Author Topic: Our Cursed Gift [Chapter 47: Our Final Promise][COMPLETE] (Read 170815 times)

Drako60 · « **Reply #620 on:** January 03, 2007, 03:33:21 AM »

Taka your planning something bad aren't you, oh dear you better be careful.

Yui you bad, bad woman, you don't make Reina cry. grrrrrrrr

Rika and Ayumi O.O whooooo i didn't see that coming, but it does further confirm my thoughts on how to break the curse, to bad i won't tell anyone just yet hehehe.

excellent chapter as always.

Aioros · « **Reply #621 on:** January 03, 2007, 04:34:53 AM »

Quote from: Yuuyami

“Go ahead! Kill me! When I die, my soul shall rise to heaven! And I’ll be watching you go to hell!”

Oooh evil Rika has met her match!!!:ONfarofflook:

Time for them to put on the chainmails and start swinging broadswords at each other.

Don't give up Reina, you can break the curse!:ONcool1:

Ai-chan's snooping around again. Why doesn't she just tag along with Reina, two heads are better than one anyway. (but in this case, they're against eight heads + ojou-sama):ONerr:

Blizzard · « **Reply #622 on:** January 03, 2007, 05:44:29 AM »

Another awesome chapter, Yuuyami! :ONluvluv2:

I have a couple theories for how the curse is broken now also. But, I'm not going to say anything.

There are becoming more and more characters that are causing this mad/sad mixture of emotions (think love/hate, but more appropriate in this case, imo). They add so much more depth and extra twists to the story. First, there's the villian, but she has feelings too. She's got these followers, some seem innocent, some not so much. Also, some of them are plotting things. What are they scheming? :ONshifty: We don't know yet. Plus she's got her own villian. Then there's a hero, who is sticking to the tried and true hero way, and a wannabe hero, who is taking the low road, so to speak. Add that all together, and you have one hell of an enjoyable read! :ONfarofflook:

I can't say that I've ever had to force myself to finish a chapter. In fact, I'll most likely be rereading the whole thing at least once before it's finished!

I'll try to wait patiently for the next chapter! :ONwhistle:

-edit- P.S. We're half way there with reviews already! :tfr9a7wg:

JFC · « **Reply #623 on:** January 03, 2007, 06:31:11 AM »

It's interesting to see this side of Rika/Oujo-sama. Up until now she'd been domineering, but now we see the spirit of the scared, little child within her.

rndmnwierd · « **Reply #624 on:** January 03, 2007, 07:54:17 AM »

Why Yui? Why must you shatter my hopes!? You're evil Yuuyami-sama, evil...Please right more evilness, please.

Shoko · « **Reply #625 on:** January 03, 2007, 08:57:30 AM »

I already reviewed, but I thought of another song that reminds me of the Orochi:

Aquabats - Attacked By Snakes

Okay, maybe it's only the fact that it's a song about snakes, but

coachie · « **Reply #626 on:** January 03, 2007, 06:54:49 PM »

I haven't commented in a while... a looooong while

For a sec I thought I knew how the curse can be broken, but then realised Yui's curse was already gone when she said she'd stay at Rika's side, damn.

And Ayumi was totally unexpected, wow!

Yuuyami · « **Reply #627 on:** January 04, 2007, 05:59:46 PM »

Come now, 13 reviews so far.

7 more to go.

And I have the next chapter ready :<...

Kitara · « **Reply #628 on:** January 04, 2007, 06:43:11 PM »

*jumps in* Ah, evilness galore;

I was actually happy that Rika got told off...then she started crying and I felt guilty =__=; I think I know how to break the curse, but it's a longshot >__<;; oh well-- more chapters please! *__*

Yuuyami · « **Reply #629 on:** January 04, 2007, 11:21:21 PM »

6 more to go >_<

SeeYa · « **Reply #630 on:** January 05, 2007, 03:15:07 AM »

o.o wow Shibata....there's something interesting. If Rika wanted to, she could have made Kaorin erase Shibata's memories as well couldn't she? Or... she had no problem beating up Reina and Takitty, so what's stopping her with Shibata....hmmm very weird... they used to be friends huh?... so Shibata began to hate her cuz of the curse?

O___o;;...somehow I have this feeling that Yossi's involved. But then again, she always seems to be...

And as for Yui, even if she doesn't know how the curse was broken, YAY! NEW HOPE FOR REINA! at least now she knows that the curse CAN be broken...so does Takitty it seems, but for some reason, Takitty is giving me a really bad feeling.

JFC · « **Reply #631 on:** January 05, 2007, 03:30:46 AM »

Man, I can picture it now if/when the curse is broken...Aichan and Mame are gonna just look at each other...eyes watering...one of them starts to sniffle and then they just run into each other and hug and get all mushy...

black velvet · « **Reply #632 on:** January 05, 2007, 03:37:42 AM »

Wow, you weren't kidding when you said it was serious!

Poor Yui, but I guess it's hard to fight that kind of feeling. If I saw someone crying and telling me to stay with them, I would do just that, but if they treated me wrong overtime, I'd think again. Of course, I'm not fully aware if Rika has abused Yui, but she does keep her close. Their relationship is sickingly sweet, but I feel sorry for Erika . . . Actually, maybe I feel more sorry for Reina? Hell, I feel sorry for everyone! D: *mixed emotions*

And, wow, you made Shibata seem really harsh! And, why do I find Takahashi so hot when she's angry? Gawd . . .

Snoopy · « **Reply #633 on:** January 05, 2007, 03:45:21 AM »

first time reviewer
I can see the bit and pieces that u got
from fruit baskets but the beauty of it is
that u have made it into ur own
Your good english the great humour and the way u develop
and delved into the characters and their relationship and their
own inner demons is what makes me love to read this story so much
and couldnt stop from reading all the chapters even though it took ages
time well spent i say

About this chapter so sad about how yui is
letting erika and her feelings go just so she can
go back and be with rika even though she isnt one of them anymore
and hoping that it will fade away due to time
and we finally get to see rika in a more sad light and how we can
understand her mindset and somehow sympathized with her
great work

Yuuyami · « **Reply #634 on:** January 05, 2007, 03:47:43 AM »

Two more reviewers before I post the next chapter! -gets the forum codes on the story ready, and gets the comment replies ready-

cheesesticks · « **Reply #635 on:** January 05, 2007, 04:12:34 AM »

Damnit, I thought I could go on lurking.

Here;s my review:

That was a damn good chapter. Again, lots of action happening to the other orochi and DAMN shibata is one heck of a mean BITCH. How reckless, saying that to the human embodiment of God! Btw I like seeing the other side of Rika ie. the emotional side that doesn't rip other orochi's wings O.o. Speaking of the orochi, I wonder how Yui was able to lift the curse? Of course I have my own theories about that: does it have to do anything with her sacrifice under her own free will?

(highlight to read but you don't have to if you have your own theory)

anyways, looking forward to you're next chapter

which is hopefully VERY soon!

Shoko · « **Reply #636 on:** January 05, 2007, 04:26:27 AM »

Come on one mooooooooore

len.chan · « **Reply #637 on:** January 05, 2007, 07:04:22 AM »

ok ok... here I go again

really good chapter. I've seen Furuba and I knew that Rika was going to have that weak side. After all, she's who's suffering the most because of the curse 'cause she needs the members of the orochi to feel alive. Being a god, all that she have is loneliness, that's why she's so bitch...
now that reina knows, maybe she'll think of something to help her too. I hope she doesn't give up after hearing Yui's story. Oh, and I want to know what's Ai-chan gonna do... 'cause she hate Rika and I don't think that hearing everything can change that...

end of the review
new chapter pleeeaase ^^

Shoko · « **Reply #638 on:** January 05, 2007, 07:08:55 AM »

YAY

HEAR THAT YUUYAMI?

NOW GET POSTING THAT NEW CHAPTER :]

(jk

)

Yuuyami · « **Reply #639 on:** January 05, 2007, 12:52:26 PM »

I'll write comment replies later. (Under time constraint since I usually go out to eat for breakfast, then have to go to my part time job soon- ironically, it's a bookstore xD)