Author Topic: Our Cursed Gift [Chapter 47: Our Final Promise][COMPLETE] (Read 170805 times)

Yuuyami · « **Reply #580 on:** December 31, 2006, 03:08:05 AM »

I'll be waiting for you with mine

KrazyForKamei · « **Reply #581 on:** December 31, 2006, 03:12:11 AM »

Even short chapters of this are addicting >.O

I knew there was a waaaayyyy to break the curse! Woo Woo! I hope Yui tells Reina ^.^

Yossie is scarin me a bit...who was she talking to on the phone?? *suspenseful music*

Miki was as always...hilarious. She's so afraid of going soft

She just needs to admit that she's a big soft cuddley teddy bear...okay maybe thats over exaggerating

Awww @ Maki and Reina. So shy even when their hands just touch

Their the cutest *gives them an award*

Shoko · « **Reply #582 on:** December 31, 2006, 03:30:57 AM »

NOOOOOOOOO, THIS MEANS I HAVE TO WAIT LONGER FOR A NEW CHAPTER

I hate you

Anyway

Um

Yui/Erika is love. Yui/Reina came as a shock. Though.. How the hell does one break the curse? Is it accepting love or something? OR MAYBE YUI OPENED THE DOOR. zomg. THAT MEANS MAKI WILL. I wanna see Yuko opening the door~.

Also Miki is awesome <3. And Yossie, haha.. Is Yossie jealous because Rika chose Yui? <3

Tanachan · « **Reply #583 on:** December 31, 2006, 03:48:34 AM »

WAAAAA~! Yui broke the curse??? Uh...oh...Spaghetti O's! This will be oh so very interesting! And for reference, I'm with Saikami on the argument.

Blizzard · « **Reply #584 on:** December 31, 2006, 03:57:18 AM »

Maki and Reina, indeed, so obvious to those not involved! But things of that nature usually are.

So there is a way to break the curse and Yui has done it. :ONshock: That would explain why Yossi was disgusted with Yui earlier in the story, and why she was upset that Rika chose Yui over her. Can ya tell I like the evil, scheming Yossi? I can't help it, she's always been my fav (even if she is evil)! :ONshifty: Now, though, I'm curious about where Yui's true loyality lies. That in itself could cause a lot of different things to happen.

Can't wait for more! Come on people, review!! :ONpleeease:

Yuuyami · « **Reply #585 on:** December 31, 2006, 04:03:39 AM »

Hey xD It's not my fault there are people out there who don't comment but still read the story. I mean, we HAVE had twenty comments before. We just have to work at it consecutively now.

Aioros · « **Reply #586 on:** December 31, 2006, 05:18:00 AM »

I have some speculations why Yui can't fly anymore but I'd rather keep them to myself because I might get stoned to death.:ONkekeke:

I hope Yui helps Reina out so they can end evil Rika's meanstreak :ONcool1:

If this doesn't get 20 comments, I'm gonna comment some more to get it to 20

Drako60 · « **Reply #587 on:** December 31, 2006, 06:23:51 AM »

oh my Yui kissed Reina <3333 Yankee love, everyone loves my beloved Reina.

Yossie isn't a bad person, she just loves being evil, but what will she do to Yui, hmmmm i'll have to think on that one.

i certainly hope 20 people review this, the suspense is killer, its almost as bad as waiting for your favorite show to get subbed.

rndmnwierd · « **Reply #588 on:** December 31, 2006, 07:42:46 AM »

GJ! There's my input, next chapter please.

Owaranai_sLaVe · « **Reply #589 on:** December 31, 2006, 08:55:39 AM »

I love this story.

The end.

Just kidding. Man, are you abusing your power!

Rika smiles?! Haha, all that time I thought she played the mean bitch. (The hot sexy mean bitch... who I want to buy a wig for ;3)

the part where Miki just started yelling too was really funny

.

I see you even started to put a lil bit of yourself in there... (or maybe that's just me, haha).

DAMMIT! I wish I had read this earlier instead of translating so i could have asked you a question about this.... gar gar gar.

-Owaranai_sLaVe

Mikan · « **Reply #590 on:** December 31, 2006, 12:03:57 PM »

Wow I have had a lot of catching up to do. My eyes kill~

Ok, I had a few good giggles in these last 4 or 5 chapters. The one that sticks out is the -

“…And you love this violent stubborn maniac?”

“Yes, I do, and isn’t your best friend a narcissist?”

Because its so true. You comedic chapters dropped down a bit and they have become a bit more serious.

Im curious about what is happening with Rika and Yui. I know that Yui isnt exactly 'cured'. There has been some transaction...I can only guess.

You made one or two errors in the story but its nothing compared to other things I have read.

Anything else I comment on or pick at will just seem petty. You know I love you baby

Yuuyami · « **Reply #591 on:** December 31, 2006, 03:07:41 PM »

Rndmnwierd's comment doesn't count because it's half-assed :]

black velvet · « **Reply #592 on:** December 31, 2006, 07:06:09 PM »

Reina is a freaking ninja, but Yui saved her butt big time. I've always wondered about the whole Viyuuden ordeal. It's obvious to us that Yui can't get return Erika's true feelings, even if she is no longer cursed. But, I wonder how that came to be . . . ?

Oh, and Miki was too cute. I can tell you work very hard on her character. xD

YoukaiChica · « **Reply #593 on:** December 31, 2006, 07:42:37 PM »

Aw. The beggining was so sweet. Very well written. And then Reina sneaking through the halls! Priceless!! Like black velvet said, she's a ninja! But the BEST part was Yui not transforming!!!! What's going on?!?!?! So the curse CAN be broken? Or altered? Or something....? Anyways, Reina can do it!! She can fix anything!!!

jafeijai · « **Reply #594 on:** January 01, 2007, 01:38:21 AM »

[gasp] THE CURSE IS BROKEN!!! but then, I have a funny feeling that the curse has been passed onto another, and not simply disappeared. Could the curse have hit another? Possible "victims" are anyone who hasn't been mentioned in the story so far, or anyone not related to the storyline/the cursed so far....waaaa, too many possibilities..x_X At first, I thought that if Yui wasn't cursed, then the curse would have somehow hit Reina, but that kiss proved me wrong....grr Yuuyami, you just had to throw that curveball, didn't you?!

[chants] Must have patience....must have patience....

Shoko · « **Reply #595 on:** January 01, 2007, 01:44:39 AM »

Hey Yuuyami.

You have 11 reviews already.

:]

Yuuyami · « **Reply #596 on:** January 01, 2007, 03:11:10 AM »

Miscounted, there's 12 xD (Of course, not counting Rndmn's)

So. just 8 more non-half-assed reviews and the next chapter will be on it's way.

rndmnwierd · « **Reply #597 on:** January 01, 2007, 06:19:24 AM »

Quote from: Yuuyami;271725

Miscounted, there's 12 xD (Of course, not counting Rndmn's)
So. just 8 more non-half-assed reviews and the next chapter will be on it's way.

Okay, okay.

OMG! Yui's human? Does that mean she'll get together with Erika? Please oh please please please! Say it will be so, great one!

But wait, she kissed Reina. Was it just to prove a point, or is that little #$%@# just that seductive?

JFC · « **Reply #598 on:** January 01, 2007, 08:55:14 AM »

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I can’t fly anymore…

Hmmmmm...I wonder if it's:

a) Loss of wings --> breaking the curse

or

b) Breaking the curse --> loosing the wings.

:scratch

Shoko · « **Reply #599 on:** January 01, 2007, 09:13:34 AM »

Quote from: JFC;271832

Hmmmmm...I wonder if it's:

a) Loss of wings --> breaking the curse

or

b) Breaking the curse --> loosing the wings.

:scratch

I go with b). Somehow, a) doesn't seem so.. I dunno. What's the word I'm looking for here?

SIX REVIEWS TO GO. COME ON PEOPLE.