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« Reply #280 on: November 05, 2006, 08:22:01 AM »
Hurray for Yuuyami -

Your stories are like gobstoppers...long lasting and taste so sweet...

Sorry thats not very poetic but its the best I can do now.

Read the complete Doki Doki!!

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« Reply #281 on: November 06, 2006, 11:04:32 PM »
oh.....man......Romeo And Juliet love from Sukeban Deka i see?? Have fear, you do not?? Praise, you deserve......praises, praises, nothing less, but definitely more.....(just finished a Star Wars marathon....hence the Yoda-like talk)

spreading the usa-chan love....i mean darkness(thanks to JFC)

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« Reply #282 on: November 08, 2006, 03:57:01 AM »
Aaaah...! you guys work so fast...
in a way i'm happy to read it later because i get 3 chapters hehe
but i don't count in the 10 reviews...
but i guess you don't really need mine as you always get more than 10 haha
which means your fic is very popular, isn't it ? i'm really happy for you
and so we can have more and more great chapters coming :p
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it might be boring later on...

i won't trust you anymore when you say that and you know it XD
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Chapter 18: Flight
Since when…?

i like how you start your chapter, i was like "since when" what ? oho that makes me want to read the chapter even more
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Then, she heard the alarm shut off. Funny… I don’t think the alarm shuts off by itself… Maki turned to her left to see what the supernatural force was.

lol...a supernaturl force XD
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Why, a sleeping-in Yuko of course.

yeah, of course XD
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“Hush~<3” Yuko moved onto Maki, wrapping her leg over Maki’s, a bedspread separating touching of skin, and wrapped her arms around her as well, “I’m still sleeping…” she said lazily, and gave Maki a kiss on the cheek, before trying to sleep.

“GET OFF OF ME!”

BAM.

:ROTFLMAO::ROTFLMAO::ROTFLMAO::ROTFLMAO:
indeed, a funny beginning hahahaha
i so picture the scene, and Maki's piss-off-surprised-shocked-just-woke-up face
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“Why didn’t you sleep in Miki’s room like last night?” Maki dug in her nimono.
“Well, if I did, she would’ve kept me all night~…” Yuko replied in a melodramatic sigh.
“Now now,” Miki smirked, “not in front of the kiddies.”
“Stop it! The touching demons are scaring me~!” Risa laughed.
What the XD XD XD
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Just ignore them…ignore them… ignore them… ignore them… Reina trained her mind into saying, hoping that she wouldn’t be swept away by Yuko and Miki’s personalities combined.

lol....i love the 4x ignore them and the "trained her mind" part hahahahaha
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“If you’re so pissed off, I might as well sleep with Reina tonight~<3”
“You will not!” Maki and Reina both exclaimed at the same time.

:ROTFLMAO::ROTFLMAO::ROTFLMAO:
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she slept in Miki’s room yesterday, but they both made so much noise…

put two drunkards in one room what do you expect XD
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“Haha, knowing the others, they’ll come seeking breakfast at eight, so we all have two hours to kill,” Yuko sat back in the chair, indicating that she was full.
“Why not kill that groping habit of your’s? An Obachan doing it is creepy,” Maki chuckled.
“Oh, then I’m not me,” Yuko said in a blank face, before smacking Maki in the boob.

:lmao::lmao::lmao::lmao::lmao:

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“So, Obachan, how long are you staying here?” Risa simply asked, knowing that she was safe from harm since she was across the table.
no respect for sanpai nowadays hahahahaha...Obachan....
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“You’re just asking for your boobs to be popped, aren’t you?” Yuko laughed, looking at Maki.
“You’re just asking for your wellbeing to be seriously burned, aren’t you?” Maki gave the same laugh as Yuko.

*dies*
looks like maki boobs are very popular during breakfast XD i think i remember reading a chapter from erink once with this subject..that also remind me i still havn't finished reading it and not comment on it yet...
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- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Night.
WHAT XD lool
does that mean there were nothing special from 6am to night ? hahahaha
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“Ha… That was fun,” Yuko laughed as she yawned.
aaaaa what was so fun ? XD

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“Fun? All you did was grope us with Miki,” Maki sighed, realizing what she had just said, and quickly raising her hands to the defense of her precious objects.

HOLY fjekhgilhgi XD XD XD XD HAHAAHAHHAHAH:lmao::lmao::lmao::lmao::lmao::lmao::lmao::lmao::lmao:
"my precioussssssssssss"
*dies*
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Reina (Who still had no idea why she was dragged along)

hahahaha pooor reina...
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“You’re killing me here…” Maki slapped a hand to her forehead.

exactly what i wanted to say ! you are killing me here XD i'm dying a violent-laughing-to-hell death
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“So, did you bring the car?”

“Yes.”

“Can I drive?”

“No.”

“Fine, take me to a bar then~!”

:lmao::lmao::lmao::lmao::lmao::lmao::lmao::lmao::lmao:
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“Dance practice for the new song, Aruiteru, is tomorrow morning.”
wait...they dance ? XD XD XD

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I also have the PV for Melodies to shoot, haha,” Miki chuckled.
“Don’t do anything reckless with Aya, or you’ll transform,” Maki added in.
“Well, as long as we don’t make lip contact in the PV, it should be okay… Though if we are asked to, it will be problematic…” Miki sat upright on the sofa again.
[..]Maybe if I put plastic wrap on my mouth…The camera might be able to make it look like gloss…”
“Don’t come up with weird ideas,” Maki sighed again.

lol...so that's how it was !!!! hahaha
a plastic wrap XD XD
how funny to see how what you wrote here match with the Pv, when i felt like Miki was kinda reluctant to kiss aya hehehe
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“What’s it like to fly?”
[..]“Meet me at the rooftop in ten minutes,”
“You’re seriously going to take me out to flight?”
“Why not?” Maki looked back, “I won’t drop you. I definitely won’t drop you...”

she is not serious XD what if people see them ????? :shock:

the next part is no boring at all, it's kinda ....romantic ^^
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In the plaid alternative outfit for Some boys! Touch nonetheless.
OH GOD XD XD XDXD
romantic and ....hot .....hum....

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“Why dress up for the occasion?”
that's a good question XD
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“My wings can rip anything that’s in the way, so rather than appear in a bra,[..]and even has another duplicate of the outfit if this one gets destroyed…”

lol...appears in a bra XD XD XD
sounds like she is ....stingy...doesn't want anything to happen to her onw clothes and just let the company pays if it get torn hahahaha
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“Well, I’m not sure whether to call them beautiful, or extremely cool…” Reina stared, gawk-eyed.
same here XD
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Since when did you become so…

what what what :w00t::w00t::w00t::w00t:
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“You know, you should try looking down, don’t worry, I won’t drop you…”
...actually...i won't feel safe in her arms while flying XD XD XD XD
hey wait...人..no...people people people...don't see them Oo ?
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“Nah, for some odd reason, when I’m in flight, I think I’m invisible, and probably you too…”
[..]
“There’s a small body of water there… If I fly over, I don’t think we’ll see our reflections…” [..]“Wow…So amazing…”[..]“Isn’t it?”
it is XD now tell me the scientific reason of that XD hahahaha
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“I guess it’s a bit nostalgic to carry someone in flight again…”
:?
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Tell me, since when did you become so precious to me?

who is talking here ???!!!!:-o:-o:-o:-o

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Chapter 19: Soliloquy: Yume no Naka

The people I’ve hurt... The people I’ve had to suppress the memories of… I wonder if they enjoy their life as much as the one who ‘gave back their life’…

aaaah....at least here i know it's Kaori...this kind of thought fit so well with her awww...you really made a good choice.
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“I was thinking I’d brush up my guitar skills again.”

unknow she plays guitar !
/me is going to look for videos after that...

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“Now that I think about it, I need to brush up on my piano skills too…”Reina rested her arms on the table, and her head on them.

no kidding !!!!????
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Just trapped in a castle of the dark-side of the moon
They’re dancing in the shadows like whispers of love
Just dreaming of a place where they’re free as a dove
They’ve never been allowed to love in this cursed cage.
It’s only the fairytale they believe…

it also sounds like a h!p rules/world hahahaha...

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Poof!
i love when i find this word in your story :D

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the 6th head of the orochi—and only 20 CM long.
20 cm ???!!!!!20CM !!!???? LOOOOOL what kind of snake is that !!!! XD XD XD XD

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“Hell! You bumped your head pretty hard! Wake up! I need to get you ice! Oh wait, wouldn’t that make it worse because you’re a snake?! Ohno!Ohno!Ohno!Ohno!”
lol...panikuuu
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Her reaction was similar…To Ruru’s…

aaaaah....flash back....
i was about to quote all the flash back...it would be quite useless...so i will just say i was like :ONfainted: during all that last part....
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That was definitely a day where forgetting about it would have been a sin. [..] Nonetheless, I was simply drawn to her, and her to me, it was too inevitable that we would be in love. Though… Also inevitable that she would find out…
[..] "Poof !"
“I’ve always wondered why you would never kiss me…”
“And now you know… Will I be shunned because of that?”
“If you think something like that is going to stop me from loving you,”[..]
“Kaorin, I love you so much… I want to be with you...”
[..]we attained the heavily romanticized dream, we have always been so happy… We were in a dream…A happy sensation that overwhelmed us, welcoming us into its paradise… Though… All dreams… Must end…
:ONfainted::ONfainted::ONfainted:

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“I will…” Rika grasped the frame of the upper left wing, “Not allow it!” and she tore the wing by its long frame and shorter frame, the sound of the translucent skin in the air was reminiscent of ripping paper. Kaori screamed in agony as she kneeled over, grabbing her heavily bleeding wing. Ruru watched helplessly in shock as the blood quickly formed a puddle from where Kaori kneeled, back arched over, head also arched over, her long hair’s ends dipped in the puddle of blood.

OUUTCH !!! :ONshock::ONcry::ONscared:

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“…I…” Ruru started crying uncontrollably, so much as to tamper her speech, “I-I’m….’m… I’m a-at f-fault…I’m the one at fault!”

“That’s right! It’s completely your fault! It’s your fault! It’s your fault! It’s entirely your fault!”

:ONfainted::ONfainted::ONfainted::ONfainted:
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“I wish I never came to love you…”
“I love you so much…”
“I wish I never met you at all…”
“I want to be with you…”

oh god it's so sad and painful to read......................:pencry:

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There was a knock on the door, and Kaori went over, fully dressed, to answer it. “What brings you here?”
“I had a feeling you kidnapped one of my juniors,” Yossie smiled.[..]
“I’ll protect you from this beast~!” Yossie made an exaggerated face and voice.
“WHICH beast I wonder…” Reina said shifty-eyed as she pulled away from Yossie.

aaaah..Yuuyami....it was a good thing to have put Yossie here...otherwise i wouldn't have the courage to keep on reading XD

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It's "Its only a fairytale" composed by Yuki Kajiura for Mai-HiME.

-For Furuba fans, "Honda-san" is NOT an intended pun XD.

hehe
i love Mai-hime, but obviously not enough to go to see the translation of their end or op or ost XD
oh well for honda, it wasn't about Toru's character anyway XD
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Chapter 20: If only...

Will those dreams I have of you come true?

at first i was confused by how you cut the different parts...and when i found out what happen i was "wow"
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Awkward silence.
“If it’s okay with you… Can I kinda pour my heart a bit? I know this is strange, but I can’t get it out of my head…”
:ONdunno::ONdunno::ONdunno:

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Erika picked up some of the groceries, and found a basket for the person to use. “So even out of the studio, you’re still spacey, Yui?”

“Yeah… I suppose I forgot the basket existed,” Yui laughed sheepishly.
a furuba reader here....so here i knew Yui was a cursed one...awww...Erka and Yui love...haha...just like kazitakato said...sukeban deka...did you think of those two when you started your story ? or just after the movie ?

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“If that’s the case, I’ll keep that secret. But in exchange…”
Erika feared what Reina might blackmail her with.
“You have to let me help you two get together, you hear?”

i don't know why but i laught here XD
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They were discussing other things for awhile, before Miki came in, dragging Reina to bed because apparently, ‘you two make too many damn giggly noises! I can’t sleep!’ was Miki’s reason.
:lmao::lmao::lmao::lmao::lmao::lmao: i love how you wrote it XD XD
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What an unpleasant awkward silence.[..]“Miyoshi! Wait!”
i thought they would have been ..closer..in real life i mean...actually i don't really know much about biyuden so...

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“Miyoshi?!” Erika twitched as she stood in place, “Who said you can stop calling me Erika?!”
“Eh? But…”
“Don’t follow me! I’m mad as hell right now!”
“Please calm down… Don’t cry..”
“I’m NOT crying!” Erika turned around, but was immediately embraced by Yui. The younger girl rested her head on Erika’s shoulder.
“I’m sorry… I spoke without thinking properly…” Yui said solemnly, “I was happy to run into you that time too, I could not get you out of my mind either.” Then she released her grasp on Erika, took a step backwards to allow her space.
[..]
But with a pause, Yui pulled her face back. And without a word, she let go of Erika’s chin, and walked away in silence.
Erika stood there, baffled.

aaaah.....she doesn't know about the curse....

so here starts Yui's POV right ?
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It was as if “I love you” was said…
If only I could watch over you…
If only I could hug you…
If only I could kiss you…
But I’m sure…
…that my dreams of you will be impossible.


aaaaaah......why do you make things so sad in your past few chapters....

hum...does Rika has this naughty relationship with Yui and Yossie? XD XD XD

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Comments for chapter 20
« Reply #283 on: November 08, 2006, 04:22:33 AM »
Rndmnweird: Haha, glad to know :]

Mayonnaise: Yes, very sweet <3

Youkaichica: Well, sorry for the wait XD At least you didn't have to wait a week... I think.. XD

Wordsworth: :]

Jafeijai: You'll see <3

KrazyforKamei: Oh yeah... I can so picture that XD

Tanachan: Oh dear, the feeling will be unpleasant XD

JFC: Oh believe me, there's definately a lot of heart breaking to come.

Owaranai Slave: Haha, good speculation, but it's up to future chapters to see if you're right or not :]

Mikan: Haha, nice similie. I wonder if my story is edible too~! <3

Kazitakato: I was thinking about that when I was writing this XD But long before that, I was planning the story :]

Chrno: Nah, It's just, I love your commentaries so much *___* Can't write without them XD

<3

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« Reply #284 on: November 08, 2006, 04:26:41 AM »
<3





Chapter 21: Shattered






“It’s terrible! It’s terrible!” Koharu poked her head at the lobby door.

“We’re having a terrible time too,” Miki tilted her head backwards from the black leather couch. Yossie sat opposite of her, in glasses, and looking at various papers on the small low table in front of them.

“The concert tour is just around the corner, and we didn’t even practice the choreography on the stage yet, with everyone’s schedule conflicting with Futsal and Kickbase and such…” Yossie sighed.

“Then shouldn’t we do something about our practices?” Koharu leaned over the black leather couch.

“What do you think we’re doing now, eh?” Miki raised her hand to caress the miracle girl’s hair.

“Anywho, what was terrible?” Yossie took her glasses off and set the papers back on the table.

“Niigaki-san thrashed her room!” Koharu tilted her head and smiled like the miracle she was.

‘Thrashed her room’ she says, happily… The leader and sub-leader looked at Koharu, the tomboy with a nervous smile, and the groping demon with a frank glare. Koharu was still smiling amidst the looks she was receiving from her elders.

The parental units got up from the couches, and left immediately for Risa’s room. There was already a slight crowd at her door. Eri, Sayumi, and Reina were already there, too scared to venture into the storm. The door was cracked, though not severely to the point where a simple flick could shatter it fully. The leader tried her best to get the rokkies back to their rooms while Miki dared herself to enter the den.

Miki closed the door behind her, wary of the fist marks on the door. The room itself wasn’t as thrashed as she thought it would be. It seemed that a bunch of children came in and relentlessly threw anything they could get their hands on around the room. One thing’s for sure: watch out for the mirror shards in front of the dresser. Risa stood with her back to the sub-leader, clenching her fists tightly. She turned her head menacingly and slowly, only to the point that her eyes’ pupils looked at the fifth orochi head, “What?” she said in a matching demonic voice.

“Hey, brat, don’t scare the kiddies,” Miki leaned against the beaten door with her arms crossed.

“Why should I care?”

“You’ll transform of stress, m’dear,” Miki said as she closed her eyes and waved a finger from side to side like a pendulum. She heard a sudden noise, and felt breathing on her face. When she opened her eyes again, Risa had trapped Miki between arms. That is to say, both arms of Risa were placed a few centimeters from Miki’s shoulders. Amidst this sudden movement, Miki still had that smug look, and still had her arms crossed.

“I frankly don’t care if the curse is found out or not. It’s better than hiding behind layers of clothes or never kissing anyone on the lips!”

“Take it easy, Gaki,” Miki was still composed, “You know Ojou-sama will get angry if you get careless.”

“I won’t take it easy! I don’t care about what she thinks!”

“Hey. Don’t raise your voice on me out of all people,” Miki gripped her arms a bit tighter, getting annoyed.

“I’ll do what I wish!” Risa used her right arm to get a hold of Miki’s neck, though not choking, but only as means of threat. Surprisingly, Miki was still calm.

“What now, m’dear 8th head? Don’t strangle your elder,” Miki smirked, as if inviting.

“Then make me!”

Risa regretted what she said, for Miki took hold of her right arm, jerked it from her neck, and moved as quickly as a snake, and kissed Risa. Both being cursed, none of them transformed. Though, the touching demon’s tongue slithered into Risa’s mouth, catching her way off guard. Using this opportunity, Miki kneed the younger in the stomach, thus releasing her to stumble backwards on the ground.

“Aaaaand I made you,” Miki wiped her lips with the back of her left hand, “Don’t mess with me, you know you’ll always lose.”

“Alright, I think I’m calm now…” Risa rubbed her poor butt, “But why a kiss?! You could’ve simply kneed me! Ugh, I’ve been kissed by Miki! The feeling is so groooss~! Why a kiss?!”

“Calm? You’re back to normal,” Miki sighed, “Mind if you tell your gross sub-leader what caused you to flip out like that?”

Risa moved backwards and did a 90 degree turn, thus, making her back against the foot of her bed. “I was dumped.”

“What the hell?” Miki walked over and sat on the bed.

“It didn’t sink in at first… But as the days went by, I got more and more irritated… And today, I was thinking about it again, and well… You saw the result,” Risa looked around her room. “It was kind of a secret that we were going out… I have no idea what happened but suddenly, she simply just…” Risa’s words became less audible.

“I don’t need you anymore. Stay the hell away from me.”

“…Why?”

“Why what?” Miki looked down at her junior.

“Why do I feel like I need her so badly? I love Ai-chan very much…”

Miki had no comment about being poured onto. The only comfort she could give Risa was a pat on the head, and she did so.

“So, Gaki, what are you going to do now? Mope around?”

“I shouldn’t let this get in the way of work…” Risa stood up, “I’m going to clean up now, tell the rokkies my apologies for scaring them, though, don’t tell them about why I did.”

“I don’t normally take orders like that, but just for that reasoning, I’ll let you slide by.”

“Thank you!” Risa bowed her head to Miki, who was just leaving.

Just before Miki shut the door she looked back at Risa, “Oh by the way…”

“Hmm?”

“That kiss really was gross, you taste like soy sauce,” Miki stuck out her tongue in a disgusted manner and then she left.

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“That was really scary…” Reina sighed as she rolled over on her bed.

“Even from upstairs, I could hear the noise…” Maki said, leaning against the side of the bed, close to where Reina’s head was.

Out of boredom, Reina curled her legs, and rolled forward and backwards on the bed, ignoring the blood rushing to her head every time her head was upside down. However, she misjudged the distance of her bed after the fifth time, and landed on Maki’s lap.

“Be careful next time,” Maki raised a brow, “I was thankful I tilted my head to the side, other wise, I’d be hit by your feet.”

“Sorry,” Reina bowed apologetically.

Both of them froze however. There Reina was, each of her legs outside of Maki’s. In other words, Maki’s legs were in between Reina’s. To add to the embarrassment, Reina, on instinct, had placed her arms around Maki’s neck as soon as she landed, whereas Maki loosely wrapped her arms around Reina’s waist.

Reina fought for words to say. Maki was also fighting for words to say. Hell, they are both screaming internally in their minds.

The door was knocked upon, and immediately, Reina got off of Maki and onto the bed, to which Maki tried to compose herself to look as if nothing happened, both feared that someone, perhaps Yossie, might walk in on an awkward scene. Surprisingly, it wasn’t Yossie.

It was Risa.

“Ah! Gottsuan’s here too?” Risa raised a thick brow.

“Nii-nii? What brings you here?”

“I had a feeling Miki-chan didn’t go off telling the rokkies my apologies, so I’m doing it myself…” Risa rubbed the back of her head shyly.

“It’s all right…” Reina waved her hand dismissively. “As long as no one’s hurt, right?”

“…Yeah, I guess if you look at it that way…” Risa smiled.

“What was the rage about?” Maki stood up and sat on the bed.

“Nothing wrong. Just a small fight with Ai, that’s all,” Risa looked off to the side.

“Is that so…?” Maki narrowed her eyes a bit.

“Where’s Ai then?” Reina asked.

“Not sure…” Risa looked at the ceiling. “But knowing her, she doesn’t hold her grudges too long for me anyway…” the eighth head let out a small sad smile.

“Is it because you’re the eighth head?”

“Lies,” Risa sat down on the bed as well.

“What’s this about being the eighth head? Something wrong with that?” Reina tilted her head in confusion.

“Well you know about the story, right?” Maki asked. Reina nodded.

“Well you see… the eighth head was first killed by Susanoo. Not only that, the eighth head was also the one who was supposed to eat Kushinada, so often, the others made fun of the eighth head because of that…” Risa brought her knees to her chest.

“Well, I don’t make fun of the eighth for that…” Maki patted Risa, “But…” Maki’s face turned to Reina, “Miki and everyone else of her kind made fun of that story, saying that it was pathetic and such…”

“It felt like it was me being the one they called stupid…” Risa turned her head away from Maki and Reina. “It felt like I was the one who was the idiot… Though it changed…Gottsuan saved me, kind of.”

“Did she?” Reina looked at Maki with a smirk.

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“Are you sulking?” a voice from behind called out.

“I’m not sulking!” the pigtailed girl said with a grumble.

“It’s because of the eighth head stories, right?” Maki said as she leaned on the bridge railing, looking at the river below. Another inaudible grumble came from Risa.

“It’s your fault they keep making fun of me!”

“Eh?”

“The stories also say that we both fought over the seventh girl! And if I got that meal, then you would’ve been the one, not me!”

“You’re pushing me to blame for something that’s not directed at you?”

“Huh?” it was Risa’s turn to be confused.

“You’re not a pathetic person, are you?”

“No… No I’m not…”

“Because you know, if you listen to those stories, and think you’re the one being laughed at, then that itself is pathetic… you know?”


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“And you know what? I miss those times when you still wore your hair in pigtails and your eyebrows were the most noticeable thing of all…” Maki chuckled.

“Thank goodness I cut my bangs…” Risa went shifty-eyed.

“But you still wear your hair in pigtails sometimes, so…” Reina rolled her eyes.

“Lies! Lies!” Risa shook her head.

“Reaction queen,” Maki and Reina both pointed at Risa. The eighth head gave a pout, realizing her mistake.

“I need to go apologize to Eri now, haven’t gone to her room yet.”

“In that case, have fun,” Reina waved.

Just then, something came crashing through Reina’s balcony door, shattering the glass.

The three stared in the direction of the gentle breeze that entered.

“Alright, I swear, the devil’s after my room,” Reina bent over and held her head, pretending to be in pain. “Why the hell does my room get screwed up?!”

Risa stood in front of the shattered glass, and raised her hands high, “Oh mighty one~! Stop the wind~! Stop the room-bashing~!”

“Like hell that’s going to work!” Reina glared at Risa.

“Let’s get some duct tape and a sheet, I don’t think glass doors are repaired instantly…” Maki got up, and opened the door.

“Yeah… Let me go tell Leader then…” Reina went ahead. She knocked on the door of the leader’s room, and eventually, the door opened, and there Yossie was, in glasses again.

“Some idiot threw a rock and broke my balcony door. Don’t know who it is though,” Reina explained.

“I see, so that was the noise…” Yossie readjusted her glasses.

“Just letting you know, that’s all,” and with that, Reina left with Maki and Risa.

Yossie closed the door, and sighed, “Something cursed Reina’s room, I just know it…”

Then, there were more knocks at her door. Confused, Yossie turned around and opened the door. There was a woman in front of her door, with long flowing hair, and staring at her contemptuously.

“For your information… I wasn’t the one who threw the rock at the balcony door,” Ai Takahashi said, glaring at Yossie.

“Haha, not sure if that’s sarcasm or what,” Yossie smiled, and then turned around to return to her business of doing some paperwork. As she walked, she heard the door shut, and felt arms wrapped around her slender waist. “Eh? What’s the meaning of this?”

“You know, don’t you?” Ai said in a serious voice in Yossie’s ear, “Why I came? What I’m thinking about—what I want? You know, don’t you? Hitomi?”

“My my, using first names with me now?” Yossie released herself from Ai’s grasp and sat in a chair with a coffee stand next to it with all the paperwork.

“Answer me.”

“Do I know?” Yossie took off her glasses, “I’m not sure if what I’ll say will satisfy you.”

“Answer me. Hitomi.”

“I wonder…” Yossie closed her eyes, “Do I look like I’m simple?”

“No, you don’t. Not at all.”

“Heh,” Yossie opened her eyes and looked at Ai with a smirk and scheming eyes, “Then are you simply stupid?”

Ai kneeled next to Yossie, hands on the side of the chair, “Don’t fool around, the way you talk—the way you talk to everyone—its all as if you’re testing us.”

“Is that foolishness a part of your plan? Nonetheless… I’ll tell you what I know,” Yossie stroked her imaginary beard.

- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -

Risa had already left to order a new door. Meanwhile, Reina was on the balcony, on a mini step ladder, trying to tape the sheet to the top, with Maki in the room, holding the sheet up.

“You got it?” Maki asked, on tip toe holding the sheet up.

“Not yet. The tape’s stubborn, giving me a hard time, I’m tellin’ ya,” Reina grumbled.

“Fukuoka accent, can’t understand you well,” Maki chuckled.

Thank goodness a sheet separated her and Maki, for Reina wouldn’t forgive herself if Maki saw her blushing. While thinking about the consequences, Reina slipped when she tried to tape the upper part. Reina fell forward—and she was sure she landed on Maki. However, Maki seemed to have suspected it, for she was still standing, using her arms to support Reina through the sheet that separated them.

What will happen…?

For some odd reason, Reina didn’t want to move. Neither did Maki, whose arms were now embracing Reina. The sheet, surprisingly, was successfully taped at the top, so it didn’t fall on either of them.

“Are you alright?” Maki asked, still holding Reina in her arms.

What will happen when the door opens?

“I’m alright, thank you for catching me…” Reina wanted to mentally slap herself for blushing so hard.

What will be gained?

Realizing how long she held Reina, “I’m sorry… We should finish taping this,” Maki said.

What will be lost?

…Yossie’s hand caressed Ai’s cheek, until her thumb was now tracing the outlines of her lips…

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« Reply #285 on: November 08, 2006, 04:28:38 AM »
NOTES:

For those who don't know, Gaki = Brat. So Gaki-san = Ms. Brat. and whatnot.

Yes, only Maki calls Risa "Nii-nii," her own nickname for her, yo.

I don't know about you, but I'm pleased with the Miki and Risa confrontation :]


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« Reply #286 on: November 08, 2006, 05:05:30 AM »
Miki-Risa seems to be the fad lately :ONglasses:

Ai-chan-Yossi? Nice! Nice! :ONkekeke:

Risa's kiss tastes like soy sauce? :ONwahaha:

Awesome chapter again Yuuyami

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« Reply #287 on: November 08, 2006, 05:26:21 AM »
I understand Yossi is really cool and all but Ai, how could you! :baa60776: It's Risa damnit! XD

Hmmmm so Risa tastes like soysauce eh, that's a thought :p

And :yay: to Reina x Maki in that "position." Oooh the music plays :lol:

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« Reply #288 on: November 08, 2006, 06:23:34 AM »
Aichan dumped Mame? But...but...but...but...why??? :cry:


Meantime...YossiAi sounds pretty damn hot! Then again, all the talk about Yossi with glasses is pretty damn hot!!  :ONkekeke:

BTW, /me likes soy sauce. :twisted:

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« Reply #289 on: November 08, 2006, 06:43:28 AM »
. . . RISA AND MIKI KISS?! . . . *termanily shocked* Ive never thought of that couple for some reason. well I have, but i never considered it to be one to even ask for, since it seemed too far fetched.... BUT OH MY, you make everything sound good! XD (Eh? Risa and Miki a fad now in the fan fics? What other fan fics are there? *likes the idea too much now*)
But damn, that was a good set up for a kiss... I didnt even see that coming, but I can totaly say she had that coming!

That was some crazy hold Gotou and Reina had on each other on the bed... I cant even imagine it, it seems too strange.

what is this Yossui and Takitty business?! WHY?! all the couples are mixed up... its like someone played switcheroo...@_@ Yossui ;___; even though it would be hot, please dont fall into temptation! Mikis been a good girl! "what will be lost?" MIKI WILL!

XD Reina's room getting trashsed again, haha. Even better is risa is just the type to start chanting something to the Gods... xD But if Ai was being sarcastic, why Reina's room?

damn, so much is going on, I forgot who the 7th girl was.....
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« Reply #290 on: November 08, 2006, 03:52:57 PM »
(Dude, she didn't tell who the other girl was.)

But, yay! Glad for the update. I hate the fact that Risa got dumped by Ai, but at least Miki was able to make her feel better. XD

And I'm still loving Maki/Reina for some reason. XD

But Yossui/Ai? :cry: It's always been Ishiyoshi and Ai/Risa for me. >.> <.<

:thumbsup Good job!

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« Reply #291 on: November 08, 2006, 05:32:22 PM »
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Risa stood in front of the shattered glass, and raised her hands high, “Oh mighty one~! Stop the wind~! Stop the room-bashing~!”


:ROTFLMAO: OMG...THAT'S JUST PRICELESS!! :ROTFLMAO:

:ONshock: YOSSIE/AI?! nooooo....how could you Ai-chan...dump Risa....:ONpleeease:

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“That kiss really was gross, you taste like soy sauce,” Miki stuck out her tongue in a disgusted manner and then she left.

:ROTFLMAO:

Yuuyami...why must you torment us with your chapters?! :ONfrustrated: making us die of laughter then suddenly, BAM! cliffhanger! :ONomg:

POST UP THE NEXT CHAPTER QUICK~i don't think i can survive too long w/o knowing what's next...:ONpleeease:

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« Reply #292 on: November 08, 2006, 09:12:09 PM »
For the hell of it, I'm posting bios for the story XD Only did the bio's of the more important people of the story.

Name - Head (if any) - Description

Reina Tanaka - The main character of the story. Good morales, though sometimes, she can be blunt or insulting at times.

Maki Goto - 7th - Usually considered "Cool" by others, but she's really a normal(?) girl who likes to be active. Somewhere in her heart, lies a dark past.

Miki Fujimoto - 5th - A lazyass, and a very frank person. She's also flirtacious and loves to grope.

Hitomi Yoshizawa - The easy-going all-around-nice-girl. However, her behavior so far suggests that underneath that happy mask, she's scheming something. What is she planning...?

Kaori Iida - 6th - Although graduated, she's still a motherly figure to the other members. She doesn't want anyone suffering the same way she did.

Megumi Murata - 3rd - A very stoic and sarcastic woman. 'nough said.

Rika Ishikawa - ??? - The 'head' of the curse. A dark figure of many secrets.

Risa Niigaki - 8th - Reaction queen :] So her reactions are much larger than necessary, so if you get her angry... >_>;

Yuko Nakazawa - 2nd - Her presence itself is quite alarming, as she's quite flamboyant and gropes far more than Miki.

Yui Okada - ??? - Apparently, she's a really kind person, but something restrains her...

Ai Takahashi - A pretty stubborn person. Recently dumped Risa, though the reasons why have yet to be answered.

I will bring up this list a few times after new facts have been revealed and whatnot XD...

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« Reply #293 on: November 08, 2006, 10:42:30 PM »
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Chrno: Nah, It's just, I love your commentaries so much *___* Can't write without them XD
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you made me...feel..kinda....special
Alright ! i'm going o try to post as fast as i can then !:ONcool1:

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Chapter 21: Shattered
“It’s terrible! It’s terrible!” Koharu poked her head at the lobby door.

wooot what a start :ONding: hehehehe

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“We’re having a terrible time too,” Miki tilted her head backwards from the black leather couch. Yossie sat opposite of her, in glasses, and looking at various papers on the small low table in front of them.
why does what Miki said doesn't sound credible :lmao::lmao::lmao::lmao:
Yossie wears glasses ???? :shock:

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“Then shouldn’t we do something about our practices?” Koharu leaned over the black leather couch.
“What do you think we’re doing now, eh?” Miki raised her hand to caress the miracle girl’s hair.

first, i laught at the situation...she doesn't really seem to care about anything and her question made me laugh so hard...and then i was like :shock: miki caress Koharu ????
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“Niigaki-san thrashed her room!” Koharu tilted her head and smiled like the miracle she was.
‘Thrashed her room’ she says, happily…

:lmao::lmao::lmao::lmao::lmao::lmao:
wasn't it supposed to be terrible ??? then why does she smile ? wasn't she supposed to be in panikuu ? XD

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and the groping demon with a frank glare.

the groping demon XD XD XD
rofl
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The parental units got up from the couches

:lmao::lmao::lmao::lmao::lmao::lmao:
Yuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuyamiiiii XD XD XD
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“Hey, brat, don’t scare the kiddies,” Miki leaned against the beaten door with her arms crossed.

oh god i so picture that XD XD XD XD
"brat" hahahaha...
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For those who don't know, Gaki = Brat. So Gaki-san = Ms. Brat. and whatnot.

:shock: unknow that !!!! so they are constantly call her Ms Brat in real life Oo ?

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Risa had trapped Miki between arms. That is to say, both arms of Risa were placed a few centimeters from Miki’s shoulders. Amidst this sudden movement, Miki still had that smug look, and still had her arms crossed.
errrrrrrrrrrr XD
unexpected move from Ms Brat XD

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never kissing anyone on the lips!

hahaha....poor them...
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“Hey. Don’t raise your voice on me out of all people,” Miki gripped her arms a bit tighter, getting annoyed.
i was starting to wonder when she would be pissed of XD

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“I’ll do what I wish!”
hahahaha..Risa...
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“What now, m’dear 8th head? Don’t strangle your elder,” Miki smirked, as if inviting.

:lmao:

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“Then make me!”
what does she mean? XD XD XD XD

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Miki [..] kissed Risa.[..]the touching demon’s tongue slithered into Risa’s mouth, catching her way off guard.

/me is looking for a big shock emoticone whitch would have filled the entire page but doesn't find it so goes with
:ONshock::ONshock::ONshock::ONshock::ONshock::ONshock::ONshock::ONshock:

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Ugh, I’ve been kissed by Miki! The feeling is so groooss~!

/me is now looking for a big lmao emoticone whitch whould have filled the entire monitor but still doesn't find any so goes with
:ROTFLMAO::ROTFLMAO::ROTFLMAO::ROTFLMAO::ROTFLMAO::ROTFLMAO::ROTFLMAO::ROTFLMAO::ROTFLMAO::ROTFLMAO:

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“Mind if you tell your gross sub-leader what caused you to flip out like that?”

/me is now wondering : am i still alive ?

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“I was dumped.”

DUMPED ???????? by who ? when ? what, how ? since when is she going out with someone ? did i miss a part here ????

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“What the hell?”
yeah what the hell XD ?

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“It was kind of a secret that we were going out…

errr....XD :ONdunno:

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I have no idea what happened but suddenly, she simply just…” Risa’s words became less audible.

“I don’t need you anymore. Stay the hell away from me.”

“…Why?”
“Why what?” Miki looked down at her junior.

love how you wrote it, i can picture the scene really well :thumbsup
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Miki had no comment about being poured onto. The only comfort she could give Risa was a pat on the head, and she did so.
why did that make me laugh ? XD
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“So, Gaki, what are you going to do now? Mope around?”
oh god what a way to comfort her XD

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tell the rokkies my apologies for scaring them, though, don’t tell them about why I did.”
why do i have the feeling Miki won't bother to do that ? XD XD XD

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I don’t normally take orders like that
Oh crap ! :lmao::lmao::lmao::lmao::lmao::lmao::lmao::lmao:

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“That kiss really was gross, you taste like soy sauce,” Miki stuck out her tongue in a disgusted manner and then she left.

*DIES*

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Out of boredom, Reina curled her legs, and rolled forward and backwards on the bed[..] However, she misjudged the distance of her bed after the fifth time, and landed on Maki’s lap.

errr... i don't know how i shoul react here XD XD XD XD XD
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There Reina was, each of her legs outside of Maki’s. In other words, Maki’s legs were in between Reina’s. To add to the embarrassment, Reina, on instinct, had placed her arms around Maki’s neck as soon as she landed, whereas Maki loosely wrapped her arms around Reina’s waist.

what the h...................................
/me can't find any word to say....

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Hell, they are both screaming internally in their minds.

:lmao::lmao::lmao::lmao::lmao::lmao::lmao:

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The door was knocked upon, and immediately, Reina got off of Maki and onto the bed, to which Maki tried to compose herself to look as if nothing happened, both feared that someone, perhaps Yossie, might walk in on an awkward scene. Surprisingly, it wasn’t Yossie.

*fell from the chair*

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“Nii-nii? What brings you here?”

Nii-nii ?????? XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA XD XD XD
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Yes, only Maki calls Risa "Nii-nii," her own nickname for her, yo.

where have i been all this time ? XD XD XD
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“I had a feeling Miki-chan didn’t go off telling the rokkies my apologies, so I’m doing it myself…”

oh god....*cries....laughing too much....and dying....*

 
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“Is it because you’re the eighth head?”
what with the eight head ?
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“Well you see… the eighth head was first killed by Susanoo. Not only that, the eighth head was also the one who was supposed to eat Kushinada, so often, the others made fun of the eighth head because of that…” Risa brought her knees to her chest.

errr...Kushinada ?
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Originally, she is goddess of rice plant and rice field. When she seemed to be eaten and became YAMATA NO OROCHI(Huge snake having eight heads)
[..]
an old couple daughter was to be sacrificed to Orochi. Some versions of this story say that they had already sacrificed seven other girls to the creature. The daughter in question here was named Kushinada,

i see...

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Though it changed…Gottsuan saved me, kind of.”

“Did she?” Reina looked at Maki with a smirk.
she did she did ?? :w00t:

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“It’s your fault they keep making fun of me!”
Oo ?
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“The stories also say that we both fought over the seventh girl! And if I got that meal, then you would’ve been the one, not me!”
hehehe...they don't have any memory from their ...past... execpt the song right ?

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“Because you know, if you listen to those stories, and think you’re the one being laughed at, then that itself is pathetic… you know?”
saved her from sulking lol ? hahaha

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“And you know what? I miss those times when you still wore your hair in pigtails and your eyebrows were the most noticeable thing of all…” Maki chuckled.
...aaaa...old m~m...nostalgia...nostalgia...

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“Lies! Lies!” Risa shook her head.

“Reaction queen,” Maki and Reina both pointed at Risa.

hahahaha....reaction queen...remind me of her panic situation at the park

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“Alright, I swear, the devil’s after my room,” Reina bent over and held her head, pretending to be in pain.{/b] “Why the hell does my room get screwed up?!”

:lmao::lmao::lmao::lmao::lmao::lmao::lmao:

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“Oh mighty one~! Stop the wind~! Stop the room-bashing~!”
“Like hell that’s going to work!” Reina glared at Risa.

*dies*

i don't know why but what came to my mind was the jacky chan anime where the uncle says something like 'monster hurry and go' in cantonese...
/me hides

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I don’t think glass doors are repaired instantly…

:lmao::lmao::lmao::lmao::lmao::lmao::lmao:
why was it Maki who said that anyway ? XD she sounds like she is in her own room lol
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She knocked on the door of the leader’s room, and eventually, the door opened, and there Yossie was, in glasses again.

eventually XD XD XD XD XD XD
ok now i'm gong to check for Yossie pics with glasses...must be something i havn't notice like momoko's finger...shame on me...

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“Some idiot threw a rock and broke my balcony door. Don’t know who it is though,” Reina explained.

“I see, so that was the noise…” Yossie readjusted her glasses.

“Just letting you know, that’s all,” and with that, Reina left with Maki and Risa.
why did they go to tell that to Yossie again ? ???? XD XD XD XD XD

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There was a woman in front of her door, with long flowing hair, and staring at her contemptuously.
a woman ?
there i thougt you were talking about Kaori but she doesn't have her long hair anymore...

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“For your information… I wasn’t the one who threw the rock at the balcony door,” Ai Takahashi said, glaring at Yossie.
Ai ? XD
wait...how does she knows about te balcony rock ? XD XD XD
she heard what Reina said ? but wait...if she just entered...didn't she meet Risa in the corridor ????

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she heard the door shut, and felt arms wrapped around her slender waist.

WHAT THE  !!!!!!ehghrighrog  ????!!!

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“Eh? What’s the meaning of this?”

“You know, don’t you?” Ai said in a serious voice in Yossie’s ear, “Why I came? What I’m thinking about—what I want? You know, don’t you? Hitomi?”

what is happening here ?!! XD

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“Answer me. Hitomi.”
“I wonder…” Yossie closed her eyes, “Do I look like I’m simple?”
“No, you don’t. Not at all.”
[..]

“Then are you simply stupid?”


*dies*
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“Don’t fool around, the way you talk—the way you talk to everyone—its all as if you’re testing us.”

“Is that foolishness a part of your plan? Nonetheless… I’ll tell you what I know,” Yossie stroked her imaginary beard.
ok i when the moment when you 'll explain it clearly Yuuyami XD XD XD XD

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“Not yet. The tape’s stubborn, giving me a hard time, I’m tellin’ ya,” Reina grumbled.

“Fukuoka accent, can’t understand you well,” Maki chuckled.

:ROTFLMAO::ROTFLMAO::ROTFLMAO::ROTFLMAO::ROTFLMAO:
the tape's stubborn ? :ROTFLMAO::ROTFLMAO::ROTFLMAO::ROTFLMAO::ROTFLMAO:
fukuoka accent :ROTFLMAO::ROTFLMAO::ROTFLMAO::ROTFLMAO:

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Reina slipped when she tried to tape the upper part. Reina fell forward—and she was sure she landed on Maki. However, Maki seemed to have suspected it, for she was still standing, using her arms to support Reina through the sheet that separated them.

you love to put thm in these kind of ...situaton....err...pose ...don't you XD

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What will happen…?

they are going to kiss !! oh wait they can't...

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For some odd reason, Reina didn’t want to move. Neither did Maki, whose arms were now embracing Reina. The sheet, surprisingly, was successfully taped at the top, so it didn’t fall on either of them.
love everywhere in the room...and the sheet keeps this love only in this room...

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…Yossie’s hand caressed Ai’s cheek, until her thumb was now tracing the outlines of her lips…

oh god....

WHAT AN ENDING YUUYAMI !!!!
can't wait for the next chapter !!!!!!

edit : 've just seen your last post
a good idea here to recall of the cursed girls
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Yuko Nakazawa - 2nd - Her presence itself is quite alarming

:ROTFLMAO::ROTFLMAO::ROTFLMAO::ROTFLMAO::ROTFLMAO:
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« Reply #294 on: November 08, 2006, 11:25:05 PM »
Yossie + glasses = hot!!! :heart:

but

Yossie + Ai = ???

I've never thought about this couple and somehow my brain refuses to picture them together XD

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« Reply #295 on: November 08, 2006, 11:34:39 PM »
At first, I thought Mayonnaise was right, but then I also rememer you mentioning the 7th before. And the reason I was wondering was because in the first qoute :
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{...}“The stories also say that we both fought over the seventh girl! And if I got that meal, then you would’ve been the one, not me!”

Then:
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For the hell of it, I'm posting bios for the story XD Only did the bio's of the more important people of the story.
{...}
Maki Goto - 7th - Usually considered "Cool" by others, but she's really a normal(?) girl who likes to be active. Somewhere in her heart, lies a dark past.

Miki Fujimoto - 5th - A lazyass, and a very frank person. She's also flirtacious and loves to grope.{...}>:]
This didnt make sense to me even AFTER i was reminded who the 7th was... Risa was talking to Gotou (the seventh) and said "...we fought over the seventh girl!"
So clearly, its either I didnt understand it or there was an accidental mistake which lead me to react with this = :doh:


EDIT: Anyway, thank you for posting the character and their roles ( hopefully this time Ill remember them ^-^; ). Miki? A Lazyass? :rolleyes:  

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« Reply #296 on: November 08, 2006, 11:44:19 PM »
Lemme explain again... XD

1 ate the first daughter, 2 ate the second daughter, etc etc.

It was the 7th daughter's turn to be devoured.

Though, 7 and 8 fought over who should eat this 7th daughter. Eventually, 7 ate the 7th daughter XD...

If the 8th ate the 7th daughter, then that means Risa would've been the 7th head, while Maki would have been the 8th head.

I hope that clears it up o_o;

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« Reply #297 on: November 08, 2006, 11:51:41 PM »
I think I get it more... but whats so bad about being the 8th head? I mean, she just ate the 7th daughter...
And since Niigaki did eat the 7th daughter, why didnt she become the eighth head?

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« Reply #298 on: November 09, 2006, 12:20:34 AM »
You misunderstood again o_o;

I said IF the 8th ate the 7th daughter, THEN she would've been the 7th head. But that didn't happen.

The bad thing about being the 8th? When Susanoo came to the Izumo province and met the old couple, they were going to sacrifice Kushinada, their 8th daughter. But because Susanoo's there, he slayed the Orochi (See past story I posted pages ago), thus, the 8th Orochi never got to eat Kushinada. So that's why it's made fun of. It's because it never got a chance to eat anything before it's death.

Hopefully, THAT cleared things up o__o;

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« Reply #299 on: November 09, 2006, 12:24:02 AM »
Quote from: Owaranai_sLaVe;231303

And since Niigaki did eat the 7th daughter, why didnt she become the eighth head?
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she did not write Risa ate the 7th daughter
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Not only that, the eighth head was also the one who was supposed to eat Kushinada


and this
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“The stories also say that we both fought over the seventh girl! And if I got that meal, then you would’ve been the one, not me!”
my guess is this sentence might be refering to the fact the others make fun of her...
i mean like "And if I got that meal, others would make fun of you and not me" something like that...?

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