

Last thing is somewhat of a guess... Yossi is up to no good, and seems to have a lot more to do with things than the people in the story seem to realize... She's always around, always getting "involved", and seems to have such a lackadaisical attitude when around the "Cursed" which nobody else, even the cursed themselves, seems to be able to duplicate. Also, she actually seems the closest to the "Head" and almost... controls her? She held her back from Maki and Reina, for example, and the "Head" didn't try anything back at her, which, if Yossi wasn't one of the cursed, shouldn't have been a problem. Is the Head secretly pursuing a romance herself that's hypocritical of the way she treats the other girls? If so, she should watch out or she might get burned. Reina doesn't seem to hold back much. Yossi/Rika is popular in fics... Hmmm...


Very good guess i might say after reading your view :bow:

4th Pic of Eri courtesy of t-motion's gallery ~ Sangokushi Taisen anyone ? http://sangokutaisen.blogspot.com/ ~ Lame attempt at a personal blog ~

Offline Owaranai_sLaVe

  • Right now it's... KKANGPAE SHIDAE!
  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 2161
  • Does Don Jess have to slap a bitch?
Our Cursed Gift
« Reply #262 on: October 31, 2006, 05:56:10 AM »
>.> I feel bad since i said I would read this and the recomended fan fic... Im halfway done...

So far Im being touched by it though! its so said... Somehow, it seems sadder than Fabura, and Fabura had it drawn out (duh! its a manga...)

-Owaranai_sLaVe

EDIT: I realized i didnt have much to go, so I finished reading it. Stupid thesis statements keeping me!
anyway, WOW.... you made Rika seem so evil! that was probably the only contrast I saw between this and the Fabura story. They didnt make him (although I hear hes a she?!) seem so evil... It almost seemed as Rika loved iida and was jealous. I mean, that was just a CARAZY thing she did... making everyone believe she was right (then again, its Rika, shes hot, she gets away with anything. . .).
Iida plays guitar?? WOW... and here I thought none of them played intstruments... heh, Id like to see her play :D I wonder why they dont let the girls play an instrument, especially since IIda is solo... she can totaly use that in a song! (career wise, in real life).

Ugh, this fan fic is so detailed it makes it seem so real that I almost thought Rika could be so evil... XD so mean of miki and Yuko to make fun of Iida!
Obilgatory I love Yossui and Miki =D
« Last Edit: October 31, 2006, 06:08:00 AM by Owaranai_sLaVe »
>>LIFE ~is just another story~2008/12/26<<
Please Spread The Love; Pervy Thinkers Association

Offline kazitakato

  • "There's my opinion, and the wrong opinion"
  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 181
Our Cursed Gift
« Reply #263 on: November 04, 2006, 12:04:37 AM »
haha....so true...how come almost every fanfic i read now makes Rika the bad guy.....or is she...I have a feeling she's a victim one way or the other..

p/s: BTW, how'd they become cursed anyway....and could i use ur siggy? i just luv the golden eyes.....but somehow i wish Ayaya's an Orochi too.....

spreading the usa-chan love....i mean darkness(thanks to JFC)

Offline JFC

  • Miki's Birthday Twin
  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 28575
    • jfcantalejo
    • jfcantalejo
Our Cursed Gift
« Reply #264 on: November 04, 2006, 04:40:47 AM »
Quote from: kazitakato;227757
but somehow i wish Ayaya's an Orochi too.....

Who knows? Maybe she is....DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN!!!

:ONwahaha:

JPH!P :heart:'s kuro808, Fushigidane, ChrNo, Jab & marimari. Always.

Offline jafeijai

  • Member+
  • Posts: 4661
  • Music is my life ♪
Our Cursed Gift
« Reply #265 on: November 04, 2006, 04:56:07 AM »
sorry to burst your bubble, but
Quote from: Yuuyami;222709
“Wouldn’t want to transform on set, yes?” Reina said, now knowing that Aya is not cursed.


it's too bad though...would have been funny if Aya were an Orochi...that reminds me...i don't think all the heads have been revealed yet..o.O

Offline Mayo

  • 真夜中
  • Member+
  • Posts: 2901
Our Cursed Gift
« Reply #266 on: November 04, 2006, 04:50:01 PM »
Yeah, they haven't been all revealed yet.

ava by PlusQ (over at mm-bbs); ueda sig by Pinkosa | #1 drifoy, Tanaka Reina, and Murakami Megumi fangirl

Offline JFC

  • Miki's Birthday Twin
  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 28575
    • jfcantalejo
    • jfcantalejo
Our Cursed Gift
« Reply #267 on: November 04, 2006, 11:05:57 PM »
Quote from: jafeijai;227882
sorry to burst your bubble, but...
Oh...right...forgot about that. :roll: :P  

So many fanfics...it's hard to keep track of them all. :lol:

JPH!P :heart:'s kuro808, Fushigidane, ChrNo, Jab & marimari. Always.

Offline Yuuyami

  • Hardhat? ( ¯ロ¯ );;
  • Global Moderator
  • Member+
  • *
  • Posts: 1609
  • Prance. Do it. Now. N.O.W.
Comments for chapter 19
« Reply #268 on: November 04, 2006, 11:24:11 PM »
Sorry for the wait! College kicked my ass ~_~

Tanachan: Expect more chapters like that, I enjoy playing with the emotions of my readers; it will be especially evident in the later chapters.

Mayonnaise: I LOVE YOU TOO~! -cling- XD

Jafeijai: Yeah, I have an Itachi wallscroll I looked at when I was writing that part XD

Youkaichica: Aww -pats- Don't worry, there will be some light hearted chapters in the future ^^- But if you're going to be sad at a chapter like that, I'm not sure whether you can handle the more sadder parts of the future of the story D:

Rndmnweird: Yeah, I've noticed that too o_O'

Mikan: Ah ha... I need to draw one soon then o_o

Wordsworth: ;_;

Lil_Hamz: Oh yeah XD [Miki: Popo~!][Reina: What the hell?!]

Kazitakato: KAMEN RIDER FOREVER >3 Sorry, your sig... XD Anywho, yes, the plastic wrap worked! <3

Goosefish: Yeah, I know a lot about them through those ^^; Not only that, I did LOTS of extensive research, to make sure my story fits between what happens and whatnot XD

KrazyforKamei: <3~!

Rokun: This is what I really want to hear, nice well-though analytical stuff <3 To see if anywho really understands my story. Because you can pretty much predict what happens in the future when you really think about my character's actions and whatnot. :]

Slack: Plastic wrap is your friend <3 Yeah, when I saw the kiss scene, it looked like Miki's lips were a tad bit shinier than usual, so voila, plastic wrap idea from the previous chapters XD!

Owaranai Slave: <3~! Ohohohoho, yes, of course there are differences between Furuba and Our Cursed Gift XD

Kazitakato: You can use it <3 I'm going to change it soon anyway. Just be sure to credit me on the sig or something. They were simply born cursed. It's a random selection. Like when the 3rd head dies for example, the spirit immediately finds another body (As in, come into the genes of a pregnant woman so her baby will be cursed.) to inhabit. The bloodline matters too. I'm going to elaborate more about this in a future chapter.

JFC: -Darth Vader Theme- O-O

Jafeijai: Of course not XD

Mayonnaise: :]

JFC: Yeah.. True XD But mine's really different from others, yes?! XD
« Last Edit: November 05, 2006, 12:24:15 AM by Yuuyami »

Offline Yuuyami

  • Hardhat? ( ¯ロ¯ );;
  • Global Moderator
  • Member+
  • *
  • Posts: 1609
  • Prance. Do it. Now. N.O.W.
Chapter 20: If Only...
« Reply #269 on: November 04, 2006, 11:29:07 PM »
Shorter than usual D:








Chapter 20: If only...









Will those dreams I have of you come true?

She felt someone bump into her from behind.

“Ah, I’m sorry,” the person apologized, and when she turned around, she found that the person who walked into her was heavily loaded with groceries in her arms.

“Uh… No problem,” the woman raised a brow at the sight.

“Thank you for your kindness,” the person bowed, thus dropping all of the groceries being held.

She couldn’t help but laugh when she found out who the person was. The person recognized her, and also laughed warmly at the coincidence.

It’s not often that someone meets an acquaintance at a store at night.

- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

“What a day!” Reina flopped on the couch. “That kid may be five years younger than me, but god was he annoying…”

“Of course, he flashed me and Yui!” Erika sat on the couch opposite to Reina.

“Your spaztastic reactions were awesome though,” Reina claimed the rest of the couch by laying on it now.

“This is why World Children’s Games should not be played with children, regardless of what it is intended for…” Erika slapped her hand to her forehead before dragging it down. “What is it, 21:00 now?” Erika turned her head to look at the clock. “Bah, a few minutes off…”

“No kidding, everyone else went to sleep,” Reina sat up in the couch, looking around her.

“Shouldn’t you be sleeping too?” Erika laughed.

“I don’t have anything scheduled tomorrow morning, somewhere after lunch is my turn for the recording for the new song for the volleyball promotion though…” Reina laid back on the couch.

“Ah…We haven’t done anything for awhile… Ever since our last radio show stopped…” the Viyuuden member twiddled with her fingers in hopes of finding something to entertain her.

“Ah, but I hear you’re getting a new radio show under a different name?” Reina turned her head to face Erika.

“Yeah, Beauty Hour 21 if I heard right…We’re doing that on the 6th.”

“Yeah…”

Awkward silence.

“If it’s okay with you… Can I kinda pour my heart a bit? I know this is strange, but I can’t get it out of my head…”

“You can’t pour it out on Yui or Rika?”

“Yui’s out of question and Rika… She may be reliable, but sometimes… She gives me the creepy vibe sometimes… So she’s also out of question.

Does Erika or Yui know about the curse? Reina thought to herself. “In that case, go for it, I’ll listen.”

“Thank you.”

- - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

Erika picked up some of the groceries, and found a basket for the person to use. “So even out of the studio, you’re still spacey, Yui?”

“Yeah… I suppose I forgot the basket existed,” Yui laughed sheepishly.

“But all these lunches, are you going to eat them all?”

“I suppose so… I may not look like it, but I do eat a lot. What about you? What brings you to the grocery store at night?”

“I was looking for dog food.”

“Oh?”

Erika looked in her wallet to find a picture, and handed it to Yui, “It’s a Chihuahua, so very cute!” she grinned.

“I see you are a proud owner! Haha,” Yui chuckled.

“And I fully admit it!” Erika also chuckled.

- - - - - - - - - - - -

“The way you make it sound, it sounds like you love her,” Reina smirked.

“I guess that is of truth,” Erika rubbed the back of her head with a shy smile. “Everyone will tease me if they know though…”

“If that’s the case, I’ll keep that secret. But in exchange…”

Erika feared what Reina might blackmail her with.

“You have to let me help you two get together, you hear?”

“Really? You’d do that for me?” Erika held her hands together.

“Of course, I’ll help!” Reina smiled at the older woman.

They were discussing other things for awhile, before Miki came in, dragging Reina to bed because apparently, ‘you two make too many damn giggly noises! I can’t sleep!’ was Miki’s reason.

“Hmm… Alone now…” Erika stood up, “I need some fresh nightly air…” she wore her jacket, and a beanie, and left the lobby.

Erika, for some odd reason, found herself strolling in the park. She continuously stared at her feet as she nonchalantly followed the park’s sidewalk in circles, wasting time. Amidst her walking, she bumped into someone.

“Ah… sorry…” Erika looked up.

“Erika?” the person turned around, “Ah, it is you.”

“Yui?” Erika was slightly taken aback, “what brings you out here? I thought you went to sleep!”

“I needed a place to relax, that’s all…” Yui smiled, though a bit sadly. She was wearing a long black coat, and her hair was tied in pigtails that were in front of her chest. “Would you like a seat?” she motioned to the bench nearby.

Erika nodded, and proceeded to sit down, and as did Yui. “Like you, I came for some air, so yeah…”

What an unpleasant awkward silence.

“Haha, this is like the random encounter at the grocery store, eh?” Erika chuckled, trying to bring up something to speak of.

“Indeed, would you believe me if I said that was my first time shopping at a grocery store?”

“WHOA~! Seriously?! What were you?! A ruler?!” Erika turned abruptly to face Yui. “And being 18 going on 19, how?!”

“Haha, well, to put it bluntly…”

Erika listened intently.

“It’s a waste of my time,” Yui leaned back on the bench, looking at the stars above. “It was really unusual for me to go to the grocery store that night, I usually do not do such pointless things. As it has been established, I live and work. When I have time off and whatnot, I do not know what to do with myself.”

“…Are you happy like that?” Erika gripped the fabric of her pants tighter.

“Yes…” Yui turned to smile at Erika, “I’m happy. I have everything; I’m content. I’m sure…” Yui’s smile lowered a bit, “…that I’m more content than anyone…”

“If that’s the case, you should look happier when you smile,” Erika stood up abruptly.

That smile… So lonely…

“I’m sorry. I’m sure it was pointless. Even though you and I happened to randomly see each other in that wasted time…”

Yui’s eyes widened slightly, still staring at Erika.

“Maybe I’m an idiot, but that didn’t feel like a waste of time to me! Bumping into each other in the store… Bumping into each other in the park now… I couldn’t get you out of my mind! Because I thought our coincidences meant something! Because I was happy! Sorry for wasting your time!” Erika yelled the last line, before turning to walk away.

And sorry… For not being able to make you smile like you were having fun…

“Miyoshi! Wait!” Yui tried keeping up with the older woman.

“Miyoshi?!” Erika twitched as she stood in place, “Who said you can stop calling me Erika?!”

“Eh? But…”

“Don’t follow me! I’m mad as hell right now!”

“Please calm down… Don’t cry..”

“I’m NOT crying!” Erika turned around, but was immediately embraced by Yui. The younger girl rested her head on Erika’s shoulder.

“I’m sorry… I spoke without thinking properly…” Yui said solemnly, “I was happy to run into you that time too, I could not get you out of my mind either.” Then she released her grasp on Erika, took a step backwards to allow her space.

Erika was sure Yui could see the huge blush on her face, even if it was night, and the things illuminating the park were white street lamps.

“You’re blushing,” Yui stated frankly.

“I’m not!” Erika turned her head away.

“Haha, you are,” Yui smiled. Erika felt obligated to look at the girl.

Now that’s a real smile… Erika thought, and smiled shyly back at Yui.

Then, Yui took a step closer, and moved Erika’s bangs to the side, then tracing her jaw line and pushed upwards at the chin, so that Erika faced her. Erika saw Yui’s face loom closer, close enough to see her reflection in her eyes…

But with a pause, Yui pulled her face back. And without a word, she let go of Erika’s chin, and walked away in silence.

Erika stood there, baffled.

It was as if “I love you” was said…

“Will we have more of those ‘wasted’ times…?” Erika looked at the darkness Yui left in.

“Will I see you again like those two times?”

If only I could watch over you…

Yui stepped into the apartment, and traversed up the stairs.

If only I could hug you…

She reached her desired destination, and was met with a greeting of “Good evening.”

If only I could kiss you…

“I trust you didn’t do anything mischievous outside?” Rika asked, as she stepped closer to Yui.

It was dark, so Rika could not see Yui’s face clearly. If she had seen Yui’s face, she might have seen a smile with clouded eyes. A lonely smile.

But I’m sure…

“No…” Yui felt her face being stroked by Rika, “Everything is fine… My dear Ojou-sama…”

…that my dreams of you will be impossible.









<3~! Ten reviews or I won't start writing the next chapter <3
« Last Edit: November 05, 2006, 12:51:01 AM by Yuuyami »

Offline rndmnwierd

  • Subleader of Tsunku's Army
  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 4824
  • What has been seen cannot be unseen.
Our Cursed Gift
« Reply #270 on: November 04, 2006, 11:40:31 PM »
Ichi!

Yui! And Erika! And Yui and Erika! Ah, I can already see the heartbreak and it makes my heart all floofily. BTW just even giving them parts in your story will have me ecstatic all night...
« Last Edit: November 04, 2006, 11:44:43 PM by rndmnwierd »

Offline Mayo

  • 真夜中
  • Member+
  • Posts: 2901
Our Cursed Gift
« Reply #271 on: November 04, 2006, 11:43:28 PM »
Awww. Poor Erikachan. I'm starting to think Yui/Erika is really sweet.

ava by PlusQ (over at mm-bbs); ueda sig by Pinkosa | #1 drifoy, Tanaka Reina, and Murakami Megumi fangirl

Offline YoukaiChica

  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 300
Our Cursed Gift
« Reply #272 on: November 04, 2006, 11:43:53 PM »
Ah!!! Yui's cursed!!!! Ahaha. When she jerked her face away from Erika's I knew it! And poor Erika. She'll never know that Yui does heart her. Unless she tells her. Or unless Reina meddles in their business. Yay for new chapters!! I've been waiting all week for this.

Offline Aioros

  • 「 ebiru powered+ 」
  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 7291
  • A CAT IS FINE TOO...
Our Cursed Gift
« Reply #273 on: November 04, 2006, 11:59:04 PM »
Yui is cursed? :ONstoned:

The kiss that never was...:ONgyaaah:

But yay for Viyuden love!!!:tfr9a7wg:

WAR AKARI!!! Infernal Ninjutsu, Hidden Lore...Freedom of Opposites Technique!!! Rest in peace Kyle,Jab,Mom,Tita, ChrNo...

Offline jafeijai

  • Member+
  • Posts: 4661
  • Music is my life ♪
Our Cursed Gift
« Reply #274 on: November 05, 2006, 12:04:45 AM »
DAI GO!!

yay for new chapter~~ it may be shorter, but it's still chock full of goodness..for example, REVEALING THE LAST OROCHI!! :yay: Viyuden RABU! :yay:

i'm wondering something...now that all the orochi heads have been revealed...what will happen next? o.O

Offline KrazyForKamei

  • Member+
  • Posts: 150
Our Cursed Gift
« Reply #275 on: November 05, 2006, 12:19:41 AM »
Awww! I love Erika/Yui! But the stupid curse ruined the kiss *grumbles*. They have to work something out. I want Erika to know Yui loffs her...I have an idea ^_^ *remembers the plastic wrap comments*

Someone give Yui some...seriouslly. She can tell Erika its a health condition or something..... >.>   <.<

Offline Tanachan

  • The Cheat~~~~
  • Member+
  • Posts: 364
  • Currently Attending Reina's "Erebeta Pati"
Our Cursed Gift
« Reply #276 on: November 05, 2006, 12:53:14 AM »
質!

Wow....how romantic! And maybe she could use chapstick and just kiss the lips...maybe. Can't wait for the next one!
If Helen Keller falls in the woods and no one is around, does she make a sound?

Official [WHOA] member, master and commander of the Tokunaga Chinami branch.

Offline KrazyForKamei

  • Member+
  • Posts: 150
Our Cursed Gift
« Reply #277 on: November 05, 2006, 04:10:29 AM »
^^^ Chapstick XD...That's genius! It could probably work if u used alot of it...

Offline JFC

  • Miki's Birthday Twin
  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 28575
    • jfcantalejo
    • jfcantalejo
Our Cursed Gift
« Reply #278 on: November 05, 2006, 04:27:48 AM »
Aw damn that's heartbreaking.:ONcry:  And geez Rika's everywhere!

JPH!P :heart:'s kuro808, Fushigidane, ChrNo, Jab & marimari. Always.

Offline Owaranai_sLaVe

  • Right now it's... KKANGPAE SHIDAE!
  • ecchi
  • Member+
  • Posts: 2161
  • Does Don Jess have to slap a bitch?
Our Cursed Gift
« Reply #279 on: November 05, 2006, 06:58:35 AM »
10) At first, I misunderstood (or maybe...) and thought Erika was the cursed one.
then again, I thought she was gonna be a cursed one since the chapter started... Very sneaky Yuu, very sneaky.
Plus, it just seems more like Erika would be cursed. Although, Yui doesnt make a bad snake at all.

Sigh, Rika's so touchy <3 :ONshy1:
whats weird is how Rika is not known to by sly and tell secrets... yet shes the leader of the cursed humans who turn into snakes. Snakes are known *in fictional stories that personify animals* as the sneaky, tattle tale, and dominating.

-Owaranai-sLaVe
>>LIFE ~is just another story~2008/12/26<<
Please Spread The Love; Pervy Thinkers Association

JPHiP Radio (13/200 @ 96 kbs)     Now playing: bomb factory - exciter (DOA2)