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« Reply #200 on: October 22, 2006, 01:41:04 AM »
1st!

Great chappie. XDD Yossie the human alarm clock and Maki-chan the exploding-boobed groom!

An I know she's gonna smack me for it, because, frankly, she smacks me for everything.
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« Reply #201 on: October 22, 2006, 02:10:14 AM »
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“No~!” Reina heard a voice behind her. “these bags are so cheap! Now all the new clothes are dirty!”

Is that who I think it is?

...

“No~! Not now! What if I’m seen? Ohgodohgodohgod…” the person frantically piled the clothes in her arms and tried to run, but various articles of clothing flew about. So she had to go back and pick them up, resulting in more falling clothes. “You snakes don’t make it much easier! Stop following me!” the girl complained under her breath.
Panicky, incomprehensible Risa is teh funny!!! :lol: :lol:

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I wonder what she’s doing Korea now, probably eating Yakiniku with Simmin or something…

Later on...


“Of course, I had yakiniku with Simmin,” Maki said on the other line.
Oh yeah, Reina's psychic. jk of course :lol:

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« Reply #202 on: October 22, 2006, 02:26:44 AM »
RISA IS CURSED???!!
:w00t:

Ah...Yuuyami, you just made my day! :D

I have to update the list:
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Cursed: Miki,Maki,Kaori,Murata,Risa

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« Reply #203 on: October 22, 2006, 03:08:49 AM »
Took me a few seconds to figure out what you were referencing with the "Building seven" stuff, but once I did, HILARIOUS.
 
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« Reply #204 on: October 22, 2006, 03:14:51 AM »
Woooooooooo~ I can't tell whether this is my first or second post. Anyhow I've been following your story silently for the most part, so I thought I'd ought to comment on something.

Things would've made me spit out my tea (had I not swallowed):
 - the motherland and the buildings part! Esp. the latter... gosh I need to look up that music fighter clip...
- Reina being psychic :O
- Risa's overreaction. Very entertaining and hilarious XD
- Imagining Takahashi Ai bopping her head with a tv continuously XD

I'm dying to find out who the 2 other cursed are! Hope it's who I think it is (for some reason I hope its Yui... or Sayu... that'd be funny *usa-chan hebi~*)
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« Reply #205 on: October 22, 2006, 06:02:33 AM »
Yay, yay, YAY!! You updated!! Damn you Yossi and Rika for planning something. I hope Maki does punish them some how. I wonder what Reina will do if she wakes up to realize she's in Maki's bed? Hmmm... I'll be looking forward to the next chapter! Then again, I'm always looking forward to the next chapter....

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« Reply #206 on: October 22, 2006, 06:35:34 AM »
Omg the motherland thing made me rofl. And the thing about Ai-chan smacking herself with an electrical appliance. I always wondering why Risa wouldnt like Ai kiss her...now I know XD.
Yossie the human alarm clock? I need her around here...im horrible at waking up.
And of coouurrsseee the Maki/Reina-ness was to absolute perfection ^_^
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« Reply #207 on: October 22, 2006, 07:58:00 AM »
I make #8 :)
I loved the Risa and Reina bit. It reminded me of Risa on Music Fighter - Osaka time.
Well I'm kinda lost within your awesome writing. How is Reina being used or gonna get used? *taps fingers and waits for next update*

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« Reply #208 on: October 22, 2006, 12:40:24 PM »
Hahah, Risa and her buildings, too funny! XD
I almost forgot about that MS episode.

I liked that part about Yossie being like ocean waves.

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« Reply #209 on: October 22, 2006, 12:59:31 PM »
Risa and her reactions is way too funny. And Ai-chan smacking herself with electrical goods gave me a good laugh!XD
 
It was so sweet of Reina to wait for Maki in the lobby, and I remember when Miki and Risa tried to wake her up in the dokkiri thing. She slept through so much! :D
 
Lol at Yossi for wanting to wake up everyone before their alarm clocks do! The way you portray Yossi is amusing, but at the same time she gives a sort of unsettling feeling [well, to me at least].
 
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« Reply #210 on: October 22, 2006, 05:00:20 PM »
LMAO!!! RISA'S CURSED TOO?!?! XDXD NICE..
YAY for revealing more people!! :thumbsup:D

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Risa looked up at Reina and looked like her eyes were about to fall out of their sockets any minute. “OH NO!” she stood up, clenching her head, “Someone knows I’m cursed just by looking! I knew I shouldn’t have cut through this park!” she moved her upper body in different directions, emphasizing her words, “I should have cut through the second park! No wait! That park has even more snakes! What if I tried cutting through the fourth building? No wait, that’ll be too embarrassing, Kyaaa~!”

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“It’s the motherland…” Risa waved her hand.

“I don’t understand you anymore,” Reina raised a brow.

“Who cares, let’s just get my stuff to my room before it gets too dirty!” Risa exaggerated her face in a text-smile D: manner.

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Risa stared at Reina dumbfounded, before trying to bash her head against against a nearby pole. “SoIwasobvioussoIwasobvoiussoIwasobvoius…”

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“She didn’t believe it at first, because she kept smacking herself with electric appliances, thinking it was a dream. It was until I transformed back and stopped her from dropping the TV on her head that she finally believed,” Risa laughed. “Good times.”

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“What am I supposed to do with you?” Maki chuckled. Then an idea struck her, she dug her hands underneath her upper back and knees and carried her, bridal style. She walked to Reina’s door and carefully tried to open it. “You locked the door…”

Dot. Dot. Dot.

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“Don’t do perverted things to her, Gocchin!” Yossie hugged herself and shivered a bit, “she’s still a minor~”


quoted everything i found very HILARIOUS XDXD chances are, i missed a lot of stuff too...XD

anticipating another hilarious chapter next :heart::D and HOPEFULLY the answer to my other questions at long last..! :P

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« Reply #211 on: October 22, 2006, 06:58:52 PM »
Risa! Yay! I like Gaki-san. :D

I think it would be hilarious if the last two cursed were, like, really unknown. Like Asami Kimura or Yui or Erika. Or maybe Kei! XD

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« Reply #212 on: October 23, 2006, 11:05:02 AM »
Tanachan: XD

JFC: Just proves how Reina knows Maki better than ever now XD

Wordsworth: Glad to know I made your day XD~!

Slack: Yeah, I thought about that episode when I was writing Risa's lines XD

Cheesesticks: Glad to know you finally surfaced :] But thanks to your contributing comment, the ten + review exceeded and the next chapter airs XD

Youkaichica: <3~!

KrazyforKamei: Teehee <3~!

Lil_Hamz: There might be more information in the future chapters, but for now, I wrote a fun chapter so everyone can get their minds off the drama for a bit XD

Coachie: Took me awhile to come up with that, haha.

Goosefish: <3~!

Jafeijai: Another cursed person revealed in this chapter XD

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« Reply #213 on: October 23, 2006, 11:09:15 AM »
Short but amusing chapter <3






Chapter 17: Entrance of a flamboyant person







Reina tried to stir in her sleep, but to no avail, something was restraining her. There was also a foreign scent lingering in the atmosphere for which she was under. It seemed pretty blurry and hazy when she slowly opened her lazy wonky eyes. In fact, it was as if she was in a crack of darkness…

Or in this case, in Maki’s cleavage.

Jeez… Must she sleep with the blouse open enough to show her freaking boob crack? Reina blushed profusely as she tried to analyze her situation. Maki was hugging Reina tightly, in which Reina was also hugging the cursed idol back in the same fashion. I knew I should not have hummed a song to myself while waiting for her! Reina screamed internally.

But…Reina inhaled Maki’s scent a bit deeper, and rested her head against Maki’s dual ‘pillows,’ It’s…really pleasant…The nostalgia slowly but surely began to settle in Reina’s tired body.

Out of curiosity, Reina backed up slowly, so slow as to not wake up Maki, and looked at her host’s face. Maki’s bangs were flowing to the left, revealing a rather gorgeous sight. Her hair… She dyed it brighter…Reina concluded, staring at her moderately bright blonde tresses. There was a sudden impulse of wanting to touch that hair, to tangle her fingers in it, to knead it. All of a sudden, Reina’s eyes moved downward to Maki’s closed, yet peaceful lips.

When will you open the door?

Why are your lips so… Reina felt inclined to move forward a bit, to have a better view of the aforementioned plump objects. …kissable? But Reina knew better than to take advantage of Maki in her sleep. Hell, she knew better than to make Maki transform in the morning. She let out a discontent sigh and was about to settle back into her original position, when a knock came at the door, causing the surprised wonky eyed teen to jerk forward, pressing her lips against Maki.

Blue smoke clouded her eyes as she sat up in an abrupt manner. Maki-hebi also raised her head in question from the collar of her pajama’s. They both looked at each other wide-eyed, before blushing after realizing what had just happened.

“Not interrupting, am I~?” Yossie whispered in a singsong voice, peaking through the doorway. “Oh my gahh,” her eyes also widened a bit, “I think fate cursed me into always walking in at the wrong times,” she waved her hand dismissively, “Leaving you two alone now…~,” she sank back into the hallway, “Reina, you have twenty minutes to get ready~” the last of her whispering singsong voice echoed before the door was closed.

Yossie might have been Reina’s saving grace if she had pulled her out of the room immediately. Unfortunately, leaving her and Maki alone after that intimate moment made it worse.

“I think you should get prepared now…” Maki-hebi broke the awkward silence.

“What happened last night?” Reina fixed her hair to make it look less messy.

“You were sleeping on the couch, I tried carrying you into your room, but you locked it, and I couldn’t find the key anywhere on you…” Maki-hebi trailed off…

“So you strip-searched me?” Reina raised a brow, and blushed a bit.

“…I couldn’t find the key,” Maki ignored Reina’s last remark, “So I had no choice but to let you sleep in my room…” the 7th snake turned away in embarrassment.

“Ah… I see…” Reina also turned away in embarrassment, recalling her heavenly experience in Maki’s boobs to mind.

“You should go now…” Maki said quietly, her head still turned.

“I’ll see you in the afternoon then,” Reina smiled, trying to bring up the atmosphere, and left Maki’s room.

With her tail, Maki traced her reptilian mouth, “Was it involuntary? Or did she really want to…?”

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“Ugh… My recording sucked…” Reina sighed as she walked on the street. “I’m probably not going to have a lead in the song…”

She walked up to the apartment, “Now… How to talk to…” She passed by a pile of clothes, “Maki…?” She turned and looked at the clothes. She paused in her walk, and stared at the clothes. For one thing, they shouted out two words: Leopard. Print.

She crouched next to the clothes, and picked up the jacket, which was white leopard print with white fur lining the collar and sleeve ends, and looked at it. “Now there’s only one person who would wear this kind of clothing…”

Suddenly, something flashed in the blink of an eye, and came up Reina’s body. The unpleasant and grippy feeling forced Reina to scream. Unfortunately, she doubt anyone could hear. She knew Melon Kinenbi and Viyuuden were out somewhere, and the rest of Morning Musume, at least she thought the rest of them were still at recording.

Fortunately, someone came out of the building, and ran towards Reina. What other person to come to Reina’s aid than Maki? “What happened?” she asked with concern possessing her voice.

“S…S…” Reina cringed and shivered a bit.

“S?” Maki mouthed.

“Something’s in my clothes!” Reina finally spat out. Maki was prepared to catch anything that fell out, however…

A snake, bearing the ‘two’ kanji, 二, rose out of Reina’s collar, but long enough to only be a little higher than her head. The snake then wiggled, while the other two watched in shock or in this case, without a comment.

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“So damn hungry…” Miki complained as she looked at the refrigerator. “Too lazy to go out shopping too…” she turned around, and was met with a snake’s head. Maki was in a silent furious mode—Miki rubbed her eyes to make sure that psychopathic aura wasn’t there. She held the snake by it’s head and extended her arm outward.

“You want food? Skin this and eat it,” Maki said in a dangerously low voice.

“Huh? Is that…?” Miki was about to confirm, but was interrupted again.

“Just burn this then! Buuuurn!” The demonic Maki demanded.

“Now now…” Miki patted Maki, “calm down~!” she chuckled.

Reina walked in with the clothes, “Whoever it is, it slithered up my body and clung to my chest!”

“Come now, it wasn’t that bad,” the snake opened it’s eye lazily (it was beat up by Maki earlier). “Maki-chan, show respect to your old ‘obachan’ leader!” and the snake smacked Maki in the face with its tail.

“Yuuchan, try not to kill any one in that form,” Miki waved her hand dismissively at the snake.

“I knew it was Nakazawa-san…” Reina sighed, “The leopard print gave it away.”

“Sorry about that~!” Yuko-hebi waved her tail, “You see, I was following instinct.”

“The hell?” Reina raised a brow.

“A sudden gust of air blew and I reverted into snake form, so I clung to the warmest thing at the moment, which was a bush near the dear apartment! My senses told me something that was warmer was nearing me, so naturally, I clung to that too!”

“Instinct my ass, you were simply molesting her!” Maki raised her voice as she twitched her left eye.

“Now now,” Yuko transformed back, “how dare you speak so rudely when I simple came to visit,” Yuko smacked Maki upside the head.

“Yuuchan, Maki-chan, I think you should stop now…” Miki hated being peace keeper, since she was normally one of the arguers.

“Er…” Reina honestly had no idea whether or not she had a place in this conversation. But earlier, she had Nakazawa Yuko clinging to her body underneath her clothes, so naturally, she had nothing to say.

“Ah! Reina-chan, wanted to see you too, kind of,” Yuko patted her, took her clothes from her hands, and started to dress up right in front of them. “When are the others arriving?”

“Depends when they finish recording,” Reina and Miki said at the same time.

“Ewww, we’re in sync,” Miki playfully waved a hand at Reina.

“I see, I see!” Yuko clapped her hands, “Miki-chan! It’s been forever since I last saw you!” she smiled and reached out her hand slowly.

“Oh come on,  it was only a week and a half?” Miki smiled in the same frequency and also reached out her hand slowly.

“Touching demons unite!” they both shook hands.

“What the…?” Reina arched an eyebrow.

“No no no…” Maki shook her head.

“Ah! Nakazawa-san’s here?” Risa said as she walked through the kitchen.

“Mame’s back! Glad to know!” Yuko laughed as she smothered the poor eighth head with an embrace.

“I’m happy that you’re here, but can you let me breath while you’re here?” Risa struggled from Yuko’s grasp.

Yuko laughed and gave Risa a small kiss on the head, “Sure thing, m’dear.”

“Ah? Nakazawa-san?” Eri piped as she walked into the kitchen. “Cool!” she immediately came, “Obachan’s here, and now all the yankiis unite!”

“What the hell?” Miki, Reina, and Yuko mused.

“Nonetheless, here I am!” Yuko placed her hands on her hips and laughed, “Now, shower me with all your loving!”

“Yeah, riiiiight, someone with brain damage would do that,” Maki went shifty-eyed. When she turned, Miki, Risa, and Eri were being hugged by Yuko. “Alright, there’s three people with brain damage here.”

Yuko laughed and motioned for Maki to join in, “A simple hug isn’t that  bad, Maki-chan~!”

“Sorry, but we have to go,” Eri excused herself and Risa, “We’re going out for lunch,” and with that, they both bowed their head to Yuko and Maki and left.

“I don’t get a bow?” Miki pointed to herself in a pout.

“Now now Miki-chan,” Yuko waved her hand dismissively, “why bow when you can grope?” she unconsciously grabbed Maki’s boob with her other hand.

“Hey!” Maki raised her hand to swat Yuko’s hand away, but was halted when Miki grabbed her other boob.

“Seriously, what did you do to make them so big?” Miki mused.

“Oh my gahh!” Yossie walked in, “I really am cursed to walk in at the wrong times!”

Maki swatted both hands from her possession and folded her arms over them to make sure they were not to be touched again. At this point of time, Reina was too swept away by Yuko’s sudden appearance to say anything, or do anything at all.

“So Yossie… Got a place for me to stay around here?”

“Oh? You’re sleeping over?”









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« Reply #214 on: October 23, 2006, 12:57:46 PM »
Ahhh...such a funny chapter! Yossie walking in at the wrong times+A Saikami moment+Yuko+Brain Damage+Groping Maki=HELLA FUNNEH! And I know Saikami is gonna slap me again...
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« Reply #215 on: October 23, 2006, 01:50:11 PM »
:O! New chapter! Sorry I missed you last night, I had to go to Wells and meet some of Ray's family and we got back late. -.- I haven't read the chapter yet, I don't have time, so I printed it out and I'll tell you what I think 'bout it later. ^^;;; Peace out Cuz. (I need to go print all the other fanfics that I missed.)
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« Reply #216 on: October 23, 2006, 03:50:06 PM »
Reina burried in Maki's 'pillows' is just priceless! And then later on when Maki gets all protective over Reina is cute!
 
Also Yuko and her leopard print making an appearance, and wanting to share the love with everyone had me cracking up all the way. I especially laughed hard when Yuko grabbed one of Maki's boobs, and then Miki grabbed the other one! XD XD
 
Can't wait to see what happens next!

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« Reply #217 on: October 23, 2006, 03:54:05 PM »
OMG! So awesome! Happy to know we have our Yuuko as one. ^_^

Can't wait to hear who the last head is. ^_^

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« Reply #218 on: October 23, 2006, 05:01:57 PM »
'dual pillows' XD

Touching Demons and Yankee reunion XD
They really need to become official subgroups.

If I were Yossi, I'd always bring around a camera. I'd make millions selling those kinds of photos to tabloids or desperate wotas. But if that were true, Miki will end up buying most, if not all, of the photos. XD

Why bow when you can grope! :D

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« Reply #219 on: October 23, 2006, 05:46:40 PM »
YATTA~~!! NEW CHAPTER!! :D:D

LMAO!! XDXDXD YANKEE & TOUCHING DEMONS REUNION!! XDXD UNCONSCIOUSLY GROPING MAKI!! XDXD and since when was Miki so...girly?? XDXD “Ewww, we’re in sync,” Miki playfully waved a hand at Reina. hahaha XD

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